„Did Teacher Luo come the rookie?” “罗老师来新人了？” In movie studio, people see Zhang Tan this fresh face, inquired nearby Luo Ming. 制片厂里,人们看到张叹这张新面孔,纷纷询问一旁的罗明。 „This is Zhang Tan, very bright young people, the present are my writing a play assistant, later please look after him.” “这是张叹,很有才华的年轻人,现在是我的编剧助理,以后请关照他。” Luo Ming then introduced whoever like this, Zhang Tan will also stop the footsteps, nods with the opposite party with a smile, after some responded, then walked, some will stop to chat two with him. 罗明逢人便这样介绍,张叹也会停下脚步,笑着和对方点点头,有的回应后便走了,有的会停下来和他聊两句。 Two people across the office districts of nine buildings, entered the office. 两人穿过九楼的办公区,进了办公室。 Luo Ming is not a leader, but he is the senior screenwriter, once each screenwriter with the group, will be arranged an office, as the office of screenwriter group. 罗明不是领导,但他是资深编剧,每个编剧一旦跟组,就会被安排一个办公室,作为编剧小组的办公场所。 Luo Ming professional ability is very strong, has made many projects, needs to give him to arrange each time temporarily, afterward made him fix in this simply. 罗明业务能力很强,做过很多项目,每次都需要临时给他安排,后来索性让他固定在这一个。 „You later on here work, at present both of us.” Luo Ming said. “你以后就在这里办公,目前就我们俩。”罗明说道。 The computer and desk have prepared, 20 even rooms, from now in Luo Ming and Zhang Tan. 电脑和办公桌已经准备好了,20多平的房间,今后就罗明和张叹。 „Thanks.” Zhang Tan said. “谢谢。”张叹说道。 Luo Ming beckons with the hand, sits down, hints Zhang Tan also to sit. 罗明摆摆手,一屁股坐下,示意张叹也坐。 „We first chat the script, now you are also cast and crew one, had anything to say anything, what the cooperation wrote the script to be most important was among the teams must open wide the intention, told the truth.” “我们先聊聊剧本,现在你也是剧组的一员,有什么说什么,合作写剧本最重要的是团队之间要敞开心怀,有一说一。” « Under Day Yu " story background was China in the ancient times the myth period, at the feudal dynasty by the author being fictionalized, various countries stood in great numbers, have Wei, week, clear/pain and other great nations, there are Chen, Zhongshan and other small countries, the lead was Crown Prince Chen Guoqian, at age 16 encountered the palace coup, the great general usurped power, captured the landscape, the lead fled Chen Guo, avoided to chase down. Day Yu is the civilized founder's temple in this world, fermented the Chinese culture, many deity evil spirit legends spread from there, the lead to grow stronger the duplicate/restores country, decides to seek for a day of Yu, from this started to roam about while the experience of strengthen. 《天虞山下》的故事背景是中华古代神话时期,处在一个由作者虚构的封建朝代,诸国林立,有魏、周、楚等大国,也有陈、中山等小国,主角是陈国前太子,16岁的时候遭遇宫廷政变,大将篡权,夺取了江山,主角逃离陈国,一路躲避追杀。天虞山是这个世界的文明祖庭,酝酿了中华文化,许多神仙妖魔传说都是从那里流传开的,主角为了变强复国,决定寻找天虞山,由此开始了一边流浪一边变强的经历。 Last night Zhang Tan pondered over the synopsis of play carefully, really had the new feeling. 昨晚张叹仔细琢磨了剧本大纲,确实有新的感受。 „That, did I say three points?” Zhang Tan said. “那,我就说三点？”张叹说道。 Luo Ming puts out a hand, hints him to say. 罗明伸手,示意他请讲。 Two people chatted one in the morning, in the afternoon Luo Ming starts again the touch play, but Zhang Tan hand-written pet setting. 两人聊了一上午,下午罗明开始再次修改剧本,而张叹着手写宠物设定。 Considering the lead pitiful status and depressed character, Zhang Tan first determined that the setting of pet must quite compare funny, like Jiang Rong such, the story can more vivid interesting. 考虑到主角悲惨的身份和沉闷的性格,张叹首先确定宠物的设定必须比较逗比,像姜蓉那样,这样故事才能更加生动有趣。 Next, the character must be supplementary with the lead, if the personality of lead is A, then the character of pet should be B, body both sides. 其次,性格必须和主角互补,如果主角的性格是A面,那么宠物的性格应该是B面,一体两面。 Example, for example runs into the powerful enemy, the lead knows perfectly well not to beat, but has to face, this is A. 举例子,比如遇到强敌,主角明知不敌,但不得不面对,这是A面。 But his pet fears death, compared with instigating, wants to escape, this is B. 而他的宠物怕死,比较怂,想逃跑,这是B面。 B actually are also side of lead, is his potential side. B面其实也是主角的一面,是他潜在的一面。 Runs into the powerful enemy, he also wants to escape, will be afraid, these mood have, the seven emotions and six sensory pleasures of person, are really normal. 遇到强敌,他也想逃跑,也会害怕,这些情绪不是没有,人的七情六欲,实属正常。 But he is the lead, the reader likes looking that the lead is heroic, honest brave, is impossible to make him run into the powerful enemy to escape, therefore makes the pet make these, this is also to reader's suggestion, the unusual area of concealment makes the lead have the flesh feeling. 但他是主角,读者喜欢看主角英勇强大,正直勇敢,不可能让他遇到强敌逃跑,所以就让宠物去做这些,这也是对读者的暗示,非常隐蔽地让主角更有血肉感。 Zhang Tan pondered over for a long time, unifies the plot and background, finally determined the setting of pet, and drew a sketch, gives Luo Ming. 张叹琢磨了许久,结合剧情和背景,最后确定了宠物的设定,并且画了一张速写,交给罗明。 „Zou I?” Luo Ming is quite surprised. “驺吾？”罗明颇为惊讶。 Zhang Tan gives on his drawing paper, sketched very unusual unusual animals, its body big such as shape, is growing the body of tiger, when the fang that the sharp claw, four appear externally curvingly, outstretches sparkling mane, near shape lotus leaf, a tail that just like the peacock tail, on the tail drew many colors with the painter's brush simply. 张叹交给他的画纸上,速写了一只非常奇特的异兽,它体大如象,长着老虎的身体,锋利的脚爪,四颗弯曲外露的獠牙,伸开时闪闪发光的鬃毛,形状似荷叶边,还有一条犹如孔雀尾的尾巴,尾巴上简单地用彩笔画了多种颜色。 This is the one unusual animals of unexpected winner, originates from Shan Hai Jing. 这是很冷门的一种异兽,来源于山海经。 Zhang Tan said: „Zou I have a colorful tail, everywhere one visit, the destructive power is extremely strong.” 张叹说:“驺吾有一条色彩艳丽的尾巴,所到之处,破坏力极强。” In the view according to setting, Zou I seem like a beast of prey, but is actually timid, was instigated by the habitual criminal, is loaf gluttonously, proud tender. When the lead takes up the funny cat stick, this will only seem like very fierce wild animal one second to switch over „big eye to sprout/moe young” pattern, is staring at the small wooden club crazily, the swinging giant long-tail, „contrast will sprout” happily greatly obviously. 按照设定上的说法,驺吾看起来像是一只猛兽,但其实胆子很小,经常犯怂,贪吃又偷懒,傲娇。当主角拿起逗猫棒时,这只看起来十分凶猛的野兽就会一秒切换到“大眼萌仔”模式,痴痴盯着小木棍,开心地摆动巨型长尾,大显“反差萌”。 „Interesting.” Luo Ming looked at Zou my setting, said. “有意思。”罗明看了驺吾的设定,笑着说。 Zhang Tan said: „Zou I am the Shan Hai Jing unusual animals, giant, the body fierce tiger, the destructive power is astonishing, conforms to the background setting of story, can shelter to the lead, but it the taking the form of stray cat, the colored gorgeous tail asks for very much happily, proud tender, gluttonous, the modern people like raising the kitty, I have the identity to Zou inborn......” 张叹说:“驺吾是山海经异兽,巨型,身似猛虎,破坏力惊人,符合故事的背景设定,也能给主角庇护,但是它又形似野猫,彩色艳丽的尾巴很讨喜,傲娇、贪吃,现代人喜欢养猫咪,天生对驺吾有认同感……” „Moreover, it is complex and covert with the foot, can become a clue.” “而且,它跟脚复杂而隐蔽,可以成为一条线索。” Zhang Tan referred to Zou the tail of my taking the form of peacock tail, said: „Its tail has five-colors, the powerful force, can brush out the weapon of enemy, this is because it has the bloodlines of peacock bright king, although is thin, but originates mystically powerful......” 张叹指了指驺吾形似孔雀尾的尾巴,说:“它的尾巴有五彩,威力强大,能够刷掉敌人的武器,这是因为它有孔雀明王的血脉,虽然稀薄,但来源神秘强大……” Zhang Tan explained that chooses Zou my consideration. 张叹解释选择驺吾的考虑。 Luo Ming nodded saying: „Good, at least my first seems like likes very much, to my attraction, setting looks does not have the issue, this, I go back to think in the evening, tomorrow after going to work, will be definite.” 罗明点头说:“挺好的,起码我第一眼看上去很喜欢,对我吸引力,设定方面看起来也没问题,这样吧,我晚上回去想想,明天上班后再确定。” „Good.” “好的。” Work of this day ended like this. 这天的工作就这样结束了。 After getting off work, Zhang Tan is just about to go home, Jiang Rong and what Chaozhan in downstairs. 下班后,张叹正要回家,姜蓉和何超站在楼下。 Sees him to come out, Jiang Rong beckons warmly. 见他出来,姜蓉热情地招手。 „What's wrong? Waits for me?” Zhang Tan asked. “怎么？等我吗？”张叹问道。 Jiang Rong takes a look at him up and down, beat his fist saying: „Ok Zhang Tan, did not utter a word walked, greeting did not hit, didn't work as the friend is?” 姜蓉上下打量他,捶他一拳说:“行啊张叹,一声不吭就走了,招呼也不打,不把人当朋友是不是？” Zhang Tan: „Also without walking far, your 8 buildings, my 9 buildings, walked two steps on the fleeing gate.” 张叹:“也没走多远,你们八楼,我九楼,走两步就窜门了。” Jiang Rong said: „This different, you stepped key one step, is equivalent rises high, simple walks two steps issues?” 姜蓉说:“这不一样,你是跨了关键一步,相当于高升,是简单的走两步的问题吗？” what Chao envied in the one side said: „Zhang Tan, congratulates you.” 何超在一旁羡慕地说:“张叹,恭喜你。” He and Zhang Tan enter the duty at the same time, short in less than half a month, Zhang Tan has jumped out of the script assessment panel, equal in passed/lived „practice session”, straightened out, participates in the big project, but he, is an rookie, in the script assessment panel qualifications shallowest one, last week vice-chairman asked him to talk, encouraging him to diligently, the implication was, his present ability is also not enough to base. 他和张叹同一时间入职,短短不到半个月,张叹已经跳出剧本评估小组,相等于过了“实习期”,步入正轨,参与大项目,而他,还是个新人,剧本评估小组里资历最浅的一个,上周副组长找他谈话,鼓励他要更加努力,言外之意是,他现在能力还不足以立足。 Thinks of these, what Chao while congratulating Zhang Tan, unavoidably has discouraged. 想到这些,何超在恭喜张叹的同时,难免心生气馁。 Zhang Tan: „Thanks, you also morning.” 张叹:“谢谢,你们也早晚的。” Jiang Rong: „Walks, please eat meal, under the congratulation you, listen to you to discuss the work of writing a play assistant while convenient.” 姜蓉:“走,请你吃饭,祝贺下你,顺便听你讲讲编剧助理的工作。” Three people had the dinner together, Jiang Rong proposed that sang KTV, this miss will play very much, looks at her usual clothes and custom, in the family/home the condition should be very good, was the Pujiang local area miss. 三人一起吃了晚饭,姜蓉提议去唱KTV,这姑娘很会玩,看她平时的穿着打扮和习惯,家里条件应该很好,是浦江本地姑娘。 what Chao, he answered the telephone of girlfriend, immediately hurries back. 何超去不了,他接了女朋友的电话,立刻赶了回去。 Remaining Zhang Tan and Jiang Rong, Zhang Tan said: „Person too little sang not to have the atmosphere, or another day? When the time comes called several friends.” 剩下张叹和姜蓉两人,张叹说:“人太少唱歌没氛围,要不改天？到时候多叫几个朋友。” Jiang Rong: „Must call the person is not easy, my telephone can call one group.” 姜蓉:“要叫人还不容易,我一个电话可以叫一帮。” However, such words Zhang Tan seems very awkward, is her friend, Zhang Tan one did not know, Jiang Rong thinks obviously this, said intimately: „That line, another day.” 不过,那样的话张叹会显得挺尴尬,都是她的朋友,张叹一个不认识,姜蓉显然想到了这点,贴心地说:“那行,改天。” Takes taxi under Chang'an Avenue West, Zhang Tan walks to the Little Red Horse Academy entrance, greets with gate guard old Li, in academy brilliantly illuminated, the children immature voice flutters in the dim light of night. 打车在西长安街下,张叹步行到小红马学园门口,和门卫老李打了声招呼,学园里灯火辉煌,小朋友们稚嫩的声音在夜色里飘荡。 When goes upstairs, hears Xiaobai that also to have Sichuan of penetrating power especially specially very much, she seems to be also quarrelling, in numerous Sichuan, the melon baby, Zhang Tan accessed the net to check yesterday, this is curses at people. 上楼时,又听到小白那格外特别又很有穿透力的川普,她似乎又在和人吵架,众多川普中,有一句瓜娃子,张叹昨天上网查了,这是骂人的。 Zhang Tan goes home, has not closed, the entrance broadcasts the Xiaobai sound. 张叹回了家,还没关门呢,门口传来小白的声音。 „Uncle, do you go home?” “大叔,你才回家呀？” This little friend is the puppy? Came back to be discovered. 这小朋友是属小狗的吗？一回来就被发现了。 Zhang Tan said: „Right, haven't you played with the children?” 张叹笑着说:“对呀,你没跟小朋友们玩吗？” Just also listened to you to quarrel. 刚还听你在吵架来着。 The Xiaobai baby shoe puts on that wrap/sets familiar blue color China, lies in the gate along, takes a look at him curiously. 小白童鞋穿着那套熟悉的蓝色大中华,趴在门沿上,好奇地打量他。 She as if there are two clothes, one set red, one set blue, is turning putting on. 她似乎只有两套衣服,一套红的,一套蓝的,轮着穿。 „Can you with my playing soccer ball?” “你要和我踢球球吗？” „Ok, it is getting dark, will trip and fall.” “算了吧,天快黑了,会摔跤的。” If China Men's Football Team has your such enthusiasm, does not worry unable to run out of Asia. 中华男足要是有你这样的热情,不愁冲不出亚洲。 „Claw?” Xiaobai lies in the gate along asking. “爪子咧？”小白趴在门沿问。 „Darkness could not see clearly the road, is easy to trip and fall, is sore.” “天黑了看不清路,容易摔跤啊,多疼啊。” „Has the lamp, fell to crawl sai, oh, you will cry.” “有灯吖,摔了爬起来噻,噢,你会哭鼻子吖。” This little fellow, will actually also taunt! 这小家伙,竟然还会嘲讽！ Zhang Tan can only carry out the old excuse again. 张叹只能再次搬出老借口。 „I have not eaten meal.” “我没吃饭。” „Hasn't your claw eaten luxuriantly?” “你爪子又没吃莽莽？” „Didn't this just get off work? Comes to sit, the grape that you like eating had not finished eating.” “这不刚下班吗？进来坐一坐吧,你喜欢吃的葡萄还没吃完呢。” Zhang Tan sends out the invitation. 张叹发出邀请。 Xiaobai guards asked: „Did you drink?” 小白提防地问:“你喝酒了吗？” „1 + 1 = 2.” “1+1=2。” Xiaobai feels relieved immediately: „I come.” 小白立刻放心了:“那我就进来啦。” „Comes.” “进来吧。” He sees Xiaobai to take off the small shoe, reveals pair of a sock that broke the hole, the previous embarrassment, this time did not have embarrassed, added that this was the little rascal crops up. 他见小白脱掉小鞋子,又露出一双破了洞的袜子,上一次不好意思,这次就没有不好意思了,还说她这是小鬼冒头。 This analogy is listening strangely. 这比喻听着怪怪的。 Zhang Tan found goes to work with the shoulders package, puts out a small slipper, before putting the Xiaobai body, said: „Gave you to prepare a small shoe, did not use barefoot.” 张叹找到上班用的双肩包,从中拿出一双小拖鞋,放小白身前,说:“给你准备了一双小鞋子,不用光脚。” Xiaobai looks down nearby delivers small shoe that comes, above has little bear design, very cute appearance, she asked pleasantly surprised: „Claw? Puts on to Xiaobai?” 小白低头看着送到跟前来的小鞋子,上面有小熊的图案,很可爱的样子,她惊喜地问:“爪子？给小白穿的？” Zhang Tan nods: „Right, puts on to you.” 张叹点头:“对啊,给你穿的。” „Hee is new sai!” “嘻是新的噻！” On getting off work road just bought, naturally is new. 下班路上刚买的,当然是新的。 Xiaobai holds the small slipper, sizes up joyfully, suddenly the complexion changes, stares at Zhang Tan to ask seriously: „Uncle, what do you want to make?” 小白抱起小拖鞋,欣喜不已地打量,忽然脸色一变,严肃地盯着张叹问:“大叔,你想做啥子嘛？” „?” Zhang Tan doubts. “啊？”张叹疑惑。 „What for Xiaobai do you buy the shoes you to make?” “你给小白买鞋子你想做啥子嘛？” Zhang Tan does not know whether to laugh or cry, you think that I planned buys over you with a small slipper? You were also too cheap. 张叹哭笑不得,难道你以为我打算用一双小拖鞋收买你？你也太便宜了吧。 „I do not want to make anything , because your previous time comes my family to be a guest, I have not suited the small shoe that you wear, on road that therefore returns home from work today, bought one pair conveniently.” “我没想做啥子啊,就是因为你上次来我家做客,我没适合你穿的小鞋子,所以今天下班回家的路上,就顺手买了一双。” „.” Xiaobai sizes up the small slipper, really likes, but...... “哦。”小白打量小拖鞋,是真喜欢,但…… „I do not want your.” “我不要你的哦。” „I know me to know, does not want not to relate.” “我知道我知道,不要没关系。” „That gives back to you.” “那还给你。” „Puts on to you, you come my family to be a guest, I naturally must prepare the small shoe to put on to you, cannot make the guest walk barefoot at home, that is not polite.” “给你穿啊,你来我家做客,我当然要给你准备小鞋子穿,不能让客人光脚在家里走,那不礼貌。” Xiaobai whispered: „Did not know that you said anything.” 小白嘀咕一声:“不晓得你说啥子。” Zhang Tan does not know whether to laugh or cry: „You do not need to know, put in the line.” 张叹哭笑不得:“你不用晓得,穿上就行了。” Xiaobai has not put on, is not does not put on, but does not hate to put on. 小白还是没穿,不是不穿,而是不舍得穿。 She the small slipper in the hand, wears a pair of broken sock to walk back and forth at home, suddenly remembers anything, runs up to near the gate, depended on a glass jar that the wall puts to hug a moment ago, delivers to nearby Zhang Tan, happily said: „Uncle you looks! Xiaobai catches Dingding cat, other melon babies have not caught, caught on Xiaobai, was Xiaobai is fiercely miserable?” 她把小拖鞋拿在手里,穿着一双破袜子在家里走来走去,忽然想起什么,跑到门边,把刚才靠墙放的一个玻璃瓶抱起来,送到张叹跟前,得意地说:“大叔你看！小白抓到一只丁丁猫儿,其他瓜娃子都没抓到,就小白抓到了,小白是不是厉害惨了？” „Dingding cat?” “丁丁猫？” Small dingdong? The Zhang Tan doubts asked, the result looks, in the glass jar is a dragonfly, did this call Dingding cat? 小叮当？张叹疑惑地问,结果一看,玻璃瓶里是一只蜻蜓,这叫丁丁猫儿？ „Dragonfly, fierce, how do you catch?” “蜻蜓啊,厉害,你怎么抓到的？” „I use my small hand to catch, this is my strong point sai.” “我用我的小手抓到的,这是我的强项噻。” She sits on the small stool, a hand is holding the glass jar, a hand pulls out in the pants pocket pulls out, pulls out a candy, gives Zhang Tan, asking him to eat. 她坐在小凳子上,一只手抱着玻璃瓶,一只手在裤兜里掏啊掏,掏出一颗糖果,递给张叹,请他吃。 This little friend understands the politeness very much, visit several times not empty-handed, before was one boils the peanut, the present is a candy, many were the intention, was really good. 这个小朋友很懂礼貌,几次上门都不空手,以前是一把煮花生,现在是一颗糖果,多少是心意,真不错。