Winter, in the afternoon. 冬日,午后。 25-year-old vermilion Sir's flesh and blood biological Sun deserted/few Qianlong, is raising baggage uneasy stepping into Xijiao Guesthouse. 25岁的朱老太爷的骨肉亲孙廖潜龙,提着行李忐忑不安的踏进西郊宾馆。 The onstage register number, with the key, treads the tread tread to go upstairs, catches the eye to find, Gong beautiful to chat in the corridor., Went forward to call: „Teacher Ge and Teacher Gong, my name were deserted/few Fan, today registers.” 前台报名号,拿钥匙,蹬蹬蹬上楼,抬眼瞧见葛尤、巩丽在走廊闲聊。顿了顿,上前招呼:“葛老师、巩老师,我叫廖帆,今天来报到。” „, Four? Hello.” “哦,四眼是吧？你好你好。” Uncle Ge shakes hand enthusiastically , helping take care: „Oneself come? That first goes to the room, has the matter to look for the movie-making, most inside that room.” 葛大爷热情握手,帮忙张罗:“自己来的啊？那先去房间,有事找制片,最里头那屋。” „!” “诶诶！” deserted/few Qianlong listens to reason modestly, Gong sovereign beckons with the hand to bestow to draw back, is voluntarily calm. 廖潜龙虚心受教,巩皇摆手赐退,自行安顿。 First edition «A World Without Thieves», the Uncle Li gang has several go-getters, second child You Yong has not changed, the small leaf changed into Cao shadow, four are Lin Jiadong develops. 原版《天下无贼》,黎叔团伙有几员干将,老二尤永没变,小叶换成了曹影,四眼是林家栋演的。 Lin Jiadong is the artist in magnificence Young Company, therefore is the magnificence young brings. Four this roles have no characteristics, the passer-by supporting role, gives deserted/few Fan now. 林家栋是华仔公司的艺人,所以是华仔带来的。四眼这角色没啥特点,路人配角,现在给了廖帆。 He in 97 years the play graduated, boils for a long time depended on «Daytime Fireworks» very much became famous overnight, belongs to mature slowly. 他97年上戏毕业,熬了很久才凭《白日焰火》一举成名,属于大器晚成。 Oneself wait in the room various types is not familiar with, has not dared to wander about aimlessly, the producer came to send regards, then to the evening, the notice met. 自己待屋里各种不习惯,还不敢乱走,制片人进来问候了下,然后就到了晚上,通知开会。 The big room, the middle has the long table of oval-shape, the big shot sits in a circle, all around is the dramatic team staff. 偌大的屋子,中间有椭圆形的长桌,大佬们围坐一圈,四周是剧组工作人员。 For a while which deserted/few Fan does not know to sit, permits Feizhi referred to the last seat, he hurries to run, a little accidental/surprised last seat was also on the table! 廖帆一时不晓得坐哪儿,许非指了指末席,他赶紧跑过去,有点意外末席也是上桌了的！ „Peaceful, meets!” “安静,开会！” The voice falls to the ground, completely silent. Teacher permits said: „ Everyone enters the group one week ahead of schedule, then official starting. The outdoor scene in Gannan, the indoor scene in Beiyingchang, in the awning built four compartments, is about 40 meters, divides the first-class berth, hard berth, dining car and hard seat, is our main battlefield. 话音落地,鸦雀无声。许老师道:“大家提前一星期进组,然后正式开机。外景在甘南,内景在北影厂,棚内搭了四节车厢,长约40米,分软卧、硬卧、餐车、硬座,是我们的主战场。 Photography cycle 3 months, will screen as next year new year's film. 拍摄周期三个月,将作为明年贺岁片上映。 Does this week do? Mutually familiar, the script encircles reads, the slow Dao possible first participation? ” 这一个星期干什么？互相熟悉,剧本围读,徐导可能第一次参与？” „Un, is interesting.” slow said with a smile strangely. “嗯,蛮有趣的。”徐老怪笑道。 «A World Without Thieves» does not have the Hong Kong capital to invest, naturally does not have many Hong Kong staff, not that time comes to punish one as a warning to others like «Rumor». 《天下无贼》没有港资投入,自然也没多少香港员工,倒不像《风声》那次来个杀鸡儆猴。 «Crouching tiger , hidden dragon» patted for five months, Gong beautiful rests for a month ; «Obscure individual of» finished sooner , yellow Bo rested for two months. 《卧虎藏龙》拍了五个月,巩丽休息一个月;《无名之辈》结束早些,葛尤、黄勃休息了两个月。 Nonstop coming convergence. The police or stretch/open Hanyu, model/pattern Wei, Feng Yuanzheng play not many, has not participated. 马不停蹄的前来汇合。警察还是张涵宇,范炜、冯元征戏不多,没有参加。 permits non- said, asking slow to blame to speak. 许非说完,请徐老怪讲话。 Hong Kong almost does not have the entire dramatic team to meet, he is very novel, said: „ Pushes me, I do not know to speak anything, puts forward some requests. 香港几乎没有整个剧组开会的,他还挺新奇,道:“把我推上来,我不知讲什么,提些要求吧。 The characteristics of this play, I achieve consistently with Boss permits, straight do not lose the undependable way of speaking. It is difficult to describe, speaks a story that probably conforms to the inland custom, in addition Hong Kong rivers and lakes piece flavor. ” 这部戏的特点,我跟许老板达成一致,端正又不失江湖气。很难形容,大概是讲一个符合内地习惯的故事,又加上香港江湖片的味道。” „, Mainly is not your style. If summarizes the Hong Kong rivers and lakes piece, I did not ask you to come.” permits non- said with a smile. “不不,主要是您个人的风格。如果概括成香港江湖片,我也不请您来了。”许非笑道。 What style slow does blame? 徐老怪什么风格？ Lily! 百合呀！ It is not! slow strangely is the powerful and unconstrained style, unpredictable, understands thorough, aesthetic tall Gan to the rivers and lakes, will pat the woman, the detail place often thumps the table and shouts praise. 啊不是！徐老怪就是天马行空,波谲云诡,对江湖理解透彻,审美高杆,会拍女人,细节处往往拍案叫绝。 For example «Taking Tiger Mountain by Strategy», *** visits the grave passing through the gate, is a multi-step upward angle of view, most above has the opening chair, sits a beautiful strange woman. 比如《智取威虎山》,***拜山进门,是一个阶梯式向上的视角,最上头有张大椅子,坐着一个妖艳诡异的女人。 Have no reason, he thought that pats is very attractive. 没理由,他就觉得这么拍很好看。 This is he is above a place of ticket director, is aesthetically qualified. 这便是他超乎一票导演的地方,审美非常合格。 slow spoke several strangely, returns to permits non-, permits Feidao: „Today the script encircles reads, first tries a small section. Who has the different ideas, immediately raises the scene to discuss.” 徐老怪讲了几句,交还给许非,许非道:“今天剧本围读,先试一小段。谁有不同的想法,马上提出来现场讨论。” „Starts!” “开始吧！” ............ ………… «A World Without Thieves» just came out, permits non- feels good. Afterward looked again, thought the female lord setting was very irritable, lines also two. 《天下无贼》刚出来的时候,许非觉得挺好。后来再看,觉得女主设定很别扭,台词也中二。 The male lord often said oneself are the wolf, like this type: „I am only the hungry wolf extremely......” 男主动不动就说自己是狼,像这种:“我只是饿极的狼……” Very embarrassed. 很尬。 Also female lord. Although Liu Reying performing skill is good, but develops the thief no belief strength ; first, tender ; second, weak ; third, to do. 再说女主。刘若英演技虽好,但演女贼毫无信服力,一是娇,二是弱,三是作。 Like this lines: 像这段台词: „I that wants me to earn.” “我要我应得的那份。” „Your that? That is I goes all out to gain!” “你那份？那是我拼了命赚回来的！” „Do you gain? Changsha that list, I lead away the police, you walk? Yunnan that ticket, did I change you...... to spell with myself? Your both hands gave others according to the case......” “你赚回来的？长沙那一单,要不是我把警察引开,你走的了么？云南那一票,要不是我用自己去换你……拼了？你两只手都给人家按在案子上了……” Can listen, that tune is the literary young woman is deliberately installing valiantly. 可以听一听,那个腔调就是文艺女青年在刻意装彪悍。 Is weak and does. 还有弱和作。 „Sees the silly root since my first, I like this younger brother. Who must dare to move him, first passes my pass/test!” “打从我第一眼见到傻根,我就喜欢这弟弟。谁要敢动他,先过我这关！” „The matter that I embrace I take on, do not build you.”??? “我揽的事我自己担,别把你搭进去。”？？？ From beginning to end she has not displayed any skill, on the mouth said oneself take on, finally lets the male lord help everywhere, finally also built the male main life. 从头到尾她都没表现出啥本事,嘴上说自己担,结果处处让男主帮忙,最后把男主的命也搭进去了。 Talking big was too laughable. 说大话就太可笑了。 And related to some logical relation: Did a walk rivers and lakes many years of thief, look at one to recognize the younger brother for the wool? The protection that also disregards others, died including oneself men. 其中涉及某个逻辑关系:一个行走江湖多年的女贼,为毛看了一眼就要认弟弟？还不管不顾的保护人家,连自己男人都死了。 The first edition gave two reasons: First, the silly root has helped her ; second, to be pregnant. But the upholstery is insufficient, is towering. 原版给了两个理由:一是傻根帮过她,二是怀孕。但铺垫都不够,还是突兀。 Moreover Liu Reying and treasure are strong, perhaps sees likely the sister and brother, but Gong sovereign and yellow Bo is a different matter. permits non- in retaining the foundation of story main line, entire changes greatly. 而且刘若英和宝强,或许看着像姐弟,但巩皇和黄勃是另外一回事。许非在保留故事主线的基础上,整个大改。 „To realize a he no clever desire, sacrificed itself”, this essence universe. “为了实现他一个无贼的愿望,牺牲自己”,这内核太虚了。 Feng pants original intention not so, but was not has examined...... permits unable to examine...... 冯裤子本意也非如此,但不是过不了审么……许非不是能过审么…… Therefore a user-friendly point, reality. 所以人性化一点,现实一点。 Without bewildered recognizing younger brother, does good deeds to do a good for the stomach child, psychologically completes the self- redemption, finally paid the price of life, instead realized the silly root no clever desire. 没有莫名其妙的认弟弟,就是为肚里的孩子积德想做件善事,在心理上完成自我救赎,结果付出了生命的代价,反而实现了傻根无贼的愿望。 What did this call? 这叫什么？ The destiny is variable. 命运无常。 ............ ………… „I want my!” “我要我的那份！” „Your that? That is I goes all out to gain!” “你那份？那是我拼了命赚回来的！” „Do you gain? Do you gain?” “你赚回来的？你赚回来的？” „Stops!” “停！” slow stops strangely, said: „ You must very exciting quarrel, be then sudden, to the audience the time of preparation, secure beautiful you do not tear the clothes, reveals the scar of chest. 徐老怪叫停,道:“你们要很激动的争吵,然后非常突然的,不要给观众心理准备的时间,巩丽你把衣服扯开,露出胸口的疤痕。 Right, this is with the smoke hot? ” 对了,这是用烟烫的么？” „With the smoke, most makes several scar, fierce. Must contrast distinctively, like on a specially beautiful thing, presented the ugly slight defect, the frightened shock was a pity.” “是用烟,最好多做几个疤,狰狞一点。要对比鲜明,就像在一件特别美的事物上,出现了丑陋的瑕疵,让人惊悚震惊又可惜。” „......” “……” Gong beautiful shows the whites of the eyes. 巩丽翻了个白眼。 slow actually feels sorry not to have met sooner strangely, aiya, our aesthetic appreciation was too consistent! 徐老怪却相见恨晚,哎呀,俺们审美情趣太一致了！ beam Jiahui with very earnest is recording, said: „Here felt that do not speak is quite good, she tears the clothes, we do not speak.” 梁佳辉拿笔很认真的在记,道:“这里感觉不要讲话比较好,她把衣服扯开,我们都不要讲话。” „Ok, Ok.” “可以啊,可以。” The slow strange brain made up lens, a pair of female and male thief argues, makes a cent of money to do accounts. Female suddenly reveals the scar, all perform in do not call the turn...... 徐老怪脑补了一下镜头,一对雌雄大盗发生争吵,闹着分钱算账。女的忽然露出疤痕,一切尽在不言中…… „Then erases behind that lines, does not need.” “那把后面那句台词删掉,不需要了。” permits Feichou the time, did not read early probably began two scripts, said: „Today to this, will continue tomorrow morning.” 许非瞅瞅时间不早了,大概读了开头两段的剧本,道:“今天到这吧,明早继续。” 3322 toward leaving, he asked: „What kind of, but also adaptation?” 三三两两的往出走,他问:“怎么样,还适应么？” „Ok, this method of work has the advantage very much, later I also want to use for reference.” slow strange say/way. “可以,这套工作方法很有优势,以后我也想借鉴一下。”徐老怪道。 „I thought that is very suitable he, he has one's wish, the plot mess of often doing.” uses/gives Nansheng complained. “我觉得很适合他啊,他就是太随心所欲,往往搞的剧情一团糟。”施楠生吐槽。 „Yeah, I cannot control myself sometimes!” “哎,我有时控制不住自己嘛！” Three people the conference room, in the corridor, permits non- also said: „Usually probably several rests?” 三人出会议室,在走廊里,许非又道:“平时大概几点休息？” „I rest has been very late.” “我睡的一直很晚。” „Does that drink cup of tea? Does the cedar live the elder sister together?” “那下去喝杯茶？楠生姐一起？” „Good, had not said a moment ago happily.” “好啊,刚才还没讲痛快。” ( Also has......) (还有……)