To the timealsothreedays of goingleafHongjingHalf Monster Unionbigcamp, Feng Feiyunplanscultivation base that usedthreedays of justto promoteconsolidated, the Nirvanaboundarywas an extremelydangerousboundary, did not pay attentionslightlybecause the boundarywill not be steadyvanishes in a puff of smoke.
离前去叶红境半妖盟大营的时间还有三天,风飞云打算用着三天的时间巩固刚提升的修为,涅槃境界是一个极其危险的境界,稍不注意就会因为境界不稳灰飞烟灭。Feng Feiyunsits cross-leggedinHalf Monster UnionCave Dwelling, has practicedshortly, someoutsidethenpeoplerushed.风飞云盘坐在半妖盟的一座洞府之中,才修炼了没多久,外面便有人闯了进来。„WhoIrecalled to mindyourmotheram, yourmotheroncehad eaten mealinmy family.”Grandpa Yujumped, acts like a madman, tightentraining the hand of Feng Feiyun, has forced an analogytowardHalf Monster Unionoutsidehim.
“我记起你妈是谁了,你妈真的曾经在我家里吃过饭。”鱼爷又跳了出来,疯疯癫癫,紧紧的拽住了风飞云的手,将他往半妖盟的外面生拉硬拽。„Old fogy, where can youtowarddragme?”Feng Feiyunwas almost towedto carry the somersaultbyGrandpa Yu, the strength of thisold manis notgeneralbig, althoughacts like a madman, but the strengthlike the cow, is unable to revoltincludingFeng Feiyungreatly, likelyis the bodybyhimimprisoning.
“老家伙,你要将我往哪里拖?”风飞云差一点被鱼爷拖得载跟头,这老头子的力气不是一般的大,虽然疯疯癫癫,但是力气大如牛,连风飞云都无法反抗,像是身体被他给禁锢住。
The strengthwas too big!
力气太大了!
Isn't thisold fogywill be feigning madness and playing dumb?
这老家伙不会是在装疯卖傻吧?Grandpa Yuranquickly, almostpullingto fly the body of Feng Feiyun, finallybroughtoutside of oldhouseFeng Feiyun.鱼爷跑得很快,几乎将风飞云的身体给扯飞起来了,最终将风飞云带到了一座老房子的外面。ThisisJi Territoryremoteplace, the surroundingsare very bleak, ruins of many collapses, everywhererubble, remnants of destroyed buildings, only then a bluish graybrokenroomalsostandsin the ruins, dryFujikagein the roof, appearssomedejectedcable/search.
这是季域的一处偏僻之地,周围十分荒凉,有很多倒塌的废墟,满地瓦砾,残垣断壁,只有一间青灰色的破屋子还立在废墟之中,有一根根枯藤挂在屋顶,显得有些萧索。
After arriving atthisstretch of ruins, the Grandpa Yuthenno longercrazy, sitson the ground, glassy-eyedis looking atthatbrokenroom.
来到这一片废墟之后,鱼爷便不再疯癫,坐在地上,目光呆滞的望着那一间破屋子。„Strange! InentireYu Citywas givento be filledby the member, has the memberto sit cross-legged the cultivationincluding the avenuenear, heresois why bleak, can't seeincluding a person's shadow?”
“奇怪!整个域城之中都被修士给挤满,连大街边上都有修士盘坐修炼,为何这里却如此荒凉,连一个人影都看不到?”InYu Cityhas the fallingdaySpirit Stonein additionto hold, is the cultivationexcellent, the entireJi TerritorymemberinpushtowardYu City, cansee the personeverywhere, butactuallydoes not see a person's shadowhere.域城之中有陨天灵石加持,乃是修炼的绝佳地,整个季域的修士都在往域城之中挤,随处都可以看到人,但是在这里却不见一个人影。Feng Feiyunis very curious, the footsteps onabovepiece by pieceshatterrubble, bridged over a remnantwall, arrived atoutside of bluish graybrokenroom.风飞云很好奇,脚踩在一片片破碎的瓦砾之上,跨过了一段残墙,来到了青灰色的破屋子的外面。Thisroomisby the azurestonestack, many wallalreadyrottenpenetration, above the windowfullis the spider web, the wooden door is also tattered, as ifYizhen Fengblows, the gatewill be split up.
这一间屋子乃是由青色的石头堆砌而成,很多墙壁都已经烂穿透,窗户之上满是蛛网,木门也破破烂烂,似乎一阵风吹来,门就会四分五裂。Thisisonedoes not know that saved the worldmanyyearancientWu, once when construction the material that usedwas the preciousvaluablematerial, butnowalreadyis decayed.
这是一间不知存世了多少年的古屋,曾经修建之时所用的材料都是珍奇的宝材,但是现在却已经腐朽。„Where is here?”In the Feng Feiyunmindhas a strangefeeling, as ifhad come tohere, is somewhat familiarwithhere.
“这里到底是什么地方?”风飞云的脑海中有一股奇怪的感觉,仿佛自己曾经来过这里,对这里有些熟悉。
The phoenixsoul in Feng Feiyunmindbeatgently, dissipates a faintflame, as to break through the soul the seal.风飞云脑海之中的凤凰灵魂轻轻的跳动了一下,逸散出一丝淡淡的火光,似乎想要冲破灵魂的封印。„Hereis the place that your fatherandyourmotherare acquainted, theyoncetogetherarrived at the food that hereeatsmeto make.”Grandpa Yufollowed, the hairis chaotic, is staring atthatazureancientWu, was speakingsomestrangewords.
“这里是你爹和你妈相识的地方,他们曾一起来到这里吃过我做的饭。”鱼爷跟了上来,头发乱糟糟,盯着那青色的古屋,又在说一些奇怪的话。Feng Feiyunshook the head, naturallycannotbelieve that a spirithasissue the words of old person's, arrived at the azureancientWufrontslowly, the general's familyhas shoved opengently.风飞云摇了摇头,自然不会相信一个精神有问题的老人的话,缓缓的走到了青色的古屋的面前,将门给轻轻推开。Although the ancientroomis worn-out, howeverinsiderayis extremely good, canseeinsideto havefivestone columnsto supportin the house beam, the top that the stonebuildsis situatedin the corner, a stonetableandstool, somestonebowl......
古屋虽然破旧,但是里面的光线却极好,可以看见里面有五根石柱撑在房梁,还有石头堆砌的灶台坐落在墙角,还有一张石头桌子和凳子,还有一些石碗……Stone columnandstoneZaotai, stone tableandstoneDeng, stonebowl...... Thesethingalreadydamage, notequallycomplete.
石柱、石灶台、石桌、石凳、石碗……这些东西都已经破损,没有一样完好。
The timeis too remote, the stonemustchange into the powder.
时间太久远,石头都要化为粉末。Howeverwhatlets the Feng Feiyunsurpriseis, althoughthisancientWuis ruined, butin a grain of dustdoes not have, will somepeoplecometo cleanevery day?
但是让风飞云诧异的是,这古屋虽然破败,但是里面却一粒灰尘都没有,难道有人每天都会前来打扫?IsGrandpa Yu?
难道是鱼爷?Feng Feiyuninazurestone buildinghad not discovered that anyspecialplace, thisis a stone building, is common.风飞云并没有在青色的石屋之中发现什么特殊的地方,这就是一间石屋,再寻常不过了。
After going out of the ancientroom, Grandpa Yualsostands outside as before, the mouthintalking overanything, somevisiondelay, both handsare rubbingabove the hair.
走出古屋之后,鱼爷依旧还站在外面,嘴里在念叨着什么,目光有些呆滞,双手在头发之上揉搓着。„Grandpa Yu, is thisreally your family?”Feng Feiyunthought that thisold person is actually very pitiful, does not have the posterity, acts like a madmanall day, areeveryonedoes not know.
“鱼爷,这真的是你家?”风飞云觉得这个老人其实很可怜,没有子孙后代,又整天疯疯癫癫,连自己是谁都不知道了。„fenfen!”
“吩吩!”
The nose of Grandpa Yuinsmelling that the groundkeeps, the facemustpastein the soil, suddenlyraised the head, cries: „Shecame back!”鱼爷的鼻子在地上不停的嗅,脸都要贴进泥土之中,突然抬起头来,大叫一声:“她回来了!”Feng Feiyunknits the browsto sayslightly,„whosheis?”风飞云微微皱眉道,“她是谁?”„Shecame back! Shecame back......”Grandpa Yuto jumpsuddenly, ranregarding the ancientroomcrazily, ranwhileyelled.
“她回来了!她回来了……”鱼爷突然跳了起来,围绕着古屋狂跑,边跑边大叫。Feng Feiyunis somewhat curious, Grandpa Yuhad smelleda moment ago the soil of placediggingone, attained the tip of the noseto smellsmelling, did not think that hadanydifference.风飞云有些好奇,将鱼爷刚才嗅过的地方的泥土给掘起来了一块,拿到鼻尖嗅了嗅,并不觉得有什么不同。Feng Feiyunsmiled, smiles itself should not believe that crazyold person'swords, wantto giveto throw down the soil in hand, suddenly.风飞云笑了笑,笑自己不应该去相信一个疯癫老人的话,想要将手中的泥土给丢下,忽的,又顿了顿。„With the technique of smallspreading outcalculated that tries!”
“用小衍之术推算一下试试!”Feng Feiyunsits cross-leggedin the ruins, inhandis pinchingtogether the soil, has closedboth eyes, the bodyhad40Daoguangto revolve, in the mindemerged a strangepicturesuddenly风飞云盘坐在废墟之中,手中捏着一块泥土,闭上了双眼,身上有40道光点在旋转,脑海之中突然涌现出了一幅奇怪的画面Thisstretch of ruins, arethatancientWu, howeveris actually standing outside of ancientroom a female of peerless grace and talent, the snowclothesis floating, the black hairflowing light, like the femaleimmortal who a flyingcomes.
还是这一片废墟,还是那一间古屋,但是在古屋的外面却站着一个风华绝代的女子,雪衣飘飘,乌发流光,就像一位飞天而来的女仙人。Shestood outside of ancientroom, physiquebeautifulto the pinnacle, glanced back, has revealed a beautiful womanrefinedimmortalface.
她就站在古屋的外面,身姿美到了极致,蓦然回首,露出了一张倾城脱俗的仙颜。„Shui Yueting!”
“水月婷!”Thatstands the femaleoutsideblue stoneancientroomisShui Yueting.
那一个站在青石古屋外的女子就是水月婷。Feng Feiyunboth eyesexplodesuddenlyopen, inmouthhas put out a blood, a palmhas strucktowardthatperson's shadowtogether, buthas actually struckspatial, hitabove a wall, had a loud sound, entireCave Dwellingshivered.风飞云双目豁然爆睁开,口中吐出了一口鲜血,一掌向着那一道人影击了过去,但是却击了一个空,打在了一面墙壁之上,发出一声巨响,整个洞府都颤抖了一下。Feng Feiyunsits cross-leggedgraduallyon the ground, the moodhas stabilized, wiped off the bloodstain above corners of the mouth, raised the head, looks at the surroundings, the heartraised the thickmisgivings, tightknitting the browshead, „were allonly a dream?”风飞云盘坐在地上,情绪渐渐的稳定了下来,擦掉了嘴角之上的血迹,抬起头,看了看周围,心头升起了浓浓的疑云,紧紧的皱了皱眉头,“难道刚才的一切都只是一个梦?”
The surroundingsdo not have the ruins, does not have the ancientroom!
周围没有废墟,也没有古屋!Feng FeiyunsitsinHalf Monster UnionthatCave Dwellingas before, is the place of thatcultivation, the surroundingallhave not changed.风飞云依旧坐在半妖盟的那一座洞府之中,乃是那一处修炼之地,周围的一切都没有变化。„Is impossible! I was cultivatinga moment agoobviously, by the strength of mysoulpossiblyincultivation did on the way offall asleep? Alsohas had a dream? thatreal, at alllikely is not having a dream.”On the Feng Feiyunforehead the cold sweatis dripping, whole bodyalreadywas givento soakby the sweat, felt that the whole bodyis sendingcoldly.
“不可能!我刚才明明是在修炼,以我灵魂的力量怎么可能在修炼的途中睡着?还做了一个梦?况且刚才的一幕幕都那么的真实,根本不像是在做梦。”风飞云的额头上冷汗淋漓,浑身都已经被汗水给湿透,感觉到浑身都在发寒。
The Feng Feiyunsomebodybackcool feeling, have turned aroundsuddenly, had a scare, is squattingunexpectedly a old person of whole facewrinkle.风飞云的身体背后有些凉意,豁然转过身,吓了一跳,身后居然蹲着一个满脸皱纹的老人。Thisold personwas staringin a big wayeyeto stare athim.
这老人正瞪大了眼睛盯着他。Thisold personGrandpa Yu!
这个老人正是鱼爷!„Grandpa Yu, who are you?”Feng Feiyunheld the Grandpa Yufront piece.
“鱼爷,你到底是什么人?”风飞云一把抓住了鱼爷的衣襟。„IamGrandpa Yu!”Grandpa YuveryearnestreplyFeng Feiyun.
“我是鱼爷啊!”鱼爷很认真的回答风飞云。Feng Feiyunhas drawnfrom the groundGrandpa Yu, dragstowardHalf Monster Unionoutside, said,„ledmeto go to that placequickly, Ihad very importantmatter.”风飞云将鱼爷从地上拉了起来,向着半妖盟的外面拖,道,“快带我去刚才的那个地方,我有很重要的事。”„A moment agowhere?”Grandpa Yustaredin a big way the eye, lookedmonstersamelooks atFeng Feiyun, a moment agonotinHalf Monster Union?
“刚才什么地方啊?”鱼爷瞪大了眼睛,看怪物一样的看着风飞云,刚才不就是在半妖盟之中嘛?„Isyour family!”Feng Feiyunis very anxious, wantsto go tothatancientWuvery muchagain, inhismindpresented a strangepicture, Shui Yuetingwent tothatancientWuoutsideunexpectedly, is very possibleshenowalso there.
“就是你家啊!”风飞云很急切,很想再去那一间古屋,他刚才的脑海里出现了一个奇怪的画面,水月婷居然去了那一间古屋的外面,很可能她现在还在那里。„Family/Home...... The family/home......” the Grandpa Yuexpressionimmediatelychanged, becomestwistsmore and more, is getting more and more sad, both handsare rubbing the scalp, the facial expressionbecameveryexcited, said: „Does not have the family/home, Ido not havefamily/home, does not have the family/home......”
“家……家……”鱼爷的表情顿时变了,变得越来越扭曲,越来越难过,双手揉着头皮,神情变得很激动了起来,道:“没家,我没有家,没有家的……”„Youhave the family/home, thatis a azurestone building, insidehasfivestonepillars, hastop that the stonebuilds, stone table, the stonestool......”said.
“你有家,那是一件青色的石屋,里面有五根石头柱子,有石头堆砌的灶台,还有石桌子,石头凳子……”道。
The Grandpa Yufacial expressionbecomesis unstable, the stampingplace that the footkeeps, has liquor go to one's headto hit the ground, discussing that the mouthkeeps: „Did not have the family/home, did not havefamily/home...... WhoIam...... Where is myfamily/homeat? Whereis at?”鱼爷的神情则变得更加的不稳定,脚不停的跺地,拿脑袋去撞地面,嘴里不停的念道:“没家了,没有家的……我到底是谁啊……我的家在哪?在哪?”Gets down, feared that will behewill stimulate the crazy, moreoverlooked that hisappearancewill not installlikely.
下去,怕将是他刺激得更加疯癫,而且看他的样子也不像是装出来的。Feng Feiyunalsoonly thenacts according toownmemory, towed the route that heis going toalongGrandpa Yua moment ago, looksthatstretch of ruins.风飞云也只有根据自己的记忆力,沿着刚才鱼爷拖着他去的路线,去找那一片废墟。„LeftHalf Monster Union, turns left, thenpassed through a piece of hibernation of insectsto saw the woods, has passed through a spiritroad...... Then, is......”
“出了半妖盟,就是往左拐,然后经过了一片蛰锯树林,穿过了一条灵路……然后,然后又是……”Feng Feiyunbyformerlymemory, seeksthatstretch of ruinsandancient who WuGrandpa Yuledhimto go, whenFeng Feiyunsawthatplaceonce more, actuallyalreadywent out ofYu City, went to an incomparablybleakplace, let alonewasstretch of ruins, did not haveincluding a piece of tile.风飞云凭借先前的记忆,去寻找鱼爷带他去的那一片废墟和古屋,但是当风飞云再次看到那个地方的时候,却已经走出了域城,来到了一片无比荒凉的地方,别说是一片废墟,连一片瓦都没有。„Howcanlike this?”
“怎么会这样?”Feng Feiyunhas closedboth eyesonce more, the carefulrecollection, determined after ownnotgoing astrayroad, once moreopens the eye.风飞云再次闭上了双眼,仔细的回想,确定自己没有走错路之后,才再次睁开眼睛。„A moment ago was really only a dream? Haven't Igone out ofHalf Monster Union?”Feng Feiyunis looking at the presentbleakwilderness, only then the scatteredseveralold trees, on the tree have more than tendarkcrows.
“难道刚才真的只是一个梦?我从来就没有走出半妖盟?”风飞云望着眼前的荒凉原野,只有稀稀落落的几颗老树,树上还有十多只昏鸦。HeusedDivine Sensealsoto find out by secret inquiry, trace that hereplacebottomhas not constructed.
他用神识也探知过了,这里的地底也从来没有建筑的痕迹。„Grandpa Yuhas been at the condition of acting like a madman, perhapshea moment agoreallyhad taken awaymesomeplace, butthatplacedoes not existin the real world. Grandpa Yushouldwantto tellmeanything, howeverhisis not very calm, afterheseesthatazureancientroom, was then insane. AfterIwake, hesquatsinmy, formerlymattercompletelywill forget.”
“鱼爷一直都处于疯疯癫癫的状态,说不定他刚才真的将我带去了某一个地方,只不过那一个地方并不存在于真实世界。鱼爷应该是想告诉我什么,但是他的情绪很不稳定,当他见到那一座青色的古屋之后,便又疯了。当我醒过来之后,他就蹲在我的身后,将先前的事完全忘记。”Feng Feiyundoes not thinka moment agomerelywas only a dream, thatplace that went toa moment ago, definitelyexisted, butthatwasonedoes not existin the place of real world, only thencango totherethroughsomespecialmethods.风飞云绝不认为刚才仅仅只是一个梦,刚才去的那个地方,也肯定存在,只不过那是一个不存在于真实世界的地方,只有通过一些特殊的手段才能去那里。Shui Yuetingalsoaffirmsthere . Moreover, shouldina moment ago, beforeFeng FeiyunandGrandpa Yugo tothere.水月婷也肯定去过那里,而且,应该就是在刚才,在风飞云和鱼爷去那里之前。„Grandpa Yudefinitelyknows the lots, mustgoto ascertaintohim.”
“鱼爷肯定知道很多东西,必须去向他问个清楚。”Feng Feiyunplansto return toYu City, regardless of any means that mustmakeGrandpa Yubring itselfto go tothatplaceonce more.风飞云打算返回域城,无论用什么办法,都一定要让鱼爷再次带自己去那个地方。„Humming sound!”
“嗡嗡!”Mayat this moment, in the ear of Feng Feiyunhearbeyondseveral hundredmiles, has broadcast the sound of fight, the quickfightthenturned towardhereto spread, the sound wavedropped from the cloudstogether, cutlike a Dao Divinitybladein the ground, the earthtearing an opening.
可就在这时,风飞云的耳中听到了数百里之外,传来了战斗的声音,很快战斗便向着这边蔓延了过来,一道音波从天而降,像一道神刃斩在地面上,将大地给撕裂出一道口子。Female who thatsprings the sound wave, wears a white clothing, the handis holdingAncient Zither, the bodyhas the Dao Divinityhalobodytogether, the under footis stepping onpiece of auspicious cloud, is hugging the female of rubypipato separatewithanothersparsspatially.
那一个弹出音波的女子,穿着一袭白衣,手捧着古筝,身上有一道道神光环体,脚下踩着一片祥云,在与另一个抱着红玉琵琶的女子隔空斗法。
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……Actuallymanyreaders are very illogicalin the protagonist who scolding the stinking ninth categoryportrays, thinksFeng Feiyun, sinceis the phoenixhead of the clanrebirth, should the maturesteady, experiencedwisdom, not impulse, playboylikeyoung people. Actuallythisis the «Spirit-Vessel»biggestpit, the stinking ninth categoryhas read the book review, has not explained that top/withstandis scolding the sound, becauseexplaineddid not have the meaning, was equal to that the playpassed, the playpassedis crispfor a while, entire familycrematory. Everybodywaitsto look! The entireeventstems from the expectations of everybodyallpeopleabsolutely, I can only say...... «Spirit-Vessel»not necessarilyis„rebirthnovel”, hehe! Ionly want to say that wheneverybodywantsscolded the plotnot to be unreasonable, pleaselook that scoldedagain, pleaselook that carefulscoldedagain, do not look athalf, orlookedto leak, randomlyspoke, thiswas notprofessionalsprayer this intelligentmatter of doing.
其实很多读者都在骂老九塑造的主角很不合逻辑,认为风飞云既然乃是凤凰族长重生,就应该成熟稳重,老练睿智,不应该像一个年轻人一样冲动、纨绔。其实这是《灵舟》最大的坑,老九一直看着书评,从来没有解释过,顶着骂声,因为解释了就没有意思了,等于是剧透,剧透一时爽,全家火葬场。大家等着看吧!整个事件绝对出乎大家所有人的预料,我只能说……《灵舟》未必是“重生小说”,呵呵!我只想说在大家想要骂剧情不合理的时候,请看完了再骂,请看仔细再骂,别看了一半,或者看漏了,就乱发言,这不是一个职业喷子该做的聪明事。To be honest, the stinking ninth categorywritessometo lovesometimes, leaningwritingis blue, is dark, has the differentplaceswithmostprofoundimaginarylittlewhitewriting of present, somepeopleare„crisp”and„straight”and„white”and„simplyunderstand”, under theseI who the netarticlesummarizeswill change, strive forthisbookto writestraightforwardlysimple, strivesdo not writethat manycurvedto circle, hopes that everybodycontinuesto support the stinking ninth category! Has any insufficientplacealsofreelyto raise, Iwill correctandstrengthen.
老实说,老九有些时候写得有些偏言情,偏文青,偏黑暗,和现在的绝大多数的玄幻小白文有很多不同的地方,有人给网文总结的就是“爽”、“直”、“白”、“简单明了”,这些我会改,争取下本书写得直白简单一点,争取不要写那么多弯弯绕,希望大家继续支持老九吧!有什么不足的地方也尽管提出来,我会改正和加强。
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