SS :: Volume #6

#68: Plot branch


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First, the female lord is forced to be dressed as a man, meets in the reality with the male lord. Afterward detected the male lord gets suspicious, finds out one good idea, in Mr. Kuehn writes to the male Lord letter/believes, claimed oneself are the male cousin of Louise Kuehn. 其一,女主被迫女扮男装,与男主在现实中见面。事后发觉男主起了疑心,就想出一个“好点子”,在“奎恩先生”写给男主的信中,声称自己是露易丝・奎恩的堂兄。 Brother and sister's name, only has a difference of letter. 兄妹俩的名字,只有一个字母的差别。 Then, Mr. Kuehn will persuade the male lord pursue oneself younger female cousin, acts as the matchmaker voluntarily, introduced that two people communicate and even the appointment. 接下来,“奎恩先生”将会劝说男主追求自己的“堂妹”,自愿充当红娘,介绍两人通信乃至约会。 As the matter stands, the leading lady takes one person of decoration brother and sister two corner/horn, by these two status, respectively with male lord communication, but must stagger the time and male lord met with alone. 这样一来,女主角就要一人分饰兄妹二角,以这两个身份,分别与男主通信,还要错开时间与男主单独会面。 Like this maintained some time, the male lord has the suspicion, asked why the female lord never does make an appearance with the cousin together? 这样维持了一段时间,男主又产生疑心,问女主为什么从来不跟堂哥一起露面? The female lord discovery could not have deceived, has to revise the plan, arranges male advocating peace female lord brother and sister, some day met in the seashore together, took vacation by the cruise. 女主发现已经骗不下去了,不得不修改计划,安排男主和女主“兄妹”,某日一起在海滨见面,乘游轮度假。 This can only delay for a while, by three people of meeting that day, the female lord may not have clone technique, will reveal the secret. 这只能拖延一时,到了三人见面的那天,女主可没有“分身术”,还是会露馅。 What to do should? 该怎么办呢? The plot develops here, the A route presents two branch options. 剧情发展到此处,A路线又出现两个分支选项。 First, the leading lady asks a being on very good terms aristocrat young master to put on makeup changed/easy appearance/allow, pretends cousin from the start does not have Mr. Kuehn. 其一是女主角找一位交情不错的贵族公子化装易容,假冒压根不存在的堂哥“奎恩先生”。 Result aristocrat young master also fell in love with the leading lady, the plot changes over to complex triangle love...... 结果这位贵族公子也爱上了女主角,剧情就转入更加复杂的“三角恋”…… Second, to arrange cousin one day ahead of schedule in marine yacht, the result misfortune storm, is buried in the seabed, the skeleton not saves. 其二是安排“堂哥”提前一天在海上驾驶快艇,结果不幸遭遇暴风,葬身海底,尸骨无存。 As the matter stands, Mr. Kuehn leaves the stage thoroughly, the lie of leading lady can mark a successful conclusion finally, did not use the minute/share of decoration two corner/horn...... 这样一来,“奎恩先生”就彻底退场,女主角的谎言终于可以画上一个圆满的句号,再也不用分饰两角了…… Some following dog blood plots, have been needless to say. 后续还有一些狗血剧情,就不用说了。 ...... …… If chooses the B route, emphasized was in the leading lady personality frank resolute, side that dared to take on, cut the gordian knot directly, among contradictory the seed the leading actors and actresses choked to death in the beginning stage. 如果选择b路线,强调的就是女主角性格中爽朗果决、敢于担当的一面,直接快刀斩乱麻,把男女主角之间矛盾的种子掐死在萌芽阶段。 The advantage that does this, can avoid the following overwhelming majority dog blood plots, remaining is the leading actor and actress has the sugar and show love mutually. 这样做的好处,就是可以回避掉后续的绝大部分狗血剧情,剩下的全是男女主角互相发糖和秀恩爱。 Soars as the former author of script, favors choosing the dramatic conflict more intense A route. 高飞作为剧本的原作者,更倾向于选择戏剧冲突更激烈的a路线。 In fact, he to write time and energy of A route expenditure, are much more than B route. 事实上,他为撰写a路线花费的时间和精力,远比b路线多得多。 a route will definitely annoy many criticism. a路线肯定会惹来很多批评。 For example the dog blood convention, for example causes the contradiction forcefully. 比如狗血俗套,比如强行制造矛盾。 For example the female lord is artificial, male lord intelligence quotient like pig. 比如女主矫情虚伪,男主智商如猪。 For example could not solve the problem to propose the person of issue on the solution. 比如解决不了问题就解决提出问题的人。 Last accident handles all, is the machinery calls upon the gods purely. 最后一场意外事故搞定一切,纯粹是机械降神。 However what's the big deal? 但是那又怎样? Exactly is this whole body is the problem, the mode of writing of scolded stream of abuse, can work up the mood of most audience to the full, making one feel anxious, wants to know the following plot trend urgently, is so-called scolded while looked. 恰恰是这种浑身是毛病、被人骂的狗血喷头的写法,才能最大限度调动绝大多数受众的情绪,使人感到焦虑,迫切想知道后续剧情走向,也就是所谓的“边骂边看”。 the B route lacked the conflict and play tensity, said frankly, is that type typically looked the opening knows very big probability will throw the mode of writing of street. b路线缺少了矛盾冲突和戏剧张力,坦率的说,属于那种典型的一看开头就知道很大概率会扑街的写法。 This mode of writing indeed has not deliberately drawn the hatred the dog blood convention bridge section, perhaps can also obtain 1-2 intelligence quotient online appraisal, but also loses the power that read, to play appealingly. 这种写法的确没有刻意拉仇恨的狗血俗套桥段,说不定还能得到1-2“智商在线”的评价,但是也丧失了吸引人读下去、玩下去的动力。 Insisting that this mode of writing, is almost doomed not to have the good result. 坚持这种写法,几乎注定不会有好结果。 Reason that soared dares saying that was because he practices from now on a mode of writing, and more than once. 高飞之所以敢这么说,是因为他亲身实践过后一种写法,而且不止一次。 Finally is, throws the street to the relatives and friends and schoolmates asked oneself wrote anything time, he disclosed embarrassed. 结果就是,扑街到亲友和同学问自己写了什么的时候,他都不好意思透露。 Just as Mr. Lu Xun said that not especially no one approves, and also no one opposes, some are only lonely. 正如鲁迅先生所说,“不特没有人来赞同,并且也还没有人来反对”,有的只是寂寞。 If some people clearly recognized that this bloody cruel reality, still stepped onto this to be disappointed embarrassed lonely, such as the path of snow, can only say that obtained a sought-after object. 如果有人认清这一血淋淋的残酷现实,仍然走上这条困窘潦倒、寂寞如雪的道路,只能说是求仁得仁了。 little Comrade river, chooses a route!” “小江同志,选a路线!” Soars urges the girlfriend in the astrolabe chat channel. 高飞在星盘聊天频道中催促女友。 Un...... No!” “嗯……No!” little Comrade river considered is less than two seconds, chose the B route decisively! 小江同志考虑了不到两秒,果断选择了b路线! Nanie?!! 纳尼?!! Soared was startled immediately dull. 高飞顿时惊了个呆。 This with the difference of initially reaching an agreement?! 这跟当初说好的不一样啊?! You should not be the hand will shake, how to choose the B route?” “你该不会是手抖了吧,怎么选了b路线?” I like the B route, refreshed simply!” “我喜欢b路线,爽快干脆!” But the sentimental line of B route very bored......” “可是b路线的感情线很无聊的啊……” What is bored? Is simply warm and happy, this is the sentimental line that I want, you put in order so many intense rivalries, the analysis and synthesis, love-hate, is intertwining of any reason and emotion paces back and forth, I light/only am think to feel the stomach to hurt, let alone acted personally!” river Feng resentful complaining. “什么叫无聊?简单温馨又甜蜜,这才是我想要的感情线,你整出那么多恩怨情仇,分分合合,爱恨交织,又是啥理智与情感的纠结彷徨,我光是想一想就觉得胃疼,就别说亲自去扮演了!”江枫悻悻的吐槽。 How can you like this?” Soars is not good, dear, you who puts in great inconvenience is a beginning to be interested in the opposite sex young girl! Your perception? You rich exquisite and sensitive frail inner world? Your desire resists also to welcome, does your act with constraint under the fiery fervor with proud tender camouflage?” “你怎么能这样?”高飞委屈的不行,“亲爱的,你可是一位情窦初开的少女啊!你的感性呢?你丰富细腻而又敏感脆弱的内心世界呢?你的欲拒还迎,你那矜持与傲娇伪装下的火热激情呢?” These special characteristics, only then can manifest incisively in a route!” “这些特质只有在a路线才能淋漓尽致的体现出来!” Now you give up a route suddenly, I took so many pains, all did not waste!” “现在你突然放弃a路线,我花了那么多心血,不就全都白费了!” Hey! You said what is at sixes and sevens?” “噫!你说的都是些啥乱七八糟的?” river Nvxia rubbed the nose, a face bold horizontal. 江女侠揉了揉鼻子,一脸豪横。 „We are a simple countryside big little girl, do not put in order these discard head close to brains!” “咱就是一朴实的乡下大妞,你别整那些虚头巴脑的!” What nonsense perception is exquisite, we do not have that type of bored thing, hurries to run the plot, tonight we must eat well !” “什么狗屁感性细腻,咱没那种无聊的东西,赶紧跑完剧情,今晚咱们得吃点儿好哒!” Really has your!” “真有你的!” Soars not to know whether to laugh or cry, deeply feels itself to have a bad husband, how to hand over one......, the girlfriend of splashing ink style. 高飞哭笑不得,深感自己遇人不淑,怎么就交了一个……嗯,泼墨画风的女朋友。 Finished private chats, river Feng took up on the table that letter/believes, showed a faint smile, turns head to look to actor Rogge Wayne who soaring to act, asked something already known: 结束私聊,江枫拿起桌上那封信,微微一笑,扭头望向高飞扮演的男主角罗格・韦恩,明知故问: Mr. Wayne, this letter/believes does write to Louise Kuehn?” “韦恩先生,这封信是不是写给路易斯・奎恩的?” Mr. Kuehn is my pen pal , you have the same surname, the name also look like very much.” “奎恩先生是我的笔友,说来凑巧,你們有相同的姓氏,名字也很像。” Soars makes the upholstery for the following plot development. 高飞为接下来的剧情发展做出铺垫。 Brothers, the same surname of the same name is very common, let alone the sexes of two people are completely more different.” Martin said with something else in mind. “兄弟,同名同姓是很常见的,更何况两个人的性别完全不同。”马丁不以为然的说。 However I have not personally seen Kuehn, does not dare saying that he certainly is a man.” Soars to start to speak but hesitate. “然而我又没亲眼见过奎恩,可不敢说他一定就是男人。”高飞欲言又止。 In fact, your pen pal indeed is not a man. Works as two people surface, river Feng is rebating that letter/believes, forces in own coat pocket conveniently, „ Mr. Wayne, this letter/believes you not to need to deliver, gives me to be good directly, needs me to receive and sign for?” “事实上,您的笔友的确不是男人。当着两人的面,江枫把那封信对折,随手塞进自己的上衣口袋,“韦恩先生,这封信您不用投递,直接给我就行,需要我签收吗?” „? This...... you with Louise Kuehn who Rogge does communicate?” “啊?这……难道您就是跟罗格通信的路易斯・奎恩?” Martin in great surprise, the whole face does not dare to believe. 马丁大惊,满脸不敢置信。 God, this was really inconceivable!” Soars is also disguising the shock, you are not only the aristocrat young lady, is the hero robs black cat woman, is my pen pal...... unbelievable, so many coincidences centralized in your!” “神啊,这真是太不可思议了!”高飞也在假装震惊,“您既是贵族小姐,也是侠盗‘黑猫女士’,还是我的笔友……难以置信,这么多巧合都集中在了你一人身上!” I was extremely sorry, Mr. Wayne, has hidden oneself real identity to you before, hopes that you can forgive me.” “我非常抱歉,韦恩先生,之前一直向您隐瞒自己的真实身份,希望你能原谅我。” Perhaps I have to forgive you.” Soars the forced smile, in the past few days in Deborah family/home, you helped I and Martin went out of mourning, has paid in advance my understanding, I must mean what he says, is right?” “恐怕我不得不原谅您。”高飞苦笑,“前些天在德伯家,你帮我和马丁除灵的时候,就已经预支了我的谅解,我总不能说话不算数,对不对?” Kiss, clicks, to the high praise, the score jumps over Gauguin to be newly quicker, it is said gave the perfect score newly finally found the pretty wife! 亲,点击进去,给个好评呗,分数越高更新越快,据说给新打满分的最后都找到了漂亮的老婆哦! 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