RINAPE :: Volume #4

#321: Two good songs

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Li Mu takes the guitar the room that works from oneself to come out, Su Yingxue has been waiting in the sofa upper extreme. 李牧拿着吉他从自己工作的房间里出来,苏映雪已经在沙发上端坐等着了。 Li Mu writing «Fleet of Time» and a4 paper of «You Exist in My Song» lyrics gives her, said: „This is two songs lyrics, you first have a look, to look to give an appraisal.” 李牧把写着《匆匆那年》以及《我的歌声里》歌词的a4纸递给她,说:“这是两首歌的歌词,你先看看,看完给个评价。” Su Yingxue received the lyrics itself/Ben, the looks at Li Mu illegibly actually very attractive typeface, the lyrics that first leaps forward the view are «You Exist in My Song». 苏映雪接过歌词本,看着李牧略带潦草却又偏偏很好看的字体,第一个跃入眼帘的歌词是《我的歌声里》。 „Does not have the little protection, no worry......” “没有一点点防备,也没有一丝顾虑……” Su Yingxue with meditating the way reads this song lyrics, savored carefully the moment, said with a laugh said: „looks at is very good, only reads the lyrics the words, the feeling is very affectionate.” 苏映雪用默念的方式看完这首歌的歌词,仔细品味了片刻,笑着说道:“看着很不错,只看歌词的话,感觉还是很深情的。” Li Mu nods, says with a smile: „You have a look at next again.” 李牧点了点头,笑道:“你再看看下一首。” Next is «Fleet of Time», if «You Exist in My Song» is an outstanding high-school student thesis, then «Fleet of Time» can be the Grandmaster Level good article, the disparity of both lyrics looks like in Li Mu, the middle at least is also away from two Wang Feng. 下一首是《匆匆那年》,如果说《我的歌声里》是一篇优秀的高中生作文,那么《匆匆那年》可以算得上是大师级的好文章了,两者歌词的差距在李牧看来,中间至少还隔着两个汪锋。 To Su Yingxue, «You Exist in My Song» truly good, but has not been truly outstandingly, compared with Li Mu that three ballad works, the lyrics of this song even felt that has to dehydrate, with that three songs at all not in a level line, but thinks this was to the song that a girl wrote, Su Yingxue also feels relaxed. 对苏映雪来说,《我的歌声里》确实不错,但还算不上真正优秀,比起李牧那三首民谣作品,这首歌的歌词甚至感觉有失水准,和那三首歌根本不在一个水平线上,但一想到这是给一个女孩子写的歌曲,苏映雪也就释然了。 However looks at next again, " Fleet of Time » four characters make the Su Yingxue eyelash tremble, when sees these four characters, she seemed to have guessed correctly that ahead of time this word direction, should be fondly remembers the passing song. 不过再看下一首,《匆匆那年》四个字让苏映雪睫毛一颤,在看到这四个字的时候,她似乎就已经提前猜到这首词的方向,应该是一首怀念过往的歌曲。 Carefully read the main text of lyrics, Su Yingxue is attracted quickly thoroughly, more looked downward, looked more invests, but the expression was also more surprised. 仔细看歌词的正文,苏映雪很快就被彻底吸引了进去,越往下看,就看得越投入,而表情也就越惊讶。 This word although is not the Lin Xi most first-class work, but cannot cover its own luminous as before, fondly remembering is in itself a mood, but this song lyrics excellent contrasts this special mood, meanwhile will make one start to expect the future, anticipated „, if will say goodbye cannot get angry, whether can also blush”, anticipated that „will have a deficit mutually, old feelings remain after a severed relationship”. 这首词虽然算不上是林夕最一流的作品,但依旧不能掩盖它自身的光亮,怀念本身就是一种情怀,而这首歌的歌词绝佳的烘托出这种特殊的情怀,同时还让人开始期待将来,期待“如果再见不能红着眼,是否还能红着脸”,期待“相互亏欠、藕断丝连”。 Su Yingxue reads this lyrics, recombination Li Mu to oneself have read the 《Old Boy》 script, in the script pictures launch in the brain, are matching this lyrics, not consciousness some want to flow the impulsion of tears unexpectedly. 苏映雪看完这首歌词,再结合李牧给自己看过的《老男孩》的剧本,剧本里一幅幅画面在脑中展开,搭配着这首歌词,竟然不知觉有些想流眼泪的冲动。 The entire first lyrics looked repeatedly several, Su Yingxue raised the head, looks at Li Mu said: „This lyrics really wrote are good, I must first listen to you to sing this......” 整首歌词反复看了好几遍,苏映雪才抬起头来,看着李牧说道:“这首歌词写得实在是太好了,我要先听你唱这一首……” Li Mu with the way of falling tone, sang this classical song with the slightly low and deep tonality, opened the throat, Su Yingxue is lived by this fan, in the hand takes the lyrics, listens playing an instrument and singing that Li Mu is distracted, fell in love with this «Fleet of Time» instantaneously. 李牧用降调的方式,以略微低沉的音调唱起这首经典歌曲,一开嗓,苏映雪就被这首歌迷住了,手里拿着歌词,听着李牧走心的弹唱,瞬间就爱上了这首《匆匆那年》。 Meanwhile, Su Yingxue similarly is the talent that Li Mu demonstrates surprised, he can always bring the different pleasant surprises to himself, every makes one have to plant one time knew his feeling, but works as the opposite party is Boyfriend, this surprised are more is passing the pleasant surprise of having mind filled with. 与此同时,苏映雪同样为李牧所展现出来的才华所惊讶,他总是能给自己带来不一样的惊喜,每一次都让人有种重新认识他的感觉,而当对方又是自己男朋友的时候,这种惊讶则更多是透着满腹的惊喜。 Li Mu sang, Su Yingxue has invested into the eye socket flood red, woman relative man originally perception, therefore the lyrics of «Fleet of Time» this song, can go directly to the heart to the woman. 李牧一曲唱完,苏映雪已经投入到眼眶泛红,女人相对男人本来就更加感性,所以《匆匆那年》这首歌的歌词,对女人来说也就更能直达心底。 Afterward, Li Mu also sang «You Exist in My Song», singing of this song was once high, in some time is absolute Divine Song, connotation although slightly is also short, but the melody is really catchy, therefore after Su Yingxue hears this song the melody, compared with only read the lyrics to the overall impression of this song is much higher, the song made up for unspecific of lyrics to a certain extent, good realized supplementarily. 随后,李牧又唱起了《我的歌声里》,这首歌的传唱度曾经非常高,在某一个时间段也算是绝对的神曲,内涵虽然略有欠缺,但旋律实在是朗朗上口,所以苏映雪听到这首歌的旋律之后,对这首歌的整体印象要比只看歌词高出不少,曲子在一定程度上弥补了歌词的空泛,良好的实现了互补。 Listens to these two songs, Su Yingxue to feel oneself had been conquered by the Li Mu's talent thoroughly, wants to come also to feel lucky for oneself, didn't expect, own Boyfriend unexpectedly is so outstanding and outstanding. 听完这两首歌,苏映雪感觉自己已经被李牧的才华彻底征服,想来也为自己感到幸运,怎么也没想到,自己的男朋友竟是这般优秀、出众。 Su Yingxue said: „These two songs are good, if Du Wei really has a good throat, these two songs meet the fire to spread the nation.” 苏映雪说:“这两首歌都非常不错,如果杜薇真的有一副好嗓子,这两首歌一定会火遍全国的。” Li Mu asked her: „You thought that which song should choose to make the interlude of movie?” 李牧问她:“你觉得应该选择哪首歌做电影的插曲？” Su Yingxue almost saying without hesitation: „I choose «Fleet of Time», the although «You Exist in My Song» lyrics melody also does for the occasion very much, but it intrinsic truly does not have Fleet of Time this song to have the impulse, if makes the movie song with this song, to that role that Du Wei plays is also an excellent promotion.” 苏映雪几乎不假思索的说道:“我选择《匆匆那年》,虽然《我的歌声里》歌词曲调也很应景,但它内在确实没有匆匆那年这首歌有冲击力,如果用这首歌做电影插曲,对杜薇扮演的那个角色也是一个极好的促进。” Li Mu nods, says with a smile: „That decides this song to make the interlude of movie, hopes that Du Wei thinks with you are same.” 李牧点点头,笑道:“那就定这首歌做电影的插曲吧,希望杜薇跟你想的一样。” Saying, Li Mu stands up, said to Su Yingxue: „You first wait for my a while, I must issue a friend these two songs lyrics, making him retransmit gives the Du Wei elder sister.” 说着,李牧站起身来,对苏映雪说道:“你先等我一会儿,我得把这两首歌的歌词发给一个朋友,让他转发给杜薇的姐姐。” Li Mu issued Chen Ze with the mail the lyrics of two songs, then sent a message to Chen Ze, told him the lyrics to send, Chen Ze returns to ok immediately, then turned on the computer to search and collect the mail on hastily, the lyrics of two songs he first opened looked, he did not understand the lyrics, but the looks at two lyrics also very looked like that a matter, therefore then gave Du Fei the lyrics repeater, gave Du Fei to make a phone call. 李牧把两首歌的歌词用邮件发给了陈泽,然后给陈泽发了条短信,告诉他歌词已经发过去了,陈泽立刻回了一个ok,然后就急忙打开电脑查收邮件,两首歌的歌词他先打开看了一下,他不太懂歌词,不过看着两首歌词还都挺像那么回事的,于是便把歌词转发给了杜菲,紧接着就给杜菲打了一个电话。 Du Fei of other side of the ocean in the morning time, is receiving the Chen Ze call, to hear that the lyrics have sent, immediately then opens the mailbox examination, after looking, the surprised half of the day grins with ear to ear. 大洋彼岸的杜菲正在上午时间,接到陈泽的电话、听说歌词已经发过来,立刻便打开邮箱查看,看完之后,惊讶的半天合不拢嘴。 Du Fei is the literary youth, what although study is the design, but is very fond of the literature and music, itself has the good literary attainments, when sees these two lyrics, her feeling is similar to Su Yingxue, to «You Exist in My Song» this lyrics can outstanding, but to «Fleet of Time», almost can give one excellent. 杜菲是个文艺青年,虽然学的是设计,但酷爱文学与音乐,本身就有不错的文学造诣,所以当看到这两首歌词的时候,她的感觉跟苏映雪差不多,对《我的歌声里》这首歌词能给一个优秀,而对《匆匆那年》,几乎可以给一个绝佳了。 After looking, her attention almost completely centralized on «Fleet of Time» this song, such good lyrics, if joined to the good song again, is simply invincible. 看完之后,她的注意力几乎全部集中在《匆匆那年》这首歌上,这么棒的一首歌词,如果再配上好的曲子,简直无敌。 Du Fei is westernized very serious young people, the music or the literature, are the religion and building esthetics, in her, favors the Western style, to the words music, she rarely listens, moreover can be truly likes, is very few, if by the song writer of Chinese musical world, she only admires two people, one is Lin Xi, one is Huang Zhan, the Lin Xi word is exquisite, tender feelings and sentimental, can only depend on a few words words to be with flowing tears the sentiment to the deep place ; But Huang Zhan is majestic, several words outlined the great boundless air/Qi field and demeanor, bold. 杜菲本身是一个西化非常严重的年轻人,无论是音乐还是文学,还是宗教与建筑美学,在她心里,都更倾向于西方风格,对话语音乐,她本身就很少去听,而且真正能算得上喜欢的,也是少之又少,如果论华语乐坛的词作者,她唯佩服两个人,一个是林夕,一个是黄霑,林夕的词细腻、柔情、缠绵悱恻,情到深处能够仅凭一两句话就让人潸然泪下;而黄霑则是大气磅礴,几句词勾勒出宏大磅礴的气场与风度,豪放至极。 But at present this «Fleet of Time», has Lin Xi to write the word the style, although does not compare the work of Lin Xi peak level, for example «Red bean», but can also be on par with Lin Xi most works absolutely. 而眼前这首《匆匆那年》,颇有林夕写词的风格,虽然比不上林夕巅峰级的作品,例如《红豆》,但也绝对能够和林夕大部分的作品相比肩。 What makes her surprised is, this lyrics, stem from less than 20-year-old young people unexpectedly, this made people feel inconceivable, can the youngster who that wrote the 《Old Boy》 convention script, really write such a good word?( To be continued.) 更让她惊讶的是,这首歌词,竟然是出自一个不足20岁的年轻人,这就太让人感觉不可思议了,那个写《老男孩》俗套剧本的少年,真的能写出这么好的一首词来？(未完待续。)
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