PS :: Volume #4

#379: A little improvement


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The gentle breeze smokes the willow tree, the flower fragrance intoxicant, the southern China spring scenery inundates the rotten season. 和风熏柳,花香醉人,正是南国春光漫烂季节。 Fuzhou mansion Ximen Avenue, the green slat road straight extension, goes nonstop to the west gate. 福州府西门大街,青石板路笔直的伸展出去,直通西门。 Before a construction grand high official's residence, about in two bedstone altars/jars various vertical stroke one two zhang (3.33 m) come the high flagpole, the mast top fluttering azure flag. On the right hand side flag the yellow silk thread is embroidering a lion that makes threatening gestures, the manner overwhelming power, the flag flutters with the wind, appears lion Yi Yi, if lives... 一座建构宏伟的宅第之前,左右两座石坛中各竖一根两丈来高的旗杆,杆顶飘扬青旗。右首旗上黄色丝线绣着一头张牙舞爪、神态威猛的雄狮,旗子随风招展,显得雄狮更奕奕若生... In the Wang Pu routine place cigarette, the vision chased the line to sweep in the writing that in the screen demonstrated. 王浦习惯性地点上了一根烟,目光在屏幕里显示的文字上逐行扫过。 Was different from was used to the net article reader of rapid reader, often read thin, the introduction of new book can look particularly very earnestly. 不同于很多习惯了一目十行的网文读者,往往都看得很细,尤其是新书的开篇都会看得很认真。 Because he thinks that the introduction can manifest a skill of author, if the introduction is good enough, that has the confidence to pursue to read, if front on the incomprehensible nonsense, that does not absolutely need to waste the time. 因为他认为开篇很能体现一位作者的功力,如果开篇足够好,那就有信心一直追读下去,如果前面就狗屁不通,那就根本没有必要浪费时间了。 This is also old white was sorrowful, if little white reader that does not care, appetite good what/anything to eat. 这也算是老白的悲哀了,如果是小白读者那根本不在乎,胃口好什么都能吃。 Also is different from has superiority feeling old white, Wang Pu will not taunt to little white reader, because old white came from little white, he instead must envy the book that latter some can read. 也不同于很多有优越感的老白,王浦不会对小白读者冷嘲热讽,因为老白本身就是从小白过来的,他反而要羡慕后者有的是能看的书。 If no support of lots of little white reader, the net article will not develop today's scale. 而且如果没有大量小白读者的支持,网文也不会发展到今天的规模。 This «The Smiling, Proud Wanderer» introduction, is very good to the feeling of Wang Pu, has not extinguished the day to destroy passes through the rebirth to open hangs the repertoire that gold/metal points, does not seem like very traditional that style, the style splendid writing can make an arrest. 这本《笑傲江湖》的开篇,给王浦的感觉很不错,没有灭天毁地穿越重生开挂加金手指的套路,也不像是很传统的那种风格,文笔出色文字能抓人。 The most important thing is, basically does not have the erroneous character. 最重要的是,基本上没有错别字。 This makes Wang Pu feel very comfortable, making him have the reason to continue to read. 这让王浦感觉很舒服,让他有理由继续阅读下去。 But with deepening of gradually reading, Wang Pu discovered in the book described rivers and lakes, gave his feeling to be very fresh, although does not have any dynasty background, is completely different the empire dynasty in present popular Xuanhuan novel, had to plant the feeling of reading the unofficial history vernacular novel. 而随着阅读的渐渐深入,王浦发现书中所描写出的“江湖”,给他的感觉很新鲜,虽然没有任何的朝代背景,却完全不同于时下流行的玄幻小说里的帝国王朝,有种看野史白话小说的感觉。 Wang Pu was attracted, mood with story leading character forest draw but experience fluctuate, in big brother Linghu until the small nun meter Lin mouth appearance. 不知不觉间,王浦就被吸引进去了,心情随着故事主人公林平之的经历而起起伏伏,直到小尼姑仪琳口中“令狐大哥”的出现。 This style is not right! 这画风不对啊! This very long side stated that showed one to have lifelike has the chivalrous person image of stratagem bravely, exciting was makes one thump the table and shout praise, just like the protagonist style. 这段很长的旁述,栩栩如生地展现出了一位有勇有谋的侠士形象,扣人心弦更是让人不禁拍案叫绝,活脱脱就是主角风范。 In comparison, the front leading character forest draw really differed is too far! 相比之下,前面的主人公林平之真的就相差太远了! The supporting roles lose face/show off compared with the protagonist, that is the taboo! 配角远比主角出彩,那可是大忌啊! Wang Pu is worried, does not know how the following plot can be, while he sees the itchy place, actually discovered that startled behind did not have. 王浦不由地担心起来,不知道后面的情节会是如何,然而正当他看到痒处,却愕然发现后面没有了。 Didn't have? How can not have? 没有了?怎么能没有了呢? Has not renewed. 还没有更新而已。 F*ck!” 卧槽!” Wang Pu cannot bear scold to make noise, finally holds in the mouth the long cigarette ash to fall together in the cigarette butt of mouth, happen to falls on his pants. 王浦忍不住骂出声来,结果叼在嘴里的烟头连带着长长的烟灰一起掉落下来,正好掉在他的裤子上。 F*ck! F*ck!” 卧槽卧槽!” Wang Pu was thrown into confusion whipped several, the cigarette butt has extinguished luckily, has not been burning his pants. 王浦手忙脚乱地拍打了几下,幸好烟头早已熄灭了,没有把他的裤子烫着。 What are you looking at? Such excited?” “你在看什么呢?这么激动?” Sits in the next door big god has poked head, inquired curiously. 坐在隔壁的“大神”探过头来,好奇地询问道。 Wang Pu shook the pants, said with a smile: Is the novel that the really big god writes, do you want to look?” 王浦抖了抖裤子,笑着说道:“是位真大神写的小说,你要不要看?” Big god shrugs, appearance that an interest lacks- he only likes playing the game. “大神”耸了耸肩,一副兴致缺缺的模样-他只喜欢玩游戏。 Looked that the novel does not have the meaning, plays this «Immortal Demon» with me together, is very fun, I lead you!” “看小说多没意思啊,跟我一起玩这个《仙魔》吧,很好玩的,我带你!” Wang Pu despised swept his screen one eyes, said: Is this cheating out of money free web, I was not swindled, without so many energy.” 王浦鄙夷地扫了他的屏幕一眼,说道:“又是这种骗钱的免费网游,我才不上当呢,也没有那么多精力。” Before Wang Pu, how many online games has played, was known as that free in fact not the goods that spends unable to play, he does not depend to play the game to make money like big god, where has the time and energy looks oppressively? 王浦以前玩过几款网络游戏,都是号称免费实际上不花钱根本玩不下去的货色,他又不像“大神”这样靠玩游戏赚钱,哪有时间和精力来找虐? Wang Pu has not paid attention to big god again, he will pay attention to return to this new book, said in its commentary area message: Good book, to refuel the renewal, after the on the shelf, certainly all subscribes!” 王浦没有再理睬“大神”,他将注意放回到这本新书上,在其评论区留言道:“好书,加油更新,上架之后一定全订!” He thinks, clenched teeth to select hitting of 588 studying coins to enjoy! 他想了想,一咬牙点了个588读书币的打赏! Although this studying coin few money, but regarding Wang Pu this old white reader, is is not very really easy, his family circumstances are ordinary, works to remit money in Jiangcheng every month. 虽然这点读书币没有几个钱,但是对于王浦这位老白读者来说,真的算是很不容易了,他的家境普普通通,在江城打工每个月都要寄钱回去的。 The genuine all subscribed is Wang Pu biggest supported to the author, usually basically rarely hit to enjoy, only if were the work that bumped into likes truly. 正版全订就是王浦对作者最大的支持了,平常基本上很少打赏,除非是碰到真正喜欢的作品。 This «The Smiling, Proud Wanderer» front tens of thousands characters, he likes very much. 这本《笑傲江湖》前面几万字,他很喜欢。 Besides the message hits to enjoy, Wang Pu also runs up to the group to sell: The «The Smiling, Proud Wanderer» that old bookworm recommends really good, individual grain and fodder appraisal, with recommendation!” 除了留言打赏之外,王浦还跑到群里去推销:“老书虫推荐的这本《笑傲江湖》真不错,个人粮草评价,同推荐!” A group response is quick. 群员们的回应很快。 To the link, I takes a look, does not come back to pat old king attractively!” “给个链接,俺去瞅瞅,不好看回来拍死老王!” I looked a moment ago, is good, feels the style obvious deviation entity publication.” “我刚才看了,是挺不错的,感觉风格明显偏向实体出版.” This theme I do not like, front looked at a point to abandon.” “这个题材我不喜欢,前面看了一点就弃了。” little white is big white, was traditional, I did not like very much.” “小白是不小白,过于传统了点,我也不是很喜欢。” I favor this book very much competent, the author!” “我很看好这本书,作者有实力!” With recommendation...” “同推荐...” Because in the group previously the recommendation of old bookworm has looked at this «The Smiling, Proud Wanderer» person are many, some like some not liking, but overall the positive opinion crushed negative. 群里面先前因为老书虫的推荐看过这本《笑傲江湖》的人不少,有的喜欢有的不喜欢,但整体来说正面评价压倒了负面。 Regarding the old white readers of difficult accent, this is is not very easy! 对于众口难调的老白读者们来说,这已经是很不容易了! Wang Pu is unsatisfied, he thinks that this book should vigorously support is right, therefore runs up to other reader groups, in the studying forum, recommends this book to other book friend. 王浦却不满意,他认为这本书应该大力支持才对,于是又跑到其它的读者群,还有读书论坛里,向别的书友推荐这本书。 «In The Smiling, Proud Wanderer» in the tide studies the data to be very dreary, 60,000-70,000 characters have not signed, was Editor was definitely mistaken, Wang Pu does not want to make a good book be buried. 笑傲江湖》在浪潮读书里的数据很惨淡,60,000-70,000字都没签约,肯定是编辑看走眼了,王浦不想让一本好书就此被埋没。 The competent author , because front the result not good to be attacked dejected gives up, Wang Pu does not want to see this named Recalling Ancient Times the author also suffers the similar fate. 很多有实力的作者,就是因为前面成绩不好被打击得心灰意冷而放弃的,王浦不想看到这位叫做“忆今古”的作者也遭遇到同样的命运。 He even wants to urge the opposite party to trade a book to stand a round of book- the east side not bright west side is bright! 他甚至想劝对方换个书站发书-东边不亮西边亮嘛! But under the effort recommendation of Wang Pu, The Smiling, Proud Wanderer » in the tide studied the data to have the obvious growth, clicked, recommends and collects simultaneous/uniform simultaneous/uniform climb high, particularly collected, rose from dozens to more than 200 rapidly. 而就在王浦的努力推荐下,笑傲江湖》在浪潮读书里的数据有了明显的增长,点击、推荐和收藏齐齐攀高,尤其是收藏,迅速从几十个上涨到两百多。 Corresponds, the commentary in book review area were also many, several readers gave hit to enjoy the support. 相对应的,在书评区里的评论也多了起来,好几位读者都给予了打赏支持。 Although compares the popular new book in website, this result is insignificant, but compared with the previous gloom, without doubt a little flavor of after the bitter comes the sweet. 虽然相比网站里的热门新书,这点成绩微不足道,但比起先前的惨淡,无疑有点苦尽甘来的味道。 Lu Chen at this moment, has not tasted this flavor, he was arriving at a Jinling local stage and screen with Chen Fei'er together secretly, watches the first movie that oneself participate performance. 只是此时此刻的陆晨,还没有尝到这种味道,他正跟陈菲儿一起偷偷来到了金陵本地的一家影剧,观看自己参演的第一部电影。 The name of this movie is called- Emperor Wu of Han. 这部电影的名字叫做-大汉武帝。 ------------------ ------------------ Second delivers, seeking the subscription to support!! 第二更送上,求订阅支持!! Note: Partial content selection from Jin Yong's «The Smiling, Proud Wanderer», moreover explained that copying from a book built the IP plan and racket film and television play to serve for the protagonist, will therefore not consume too many words in this above, everyone did not need to worry that this book turned into the copying from a book class/flow.( To be continued.) 注:部分内容节选自金庸的《笑傲江湖》,另外解释一下,抄书是为了主角打造IP计划、拍影视剧服务的,所以不会在这上面耗费太多的笔墨,大家不用担心本书变成抄书流。(未完待续。)
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