The gentle breezesmokes the willow tree, the flower fragranceintoxicant, the southern Chinaspring sceneryinundates the rottenseason.
和风熏柳,花香醉人,正是南国春光漫烂季节。FuzhoumansionXimen Avenue, the green slatroadstraightextension, goes nonstop to the west gate.
福州府西门大街,青石板路笔直的伸展出去,直通西门。
Before a constructiongrandhigh official's residence, aboutintwobedstonealtars/jarsvariousvertical strokeonetwozhang (3.33 m)come the highflagpole, the mast topflutteringazureflag. On the right hand sideflag the yellowsilk threadis embroidering a lion that makes threatening gestures, the manneroverwhelming power, the flagflutterswith the wind, appearslionYiYi, iflives...
一座建构宏伟的宅第之前,左右两座石坛中各竖一根两丈来高的旗杆,杆顶飘扬青旗。右首旗上黄色丝线绣着一头张牙舞爪、神态威猛的雄狮,旗子随风招展,显得雄狮更奕奕若生...In the Wang Puroutineplacecigarette, the visionchased the lineto sweepin the writing that in the screendemonstrated.王浦习惯性地点上了一根烟,目光在屏幕里显示的文字上逐行扫过。Was differentfromwas used to the netarticlereader of rapid reader, oftenreadthin, the introduction of new bookcanlookparticularlyveryearnestly.
不同于很多习惯了一目十行的网文读者,往往都看得很细,尤其是新书的开篇都会看得很认真。Becausehethinks that the introductioncanmanifest a skill of author, if the introductionis goodenough, thathas the confidenceto pursueto read, iffronton the incomprehensible nonsense, thatdoes not absolutely needto waste the time.
因为他认为开篇很能体现一位作者的功力,如果开篇足够好,那就有信心一直追读下去,如果前面就狗屁不通,那就根本没有必要浪费时间了。This is also oldwhitewas sorrowful, if littlewhitereaderthatdoes not care, appetitegoodwhat/anything to eat.
这也算是老白的悲哀了,如果是小白读者那根本不在乎,胃口好什么都能吃。Alsois differentfromhassuperiority feelingoldwhite, Wang Puwill not taunttolittlewhitereader, becauseoldwhite came from littlewhite, heinsteadmustenvy the book that lattersomecanread.
也不同于很多有优越感的老白,王浦不会对小白读者冷嘲热讽,因为老白本身就是从小白过来的,他反而要羡慕后者有的是能看的书。
If no support of lots oflittlewhitereader, the netarticlewill not developtoday'sscale.
而且如果没有大量小白读者的支持,网文也不会发展到今天的规模。This«The Smiling, Proud Wanderer»introduction, is very goodto the feeling of Wang Pu, has not extinguished the dayto destroypasses through the rebirthto openhangs the repertoire that gold/metalpoints, does not seem like very traditionalthatstyle, the stylesplendidwritingcanmake an arrest.
这本《笑傲江湖》的开篇,给王浦的感觉很不错,没有灭天毁地穿越重生开挂加金手指的套路,也不像是很传统的那种风格,文笔出色文字能抓人。The most important thing is, basicallydoes not have the erroneous character.
最重要的是,基本上没有错别字。ThismakesWang Pu feel very comfortable, makinghimhave the reasonto continueto read.
这让王浦感觉很舒服,让他有理由继续阅读下去。Butwithdeepening of graduallyreading, Wang Pudiscoveredin the bookdescribed„rivers and lakes”, gavehisfeelingto be very fresh, althoughdoes not have anydynastybackground, is completely different the empiredynastyinpresentpopularXuanhuannovel, hadto plant the feeling of reading the unofficial historyvernacularnovel.
而随着阅读的渐渐深入,王浦发现书中所描写出的“江湖”,给他的感觉很新鲜,虽然没有任何的朝代背景,却完全不同于时下流行的玄幻小说里的帝国王朝,有种看野史白话小说的感觉。Wang Puwas attracted, moodwithstoryleading characterforestdrawbutexperiencefluctuate, in„big brotherLinghu”until the smallnunmeterLinmouthappearance.
不知不觉间,王浦就被吸引进去了,心情随着故事主人公林平之的经历而起起伏伏,直到小尼姑仪琳口中“令狐大哥”的出现。Thisstyleis not right!
这画风不对啊!Thisverylongside stated that showedoneto havelifelikehas the chivalrous personimage of stratagembravely, excitingwas makes one thump the table and shout praise, just like the protagoniststyle.
这段很长的旁述,栩栩如生地展现出了一位有勇有谋的侠士形象,扣人心弦更是让人不禁拍案叫绝,活脱脱就是主角风范。In comparison, the frontleading characterforestdrawreallydifferedis too far!
相比之下,前面的主人公林平之真的就相差太远了!
The supporting roleslose face/show offcompared with the protagonist, thatis the taboo!
配角远比主角出彩,那可是大忌啊!Wang Puis worried,does not knowhow the followingplotcanbe, whilehesees the itchyplace, actuallydiscovered that startled behind did not have.王浦不由地担心起来,不知道后面的情节会是如何,然而正当他看到痒处,却愕然发现后面没有了。Didn't have? Howcannot have?
没有了?怎么能没有了呢?Has not renewed.
还没有更新而已。„F*ck!”
“卧槽!”Wang Pucannot bearscoldto make noise, finallyholds in the mouth the longcigarette ashto falltogetherin the cigarette butt of mouth, happen tofallsonhispants.王浦忍不住骂出声来,结果叼在嘴里的烟头连带着长长的烟灰一起掉落下来,正好掉在他的裤子上。„F*ck! F*ck!”
“卧槽!卧槽!”Wang Puwas thrown into confusionwhippedseveral, the cigarette butthas extinguishedluckily, has not been burninghispants.王浦手忙脚乱地拍打了几下,幸好烟头早已熄灭了,没有把他的裤子烫着。„What are youlooking at? Suchexcited?”
“你在看什么呢?这么激动?”Sitsin the next door„biggod”has poked head, inquiredcuriously.
坐在隔壁的“大神”探过头来,好奇地询问道。Wang Pushook the pants, saidwith a smile: „Is the novel that the reallybiggodwrites, do youwantto look?”王浦抖了抖裤子,笑着说道:“是位真大神写的小说,你要不要看?”„Biggod”shrugs, appearance that an interestlacks- heonlylikesplaying the game.
“大神”耸了耸肩,一副兴致缺缺的模样-他只喜欢玩游戏。„Looked that the noveldoes not have the meaning, playsthis«ImmortalDemon»withmetogether, is very fun, Ileadyou!”
“看小说多没意思啊,跟我一起玩这个《仙魔》吧,很好玩的,我带你!”Wang Pudespisedswepthisscreenoneeyes, said: „Isthischeating out of moneyfreeweb, Iwas not swindled, withoutso manyenergy.”王浦鄙夷地扫了他的屏幕一眼,说道:“又是这种骗钱的免费网游,我才不上当呢,也没有那么多精力。”
Before Wang Pu, how manyonline gameshas played, was known as that freein factnot the goods that spends unable to play, hedoes not dependto play the gameto make moneylike„biggod”, wherehas the time and energylooksoppressively?王浦以前玩过几款网络游戏,都是号称免费实际上不花钱根本玩不下去的货色,他又不像“大神”这样靠玩游戏赚钱,哪有时间和精力来找虐?Wang Puhas not paid attention to„biggod”again, hewill pay attentionto returntothisnew book, saidinitscommentaryareamessage: „Goodbook, to refuel the renewal, after the on the shelf, certainlyallsubscribes!”王浦没有再理睬“大神”,他将注意放回到这本新书上,在其评论区留言道:“好书,加油更新,上架之后一定全订!”Hethinks,clenched teethto selecthitting of 588studyingcoinsto enjoy!
他想了想,一咬牙点了个588读书币的打赏!Althoughthisstudyingcoinfewmoney, butregardingWang Puthisoldwhitereader, is is not very really easy, hisfamily circumstancesare ordinary, works to remit moneyinJiangchengevery month.
虽然这点读书币没有几个钱,但是对于王浦这位老白读者来说,真的算是很不容易了,他的家境普普通通,在江城打工每个月都要寄钱回去的。
The genuineallsubscribedisWang Pubiggestsupportedto the author, usuallybasicallyrarelyhitto enjoy, only ifwere the work that bumped intolikestruly.
正版全订就是王浦对作者最大的支持了,平常基本上很少打赏,除非是碰到真正喜欢的作品。This«The Smiling, Proud Wanderer»fronttens of thousandscharacters, helikesvery much.
这本《笑傲江湖》前面几万字,他很喜欢。Besides the messagehitsto enjoy, Wang Pualsoruns up to the groupto sell: „The«The Smiling, Proud Wanderer» that oldbookwormrecommendsreallygood, individualgrain and fodderappraisal, withrecommendation!”
除了留言打赏之外,王浦还跑到群里去推销:“老书虫推荐的这本《笑傲江湖》真不错,个人粮草评价,同推荐!”
A groupresponseis quick.
群员们的回应很快。„To the link, Itakes a look, does not come backto patoldkingattractively!”
“给个链接,俺去瞅瞅,不好看回来拍死老王!”„Ilookeda moment ago, is good, feels the styleobviousdeviationentitypublication.”
“我刚才看了,是挺不错的,感觉风格明显偏向实体出版.”„ThisthemeIdo not like, frontlooked at a pointto abandon.”
“这个题材我不喜欢,前面看了一点就弃了。”„littlewhiteisbigwhite, was traditional, Idid not likevery much.”
“小白是不小白,过于传统了点,我也不是很喜欢。”„Ifavorthisbookvery muchcompetent, the author!”
“我很看好这本书,作者有实力!”„Withrecommendation...”
“同推荐...”Becausein the grouppreviously the recommendation of oldbookwormhas looked atthis«The Smiling, Proud Wanderer»personare many, somelikesomenot liking, butoverall the positive opinioncrushednegative.
群里面先前因为老书虫的推荐看过这本《笑傲江湖》的人不少,有的喜欢有的不喜欢,但整体来说正面评价压倒了负面。Regarding the oldwhitereaders of difficultaccent, thisis is not very easy!
对于众口难调的老白读者们来说,这已经是很不容易了!Wang Puis unsatisfied, hethinks that thisbookshouldvigorouslysupportis right, thereforeruns up tootherreadergroups, in the studyingforum, recommendsthisbooktootherbookfriend.王浦却不满意,他认为这本书应该大力支持才对,于是又跑到其它的读者群,还有读书论坛里,向别的书友推荐这本书。«In The Smiling, Proud Wanderer»in the tidestudies the datato be very dreary, 60,000-70,000charactershave not signed, wasEditorwas definitely mistaken, Wang Pudoes not wantto make a goodbookbe buried.
《笑傲江湖》在浪潮读书里的数据很惨淡,60,000-70,000字都没签约,肯定是编辑看走眼了,王浦不想让一本好书就此被埋没。
The competentauthor , because front the result not goodto be attackeddejectedgives up, Wang Pudoes not wantto seethisnamed„Recalling Ancient Times” the authoralsosuffers the similarfate.
很多有实力的作者,就是因为前面成绩不好被打击得心灰意冷而放弃的,王浦不想看到这位叫做“忆今古”的作者也遭遇到同样的命运。Heevenwantsto urge the opposite partyto trade a bookto stand a round of book- the east side not brightwest sideis bright!
他甚至想劝对方换个书站发书-东边不亮西边亮嘛!Butunder the effortrecommendation of Wang Pu, The Smiling, Proud Wanderer » in the tidestudied the datato have the obviousgrowth, clicked, recommendsandcollectssimultaneous/uniformsimultaneous/uniformclimb high, particularlycollected, rosefromdozensto more than 200rapidly.
而就在王浦的努力推荐下,笑傲江湖》在浪潮读书里的数据有了明显的增长,点击、推荐和收藏齐齐攀高,尤其是收藏,迅速从几十个上涨到两百多。Corresponds, the commentaryinbook reviewareawere also many, severalreadersgavehitto enjoy the support.
相对应的,在书评区里的评论也多了起来,好几位读者都给予了打赏支持。Althoughcompares the popularnew book in website, thisresultis insignificant, butcompared with the previousgloom, without doubta little flavor of after the bitter comes the sweet.
虽然相比网站里的热门新书,这点成绩微不足道,但比起先前的惨淡,无疑有点苦尽甘来的味道。Lu Chenat this moment, has not tastedthisflavor, hewas arriving at a Jinlinglocalstage and screenwithChen Fei'ertogethersecretly, watches the firstmovie that oneselfparticipate performance.
只是此时此刻的陆晨,还没有尝到这种味道,他正跟陈菲儿一起偷偷来到了金陵本地的一家影剧,观看自己参演的第一部电影。
The name of thismovieis called- Emperor Wu of Han.
这部电影的名字叫做-大汉武帝。------------------
------------------Seconddelivers, seeking the subscriptionto support!!
第二更送上,求订阅支持!!Note: Partial contentselectionfromJin Yong's«The Smiling, Proud Wanderer», moreover explained that copying from a bookbuilt the IPplan and racketfilm and televisionplayto servefor the protagonist, will therefore not consumetoomanywordsinthisabove, everyonedid not needto worry that thisbookturned into the copying from a bookclass/flow.( To be continued.)
注:部分内容节选自金庸的《笑傲江湖》,另外解释一下,抄书是为了主角打造IP计划、拍影视剧服务的,所以不会在这上面耗费太多的笔墨,大家不用担心本书变成抄书流。(未完待续。)
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