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#819: The creation reconsiders and renewal notice

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Chapter 819 creates to reconsider and renewal notice 第819章创作反思兼更新通知 ( Is free work words expressing feelings, but system automatic changed into the VIP chapter to me, excused me.) (原本是免费的作品感言,但是系统自动给我换成vip章节了,见谅。) This time work words expressing feelings, create until now innermost thoughts about the author, next month renewal arrangement. 这次的作品感言,是关于作者创作至今的心里话,还有下个月的更新安排。 This book takes my first work, from opening book to the present 170 W character, I have written entire 400 days. 这本书作为我的第一部作品,从开书到现在的170W字,我已经写了整整四百天。 Is but same like the issue that the rookie writer basically must face, I had the mistakes and problems on many writings in the creation of this book on the way, caused this book following pursued subscribes the result is not very ideal. 可是就如同新人写手基本都要面对的问题一样,我在此书的创作途中犯下了许多写作上的错误和毛病,导致此书的后续追订成绩十分不理想。 Because beforehand I the level is limited, definitely is unable to detect own shortcoming. 之前的我由于水平有限,完全无法察觉自己的缺点。 However along with the accumulation of step by step writing number of words, as well as read in the learn/study industry unceasingly all sorts of works of big shot, I realized many reasons of failure in a period of time finally thoroughly. 然而伴随着写作字数的一步步累积,以及不断阅读学习业内大佬的种种作品,我终于是在近段时间彻底意识到了失败的诸多原因。 I am too few in the story of net article domain, is not only a rookies writer, is a rookies reader, the knowledge reserve is not very richer, the plot idea extremely takes for granted, wait wait/etc. etc.. 我在网文这个领域的阅历太少,不仅是一个菜鸟作家,更是一个菜鸟读者,知识储备不够丰富,剧情构思太过想当然,等等等等. I really also had too many things to need to study. 我实在还有太多东西需要学习了。 Meanwhile, I also even more feel to lack the ability to do what one would like regarding the creation of this book. 同时,我对于此书的创作也愈发感觉力不从心。 According to plot and result that I set, if this book wants to end the itself/Ben properly, the big probability must drag next year. 根据我原先定下的剧情和结局,这本书若想要妥善完本,大概率得拖到明年。 Naturally, if writes one to explain for all stories purely, I only need solely to enumerate program list of one pile of plot, within several days can put completely in the form of skeleton the later plot. 当然,如果只是单纯为所有故事写出一个交待,我只需要单单列举出一堆故事情节的大纲列表,几天之内就能够把之后的剧情以骨架的形式全部放完。 Obviously, two choices the time and energy cost of demand are completely not a magnitude. 显而易见,前后两种选择所需求的时间和精力成本完全不是一个量级。 I had consulted many seniors in circle on this present situation. 我曾经就这种现状咨询过圈内的许多前辈。 Then, these seasoned people give my suggestion all are: 然后,这些过来人给我的建议无不都是: „Hurries the itself/Ben, the best number of words that the wholly-absorbed arrangement next book, the rookie disciplines is the 100 W character, the 170 W character has usually exceeded the allowed figure completely , to continue dead to knock no effect, is unworthy.” “赶紧完本,专心筹备下一本书,新人磨练的最好字数通常都是100W字,170W字已经完全超标,继续死磕下去没什么效果,根本不值得。” Regarding their mostly the same except for minor differences kind of viewpoints, I truly feel very reasonable. 对于他们大同小异的这类观点,我个人确实觉得非常合理。 After all puts in the time and energy into a bigger opportunity in without doubt is the wise approach. 毕竟将时间和精力投入到更大的机会中无疑是明智的做法。 In any case the net writing boundary/world court eunuch and have the rotten tail phenomenon become a normal state not? 反正网文界的太监和烂尾现象早就已经成为一种常态了不是么？ Is fiercer than me does not know how many time of big shot big gods also big piles said cuts cuts, then, why I as a vegetable/dish chicken must , in this this/Ben by oneself was felt on the mental effort thin and pale novice work continues dead to knock , to continue to consume more than half a year the time and energy? 比我厉害不知道多少倍的大佬大神们都还有一大堆说切就切的,那么,我身为一介菜鸡为什么还要在这本让自己感到心力憔悴的新手作品上继续死磕,继续耗费大半年的时间和精力呢？ I think that the primary cause has two points: 我想主要原因有两点: First, I wrote the sentiment. 一是我对此书写出了感情。 I do not think the rotten tail. 我不想烂尾。 Even my level vegetable/dish, the character, setting and story writing still consumed my countless painstaking care again. 就算我水平再菜,笔下的人物、设定、故事也都耗费了我无数的心血。 Let all these finish muddleheaded carelessly, in my opinion this work was really pitiful. 让这一切稀里糊涂地草草结束,在我看来这部作品实在是太可怜了。 Second, I thought that my vision and aesthetic still needs to enhance. 二是我觉得自己的眼界和审美仍然需要提高。 These days I watched to study the big shot regarding the writing teaching and progress attainment of rookie, beforehand I regarding this kind of video was not to spare a glance, but really after deep understanding, I discovered that past were frog in a well. 这段时间我观看学习了大佬对于新人的写作教学和进步心得,以前的我对于这类视频是不屑一顾的,但是真的深入了解过后,我才发现过去的自己就是井底之蛙。 However, looks like such that these big shot said that the light looked that their video teaching are completely insufficient, I also need to read the works of other big shot, studies their styles, hypotheses, mode of writing, rhythm wait/etc. For these days I did that then harvested is truly obvious. 然而,就像是那些大佬说的那样,光看他们的视频教学完全不够,我还需要去阅读其他大佬的作品,研究他们的文笔、设定、写法、节奏等等.这几天我正是这么做的,然后收获确实非常明显。 However the issue came, holds the mentality of learn/study to read the net article, the reading speed is very slow, my day of getting down basis could not look at dozens chapters, let alone read a work in one month. 不过问题又来了,抱着学习的心态去看网文,阅读速度是十分缓慢的,我一天下来根本看不了几十章,更别说在一个月以内看完一部作品了。 But even if makes me open the new book directly in addition, self-confidence that I cannot succeed completely, because I still need to gain in the experience. 而哪怕让我直接另开新书,我也完全没有能够成功的自信,因为我仍然需要积累经验。 Experience that perhaps creates tired many, but the experience on reading also has greatly waiting for me is planning to make up. 或许创作上的经验已经累不了多少,但是阅读上的经验却还有大把等着我去拟补。 Therefore, in summary, I decide to continue to write this book ; first, to be satisfied with own work ; second, to calm the mind to study others' work by oneself. 所以,综上所述,我决定将这本书继续写下去,一是为了对自己的作品心安理得,二是为了让自己静心去学习别人的作品。 Then is next month writing arrangement. 然后是下个月的写作安排。 Because I realize now oneself past created all sorts of problems, especially earlier 48 chapters to 104 chapters of plot, then I did not think that had any issue, however looks like in present me, actually nearly sent dead poisonously! Moreover my earlier some hypotheses and following plots even conflict. 由于我现在意识到了自己过去创作所犯下的种种毛病,特别是前期48章到104章的故事情节,当时的我不觉得有任何问题,然而在如今的我看来,却是近乎毒发身亡！而且我的前期部分设定和后续剧情甚至是冲突的. Therefore, I decide to overthrow the recomposition them completely, the established provisionally goal is as follows: 因此,我决定将它们全部推翻重写,暂定的目标如下: 1st, the recomposition plot, speeds up the rhythm. 一、重写剧情,加快节奏。 2nd, increases the daily proportion, reduces the fighting proportion. 二、增添日常占比,减少打斗比重。 3rd, improves the lead earlier the character, desalinates in the character two feelings. 三、改善主角前期性格,淡化人物中二感。 4 th, the system of setting and Shaosheng light church of improvement Saint light pure land, remoulded the image of Saint light knight. 四、完善圣光净土的设定、介绍圣光教会的制度、重塑圣光骑士的形象。 In addition, before as well as after other chapters, the combat echelon of especially big transcription, I will also conduct the corresponding simplification, retains the essence of reverse, reduces as for the trivial movement detail description as far as possible, simultaneously I also in the future the daily plot that will pull empty the packing lead school period and hunter profession lacks earlier, as well as with other roles interactive stories. 除此之外,之前以及之后的其余章节,特别是大副本的战斗部分,我也会进行相应的简化,保留反转的精华,至于琐碎的动作细节描写尽量减少,同时我还会在未来抽空填充主角学院时期和猎人生涯前期所缺少的日常情节,以及和其他角色的互动故事。 The work load of this recomposition duty is very big, will therefore renew about next month latest chapter, I will decide Zhou Geng, will not at least let invested the book friends, because the author will break for seven days to demonstrate the investment failure continuously. 这道重写任务的工作量很大,所以关于下个月的最新章节更新,我决定周更,至少不会让投资了的书友们因为作者连续断更七天而显示投资失败。 I will first create 48 chapters to 104 chapters of brand-new plots, when finished completely, I disposable will put completely them at end of next month. 我将会优先创作48章到104章的全新剧情,等到全部写完了,我会在下月底将它们一次性全部放出来。 Relax! The paid expenses chapter cannot collect fees two times, naturally, these overthrow the recomposition the plot also only to conduct the real-time update in the beginning, QQ, WeChat and other genuine platforms, after all pirates will not pay attention to has uploaded an old chapter. 放心！已经付费的章节不会二次收费,当然,这些推倒重写的情节也只会在起点、QQ、微信等正版平台上进行实时更新,毕竟盗版可不会理睬已经上传过一遍的老章节。 To be honest, now makes me carefully examine this book from the angle of reader, I am unable to continue watching! 说实话,现在让我以读者的角度来审视这本书,我自己都看不下去！ Finally one group of readers have actually been pursuing the renewal, really touches me very! This can also be said as me choosing the third important reason that persists in writing! 结果却还是有一批读者一直在追更新,真的让我非常感动！这也可以说是我选择坚持写下去的第三个重要原因吧！ Talked incessantly to say such a big pile, was very embarrassed, finally, as an rookie, the author thanked fellow genuine book friends until now to read and support here again! 唠唠叨叨说了这么一大堆,真的很不好意思,最后,作为一介新人,作者在这里再次感谢各位正版书友一直以来的阅读和支持！ ( This chapter ends) (本章完)
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