MWP :: Volume #9

#882: Devil chapter

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The first month of summer afternoon has some heat, Annan Xiu exquisite skin is still smooth, not wet dá dá, her the sweat soaks is hugging the big tyrannosaurus ant tightly, another hand gives Li Luyou. 初夏的午后有些许的热,安南秀细腻的肌肤却依然柔润,并没有被汗水浸的湿哒哒的,她一手紧抱着大霸王龙蚂蚁,另一只手交给李路由。 Ordinary Annan Xiu is familiar with walk slowly and aimlessly slowly the step, is peaceful and calm, but Li Luyou felt that she some, always two feet in tandem move the shoe heel to proceed today swayingly one on the left and other on the right, does not know why she walks like this, perhaps is happy? 平常安南秀都习惯缓缓地踱着步子,安静而从容,但是李路由感觉她今天有些晃晃悠悠的,老是两只脚一前一后一左一右地挪动着鞋跟往前走,不知道她为什么这样走路,也许是心情不错？ Li Luyou only hopes that her good mood to maintain, he to her draft not too many confidence. 李路由只希望她的好心情能够一直保持下去,他对她的稿子并没有太多信心。 He has not actually read her novel, she to the meaning that he looks, but Consort Mi has looked, from the description of Consort Mi, the description of Annan Xiu is to make the reader abhor the lead very much obviously, has the substitution feeling to female on the 2nd. 他其实没有看过她的小说,她也没有要给他看的意思,但是宓妃看过,从宓妃的描述来看,安南秀的描述很显然是让读者对主角深恶痛绝,对女二号才有代入感。 Li Banzhuang has also said that the Annan Xiu article is the narcissistic craziness is unscrupulous, boasting of acting in a completely informal or uninhibited manner. 李半妆也说过,安南秀的文章是自恋狂肆无忌惮,旁若无人的吹牛皮。 Generally such talk often means that the draft of author can be pleasant, but this has not represented the verification, can discuss the signing publication payment for published piece truly and so on matter. 一般这样的约谈往往意味着作者的稿子能够入眼,但这并不代表过了审核,可以真正谈签约出版稿费之类的事情了。 But this is only to others, if this editor asked the author to come, then said that your here was not good, there must change, you went back to cultivate/repair again, we discussed again, lacking the method or will be only the author of rookie will be often grateful and excited, but this set, if used on Annan Xiu, Li Luyou thought that will have an accident. 可是这只是对其他人,如果这位编辑叫了作者来,然后说你这里不行,那里要改,你回去再修修,我们再谈,缺少门路或者只是新人的作者往往会感激而兴奋,但是这一套如果用在安南秀身上,李路由觉得会出事。 Before arriving at the publishing house, Li Luyou looked up, the shop front very atmosphere, the independent office building, was not the general private publishing house, perhaps had official background. Then Li Luyou somewhat felt relieved, if private, others do not give you to leave, Li Luyou does not have the means that others are also reluctantly embarrassed, but if is state-run, that said. 来到出版社前,李路由抬头看了看,门脸很大气,独立的办公楼,不是一般的民营出版社,说不定有官方背景。这下李路由有些放心了,如果是私营的,人家不给你出,李路由也没有办法,勉强别人也不好意思,可如果是国营,那就好说了。 Li Luyou to wasting the national resources does not have too many indignation, after all Elder Sister Qiao changes vehicle every other day, except for that Audi of duty, is Maserati GTS that she opens now, has changed the car(riage) are too really many, not to mention that no one knew that actually endured compared with the department of military expenses consumption. 李路由对浪费国家资源已经没有太多愤慨了,毕竟乔姐姐三天两头换车,除了那辆出任务的奥迪,她现在开的也是玛莎拉蒂GTS,换过的车实在太多,更不用说那个无人得知却堪比军费消耗的部门了。 Registers in the onstage, then met with the editor, talked in the reception room. 在前台登记,然后和编辑见面,在会客室谈话。 The edition is a 30 over woman, surnamed Xu, Xu Xiaosi, plump and fair-complected, wears eyeglasses, making one look feels like sits looks at that person who the novel writes the novel in front of the computer earnestly. 编辑是一个三十出头的女人,姓徐,徐晓思,白白胖胖,戴一副眼镜,让人一看就觉得好像是坐在电脑前埋头看小说写小说的那种人。 This editor does not seem like in the publishing house is what major suit, her oneself pours water, oneself receives Annan Xiu and Li Luyou. 这位编辑在出版社里似乎不算什么大牌,她自己倒水,自己接待安南秀和李路由。 „What answers the telephone is you, the one who writes the novel is you?” Xu Xiaosi looked at Li Luyou, looked at Annan Xiu, smiled. “接电话的是你,写小说的是你？”徐晓思看了看李路由,又看了看安南秀,笑了起来。 „Yes, I am her guardian. She also not grown.” Li Luyou also smiles, Annan Xiu also in the household register of his family/home, in the legal relationship he truly is a guardian. Annan Xiu does not pay attention to this meaningless inquiry completely, but hugs her ant to sit there, looks that the tea leaves in tea rolls to roll down. “是的,我是她的监护人。她还没有成年。”李路由也笑了笑,安南秀还在他家的户口本上,法律关系上他确实是监护人。安南秀对这种毫无意义的询问完全不予理会,只是抱着她的蚂蚁坐在那里,看着茶水里的茶叶滚上滚下。 „Since your book title is «Beats Younger sister», then you do look «Have beaten Princess» this book?” Xu Xiaosi simultaneously said to Li Luyou and Annan Xiu, the reception room is the facade, is exhibiting the works of many publishing house, includes «Beats Princess», before Xu Xiaosi took the book to place Li Luyou and Annan Xiu body . “既然你的书名是《殴打妹妹》,那么你有没有看过《殴打公主》这本书？”徐晓思同时对李路由和安南秀说道,会客室是门面,陈列着不少出版社的作品,其中就包括《殴打公主》,徐晓思取了书放在了李路由和安南秀身前。 „Has looked.” Li Luyou nods, Annan Xiu read this book to have the thoughts to write probably, what was very commendable was Annan Xiu had not kicked up a fuss at that time unexpectedly, but chose oneself also to write a way to taunt Li Banzhuang, she also enough can endure, after discovering book started, has written own silently, only dealt with the provocation of Li Zi through the own book. “看过。”李路由点了点头,安南秀大概是看了这本书才动心思写的,很难能可贵的是安南秀当时居然没有大吵大闹,而是选择了自己也写一本的方式来嘲讽李半妆,她也够能忍的,从发现书后开始,就一直默默地写自己的,只通过自己的书来应对李子的挑衅。 Annan Xiu had not replied, but Xu Xiaosi does not have to care, because in her heart has the answer, but looks at the Annan Xiu appearance, has doubts more and more. 安南秀没有回答,但是徐晓思却没有太在意,因为她心中已经有了答案,只是看着安南秀的样子,越来越疑惑。 „Do not visit me.” Annan Xiu raised the head, is sick said, the good opposite is only a female, she can also determine that this female has the normal mating orientation, has not been thinking some disgusting things. “你不要一直看我。”安南秀抬起头来,厌烦地说道,还好对面只是一只雌性,她也能够确定这只雌性有正常的交-配取向,没有在想一些恶心的东西。 „How I more looked that...... more looked......” Xu Xiaosi smiled as if suddenly enlightened, „ you are «Beat the Princess» fans. “我怎么越看……越看……”徐晓思恍然大悟地笑了起来,“你是《殴打公主》的粉丝吧。 But you wrote one unexpectedly and «Beat the Princess» story content diametrically opposed, entirely different work......, if «Beats Princess» is heaven, your belonged to the inferno. ” Li Luyou has turned the head, not being able to bear want to smile, the inferno...... the Annan Xiu style is really really fearful. 可你居然写出了一本和《殴打公主》故事内容截然对立,风格迥异的作品……如果说《殴打公主》是天堂篇,你这本就属于地狱篇。”李路由转过头去,忍不住想笑,地狱篇……果然安南秀的风格实在可怕。 „What fans are, fills in the soup steamed dumpling the silver valuables silk thread? I am not that type of thing, do not compare with that type of thing me.” Annan Xiu looks at Xu Xiaosi morosely. “粉丝是什么,灌汤小笼包里银色的细软丝线？我不是那种东西,你也不要把我比作那种东西。”安南秀不高兴地看着徐晓思。 „She has been poisoned...... Xu Xiaosi to put down the book in hand seriously”, said to Li Luyou with a smile: „You looked, her secure Xiaoxiu just like...... I said how to look familiar, you look at this description......” “她已经严重中毒……”徐晓思放下手中的书,笑着对李路由说道:“你看,她活脱脱的一个安小秀嘛……我说就怎么眼熟了,你看这一段的描述……” Xu Xiaosi opens in the book to look to Li Luyou: The present girl has a straight long hair, what making slow Li Zi surprised is, her long hair just like the genuine silk to flow generally, is exuding the gorgeous gloss under the sunlight, when slow Li Zi looks to her, she turns the head, in the lonely eye pupil slightly does not flash through an arrogance obviously, immediately vanishes, faintly and regarded one group of air slow Li Zi tranquilly. 徐晓思翻开书中一段给李路由看:眼前的女孩子有一头笔直的长发,让徐李子惊讶的是,她的长发犹如真正的丝绸一般流淌,在阳光下泛着华美的光泽,当徐李子看向她时,她转过头来,冷清的眼眸里微不可见地闪过一丝傲慢,随即消失殆尽,淡漠而平静地将徐李子当成了一团空气。 slow Li Zi has not cared, she is the person who Elder Brother likes, in the future can be Sister-in-law own, slow Li Zi has the courage to want with her to greet, this girl actually turns around, is holding one furry does not know that is the ant or anything's toy, sat in the Elder Brother bosom, the provocation was looking at slow Li Zi. 徐李子并没有在意,她是哥哥喜欢的人,将来会是自己的嫂子,徐李子鼓起勇气想和她打招呼,这个女孩子却自顾自地转身,抱着一个毛茸茸的不知道是蚂蚁还是什么的玩具,坐在了哥哥的怀里,挑衅地望着徐李子。 slow Li Zi knows afterward that toy is an ant, was called by the secure small show for the big tyrannosaurus ant. 徐李子后来才知道,那个玩具是一只蚂蚁,被安小秀称呼为大霸王龙蚂蚁。 „You take a look, this hair, this toy...... not? Simply is exactly the same, truly speaking, we also organized under some to move, there is an avid reader to dress up the role in book in circulation, but your return to original state highest.” Xu Xiaosi appreciates looks at Annan Xiu. “你瞧瞧,这头发,还有这个玩具……可不是吗？简直就是一模一样,说实在的,我们也组织了一些线下活动,也有热心读者打扮成书中的角色,但你这个还原度最高。”徐晓思赞赏地看着安南秀。 Annan Xiu coldly looks at Xu Xiaosi. 安南秀只是冷冷地看着徐晓思。 Xu Xiaosi is been comfortable by some that she looks, immediately in some clear books feeling of slow Li Zi, this look by the description of Madam Xu must more unnatural. 徐晓思被她看的有些不自在,顿时有些明白书中徐李子的感觉了,这种眼神被徐夫人的描写的还要让人不自然许多。 „Embarrassed...... she is not the imitation...... should say that she is the prototype. She is «Beats Princess» in secure Xiaoxiu.” In order to avoid Xu Xiaosi continues to provoke Annan Xiu, Li Luyou has to explain, never expected that Li Zi is loaf, although not with real name, but the character appearance and name do not have again multi- flowered too many thoughts. “不好意思……她不是模仿的……应该说她才是原型。她就是《殴打公主》里的安小秀。”为了避免徐晓思继续惹恼安南秀,李路由只好解释了一番,没有想到李子偷懒,虽然没有用真名,但是人物模样和名字却没有再多花太多心思。 Li Luyou casts a sidelong glance, the own surname changed, is surnamed Xu, unexpectedly asked slow to remember that and female donkey by...... Li Luyou respectively immediately midnight pitiful yell related Li respectively by. 李路由瞟了一眼,自己的姓氏改了,也姓徐,居然叫徐各由……李路由顿时想起了那个和母驴半夜惨叫相关的李各由。 Xu Xiaosi gawked gawked, cannot help but retroceded toward the sofa, has not been sizing up Annan Xiu again flagrantly, but after for a long time, recovered, asked unthinkably: „Really...... really has secure Xiaoxiu such person?” 徐晓思愣了一愣,不由得往沙发后退了一点,没有再明目张胆地打量着安南秀,只是许久之后才回过神来,匪夷所思地问道:“真的……真的有安小秀这样的人？” „Should not have...... after all the novel, although stems from the life, but after processing, association/will to cater to the plot and reader need, conducts the certain extent exaggerating. I think that secure Xiaoxiu in true Annan Xiu and book is definitely entirely different.” Li Luyou has not carefully looked that «Has beaten Princess», but he thought that oneself should read well. “应该没有吧……毕竟小说虽然是源于生活,但是经过加工,总会为了迎合故事情节和读者需要,进行一定程度的夸张。我想真正的安南秀和书中的安小秀肯定截然不同。”李路由没有仔细看过那本《殴打公主》,不过他觉得自己应该好好读一读了。 „I want also to be.” Xu Xiaosi relaxes nods, said with a smile: „In this world the extremely arrogant person estimate will not say that anything can kiss the footprint that I stay behind, is your lifetime the glory that is hard to exceed, after is your descendants, your proud root......” “我想也是。”徐晓思松了一口气地点头,笑着说道:“这个世界上再狂妄的人估计也不会说什么能够亲吻我留下的脚印,已经是你毕生难以超越的荣耀,是你子孙后代为你骄傲的根源……” Li Luyou has to repress laughter, gripped the hand of Annan Xiu, in order to avoid her violent anger. 李路由不得不忍着笑,握住了安南秀的手,以免她暴怒。 „Extremely arrogantly what do this words have? Narrated a natural fact simply. Like the present, my manuscript hands over in your hand, do you understand this matter to your significance?” Annan Xiu has not gotten angry, is only the facial expression is even more lonely. “这种话有什么狂妄的？只是简单地叙述一个理所当然的事实。就像现在,我亲笔书稿交到你手里,你明白这件事情对你的意义吗？”安南秀没有发火,只是神情越发冷清。 Xu Xiaosi only thought that this little girl look iced up probably, suddenly wants the person estimate like this really saying that words to come, to hold the arm, lets oneself reluctantly facing this little girl, „good, we no longer discussed that book, we chatted your book.” 徐晓思只觉得这个小女孩的眼神好像结冰了似的,突然想这样的人估计真的会说出那种话来,抱了抱胳膊,勉强让自己面对这个小女孩,“好吧,我们不再谈那本书,我们谈谈你的书。” Heard her saying that the Annan Xiu facial expression slightly was moderate. 听到她这么说,安南秀的神情才稍稍缓和。 „I see your manuscript at first, thinks that this is only a following novel...... you know the present person most lacks the innovative ideology and innovative spirit and innovation capabilities, anything red with on anything, soap opera this, movie this, variety show this, the book is also.” Xu Xiaosi discovered that the opposite party is impatient, some heart anger, have not seen such arrogance rookie author slightly, but still bears the temper saying: „Good that this character truly writes, even if I am a layman, still thought that the calligraphy is attractive, therefore looked met...... discovered some different places.” “我最初看到你的书稿,认为这只是一部跟风小说……你知道现在的人最缺少创新意识和创新精神以及创新能力,什么红就跟着上什么,电视剧这样,电影这样,综艺节目这样,书也是。”徐晓思发现对方又不耐烦了,心头也微微有些火气,没见过这么傲气的新人作者,但依然耐着性子说道:“不过这字确实写的好,就算我是个外行,也觉得书法非常漂亮,所以多看了一会……才发现其中一些不一样的地方。” Annan Xiu nods, she only listens to the words that thinks highly of...... naturally, how to think highly, looks like also expresses in Annan Xiu the fact appropriately, in addition Li Luyou criticism Annan Xiu likes listening, let alone others. 安南秀点了点头,她只听恭维的话……当然,无论怎么样恭维,在安南秀看来也不过是恰如其分地表达事实而已,李路由的批评安南秀尚且爱听不听,更何况其他人了。 Li Luyou is also listening carefully, wants to have a look at the Annan Xiu book to have what difference. 李路由也仔细听着,想看看安南秀的书到底有什么不一样。 „First, between the lines is passing magnificence, is Madam Xu is unable to compare favorably. Second, the characterization way is different, Madam Xu pays great attention to various appearances and details describes, but your dialogue are slightly more. The third point, is the heaven that I said and inferno, the Madam Xu story tells, making one realize encouraging and courage, but your issue document, the carelessly makes people feel desperately, as if in leading lady under oppresses, anybody and female 2nd is a fate, is incapable of revolting, that mood can infect the person.” Xu Xiaosi nods prudently , indicating that this is the result that oneself thinks. “第一,字里行间透着的华丽,是徐夫人无法媲美的。第二,人物塑造方式不一样,徐夫人更注重各种外貌和细节描写,而你的对话稍微多一些。第三点,就是我说的天堂篇和地狱篇,徐夫人的故事娓娓道来,让人从中体会到励志和勇气,而你的行文,不经意就让人感觉到绝望,仿佛在女主角的压迫之下,任何人都和女二号是一个下场,无力反抗,那种情绪非常能够感染人。”徐晓思慎重地点头,表示这是自己深思熟虑的结果。 „You meant, leading lady who I described, seemed like devil in a hell?” Annan Xiu is looking angrily at Li Luyou that suppresses the happy expression, then turns the head to look at Xu Xiaosi unthinkably. “你的意思是说,我描述的女主角,看上去像一个地狱里的恶魔？”安南秀怒视着强忍笑意的李路由,然后转过头来匪夷所思地看着徐晓思。 „Is more fearful than the devil, yama...... female yama.” Xu Xiaosi definitely nods. “比恶魔更可怕,阎王……女阎王。”徐晓思肯定地点了点头。 …… …… …… …… Sorry, finally finished third. 抱歉,终于写完第三更了。 Thank in the book friend dream the flower to fall knows many clothes and shoes that gave my wife and children little flower, was very attractive, thanked. 感谢书友梦里花落知多少送给我家小小花的衣服和鞋子,很漂亮,非常感谢。
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