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On November 3, senior apprentice brother ended originally, although did not give up very much. 十一月 3 号,师兄完本了,虽然很舍不得。 Finished time, author fungus oneself fell into one type not to end this mood, upgrade neglected. 完结篇的时候,作者菌自己就陷入了一种不愿意完本的情绪,以至于更新怠慢了些。 After wants many to everyone writes some Great Desolate rain , the story, but stemming from control of overall rhythm, terminated at this time is best. 本想多给大家写一些洪荒的雨后小故事,但出于对总体节奏的把控,这个时候完结是最好的。 Too other stories must write, very long creation road must walk, senior apprentice brother is ‚my present stage representative works’, but should not be ‚my sole representative works’. 还有太多其他的故事要写,还有很长的创作路要走,师兄是‘我现阶段的代表作’,但不该是‘我唯一的代表作’。 Our books, should calculate completion compared with the relatively high work, wants the idea and essence that expressed also very full, in the book discussed under the Taoism philosophy view and materialistic view and diagnostic method, made some brain holes to extend. 咱们这本书,应该算完成度比较高的作品,想要表达的理念和内核也挺充分的了,书内探讨了下道家哲学观以及唯物观、辩证法,做了一些脑洞延伸。 Then, I will reconsider and precipitate, will form in one's mind the senior apprentice brother processing not good plot, the sinking heart learn/study , to promote the style diligently, makes up the weak area , to continue to display the strong point... 接下来,我会反思、会沉淀,会将师兄处理不好的剧情重新构思一遍,沉心学习,努力提升文笔,补足短板,继续发挥长处。。。 My continuously very grateful reader, through the good friend application that reader SMS comes, I will pass, will try hard to conduct the normal category exchange with the reader. 我一直很感激读者,通过读者群发过来的好友申请,我都会通过,也会努力跟读者进行正常范畴的交流。 The blending based in the chapter said that the author of expert, feared. 混成常驻章说达人的作者,怕不怕。 Many people denounced that I care about the reader to feel, but the reader gave my food to eat, letting me under insisting the writing ideal premise very good supporting the family, I can the feedback to the reader was forms in one's mind, to polish the own story. 很多人诟病我太在意读者感受,但读者给了我这口饭吃,让我能在坚持文字理想的前提下很好的养家,我能回馈给读者的就是去构思、去打磨自己的故事。 Respecting the reader is dodges the poison of reader, writes the technique and creation approach reader Lord...... mostly could not guess correctly, hehehe. 尊重读者是规避读者的毒点,写作手法和创作思路读者老爷……大多也猜不到,嘿嘿嘿。 senior apprentice brother this book, I told the Li Changshou’s story to everyone, but not only told the Li Changshou’s story to everyone. 师兄这本书,我给大家讲了李长寿的故事,但又不只是给大家讲了李长寿的故事。 Myth. 神话。 The myth is the symbol of national culture, has the different explanations each time to the myth, I am using the Li Changshou’s angle of view, explains the small section divide spirit words content of China, wants to present one to everyone 【oh, can like this】 Fantasy world. 神话是民族文化的符号,每个时代对神话都有不同的解读,我在用李长寿的视角,去解读中国的小部分神话内容,想给大家呈现出一个【哦,原来还可以这样】的幻想世界。 Even, if not hypertext fiction itself needs the contradiction and high tide, my introduction time and thinks that does not mold the villain Way Ancestor, but pure conflicts with the Li Changshou idea, is two standpoints decides the victory and defeat finally, then the defeated eats the dust. 甚至,如果不是网络小说本身需要矛盾和高潮,我开篇的时候并想不把道祖塑造成反派,而只是单纯与李长寿理念冲突,是两个立场最后决出胜负,然后败者食尘。 This choices that is to make, conflict exist(ence), is in order to makes everyone look smooth is more slippery ~ 这个算是做的一点取舍,冲突的存在,是为了能让大家看的更顺滑一些~ late stage time, the Great Desolate class/flow strength is upward, tearing feeling that the plot pattern brings downward, this makes my pressure very big, first middle stage can be careless under the wing of big shot, but late stage he must stand out, not gather with our deciding, did many uncomfortableness. 后期的时候,洪荒流战力向上、剧情格局向下带来的撕裂感,这让我压力很大,前中期能在大佬的羽翼下苟着,但后期他必须站出来了,就跟咱们的立意不合了,搞出了很多不适感。 Fortunately from starting to arrive careless final. 还好从开始苟到最后了。 In I opinion, senior apprentice brother is not very a little good, lay in squeezing my too much time and energy. 在我个人看来,师兄有一点很不好,就在于压榨了我太多时间和精力。 More than one year of time, the works of 300 500,000-600,000 characters, each chapter of 4,000-5,000 characters start, the mean diurnal is close to 10,000 characters. 一年多的时间,三百500,000-600,000字的作品,每章4,000-5,000字起步,平均日更接近一万字。 Also excluding has been serializing the first sword before then, as well as has the short time double opens. 还不包括在此之前一直在连载第一剑,以及有短时间的双开。 To be honest, is very tired. 说实话,真挺累的。 But the process of creation is very happy. 但创作的过程挺开心的。 To write to move the writing of reader, most basic is to deeply love these writing. 想去写出能打动读者的文字,最基本的就是要热爱这些文字。 As an author, can write to cry oneself in the own story is really the scraps/condescend ; But writes that chapter that Qi Yuan Master dies, I was really about to collapse, was the collapse on mood, does not understand why oneself must establish such program, but that chapter was necessary. 作为一个作者,能在自己的故事把自己写哭真的是太屑了;但写齐源师父死的那章,我真的快崩溃了,是情绪上的崩溃,不明白自己为什么要设定这么个大纲,但那章又很有必要。 After that chapter finished the draft, I hurry to adjust the rhythm, eases the overall mood, after all the overall literary style is lively, is not sensational, this wants faithful unto death, without so many bitter in suffering and deep in hatred. 那章写完初稿之后,我又赶紧调整节奏,缓解整体情绪,毕竟总体文风是轻快的,不是要煽情,这个要从一而终,也没那么多苦大仇深。 Sometimes writes these ten thousand Zida chapters, seemed like really taking the life to write, immerses, several hours did not move, standing up moved, the both feet was the hemp, throat because also forgot that drank water to swell speaks the not go out words......, but was very crisp. 有时候去写这些万字大章,真的像是在拿命写,沉浸进去了,几个小时不动弹,站起身活动活动,双脚都是麻的、嗓子也因为忘记喝水而肿的说不出话……但挺爽。 Fortunately, these big chapters completing also good. 所幸,这些大章完成的都还不错。 Which big chapter does everyone most like? Which plot? The chapter said that keeps message, later does similarly. 大家最喜欢哪个大章？或者哪段剧情？章说留个信儿,以后再搞类似的。 Serializes the net article author not to have the vacation, having me also meets the condition is not good every so often, will be agitated and meet the fall in the blues, even to lie on the bed weary to moves does not want to move, thought that oneself rests for two days to consider as finished, therefore the article quality has ups and downs inevitably, can only as far as possible maintain. 连载中的网文作者没有假期,有很多时候我也会状态不好,会烦躁、会情绪低落、甚至会躺在床上疲倦到一动不想动,觉得自己就这么睡两天算了,所以文章质量必然是有起有伏,只能尽量保持。 But finally insisted, story that oneself wants to write, presented by the oneself present stage biggest ability. 但最终还是坚持了下来,将自己想写的故事,以自己现阶段最大的能力呈现了出来。 Serializes the senior apprentice brother’s process, I grew, learn how self adjustment. 连载师兄的过程,我成长了很多,也学会了如何自我调节。 What sole is gratified, the quick three -year-old daughters are not unfamiliar to me, my wife has also been able to give me biggest encouragement. 唯一欣慰的是,快三岁的女儿对我不算生疏,我老婆也一直能给我最大的鼓励。 After senior apprentice brother termination, I will rest for several days, then terminates the first sword, the rest for half a month, returns to one's old home to have a look at the parents and grandmother and again goes out for a walk with the wife and kid, then takes pen in hand to write the new book. 师兄完结后,我会休息几天,然后完结第一剑,再休息半个月,回老家看看爸妈和姥姥、跟老婆孩子出去走走,然后提笔写新书。 The new book writes about oneself satisfaction, puts to meet with everyone again, the general framework and world view idea already completed, in this period will write beyond senior apprentice brother ; Actually six months ago, after the senior apprentice brother overall structure construction was completed, on already in idea new book frame. 新书写到自己满意为止,再放出来跟大家见面,总体框架、世界观构思已经做好了,期间会写写师兄番外;其实在半年前,师兄整体构架建设完成后,就已经在构思新书的框架了。 The new book world view with some senior apprentice brother world view relations, for example will have Changshou distantly related honorary disciple to be the trusted advisor supporting role( to play stem to), that is the new story and new world view, will not take the senior apprentice brother’s old route, naturally, my literary style is the immortal hero light comedy, this will not lose, will continue perfect. 新书世界观跟师兄世界观有些联系,比如会有个长寿远房记名弟子做军师型配角(玩梗向),那是新的故事、新的世界观,不会走师兄的老路,当然,我的文风就是仙侠轻喜剧,这个不会丢,会继续完善。 Many people thought that my new book pressure is quite big , I am in effect it is not so anxious( ying chirp). 很多人觉得我新书压力相当大,其实不然,我只是焦虑(嘤嘤嘤)。 Stands thinks in my angle, if the new book result is not good, definitely many people said that —— gust, exhausts one's creative vein, senior apprentice brother is really accidental. 站在我的角度想想,如果新书成绩不好,肯定很多人说——一阵风、江郎才尽、师兄果然是偶然。 Even the new book result, some people of various types have not definitely favored and so on. 就算新书成绩还可以,肯定也有人各种不看好之类的。 But actually, these have nothing. 但其实,这些都没什么的。 My oneself too excessive has not paid attention to these( appropriate attention some), I pay more attention to the story essence that the new book I want to express, the story plot that wants to write, how and relaxed literary style should launch and maintain, how the persona aspect continues the promotion and innovation. 我自己没有太过分关注这些(适当关注还是有的),我更关注新书我想表达的故事内核,想写的故事剧情,以及轻松文风该如何展开和维持,人设方面如何继续提升和创新。 About the anxiety of new book, actually came from, oneself does not want to let the reader and editor who anticipate the new book, even my family member is disappointed. 关于新书的焦虑感,其实来自于,自己不想让期待新书的读者、编辑,甚至我家人失望。 senior apprentice brother made me stand on a neither high nor low mountain, I will walk from this mountain, climb up next, higher mountain top, with the oneself entire energy over the next one to two year, writes the work of next stick. 师兄让我站到了一个不高不低的山上,我会从这座山走下来,去攀爬下一个、更高的山头,用自己未来一到两年的全部精力,去写出下一部棒棒的作品。 Even if new book result not such as senior apprentice brother such ‚exploding’, but the pursue quality, deletes the manuscript crazily, can be our invariable main keys. 哪怕新书成绩不会如师兄这么‘炸’,但追求质量、疯狂删稿,会是咱们不变的主基调。 The new book theme or the immortal hero light comedy, will be many warm-blooded, growth and warmth, gives everyone the integral point different Heavenly Court joke. 新书题材还是仙侠轻喜剧,会多一点热血、成长和温暖,多给大家整点不一样的天庭笑话。 The smooth words, the new book can meet with everyone in December, I with everyone in reader ** class/flow, can glance through the book review regularly and ends the chapter of this words expressing feelings to say ~ 顺利的话,新书12月份就能跟大家见面,我会跟大家在读者**流,也会定期翻阅书评和完本感言的章说~ Left, Little Jasper Peak. 别了,小琼峰。 Left, Li Changshou, spirit E, Cloud clouds, Zhao Gongming, Your Majesty Jade Emperor, Teacher Grand Pure, Old Daoist Qi Yuan, Aunt-Master Black-jade Wine and Youqin younger sister, Crow Wine, Lu Yue, Holy Mother Golden Spirit, Jade Cauldron, Supreme Unity...... 别了,李长寿、灵娥、云霄、赵公明、玉帝陛下、太清老师、齐源老道、酒玖师叔、有琴妹子、酒乌、吕岳、金灵圣母、玉鼎、太乙…… The temporary separation, has supported the senior apprentice brother’s readers in a variety of ways. 暂别了,一直通过各种方式支持师兄的读者们。 Not only this returned to the proper topic writing «My senior apprentice brother Too To be really steady», this also in the chapter said alternately, we witnessed the lengthy immortal hero story that and accompanied together. 这不只是言归正传写作的《我师兄实在太稳健了》,这也是在章说交互下,我们一起见证、一起陪伴的长篇仙侠故事。 High mountains and remote roads, the new book fights again. 山高路远,新书再战。 Our book joins, returns to the proper topic. 咱们书接上回,言归正传。
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