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Ding-dong ~ 噹噹噹噹~ Because many detail everyone will not go into seriously, therefore makes a simple summary to everyone, facilitates following. 因为很多细节大家不会深究,所以给大家做个简单总结,方便接下来。 The first detail, Emperor Xin. 第一个细节,帝辛。 Emperor Xin suicides this, I formed in one's mind already for a half year, because just had this, front I have not spent the words to describe Emperor Xin and Nine-Tailed Fox sentimental play, otherwise everyone was definitely more difficult to accept. 帝辛自刎这段,我构思已经半年了,正因为有这段,前面我没有费笔墨去描写帝辛和九尾狐的感情戏,不然大家肯定更难接受。 But the failure of Emperor Xin, stems from the old trouble that Shang Country accumulates, from the logic, Shang Country ingrained habits are hard to overcome, impossible one generation of efforts can turn over. 但帝辛的失败,源于商国积累的旧患,从逻辑来讲,商国积重难返,并不可能一代的努力就能翻转。 In article to highlight opposition, changed to ‚antiwar crime and reality contradictory is Immortal is the result’, this was I says in the chapter, the different results coursed the different plot guidances. 文中为了凸显对立,把矛盾转到了‘非战之罪、实乃仙人所致’,这就是我在章说说的,不同的结果引向不同的剧情导向。 Said the Investiture of Gods script has not changed...... this, this, is invites under the big shot multi- ponder of this opinion, reads carefully. 还有说封神剧本没变的……这个,这个,就是请这种言论的大佬多思考下,仔细看书。 The author fungus actually can also Emperor Xin solemnness and stirring of death description, such following plot have the atmosphere, but this has an issue. 作者菌其实还可以把帝辛的死描绘的更悲壮,这样后续剧情也就更有氛围,但这样就有一个问题。 According to has the historical data, without the means goes to the clear definition, Emperor Xin is an enlightened ruler or a tyrant, later generation black Emperor Xin are too many, lens layer upon layer pack of history, I without grasping, does not dare to mold Emperor Xin to be extremely big, but made him make Shang Monarch to do and should do, and conformed to this article primary intention the matter. 根据已有史料,没办法去明确定义,帝辛到底是个明主还是个暴君,后世黑帝辛的太多,历史的透镜层层叠叠,我在没有把握的情况下,不敢去塑造帝辛太过高大,只是让他做了一个商君能做、该做,且符合本文主旨的事。 Also is the Human Sovereign moral courage. 也就是人皇的气节。 Then Emperor Xin is only introduction, the true conflict point, has came in previous chapter already. 然后帝辛只是引子,真正的矛盾冲突点,在上章已经出来了。 Daji life and death. 妲己的生死。 Later will have the play of civil history and play of military history regarding launching. 稍后会有文戏和武戏围绕展开。 Second, Shang Country. 第二个,商国。 I actually want to write Emperor Xin third child with emphasis ‚Wu Geng’, this is very fierce youngster, guiding shang people to gather again, restores business the sacrifice, everyone can voluntarily under hundred degrees celsius, be many my mold to the Emperor Xin, counter pushes through Wu Geng, but afterward when established the detailed program, discovered that had no way to launch to write Wu Geng, this was very regrettable. 我其实原本是想重点写帝辛的三子‘武庚’,这是个很厉害的少年,引导商民再次聚集,恢复商祭,大家可以自行百度下,很多我对帝辛的塑造,都是通过武庚逆推回去的,不过后来在设置详细大纲的时候,发现没法去展开写武庚,这个挺遗憾。 Because we are the Great Desolate immortal hero articles, this truly does not have the means to launch, otherwise the whole will appear will be smelly and hard. 因为我们是洪荒仙侠文,这块确实没办法展开,不然整体会显得又臭又硬。 If behind creates the settlement, will write this emphatically, if there are more archaeological discoveries to show that Emperor Xin is worth praising, that will also supplement this. 后面如果创作相关内容,会着重写这段,如果有更多考古发现证明帝辛值得颂扬,那也会补充这段。 Steady, cannot give the wrong impression of conjecturing. 稳健点,不能给出臆断的错误印象。 Third, Way Ancestor arrives at Little Jasper Peak, with Li Changshou a series of dialogues. 第三个,道祖降临小琼峰,与李长寿一系列对话。 The goal that Way Ancestor comes, very explicit one layer, watches Li Changshou, because grey robe old man already expired, therefore Way Ancestor comes personally. 道祖来的目的,很明确的一层,就是看住李长寿,因为灰袍老者已经失效了,所以道祖亲自现身。 Here has several known points, needs under the attention: 这里有几个已知的点,需要注意下: 【Way Ancestor can depart Purple Firmament Palace.】 【道祖可以离开紫霄宫。】 【Way Ancestor incomparably dreaded to Li Changshou at this time, does not dare easily take action, to probe repeatedly.】 【道祖此时对李长寿无比忌惮,不敢轻易出手,反复地在试探。】 【Way Ancestor is unable to understand why Li Changshou will make the save a little only to lose a lot action.】 【道祖无法理解李长寿为什么会做出因小失大的举措。】 【Way Ancestor dreads Beginning Phoenix very much.】 【道祖很忌惮始凤。】 【Li Changshou started to swing person depart Great Desolate, Youqin stayed behind, but did not leave the stage, here was foreshadowing, everyone did not need to be worried】 【李长寿开始摇人离开洪荒了,有琴留下了,但不是退场,这里是伏笔,大家不用担心】 Other not play passed. 其他就不剧透了。 Kills the Saint, is Li Changshou collapses the important step of plan. 杀圣,是李长寿破局计划的重要步骤。 Way Ancestor already operates Heaven and Earth too long Time, Li Changshou, only then a road can exceed Way Ancestor, this road is very difficult to walk, but I can pledge to everyone, will not have the sacrifice of desirably important personage, serves as contrast that solemn and stirring feeling. 道祖已经经营天地太久的岁月,李长寿只有一条路可以胜过道祖,这条路很难走出来,但我可以承诺给大家,不会有重要人物的刻意牺牲,去衬托那种悲壮感。 Dies after Qi Yuan, the trend is roughly pressing the Li Changshou’s anticipation to walk ; 从齐源死后,大体走势都在按李长寿的预期在走; He is also revising this collapsing plan unceasingly, is seeking the opportunity of promoting the oneself odds of success. 他也在不断修正这个破局的计划,寻找着提升自己胜算的机会。 This Emperor Xin event, after is Li Changshou considers all the factors in the overall situation, that must choose, makes mortal foundation of Heavenly Way order( whom otherwise Heavenly Court manages), like this preserved mortal, will not let mortal involves by him and Way Ancestor late stage fighting method. 这次帝辛事件,就是李长寿综合考虑全局后,必须做出的取舍,既让凡俗成为天道秩序的基础(不然天庭管谁),这样保住了凡俗,不会让凡人被他和道祖的后期斗法所牵连。 In addition, presently Way Ancestor and Li Changshou’s gambling, is only in third layer and fourth layer of world view , the opposition of Heaven and Earth and life. 另,当前道祖与李长寿的博弈,只是在世界观的第三层和第四层,既天地与生灵的对立。 Way Ancestor thinks that Li Changshou not knows Way Ancestor true goal, but Li Changshou believes firmly that Way Ancestor thinks oneself not knows Way Ancestor true goal, but Way Ancestor felt Li Changshou, if stays is too long, might know the own true goal. 既,道祖以为李长寿不知道道祖真正的目的,而李长寿确信道祖以为自己不知道道祖真正的目的,而道祖觉得李长寿如果停留太久,有可能会知道自己的真正目的。 This is very easy to understand that is right.( Lets go shape). 这很容易理解嘛,对不对。(摊手状)。 Way Ancestor Little Jasper Peak delegation, main three goal —— compel Li Changshou ahead of time take action, watches Li Changshou to make him not disturb, tries to inspire Grand Pure take action. 道祖小琼峰一行,最主要的三个目的——施压逼李长寿提前出手,看住李长寿让他别捣乱,试图引动太清出手。 Some things are not do not write, the blank technique of but using, will write to miss the key point, everyone will be links up, there is an imaginary space. 有些东西不是不写,而是用的留白手法,都写出来就会错失重点,大家是连贯的,也有想象空间。 Saw that had reader Lord saying that the Emperor Xin fate, was because I could not control the plot...... 看到有读者老爷说,帝辛的下场,是因为我控不住剧情…… Actually wants to let the reader vitality/angry, this can push the high tide, this is the light comedy cannot die too multi-role prices, is the rhythm processing mode that I can think at this time. 其实只是想让读者生气,这样才能推高潮,这就是轻喜剧不能死太多角色的代价,也是我此时能想到的节奏处理方式。 Later should have better treatment method, I try hard to study, studies diligently. 以后应该会有更好的处理方法,我努力学习,努力学习。 Has the plot issue to leave a message in single section, the author fungus awakes to meet the one by one reply ~ 有剧情问题在单章留言,作者菌睡醒会一一回复~ Asked the ticket to ask the ticket, while double first threw, this plot should to continue to present the big reverse some time. 求票求票,趁着双倍先投呀,这段剧情应该要持续一段时间才能出现大反转。 After big reverse, will enter 【Finished】, The present is only the Investiture of Gods plot, to finished also far! 大反转之后,才会进入【完结篇】,现在只是封神剧情,离完结篇还远！
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