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#388: A'Zhi stood finally( single section words expressing feelings)

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The content of this volume Chapter 20, is a book thinks on already before the book, the logic of entire line is actually very clear: 本卷第20章的内容,是本书在开书前就已经想好的,整条线的逻辑其实很清晰: Xing Yuanzhi must break an engagement, because afterward the handle and benefit changed the mind, lived together with Cheng Jinyang forcefully. 邢沅芷要退婚,后来因为把柄和利益才改变主意,强行和程晋阳同居。 Cheng Jinyang complies for the gravity algorithm, but will definitely not like her, because instead breaks an engagement with the issue of handle bears a grudge her, therefore A'Zhi A'Zhi called intentionally. 程晋阳为了万有引力算法而答应下来,但肯定不会喜欢她,反而因为退婚和把柄的问题记恨她,所以故意阿芷阿芷地叫。 Starts two people to relate to turn for the better from vol. 2, Cheng Jinyang was also renamed „Yuanzhi”, Xing Yuanzhi also no longer treated him icily, even also the plan continued to fulfill the engagement. 从第二卷开始两人关系转好,程晋阳也改叫“沅芷”了,邢沅芷也不再冷冰冰地对待他,甚至还打算继续履行婚约。 However, in some how many are out of the sentiment , how many are stemming from „Cheng and Xing Families, brothers” political marrying need? Also or together the mutual bundle of conservative secret and empty to meander? 然而,这里面有多少是出于感情,又有多少是出于“程邢两家,同气连枝”的政治联姻需要？亦或是共同保守秘密的互相捆绑和虚以逶迤？ Based on two people not happy passing experience, Xing Yuanzhi lacks self-confidence at heart, Cheng Jinyang also lacks self-confidence at heart, therefore two people can never treat mutually honestly. 基于两人并不愉快的过往经历,邢沅芷心里没底,程晋阳心里也没底,所以两人始终不能互相坦诚相待。 ( E.g. vol. 5 Chapter 43, suggested psychology that Miss A'Zhi is swayed by personal gains and losses ; Vol. 7 Chapter 11, Cheng Jinyang mediates with the dregs male talent skill forcefully. Similar foreshadowing buries many, please seek) (例如第五卷第43章,暗示了阿芷姑娘患得患失的心理;第七卷第11章,程晋阳用屑男天赋技能强行圆场。类似的伏笔埋得很多,请自寻) Until the emergence of this turning point, makes both sides thoroughly clearly recognize each other innermost feelings. 直到这个契机的出现,才让双方彻底认清彼此的内心。 .................. ……………… This foreshadowing is vol. 1 buries, opened until vol. 8, is a very long emotion line. 这个伏笔是第一卷埋的,直到第八卷才揭开,是一条非常长的情感线。 This burying long-line technique, is is actually very unfriendly in net, because many readers like promoting the first impression theory. 这种埋长线的手法,其实在网文里是很不友好的,因为很多读者们喜欢搞第一印象论。 For example, sees Xing Yuanzhi because of the benefit, but lives together with Cheng Jinyang, thought that this female lord nausea, abandons the book. 比如,看到邢沅芷因为利益而和程晋阳同居,就觉得这女主恶心,弃书。 Also for example, saw that Cheng Jinyang „A'Zhi A'Zhi” called, thought that this male lead has not educated very much, abandons the book. 又比如,看到程晋阳“阿芷阿芷”地叫,就觉得这男主很没教养,弃书。 As the author, I naturally impossible them to tell that „does not look rolls”, even they post to accuse me in some deep pool, I also can only pretend that had not detected has this matter( I unable play to pass after all), argued several dry, came from the role body back this pot. 作为作者,我当然不可能跟他们说“不看就滚”,甚至他们在某潭发帖指责我,我也只能假装没察觉到有这回事(毕竟我不能剧透),干巴巴地辩解几句,把这口锅从角色身上背过来。 It is not Jinyang and Yuanzhi has the issue, is my author has the issue, is good? 不是晋阳和沅芷有问题,是我这个作者有问题,好不好？ When I decided like this writes, actually was also psychologically prepared not understood- definitely some people therefore abandon the book. This does not have the matter of means that because you, regardless of writes some anything people to abandon the book. 当我决定了这样写的时候,其实也做好了不被人理解的心理准备-肯定有人因此而弃书。这是没办法的事情,因为你无论写什么都有人弃书。 On many this «Dark green azure» follows to arrive at the old reader of tail from the beginning, this «Miss» opens the book time vanished. 好多上本《苍青》从头跟到尾的老读者,这本《姑娘》开书的时候就消失了。 Therefore I am also unwarrantable, following my writing will let the story that everyone likes, I can only guarantee that writes story that myself likes. 所以我也不能保证,接下来我会写让所有人都喜欢的故事,我只能保证写我自己喜欢的故事。 But sees here you, the taste is exactly same as me, this is not the so-called fate! 而看到这里的你们,口味恰好和我相同,这不就是所谓的缘分嘛！ Before this book opens the book, designs Xing Yuanzhi role character time, my actually already thought: 在本书开书之前,设计邢沅芷角色人设的时候,我其实已经想好了: This miss is a love is clean. She must take baths every day the three times, in the room a day two clean, the bed sheet must trade every day. She goes out must bring the valance hat, parasol and glove dustproof, she noticed that the dirty thing can loathe the serious physiological reaction. 这个姑娘是个爱洁的。她每天要洗三次澡,房间里一天两打扫,床单每天必换。她出门要带帷帽、阳伞和手套防尘,她看到脏东西会厌恶到起严重的生理反应。 She is traditional Aristocratic Family Young Lady, at first even a little looks down upon male lead, dislikes him to come lowly, disliking him is dirty, disliking him is not intelligent. male lead was also therefore laying down a thorn at heart, this punctures has poked there, causing two people unable to approach like two clumsy hedgehog such mutually. 她还是个传统的世家大小姐,最初甚至有点看不起男主,嫌他出身低,嫌他脏,嫌他不聪明。男主也因此在心里埋下了一根刺,这根刺一直戳在那里,导致两人就像两只笨拙的刺猬那样无法互相靠近。 Until this in corpse mountain blood sea that miss who has the serious cleanliness/mysophobia from dirty contamination, from the hell hugs the male lead corner/horn that the severe wound is on the verge of death till. 直到这个有严重洁癖的姑娘从肮脏污秽的尸山血海里,把重伤濒死的男主角从地狱里抱出来为止。 Actually from most starts, my first design to the Xing Yuanzhi this role, only then she treads in the bloodshed hell holds the picture that Cheng Jinyang is walking. 其实从最开始,我对邢沅芷这个角色的第一个设计,就只有她踏在血海地狱里抱着程晋阳走出来的画面。 What a pity I will not paint pictures, the having no way picture comes out, has no way to transmit this picture accurate to everyone. 可惜我不会画画,没法画出来,没法将这个画面精准地传递给大家。 At this point, may have the reader to think that I am washing white Xing Yuanzhi forcefully, I had no way to say. Bold handwriting vigorous style limited, does not demand. 说到这里,可能还会有读者觉得我在强行洗白邢沅芷,那我也没法说更多啦。笔力有限,不强求。 So long as likes the A'Zhi person, can continue to like A'Zhi being good. 只要喜欢阿芷的人,能够继续喜欢阿芷就好。
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