MNAFEO :: Volume #11

#1084: Writes in final ends this words expressing feelings

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Counted on the fingers, from November 30 , 2016 issued Chapter 1, until now two -and-a-half years, this is really long years, therefore, wrote this book to end these three word-time yesterday, even the dauntless man like the old man, cannot bear beautifully 45 degrees corner/horn looks up to the starry sky small has moved fresh, finally baked the vending point one dozen of 82 years of oysters, eight 21 bottles of Pak Wai beer, a person is drinking to 8:20, although does not know that had any significance, but this sounded like fierce had wooden has. 掐指一算,从2016年11月30号发布第一章,至今已有两年半了,这真是一段漫长的岁月,所以,昨天写下本书完这三个字时,即便硬汉如老夫,都忍不住有一股四十五度角仰望星空的明媚小清新有伤感,最后去烧烤摊点了一打八二年的生蚝,就着八块二一瓶的百威啤酒,一个人喝到八点20,虽然不知道有啥意义,但这听起来似乎厉害的有木有。 In brief, the heart myriad sigh with emotion old men, including ending this words expressing feelings can only drag to write to today. 总而言之,心头万千感慨的老夫,连完本感言都只能拖到今天来写了。 This book, as also the old man passed through a life, in the journey, such as the grandmother passed away, the paternal grandmother is hospitalized these matters, made the life of old man increase many regrets, helped the old man obtain many growth, making the old man pay attention to accompany the family member, even new year's celebration time, but also organized a family to travel with the family member specially, although this family travelled, half of time because of not being able to buy the ticket stopped up on the road, the old man lived in the hotel to stay for three days that side Lijiang, one side snatched on the side of the ticket the squatting hotel symbol, but overall, travel that was worth recalling one time, but here. Also wishes fellow book friends to be able wish the entire family happy, the life is pleasant. 这本书,也随着老夫走过了一段人生,旅途中,诸如外婆去世,奶奶入院这些事,也让老夫的人生增添了许多遗憾,也让老夫获得了许多的成长,让老夫更加注意去陪伴家人,甚至过年的时候,还特意和家人组团去了一次家庭旅行,虽说这次家庭旅行,有一半时间因为买不到票而堵在路上,老夫更在丽江那边住酒店住了三天,一边抢票一边蹲酒店码字,但总体而言,还是一次值得回忆的旅行,而在这里也祝愿各位书友能够阖家幸福,生活如意。 Then, in this ends this, chats the matter of this book. 然后,就在这完本之时,就来聊聊这本书的事情吧。 How the initial creation mentality of this book comes, is very simple, came from at the movie! 这本书的最初创作思路是怎么来的呢,很简单,源自于电影！ At that time, the old man is writing the branch to cultivate/repair, the result threw the street thoroughly, threw to casting aside beyond the full attendance, the payment for published piece monthly income only then entered 600, the person was very then puzzled, watched the movie while thought the matter, then, turned to Stephen Chow's boast west swims, saw the result, the back that vermilion Yinwang great sage equal to heaven is going far away, said a that person of probably dog. 那个时候,老夫正在写科修,结果彻底扑街了,扑到撇除全勤外,稿费月收只有入六百,然后人特别困惑,就一边看电影一边想事,然后,翻到周星驰的大话西游,看到结局,朱茵望着齐天大圣远去的背影,笑说那人好像一只狗。 In the past looked the plot that smiled, why did not know, inexplicable dismal well uped. 当年看的笑出来的剧情,不知道为什么,一股莫名的悲凉涌上心头。 Then the inspiration came, most starts, what I want to write is one reads completely the misery, being through a lot protagonist, glances back, thousand sails have crossed, the people are no longer the same, has then turned the head, the superior and inferior qualities all remain behind, are clenching teeth as before, by the story of faith regretless vanguard. 然后灵感来了,最开始的时候,我想写的是一个阅尽苦难,历尽沧桑的主角,蓦然回首,千帆已过,物是人非,然后转过头,是非功过皆留身后,依旧咬着牙,凭借信念无悔前行的故事。 This story, is the story of steel tyrant sky net, right, It is this book initial protagonist. 这个故事,就是钢铁暴君天网的故事,没错,祂才是这本书最初的主角。 However, after having the inspiration, the old man does not discover right, this story really must write, that is oppressive mainstream protagonist, this is ready proper the rhythm that must throw, after all, which reader master likes looking at protagonist blurredly in the destiny, is with one's family broken up and decimated, breaks up a family, throws story. 但是,有了灵感后,老夫发现不对劲,这个故事真要写出来,那就是个虐主流的主角,这是妥妥的要往死里扑的节奏啊,毕竟,哪个读者老爷喜欢看主角在命运迷离之下,家破人亡,妻离子散,一扑到底的故事。 Therefore, the old man adjusts the way that described, but actually the mentality has not changed, takes the steel tyrant sky net as the story that the outset main axle writes as before. 所以,老夫调整了一下描述的方式,但其实思路没有变,依旧是以钢铁暴君天网为起始主轴写的故事。 Therefore, this book I write most satisfied, is the sky net tyrant in facing Jingxiang when super loves your demon fist without the enemy and ourselves, sighed to the moon/month, treated the plot that tied up hands tied, was not helpless, but, had not forgotten, therefore, did not hope. 所以,这本书我写的最满意的,是天网暴君在面对静香的超级无敌我爱你魔拳时,对月而叹,束手待缚的剧情,并非无能为力,只是,不曾忘记,所以,不愿而已。 With the spread of mentality, had the sky net, therefore had with the hostile night real child, there is a story that also launched gradually, there is a destiny with the Yuan ancestor, the story of ashes and profound sage without standing, overlapping, constructed the main program of story, but forever the dark demon emperor, will be the key player that this story will link the preceding with the following, this was also the old man from said long before, forever the dark demon emperor will be very strong character. 随着思路的蔓延,有了天网,所以就有了与之敌对的夜真嗣,也有了渐渐随之展开的故事,也有了天命与元祖,灰烬与玄圣的故事,层层叠叠,构筑了故事的主体大纲,而永暗魔帝,就是这个故事承上启下的核心角色,这也是老夫从很早以前就说了,永暗魔帝是非常重要角色。 As for Bai Qige? He is never protagonist, but leniency, enjoys doing charitable things, generous natural grandfather, participates stories, witnesses the protagonist lives. 至于白岐歌？他从不是主角,只是慈悲为怀,乐善好施,慷慨大方的老爷爷,去参与一个个的故事,去见证一位位主角的人生。 Although the writing approach was stranger, but I think that the book friends can understand, after all old man on the shelf time explained that this is one from hi novel, but at that time what the old man had not said that this type from hi not only plays the stem, but more essential writing approach issue. 虽然写作思路古怪了一些,不过我想书友们能理解的,毕竟老夫上架的时候就说明了,这是一本自嗨到底的小说,而老夫那个时候没说的是,这种自嗨不仅仅是玩梗,而是更本质的写作思路问题。 This book, by many book friends has been said is the spoof extremely, or is play anything, naturally, the old man has known, is only, somewhat and that's the end, the creation approach had intentionally, what reading feeling involves the old man actually to take to the reader, the old man deliberately considered, since the mentality came from at Stephen Chow's movie, that pressed this style to walk, after writing one to make the reader look, will say 【fuck this anything ghost】 Novel. 这本书,一直都被很多书友说是恶搞太过,或者是出戏什么的,当然,老夫一直都知道的,只是,也有几分故意就是了,创作思路有了,就涉及到老夫到底想带给读者一个什么样的阅读感受呢,老夫寻思了一下,既然思路源自于周星驰的电影,那就按这个画风走,写一个让读者看了后会说【卧槽这什么鬼】的小说吧。 Actually this also conforms to the style of old man, after all the old man also likes writing, therefore appeared obviously very hot blooded, actually very spoof plot, although has been criticized affects to read the experience, but the old man refuses stubbornly to repent as before, because old man from hi this aspect is also being very firm, therefore, borrows the lines of clown, that is...... 其实这也蛮符合老夫的画风的,毕竟老夫也喜欢这么写,所以就出现了明明很热血,却很是恶搞的剧情,虽然一直被批评说影响阅读体验,但老夫依旧死不悔改,因为老夫的在自嗨这方面也是很坚定的,所以,借用一下小丑的台词,那就是…… Then makes anything seriously, smiles! 那么严肃做什么呢,笑一笑吧！ This book is not certainly perfect, there are many issues, but that was also individual limited bold handwriting vigorous style, only after can await calmly, slowly polished, but was one of them, this book also embodied old man many painstaking care, did not pull what article to is like writing the smuggled goods everywhere along the road or, because this was the attitude issue of writing. 这本书当然并非尽善尽美,也有很多问题,但那也是个人笔力所限了,只能静待以后慢慢打磨,而在其中,这本书也凝聚了老夫许多心血,不扯什么文以载道或者就是喜欢写私货,因为这是写作的态度问题。 The promotion exercises martial arts, trades the map to come one set of these operations again, this book is few, the old man makes best effort, hopes that reaches an agreement a story to the book friends, not necessarily is the splendid story, but at least, is the story in old man heart, but this story, was not that type looks began 30,000 characters, can directly putting in order this book plot development guesses a near perfect work. 升级练功,换地图重来一套这些操作,这本书还是很少的,老夫尽最大努力,希望给书友们说好一个故事,不一定是多精彩的故事,但起码,是老夫心中的故事,而这个故事,不是那种看了开头三万字,就可以直接把整本书剧情发展猜个八九不离十的作品。 No matter although can achieve, but from the opening, until the book ends that chapter, the old man is trying hard as before, hopes that takes to the book friends to find everything fresh and new, is worth, does right by the plot that you subscribe. 虽然不管做不做得到,但从开头,直至全书完那一章,老夫依旧在努力,希望带给书友们耳目一新,值得,也对得起你们订阅的剧情。 The words many did not say, in brief, thank the support of fellow book friends, under us this book said goodbye. 话多不言,总而言之,感谢各位书友们的支持,我们下本书再见。
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