The related Lüliang situation, said, then no longer raised. Later inquired about probably Ning Yi this time comes Capital City other things that prepares to handle, Ning Yi then said that must look for two courtyards as well as is textile line and matter of Alehouse selected location. Among this, Yao Zunian and Cheng Zhouhai in Capital City were local bullies, what they were long was the poetry human relations, speaking of finding these places, the access road/simply said must drag Ji Kun. Is discussing, some people walk with a smile from the front gate: „These things, look for Ji Kun might as well to look for me.” 有关吕梁的情况,说了一阵之后便不再提了。之后大概问及宁毅这次过来京城准备做的其它事情,宁毅便说了要找两个院子以及为布行、酒楼选址的事情。这中间,尧祖年、成舟海在京城都是地头蛇了,不过他们长的是诗文交际,说到找这些地方,便道还是得拖上纪坤。正议论间,有人笑着从院门走进来:“这些事情,找纪坤还不如找我吧。” nevertheless of passing through the gate wears the white clothing, it seems like natural middle-aged Monk, the appearance is proper, the vision is calm, has the happy expression, first unexpectedly gathers ten with Ning Yi: „This is Liheng, when Jiangning 1st talent, well met......” Ning Yi set out to salute, he also made self introduction, „this poor monk Fahao Jiao Ming.” 进门的却是一名身着白衣,看来潇洒的中年和尚,样貌端方俊逸,目光沉稳清澈,带着笑意,首先倒是跟宁毅合十:“这位便是立恒吧,江宁第一才子,久仰了……”宁毅起身行礼时,他也做了自我介绍,“贫僧法号觉明。” At this time although seems like one pile of idle talks, in fact said is the Secret Investigation Division secrets. In this Monk can enter directly, obviously is also in government residence the position quite high person, he and Yao Zunian, Cheng Zhouhai are also old friends, moved the chair to sit down, asked the houses type that Ning Yi wanted probably, then nods, sweeps the material that the people have taken, asked: „Before this poor monk and Niangong and the others chatted, most often mentioned, was Liheng in Hangzhou method, this Liheng went to Shandong (mountain east), does not know that first prepared to start to where?” 此时虽然看来是一堆闲话,实际上说的都是密侦司的机密。这和尚能够径直入内,可见也是相府中地位颇高之人,他与尧祖年、成舟海也已是老相识,搬了椅子坐下,大概问起宁毅想要的房舍类型,然后点了点头,扫过众人拿出来的资料,问道:“之前贫僧与年公等人闲聊时,最常说起的,也就是立恒在杭州的手段,这次立恒去山东,不知首先准备向何处下手？” „First takes a look at Solitary Dragon Ridge probably.” “大概先瞧瞧独龙岗。” „Oh...... here truly possibly becomes the breach, Liheng is young, vision vicious......” “哦……此处确实可能成为突破口,立恒年纪轻轻,眼光老辣……” Liangshan cannot take by the officers, naturally can only look for the helper circuitously, Ning Yi chooses Solitary Dragon Ridge to mention is reasonable, actually the revoke settling of accounts can not be extraordinary. Sowed dissension four characters to say simple, operation in fact was exceptionally complex, must look at the skill of everyone. The grape trellis next several people also said one in view of Liangshan. When Qin Siyuan comes, then also coursed the Hangzhou Tyrant Blade Battalion matter the topic, reform that a series of seems like the child's play. Although the people the attitude is warm. Ning Yi too had not loudly discussed **. The Tyrant Blade Battalion matter is complex, related to the change of system, took the embryonic form of democratic system to put several to study the Confucianist to study in front of person for a lifetime at present, Ning Yi was somewhat afraid. 梁山不能以官兵直取,当然只能迂回寻找帮手,宁毅选独龙岗说来有道理,其实倒算不得出奇。挑拨离间四个字说起来简单,实际上的运作还是异常复杂的,得看每个人的功力。葡萄架下几人针对梁山又说了一阵。秦嗣源过来时,便也将话题引向了杭州霸刀营的事情,那一系列看起来儿戏的改革。只是众人虽然态度热情。宁毅对此却没有太大讨论**。霸刀营的事情过于复杂,涉及体制的改变,拿着民主制的雏形放到眼前几个研究儒家研究了一辈子的人面前,宁毅还是有些心虚的。 Naturally, this is also because Ning Yi in the heart has the millennium later experiences, instead thought many. In in the heart of Qin Siyuan these people, where will have the concept about later generation democracy, even if there is a similar thing, still bases on the start of Confucianist. Because of several thousand years, on this lands all things, come from this system. Ning Yi these things, although goes into seriously to change, but regarding Qin Siyuan and the others. First puts on, is their in the heart beforehand view. 当然,这也是因为宁毅心中有着千年后的见识,反而想得太多了。在秦嗣源这些人的心中,哪里会有关于后世民主的概念,就算有类似的东西,也是基于儒家的发端。因为数千年来,这片土地上一切东西,都是源自这个制度的。宁毅的那些东西,虽然深究起来有所改变,但对于秦嗣源等人来说。首先套上的,还是他们心中以前的说法。 Everyone all may for the Yao and Shun, people your Monarch be light, these things, by no means departs from the classics and betrays principle. In several perfect conditions that the Confucianist devises, in the ancient times the virtuous rule of sage was such, the king enlightens the common people perfectly. People's each is rational, can distinguish to wrong, in the such situation, the monarchial power was in fact pushed to the symbolic position. For over a thousand years the development of Confucianist. Hopes promotes enlightens, after pinnacle, everyone has good manners the heavy righteousness, this is one of the pursue possibilities. Ning Yi in these articles. Hope everyone who instills into indistinctly can the independent and initiative idea, Qin Siyuan and the others be able to look. But even if induces, still makes the imagination toward this aspect. 人人皆可为尧舜,民贵君轻,这些东西,并不离经叛道。在儒家构想的几个完美状态中,古代圣人的德治就是这样的,君王完美的教化万民。人民每一个都懂道理,能够辨别对错,在这样的情况下,君权实际上就是被推向了象征地位。上千年来儒家的发展。希望推广教化,到了极致之后,人人都懂礼重义,这就是追求的可能性之一。宁毅在那些文章里。隐约灌输的希望每一个人都能独立、主动的想法,秦嗣源等人是能看出来的。但就算归纳出来,也只是往这个方面做推想。 Later the people eat a meal in government residence together, by the time later, each other discussed that was still many ideas of related Confucianism. Yao Zunian, Jiao Ming and Qin Siyuan are can discuss as for Cheng Zhouhai, occasionally inquired about Ning Yi, Ning Yi unexpectedly received the does not say good principle, hid one's incompetence by remaining silent on own initiative. Looks in people's eyes, unexpectedly thought that he still had the resistance. Naturally, the opposite party hides at heart a such big heart knot, was impossible just to know makes a clean breast, several people of present many have regarded as the comrade who Ning Yi endured to discuss without doing fully, to his temporary retention, can understand, such important idea, was everyone gets after certainly to know each other well, possibly said. 之后众人在相府一同用膳,到得时间稍晚,彼此议论的,仍旧是有关儒学的诸多想法。尧祖年、觉明、秦嗣源乃至于成舟海都能讨论一番,偶尔问及宁毅,宁毅倒是秉承不说不错的原则,主动藏拙。看在众人眼中,倒是觉得他仍旧对此有抗拒。当然,对方藏在心里这么大的一个心结,不可能刚刚认识就和盘托出,几人如今多少都已将宁毅视为足堪坐而论道的同志,对他暂时的保留,也都能够理解,那样重要的想法,当然是大家相熟以后,才可能说出来的。 In conversation, Tiannan north spoke of the surrender of this resentful army, or Ning Yi to present Wu Dynasty Tian Hu, Wang Qing and the others in all directions view of rebellion. Ning Yi prepares to promote Zhu's, controls the idea of public opinion not to decide completely by the storyteller, but takes the idea of arranging the martial arts (social) circles hundred big expert lists treated as the joke to raise, people Haha laughed from the beginning, soon after actually also detected profound meaning, Qin Siyuan said with a smile: „If Liheng has a mind to handle this matter, Old Man certain support.” 言谈之中,也天南地北地说及这次怨军的投诚,又或是宁毅对眼下武朝田虎、王庆等人四处造反的看法。宁毅准备推广竹记,以说书人掌控舆论的想法还没有完全决定下来,只是拿着排武林百大高手榜的想法当做玩笑提了一下,众人一开始哈哈大笑,随后却也察觉出其中的深意,秦嗣源笑道:“若立恒有心办这事,老夫一定支持。” Jiao Ming Monk also thought that gathers ten interesting: „This poor monk can also help, after all that Iron Arm Zhou Dong, was to also see in the past, Haha......” 觉明和尚也觉得有趣地合十道:“贫僧也可以帮忙,毕竟那铁臂膀周侗,当年也是见过的,哈哈……” Once the martial arts (social) circles expert list comes out, really must have an effect, makes the promotion, must the huge propaganda team, hit a foreshadowing at this time, when the time comes Ning Yi must promote Zhu's, then can success when conditions are ripe. 一旦武林高手榜出来,真要起作用,做推广,就必须有一个庞大的宣传团队,这时候打个伏笔,到时候宁毅要推广竹记,也便能水到渠成。 As for the detailed plan, plan and function, Ning Yi thought that first does not need to make a clean breast quite well, handles as personal, can be a business, after certain scale, can cooperate with Secret Investigation Division. If gives the low-down from the beginning, receives the condition of suppression by Secret Investigation Division now, first can does not say be supported, even Ok, a huge system, is impossible to grasp on own hand. This selfishness, Ning Yi has. after all present Wu Dynasty, no one understands the use and function of display propaganda system compared with him. 至于详细的方略、计划和作用,宁毅觉得还是先不用和盘托出比较好,作为私人来操办,可以算是一场生意,到了一定规模之后,可以与密侦司合作。而若一开始就交底,以密侦司如今还受到压制的状态,先不说能不能得到支持,就算可以,如此庞大的一个体系,也不可能掌握在自己的手上。这点私心,宁毅还是有的。毕竟如今的武朝,没有任何人比他更懂利用和发挥宣传体系的作用。 chattering continuously chattering continuously, the grape trellis in Bianliang dim light of night Xun red the lights, the city black color was deep gradually, pedestrian contact, carriage tick-tock, ship's light Miaomiao/remote(ly) Hejian. In Lüliang Mountain(s) Qingmu stronghold that also in such night, Ning Yi and the others raised some time ago, an accident is happening. 叽叽喳喳叽叽喳喳,葡萄架在汴梁的夜色里薰红了灯火,城市墨色渐深,行人往来,马车滴答,船灯渺渺河间过。也就是在这样的夜里,宁毅等人不久前提起的吕梁山青木寨上,一场变故正在发生着。 The bloody spread, the slaughtered sound pierced the dim light of night and flame, among Zhaizi (stockaded village) that the aspen builds, groups of fights are conducted, flow the arrow to fly occasionally, whose calling out sound in the nighttime sky hears. 血腥蔓延,厮杀的声音刺穿了夜色与火光,白杨木筑起的寨子间,一拨拨的战斗正在进行,流矢偶尔飞过,夜空中传来谁的嘶喊声。 However, the war that in Zhaizi (stockaded village) erupts, actually also already arrived at the last act at this time. A manpower few side, at this time living about hundred people of already were sphered. But in the houses in military camp deep place, a decisive fight, is presenting the lopsided condition in the flame. 不过,寨子中爆发的战事,此时其实也已经到达尾声了。人手较少的一方,此时活着的近百人都已经被围住。而在营寨深处的房舍间,一场决定性的战斗,也正在火光中呈现着一面倒的状况。 The Qingmu stronghold the expansion was rapid recently, the houses construct somewhat hastily, now in the small tunnel road fork that flame sways, what battle is the four person's shadows of three male and one female, three men look like a side, the body threw over the mail-armor and helmet, one of them is tall and powerfully built, grasps the heavy spear/gun, it seems like it is Leader, the other two hold plain blade respectively. In the offensive of howling, that stature tall and slender female nevertheless empty-handed, several fight, moves aside and captures, then a person of Director plain Daodan on sky, as the heavy spear/gun comes, the female leisurely strolls the form that leads the way to advance suddenly, in an instant the shape like the phantom, entered before the body that causes heavy spear/gun. That causes the tall and strong man of heavy spear/gun in a hurry the spear/gun one horizontal. The tremendous strength moves mountains to raid, his is not steady, staggers flies to withdraw ** the step halted the body. 青木寨最近扩张迅速,房舍建得有些仓促,如今在那火光摇晃的小小巷道岔口,交战的是三男一女的四道人影,其中三名男子看来是一方,身上均披了甲胄,其中一人身材魁梧,手持重枪,看来是头领,另外两人则各持朴刀。呼啸的攻势中,那身材高挑的女子却是空手,几下交手,躲闪、擒拿,然后将一人的朴刀弹指挥上了天空,随着重枪呼啸而来,那女子信步前行的身影陡然突进,刹那间形如魅影,跨进了使重枪者的身前。那使重枪的魁梧汉子仓促间将枪一横。巨大的力量排山倒海般的袭来,他脚下不稳,踉跄间飞退出**步才站住了身子。 This he has not seen clearly, seemed only the female on his spear's/gun's body with thrusting, was because side held plain blade another person to brandish a blade to cut. Then the female named Lu Hongti followed the reversed direction the strength to avoid the blade light. However such vigorous strength, copiously like the water current, seeming like is actually not arrives at the peak suddenly, non- is the brute force, is he has listened, reaching the pinnacle in vigor. 这一下他根本就没有看清楚,仿佛只是女子在他的枪身上用力推了一下,也是因为旁边持朴刀的另一人挥刀斩来。那名叫陆红提的女子才顺着反方向的力道避开了刀光。然而这样雄浑的力量,沛然如水流,看起来却并非是猝然之间就到达巅峰,非是蛮力,便是他听过的,登峰造极的内劲了。 This strength by no means monstrous waves, pat likely loudly. During the short contacts, feels likes the giant vortex center, makes people be hard to resist radically. But this is called the Lu Hongti female to look like 20 years old, in previous contact. Comments some kernels to be even friendly related to her wind, even if there is saying that her martial arts excelled, still without saying excel to this degree, was this monster is it possible that inadequate? 这力量并不像巨浪,轰然间就拍上来。短短的接触间,给人的感觉有如巨大的漩涡中央,根本让人难以抵御。而这名叫陆红提的女子看来不过二十来岁,先前的接触里。有关她的风评甚至有些仁善可欺,就算有说她武艺高强的,也没说过会高强到这个程度,这莫非是妖怪不成？ This evening's panic-stricken. He is not arrives to feel at this time, almost can say. From moment start of launching an attack, his already felt. 这个晚上的惊骇。他并非是到得此时才感受到,几乎可以说。从发难的第一刻开始,他就已经感觉到了。 The name of this tall and strong man is called Cao Hong, is under Tian Hu guards one of the Golden Crow range Great General. The Tian Hu rebellion, the Lüliang Mountain(s) smuggling, two sides also somewhat communicated in the past, only if the Lüliang robbers and bandits were, will otherwise give Tian Hu here several points of faces generally. The Qingmu stronghold actually develops before Lüliang Mountain(s), that side Tian Hu had the military officer to send the envoy to come to discuss marriage with Lu Hongti, takes advantage that the two sides are marrying, Lu Hongti, although rejected, but this matter actually many people are not earnest, afterward both sides were also the past relations. 这魁梧汉子的名字叫做曹洪,乃是田虎麾下驻守金乌岭的大将之一。田虎造反,吕梁山走私,以往两边也有些来往,吕梁的盗匪除非是过不下去了,否则一般都会给田虎这边几分面子。青木寨在吕梁山以前其实就发展得还可以,田虎那边曾经有将领派过使者过来与陆红提提亲,打着两边联姻的算盘,陆红提虽然拒绝了,但这事倒也没多少人认真,后来双方也还是以往的关系。 By beforehand one year, the Qingmu stronghold seemed like the person of high skill direction, grew strong rapidly, and also annexed the surrounding some villages. The perquisite seemed like big, that side Tian Hu has not moved, had the Qingmu stronghold own person to want the internal strife, related the Golden Crow range, said that is wants present Fort Master Lu Hongti to overthrow to leave office, hopes that can aid. 直到之前的一年里,青木寨似乎是得了高人指点,迅速发展壮大,并且还吞并了周围的一些村寨。油水看起来就大了起来,田虎那边倒还没怎么动心,就有青木寨自己的人想要内讧,联系了金乌岭,说是想要将如今的寨主陆红提推翻下台,希望能予以援助。 Although the Qingmu stronghold developed recently well, but Lu Hongti is a female, year ago went out a long time, in Zhaizi (stockaded village) deferred to the custom to walk, develops very well, inside many man then had the lust for power, thinks that should not dominate to a such woman the power. Cao Hong inquired here situation, the Qingmu stronghold incorporates the surrounding village, the itself foundation is not steady, so long as launches an attack suddenly, direct descendant kills with her nearby several Lu Hongti, after that must seize power is also the simple matter. 青木寨虽然最近发展不错,但陆红提本身是女子,年前又出去了很长一段时间,寨子里按照规矩在走,发展得很好,里面的不少男子便有了权欲,认为不该将权力给这样的一个女人把持着。曹洪打听了这边的情况,青木寨收编周围的村寨,本身根基还不算稳,只要猝然发难,将陆红提与她身边的几名嫡系杀死,此后要夺权也就是很简单的事情。 Therefore this time Cao Hong Ling more than 20 soldiers will escort the cargo to walk into the mountain, pretending to go to the Liao (distant) boundary to trade the commodity the attitude, because he is the Tian Hu person, is walking large quantities of cargos, the income of Qingmu stronghold not poor, Lu Hongti is quite kind to him. Everyone is Leader, lives hand to mouth to eat in the great distance not far place, he had also seen Lu Hongti one time previously actually, only felt, although is it seems like valiant, but unlike mingling among this piece of female bandit is quite. The such female general is not long-time, mixes days after the surroundings, if is not experiences suffering to humiliate in a Chen corpse in mass grave, is degenerates into some big Leader room something for one's own exclusive use, actually most females will choose the latter on own initiative. 于是这次曹洪领了二十余名兵将押运货物进山,装作要去辽境换物资的态度,由于他是田虎的人,又走着大批的货物,青木寨的收入也不菲,陆红提对他还颇为亲切。大家都是头领,在相隔不远的地方混饭吃,他先前其实也见过陆红提一次,只觉得虽然看来英姿飒爽,但与混迹在这一片的女匪还是颇为不同的。这样的女子一般过不长久,在周围混一段日子以后,若非是受尽凌辱陈尸于某个乱葬岗上,便是沦为某个大头领的房中禁脔,其实多数女子还是会主动选择后者。 Actually, come time, in his heart has also thought this matter. 其实,来的时候,他心中也是有想过这件事的。 These person actually also by no means clear Lu Hongti martial arts heights that in the Qingmu stronghold wants to seize power, actually is what degree, only said that is very fierce, can kill to kill in the frigid battlefield, the minor wound severe wound receives. But the such ability, veteran actually also many can achieve. Cao Hong is thinks otherwise from the beginning, but for safety, these people in Qingmu stronghold, stole away the Lu Hongti sword temporarily, but Cao Hong, arranged eight pro- soldiers, launches an attack with him together. 青木寨中想要夺权的这些人其实也并不清楚陆红提的武艺高低,到底是个什么程度,只说是非常厉害,能在惨烈的战场上杀进杀出,轻伤重伤都受过。但这样的本领,一名老兵其实也多少能做到。曹洪一开始是不以为然的,但为了安全起见,青木寨中的这些人,还是暂时偷走了陆红提的剑,而曹洪这边,足足安排了八名亲兵,与他一同发难。 Without many martial arts (social) circles expert, can resist making a move of together nine people in situation empty-handed, he is also hopes that can hold this beautiful female, received the room, however almost from the beginning, him regretted. 没有多少的武林高手,能在空手的情况下抵御九个人的一同出手,他也是希望能将这美丽的女子抓住,收入房中,然而几乎在一开始,他就后悔了。 Both pro- soldiers put the body of oneself companion, that flash blade soldier intersects, in pā the sound sound like the sudden downpour, actually became the oneself person to hit the oneself person completely. Cao Hong and nearby eight pro- soldiers are also have fought many battles, the formation and coordination also underwent the innumerable drills, but in the middle of the log cabin that launches an attack, every attacked almost at a crucial moment to be hidden by the opposite party. When Cao Hong realized matter rather complicated, look already of opposite party changes into the cold ice, works as his surface both hands to wield fiercely, a throat of pro- soldier will rip to rupture, then wields that corpse to work as shield, dislodges the people were defending strictly the window forcefully. 两名亲兵都扑在了自己同伴的身上,那一瞬间刀兵相交,噼里啪啦的声音响如急雨,却完全成了自己人打自己人。曹洪与身边的八名亲兵也算是身经百战,阵型和配合也经过了无数操练,但在那发难的木屋当中,每一下攻击几乎都被对方千钧一发地躲了过去。当曹洪意识到事情不简单的时候,对方的眼神已经化为寒冰,当着他的面双手猛挥,将其中一名亲兵的喉管撕得爆裂开来,然后挥起那尸体当挡箭牌,硬生生地撞出了众人都严密守着的窗口。 That really damn —— 那真是见鬼了—— *************** *************** ps: Opens the book review area to discover that were many red to hit to enjoy. Whose such is crazed, I renewed such to give back to me to hit to enjoy so many slowly...... ps:一打开书评区发现多了一条红色打赏。谁这么丧心病狂,我更新这么慢还给我打赏了这么多…… Uh, actually wants saying that thanks...... thanks the support. 呃,其实想说,谢谢……谢谢支持。 The day before yesterday had a matter, „banana boat” in the group had a about hundred people of slaughter, Uh, is a manager kicked many people, the group lord her administration authority, then held me saying that was sorry. Actually I when the symbol condition is not good already rarely to go to the QQ group. Possibly therefore is also very difficult to play the role of active atmosphere, many people dived. Before that manager, with me is very ripe, she often introduced that various types play to me, sometimes I do not play am not good, afterward I renewed the slow time. She always accuses my behavior with the moral behavior or anything's related, I am very uncomfortable, each other then gradually became estranged. 前天发生了一件事,“香蕉船”的群里发生了一起近百人的屠杀,呃,也就是其中一位管理员踢了很多人,群主下了她的管理权限,然后托我说一声抱歉。其实我在码字状态不好的时候已经很少去qq群。可能因此也很难起到活跃气氛的作用,有许多人潜水了。那位管理员以前跟我是很熟的,她常常介绍各种给我玩,有时候我不玩还不行,后来我更新慢的时候。她总是指责我的行为跟人品或者什么什么的有关,我很不爽,彼此便逐渐疏远了。 Noon yesterday time editor asked me to chat very much embarrassed that kind of person who —— I have actually disturbed the editor, therefore private chatted many —— she to say before, you had the opportunity become to the high god, but you did not renew, missed a lot of opportunities. Actually I have also been very guilty about the edition. I write a book so long, the editors look after to me very much, I often thought that is unfair to these recommendations, but does not have the means. Has to say my reason to her. 昨天中午的时候编辑找我聊天——其实我一直是很不好意思打扰编辑的那类人,所以以前私聊也不多——她说,你是有机会成为至高神的,但你不更新,错失了很多机会。其实我对编辑也一直很愧疚。我写书这么久,编辑们都对我很照顾,我时常觉得对不起那些推荐,但是没有办法。只好跟她说了我的理由。 Sky —— of forum —— dragon several days, I already does not go to early had a discussion, my friend told me, why I chatted me no longer to go to there reason with him. The friends these rounds that I said the forum, then I also saw various opinions. 早几天,一个我已经不怎么去的论坛——龙的天空——发生了一场讨论,我的一个朋友跟我说了,然后我跟他聊了一下我为什么不再去那里的理由。朋友将我说的那些发上了论坛,然后我也去看到了各种的言论。 Because of these matters. I want to say a thing, has thanks everyone's reason about me, has about me with the reason that friend alienates, has about me to the reason that the editor said that also there is about me gradually does not go to the reason of forum. These thing actually some do not gather the net article appropriate to the occasion, I had not necessarily said before clearly, but I want to say at this time. 因为这几件事。我想说一点东西,有关于我感谢大家的理由,有关于我与那位朋友疏远的理由,有关于我跟编辑说的理由,也有关于我逐渐不去论坛的理由。这些东西其实有些不合网文的时宜,我以前未必清楚地说过,但这时候我想说一说。 Before for several years, the net article depends on the traditional literature to develop for the foundation, at that time everyone at the forum discussed the article, what discusses how to improve yy in various techniques, was considering unceasingly the value of yy this type of thing, all technique depended on the traditional literature to come. Afterward the system about yy gradually precipitated, the traditional literature gradually faded out, now people write an article, at the forum discussed that frequently where you can see them to tell you are a forbidden area, where was not good to write, hopes that people avoided, they made the pattern and repertoire yy, gradually contracted, seeks for the shortcut of becoming famous, then the new friend can only see a stretch of small world. 数年以前,网文依托传统文学为根基发展起来,那时候大家在论坛上讨论文章的时候,所讨论的是如何以各种手法来完善yy,也不断地考虑着yy这种东西的价值,一切的手法都是依托传统文学而来的。后来关于yy的体系逐渐沉淀下来,传统文学则逐渐淡出了,如今人们写文章,在论坛上讨论的时候,你常常可以看到他们告诉你哪里是禁区,哪里是不好写的,希望人们去避免,他们将yy做成模式和套路,逐渐收缩,寻找成名的捷径,然后新来的朋友就只能看见一片小小的天地。 Actually without where is a forbidden area, only then the author writes cannot write nothing more. yy is the traditional literature never has the barrier, took in the traditional literature „how appealing” part to take the discussion and as pursue the ultimate objective at most alone nothing more, however, the complete picture of true understanding entire literature system, will have the possibility „appealingly” to unearth the pinnacle truly, because of the utilization of various techniques, the thoughts of various reversed directions, the function that the style as well as contrasted, had the interesting part. 其实没有哪里是禁区,只有作者写不写得好而已。yy是与传统文学从来就不存在隔阂,顶多是把传统文学中“如何吸引人”这一部分单独拿出来讨论和作为追求的终极目标了而已,但是啊,只有真正了解整个文学体系的全貌,才有可能真正将“吸引人”挖掘到极致,因为各种手法的运用,各种反方向的思维,文笔以及烘托的作用,都是有妙处的。 I told others the net article and traditional literature do not have the difference the time before usually like this said that that is, we write a thing, no matter places online hands over the magazine company publishing house, content that you write, will not change. But already is now different, I will sometimes hear some friends saying: „We write the net article.” The long-time time later, actually their already thinks is „writes the net article”, in this concept, actually meaning, we writes such person of one pile of trash, we to make money. When people set limit to oneself, was actually very difficult to walk. The definition of net article, no longer publishes in online article nothing more, moreover it is one step below others, wants the careless trash compared with others the writing, when author thinks at heart like this, he no longer has the advance driving force, that was really one step below others. 我以前告诉别人网文与传统文学没有区别的时候通常是这样说的,那就是,我们写一篇东西,不管放在网上还是交到杂志社出版社,你写的内容,是不会变的。但现在已经不同了,我有时候会听见一些朋友说:“我们不过是写网文的。”长久的时间下来,其实他们已经自认为是“写网文的”,在这个概念里,其实意思就是说,我们不过就是写这样一堆垃圾的人,我们不过就是为了赚钱。当人们给自己设限的时候,其实就很难走出去了。网文的定义,不再是发表在网上的文章而已,而且它就是低人一等,比别人要马虎垃圾的文字,当作者的心里这样认为的时候,他就不再有前进的动力,那就真的低人一等了。 But to me, we before the concept of yy was not clear probes it in various by techniques, tried to understand it, had about various difficulties, or forbidden area and so on, was the failure or the setback that because we experienced initially defined. But to entered a group of people of forum newly, they think that net article 60 points of intensive system on already is the apex, even vowed solemnly that said the certain books of net article endure compared with Dream of the Red Chamber, is accepted to the Nobel Literature Prize sufficiently, and tries to understand the system of teaches you to write the article the time by them, such discussion. Will turn into the embarrassed thing. They will tell you by their understanding, you do not excel at this, you excel at that but no one said, does not excel regarding us, how we should break through. 而对于我来说,我们以前在yy的概念还不清晰的时候就在以各种手法试探它,试图理解它,有关于各种难点,或者说禁区之类的,也是因为我们当初经历的失败或是挫折而定义下来。但到了新入论坛的一批人,他们以为网文这个60分的速成体系就已经是顶点,甚至信誓旦旦地说网文的某些书堪比红楼梦,足以入围诺贝尔文学奖,并且试图以他们理解的这个体系来教你写文的时候,那样的讨论。就会变成很令人难堪的东西。他们会以他们的理解告诉你,你不擅长这个,你擅长那个,而再也没有人说,对于我们不擅长的,我们应该如何去突破。 But the yy system also has its truth, yesterday I the editor told these that „honestly speaking I exercise now nothing necessity in the judgment standard of net article, the plot circle that I pursue melts, the introduction , elucidation , transposition and summary I want to achieve as far as possible perfectly. Putting of each line and receives must do clearly. These things complete very difficultly, to the enhancement of yy effect, is the wasted effort. Before can achieve nine points of yy, these completed, can achieve effect.” 但yy体系也有它的道理,昨天我跟编辑说“老实说我现在锻炼的这些在网文的评判标准上没什么必要,我追求的情节的圆融,起承转合我想做到尽量完美。每一条线的放和收都要做清楚。这些东西做好很难,对yy效果的增强,算是事倍功半。以前能做到九分的yy,这些做好了,能达到十分的效果。” I spend with all one's heart the strength. Only can make your impressions increase a point, but I want to take a look am very what appearance, 11 is what appearance, 12 is what appearance...... actually to most people, took nine points also enough, even was very good. 我费尽心力。只能让你们的观感增加一分,但我就是很想看看十分是个什么样子,十一分是个什么样子,十二分是个什么样子……其实对绝大多数的人来说,要九分也就够了,甚至很好了。 Then had a moderator to say in that post, lk was one mutually the place that helped lead by the hand. They said the experience above, hopes beginner who can help the net article, hopes that I can say the own experience. However for these years, my almost already no longer said my idea to the writing a book in the network. It is not a poor thing but mine own, because, I feel to others, my these experiences are not good. 然后在那个帖子里有一位版主说,lk是一个互相帮助提携的地方。他们在上面说经验,希望能帮助到网文的入门者,也希望我可以说出自己的经验。但是这几年,我几乎已经不再在网络上跟人说我对写书的想法了。并非敝帚自珍,而是因为,我觉得对他人来说,我的这些经验是不好的。 Actually very simple. In this world, among people. Actually the phase difference of intelligence quotient, the phase difference of ability is not many, wants to complete compared with others, is two characters: Going all out. These two characters have no way ambiguously, fights valiantly, matter can complete. Many people think that I write slowly, am being loaf, but I dare to tell the person at any time, in writing a book, I goes all out compared with you. I sit in front of the computer every day, cannot write the thing time could not eat meal unable to play the thing, the work and rest was more chaotic head much to tie tight, the pain must unable to bear. But I can the code the character come time, spiritual happy is not painful, can play, debated......, because I really like writing a book. 其实很简单。在这个世界上,人与人之间。其实智商的相差,能力的相差都不是很多,想要比别人做得好,就是两个字:拼命。这两个字没法含糊,把命拼上,事情就能做好。许多人以为我写得慢,是在偷懒,但是我在任何时候都敢跟人说,在写书上,我比你拼命。我每天都坐在电脑前面,写不出东西的时候吃不下饭玩不了东西,作息混乱得一塌糊涂脑袋紧绷,痛得受不了。但我能码出字来的时候,精神舒畅头也不痛,可以跟人游戏,跟人辩论……因为我真的喜欢写书。 I am the person who follows, I believe that perhaps, placed me to starve to death trembling and carefully in the ancient times. I have also felt, can depend upon writing a book to support oneself, to me met the greatest luck. Perhaps the luck almost, illuminates my such character only to write a book earnestly, does not pay attention to any operation, must starve to death. After I gradually a little wrote the fame, in the network asked how I wrote a book, in more or less will affect to judge because of me, they will perhaps feel, believes the banana can succeed, but not only for a coordinated discussion, consulted the secrets like on forum these people. 我算是遵循古法的人,我相信战战兢兢、一步一个脚印,放在古代我也许就饿死了。我也一直觉得,能够依靠写书养活自己,对我来说是遇上了莫大的运气。可运气差点,也许照我这样字埋头只写书,不去理会任何经营,还是得饿死。当我逐渐写得有点名气了以后,在网络上问我如何写书的,或多或少会因为我这个人而影响判断里,他们也许会觉得,相信香蕉就可以成功,而不仅仅是为了一场对等的讨论,就像上论坛请教秘笈的那些人一样。 Me, self-criticizing is different from the law person, to myself, I can severity constantly, compelling oneself headache losing sleep unable to sleep, has obviously perhaps „almost” the idea thought that is not very good. But to others, I do not hope after they listened to my words, turns into this, does not hope that they spent were more successful than others many several times of efforts, especially did not want them to starve to death, because naturally was unfair, therefore I do not dare to say these. 在我而言,律己与律人不同,对我自己,我可以一味的严苛,逼得自己头痛失眠睡不着觉,明明有个或许“差不多”的构思却偏偏觉得还不够好。但对别人,我不希望他们听了我的话以后变成这样,不希望他们费了比别人多几倍的努力再成功,尤其不希望他们饿死,因为那是不公平的,所以我不敢跟人说这些。 But in my selfishness, has the hope: Why my can't such succeed? We from infancy to maturity, others said can succeed conscientiously, I am writing a book, all my energy threw to write a book, why my such actually does not dare to say my experience. 但在我的私心里,也有着期盼:凭什么我这样的就不能获得成功呢？我们从小到大,别人都说脚踏实地才能获得成功,我是写书的,我所有的精力都投进去写书了,凭什么我这样的却不敢跟人说我的经验呢。 But my result is insufficient, I told the editor, the idea of live-in son-in-law mid and late part also has is big **, I will not write to collapse, I believe after these things come out, after feeling of entire live-in son-in-law, at my also meeting a level. When the time comes my result will perhaps also promote. At that time I could tell the person, perhaps the the road of lunatic or paranoia can walk, so long as you deeply loved this thing truly, solid road, can walk. At that time I had the capital to tell the person „, so long as you pursued remarkably, succeeds will be waiting for you in the nonchalant place”. If I were defeated, I work as material for negative education. 但我的成绩还不够,我跟编辑说,赘婿的构思到中后期还有大**,我不会写崩,我相信那些东西出来以后,整个赘婿的感觉出来以后,我还会上一个层次。到时候我的成绩也许还会提升。那时候我也许可以跟人说,疯子或者偏执狂的这条路也许是可以走的,只要你真正热爱这个东西,扎扎实实的这条路,也是可以走的。那个时候我才有资本跟人说“只要你追求卓越,成功会在不经意的地方等着你”。而假如我失败了,我就当一个反面教材吧。 I do not know how long I can persist in proceeding. 我不知道我能坚持往前走多久。 The result that but actually, can take, can the experience that others said that is the minor details, my desire very simple. „I have a standard, my junior middle school time read «Tengwang Pavilion», «I with Earth Temple», sighed that in the gorgeousness of writing, latter came to see «Ordinary World» and Haruki Murakami's many books, making me feel, the book should be this appearance. I am giving oneself to set a such standard at heart, not necessarily must win the prize, not necessarily wants the approvals of many people, but before I die, I hope that oneself can approve oneself, wrote a book of this level. The line of my picture is very high, I have not passed an examination now......” this am I some time ago with others, has spoken to the editor similar words, actually not necessarily timely. 但其实,能够拿出来的成绩,能够跟别人说的经验,还是细枝末节,我心里的愿望很简单。“我有一个标准,我初中的时候读《滕王阁序》,《我与地坛》,感叹于文字的华美,后来看《平凡的世界》和村上春树的许多书,让我觉得,书就应该是这个样子。我在心里给自己定了一个这样的标准,不见得要拿奖,不见得要许许多多人的认同,只是在我死之前,我希望自己能够认同自己,写出了一本这个水准的书来。我心里画的这条线是很高的,我现在还没有及格……”这是我不久前跟别人,也跟编辑说过的类似的话,其实未必合时宜。 I knew that does not do right by you. 我自知对不住你们。 To alienation of friend, generally is also my extreme result, but similar words, even if very silly, if many cannot be understood, I will also feel very bothersome. I can only guarantee, I can try my utmost writes the book and attractive book, this pledged that I do not sell at a discount. 对朋友的疏远,大抵也是我的偏激所致,但同样的话,哪怕很傻,如果说过很多遍也不能被人理解,我也会感到很烦。我只能保证,我会尽我所能的写出好书、好看的书来,这个承诺我绝不打折扣。 I noticed that your hitting enjoy, see the daily subscription, wants to say thanks, if not there are you to support, I think that cannot walk so far, I cannot write the such book. 我看到你们的打赏,看到每天的订阅,很想说谢谢,若非有你们一直的支持,我想必不能走得这么远,我也不能写出这样的书来。 Thanks. 谢谢。 In addition: ps is not money. ( to be continued ) 另:ps不算钱。(未完待续)