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But is controlling the earliest possible time of power and strength of Moon, It is like Earth, spoke a few words to Its brothers and sisters. 而在掌控到月球的权与力的第一时间,祂就和地球一样,向祂的兄弟姐妹们说了一句话。 „Time, has not arrived.” “时间,未到。” big spider of South America falls into the deep sleep. 南美的大蜘蛛重新陷入沉睡。 But sparks/Mars, Jupiter and Venus...... all UO, falls into the deep sleep. 而火星、木星、金星……所有的UO,也重新陷入沉睡。 As if before the phenomenon of that terrifying, was not they did was the same. 仿佛之前那恐怖的异象,不是它们做出来的一样。 „Friends...... I forever , will be keeping watch forever you.” “朋友们……我会永远,永远的,守望着你们。” A naive fool, on remote Moon, fell into the lonely and eternal deep sleep. 一个天真的傻瓜,在遥远的月球上,陷入了孤独和永恒的沉睡。 ...... …… ...... …… …… …… …… …… …… …… …… …… pS: Today arrived here ~! Also is the 6 K big chapter, hhhhh ^ _ ^ pS:今天就到这里了~！又是6K大章,hhhhh^_^ Spoke some words, as well as posted a reward to finish 说一些话,以及悬赏结束 Spoke some words. 说一些话。 Thanked book friend to support here very much. 很感谢诸位书友能够支持到这里。 Next, I am sorry, vol. 3 story rhythm indeed somewhat collapses, this does not need to wash, the rhythm collapsed, I looked. 其次,我很抱歉,第三卷故事节奏的确有些崩,这个不用洗,节奏是崩了,我自己都看出来了。 Was open about the facts everyone saying that the vol. 3 three stages, Stage 1 was to actually strip the city and Astraea, Stage 2 was the demon eye and Eternal Dynasty, Stage 3 was parallel world and god bier. 不瞒大家说,第三卷其实有三个阶段,第一阶段是剥离城与阿斯特蕾亚,第二阶段是魔眼与永恒王朝,第三阶段才是平行世界与神灵座。 Because of the reason of graduation thesis, my rhythm indeed collapsed, Stage 1 was too dilatory, causes the demon eye and Eternal Dynasty cut directly, therefore some plots and characters transferred to Stage 3, therefore caused Stage 3 to be very long, the reverse were too many, instead was somewhat senseless. 但是因为毕业论文的缘故,我的节奏的确崩了,第一阶段太拖沓,导致魔眼与永恒王朝篇直接砍了,所以有些情节与人物都移到了第三阶段,所以导致第三阶段很冗长,反转太多,反而有些无趣。 Fortunately, I have the program, each volume should the information, gave. Do not suspect, each volume has the period with each volumes, does not exist alone, between the pit and pit have the relation. Because of my reason, the rhythm of vol. 3 collapsed, the pit and pit connect, that burst point that should present, has not come out, cannot achieve the effect of imagination. 所幸的是,我有大纲,每卷该给的信息,都给了。不要怀疑,每卷与每卷之间是有紧密联系的,都不是单独存在的,坑与坑之间是有联系的。但是因为我个人的原因,第三卷的节奏崩了,坑与坑连接起来,该出现的那种爆点,没有出来,达不成想象的效果。 This does not have the matter of means that because I cut Stage 2, therefore all piled Stage 3. 这是没有办法的事情,因为我砍了第二阶段,所以一切都堆到了第三阶段。 From certain daily, can look. The characters are too many, primary and secondary is unclear, therefore looks somewhat chaotic. 从某些日常,也可以看得出来。人物太多,主次不清,所以看上去有些混乱。 Some characters in Stage 2 whole show, then drop out, transits to Stage 3 again, such primary and secondary will figure out. However I cut Stage 2, then exploded, violated sprouted the new mistake. 有些人物是在第二阶段的主要人物,然后抛下,再过渡到第三阶段,这样主次才会拎清。但是我把第二阶段砍了,然后就炸了,犯了萌新的错误。 The characters are many, this in film and television and cartoon expressive force, but the writing performance, is the confusion. 人物多,这在影视与漫画表现力可以,但是文字表现,就是混乱。 Because of the film and television and cartoon, unlike the manifestation of writing is. 因为影视与漫画,与文字的表现形式是不同的。 Is my mistake, I am sorry. 是我的错误,我很抱歉。 The paper had finished, later I will adjust the article structure and rhythm, but vol. 3 can only like this. I am sorry , regretted very much, after all vol. 3 program and plot, but devised very long, ruined. 论文已经结束了,之后我会调节文章结构与节奏的,但是第三卷只能这样了。我很抱歉,也很惋惜,毕竟第三卷大纲与剧情,可是构想很久的了,就这么毁掉了。 However, vol. 3 should the information, and upholstery and foreshadowing of following plot gave entire. 不过,第三卷该给的信息,以及后续剧情的铺垫以及伏笔都给全了。 As for Eternal Dynasty, can only be some volume of background boards. 至于永恒王朝篇,只能作为某一卷的背景板了。 But who Eternal Dynasty BOSS is, everyone is well aware well, does not want to come out. 而永恒王朝篇的BOSS是谁,大家心知肚明就好,不要点出来。 Thanked to support here everyone again, I will continue to try hard. 再次感谢支持到这里的大家,我会继续努力的。 Digging a pit must fill , the pit are more than character, is my Gaia sauce, hhhhh 挖坑必填,坑比字多,就是我盖亚酱,hhhhh Finally, posted a reward to finish. Bit 3523 最后,悬赏结束了。刀片3523
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