„How this issue said that actually this crisp point many types, so long as actually writes following your heart, can make the lead comfortable, is crisp.” “这个问题怎么说呢,其实这爽点很多种,其实只要顺着你的心去写,能够让主角舒服的,都是爽点。” „For example the lead obtains a treasure, for example the lead receives ten thousand people to respect, for example the lead was unrequited loved by some younger sister, these are crisp.” “比如主角得到一件宝贝,比如主角受到万人敬仰,比如主角被某个妹子暗恋了,这些就是爽点。” „Wanted the lead to be comfortable, the reader was comfortable, the reader was comfortable, your wallet was comfortable, naturally, this comfortable, must have one, was too comfortable, was easy to jump.” “只要主角舒服了,读者就舒服了,读者舒服了,你钱包就舒服了,当然,这种舒服,要有一个度,太舒服了,就容易蹦了。” leaf Rongyao oneself looked at that the novel the feeling point said. 叶荣耀把自己看小说的感受点说了出来。 „If the oppressive lord can make the reader abandon the pit?” “如果虐主的话会不会让读者弃坑？” An rookie network writer asked that „not, but earlier should not be oppressive, later can be oppressive, the anticipation feeling of oppressively ending was very strong, once because ended oppressively, the information variation came.” 一位新人网络作家问道,“不会啊,不过前期不要虐,后期可以虐,虐完的期待感很强的,因为一旦虐完,信息差异化就来了。” „For example the villain cultivated/repaired the lead to discard, this was oppressive, everyone thinks that the lead discarded, afterward, the lead because of some fortuitous encounter, cultivated/repaired for does not draw back instead enters, withered the villain, this was crisp.” “比如反派把主角修为废掉了,这多虐,所有人都以为主角废掉了,后来,主角因为某个奇遇,修为不退反进,将反派干死了,这多爽。” „Invincible article is why difficult to write, is anticipated that the feeling was too low, because the readers know the lead certainly to be able the hitting the face villain, if oppressive, the reader is uncomfortable, the intense anticipation feeling came.” “无敌文为什么难写,就是期待感太低了,因为读者都知道主角一定能够打脸反派,如果虐一下,读者不舒服,强烈的期待感就来了。” „Naturally, is the lead is not necessarily discarded cultivates is, you can extrapolate, for example the lead was grasped, for example the lead contended in martial arts to lose, Ok, but, you must establish the anticipation to feel to them.” “当然,不一定是主角被废掉修为,你们可以举一反三,比如主角被抓了,比如主角比武输掉了,都可以,但是,你们一定要给他们建立期待感。” „If wants the novel to be successful, must strongly expect to feel to the reader, only by doing so, the novel can write to be long, this result is also getting better and better.” “要想小说成功,必须给读者强烈的期待感,只有这样,小说才能写长,这成绩也越来越好。” leaf Rongyao said. 叶荣耀说道。 „Actually writes the novel, besides the anticipation feeling, the personality of this character is also very important, many people write the novel, the styles of makeup of this character are stereotyped, this will make the reader not be feeling well.” “其实写小说,除了期待感外,这人物的性格也很重要,很多人写小说,这人物的脸谱都是千篇一律的,这会让读者不爽。” The blood red big god then said. 血红大神接着说道。 The blood red big god and Tang three little are that group of successful network writers of network early time. 血红大神和唐家三少都是网络最早期的那一批成功的网络作家。 „Person who how writes the different characters?” “怎么写不同性格的人呢？” Two valuable angels asked. 二宝天使问道。 This writes the novel to be rarest, is character's characterization, is character's styles of makeup description. 这写小说最难得,就是人物的性格描写,也就是人物的脸谱描写。 The evildoer's disguise that this often said is easy, drawing the bone is difficult! 这就是常说的画皮容易,画骨难啊！ „How this said that the personality of this character, you must before writing the novel establish, or fierce, either indecisive, either effeminate, either sinister, either false, according to these characters, you designs this plot, will establish him saying that what words, what matter will handle.” “这个怎么说呢,这人物的性格,你要在写小说前设定好,或勇猛,或优柔寡断,或娘娘腔,或阴险,或虚伪,根据这些性格,你来设计这故事情节,设定他会说什么样的话,做什么样的事情。” The blood red big god said. 血红大神说道。 As the adviser of pleased article group, Huaxia writer's association member, blood red now besides creation novel, but also is engaged in the educational work of network. 作为悦文集团的顾问,华夏作家协会会员,血红现在除了创作小说外,还从事网络的教育工作。 Writer training of several issues of pleased article groups, the blood red big gods are the instructor. 有好几期的悦文集团的作家培训,血红大神都是当讲师的。 „Right, but also a little must pay attention, regarding an unknown villain, you can use the method of repeatedly reminding, reminds reader, can strengthen the lead to the anticipation feeling of that character, said him flamboyant flamboyant.” “对了,还有一点也要注意,就是对于一个未知的反派,你们可以利用多次提醒的方法,去提醒读者,就可以增强主角对那个人物的期待感,说他多牛逼多牛逼。” „Each public area, some passers-by discussed him, this discussed for a long time, the reader will anticipate that his presence, wanted to have a look at him to be flamboyant . Moreover, anticipated, the lead got rid of this flamboyant character.” “每个公共场合,都有路人讨论他,这讨论久了,读者就会期待他的出场,想要看看他多牛逼,而且,更期待,主角把这个牛逼的人物干掉。” ...... …… „How profound imaginary novel can describe the good fighting scene, after all these styles really burn the brain very much, always without the solid stuff description fighting plot, how broken?” “玄幻小说怎么才能描写好打斗场景,毕竟那些招式真的很烧脑子,总是没有干货描写打斗情节,怎么破啊？” A youth network writer consults to say to the blood red big god. 一位青年网络作家向血红大神请教道。 The annual meeting of this pleased article group, corresponds these Internet writers to come, likes this network symposium. 这次悦文集团的年会,对应这些网络作者来,还是喜欢这个网络讨论会。 Everyone each other can exchange the lessons, can listen respectfully to the writing experience of top big god. 大家彼此可以交换心得,可以聆听顶级大神的写作经验。 „That, I eat the tomato, you answered this issue.” “那个,我吃西红柿,你来回答这个问题。” The blood red big god looks that I eat the tomato to say. 血红大神看着我吃西红柿说道。 „Good!” “好！” I eat the tomato to nod, said to everyone: „Actually regarding the network, the description of this fight is not very important, more importantly upholstery, so long as the upholstery the earlier atmosphere, the anticipation feeling of reader has, lead Savior general presence.” 我吃西红柿点点头,对大家说道:“其实对于网络来说,这战斗的描写并不是很重要,重要的是铺垫,只要铺垫把前期氛围,读者的期待感带起来,主角救世主一般的出场。” „Actually the crisp point came out, the fight description is one continues, can hitting the face vent spleen, all looks at you to be able inexpensive of villain portray, making one unable to bear want to hit him.” “其实爽点就出来了,战斗描写就是一个延续,打脸能不能解气,全看你能不能把反派刻画的更贱,让人忍不住想打他。” „To put it bluntly, writes the novel, is to look, much study, think much, the collection everyone's wisdom in one, like my «Me Is Big Star», a lot of contents are not I want to come out, but I achieved to fuse my novel these others' good thing very well, makes very crisp, had the anticipation feeling that everyone looked very much.” “说白了,写小说,就是要多看,多学,多想,集大家的智慧于一身,就像我这本《我是大明星》一样,很多内容都不是我想出来的,只是我做到了把这些别人的好东西很好地融合进我的小说,让大家看的很爽,很有期待感。” Tastes the edict also then to say. 尝谕也接着说道。 „Tastes the edict big god, what view do you have to the profound imaginary article innovation?” “尝谕大神,你对玄幻文创新有什么看法？” The author who writes the profound imaginary article asked. 一位写玄幻文的作者问道。 „This issue you asked that wrong person, I write the metropolis article, you me told that the profound imaginary article, this I do not understand, does not excel, you must ask their recluses they!” “这个问题你问错人了,我写都市文的,你跟我说玄幻文,这个我不懂,也不擅长,你要问他们隐士他们！” Tastes the edict to shake the head to say. 尝谕摇摇头说道。 „Three little you said that here you wrote the novel time to be longest.” “三少还是你说吧,这里就你写小说时间最长了。” Blood red looks that Tang three little said. 血红看着唐家三少说道。 „I felt after profound imaginary article , more and more innovation articles, I often will definitely read some profound imaginary new books, no matter the result is good, the result is bad, will look at their introduction first three chapters, as a result, basically three patterns: First, by female lord use ; second, the powerhouse rebirth, three are the powerhouse resurrects.” “我觉得玄幻文以后肯定会越来越多的创新文,我时常会看一些玄幻新书,不管成绩好的,成绩差的,都会看他们的开篇前三章,结果发现,基本上三种模式:一是被女主利用的,二是强者重生,三就是强者复活。” „These three many, if you look at their commentaries, you will notice that many readers said: ‚Is this type of introduction!’” “这三种很多很多,如果你去看他们的评论,你们会看到很多读者说:‘又是这种开篇！’” „This explained anything, explained that our readers have been weary of this repertoire.” “这说明什么,说明我们的读者已经厌倦这个套路了。” „Therefore, we want to be sudden appearance, can think other, but, the innovation, is a view, but changes a pattern to go to the repertoire, the profound fantasy must write the article, is promotion this road.” “所以,我们想要异军突起,可以想想别的,但是,创新,是一个说法,只是变个花样去套路,玄幻想要写文,还是升级这条路。” „Some old stems wrote the person to be many, how to innovate? The negative thinking, actually, among book city little white writing, the lead and villain, is actually not different, the standpoint is different.” “一些老梗写得人太多了,怎么创新呢？逆向思维,其实,在书城小白文当中,主角和反派,其实没什么两样,立场不同。” „But, what the reader substitutes is a lead, without substituting the villain, you stands in the angle of villain, making him crisp, borrows others' plot, then, you use in your book, changes into the lead the villain, the plot was different, similarly also hit the face.” “但是,读者代入的是主角,没有代入反派而已,你站在反派的角度,让他爽爽,借用别人的剧情,然后,你用到自己的书里,把反派换成主角,剧情不同了,同样也打脸了。” Tang three little said. 唐家三少说道。 ...... …… Each platinum big god shares their writing experiences with everyone, everyone calmly is listening to teaching of platinum big god, but, leaf glory small team surrounding, enclosed many authors, these authors came by the explanation attractions of leaf glory these platinum big gods. 每一位白金大神跟大家分享他们的写作经验,大家都静静地听着白金大神的讲课,而不知不觉之间,叶荣耀这个小团队外围,围上了许多的作者,这些作者都是被叶荣耀这些白金大神的讲解吸引而来的。 Although said that the author of big god level, everyone has the style of everyone, but can hear the attainment of high-grade author to them, without doubt has very major role. 虽然说大神级的作者,每个人都有每个人的风格,但是能够听到更高等级作者的心得对于他们来讲,无疑是有着很大作用的。 During the daytime a day, except that eats meal at noon, everyone basically exchanges the attainment in the conference room, after all like so many big god ranks the meetings of Internet writer, once a year. 白天一天,除了中午吃饭,大家基本上都在会议室上交流心得,毕竟像这么多大神级别的网络作者的聚会,也就一年一次。 The waste material class/flow, the invincible class/flow, the local class/flow, the system class/flow and gourmet class/flow, here has the top big god of excelling, everyone exchanges the attainment, the exchange experience, writing level the promotion effect on everyone was too big. 无论是废材流、无敌流、乡土流、系统流、美食流,这里都有擅长的顶级大神,大家互相交流心得,交流经验,对大家的写作水平的提升作用太大了。 The network writer biggest problem is „simply working behind closed doors without regard to the outside world”, in this case, is very easy to present the novel opening splendidly , is very weak by the mid and late part. 网络作家最大的问题就是“闭门造车”,这样的话,很容易出现小说开头精彩的很,到中后期却很无力。 These need everyone to exchange, listen to others' experience. 这些都需要大家交流,听取别人的经验。 ...... …… Has discussed afternoon 5 o'clock, after everyone had the sumptuous dinner, attended the pleased article group annual meeting awards party. 一直讨论到下午五点钟,大家吃了丰盛的晚餐后,就参加悦文集团年会颁奖晚会。 Although the network of Huaxia is all the rage very much, but the influence is very small, cannot compare with the tradition. 华夏的网络虽然很风靡,可是影响力还是很小,跟传统不能比。 With the annual award party of this pleased article group, besides Tencent video network live broadcast, basic on the significant grand meeting of no television station live broadcast network. 就拿这悦文集团的年度颁奖晚会吧,除了腾讯视频网络直播外,根本就没有哪个电视台直播这个网络的重大的盛会。 Even can say, the awards party of this network, has an entertaining feeling. 甚至可以说,这网络的颁奖晚会,有种自娱自乐的感觉。 So is sometimes helpless, a release conference of third-class movie has a group of newsman to struggle to interview, many television station live broadcasts, broadcast and reported specially. 有时候就这么无奈,一个三流电影的发布会都有一大群的新闻记者争着去采访,很多电视台直播、专播、报道。 But in this entire network the most important grand meeting, is unexpectedly desolate, few newsman. 可这整个网络里最重要的盛会,竟然冷清清的,没有几个新闻记者。 Several newsmen, is the brother unit Tencent video friendship of pleased article group sends. 有几个新闻记者,也是悦文集团的兄弟单位腾讯视频友情派来的。 This does not have the means that now this time, is the star covers the road the time, even if the star sends one, can on the news. 这也是没有办法,现在这个时代,是明星当道的时候,明星哪怕发一个屁,都能上新闻。 In any case in the news is some petty things of star. 反正新闻上都是明星的一些鸡毛蒜皮的事情。 Sometimes, the leaf glory finds it very ridiculous. 有时候,叶荣耀觉得很好笑。 The stars give her fans signature, will report that this star has the affection, is quite popular. 明星给她的粉丝签名,就会报道这明星好有爱心,好亲民。 Spoke the honest remark, the leaf glory really cannot look, this has anything to have the affection, popular. 说实在话,叶荣耀真看不出来,这有什么有爱心,亲民的。 Also the news reported daily. 还新闻天天报道。 In the life has so many good people and good deeds, some so many positive synergies did not report, a day revolves around star to the end. 生活中有那么多好人好事,有那么多正能量不去报道,一天到头围着明星转。 Interesting? 有意思吗？ The scientists offered oneself life for the human progress, actually cannot afford one own house. 科学家为人类进步奉献了自己的一生,却买不起一套属于自己的房子。 But the star walks the field, spoke one and two words on the stage, one set of villa succeeded in obtaining. 而明星就走走场,在台上说一、两句话,一套别墅就到手了。 Sometimes, sees this kind of news, the leaf glorious heart was sour. 有时候,看到这类新闻,叶荣耀心都酸了。 „Haven recluse, you sits there!” “桃源隐士,你坐那里！” The Qilin looked that the leaf glory sits in the following row of position, quickly comes to say with the leaf glory. 麒麟看叶荣耀坐在后面一排位置,急忙过来跟叶荣耀说道。 „I think sits very well here.” “我觉的坐这里挺好的。” leaf Rongyao said. 叶荣耀说道。 The nearby sits the rhythms and two valuable angels under desk lamp they, the leaf glory is familiar, sits together can also chat, sits in front, person who majority does not know, without meaning. 边上坐着台灯下的节奏和二宝天使他们,叶荣耀都熟悉,坐在一起还能聊聊天,坐在前面,大部分都是不认识的人,没意思。 „You are the platinum author, your seat has arranged, walks.” “你是白金作者,你的座位早就安排好了,走啦。” The Qilin the leaf glory is walking toward the front on drawing rashly. 麒麟不由分说就拉着叶荣耀往前排走去。 The seat first row that at the meeting leaf Rongyao arranges, here sits is the important character, in the network writer, has the qualifications to sit on three few and blood red, root of the ear these very influential platinum big gods in the first row. 叶荣耀安排的座位在会上的第一排,这里坐着的都是重要的人物,网络作家里面,也就三少、血红、耳根这几位很有影响力的白金大神才有资格坐在第一排。 „Are you that haven recluse?” “你就是那个桃源隐士？” A bald middle-aged man looked at a leaf glory to ask. 一位秃头的中年男子瞄了一眼叶荣耀问道。 But that look makes glory some uncomfortable. 只不过那个眼神让叶荣耀有些不舒服。 How can I say? 怎么说呢？ Having to plant the self- superiority feeling to be very strong, looks down upon others. 有种自我优越感很强,看不起别人。 „Recluse, I gives you under the introduction, manager Xue who this is the Huaxia entertainment.” “隐士,我给你介绍下,这位是华夏娱乐的老总薛总。” Qilin quickly to a leaf glory introduced. 麒麟急忙对叶荣耀介绍道。 This Huaxia entertainment is the pleased article group biggest partner, pleased article group many outstanding works, were bought the film and television copyright by this Huaxia entertainment. 这位华夏娱乐是悦文集团最大的合作伙伴,悦文集团很多优秀的作品,都是被这华夏娱乐买去影视版权的。 It can be said that this Xue, to the influence of pleased article group is also very big. 可以说这位薛总,对悦文集团的影响力也是很大的。