As these platinum big gods enter the conference room, the entire conference room lived it up, many people gathered round near various liking platinum big gods, just like became small groups, is chatting lively. 随着这些白金大神走进会议室,整个会议室热闹起来了,很多人都围着各种喜欢的白金大神边上,俨然成为一个个小团体,热闹地聊着。 „We must pass to greet!” “我们要不要过去打招呼！” As the rookie, two valuable angels see platinum big gods in so many legends all of a sudden, unavoidably is somewhat excited. 作为新人,二宝天使一下子见到这么多传说中的白金大神,不免有些激动。 „You pass, which platinum big god having a look at to want, for you divorce!” “你过去吧,看看哪位白金大神愿意为了你离婚！” I eat the tomato to smile look that two valuable angels said. 我吃西红柿笑笑地看着二宝天使说道。 „Why I go round the sun to meet the moon, or you divorced to marry me to be good.” “我干嘛舍近求远啊,要不你离婚娶我好了。” Two valuable angel eyes look tearfully I eat the tomato to say. 二宝天使眼汪汪地看着我吃西红柿说道。 „No, no, I feared that my wife will rip me.” “别,别,我怕我老婆会撕了我。” I eat the tomato quickly to beckon with the hand to say. 我吃西红柿急忙摆摆手说道。 Gathering this me is eating the tomato is a wife manages strictly! 合着这位我吃西红柿是位妻管严啊！ „Really insipid, fears the wife!” “真没劲,怕老婆！” Two valuable angels despise look that I eat the tomato to say. 二宝天使鄙视地看着我吃西红柿说道。 „Who...... who feared the wife.” “谁……谁怕老婆了。” I eat the tomato somewhat to lack in resonance said. 我吃西红柿有些底气不足地说道。 Nowadays man several do not fear the wife, I eat the tomato am is very serious. 这年头男人有几个不怕老婆的,我吃西红柿就是其中一位特别严重的。 „I eat the tomato, you do not want not to recognize, I hear your wife your manages stubbornly, money by your wife managing, your spending money never over 50 dollars.” “我吃西红柿,你就不要不认了,我可是听说你老婆把你的管的死死的,钱都被你老婆给管着,你身边的零花钱从来没有超过五十块钱。” In this group of people, is clearest I to eat the tomato details, was Fu Xiaochen and tastes the edict. 这群人里,最清楚我吃西红柿底细的,就要数傅啸尘和尝谕了。 After all is the established big god author, goes to me to eat the tomato the family/home, but also knew that I eat the tomato the wife. 毕竟是老牌大神作者,都去过我吃西红柿的家,还认识我吃西红柿的妻子。 „Big Senior Brother did not say two fellow apprentices, where you also very arrive, your wife coughs, your leg becomes tender.” “大师兄不说二师兄,你也好不到哪里,你老婆咳嗽一声,你腿都发软。” I ate tomato nature discontented Fu Xiaochen to uncover his short, matter that Fu Xiaochen feared the wife, said. 我吃西红柿自然不满傅啸尘揭他的短了,把傅啸尘怕老婆的事情,也说出来了。 „Pitiful, I have not married the wife fortunately, two learn from another's mistakes in the front, I decided my whole life did not marry the wife.” “可怜啊,还好我还没有娶老婆,有两位前车之鉴在面前,我决定了我这辈子不娶老婆了。” The rhythm under desk lamp said. 台灯下的节奏说道。 „! Who letter/believes!” “切！谁信呢！” Everyone believe did not say. 大家不信地说道。 With the arrivals of three few these platinum big gods, everyone's joke words, extends to go toward the net article in gradually. 随着三少这些白金大神的到来,大家的玩笑话语,也就渐渐地向着网文上延伸而去。 Here it can be said that can find the author who almost all domains excel , the strengths of their small group extremely powerful. 在这里可以说是能够找到几乎所有领域擅长的作者,他们这个小圈子的力量极为的强大。 The people are the top characters, the writing in some aspect has the originality, everyone discussed the domain that is excelling at respectively mutually, the discussion atmosphere slowly was fiery. 众人都是顶级的人物,在某一方面的写作都是有着独到之处,大家都互相谈论着各自擅长的领域,慢慢的讨论气氛便是火热了起来。 „I eat the tomato, you said the profound imaginary writing experience to us!” “我吃西红柿,你给我们说下玄幻的写作经验吧！” Some people eat the tomato to say to me. 有人对我吃西红柿说道。 I eat the tomato, but the lifting a tripod author of profound imaginary class, is good at writing the repertoire especially, looks at me to eat the people of novel the tomato write to discover, actually I eat the novel that the tomato write, basically is a repertoire, continually promotes, trades the map unceasingly, endlessly repeats. 我吃西红柿可是玄幻类的扛鼎作者啊,尤其擅长写套路,看过我吃西红柿写的小说的人都可以发现,其实我吃西红柿写的小说,基本上都是一个套路,就是不断升级,不断换地图,不断地重复。 But he excels at this repertoire very much, knows how to duplicate this repertoire not to make the reader repugnant again, but can also make the reader spend to be convinced. 只不过他很擅长这套路,知道怎么重复写这套路不会让读者反感,还能让读者花钱买账。 „I, had the haven recluse even, where wheel to me said that anything writes the experience!” “我就算了,有桃源隐士在,哪里轮的到我说什么写作经验啊！” I eat the tomato quickly to wave the hand to say. 我吃西红柿急忙摇摇手说道。 „Haven recluse!” “桃源隐士！” „Haven recluse where!” “桃源隐士在哪里啊！” „My God, the haven recluse also attended this annual meeting!” “我的天,桃源隐士也来参加这次年会了！” ...... …… One hear of I eat the words of tomato, the people in big conference room burst with joy immediately. 一听我吃西红柿的话,大会议室里的人们立即沸腾起来了。 After all as we all know, one profound imaginary class/flow top novel «Executes Demon» this year, it created the innumerable miracles of net article history. 毕竟大家都知道,今年有一本玄幻流的顶级小说《诛魔》,它创造了网文历史的无数个奇迹。 If by collects the number, the hits, subscribe the number, the hegemon number wait/etc, created the net article until now first. 如论是收藏数,点击数、均订数、盟主数等等,均创造了网文至今为止的第一。 Depending on this «Executes Demon», the haven recluse is promoted to the present network immediately to tall God. 就凭这本《诛魔》,桃源隐士立即晋升为现在网络的至高神。 „I give everyone under grandly the introduction, this is the haven recluse!” “我隆重给大家介绍下,这位就是桃源隐士！” I eat the tomato to point at the leaf glory with everyone introduced. 我吃西红柿指着叶荣耀跟大家介绍道。 „Hello, I am the haven recluse!” “大家好,我是桃源隐士！” The leaf glory stands to smile greets to everyone. 叶荣耀站起来笑笑地对大家打招呼道。 Spoke the honest remark, the leaf glory has not thought that oneself one day can participate in the network the top conference. 说实在话,叶荣耀从来没有想过,自己有一天能参加网络的顶级会议。 Novel that the network writer who here sits, many people writes, before is the leaf glory , the novel that likes reading, such as the potato big gods and three little big gods, I eat the tomato big god, their books, are the leaf glory like. 在这里坐的网络作家,很多人写的小说,都是叶荣耀以前喜欢看的小说,就如土豆大神、三少大神、我吃西红柿大神,他们的书,都是叶荣耀喜欢的。 „Recluse hello/you good.” “隐士你好。” „Never expected that you are the haven recluse!” “没有想到你就是桃源隐士啊！” „You were too low-key, I eat the tomato introduction the words, everyone does not know that you are the haven recluse.” “你太低调了,要不是我吃西红柿介绍的话,大家都不知道你就是桃源隐士啊。” ...... …… People gather round the leaf glory to say in abundance. 人们纷纷围着叶荣耀说道。 „Recluse, you give everyone under the introduction to write the profound imaginary experience!” “隐士,你给大家介绍下写作玄幻的经验吧！” The root of the ear big god said to the leaf glory. 耳根大神对叶荣耀说道。 „You are the senior author, you said compared with me say are much better, experience that my rookie, where came!” “你是老作者,你给大家讲比我讲好多了,我一个新人,哪里来的经验啊！” leaf Rongyao said modestly. 叶荣耀谦虚地说道。 „My these repertoires spoke many, they were tired, you give everyone to speak the fresh thing.” “我的那些套路都讲了好多遍了,他们都听腻了,你来给大家讲讲新鲜的东西吧。” The root of the ear shakes the head to say. 耳根摇摇头说道。 „Right, the recluse you shares your experience with everyone!” “对啊,隐士你就跟大家分享分享你的经验吧！” Everyone said. 大家纷纷说道。 „Good, I said that I write the novel the attainment, communicates with everyone.” “好吧,我就说说我写小说的心得,跟大家交流交流。” This atmosphere is very good, the leaf glory cannot decline, so long as braced oneself a lecture of experience. 这气氛很好,叶荣耀推辞不了,只要硬着头皮讲经验了。 „As the Internet writer, I felt, having these three points is very important: The writing attitude, the learn/study, insisted.” “作为网络作者,我觉得,有这三点很重要:写作态度,学习,坚持。” „Writing attitude, since wrote a book, I want to rush to make money, therefore, must correct the attitude, cannot say that conducts to write several chapters, tomorrow will not write, particularly to some novices, you are not the big god, willful.” “写作态度,既然写书了,我想很多都是奔着赚钱去的,所以,一定要端正态度,不能说进行写几章,明天就不写了,尤其是对一些新手,你们不是大神,任性不了。” „Behind studies, this point is very important, actually reads, has as the saying goes, a day does not study, no one can see ; A week does not study, starts to explode thickly ; In January/one month does not study, the intelligence quotient loses to the pig.” “后面就是学习,这一点很重要,其实就是看书,有句俗话说的好,一天不读书,无人看得出;一周不读书,开始会爆粗;一月不读书,智商输给猪。” „Naturally, light/only reads definitely incorrect, must learn to analyze the ponder, why the book of big god succeeds, you have a look, analyzed, thought through, you possibly crossed the threshold.” “当然,光看书肯定不行的,要学会分析思考,大神的书为什么成功,你们多看看,多分析分析,想通了,你们可能就入门了。” „As for insisting, is not no need saying that if you cannot achieve this point, I think that you did not use the symbol, because did not insist, you will never succeed.” “至于坚持,就不必多说了,如果你做不到这一点,我想你就不用码字了,因为不坚持,你永远不会成功。” „Recluse, you said concretely.” “隐士,你给大家讲一点具体的。” Tang three little said. 唐家三少说道。 These three point actually nothing fresh, so long as writes the novel, knows. 这三点其实没有什么新鲜的,只要写小说的,都知道。 Cannot achieve these three points, did not need to write the novel. 做不到这三点,就不用写小说了。 „Good, actually writes the profound imaginary novel, must first build the anticipation to feel, any novel, can support by the anticipation feeling, without the anticipation feels, no one will read your book.” “好,其实写玄幻小说,首先要营造期待感,无论是哪本小说,都是靠期待感支撑下去的,没有期待感,就没人会去看你的书。” „For example fights broken three years, most classical, then, I must say how to establish a plot the anticipation feeling.” “比如斗破的三年之约,最为经典的,然后,我要说的就是如何去建立一个剧情的期待感。” „Anticipation feels, two types, are quite common, meets, various types meet, this repertoire, basically withstands the test, so long as you are impossible the matter that defeats to meet to describe the lead, basically, established an anticipation, the reader will anticipate that hits the face.” “期待感,有两种,比较常见的,是约战,各种约战,这种套路,基本上百试不爽,只要你把主角不可能战胜约战的事情描述出来,基本上,就建立了一个期待,读者会期待去打脸。” „But, this repertoire, you cannot play, for example the breaking an engagement class/flow, lengthy of several million character, you are impossible to play to meet, play to break an engagement, therefore, you must seek for your repertoire.” “但是,这种套路,你不能多玩啊,比如退婚流,一本几百万字的长篇,你不可能一直玩约战,玩退婚,所以,你们要找寻自己的套路。” „Draws an analogy, for example the villain killed the family member of lead, because does not have the evidence, various villain types did not acknowledge, various family member friend angry of master, unwilling, knows that is the homicide, but cannot produce the evidence.” “打个比方吧,比如反派杀了主角的亲人,因为没有证据,反派各种不承认,主人的亲人朋友各种愤怒,不甘,都知道是他杀的,但是拿不出证据。” „If, you make the reader know beforehand, actually the lead has had the evidence, this anticipation feeling came, this is actually in the middle of the soap opera, very common plot.” “如果,你事先让读者知道,其实主角已经掌握了证据,这个期待感就来了,这其实是电视剧当中,都很常见的剧情。” „If you in turn, the lead killed the young master of villain respected family, the villain also had the evidence, then, we started the repertoire plot, the head of the clan of respected family, can definitely detect, even condemned the lead.” “如果你反过来,主角杀了反派大家族的少爷,反派也掌握了证据,然后,我们就开始套路剧情了,大家族的族长,肯定会来察觉到,甚至来问罪主角。” „Condemning, I first think that is to make the lead refuse stubbornly to acknowledge, lies, but, lies unreliably in imaginary middle, is not very effective, because profound has the method to search imaginary to remember.” “问罪,我首先想到就是让主角死不承认,说谎,但是,说谎在玄幻当中,并不是很有效,因为玄幻有手段能够搜查记忆。” „Such a thinks, anticipation that I establish came, if I make the lead obtain one to revise the memory the method, this can't make the reader dark?” “这么一想,我建立的期待点就来了,如果我让主角得到一个能够修改记忆的手段,这样不是能够让读者暗爽吗？” „A following lead transcription, obtained this method, revises itself to remember, this method, is not abnormal, at least will not be influential to the lead strength.” “下面主角一个副本,就得到了这个手段,修改自己记忆,这个手段,不算变态吧,起码不会对主角实力有影响。” „Then, is the head of household of respected family, starts to search various evidence, finally also found an eyewitness, saw the lead to kill his son.” “然后,就是大家族的家主,开始搜索各种证据,最后还找到了一个目击者,看到主角杀了他儿子了。” „As the matter stands, the entire plot anticipated that appeared thoroughly, I did not need to write the following plot, the reader got up on the high tide, a plot came out like this.” “这样一来,整个剧情期待点就彻底出现了,我根本就不用写后面的剧情,读者就高潮起来了,一个剧情就这样出来的。” ...... …… leaf Rongyao said own attainment. 叶荣耀把自己的心得说出来。 „Truly, can this anticipation feeling is a novel attract the reader, can write the key of novel.” “确实,这期待感是一本小说能不能吸引读者,能不能写成长篇小说的关键。” The root of the ear nods to say. 耳根点点头说道。 „Yes, many authors start to write is very good, the reader is also convinced very much, but behind lacks the anticipation to feel, the reader slowly were also few.” “是啊,很多作者开始写的很好,读者也很买账,可是后面缺少期待感,读者也就慢慢地少了。” Three little also approve leaf glory the view of anticipation. 三少也非常认可叶荣耀的期待的说法。 „Does a difficult problem to build the anticipation to feel to the lead, how as to solve, the means were too many, but must search for reasonable means that profound may be for the imagination the space to be very big imaginary . Moreover, profound imaginary does not fear exaggeratingly, revises itself to remember that in profound imaginary has the possibility, therefore, many plots, you ponder, had the intense anticipation feeling, writes again, yourself will be excited, the key is to understand the adjustment.” “给主角搞一个难题来营造期待感,至于怎么解决,办法就太多了,不过还得寻找到一个合理的办法,玄幻可供想象的空间很大,而且,玄幻不怕夸张,修改自己记忆在玄幻就有可能,所以,很多剧情,你们多思考一下,有了强烈的期待感,再去写,你自己都会兴奋起来,关键就是要自己懂得变通。” I eat the tomato also to approve the leaf glory very much the view. 我吃西红柿也很认同叶荣耀的说法。 The anticipation feeling of hypertext fiction, is the key that a novel can succeed. 网络小说的期待感,是一本小说能不能成功的关键。 „Besides the anticipation feeling, what we can also pay attention to?” “除了期待感外,我们还要注意什么呢？” Two valuable angels look that the leaf glory asked. 二宝天使看着叶荣耀问道。 „This issue asked was very good, this novel besides anticipation feeling, most important without doubt was the plot, wrote the novel, is telling the story, the story said well, succeeded, if you were only the dependence install to compel to hit the face merely, was very difficult to survive.” “这个问题问的很好,这小说除了期待感外,最重要的无疑是剧情,写小说,就是在讲故事,故事讲得好,就成功了,如果你仅仅只是依靠装逼打脸,很难存活。” leaf Rongyao said. 叶荣耀说道。 „How that can make the story say good?” “那怎么才能让故事讲的好呢？” Two valuable angels continue to ask. 二宝天使继续问道。 Writes the novel, knows that this plot is important, but how regarding to write the plot, how to let the plot that the reader likes you writing, this is most essential. 写小说的,都知道这剧情非常重要,可是对于如何写好剧情,如何让读者喜欢你写的剧情,这才是最关键的。 Also is crisp, what kind of crisp point that everyone said can make the reader like, this is tests an author level the key. 也就是大家说的爽点,怎么样的爽点才能让读者喜欢,这才是考验一个作者水平的关键。