IBNGPB :: Volume #2

#121: On the shelf words expressing feelings


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( Two fans chat: (两个粉丝群: 707979802 707979802 458550220 458550220 fans chat enters one well, does not need both to enter.) 粉丝群进一个就好,不必两个都进。) Noon of May 15 on the shelf( this Friday), probably 12 : 30. 5月15号中午上架(本周五),大概12:30。 Also some possibilities, are not quite several minutes ahead of schedule definite. 也有可能提前十几分钟,并不太确定。 We did not say that what in addition was more regular, noon tomorrow, two will first emit, then the author evening's symbol in addition, strives for four in the afternoon or before dawn (3 - 5 am). 咱也不说什么加更规则了,明天中午,先两更放出,然后作者下午晚上码字加更,争取四更或五更。 Everyone makes an effort to look, sent this chapter to say brushed the face. 大家使劲看,发本章说刷刷脸。 Even if urges, brushes some „this this, I am also glad to look. 哪怕是催更,刷一些“就这就这就这”,我也乐意看。 Very long has not seen own book is so lively, really had a dream to return to the past feeling. 很久没有看见自己的书这么热闹了,真是有种梦回过去的感觉。 In addition, the beginning subscription rule is 200 character coins, the member user discounts. 此外,起点的订阅规则是200字一币,会员用户打折。 The coin many are the character are many, some chapters are expensive, some chapter small advantages, all are the number of words different reasons. 币多就是字多,有的章节贵,有的章节便宜,全是字数不一样的缘故。 ...... …… The following is the sea read the time broken, the mental journey of main author. 以下是海洋的碎碎念时间,主要作者的心路历程。 The idle talk are many, the schoolmate who does not like seeing can wait to renew tomorrow. 废话较多,不喜欢看的同学可以等明天更新了。 In 2019. 2019年。 I wrote this farming article, the result is the same, the head subscribes 127 , to continue to write earnestly, then when termination 630 subscribe. 我写了本种田文,成绩一般般吧,首订127,继续埋头写,然后完结时630均订。 Compared with throwing street, but I also saw through, I probably am this horizontal person. 比较扑街,但我也看开了,我大概就是这种水平的人。 The book cannot write about 2 million, was too high because of the theoretical requirement of late high tech, really writes motionless, daily Carvin, uncomfortable, therefore finished the farming article. 书没能写到两百万,因为后期高科技的理论要求太高了,实在写不动,天天卡文,难受,于是结束了种田文。 Writes to farm to feel to write the knowledge quantity that the farming article needs profoundly, I a little feared, therefore no longer writes to farm, wants to write other theme. 写种田才深刻地感受到写种田文需要的知识量,我有点怕了,所以不再写种田,想写别的题材。 In January 2020, I opened this animation class recreation to do, wants to work as a charlatan, mixed. After all I have written the recreation, does not feel difficultly, the good and evil is the experienced person. 在2020年1月份,我开了本动画类文娱作,想当个混子,混一混。毕竟我写过文娱,感觉不难,好歹是有经验的人。 In the never expected that recreation new book two pc end recommendation positions, the increase is touching. 没想到文娱新书上两个pc端推荐位,涨幅过于感人。 The first round 199 collections, the second round 222 collections, two rounds push the sum total 421 collections. Reviews New Game+ this book, two rounds of pc push to rise 4366 collections, after on the minute/share was strong, daily increase broken thousand, disparity like natural moat. 第一轮199收藏,第二轮222收藏,两轮推合计才421收藏。反观二周目这本书,两轮pc推涨4366收藏,上了分强后,天天涨幅破千,差距如天堑。 Really, I at that time wrote has the issue, does not recommend the potential flow quantity to be low. 果然,是当时我写的有问题,并不是推荐位流量低。 January time I am pondering over, two rounds push 421 collections, level that ironclad dozens subscribe. 一月份的时候我就琢磨着,两轮推才421收藏,铁定几十订的水平啊。 I was too difficult, wants to mix the book that several hundred buy, then how is difficult. 我太难了,就是想混个几百订的书,怎么那么难。 Contrasts big shot who these several thousand subscribe, my psychological bottom line is very low. 对比那些几千订的大佬,我的心理底线真的很低。 Therefore cut in two at the waist that recreation to do. 于是腰斩了那本文娱作。 Calmly reason that I ponder the failure. 我冷静思考失败的原因。 The slow heat, is not very quick, moreover popularity of stupid/desert hawk animation has crossed. 慢热,不够快,另外沙雕动画的热度已经过了。 This makes me realize, the direction that I study diligently made a mistake, must change a mentality to look for the theme. 这让我意识到,我钻研的方向错了,得换个思路找题材。 Then I start to close up, closes up starting from February of this year, the original plan was to close up two to three months( closed up for a month to leave the mountain in fact). 然后我开始闭关,从今年二月开始闭关,原计划是闭关两到三个月(事实上闭关一个月就出山了)。 First does to sweep the list work. 先是做扫榜工作。 What I sweep is the head of each time subscribes the books, particularly recently the on the shelf books within 2-3 months. 我扫的是每期的首订书籍,尤其是最近2-3个月内的上架书。 Which beginning I take lightly in the novel domain to subscribe specially high, the head subscribes means high it represented that issue of gusty area, the popular element is clear. 我专门看轻小说领域内哪本书首订高,首订高意味着它代表了那一期的风口,流行元素一目了然。 Then I discovered that Cthulhu and Tokyo, strange and other words were very recently hot in the light novel classification, the consecutively several issues in the fire, this are not accidental, but is its really fire. 然后我发现最近克苏鲁、东京、灵异等词在轻小说分类很火,连续好几期都在火,这不是偶然,而是它真的火。 The Tokyo theme fire, then I wrote this unlimited stream book according to the Tokyo theme, first dungeon takes Tokyo as the map. 东京题材火,然后我根据东京题材写了本无限流书,第一个副本以东京为地图。 Just saved to seven chapters of manuscripts, read to trustworthy fans. 刚存到七章稿,给一位信得过的粉丝读一下。 He said: Is a little slow, does not know that you are writing anything.” 他说:“有点慢,不知道你在写什么。” Then I looked, the rhythm is a little truly slow. 然后我看了看,确实节奏有点慢。 The first three chapters of upholstery, Chapter 4 formally has entered dungeon. 前三章一直铺垫,第四章才是正式进入副本 Then entered dungeon , a helpless feeling however, did not see the main line. 然后进了副本,又给人一种不知所以然的感觉,一直不见主线。 The rhythm slow is the taboo, I want to increase speed to it, making it enter the main line fast, actually the discovery cannot change. 节奏慢是大忌,我想给它提速,让它快速进入主线,却发现不能改。 The words that changes, must overthrow completely again. 一改的话,要全部推倒再来。 Does not write simply, felt oneself do not have the level to write the unlimited stream. 干脆不写了,感觉自己还是没水平写无限流。 Therefore these seven chapters retained the draft abandoned, has not sent in any case online, everyone does not know that it has not been born, had been abandoned by me. 于是这七章存稿废了,反正也没有发到网上,大家都不知道它还没有出世,已经被我废了。 Then I select material everywhere, look for the inspiration. 然后我到处取材,找灵感。 Opens the book to draw the attention of everyone the thing, otherwise is the old route that dozens subscribe. 开书一定要让人眼前一亮的东西,不然还是几十订的老路。 A writing synopsis of comic book, New Game+ Boss the phrase brings the inspiration to me suddenly. 一本漫画书的文字简介,“二周目boss”的字眼突然给我带来灵感。 However the content of others cartoon is actually not I the content that likes looking , an opening is the academic opening, understood at a glance that behind is what content. 不过人家漫画的内容却不是我喜欢看的内容,一开局就是学院派开局,一看就知道后面是什么内容。 The internal struggle, struggles. 内部斗争呗,争来争去的。 The pattern was a little small. 格局有点小了。 Might as well do bigger world outlook, then I began. 不如搞个更大的世界观,然后我动手了。 Before I remember, old book that writes, «Summon Unusual Life», is strange class books, the theme is to summon the class/flow. 我想起以前写的老书,《召唤师的异常生活》,也是一本灵异类的书籍,题材是召唤流。 Initially summoned the master 4000 collections, the head subscribes 321, is throws the street book. 当初召唤师四千收藏,首订321,是本扑街书。 Then environment was two dimension unpopular strange winds, other classified popular strange winds. 当时的环境是二次元不流行灵异风,其他分类流行灵异风。 I write this book, was complained by the fans, how you do not put the strange channel it. 我写这书,被粉丝吐槽,你怎么不把它放灵异频道呢。 Actually I want to write a relaxed and terrifying strange summon book, but writes writes, the easy argument could not write. 其实我是想写一本轻松又恐怖的灵异召唤书,不过写着写着,轻松的调调一直写不出来。 In addition at that time environment such, two dimension really unpopular spirit unusual characters. 再加上当时环境就那样,二次元真不流行灵异文。 I think that two dimensions should contain the myriad things, what theme can melt. 我认为二次元就该包容万物,什么题材都能融进去。 The animation and cartoon do not have the terrifying theme, how to be one's turn the novel, cannot write the strange version two dimensions. 动画和漫画不也有恐怖题材吗,怎么轮到小说这边,就不能写灵异版二次元了。 Now was different, the strange element of light novel classification started popularly. 现在不一样了,轻小说分类的灵异元素开始流行了。 Moreover the subscription data is one by one fearful, 3000 subscribe to ten thousand Ding has. 而且订阅数据一本比一本可怕,三千订到万订都有。 Then I had the idea, I want to go back to the summon class/flow. 然后我有想法了,我想重拾召唤流。 Initially wrote the summon master, to summoning the setting did insufficiently rigorously, more summoned, protagonist jumped over awesome, was more powerful, the strength more collapsed. 当初写召唤师,对召唤设定做得不够严谨,越召唤,主角牛逼,越强大,实力越崩坏。 This basis summon class/flow essence, makes offering sacrifices to flow, limits with the side effect. 这次根据召唤流的内核,做成献祭流,用副作用加以限制。 The recombination the book title, «I Became New Game+ Boss» come out officially. 再结合了书名,《我成了二周目boss》正式出炉。 The summon class/flow essence that I understand is the unknown feeling, unknown can have the anticipation to feel. 我理解的召唤流内核是未知感,未知能产生期待感。 So long as produces anticipates to feel, can read. 只要产生期待感,就能让人读下去。 This is a book does not play the reason that these attires compel to hit the face, replaces to install to compel with the unknown feeling to hit the face, although the summon class/flow was changed to offering sacrifices to flow by me, but the essence has not changed. 这也是本书不玩那些装逼打脸的原因,用未知感取代装逼打脸,虽然召唤流被我改成献祭流了,但是内核没有变化。 Does not despise to install to compel to hit the face, actually I also like looking book that the book that these attires compel, the cherishing invisible attire compels especially. 并不是鄙夷装逼打脸,其实我也爱看那些装逼的书,尤其钟爱无形装逼的书。 However makes me write, I do not excel. 但是让我写,我不太擅长。 But installs the core that compels to hit the face is the mood feeling, essentially it is only an expressing method, can not install to compel to hit the face is not possible. 而装逼打脸的核心是情绪感,本质上它只是一种表达方法,不是非要装逼打脸不可。 So long as mood arrives, other expressing method not necessarily installs to compel hitting the face to miss. 只要情绪拉到位,别的表达方法不见得装逼打脸差。 Installing to compel to hit the face is the effective most obvious shortcut. 装逼打脸是见效最明显的捷径。 Some people install not to compel, to write well awkwardly, understood very much not the proper issue, does not install to compel the hitting the face plot is not unattractive, can actually the greatly hot book, majority install the book that compels the taste to write. 有的人装不好逼,写得很尴尬,是理解不到位的问题,并不是装逼打脸情节不好看,其实能大热的书,大部分还是装逼味写得好的书。 About the way of installing compelling, will be I in 2018 the time the knowledge that will go to the beginning development course to learn, really rising experience, they worthily will be the big gods, installing to compel to study well thoroughly. 关于装逼的门道,是我2018年时候去起点研修班学习到的知识,真的涨见识了,他们不愧是大神,把装逼研究得好透彻。 The skill, eats the day. 一招鲜,吃遍天。 Utilizes the reach a high degree of proficiency situation the way of installing compelling, no longer limits to hitting the face this matter, notebook tall Ding is not the dream. 把装逼的门道运用到炉火纯青的地步,不再局限于打脸这件事,本本高订不是梦。 Although learned, but how to implement specifically, must look at individual understanding ability. 虽然学到了,但是具体怎么实施,还是得看个人的理解能力。 I have been throwing, was the brain has consciousness, did not have good operating cost energy. 我一直在扑,就是脑子有意识了,却没有很好运用成本能。 In this book, made various attempts, but how to do specifically, I all with feeling, deliberately does not have installs to compel, does not know to be good. 在本书里,做了各种尝试,但具体怎么做,我全凭感觉,也没有刻意的去装逼,也不知道行不行。 Saw New Game+ Boss this chapter to say is so active, my mentality should no major problem. 看见二周目boss的本章说那么活跃,那我的思路应该没啥大问题。 Un...... wait/etc, the on the shelf words expressing feelings wrote probably long. 嗯……等等,上架感言好像写得太长了。 After all is reads broken, has to speak out. 毕竟是碎碎念,不吐不快。 Now was joyful. 现在快乐了。 New Game+ this book, will have boss to beat savagely the player later, after all the book title is placed here, I must certainly write, but is not the earlier period writes. 二周目这书,后期还会有boss暴打玩家,毕竟书名摆在这儿,我肯定要写的,但不是前期写。 But beats savagely the player, is only a book big plot point. 而暴打玩家,只是本书的一个大剧情点。 «I Became the New Game+ Boss» book title am the big late plot, the book was protagonist through the earlier steady growth, as well as strange plot, slowly growth to Cthulhu unsealing on the day. 《我成了二周目boss》的书名是大后期剧情,书本身是主角通过前期稳健的发育,以及奇奇怪怪的剧情,慢慢成长到克苏鲁解封那一天。 After unsealing, beats savagely the player. 解封之后暴打玩家。 Then plot, when formed in one's mind at that time again, I like unknown, does not want to arrange the result from the beginning. 再然后的剧情,等到那时再构思吧,我喜欢未知,不想一开始就把结局就定好。 About the boss class/flow book, I only look have started to grow from small monster step by step to big boss. 关于boss流的书,我只看过从小怪开始一步步成长到大boss。 From the beginning is big boss, and has implemented the book of result, I have not paid attention. 一开始就是大boss,并一直贯彻到结局的书,我没怎么关注过。 Everyone I saw in Chapter 1 message, wants to know which boss class/flow books has. 大家在第一章的留言我看到,想知道有哪些boss流的书。 I recommend «Full-time employment boss» here, «Rebirth I Am boss», the content grows boss from small monster. 我在这里推荐一下《全职boss》、《重生之我是boss》,内容是从小怪成长到boss。 And full-time boss is from the beginning is big boss, but after several chapters, starts to start from small monster, rebirth that is from the beginning is small monster. 其中全职boss是一开始就是大boss,不过几章后开始从小怪做起,重生那本则是一开始就是小怪 Writes net article, most protagonist start since childhood diligently, this can write to be long. 写网文这一块,大部分主角都是从小开始努力,这样才能写长。 Either walks the invincible school department, but is easy to collapse. 要么就是走无敌流派系,但容易崩。 The above is not the py transaction, this is pure likes the recommendation personally, everyone wants to know, therefore I pushed. 以上不是py交易,这是纯粹的个人爱好推荐,大家想知道,所以我就推了。 Un, individual words expressing feelings write about here, nothing wants to write. 嗯,个人感言就写到这里吧,没什么想写的了。 Hopes tomorrow in this chapter said that sees everyone's urging. 希望明天在本章说看见大家的催更。 This time cluck the bottom line, the result of this book has not been similar to flies upwards in my eyes, 36,000 collection, one-day recommendation ticket 1500. 这次没有咕咕底线,本书的成绩在我眼中如同飞升,3.6万收藏,单日推荐票1500。 Sees such result, in my brain does not have any idea of giving up. 看见这样的成绩,我脑子里没有任何放弃的想法。 Only is left over a thought to write about 2,000,000-3,000,000 characters at heart diligently! 心里只剩下一个念头努力写到2,000,000-3,000,000字! Even also is more. 甚至还想更多。 Everyone supervises together. 大家一起监督。 This chapter is 2697 characters, wrote many characters incautiously, but said after completely, was very carefree! Thanks everyone to support. 这章是2697字,一不小心就写了好多字,不过全部说出来后,真的很畅快!谢谢大家支持。
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