HDLL :: Volume #1

#60: Appraisal and new book( one-third)

LNMTL needs user funding to survive Read More

Naturally, has the powder to have black, besides loves the powder that these expect too much , some whitewashed to spurt the Yang Yi's words black. 当然,有粉就有黑,除了这些恨铁不成钢的真爱粉以外,还是有一些黑粉刷起了喷杨轶的话。 „In history shortest webnovel!” “史上最短的网络小说！” „Does not need to look that 400,000 characters end the book, ironclad court eunuch!” “不用看,400000字完本,铁定太监了！” „What gadget writes? Hasn't understood on Grand Finale?” “写得什么玩意？没看懂就大结局了？” „Author is short and quick, is not usable!” “作者又短又快,不抵用啊！” „Everybody can wash to rest, what gadget does the website such go all out the book of promotion is?” “大家可以洗洗睡了,网站这么卖力推广的书是什么玩意儿？” Also does not know where these black powders brave, perhaps has the person who does not like this type of book really to exist, possibly has the fellow evil intention of cynicism to do the matter, perhaps, has some to think the author who Yang Yi touches his benefit has bought water army? 也不知道这些黑粉是从哪里冒出来的,或许有真的不喜欢这种类型书的人存在,也可能有愤世嫉俗的家伙恶意搞事情,又或许,有某个觉得杨轶触动他利益的作者买了水军？ These are unknown, however, they appeared at this time, this choice was completely mistaken! 这些都不得而知,然而,他们在这个时候出现,这个选择可是大错特错了！ Yang Yi must end this news, had already spread over at the major forums, pursues the book book fans happen to gather here, let alone, a large number are vitality exuberant disbandment soldier, is Yang Yi's supports the wholesale faithfully, sees post that these booed, where could bear. 杨轶要完本的消息,早就在各大论坛传遍了,许多追书的书迷们正好聚集在这儿,更何况,还有相当一部分是气血旺盛的退伍军人,是杨轶的忠实拥趸,看到这些喝倒彩的帖子,哪里忍得住。 Immediately, the black powders were scolded melodramatic to drench the head, except for some strong water army, other users shrinks to tremble, does not dare to touch this mildew head again. 顿时,黑粉们被骂得狗血淋头,除了一些坚挺的水军们,其他个人用户都缩起来瑟瑟发抖,不敢再触这个霉头。 The heat degree dissipates slightly, hour and two hours and 1-2 days later, the appraisal that is learned truly arrives. 热度稍微消散,一个小时、两个小时、一两天之后,真正有料的评价才随之到来。 First looks like from the appraisal of Mu Yucheng, this fellow, with cell phone that small keyboard, presses character by character, has spent for one hour! 先看来自穆钰诚的评价,这个家伙,用手机那个小键盘,一个字一个字地按出来,花了一个多小时呢！ „ Great Yang this novel, was I had read the most outstanding book in the past few years! And did not discuss that he to military life portray, does not get rid regarding special troop or soldier does not give up the description of spirit, these I did not discuss that only wants to sigh with emotion the mold of Great Yang to each character in this me, was really the god! “杨大大这本小说,是我近几年来读过最优秀的一本！且不谈他对军队生活刻画,对于特种兵或者说军人不抛弃不放弃精神的描写,这些我不谈,在这我只想感慨一下杨大大对每个人物的塑造,真的是神了！ Xu Sanduo no doubt is protagonist, his disposition is very special, since the performance has made the person want to smile wants to cry, but in fact, this novel loses face is not only Xu Sanduo, Gao Cheng, Shi Jin, Cheng Cai, Wu Liuyi, Yuan Lang wait / etc.! 许三多固然是主角,他的性格很特别,一路以来的表现让人想笑又想哭,但实际上,这本小说出彩的不仅仅是许三多,还有高城、史今、成才、伍六一、袁朗等等！ The role that I most like is Squad Leader Shi Jin! Because his heavy affectionate righteousness, because to a commitment of Xu Sanduo, he has exhausted the thoughts! Because of him for own soldier, has exhausted all efforts, like the womanishly fussy woman, teaching hand in hand, urging of doing best to convince! 我个人最喜欢的角色是史今班长！因为他重情重义,因为对许三多的一句承诺,他耗尽了心思！因为他为了自己的兵,用尽了所有的努力,像个婆婆妈妈的女人一样,手把手的教,苦口婆心的劝！ A recollection most profound plot, Shi Jin retires from the armed services time, he guards the Beijīng ten years, has not actually gone to Beijīng. But he and Gao Cheng , on the Beijīng street, he has cried, the tears that but this, loses look feeling sad. 回忆最深刻的一个情节,还是史今退伍的时候,他守卫京城十年,却没有去过一次京城。但他和高城在京城的街上走的时候,他哭了,这个无奈、失落的眼泪看得令人心酸。 Besides Shi Jin, other roles lose face very much...... ” 除了史今,还有其他角色很出彩呢……” From his post, can look, Mu Yucheng carefully reads this novel really very much, the disposition of each supporting role as if printed in his mind, each tiny fact, had words at fingertips and wrote with facility by him. 从他的帖子里,可以看得出来,穆钰诚是真的很仔细地去看这本小说,每个配角的性格仿佛都印在了他的脑海,每个细小的事迹,都被他信手拈来。 Looks at finished book, always made one be choked up with emotions, wants to get a matter off one's chest, besides a Mu Yucheng round of the long placard, in book review area also some lot of content insightful posts, for example under this appraisal from some special operations forces army disbandment soldier. 看完书,总令人心潮澎湃,想一吐为快,除了穆钰诚发的这个长帖以外,书评区里还有很多内容有见地的帖子,比如下面这个来自某特战部队退伍军人的评价。 „ Most real military novel, author absolutely is the special troop family background, in this detail of special combat, the average person has not known really! “最真实的军旅小说,作者绝对是特种兵出身,这里面很多特种作战的细节,一般人还真的不知道！ The Confidental Regulation limit, the disagreement author exchanged greetings, but I have been 12 years of soldier, including five years in the special army service, can look, this novel inside many details, tally with the present condition, has not presented other novels to give my errors full of absurd feeling! 保密条例限制,就不和作者寒暄了,但本人当了12年兵,其中有五年是在特殊部队服役,能够看得出来,这本小说里面很多细节,都与现实情况相符,并没有出现其他小说给我的错漏百出的荒唐感！ Gives an example, Unit A encircles dealers that plot, everybody can turn to have a look, to describe is long, but the fighting time has not towed to be very long. Concentrates on several words, first sneak attacks, gets rid of the opposite party several bones that with the bomb is difficult to gnaw, then the firepower covers, the sniper long-distance observation makes up leaks! 举个例子吧,老A围剿独贩那个情节,大家可以翻回去看看,描写得很长,但战期并没有拖很久。浓缩起来就几句话,先是偷袭,用炸弹搞掉对方难啃的几块骨头,然后火力覆盖,狙击手远程观测补漏！ A half hour of solution fights, then the rapid battlefield cleanup, in 15 minutes evacuates! 半个小时解决战斗,然后迅速打扫战场,15分钟内撤离！ Author's description fully meets the requirement of special combat, the special combat is comes to be the war, the war must behead, fights to walk, is not loathsome! 作者的描写完全符合特种作战的要求,特种作战就是来之即战,战必斩首,战完即走,绝不拖泥带水！ Before has read a novel, one team of special troops made the duty, after overcoming the goal, but also talked and smokes there leisurely, but also some people found time to rest for two hours. Arrived at me really poisonously, excuse me, this is the domain of enemy, did to finish up has not walked, when others did encircle? 以前看过一部小说,一队特种兵去做任务,打下目标之后,还在那儿慢悠悠地对话、抽烟,还有人抽空小憩两个小时。真的是把我毒到了,拜托,这是敌人的地盘,搞完事还不走,等别人来围剿吗？ Fortunately, «Soldiers Sortie» such brain remnant plot, I have not given the perfect score to the author. ” 还好,《士兵突击》并没有这样脑残的情节,我给作者打满分。” The person who posts this post does not know that original version «Soldiers Sortie», has the unreasonable place actually, for example in this plot, author originally then wrote this campaign to hit one in the evening, in the village also had the live person finally! 发这个帖子的人不知道,原版的《士兵突击》,其实是存在着很多不合理的地方,比如这个情节里,原本的作者便是写了这场战役打了一晚上,结果村子里还有活人！ Moreover, the following raid link, in the television also presented the complete people to push the formation that one group searched, making the person who many knew the business truly spit the trough. 不仅如此,后面的搜捕环节,电视里还出现了全部人挤成一团去搜索的队形,让许多真正懂行的人吐槽不已。 But Yang Yi in transporting process, hesitant for a long time, the decision acts according to own predecessor some memories, revised these unreasonable place. 而杨轶在搬运过程中,犹豫了好久,还是决定根据自己前身的一些记忆,修改了这些不合理的地方。 Naturally, Yang Yi will not see this post, but in book review area many popular science posts and many discussion placards, making these look that the novel asked the book friends who the person shared to find the destination eagerly, even some people teased said: „Book review is interesting the series compared with the original works......” 当然,杨轶是不会看到这个帖子,但书评区里很多科普贴、很多讨论帖,让那些看完小说急于找人分享的书友们找到了去处,甚至有人调侃地表示:“书评比原著好看系列……” Rode the massive book fans accumulations, Qiyue is also seizing the chance to advertize the advertisement of Yang Yi new book in each page: Gave advance notice: Seven days later, «Soldiers Sortie» author Yang Yi returns with the new book, anti-Japanese armed forces god «Drawing Sword», a ou immortal milestone! 乘着大量书迷聚集,起阅也趁机在各个页面打出了杨轶新书的广告:预告:七天后,《士兵突击》作者杨轶携新书归来,抗日军神《亮剑》,讴一曲不朽的丰碑！ Right now, book review area lived it up. 这下子,书评区又热闹起来了。 „Seven days later did the new book issue? The Great Yang book, had not looked that thought anticipated!” “七天后新书就发布了？杨大大的书,还没看就觉得好期待！” „Was the name of new book called «Drawing Sword»? Sounds warm-blooded, but, is this war of cold weapons?” “新书的名字叫《亮剑》吗？听起来好热血,不过,这是冷兵器的战争？” „Did not say that is the anti-Japanese armed forces gods? This should be writes counter-attacked to invade the Japanese invaders story last century! Ironclad is not the cold weapons, but, doesn't know this «Drawing Sword» two character what intent?” “不是说是抗日军神吗？这应该是写上个世纪反击入侵日寇的故事！铁定不是冷兵器,只不过,不知道这个《亮剑》两字何意？” „No matter what, the alarm clock moves, next week will have issued, is quite excited! To see earlier!” “不管怎么样,闹钟调起来,下周就发布了,好激动！想早点看到！” „I also think that looks at soldier, had good long some time to fall into the book to be wild, Ha Ha, has not thought that the author was so powerful!” “我还以为看完士兵,有好长一段时间要陷入书荒了,哈哈,没想到作者这么给力！” „Why today to issue? I could not wait!” “干嘛不今天就发布？我都等不及了！” „Hopes that Great Yang do not study this Qiyue other beautiful cheap stuff, maintains own style, the standard of «Soldiers Sortie» so long as writing, I support certainly!” This came from Tiexue Net book fans obviously. “希望杨大大不要学这起阅其他的妖艳贱货,保持好自己的风格,只要写的还是《士兵突击》的水准,我一定鼎力支持！”这明显是来自铁血网的书迷。 Mu Yucheng is the next day goes to work sees this news, he almost excitedly loses cell phone to the place railway rail mileage. 穆钰诚是第二天上班的时候才看到这个消息,他差点激动地把手机丢到地铁轨道里去。 „The Great Yang Yi moral behavior has guarantee, the refresh rate is fast, the quality of novel is high, believes that «Drawing Sword» also certainly is a good novel! First gains across the board to offer! Anticipates......” “杨轶大大的人品还是有保证的,更新速度快,小说的质量高,相信《亮剑》也一定是一部好小说！先一个飘红献上！期待ing……” After Mu Yucheng hits enjoys, the excitement has not subsided, he decided that when the new book of author comes out, he not only need offer a bigger red package, but must draw in own friend to come to see! 穆钰诚打赏完之后,激动的心情还没有平息,他打定了主意,等作者的新书出来,他不但要献上更大的红包,还要拉上自己的朋友来看！ Although is not fans of most local tyrant, but this top-quality powdered iron, we „Mu Yuchen”, when decided! 虽然不是最土豪的粉丝,但这个头号铁粉,咱“沐雨辰”当定了！
To display comments and comment, click at the button