DRHARM :: Volume #30 神龙三变

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On the ending, always the train of thought records urine to collapse, to my today's condition, I am very satisfied. 每逢结尾,总是文思录尿崩的,对俺今天的状态,俺很满意。 On the ending, I am always saving the phoenix pig tripe leopard Wei thought that wants to write to leave leeway the aftertaste, for ending that the person tastes, this point, I also complete is very satisfied. 每逢结尾,我总存着凤头猪肚豹尾的念头,想写出个留有余韵,供人回味的结尾,这一点,我也完成的很满意。 A book writes, must first to support my reader friends to express gratitude, this is from most sincere sincerity thanks, without your support, I very difficult many years of creation later today, is as before full of enthusiasm, wind and rain to create this kind of novel ceaselessly and earnestly. Since thank you continuously to my concern and support, sincerely expressed my gratitude to you, thanks! 一本书写完,首先要对一直支持我的读者朋友们表示感谢,这是发自至诚的真心感谢,没有你们的支持,我很难在多年的创作之后的今天,依旧兴致勃勃、风雨不辍、认认真真地创作这样一部长篇小说。感谢你们一直以来对我的关爱与支持,真诚地向你们表达我的谢意,谢谢！ This book, when can you an unforgettable story, enable you want to recall to recall some plots and some characters, I think that is my success. 这本书,如果能给你一个难忘的故事,让你想忆起时就能忆起其中一些情节、一些人物,我想,那就是我的成功。 However as a creator, is forever impossible to achieve perfectly, each book summarizes when the ending well own mistake, will help him grow very well, is helpful to the creation of next book. 但是作为一名创作者,永远是不可能达到完美的,每本书在结尾时好好总结一下自己的过错,会很好地帮助他成长,更有助于下一本书的创作。 On this book, is I one reforming in historical novel, currently speaking, it is not very successful, in I have created inside novel, if wants me to grade, I can hit is quite lower. Reasons for this include, is mainly the influence of inertia thought. 就这一本书来说,是我在历史小说之内的一种转型,目前来说,它不是十分成功,在我已经创作过的小说里边,如果要我自己打分,我会打的比较低些。究其原因,主要是惯性思维的影响。 Does not put on, the custom thought that but the thought passes through, therefore had the problem in the story design, causing the story to lack the suspense . Moreover the lead constrained by the established history, may supply the leeway of display not to be big, splendid will drop. 不穿了,可思维还是穿越的习惯思维,所以在故事设计上出现了问题,导致故事缺少悬念,而且主角囿于既定的历史,可供发挥的余地不大,精彩度就会有所下降。 This point, is not you wants to reform, those who realize you to write was different from the past, you certainly were avoidable, for example my little Schoolmate Ao, the new book was unreliable, some readers proposed that the upholstery was too long, literary style likely history article, when we exchanged in private, actually he had the clear mentality, knows that which aspect the work of reforming he should place with emphasis, but did not experience personally one time, must come under the influence of routine thought eventually. 这一点,不是你想转型,意识到你写的是同以往不同的,你就一定可以避免的,比如俺的小奥同学,新书玄幻,就有读者提出铺垫太长,文风像历史文,可是在我们私下交流时,其实他有清晰的思路,也知道转型之作他该重点放在哪方面,可是不亲自经历一次,终究还是要受到习惯性思维的影响。 Now always breaks the schoolmate unreliably to be also imaginary, sad, I have not known that his new book effect how, they competent writer, I believes that if experiences the setback, mainly is also the issue of inertia thought that has experienced one time, next time will avoid. 现在老断同学也玄幻了,悲了个哉的,我还不知道他的新书效果如何,他们都是有实力的作家,我相信如果碰到挫折,主要也是惯性思维的问题,经历过一次,下一次就会避免了。 My issue, in this writes more than 900 chapters suddenly sees the light, I have ten tenths assurance, when any suspense, interest, these issues under me this can the problem that avoids this having. 我的问题,是在这本写到900多章时才豁然开朗的,我有十成把握,什么悬念啊、趣味啊,这些问题我下本时都能避免这本出现的问题。 Under spoke of the book, possibly many schoolmates must care that what I must write, issue when started to write, sad, I had many to intertwine, did you make? 说到下本,可能很多同学就要关心我要写什么,什么时候开始写的问题了,悲了个哉的,我有好多纠结,你造吗？ Intertwines, actually finished to reply with an explanation from me started, I always want to entrust with anything toward inside, writing azure sickness outbreak, has not resulted in governs, had finished replying with an explanation, does not attend to that many readers who a first book accumulates, like eating mistakenly medicine must make unreliably imaginary, makes not to be willingly unreliably imaginary, makes the metropolis, until was accused in the book review area by a reader: Jin Yong wrote a knight-errant for a lifetime, Qiong Yao has written for a lifetime a romance, you must anything try. 一个纠结,其实从我写完回明就开始了,我总想往里面多赋予些什么,文青病发作,没得治,写完了回明,不顾头一本书攒下的那么多的读者,像吃错了药似的非要去弄玄幻,玄幻弄罢还不甘心,又去弄都市,直到被一位读者在书评区指责:人家金庸一辈子就写了个武侠,琼瑶一辈子就写了个言情,你非得什么都试。 Although I was scolded awoke, but wants to change in the historical type, look after linking several to pass through, I was a trimming, rewrote the historical legend, did not write to pass through, the result received an influence, but the issue was not big, I know that which my issue left, had enough confidence to make this more splendid. 我虽然被骂醒了,可是在历史类型内还是想变,这不,连着几本穿越后我还是微调了,改写历史传奇,不写穿越了,成绩受了点影响,可问题不大,我知道自己的问题出在哪,就有足够的信心让下本更精彩。 Speaking of my next idea, the profound imaginary immortal hero doubted to promote I unable to write, must transfer also to depend toward the metropolis, I had thought two ideas, metropolis belt different functions, a historical crisp article. 说到俺下一本的的构思吧,玄幻仙侠打怪升级我真的写不来,要转也就往都市上靠靠,本来我想了两个构思,一个都市带异能,一个历史爽文。 Historical, can completely the issue that avoids the drunk pillow coming across, will be very splendid. Metropolis that also impossible is so practical with «Rainbow». On my idea, favors writes metropolis that first. 历史这本呢,可以完全避免醉枕遇到的问题,会很精彩。都市那本呢,也绝不可能和《一路彩虹》那么写实。就我个人想法,是倾向于先写都市那本。 Finally my this idea announced in less than half a month, the metropolis novel has encountered the incorruptible time, striking hard, some metropolis novel authors were hit black and blue, did not recognize him to come including his wife. 结果我这个想法宣布了不到半个月,都市小说遭遇了冰霜期,严打啊,一些都市小说作者被打得鼻青脸肿,连他媳妇都认不出他来了。 I also very much sorrowfully announced that looks at this stance, compels me to place Republic of China the background! 我又很悲哀地宣布,看这架势,是逼着我把背景放在民国啊！ Finally everybody knew, I said these words merely one week later, the Republic of China novel was also involved in the wind at the end. 结果大家都知道了,我说这句话仅仅一星期后,民国小说也卷进了风尾。 Therefore, I do not know that must touch this metropolis literature style immediately. If I spoke really such broom, I decided to announce one after another: I must write unreliably imaginary, I must write the immortal hero, I must write the web, I must write athletics, I must write...... 于是,我现在不知道要不要马上碰这个都市体裁了。如果我说话真这么扫把,我决定陆续宣布:我要写玄幻,我要写仙侠,我要写网游,我要写竞技,我要写…… If fulfills unfortunately, I believe that the network writers will gather capital to buy kill my this crow mouth ominously. 如果不幸应验的话,我相信网络众作家会集资买凶干掉我这只乌鸦嘴的。 Good, this intertwines not to raise first, then said that helpless condition of history class on wireless, wireless reader to history class being interested are not many, subscribes to place the first three also few money on wireless, I under consideration this book, no matter any literature style, is thick the facial skin to put immortal hero or in the profound imaginary type, then may drop the small trough friends to deceive wireless on, if...... Is he willing to stay behind? 好了,这个纠结先不提,再说历史类在无线上的无奈状况,无线读者对历史类感兴趣的不多,在无线上订阅排名前三的也没几个钱,我在考虑下本书不管什么体裁,都厚着脸皮放到仙侠或者玄幻类型里,然后把无线上可奈滴小盆友们都骗进来,万一……他肯留下呢？ But thought that if I write obviously is not the immortal hero, depends toward others popular types in hardly, can the facial skin be too thick? Therefore, intertwines. 可是又觉得,如果我写的明明不是仙侠,硬往人家受欢迎的类型里靠,会不会脸皮太厚了？所以,还是纠结。 Looked that the mountain is the mountain looks at the mountain is not the mountain, must look at the mountain or the mountain, this is I the boundary that tries hard to achieve. 看山是山看山不是山,现在要看山还是山,这是俺努力达到的境界。 At present is studying in Lu Yuan, becomes integrated with the schoolmates of traditional literature, four months of study times just crossed half now, but the intense ideological collision, has had triggering to me similarly, has had the enormous help, I had fantasized lets the net article and traditional article fusion, takes it to be long respectively, now I understand finally: The cherishing life, is far away from the tradition, makes a clear distinction firmly ** boundary! 目前正在鲁院学习,跟传统文学的同学们打成一片,四个月的学习期现在刚刚过了一半,可激烈的思想碰撞,同样对我产生了触发,产生了极大的帮助,我一直幻想让网文和传统文融合,各取其长,现在我终于明白:爱惜生命,远离传统,坚决划清**界限！ May return to the original topic again, what speaks of under me to write, actually I want to reform, but this reforming was initially different from that blind revolutions, this has the consciousness revolutions, why I just enumerated, but had I who I have not enumerated knew because, but others had not announced some historical authors who I need to keep secret must reform, did you make? 可再说回来,说到我下本要写什么,其实我还是想转型的,但这个转型和当初那种盲目的转是不一样的,这是有意识的转,为什么我刚列举的还有我未列举的但我已经知道了的可是因为人家还没宣布我需要保密的一些历史作者都要转型呢,你造吗？ Reforming to not create on breakthrough, for the breakthrough in enterprise, in the creation wants to break through, that is one sense of responsibility. Passes through also having any Shimbashi section? It is not does not want to innovate, but is the narrow special theme, you had no way to innovate again, like the past chivalric fiction novel, your remaining can only compete the style the height, but the content was a king, only depended on the style the words, when the reader chatty must be finished. Goes the new path not to obtain the success for a while, shrinks? You waste at experience that in the setback obtained! 转型不全是为了创作上的突破,也是为了事业上的突破,创作上想突破,那是一种责任感。穿越还有任何新桥段可言么？不是不想创新,而是狭隘的特殊的题材,你没法再创新了,就像当年的武侠小说,你剩下的只能比拼文笔的高低了,可内容为王啊,只靠文笔的话,等读者腻歪了还是要完蛋。闯新路一时没有取得成功,就缩回去吗？你在挫折中得到的经验就浪费了！ Another is at the enterprise, I now have created eight novels, has sold the film and television copyright completely, has published the simplified form completely, seven left the traditional form( except for that metropolis, mainland aura is too strong), has sold the modern drama, two have sold the cartoon, has sold the hand tour, in the beginning for a long time maintains in the type first, once for a while can also clash the total list first, is, rushes to peak also this, the derivation value that several add is also inferior to the profound imaginary immortal hero class. 再一个是事业上,我现在共创作了八部小说,全部卖出了影视版权,全部出版了简体,七部出了繁体（除了那本都市,大陆气息太浓厚）,一部卖出了话剧,两部卖出了漫画,一部卖出了手游,在起点很长时间保持类型内第一,时不时还能冲一下总榜第一,可是呢,冲到顶峰也就这样,几部加起来的衍生价值还不及玄幻仙侠类的一部。 Net soft fire in Zhiwen, has used for ten years, the wireless end thrust the PC end, has only used for two years, this is the situation, is colleagues in many colleague rushes to the primary cause of Yan'an decisively. Puzzled...... 网文火于纸文,用了十年,无线端压过PC端,只用了两年,这就是大势,也是好多同行中的同行果断奔向延安的主要原因。纠结啊…… For me, at present also blows hot and cold, next this or historical YY, either the metropolis different functions, blow hot and cold, if fellow book friends have the idea, can send in the book review area , helping I clear own mentality. Which has a look to write first many, thought always unceasingly mature, therefore my choice and judgment unceasingly will also change, only invariable, is I the deep love to the creation. The heartfelt hope, you can also continue to love me , to continue to support! 就我个人来说,目前还有摇摆不定,下本要么历史YY,要么都市异能,还有摇摆不定中,各位书友如果有想法,可以发在书评区,帮助我清晰自己的思路。看看先写哪个好些,思想总是不断成熟的,所以我的选择和判断也会不断改变,唯一不变的,就是俺对创作的热爱。衷心的希望,你们也能继续爱我,继续支持！ I love you, bo ~~~~( to be continued. Please search the floating astronomy, the novel is better to renew is quicker!) 我爱你们,啵个~~~~(未完待续。请搜索飄天文學,小说更好更新更快!)
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