Tests the Missionworld, reason thatwas madebyDreadful Radio Game, is, examines the procedure/program that the squadforms a team, plug up the leaks conducts the recuperation, therefore, thisstoryworld is a little unavoidably stiff, all, do not servefor the plot, butservesfor the data, perhapspossiblyisDreadful Radio Gamethought that the datahas collected, looked the strength that againoriginallyarrangessurpassesmostaudiencebigsection of threepeople of woundswounds, dying of dying, is incapable ofcleaning upfinally the aspect, was been simply directbyNoah's Ark the steamroll, marked the periodthisstoryworld.
测试任务世界,之所以被恐怖广播制造出来,为的,就是检测一下小队组队的程序,从中查漏补缺进行休整,所以,这种故事世界难免有点过于生硬,一切的一切,不是为了剧情而服务,而是为了数据而服务,兴许可能是恐怖广播自己觉得数据已经采集完毕,再看本来安排进来的实力超出大部分听众一大截的三人又都伤的伤,死的死,无力收拾最后的局面,干脆让诺亚方舟直接下来碾压,把这个故事世界画上了句号。Su BaialsonotfromLan Linsuddenly during falls from the skyslow the godto come, under anothertosses about, discovers the storyworld, had actually finished.苏白自己还没从蓝琳的突然陨落之中缓过神来,又一番折腾之下,发现故事世界,却已经结束了。Threehours, actuallyquickquick, Su Baichoked to death the kitten, has satin the riverside, has not goneto look forotheraudience, withoutotheraudiencelooks forSu Bai.
三个小时,其实很快很快,苏白掐死了小猫,就一直在河边坐着,也没去找其他的听众,也没其他的听众来找苏白。
Has Xu Qingdied, Su Baiis not clear, otherknow the person who anddoes not knowalsoto live, Su Baiis not clear, does not wantto goclearly;许晴死没死,苏白也不清楚,其余自己认识和不认识的人是不是还活着,苏白也不清楚,也不想去清楚;Herequires the time, needsto be peaceful, slowlybeforehandseesto feeldigestsslowly, Lan LintheyregardingSu Bai, areexistence of anotherlevel, Su Bainowcould not have contactedby far, is not a person of strengthcircle, insiststo collect, cannot play, becauseposition of both sideswas not equal, the friendcharacter of friend, the itself/Benistwostrings of coordinatedmoney.
他需要时间,需要安静,慢慢把之前的所见所感慢慢消化,蓝琳他们对于苏白来说,是另一个层次的存在,苏白现在还远远接触不到,不是一个实力圈子的人,硬要凑过去,也根本玩不起来,因为双方的地位本就不是平等的,朋友的朋字,本就是两串对等的钱而已。Cool breezeblows, Su Baisuddenlydiscoveredoneselfare sittingin a cafe, outside, is the front door of community.
一阵凉风吹来,苏白忽然发现自己正坐在一家咖啡馆里,外面,是自己小区的大门。In front, is placingonecup of coffee, but also is ascending the steam.
面前,摆放着一杯咖啡,还升腾着热气。„Came back?”
“回来了么?”Su Baiextractstissue, scratchedownface, laterrubsonegrouptissue, graspsin the palm.苏白抽出一张纸巾,擦了擦自己的脸,随后把纸巾揉成一团,握在手心里。„Was not crazyweto be old, was not crazywechanged, becamemoved, becamea lotworried,becamedoes not have a thing in the world............”
“再不疯狂我们都老了,再不疯狂我们都变了,变得伤感,变得多愁,变得一无所有…………”Incafemakes a soundthissong, Su Baiboth handsis supportingownchin, in the visionfell intorecalled,
咖啡馆里的响着这首歌,苏白双手撑着自己的下巴,目光之中陷入了追思,Is listening tothissong, Su Baithinksis notoneself, butisthatin the powerfulwoman who in front ofoneselfcommits suicide.
听着这首歌,苏白想的不是自己,而是那个在自己面前自杀的强大女人。Is better thanLan Linto be ablebecause offrightenedto commit suicide, thatthingnamedKarma, what kind offeelingis?
强如蓝琳都能因为恐惧而自杀,那种叫做因果的东西,到底是一种怎么样的感觉?Brow of Su Baideepsank, immediately, on the faceappearedwiped the excitingsmile,苏白的眉头深深的沉了下去,随即,脸上出现了一抹兴奋的笑容,Cancompelto compel the thing of suicideLan Lindesperately,
能把蓝琳逼得绝望逼得自杀的东西,Oneself are really also goodto think,
自己也真的好想,Experiences,
去体验一下啊,That is very definitely exciting.
那肯定很刺激吧。Made an effortto rubownchin, Su Baireallyfeltoneself were really the sicknessheavy, the Lan Linmatternot onlyhas not madehimdesperate, insteadmadehimyearnvery much,reallythinks the strengthwas increasedtothatboundaryall of a sudden, thenexperiencedgreatlyfrightenedthattype.
用力揉了揉自己的下巴,苏白真的感觉自己真的是病的不轻啊,蓝琳的事儿非但没让他绝望,反而让他很是向往,真想实力一下子提升到那个境界,然后去体验一下那种大恐惧。Went out of the cafe, Su Baimoved towardowncommunity.
走出了咖啡馆,苏白走向了自己的小区。
The scenery in communityis good, the afforestationis very fine, when the entrancetwosecuritiesseeSu Baigoes to salutetogether, before Su Bai, drives, thereforehas not really cared aboutthisdetail, immediatelyalsoretaliatedonetothattwosecurities, amusedthattwosecurities, theydo thatare the companyrules and regulations, has the cameramonitoring.
小区里的风景不错,绿化很精致,门口的两个保安看见苏白进去时一起敬礼,苏白以前都是开车回去,所以还真没在意这个细节,当下也就对那两个保安回敬了一个,把那两个保安也逗乐了,他们这么做是公司的规章制度,有摄像头监控的。
Before arriving at the villa, Su Baiputs out the cell phone, looked at the date, the day that the inding distancehousehands overalsoshortly.
一路走到自家别墅前,苏白拿出手机,看了看日期,发现距离房子交出去的日子也没多久了。Oneselftrulyshouldconsiderto move, Qin Yang of Qinhuangdaostarts outrents a carto support the whole family, is, butownfamily memberdoes not needto withstandownmisfortuneagain, Su Baithistimesaw the fearsomeness of Karmathistype of thingfromLan Lintruly , after reallydoes not want the little fellow , after growing up, takesownroadagain.
自己确实该考虑搬家了,秦皇岛的秦杨开出租车养活一家人,为的,只是自己的家人不用再承受自己的厄运,苏白这次又从蓝琳身上真正看见了因果这种东西的可怖,也就真的不愿意小家伙以后长大后再重走自己的这条路。Perhaps, oneselfparentshave not thought the heritage at that timeleavingwill havesuch influence on ownson, or thought that becausewalkshurriedly is too too rapid, thereforealsoconsideredthesewithout enough time.
或许,自己的父母当时也没想到留下的遗产会对自己的儿子产生这样子的影响吧,又或者是想到了,但是因为走得太匆忙太急促,所以也就来不及去考虑这些了。Ifoneselfparentsareaudience, Su Bai is really not goodto determineownparentsareto return alivenowdie, naturally, Su Baidoes not care aboutthisvery much, lostparents'daySu Baito be used to it, even if the presentappearin front ofSu Bai, Su Baistillwalkedto callparentsvery muchnaturallytranquilly, will be insufficientto shed bitter tearsto holdto cry.
如果自己父母是听众,苏白还真不好确定自己父母现在是生还是死,当然,苏白也不是很在乎这个,失去父母的日子苏白已经习惯了,他们就算是现在出现在苏白面前,苏白也就很自然平静地走过去叫一声爸妈,也不至于会痛哭流涕抱头相哭。Swipeddoor key, shoves open the front door, Su Baisees the little fellowto lie downon the sofasleeps, Luckylies downon the blanket of living room.
刷了门卡,推开屋门,苏白看见小家伙正躺在沙发上睡觉,吉祥躺在客厅的毯子上。WhenSu Baicomes, Luckyopenedto seeSu Bai, thenlickedownclaw, nowas excited, the sentiment of Su Baiandthiscat was very weak, perhaps, Luckyhowalsoin the heartcriticizedthisrepugnantpersonnot dead in the storyworld.
当苏白进来时,吉祥睁开眼看了一下苏白,然后舔了舔自己的爪子,没什么激动不激动的,苏白和这只猫的感情本就很淡,兴许,吉祥还在心底暗骂着这个讨厌的人怎么还没死在故事世界里。Arrives at the sofa, satgently, the little fellowis sucking inhisthumbto sleep soundly, restsveryfragrantly, the bodyis sending outmilkfragrance that is the baby.
走到沙发边,轻轻地坐了下来,小家伙正吮吸着他的大拇指熟睡着,睡得很香甜,身上散发着属于婴儿的奶香味。Su Baiowes the body, kissedgentlyin the forehead of little fellow, thenrubbed the tip of the nose of little fellowwithowntip of the nosegently, only thenfaceshim, Su Baicanfeel the moment the peace.苏白欠下身子,在小家伙的额头轻轻吻了一下,然后轻轻用自己的鼻尖蹭了蹭小家伙的鼻尖,也就只有面对他,苏白才能感觉到片刻的安宁。Heis notoneselfone's ownflesh and blood, but is actually soft of presentinnermost feelingsmostdeep place.
他不是自己的亲生骨血,但却是自己现在内心最深处的柔软。IfIdo not have the timenot to shoulder the responsibilityabilityto love a girl, at leastIcantry my utmostnow, lovesyou, my son.
如果我没时间也没承担责任的能力去爱一个女孩,至少我现在能尽我所能,去爱你,我的儿子。..................
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The little fellowssitinPoussincopilot stationare very excited, althoughheis young, butis very intelligent, hecanprobablymove the sensationfrom the action of Su Baitohimself, the child, changes a newenvironment, alwaysmakeshimfeel the happyfreshmatter.
小家伙坐在普桑副驾驶位置上很是兴奋,他虽然小,但很聪明,他能够从苏白的行动之中感知到自己要搬家了,于小孩子来说,换一个新环境,总是让他觉得开心新鲜的事情。Luckylies downon the back seat, seemssomewhatsluggish, itknows that Su Baimustmakeanything, whyalsoclearSu Baimustdo that the cat that buthas a high and respected positionasone, mustleavethisvilla that has the independentgarden, alwaysfeelssomewhatmoved, the catlives a gloominess.吉祥则是躺在后座上,显得有些懒散,它知道苏白要做什么,也清楚苏白为什么要这么做,但是作为一只养尊处优的猫,要离开这座拥有独立花园的别墅,总觉得有些伤感,猫生一片灰暗。Su Baidragstwosuitcases, after placingPoussin, intrunk, thenseatedin the vehicle, started the vehicle, started out the community, from now on, a Su Baicontinuallyfinalownfamily property, sheared.苏白把两个行李箱拖出来,放在了普桑后后备箱里,然后坐进了车子里,发动了车子,开出了小区,从现在开始,苏白连最后的一处属于自己的家产,也割出去了。Droveto arrive at a parking lot that is called the distinguished guestbuilding, the little fellowheld the neck of Su Bai, Su Baidoublecarries with the hand the suitcaseto siton the elevatordirectly14.
驱车来到了一座叫做贵宾大厦的停车场,小家伙抱着苏白的脖子,苏白双手提着行李箱就这么直接坐电梯上到了14层。Smalloffice that this, rentsindependently, insidehasmuch„company”moves into, mostcompanypossiblestaffalsoon34people, butgeneral managerdeputy manageranything is also fully equipped.
这一层,是一个个独立租出去的小办公室,里面有不少的“公司”入驻,大部分公司可能员工也就三四个人,但总经理副总经理什么的也是五脏俱全。Su Baiarrived at before the room that is hanging„the privateDetectiveoffice”sign, took the keyto open the door, passing through the gate the firstroomwas the office, behind the officealso the door, insideis the bedroom and kitchenette.苏白走到了一个挂着“私家侦探事务所”牌子的房间前,拿着钥匙打开了门,进门第一个房间是办公室,办公室后面还有一扇门,里面是卧室和小厨房。Su Baiis not a stodgyperson, nottruethrowsaltogetheroneselfallmoney, butfirstrepaired and platewent tohere, thenkeptpart of living expenses.苏白不是一个迂腐的人,并没有真正的把自己所有的钱都一股脑地撒出去,而是先装修和盘下了这里,然后留了一部分生活费。TheseexpenseSu Baialsocalculated, whenpassed the time period, after oneselfmake money, deliveredagain some money, before this was also and propertygoes separate ways.
这些费用苏白自己也计算好了,等过阵子,自己赚到钱后就把这部分钱再送出去,这样也算是和以前的自己财产分道扬镳了。Possiblya littledeceives oneself and others, butat least is also the Su Baiintention, the little fellowitself/Ben the poor man who came outfrom the storyworld, after Su Baidoes not thinkhegrew up, to return to the storyworld.
可能有点自欺欺人,但至少也算是苏白的心意,小家伙本就是从故事世界里出来的可怜人,苏白不想他长大后再回到故事世界里去了。Placedon the bedto makehimtake the plate the little fellowto watch the animated cartoon, Su Baitakes a seatto return to the sofa of office, in the handis swayingonecan of beer, is drinkingsilently, turns into the reputationnot to sound likeveryprivateDetectiveof pleasant to hearfrom a wealthy familyEldest Young Masternow, Su Baidid not feelhadmanydropping variance, regardingaudience, thismatteralsotrulyhad nothingto care, particularly the Lan Lindeath, wasmakesSu Baisee throughmanythings.
把小家伙放在了床上让他拿着平板看动画片,苏白就坐回办公室的沙发上,手里摇晃着一罐啤酒,默默地喝着,从一个富家大少变成如今名声听起来不是很好听的私家侦探,苏白并不觉得有多少的落差,对于听众来说,这种事情也确实没什么好在意的,尤其是蓝琳的死,更是让苏白看开了许多东西。
The previousstoryworld, playedwithseveralstrengthcompletesteamrollownpeopletogether, makingSu Baiexperiencelong-termonerottenlifeoneto discardindifferently, butI, even ifwould rather die thanmadeyoufeelfruitfully,thisfeeling, perhapsisSu Bainowadays the realmentalityportrayal.
上个故事世界,跟几个实力完全碾压自己的人一起玩,让苏白体验了很长时间的一把烂命一条丢掉无所谓但我即使死也不能让你如愿的感觉,这种感觉,或许就是苏白现如今真实的心态写照。Ownlife, candiscardmomentarily, hedoes not carevery much, heis living, on the one handtakes care of the little fellow, on the other handtoexperience the stimulationandfear, rather thantolive on dishonorablyto live on dishonorably.
自己的命,随时都可以丢掉,他也不是很在乎,他活着,一方面是照顾小家伙,另一方面就是为了体验刺激和恐惧,而不是为了苟活而苟活。Onebottle of beerget into the stomach, Su Baiputs out the cell phoneto preparetoChu Zhaotelephones, oneselfandChu Zhaorelationsnow is a little awkward, butopenly expressedin the previousboth sideswell, before relationsnot, is so intimate, butat least is also a friend, someChu Zhaothis are also the help of chieftainintroducedin the police authorities,Su Baiwas not worriedownthisprivateDetectiveofficewill not have the business, Chinaoverseas, handles the mattertrulyto needto look for the relations.
一瓶啤酒下了肚,苏白拿出手机准备给楚兆打电话,自己和楚兆的关系现在有点尴尬,但好在上次双方都说开了,关系没以前那么亲密,但至少还算是个朋友,有楚兆这个在警局里也算是头目的一位帮忙介绍,苏白也不担心自己这个私家侦探事务所会没业务,无论是中国还是国外,办事情确实都是需要找关系。
The publicnumber„kongbu66”sent in the news, Su Baiis somewhat surprised, beforehas examinedaboutpreviousstoryworldMission Reward.
公众号“kongbu66”发来了消息,苏白有些意外,之前关于上次故事世界的任务奖励自己已经查看过了。
The pointcomeslooked,unexpectedlyyesannounced under oneselfwill enter the storyworldonemonthlaterif as expected.
点开来一看,居然是预告自己不出意外的话会在一个月后进入下个故事世界。Alreadymore and morepopularandconveniencethispublicnumber.
已经越来越亲民化和方便了么这个公众号。Su Baiselected the address book, when preparedgroup of telephones, outsideresounded the dingsunexpectedly, Su Baipressedbutton on a table, „come.”苏白点开了通讯录,准备拨电话时,外面居然响起了门铃声,苏白按了一下桌上的按钮,“请进。”
The gatewas shoved open,
门被推开,
The middle-aged man who is wearing the bluesuitwalked, hiswhole personseems like the atmosphere, shouldbe a succeeding in one's pursuitperson.
一个身穿着蓝色西装的中年男子走了进来,他整个人看起来很是大气,应该是一个事业有成的人。„Inoticedhereto hangthissignveryfor a long time, todaylistened to the subordinateto saythisDetectiveofficefinallysomepeople, thereforeIvisited, walks the neighbor. Thisismyname card.”
“我注意到这里挂着这个牌子挺长时间了,今天听手下人说这个侦探事务所终于有人了,所以我过来拜访一下,也算是走走邻居。这是鄙人的名片。”Su Baireceived the name card, naturally, Su Baidoes not believe that thispersonisdrops around, heresmallcompanyis as numerous as the hairs of an ox, does the Detectiveoffice how attentionthisjustopeneddrop around? Moreover, whenhereis the oldBeijingalleywalks the neighbor?苏白接过名片,当然,苏白不相信这个人是来串门的,这里小公司多如牛毛,怎么偏偏注意这个刚刚开张的侦探事务所来串门?而且,当这里是老北京胡同走街坊么?Jie Bing, a verysolemnname, the glaciernetworkcompanydeputy manager, thiscompanymoves intoentire15 th here, thealsoseveraltheiroffices that alsoSu Baiis, also when is a quitefamousonline gamedevelopscompany, under the hand«ExpeditessometimesOL»«Longwu»«UndefeatedLegend»severalgameSu Baivisit the homepagecanseetheseadvertisementsonce for a while, the popularityis very high.解禀,一个很端庄的名字,冰川网络公司的副总经理,这家公司就入驻在这里的整个第十五层,同时苏白所在的这一层也有好几个他们的办公室,算是一家比较有名气的网络游戏开发公司,手底下的《远征ol》《龙武》《不败传说》几个游戏苏白有时候浏览网页时也能时不时看见这些广告,人气很高。Su Baiopened a box on oneselftable, extracted an ownname cardto hand overfrom the box, thenheld appreciativelythisto inlaygold-edgedalsoto bring the name card of lightfragrance, asked:苏白打开了自己桌上的一个盒子,从盒子里抽出了一张自己的名片递了过去,然后把玩着这个镶着金边同时带着淡淡香味的名片,问道:„Is thisname cardbackgroundPeach Blossom Spring?”
“这名片背景是桃花源么?”Inbackground, profusion of fallen petals, luxuriant grass, row of house, a freshnaturalfeeling.
背景里,落英缤纷,芳草萋萋,有一排屋舍,给人一种清新自然的感觉。„.” The Jie Bingnodsaid.
“正是。”解禀点头道。„Ithought that Peach Blossom Springbackgroundsealon the name cardis a veryinauspiciousmatter.”
“我个人觉得把桃花源背景印在名片上是一件很不吉利的事情。”„?”Jie Bingsaton the Su Baioppositetable, „listens in reverent attention.”
“哦?”解禀自己在苏白对面的桌子上坐了下来,“洗耳恭听。”Zhou Dunyihad once saidarticlebyeverywhere along the road, the meaningis the articleis usedto transmit the thought. The dragon believes that the story and plot and the characternovelwait/etc, tocontrast a main thought that orcalled an atmosphere.
周敦颐曾说过文以载道,意思是文章是用来传递思想的。龙认为,小说里的故事和情节以及人物等等,都是为了烘托出一个主题思想,或者叫一种氛围。
The atmospherethought that the plotandmustrevealneedsto complement one another, the two daysplottriggeredmanydebates, thisis the issue of dragon, thing that because the dragon was unable to expressvery muchperfectlyvery muchharmoniouslyoneselfwithappropriate the plot of plotas well asfittingcontrasting, will therefore givesomereaderunbalancedfeelings.
剧情和所要表露的氛围思想需要相辅相成,这两天的剧情引起了很多争论,这是龙的问题,因为龙还不能很完美很和谐地把自己想要表达出来的东西用合适的剧情以及贴合的情节给烘托出来,所以会给一些读者一种失衡的感觉。
After this is also the dragon , to continue spaceanddirection that progressesandenhances, gold/metalnotbarefoot, the personwill not have the complete human, the dragonwill never say the entertainers'guild that oneselfwill writewill be perfectbusily, in fact, has come backto have a look at the beforehandplotvery mucheach time, alwaysthought that will havemanydisappointment, someplaces, ifwill rewriteagainonetime, cangraspwell, canwritemore naturalorcompactis more splendid.
这也是龙以后继续进步和提高的空间和方向,金无赤足,人无完人,龙从来不会说自己写的书会完美得很无暇,事实上,每次回过头看看以前的剧情,总觉得有很多缺憾,有些地方,如果再重写一次,能够把握得更好,能够写得更自然或者更紧凑更精彩。But the hypertext fictionafter all is the thing that every day must renew, the dragonhas not managed the legal sciencebeacon-fireevenis the moon/monthgoesto carveownplot and mentalitywith the bananabigsuchweekgreatlyslowly, the dragonet is also a person, will have several days of energybadorisinspirationalinsufficienttime, plotof several daysis possibly forced, possiblyis stiff, possiblymakespeoplethinkto irrigate, possiblyis irritable, possiblyall sorts is lower than the average level of dragonetbook, but the original intention of thesenon-dragon, is not the dragonintentionally.
但网络小说毕竟是一个每天必须都要更新的事物,龙也没办法学烽火大大跟香蕉大大那样周更甚至是月更去慢慢雕琢自己的剧情和思路,小龙也是人吧,也会有某几天精力不济或者是灵感不足的时候,那几天的剧情可能牵强,可能生硬,可能让人觉得灌水,可能别扭,可能种种的低于小龙书的平均水平,但这些都非龙的本意,也不是龙的故意。Alsohopes that the friendscanforgive, the outstandingathletealsohas the condition not goodcompetitionmistaketime, let alone the dragonetis equal tocompetingto accepteveryonein the symbolas a writerevery dayto inspectevery dayto be the same, particularly the lead of dragonis not the youngyoungster of popularity the story that hits the faceto work hard for the prosperity of the country, butis a mental disorderstory, dailysubstitutes itselfin the thought of mental disorderlead the ideaplot, the dragonquicklywas also nervous, hehe.
也希望亲们能多加包涵一下,再优秀的运动员也有状态不好比赛失误的时候,何况小龙作为一个写手每天都在码字等于是每天都在比赛接受大家检查一样,尤其是龙的主角不是大众化的小小少年被打脸奋发图强的故事,而是一个精神病的故事,天天把自己代入精神病主角的思维里去构思情节,龙也快神经质了,嘿嘿。
The idle talksaidso many, butwantsto telleveryone a matter,
废话说了这么多,只是想告诉大家一件事,Thisis the today'sfirst, eruptstoday!( To be continued.)
这是今天第一更,今天爆发!(未完待续。)
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