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#662: The paper logic's second

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Pen interest pavilion 笔趣阁 www.xbiquge.cc, renews the Demon-hunting Lord latest chapter most quickly! www.xbiquge.cc,最快更新狩魔领主最新章节！ This „fishfolk” from ice piece the posture, after should be died time, by the old person is discovered, because outside of limbs was eaten much by various fish, at this time is only left over the slightly hunchbacked body. 从冰块里这“鱼人”的姿势来看,应该是死去一段时间之后才被老人发现的,因为肢体的外端都被各类鱼吃了不少,此时只剩下略显伛偻的身体。 „They usually do not appear in the offshore, this is...” “它们通常不在近海出现啊,这是…” Jeremy approaches looks, is actually discovered that the fishfolk not only stature is huge, the shape of head compared with impression in fierce many. The body surface stretched out several strange Bone Spike successively, seems like a not being able to say aggression feeling. This may always have no aggressivity with recent years marine study material completely incompatible —— fishfolk in the Rasman researcher eyes, because lives in the distant seas, only then the long-distance voyage fleet has a few witnesses the record, moreover generally only has one meter about four. Therefore Jeremy knows, at present this fishfolk perhaps and these radically are two matters. 杰里米凑近瞧了瞧,却是发现鱼人不但身材巨大,脑袋的形状比印象中凶恶了不少。其身体表面节节伸出了数根怪异的骨刺,看上去有一种说不出的侵略感。这可和近些年的海洋研究资料完全不符——鱼人在拉西曼研究者眼中一直以来都没什么攻击性,因为生活在远海,只有远航船队才有少数目击记录,而且个头普遍只有一米四左右。因此杰里米知道,眼前这种鱼人恐怕和那些根本就是两码事。 „It is estimated that must additionally appoint the open sea the inspection vessel, recently issued several quest post a reward... is really eventful time, the border was not peaceful recently.” “估计要加派外海的考察船了,最近多发布几个任务悬赏吧…真是多事之秋啊,边境最近也不太平。” Jeremy rubbed the brow, this saying makes the old person turn head to say interestingly: „Border? Currently also has to the Rasman discontented small country?” 杰里米揉了揉眉头,这话让老人饶有兴趣的扭头道:“边境？现在还有对拉西曼不满的小国？” „Is actually discontented with Rasman, several countries of Eskar Nation by to him started the active war, does not know that sent what insanity. Cannot do well will fight a war...” “倒不是对拉西曼不满,艾斯卡国对他旁边的几个国家都发起了主动战争,也不知道是发了什么疯。搞不好又会打一场大战…” „Isn't that to us the good deed?” “那对咱们来说不是好事么？” „That said that after Eskar Nation that but I always think since new King Talia high-rank, was a little uncontrolled like the mad dog. This feeling is not very good.” “话是这么说,但我总觉的艾斯卡国自从新国王塔利娅上位后,就有点像疯狗一样不受控制了。这感觉不是很好。” „Mad dog...” “疯狗…” Jeremy narrowed the eye. 杰里米眯起了眼睛。 ****** ****** On September 8 fleet that Houdini led had entered the familiar sea area, it is expected that three days then can arrive in Rasman. 九月 8 日,胡迪尼率领的舰队已经进入了熟悉的海域,预计还有三天便能抵达拉西曼。 The sailors in cabin enlivened much compared with the past, shakes for a month in the sea to anybody is not the comfortable matter, what therefore is more excited than the sailors is Efta comes soldiers that. The Barbarian robust man shouted out to play being barebacked wrestling, but cavalry took longsword to gesticulate back and forth, is venting exuberant Energy. 船舱内的水手们都是比以往活跃了不少,在海上晃悠一个多月对任何人来说都不是什么舒服事,所以比水手们更兴奋的是艾弗塔来的士兵们。蛮族壮汉呼喝着玩儿起了赤膊摔角,而骑兵们则拿着长剑来回比划,发泄着旺盛的精力。 In cabin, a Silvia margin the cup of ice cream, at the same time skilled single-handed picking up a face-down mahjong piece, immediately „” a buckle: „Wins by own draw! 13 small! hā hā hā ——” 船舱内,西尔维娅一边端着冰淇淋的杯子,一边熟练的单手摸牌,随即“啪”的一扣:“自摸！十三幺！哈哈哈——” „ahhhhhhhhh is how possible! False!?” “啊啊啊啊啊怎么可能！假的吧！？” „My gold coins!” “我的金币啊！” Nafi, Akasha and Merinsera are randomly call to encircle to look that she cheats, immediately is puts on a long face to start to turn nearby gold coins, talked over to make under the Silvia package all accommodation —— latter strike one's chest to guarantee, a face was favorite. 奈菲、阿卡莎和麦琳瑟拉都是嗷嗷乱叫着围过来看她是不是作弊,随即都是哭丧着脸开始翻旁边的金币,念叨着要让西尔维娅包下所有食宿费——后者拍着胸脯保证下来,一脸得意。 „Has anything to invite anything! Although looks for the most expensive point! hā hā hā...” “有什么请什么！尽管找最贵的点！哈哈哈…” Above the joyful cabin, Houdini is revising paper about the mutation deep sea creature in the captain, Luo Di is pushing the door to enter, after planning and him chats comes ashore the arrangement, is seeing the writing of his feather writing, then referred to curiously: „deep sea creature? Do I have a look?” 在充满欢乐的船舱上方,胡迪尼正在船长室内修改着自己关于变异深海生物的论文,罗迪推门而入,打算和他聊聊上岸后的安排,正看到他羽毛笔下的文字,便好奇的指了指:“深海生物的？我看看可以么？” „Is revising, you have a look, happen to offers an opinion.” “正在修改,你看看,正好提提意见吧。” Houdini this saying is actually the smalltalk, because he knows that Luo Di has not written the paper. Or... entire Karun Kingdom did not have the paper system of tenth scale. The paper on that «Magic» periodical in his eyes is really extremely superficial, places Rasman to be spurted the dog absolutely. 胡迪尼这话其实是客套,因为他知道罗迪没写过论文。或者说…整个卡伦王国都还没有成规模的论文体系。那《魔法》期刊上的论文在他眼中实在是太过肤浅,放在拉西曼绝对是要被喷成狗的。 How Luo Di is actually the curious Rasman's paper writes. As the undergraduate of new century, initially to complete the graduation thesis, he has also read many literature truly. Said that undergraduate college experience, after graduating, specialized content not many of truly remembering, but the change of logic way can actually let the person income truly the thing. 罗迪其实是好奇拉西曼的论文到底怎么写的。作为新世纪的本科毕业生,当初为了完成毕业论文,他也是真正看过不少文献的。说起来大学本科这种经历,毕业后真正记得的专业内容没多少,可思维逻辑方式的改变却是真正能让人收益的东西。 Therefore read the paper that Houdini wrote after simply, the Luo Di's conclusion was: This fellow writes the content, although does not have the issue, may express form actually exceptionally Chaos, but also has no direct-viewing graph, read for quite a while only to feel the mallet, has not made one be able to hold the key reading logic sequence rapidly. 所以简单阅读了胡迪尼写的论文以后,罗迪的结论是:这家伙写得内容虽然没问题,可表达格式却异常混乱,还没有任何直观的图表,读了半天只感觉东一榔头西一棒槌,并没有让人能够迅速抓住重点的阅读逻辑顺序。 A straw in the wind, by „Magister” the paper is also in this level, Luo Di estimated that Rasman entire magic world paper 80% also wide scopes have similar issue —— not to improve, it is estimated that is only because everyone was used. 一叶知秋,以“魔导师”的论文还处于这种水平来看,罗迪估计拉西曼整个魔法界的论文八成也大范围存在类似问题——之所以没有改善,估计只是因为大家都习惯了而已。 „What kind of?” “怎么样？” Houdini thought that on expertise level, Luo Di was exploded by oneself. Therefore asked this saying time unavoidably has the tone of waiting praise. Luo Di nature will not find fault directly, nods saying: The detail that „you see were more than much, before these analyses that I saw were, has not heard, but clearly had strong reference significance. To come research of Rasman to the marine life to accumulate much, compares, Karun Kingdom in this aspect estimated that also has the big piece blank.” 胡迪尼觉得就专业知识水平来说,罗迪是被自己完爆的。因此问这话的时候不免带着等待夸奖的语气。罗迪自然不会直接挑毛病,点点头道:“你看到的细节比我看到的多了不少,这些分析都是以前没听说过,但显然具有很强的参考意义。想来拉西曼对海洋生物的研究已经积累不少了,相比起来,卡伦王国在这方面估计还有大片空白。” „After all Rasman has hit to take nearby 10 many small countries, now has put the goal, otherwise presently resources in the future definitely will be insufficient.” “毕竟拉西曼已经打服了附近的十多个小国,现在已经把目标放得更远,否则当前的资源未来肯定是不够用的。” This point nature is the proud matter, but he looked that Luo Di also has the words saying that then said curiously: „Is some places is not quite clear?” 这一点自然是值得骄傲的事情,不过他看罗迪还有话讲,便好奇道:“是不是有些地方不太明白？” „Is not actually clear, what I am thinking, this paper will you submit a piece of writing to publish when the time comes?” “倒不是不明白,我在想的是,这篇论文你到时候会投稿发表吧？” „Right, is responsible for the «Deep Blue» periodical of marine life. I before the manuscript over three papers, are Rasman at present the most authoritative sea class scientific journal.” “对,负责海洋生物的《深蓝》期刊。我以前过稿过三篇论文,算是拉西曼目前最权威的海洋类学术期刊。” Houdini this saying said very much has the energy, after all these papers brought „Arcane Energy Points” for him much. But Luo Di does not have to ask anything again, takes to begin a stroke on the contrary directly, reads his paper while drew in a simple histogram table —— Houdini paper all data to display directly, making Luo Di this modern university student look at dizzy, now graph one row, immediately felt refreshing. 胡迪尼这话说得很有底气,毕竟这几篇论文为他带来了不少“奥能点数”。可罗迪却没再多问什么,反倒是直接拿起笔,一边看他的论文一边画了一个简单的柱状图表——胡迪尼的论文里所有数据都是直接罗列,让罗迪这个现代大学生看得头昏脑涨,如今图表一列,顿时感觉神清气爽。 Afterward is the reorganization logic sequence. The Luo Di sciences and engineering family background, wrote the paper before the structure is roughly „asks issue” and „to come up with hypothesis” and „row of plans” and „to do experiment” and „results analysis” and „conclusion”. The after paper of this scientific research inspection nature to put it bluntly is the contrast, makes the analysis, therefore saved the laboratory procedure, but the paper wants qualified, „simple understood eight characters easy to understand and clearly” is precondition —— says this only, Houdini this pile of writing cannot go through a strategic pass. 随后便是整理逻辑顺序。罗迪理工科出身,以前写论文的结构大致就是“提问题”、“作假设”、“列计划”、“做实验”、“分析结果”、“得结论”。这种科研考察性质的论文说白了就是对比后作出分析,因此省了实验步骤,但论文想要合格,“简单易懂、清晰明了”八个字是先决条件——单说这个,胡迪尼这堆文字就过不了关。 He does made the combination the paper content order. Naturally to respect the Houdini achievement, Luo Di wrote a program on the scratch paper by the brief outline, also wrote a table of contents in front , indicating similar „1. about the research of ayr shark mutated species class” under lists „1.1 behaviors exceptionally” and so on clear structure. 他所做的不过是把论文内容顺序重新做了组合。当然为了尊重胡迪尼的成果,罗迪是在草稿纸上以简短概述写了一个大纲,同时在前面还写了一个目录,表明了类似“1.关于艾尔鲨变异种类的研究”下面列出“1.1行为异常”之类的清晰结构。 The 2~3 minute, Luo Di then finished this program. Was joined to the picture two blueprints, Luo Di gives Houdini to say conveniently: „In Efta research department, I makes them write the thing is this form. The content I have not revised, because I thought that is very good, but the form optimizes, should read to be better? Naturally this is only my personal view.” 前后不过两三分钟,罗迪便写完了这个大纲。配上随手画的两个图纸,罗迪递给了胡迪尼道:“在艾弗塔研究部里,我让他们写得东西都是这种格式的。内容我没修改,因为我觉得已经很好了,不过格式优化一下,应该读起来更好？当然这只是我的个人观点。” Luo Di can not do that but his behavior at this moment is actually more like an experiment... he to know, changes the paper form in purely the situation, how many Rasman can mage accept? 罗迪本来可以不这么做,但他此刻的行为其实更像是一个实验…他想知道,单纯改变论文格式的情况下,拉西曼法师能接受多少？
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