Dao Priest Faraway Placefeels itself, canpick upslightly0.1thisyoung people who writes the script.天涯子道长感觉自己,可以稍稍提点一下这位写剧本的年轻人。„cough.”Therefore, dao priestcough, said out loud: „Thislittle friend, that the setting of yourbronze, silverandgoldunconsciously, sometoochild's play?”
“咳。”于是,道长咳了一声,出声道:“这位小友,那个,你不觉的青铜、白银、黄金的设定,有些太儿戏了吗?”Gao Moumouhad a scare, hestoodunder the tree shade in villawas very long, unexpectedlyhad not discovered that ownside is also standingindividual!高某某被吓了一跳,他站在别墅的树荫下很久了,竟然都没发现自己的身边还站着个人!Heturns the head, thensawwhite hairDaoist, white haired babyface, besides some corner of the eyewrinkles, on the facedoes not see the yearsslightly the trace.
他一转过头来,便看到了一头白发的道人,鹤发童颜,除了眼角微微有一些皱纹外,脸上再不见岁月的痕迹。ThisOld Taoistmaintenancemaybe really good!
这老道保养的可真好!Moreover, thiswhite hairdao priestfamiliar by face, is very goodto the firstimpression of person. Seeshim, will makepersonsubconsciousfeelhimto be reliable, making one be intimate with.
而且,这白发道长面善,给人的第一印象特别好。一眼看到他,就会让人下意识感觉他可靠,让人亲近。ThisisDao Priest Faraway Placeinbornbringingkindhalo, lets the strangertohisfavourability+50abilities!
这就是天涯子道长天生自带的亲切光环,让陌生人对他好感度+50的能力!Alsobecausejusthasthisstrangeaffinity, Dao Priest Faraway Place in the past nearover the last 300 years, unceasing, unceasingfoundyoungcultivator, when with the opposite partycontacts, obtainsfavourability that the opposite partymultiplies, finallyis successfulto sellownskill!
也正因为有这种奇怪的亲和力,天涯子道长在过去近三百年来,才会不断的、不断的找到年轻的修士,并和对方接触时,就得到对方倍增的好感度,最终成功将自己的功力推销出去!Now, becausethiskindhalo, makingGao Moumouonefeel that thisdao priest makes one have the favorable impressionvery much.
现在,因为这亲切光环,让高某某一眼就感觉这位道长让人很有好感。that being the case, listening to the dao priest'sopinionalsoto might as well!既然如此的话,听听道长的意见也无妨嘛!„dao priesthello/you good.”Gao Moumousaid that--is in front oftaoist priest, is set at the bronze, silver and goldenthreerankscultivator, a littlewill be strange? However, hemakes the movie, withpersonpopular sciencecultivation, so long asestablishesinteresting, otherdoesn't matter.
“道长你好。”高某某道——当着人家道士的面,将修真者设定为青铜、白银、黄金三个等级,会有点怪吗?但是,他是拍电影啊,又不是要和人科普修真,只要设定有趣,其他没关系啊。„AlthoughIknow that the little friendyoumustwrite a script of movie...... to be sorry the little friend, Ihave been listening toyoursoliloquizein the nearbya moment ago, thereforeknew a general idea.”White hairDaoistwas archingcupping one hand in the other across the chesttoGao Moumou, said.
“虽然我知道小友你是要写一部电影的剧本……抱歉小友,我刚才一直在边上听着你自言自语,所以知道了个大概。”白发道人对着高某某拱了拱手,道。„doesn't matter, dao priest. Moreover, these that Iwrotea moment ago are also only an setting.”Gao Moumoulightlysmiles, said: „Thatdao priestbelieves how Ishouldto establish the cultivator'srankam?”
“没关系的,道长。而且,我刚才写的这些也只是个设定。”高某某轻轻一笑,又道:“那道长认为,我应该要怎么设定修士的等级才是?”Dao Priest Faraway Placecontinues saying: „At leastcannotbe too optional, IfeelLV 1, LV 2, LV 3andLV 4according tothis timeanalogyonvery nice!”天涯子道长继续道:“至少不能太随意,我感觉一级、二级、三级、四级依此时类推就很不错!”Gao Moumou: „......”高某某:“……”Might as wellmybronze, silverandgold, mostbehindadd a platinum, diamond, great master and King.
还不如我的青铜、白银、黄金,最多后面再加个铂金、钻石、大师、王者。„No?”Dao Priest Faraway Placecanseefrom the Gao Moumou'scomplexion, ownpropositiondregs, completeunablewas acceptedvery much.
“不行吗?”天涯子道长从高某某的脸色中就可以看出,自己的提议很渣,完全无法被人接受。Gao Moumousincerenod of: „LV 1 and LV 2'swords, will remindmeof the elementary studentsystem, the first grade, the second grade and third grade, ex analogia.”高某某诚恳的点了点头:“一级、二级的话,会让我想起小学生制度,一年级,二年级和三年级,依此类推。”Dao Priest Faraway Place: „......”天涯子道长:“……”
After the moment, dao priestclenches teeth saying: „Thattrades the end product. First Stage, Second StageandThird Stage, can thisnot?”
片刻后,道长咬了咬牙道:“那就换成品。一品、二品、三品,这样可以不?”Gao Moumoulooked atdao priestonesilently, except for the digitalrank, thisdao priestcan't find outhas the characteristicsrankconcept?高某某默默望了道长一眼,除了数字等级,这位道长就想不出更有特色的等级观念吗?However, First Stage, Second StageandThird Stageanything, writes down.
不过罢了,一品、二品、三品啥的,也记下来吧。by that time, letsShuhangandunder the Miss Yu Jiaojiaotogetherdiscussion, wants the metalseriesrank, wants the digitalseriesrank.到时候,让书航和鱼娇娇姑娘一起讨论下,到底是要金属系列等级呢,还是要数字系列等级。Therefore, record of Gao Moumouinnotebook‚grade’setting.
于是,高某某在笔记本上记录下了‘品级’的设定。Dao Priest Faraway Placesatisfiedimmediately, so long asmadethisyoung peoplechange the setting of cultivationrank, hisgoalwas achieved.天涯子道长顿时就满意了,只要让这位年轻人改了修真等级的设定,他的目的就达到了。Properly speaking, Dao Priest Faraway Place that the goalhas achieved, shouldto retire after meritorious service.
按道理说,目的已经达到的天涯子道长,应该要功成身退。Butdon't know why...... unwittingly, Dao Priest Faraway Placestartsto discuss the plot of storywithGao Moumouunexpectedly.
但不知道为什么……不知不觉间,天涯子道长竟然开始和高某某谈论起故事的剧情来。
The words that turn headthinks, Faraway Place felt very inconceivable!
回头想想的话,天涯子自己都感觉很不可思议!Hewantsto propose‚the cultivationrank that’under the pointthisyoung peopleestablishobviouslyfrom the beginningconcept.
明明他一开始只是想提点下这位年轻人设定的‘修真等级’观念的。Butdon't know why, hefelt that at presentthisyoung peoplediscussvery muchgood. Two peoplechattedare chatting the time, howchatted the plot to write.
但不知道为什么,他感觉眼前这位年轻人很善谈。两人聊着聊着时候,就聊起剧情要怎么写来来。Faraway Placehas not written the storynovel, buthislife experienceis rich!天涯子没写过故事小说,但他人生经历丰富啊!Richlife experience, so long asdisclosedsomeslightly, canmakeGaoobtain very biginspiration.
丰富的人生经历,只要稍稍透露出一些,都能让高某得到很大的启发。For example......
比如……Faraway Placesaid: „Isaw the little frienda moment ago, whenwrites the setting, said that canwrite a movingstory? Moreovermain charactermustbe very pitiful, lets of personsympathy?”天涯子说:“我刚才见小友在写设定的时候,说是要写一个让人感动的故事?而且主角一定要很悲惨,让人不由同情的那种?”„, Aboutis more pitiful, can dao priest that lettingmain characterchangewhathaveto suggest?”Gao Moumouasked--withafterdao priestmorechattedis longer, hetothiswhite hairdao priestincomparablyhas admired, lifewith ample experience of opposite party, was discerning, directioneach timecanmakehimgush outmoreinspirations.
“正是,关于让主角变的更凄惨,道长可有什么建议?”高某某问道——随着和道长越聊越久后,他对这位白发道长已经无比佩服,对方的人生经验丰富,眼光独到,每次的指点都能让他涌出更多的灵感。„When actually, Iheard the little friendyouto saymain character's that first lovesenior apprentice sistermarryothers ’ the plota moment ago ‚, in the mindrememberedlong time ago, fellow daoist of mynext doorschool, hisexperienceimpressive.”Faraway Placedeepsighing, recalled the pastmatter.
“其实,我刚才听到小友你说的主角的‘初恋师姐嫁给别人’的剧情时,脑海中就想起了很久以前,我隔壁一个门派的道友,他的经历让人印象深刻。”天涯子深深的叹了口气,回想起了当年的事。Once the peopleget old, especiallyliked‚back then’.
人一旦上了年纪,就特别喜欢‘想当年’。„In the past, a fellow daoist of mynext doorschool, main character in yourstorysettingwith the little friend was very similar, hehasjunior apprentice sister that twosentimentslike each other, two peoplehave loved one another for more than tenyears. Howeversuddenlyone day, junior apprentice sisterunder the arrangement of elder, mustmarryanotherman. Moreover, the weddingis heldseveraldayslater.”
“当年啊,我隔壁门派的一位道友,就和小友你故事设定中的主角很相似,他有一个两情相悦的师妹,两人已经相恋了十多年。但是突然有一天,师妹在长辈的安排下,要嫁给另一个男人了。而且,婚礼在几天后就举行。”„At that time, junior apprentice sistersaida single sentencetothatfellow daoist: That daymywedding, youlook forme. So long asyoucome, mythenmy humble homeall, bow to Heaven and Earthwithyou.”
“当时,师妹对那位道友说一句话:我大婚那天,你过来找我。只要你过来,我便舍下一切,与你拜堂。”„However, at the junior apprentice sisterweddingcouple of days ago, my fellow daoistrushed towedding, preparesto put togetherallalso to prevent the junior apprentice sister'swedding! However, when the halfway, hemet a riot...... the beast of prey, thenhewas hit the severe woundbythatbeast of prey, the stuporseveraldays. Whenherestoreswith great difficulty, when looksjunior apprentice sister, junior apprentice sisteralreadyandanothermangot married.”
“然而,在师妹大婚前两天,我的那位道友就赶往婚礼现场,准备拼上一切也要阻止师妹的婚礼!但是,在半路上时,他遇上了一只暴乱的……猛兽,然后他被那只猛兽撞成重伤,昏迷了好几天。当他好不容易恢复过来,去找师妹时,师妹已经和另一个男人完婚了。”At this point, Faraway Placeincomparablysighed--, if the pastthatonly‚monsterbeast’were the conspiracy, butheinspectedafterwardonetimeforthatfellow daoist, the monsterbeast of thatriotappeared, really is completely only a coincidence.
说到这里,天涯子无比感叹——如果当年那只‘妖兽’是阴谋也就罢了,但是后来他替那位道友去检查了一次,那只暴乱的妖兽出现,真的完全只是一个巧合。Onlycansay, Lane providenceperson.
只能说,天意人啊。
After sighing, Dao Priest Faraway Placesaid: „Iam thinking,youcanchangethiscontent, substitutessenior apprentice sisterbody in yourscript.”
感叹完后,天涯子道长道:“我在想,你可以将这一段内容修改一下,代入到你剧本中的师姐身上。”„Stick, was good. Then, whenmale lead, becauseis accidental/surprised, loses the senior apprentice sister'stime, the lamentation of thattearing the heart and rending the lungs, the sadness of thatLushanwaterfalladverse current, can definitely manyto be movedto cry.”Gaowrites with vigor, fastrecordsin the notebook.
“棒,太棒了。如此一来,当男主角因为意外,痛失自己师姐的时候,那种撕心裂肺的悔恨,那种庐山瀑布逆流的悲伤,肯定能让很多人感动到落泪。”高某奋笔疾书,飞快的在笔记本上记录着。Dao Priest Faraway Placeis smiling the nod, thenalsoadded: „Moreover, but alsoa little--Ifelt, sincemustmakemain characterchange into the retaliatory capabilitysadly, butsenior apprentice sisterhusband and wifedied, saddegreealsoby farinsufficient. Moreover the grief and indignationpattern of drawing outdeep love between man and womanis too small. The little friends can definitely an atmosphericpoint, make the main character'sentireschoolallbe extinguishedby‚evilmysteriousinfluence’directly, like thiscan the grief and indignation of greateststimulationmain characterinnermost feelings! Thus, canmake the plotnot be restricted in the lowly personchildrento likehating the rival in love, raisespromotes toCountrySchoolbigaurasurfaceall of a sudden! The patternpromoted.”天涯子道长微笑着点头,然后又补充道:“另外,还有一点——我感觉既然要让主角悲伤化为报复力量的话,只是师姐夫妇死掉,悲伤程度还远远不够。而且儿女情长引出的的悲愤格局太小。小友完全可以大气一点,直接让主角的整个门派被‘邪恶的神秘势力’全灭,这样子才能最大程度的激发主角内心的悲愤!这样,也能让剧情不限于小家子儿女爱恨情仇,一下子提升到家国门派这种大气场面!格局就提升了很多。”„dao priestlecturewas good.”Gao Moumoufeltoneselfmet the good teacher and helpful friend, deadsweethearthowcompared with does ondieentire family?
“道长讲的太棒了。”高某某感觉自己遇上了良师益友,死爱人怎么比的上死全家?Dao Priest Faraway Placecontinuesto show a faint smile: „Actually, we can also givemain characterestablishesone‚the coughblood’ the sickness, sadly when to the extreme, lightlycoughis the glowing redblood. Candraw the sympathy of audience.”天涯子道长继续微微一笑:“其实,我们还可以给主角设定一个‘咳血’的病,悲伤至极点时,轻轻一咳就是红通通的鲜血。更能引起观众的同情。”„splendidsplendid!”Gao Moumourecordsfast.
“好极好极!”高某某飞快记录下来。Then, Gao MoumouandDao Priest Faraway Placeinthistopicmorewalkin‚oppressivelord’are farther, completeunableturned head.
就这样,高某某和天涯子道长在‘虐主’这一话题上越走越远,完全无法回头了。
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……WhenSong ShuhangandYu Jiaojiaoreturn to the villa, sawwhite hairdao priestandGao Moumouare under the hot sun, discussesreallyhappyscene.
当宋书航和鱼娇娇回到别墅的时候,就看到了白发道长和高某某顶着烈日,相谈甚欢的场面。Thispicture, simplydamn.
这画面,简直见鬼了。Yu Jiaojiaoshockedly said: „It is not good, Ialsothink that Bestowal Madmanlet offyou, he was never so expected that dedicated, unexpectedlyfoundmy familyto comecontinuously. Thisismustwait for gains without pains.”鱼娇娇惊道:“不好,我还以为传功狂放过你了,没想到他这么执着,竟然一直找到我家来了。这是要守株待兔啊。”Worthilyis'Bestowal Madman' in legend, withoutis so goodto deal with--it is said that anybyyoungcultivator that Bestowal Madmansettles on, 8 or 9 out of 10acceptedBestowal Madman‚Bestowal’.
不愧是传说中的‘传功狂’,没这么好应付啊——据说,凡是被传功狂看中的年轻修士,十有八九都接受了传功狂的‘传功’。could it be, is Song Shuhangalsofinally difficultto escapethistribulation?难道,宋书航最后也难逃这一劫?„Do wewantEarth Escapeto return to the villa?”Song Shuhanginquired.
“我们要不要地遁回别墅?”宋书航询问道。Howeverlate, frontwhite hairdao priestFaraway Placehad inducedSong ShuhangandYu Jiaojiao, heturns the head, is showing a faint smiletotwo people.
但是迟了,前方白发道长天涯子已经感应到了宋书航和鱼娇娇,他转过头来,对着两人微微一笑。Thatsmiles, toShuhangandYu Jiaojiao, is‚beautiful womancauses the downfall of the nation’absolutely, because the person in city and country, will be frightenedbythissmileis in chaotic situation......
那一笑,对书航和鱼娇娇来说,绝对是‘倾城倾国’,因为城和国里的人,都会被这笑容吓的鸡飞狗跳……Faraway Placesmiles, is salutingtoSong Shuhangsubmissively: „Little brother, we meet again.”天涯子笑罢,对着宋书航拱手行礼:“小兄弟,我们又见面了。”Song Shuhangforced smile, but also a ritual: „dao priestyouare quite dedicated.”宋书航苦笑,还了一礼:“道长您好执着。”„cough, Old Taoist is actually not rigid.”Faraway Placefaceonered, explained: „Actually is Old Taoistentrusted by the peoplelooks for the little friend...... yí?”
“咳,其实老道并没有那么执着的。”天涯子老脸一红,解释道:“其实老道是受人之托来寻找小友的……咦?”
When the wordstold only half, Faraway Placesawin the Song Shuhanghandis raisingthatbigbag. Insidethinks ofmanymeat bun.
话说到一半时,天涯子看到了宋书航手中提着的那条大袋子。里面装着很多的肉夹馍。Thissmell, is‚Fairy Lady Separated Snow’manufacturemeat bunwithout doubt.
这气味,正是‘别雪仙姬’制作的肉夹馍无疑。This did young fellow daoist, go tothatfish headshopto buymeat bununexpectedly?
这位小道友,竟然去那鱼头店买肉夹馍了?
Did heandFairy Lady Separated Snowmeet?
那他和别雪仙姬见面了吗?Gao Moumoudoubtfully askedat the same time: „Shuhang, did youknowwiththisdao priest?”
一边的高某某疑惑问道:“书航,你和这位道长认识?”Song Shuhangnods, sighed: „In the morning, Igo outto takecourier, wantsto buy the pointto eatforyouon the way. Then on road, has metwiththisdao priest.”宋书航点头,叹道:“早上时,我出去取个快递,顺路想给你们买点吃食。然后路上时,和这位道长见过一面。”Then, Shuhangis also askingtoFaraway Place: „dao priestsaida moment agoisentrusted by the people? Iswhomustlook forme?”
接着,书航又对着天涯子问道:“道长刚才说是受人之托?是谁要找我?”Faraway Placeis looking at the bigbag in Shuhanghand, smiles.天涯子望着书航手中的大袋子,神秘一笑。--entrustedmeto findyourperson, has seenwithyou.——委托我找你的人,已经和你见过了呢。
When Dao Priest Faraway Placeprepares saying that suddenly, heby anything seems to be hit was the same, the whole personflewsuddenly, has been hitto flyaboutmore than tenmetersdistance!天涯子道长正准备这么说时,突然,他似乎被什么东西撞到了一样,整个人突然飞了出去,一直被撞飞了近十几米的距离!But alsoall the way, hit a youngseedling.
一路上,还撞断了一棵幼树苗。
The moan of dao priestpaintransmits.道长痛苦的呻吟声传来。What's the matter?
怎么回事?Song Shuhangblinks, why was dao priesthitto flysuddenly? Iswhosneak attacksin the hidden place?宋书航眨了眨眼睛,为什么道长突然就被撞飞了?是谁在暗处偷袭?Gao Moumouis confused, suchexaggeratingflies, was hitto flybytentonstruck? However, hehad not noticed that anythingruns uponwhite hairDaoist.( To be continued.)高某某一头雾水,这么夸张的飞出去,是被十吨卡车撞飞的吗?但是,他没看到任何东西撞上白发道人啊。(未完待续。)
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