Dao Priest Faraway Place feels itself, can pick up slightly 0.1 this young people who writes the script. 天涯子道长感觉自己,可以稍稍提点一下这位写剧本的年轻人。 „cough.” Therefore, dao priest cough, said out loud: „This little friend, that the setting of your bronze, silver and gold unconsciously, some too child's play?” “咳。”于是,道长咳了一声,出声道:“这位小友,那个,你不觉的青铜、白银、黄金的设定,有些太儿戏了吗？” Gao Moumou had a scare, he stood under the tree shade in villa was very long, unexpectedly had not discovered that own side is also standing individual! 高某某被吓了一跳,他站在别墅的树荫下很久了,竟然都没发现自己的身边还站着个人！ He turns the head, then saw white hair Daoist, white haired babyface, besides some corner of the eye wrinkles, on the face does not see the years slightly the trace. 他一转过头来,便看到了一头白发的道人,鹤发童颜,除了眼角微微有一些皱纹外,脸上再不见岁月的痕迹。 This Old Taoist maintenance may be really good! 这老道保养的可真好！ Moreover, this white hair dao priest familiar by face, is very good to the first impression of person. Sees him, will make person subconscious feel him to be reliable, making one be intimate with. 而且,这白发道长面善,给人的第一印象特别好。一眼看到他,就会让人下意识感觉他可靠,让人亲近。 This is Dao Priest Faraway Place inborn bringing kind halo, lets the stranger to his favourability + 50 abilities! 这就是天涯子道长天生自带的亲切光环,让陌生人对他好感度＋50的能力！ Also because just has this strange affinity, Dao Priest Faraway Place in the past near over the last 300 years, unceasing, unceasing found young cultivator, when with the opposite party contacts, obtains favourability that the opposite party multiplies, finally is successful to sell own skill! 也正因为有这种奇怪的亲和力,天涯子道长在过去近三百年来,才会不断的、不断的找到年轻的修士,并和对方接触时,就得到对方倍增的好感度,最终成功将自己的功力推销出去！ Now, because this kind halo, making Gao Moumou one feel that this dao priest makes one have the favorable impression very much. 现在,因为这亲切光环,让高某某一眼就感觉这位道长让人很有好感。 that being the case, listening to the dao priest's opinion also to might as well! 既然如此的话,听听道长的意见也无妨嘛！ „dao priest hello/you good.” Gao Moumou said that-- is in front of taoist priest, is set at the bronze, silver and golden three ranks cultivator, a little will be strange? However, he makes the movie, with person popular science cultivation, so long as establishes interesting, other doesn't matter. “道长你好。”高某某道——当着人家道士的面,将修真者设定为青铜、白银、黄金三个等级,会有点怪吗？但是,他是拍电影啊,又不是要和人科普修真,只要设定有趣,其他没关系啊。 „Although I know that the little friend you must write a script of movie...... to be sorry the little friend, I have been listening to your soliloquize in the nearby a moment ago, therefore knew a general idea.” White hair Daoist was arching cupping one hand in the other across the chest to Gao Moumou, said. “虽然我知道小友你是要写一部电影的剧本……抱歉小友,我刚才一直在边上听着你自言自语,所以知道了个大概。”白发道人对着高某某拱了拱手,道。 „doesn't matter, dao priest. Moreover, these that I wrote a moment ago are also only an setting.” Gao Moumou lightly smiles, said: „That dao priest believes how I should to establish the cultivator's rank am?” “没关系的,道长。而且,我刚才写的这些也只是个设定。”高某某轻轻一笑,又道:“那道长认为,我应该要怎么设定修士的等级才是？” Dao Priest Faraway Place continues saying: „At least cannot be too optional, I feel LV 1, LV 2, LV 3 and LV 4 according to this time analogy on very nice!” 天涯子道长继续道:“至少不能太随意,我感觉一级、二级、三级、四级依此时类推就很不错！” Gao Moumou: „......” 高某某:“……” Might as well my bronze, silver and gold, most behind add a platinum, diamond, great master and King. 还不如我的青铜、白银、黄金,最多后面再加个铂金、钻石、大师、王者。 „No?” Dao Priest Faraway Place can see from the Gao Moumou's complexion, own proposition dregs, complete unable was accepted very much. “不行吗？”天涯子道长从高某某的脸色中就可以看出,自己的提议很渣,完全无法被人接受。 Gao Moumou sincere nod of: „LV 1 and LV 2's words, will remind me of the elementary student system, the first grade, the second grade and third grade, ex analogia.” 高某某诚恳的点了点头:“一级、二级的话,会让我想起小学生制度,一年级,二年级和三年级,依此类推。” Dao Priest Faraway Place: „......” 天涯子道长:“……” After the moment, dao priest clenches teeth saying: „That trades the end product. First Stage, Second Stage and Third Stage, can this not?” 片刻后,道长咬了咬牙道:“那就换成品。一品、二品、三品,这样可以不？” Gao Moumou looked at dao priest one silently, except for the digital rank, this dao priest can't find out has the characteristics rank concept? 高某某默默望了道长一眼,除了数字等级,这位道长就想不出更有特色的等级观念吗？ However, First Stage, Second Stage and Third Stage anything, writes down. 不过罢了,一品、二品、三品啥的,也记下来吧。 by that time, lets Shuhang and under the Miss Yu Jiaojiao together discussion, wants the metal series rank, wants the digital series rank. 到时候,让书航和鱼娇娇姑娘一起讨论下,到底是要金属系列等级呢,还是要数字系列等级。 Therefore, record of Gao Moumou in notebook ‚grade’ setting. 于是,高某某在笔记本上记录下了‘品级’的设定。 Dao Priest Faraway Place satisfied immediately, so long as made this young people change the setting of cultivation rank, his goal was achieved. 天涯子道长顿时就满意了,只要让这位年轻人改了修真等级的设定,他的目的就达到了。 Properly speaking, Dao Priest Faraway Place that the goal has achieved, should to retire after meritorious service. 按道理说,目的已经达到的天涯子道长,应该要功成身退。 But don't know why...... unwittingly, Dao Priest Faraway Place starts to discuss the plot of story with Gao Moumou unexpectedly. 但不知道为什么……不知不觉间,天涯子道长竟然开始和高某某谈论起故事的剧情来。 The words that turn head thinks, Faraway Place felt very inconceivable! 回头想想的话,天涯子自己都感觉很不可思议！ He wants to propose ‚the cultivation rank that’ under the point this young people establish obviously from the beginning concept. 明明他一开始只是想提点下这位年轻人设定的‘修真等级’观念的。 But don't know why, he felt that at present this young people discuss very much good. Two people chatted are chatting the time, how chatted the plot to write. 但不知道为什么,他感觉眼前这位年轻人很善谈。两人聊着聊着时候,就聊起剧情要怎么写来来。 Faraway Place has not written the story novel, but his life experience is rich! 天涯子没写过故事小说,但他人生经历丰富啊！ Rich life experience, so long as disclosed some slightly, can make Gao obtain very big inspiration. 丰富的人生经历,只要稍稍透露出一些,都能让高某得到很大的启发。 For example...... 比如…… Faraway Place said: „I saw the little friend a moment ago, when writes the setting, said that can write a moving story? Moreover main character must be very pitiful, lets of person sympathy?” 天涯子说:“我刚才见小友在写设定的时候,说是要写一个让人感动的故事？而且主角一定要很悲惨,让人不由同情的那种？” „, About is more pitiful, can dao priest that letting main character change what have to suggest?” Gao Moumou asked-- with after dao priest more chatted is longer, he to this white hair dao priest incomparably has admired, life with ample experience of opposite party, was discerning, direction each time can make him gush out more inspirations. “正是,关于让主角变的更凄惨,道长可有什么建议？”高某某问道——随着和道长越聊越久后,他对这位白发道长已经无比佩服,对方的人生经验丰富,眼光独到,每次的指点都能让他涌出更多的灵感。 „When actually, I heard the little friend you to say main character's that first love senior apprentice sister marry others ’ the plot a moment ago ‚, in the mind remembered long time ago, fellow daoist of my next door school, his experience impressive.” Faraway Place deep sighing, recalled the past matter. “其实,我刚才听到小友你说的主角的‘初恋师姐嫁给别人’的剧情时,脑海中就想起了很久以前,我隔壁一个门派的道友,他的经历让人印象深刻。”天涯子深深的叹了口气,回想起了当年的事。 Once the people get old, especially liked ‚back then’. 人一旦上了年纪,就特别喜欢‘想当年’。 „In the past, a fellow daoist of my next door school, main character in your story setting with the little friend was very similar, he has junior apprentice sister that two sentiments like each other, two people have loved one another for more than ten years. However suddenly one day, junior apprentice sister under the arrangement of elder, must marry another man. Moreover, the wedding is held several days later.” “当年啊,我隔壁门派的一位道友,就和小友你故事设定中的主角很相似,他有一个两情相悦的师妹,两人已经相恋了十多年。但是突然有一天,师妹在长辈的安排下,要嫁给另一个男人了。而且,婚礼在几天后就举行。” „At that time, junior apprentice sister said a single sentence to that fellow daoist: That day my wedding, you look for me. So long as you come, my then my humble home all, bow to Heaven and Earth with you.” “当时,师妹对那位道友说一句话:我大婚那天,你过来找我。只要你过来,我便舍下一切,与你拜堂。” „However, at the junior apprentice sister wedding couple of days ago, my fellow daoist rushed to wedding, prepares to put together all also to prevent the junior apprentice sister's wedding! However, when the halfway, he met a riot...... the beast of prey, then he was hit the severe wound by that beast of prey, the stupor several days. When he restores with great difficulty, when looks junior apprentice sister, junior apprentice sister already and another man got married.” “然而,在师妹大婚前两天,我的那位道友就赶往婚礼现场,准备拼上一切也要阻止师妹的婚礼！但是,在半路上时,他遇上了一只暴乱的……猛兽,然后他被那只猛兽撞成重伤,昏迷了好几天。当他好不容易恢复过来,去找师妹时,师妹已经和另一个男人完婚了。” At this point, Faraway Place incomparably sighed--, if the past that only ‚monster beast’ were the conspiracy, but he inspected afterward one time for that fellow daoist, the monster beast of that riot appeared, really is completely only a coincidence. 说到这里,天涯子无比感叹——如果当年那只‘妖兽’是阴谋也就罢了,但是后来他替那位道友去检查了一次,那只暴乱的妖兽出现,真的完全只是一个巧合。 Only can say, Lane providence person. 只能说,天意人啊。 After sighing, Dao Priest Faraway Place said: „I am thinking, you can change this content, substitutes senior apprentice sister body in your script.” 感叹完后,天涯子道长道:“我在想,你可以将这一段内容修改一下,代入到你剧本中的师姐身上。” „Stick, was good. Then, when male lead, because is accidental/surprised, loses the senior apprentice sister's time, the lamentation of that tearing the heart and rending the lungs, the sadness of that Lushan waterfall adverse current, can definitely many to be moved to cry.” Gao writes with vigor, fast records in the notebook. “棒,太棒了。如此一来,当男主角因为意外,痛失自己师姐的时候,那种撕心裂肺的悔恨,那种庐山瀑布逆流的悲伤,肯定能让很多人感动到落泪。”高某奋笔疾书,飞快的在笔记本上记录着。 Dao Priest Faraway Place is smiling the nod, then also added: „Moreover, but also a little-- I felt, since must make main character change into the retaliatory capability sadly, but senior apprentice sister husband and wife died, sad degree also by far insufficient. Moreover the grief and indignation pattern of drawing out deep love between man and woman is too small. The little friends can definitely an atmospheric point, make the main character's entire school all be extinguished by ‚evil mysterious influence’ directly, like this can the grief and indignation of greatest stimulation main character innermost feelings! Thus, can make the plot not be restricted in the lowly person children to like hating the rival in love, raises promotes to Country School big aura surface all of a sudden! The pattern promoted.” 天涯子道长微笑着点头,然后又补充道:“另外,还有一点——我感觉既然要让主角悲伤化为报复力量的话,只是师姐夫妇死掉,悲伤程度还远远不够。而且儿女情长引出的的悲愤格局太小。小友完全可以大气一点,直接让主角的整个门派被‘邪恶的神秘势力’全灭,这样子才能最大程度的激发主角内心的悲愤！这样,也能让剧情不限于小家子儿女爱恨情仇,一下子提升到家国门派这种大气场面！格局就提升了很多。” „dao priest lecture was good.” Gao Moumou felt oneself met the good teacher and helpful friend, dead sweetheart how compared with does on die entire family? “道长讲的太棒了。”高某某感觉自己遇上了良师益友,死爱人怎么比的上死全家？ Dao Priest Faraway Place continues to show a faint smile: „Actually, we can also give main character establishes one ‚the cough blood’ the sickness, sadly when to the extreme, lightly cough is the glowing red blood. Can draw the sympathy of audience.” 天涯子道长继续微微一笑:“其实,我们还可以给主角设定一个‘咳血’的病,悲伤至极点时,轻轻一咳就是红通通的鲜血。更能引起观众的同情。” „splendid splendid!” Gao Moumou records fast. “好极好极！”高某某飞快记录下来。 Then, Gao Moumou and Dao Priest Faraway Place in this topic more walk in ‚oppressive lord’ are farther, complete unable turned head. 就这样,高某某和天涯子道长在‘虐主’这一话题上越走越远,完全无法回头了。 ...... …… ...... …… When Song Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao return to the villa, saw white hair dao priest and Gao Moumou are under the hot sun, discusses really happy scene. 当宋书航和鱼娇娇回到别墅的时候,就看到了白发道长和高某某顶着烈日,相谈甚欢的场面。 This picture, simply damn. 这画面,简直见鬼了。 Yu Jiaojiao shockedly said: „It is not good, I also think that Bestowal Madman let off you, he was never so expected that dedicated, unexpectedly found my family to come continuously. This is must wait for gains without pains.” 鱼娇娇惊道:“不好,我还以为传功狂放过你了,没想到他这么执着,竟然一直找到我家来了。这是要守株待兔啊。” Worthily is 'Bestowal Madman' in legend, without is so good to deal with-- it is said that any by young cultivator that Bestowal Madman settles on, 8 or 9 out of 10 accepted Bestowal Madman ‚Bestowal’. 不愧是传说中的‘传功狂’,没这么好应付啊——据说,凡是被传功狂看中的年轻修士,十有八九都接受了传功狂的‘传功’。 could it be, is Song Shuhang also finally difficult to escape this tribulation? 难道,宋书航最后也难逃这一劫？ „Do we want Earth Escape to return to the villa?” Song Shuhang inquired. “我们要不要地遁回别墅？”宋书航询问道。 However late, front white hair dao priest Faraway Place had induced Song Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao, he turns the head, is showing a faint smile to two people. 但是迟了,前方白发道长天涯子已经感应到了宋书航和鱼娇娇,他转过头来,对着两人微微一笑。 That smiles, to Shuhang and Yu Jiaojiao, is ‚beautiful woman causes the downfall of the nation’ absolutely, because the person in city and country, will be frightened by this smile is in chaotic situation...... 那一笑,对书航和鱼娇娇来说,绝对是‘倾城倾国’,因为城和国里的人,都会被这笑容吓的鸡飞狗跳…… Faraway Place smiles, is saluting to Song Shuhang submissively: „Little brother, we meet again.” 天涯子笑罢,对着宋书航拱手行礼:“小兄弟,我们又见面了。” Song Shuhang forced smile, but also a ritual: „dao priest you are quite dedicated.” 宋书航苦笑,还了一礼:“道长您好执着。” „cough, Old Taoist is actually not rigid.” Faraway Place face one red, explained: „Actually is Old Taoist entrusted by the people looks for the little friend...... yí?” “咳,其实老道并没有那么执着的。”天涯子老脸一红,解释道:“其实老道是受人之托来寻找小友的……咦？” When the words told only half, Faraway Place saw in the Song Shuhang hand is raising that big bag. Inside thinks of many meat bun. 话说到一半时,天涯子看到了宋书航手中提着的那条大袋子。里面装着很多的肉夹馍。 This smell, is ‚Fairy Lady Separated Snow’ manufacture meat bun without doubt. 这气味,正是‘别雪仙姬’制作的肉夹馍无疑。 This did young fellow daoist, go to that fish head shop to buy meat bun unexpectedly? 这位小道友,竟然去那鱼头店买肉夹馍了？ Did he and Fairy Lady Separated Snow meet? 那他和别雪仙姬见面了吗？ Gao Moumou doubtfully asked at the same time: „Shuhang, did you know with this dao priest?” 一边的高某某疑惑问道:“书航,你和这位道长认识？” Song Shuhang nods, sighed: „In the morning, I go out to take courier, wants to buy the point to eat for you on the way. Then on road, has met with this dao priest.” 宋书航点头,叹道:“早上时,我出去取个快递,顺路想给你们买点吃食。然后路上时,和这位道长见过一面。” Then, Shuhang is also asking to Faraway Place: „dao priest said a moment ago is entrusted by the people? Is who must look for me?” 接着,书航又对着天涯子问道:“道长刚才说是受人之托？是谁要找我？” Faraway Place is looking at the big bag in Shuhang hand, smiles. 天涯子望着书航手中的大袋子,神秘一笑。 -- entrusted me to find your person, has seen with you. ——委托我找你的人,已经和你见过了呢。 When Dao Priest Faraway Place prepares saying that suddenly, he by anything seems to be hit was the same, the whole person flew suddenly, has been hit to fly about more than ten meters distance! 天涯子道长正准备这么说时,突然,他似乎被什么东西撞到了一样,整个人突然飞了出去,一直被撞飞了近十几米的距离！ But also all the way, hit a young seedling. 一路上,还撞断了一棵幼树苗。 The moan of dao priest pain transmits. 道长痛苦的呻吟声传来。 What's the matter? 怎么回事？ Song Shuhang blinks, why was dao priest hit to fly suddenly? Is who sneak attacks in the hidden place? 宋书航眨了眨眼睛,为什么道长突然就被撞飞了？是谁在暗处偷袭？ Gao Moumou is confused, such exaggerating flies, was hit to fly by ten tons truck? However, he had not noticed that anything runs upon white hair Daoist.( To be continued.) 高某某一头雾水,这么夸张的飞出去,是被十吨卡车撞飞的吗？但是,他没看到任何东西撞上白发道人啊。(未完待续。)