CCG :: Volume #7

#606: Gao Moumou's tragedy screenplay

LNMTL needs user funding to survive Read More

Gao Moumou comes out from the villa, prepares to greet Lin Tubo. 高某某从别墅中出来,是准备迎接林土波的。 Because Tubo telephoned a moment ago, said him already on taxi. If not traffic jams, it is expected that after about ten minutes, will arrive. 因为刚才土波打电话过来,说他已经在出租车上。如果不堵车的话,预计十分钟左右后就会抵达。 Therefore, Gao Moumou then brings the notebook to come out to meet Tubo, relaxes outside while convenient--, although outside today is hot, stays the words in villa, having the air conditioning will be definitely more comfortable. 于是,高某某便带着笔记本出来接土波,顺便在外面散散心——虽然今天外面天气炎热,呆在别墅里的话,有空调肯定会舒服很多。 However, Gao Moumou these days small black room closed/pass, already dwelling enough. 但是,高某某这几天的小黑屋关下来,已经宅够了。 He is rather being exposed to the sun by Sun outside now, is not willing to stay in small black room of villa enjoys the cool air. 他现在宁愿在外面被太阳晒着,也不愿意呆在别墅的小黑屋中纳凉。 All for tribe and freedom! 一切为了部落和自由！ Trivial burning hot weather, what is also? 区区炎热的天气,又算什么？ Thinks of here, Gao Moumou looked for a big tree in the entrance of villa, enjoys the cool air under the tree shade. 想到这里,高某某在别墅的门口找了株大树,在树荫下乘凉。 Is waiting for Tubo, he while is thinking deeply about ‚screenplay’. 一边等着土波,他一边思索着‘电影剧本’。 „Xianxia and combination of science fiction world, such can world setting really make the movie? Made a mistake, do I worry this doing? Shuhang and their friends, must shoot one from the self entertainment movie. Therefore, world outlook and so on not a big problem.” Gao Moumou records the idea in the notebook, while muttered. “仙侠和科幻世界的组合,这样的世界观设定真的能拍出好电影吗？错了,我烦恼这个干嘛？书航和他们的朋友们,明显是要拍一部自自娱自乐的电影。所以,世界观之类问题不大。”高某某一边在笔记本上记录着想法,一边喃喃道。 Actually similar world outlook has, not necessarily is ‚Xianxia’, replaces the powerful military force system Xianxia, in addition end or science fiction class world-- for example in present world many heroic series movie, was such world setting, in the animation such world setting are more. 其实类似的世界观还是有的,不一定是‘仙侠’,就是将仙侠替换成强大的武力体系,再加上末日或科幻类的世界——比如现在世界上很多英雄系列电影,都是这样的世界观设定,动漫中这样的世界设定就更多了。 „, I replace the immortal system various high military systems directly, the world outlook took shape. Then...... must crank up the words of movie, the main line nothing but also is the resistance powerful intruder, or conducts to change * the leather to the corrupt world, or is solves the human the extermination of the clan big crisis and so on.” “那么,我直接将各种高武体系替换成仙人体系,世界观就成型了。然后……要拍成电影的话,主线无非也就是反抗强大的入侵者,或是对腐败的世界进行改*革,又或者是解决人类的灭族大危机之类的。” „In this case, choice quite direct-viewing ‚powerful intruder’ pattern. In this pattern picture is relatively speaking more irritable, like not fighting to outwit the plot of strength to look is so exhausting.” “这样的话,就选择比较直观的‘强大的入侵者’模式。这种模式相比而言画面上更火爆,不像斗智斗力的剧情看的那么累人。” Gao Moumou is saying at the same time, writes in the notebook records fast. 高某某一边说着,一写在笔记本上飞快记录着。 „ Then is the main character aspect, Jie Jie Jie, main character is certainly beset by disasters, various sorts and varieties compels the element to have in view of the pain of man. For example first love marry (a man), the bridegroom is actually not my series ; “然后是主角方面,桀桀桀,主角一定要多灾多难,各种各样针对男人的苦逼元素都要有。比如初恋嫁人了,新郎却不是我系列; Also for example the second spring died, oh wait! This is the Xianxia world, this can be set at a departed spirit the main character's second lover, thinks main character without knowing the circumstances of the matter, discussed with a ghost very long love, knows suddenly own sweetheart had died news, is very interesting ; 又比如第二春死掉了,哦等下！这是仙侠世界,这样的话可以将主角的第二位恋人设定为一个亡魂,想想主角在不知情的前提下,和一只鬼谈了很久的恋爱,突然知道自己的爱人已经死掉了的消息,特别有趣; Then main character is lovelorn twice, every day drowns sorrow taking advantage of the liquor, half-dead, this was main character's ahead of time the dispirited image. However...... in the present China movie doesn't allow to present the ghost? Un, doesn't matter, doesn't matter, Song Shuhang this movie does not open. self entertainment. ” 然后主角两次失恋,每日借酒消愁,半死不活的,这样就是主角的先期颓废形象。不过……现在华夏电影中不允许出现鬼吧？嗯,没关系,没关系,宋书航这部电影又不上映。自娱自乐。” „Then is my supporting role, the status chooses to become main character's senior apprentice brother, looks for the main character martial arts contest each time maliciously, each time the cut and bruised that he hits, takes suffering main character as the pleasure. This isn't bad! However to avoid Shuhang protested, finally my role finds the opportunity to hang to be good. Then, before hanging, certain to find a way washes white. Cannot affect me the image in Yayi mind.” “接下来是我的配角,身份就选择成为主角的师兄,每次都恶意找主角比武,每次都将他打的遍体鳞伤,以折磨主角为乐趣。这个不错！不过为了避免书航抗议,最后我这个角色还是找机会挂掉才行。然后,挂掉前一定要想办法洗白。不能影响我在芽衣心目中的形象。” „Then, Shuhang also requests to present vehicles travel sickness many ‚’ the picture. In this case, but must establish playboy, the role words become main character's tool spirit and so on. This playboys, drive a car did not hit getting drunk main character carefully, finally main character is all right, this playboy actually killed, because then various coincidences became main character's tool spirit, this setting isn't bad.” “然后,书航还要求过要出现很多‘车辆行驶症’的画面。这样的话,还得设定一个纨绔弟子,角色的话就成为主角的器灵之类的吧。这个纨绔子弟,开车不小心撞到了喝醉的主角,结果主角没事,这个纨绔弟子却撞死了,然后因为各种巧合成了主角的器灵,这个设定不错。” „The color atmosphere of entire story, must be the tragedy is a lord, moves people to tears. hē hē hē, who said the author who writes the funny article, can only write funny? This is the biggest joke!” “整个故事的色彩氛围,必须是悲剧为主,催人泪下。呵呵呵,谁说写搞笑文的作者,就只能写搞笑？这就是最大的笑话啊！” In this case, the general story frame established. 这样的话,大概的故事框架就设定好了。 Then the Gao Moumou inspiration erupts, wrote down the opening rapidly. 然后高某某灵感爆发,迅速写下了开头。 【The background of story is the future of parallel world.】 【故事的背景是平行世界的未来。】 Earth received the sudden attack of mysterious influence, no one knows that what background this mysterious influence is, is the bottom person? Aliens? ****** Careerist? No one knows in any case. 地球受到了神秘势力的突然袭击,没人知道这神秘势力是什么来头,是地底人？外星人？还是******野心家？反正没人知道。 Under the attack of this strong mysterious influence, people suffered heavy losses on Earth, ushering the Doomsday era. On perhaps the if not for Earth also has a very mysterious influence protection, human is eliminated. 在这强大神秘势力的袭击下,地球上的人们损失惨重,进入末日时代。要不是地球上同样有一股很神秘的势力保护,人类说不定会被清除一空。 Then, the mysterious influence of that protection human, revealed the real status finally. 接下来,那个保护人类的神秘势力,终于露出了真实身份。 They are the legend person of cultivation, powerful strength are incomparable, in which powerhouse can move mountains and drain seas, mount the clouds and ride the mist. 他们就是传说中的修仙之人,实力强大无比,其中的强者能移山倒海,腾云驾雾。 In order to resist the hostile mysterious influence attack, cultivators united, starts to attract numerous the disciple, from beforehand ‚hidden world’ status, arrived at the front of people. Played the role of the world protector. 为了抵抗敌对的神秘势力袭击,修真者们联合了起来,开始广招弟子,从以前的‘隐世’状态,走到了人们的面前。担任了世界守护者的角色。 But main character, is a disciple in cultivation influence. 而主角,就是修真势力中的一位弟子。 „Then, the beginning of story, must start to play tricks on and suffer main character to start compared with the martial stage on by ‚senior apprentice brother’. Carries on an attractive fighting play.” “然后,故事的开场,要以‘师兄’开始在比武场上戏弄、折磨主角开始。进行一场漂亮的打斗戏。” „Naturally, main character is injured after each time, gentle senior apprentice sister will actually enter the stage, dresses the wound for him, in a soft voice comfort. This senior apprentice sister is the main character's first love.” “当然,每次主角受伤后,却都会有一位温柔的师姐出场,替他包扎伤口,轻声安慰。这位师姐就是主角的初恋。” „Then, must establish one to let senior apprentice sister under the guardian pressure, marries the plots of other men. So long as thinks by that time Song Shuhang must cry develops this plot, I specially crisp. Even...... for the plot need, senior apprentice sister husband and wife must die of that finally ‚hostile mysterious influence’ the hand, stimulates the main character's revenge power.” Gao Moumou continues to write with vigor in the notebook. “然后,要设定一个让师姐迫于家长压力,嫁给其他男人的剧情。只要一想到到时候宋书航要哭着脸演这段剧情,我就特别的爽啊。甚至……为了剧情需要,师姐夫妇最后还得死于那‘敌对神秘势力’之手,激发主角的复仇动力。”高某某继续在笔记本上奋笔疾书。 Really good! Really good! 真棒！真棒！ Gao Moumou more writes more has to stir up * the sentiment, wishes one could immediately to start shooting this movie, then oneself power and prestige Song Shuhang times knocks down, the hit cut and bruised, the old belt/bring felt! 高某某越写越有激*情,恨不得马上就开始拍摄这部电影,然后自己威风的将宋书航一次次打倒在地,打的遍体鳞伤,老带感了！ After the plot wrote a opening, Gao Moumou stops the pen temporarily. 剧情写了个开头后,高某某暂时停笔。 The following plot, needs to form in one's mind slowly. 后面的剧情,需要慢慢构思。 „Then, first story in ‚Xianxia hierarchy’ establishes, has the words of hierarchy, the strong and weak contrast is quite sharp.” Gao Moumou thinks. “那么接下来,先将故事中的‘仙侠等级体系’设定好吧,有等级体系的话,强弱对比就比较鲜明。”高某某思索起来。 How can establish is good? 要怎么设定才好呢？ Mentioned the setting of Xianxia, everyone was familiar was that set 【Foundation Building, translucent, fusion, heart movement, gold core and nascent soul, hole, Divided Spirit, body fusion, Insightful Emptiness, Mahayana and transcends tribulation】 说起仙侠的设定,大家熟悉的便是那一套【筑基、开光、融合、心动、金丹、元婴、出窍、分神、合体、洞虚、大乘、渡劫】 But if this set must make the movie, obviously sank very much long. 但这一套如果要拍电影的话,就显的很沉长了。 After all the movie is not the serial TV opera, without so many times described cultivation's realm. 毕竟电影不是连续剧,没那么多工夫去描述修真的境界。 „Decided, on the bronze immortal, the silver immortal, golden immortal three rank-- as for you have to tell me, this isn't Xianxia? Naturally, this is fictionalizes! Moreover, once this setting accepted, accidental/surprised belt/bring feeling.” Gao Moumou said with a smile, then remembered this setting in the notebook. “决定了,就青铜仙人,白银仙人,黄金仙人三个等级——至于你要跟我说,这不是仙侠？当然啊,这是虚构的嘛！而且,这个设定一旦接受了,也意外的带感呢。”高某某哈哈笑道,然后在笔记本上记下了这一段设定。 Gao Moumou had not actually seen, when he established ‚bronze, silver and gold’ the cultivator ranks of three ranks, has white hair Old Taoist to stare the big eye in his side. 高某某却没有看到,在他设定了‘青铜、白银、黄金’三个级别的修士等级时,在他一边有个白发的老道正瞪大眼睛。 Too child's play! 太儿戏了！ Even makes the movie, but how can the cultivator's system such child's play? 就算是拍电影,但修士的体系怎么能这么儿戏？ xxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxx Three, on the beginning of the month, the hug asked the monthly ticket in an instant!( To be continued.) 三更,一转眼就月初了,拥抱求月票啦！(未完待续。)
To display comments and comment, click at the button