( 1 )
(一)„Were youinsane?”
“你疯了?”InsomeIce Grinding Courtyardroom, open/stretchMeihas stoodfrom the stoolfiercely.碾冰院某间房内,张眉猛地从凳子站了起来。Shestares the bigeyeto look atTangXian, inconceivable of whole face, „we are also very sad. But can the dayalsonot be? Whatwithhimremains to do? Heis the outstanding disciple of generalLi, naturallywill be acceptedunderentering the sectbyEndlessly Primordial Sect, several of usall alone, can is it possible thatreallyhave nothing to eat?”
她瞪大眼睛看着唐仙,满脸的不可思议,“我们也很难过。但日子还得过不是?跟他留下来能干什么?他是李大帅的高徒,当然会被常元宗纳入门下,我们几个无依无靠的,难不成真的要喝西北风?”No matterTangXiandoes have the insanity, open/stretchMeithought were oneselfsoon insaneshe to propose the soabsurdidea?
不管唐仙有没有疯,张眉觉得自己快要疯了她怎么能够提出如此荒唐的主意?open/stretchMeiputs out a handotherperson of Zhang Chumonthsto the room, Liu Mingxiang, changed/easyXuan, LiRan, made an effortto gesticulate, „wewere the Hidden Clouds Sectdisciples, did not go togreat powercamp, insteadtreatedhere, set atMastergate where?”
张眉伸手向房间内其他人张楚月,刘明湘,易萱,李苒,用力比划了一下,“我们都是云隐宗弟子,不跟着去大威营,反而待在这里,置师门于何地?”„Whois goodtome,”TangXianangerhas also come up, „Ifollowwhom.”
“谁对我好,”唐仙的火气也上来了,“我就跟谁走。”Shethoughtotherpeople should also with an idea, not thinkjustbegan, right in the facewas brokenbyopen/stretchMei.
她原本觉得其他人也应该与自己一个想法,没想到刚起个头,就被张眉劈头盖脸打断了。„Do youhaveto think, before Wei Buercomes, whatday do wecrossare?”
“你们有没有想过,魏不二来之前,我们过得是什么日子?”Shemakes an effortto pound on the table, makesbang a sound, „orin constant anxiety, eithersits idle and eatsto wait for death! Inyourpresenthas the military exploit of big pen, every daycultivationdoes not harm, wantsto buypill medicineto buypill medicine, wantsto tradetalismanto tradetalisman, the daypassescomfortably, pain that forgot the pastto receive?”
她用力一拍桌子,发出砰的一声响,“要么惶惶不可终日,要么坐吃等死!你们现在手里都有大笔的军功,每日修行不误,想买丹药买丹药,想换符箓换符箓,日子过得舒坦了,就忘了昔日受的苦了么?”Shelookstoopen/stretchMei: „Imustaskyoubut actually, several of ussuffer hardships and calamities, lifedifficultinsurance, can Sect Master Lihave the least bitto illuminatetous?”
她瞧向张眉:“我倒要问问你,我们几个受苦受难,性命难保的时候,李掌门可对我们有半点偏照么?”„Wedo not go to the frontline, goeswildly, isn'tsectbiggestfavoring?”
“我们不去前线,去蛮荒,不就是宗门最大的偏袒?”„That is also the hoopoeingelderstrivesto come, ifmakesSect Master Limake the decision, has not known that isanyresult.”
“那也是戴胜长老争取得来,若让李掌门做决定,还不知是什么结果呢。”„Do not forget,”shemoresaidis more indignant, here that „howwecome to! Except forclear/painmoon/month, whichis notbecauseaptitudeis too bad, sectis not thincultivates, exilesnorthwest, top/withstand a quota of service? SuchMastergate, Ido not have the least bitto worry about. Itmustgo togreat powercamp, goes to the heavenly palaceorWestern Paradise, thenby all meansgoes, IonlyrecognizeWei Buer. IfMastergatedislikesmeto refuse to acceptto teach, canalsochasegreatlyme, happen tocomesneat!”
“别忘了,”她越说越气愤,“我们都是怎么来的这里!除了楚月,哪一个不是因为资质太差,宗门不稀得栽培,才流放到西北,顶一个服役的名额?这样的师门,我是没有半点惦念的。它要去大威营,去天宫还是西天,便只管去,我只认魏不二。师门若是嫌我不服管教,大可以将我也逐出去,正好来个干净利落!”open/stretchMeisneers saying: „Youshouldnot bebecause northwest were exiledbecause of the matter of ShenXian, until nowbears a grudgeSect Masteruncle master?”
张眉冷笑道:“你该不是因为自己因沈贤之事被流放西北,至今记恨掌门师叔罢?”„Howis?”
“是又如何?”TangXiandid not abstain from,„youthinkWei Bueragain, for these years, heledusto carry out the task, whichtimedidn't go againstin the forefront? Whichtimehad the danger, doesn't bravely step forward, turns danger into safety? How could do youseehimto throw downusto run away? Calculatesagainhehas savedour more than severallives, how manytimes, becauseIand otherswas wounded?”
唐仙毫不忌讳,“你们再想想魏不二,这几年,他带着我们执行任务,哪一次不是顶在最前面?哪一次出了危险,不是挺身而出,化险为夷?你们何曾见过他丢下我们逃去?再算算他救过我们几多性命,又多少次因为我等负伤?”„Were too many!”
“太多了!”
Here, hervoicebigfrightened itselfto jump, slightly, said: „The will of the people are the meatis long, how could are wemuddled? Without demur, drops outhimto go togreat powercamp, thismatterIcannot manage.”
说到这里,她声音大的吓了自己一跳,稍顿了顿,又说道:“人心都是肉长的,我们岂能糊里糊涂?二话不说,抛下他就去大威营,这事我办不出来。”Shetransfers the itemto look the girlsto the room, „I who shouldsay said that youalsochattedyourideameto decidein any case.”
她转目瞧向屋内众姑娘,“该说的我都说了,你们也谈谈自己的想法反正我是打定主意了。”Lunatics!
疯子!open/stretchMeiknew in the heart that temporarilycannot persuadeher, onlyfeared that several other peoplewere persuadedbyher, although the possibilityis not big.
张眉心知暂时劝不了她,只怕其余几人被她说动了虽然可能性不大。Thenhastilysaidwith the people: „Everybodymay , to be clear. Wei Buerby‚please’sect. Treatswithhimin the birthcamp, whathasto distinguishwith the revoltingsect? Several of usall alone, makethishuge mistake, canbe expelledsect? Everybodymixes the livelihoodincultivator world, does not havespirit veinwithoutsect, does not have the resources, which can result for a long time?”
便连忙与众人道:“大家伙可要想清楚了。魏不二是被‘请’出宗门的。跟着他待在降世营,与叛宗有什么区别?我们几个无依无靠,犯此大错,岂不是要被逐出宗门?大家伙在修士界混生计,没有宗门就没有灵脉,没有资源,哪一个能得长久?”„In the world did loose cultivatordiecertainly?”
“天底下的散修都死绝了么?”TangXianfightssaidrelatively,„wetreatedin the northwestwere so long, the life and deathalsoexperiencedmuch, whichwas a child, having a need foryouteaching?”
唐仙争锋相对说道,“我们在西北待了这么久,生生死死也经历不少,哪一个是小孩儿,用得着你教么?”Was saying a forkwaist, looksto several other girls, „you!”
说着一叉腰,瞧向其余几位姑娘,“你们自己来讲!”„Igowith the Master.”
“我跟师父去。”LiRanalreadycould not wait, firstsaid,„Sect Masterhad not plannedto receivemyentering the sectin any casein the past......”
李苒早就等不住,第一个说道,“反正掌门当年也没打算收我入门……”Hears the Wei Buerexpellednews, shelikessecretly.
听见魏不二被逐出的消息,她暗自欢喜之极。Sheis growing a thorn, has been mixing.
她心里长着一根刺,一直在不停地搅动着。Arrivedtime of quiet, mustsufferher.
一到夜深人静的时分,更要折磨她。For several days, fromsometimesaw that starts, thatpuncturedreceived the seriousstimulationlikely, more incisivefearsome, grippedherto toss aboutsleepless.
最近几日,从某一个时刻看到那一幕开始,那根刺像是受了严重的刺激,更加尖锐可怖,扎得她翻来覆去、夜不能寐。This way, shedoes not know can oneselfendure that day of revealing the truth.
再这样下去,她不知道自己能不能熬到真相大白的那一天。„Imuststay behind.”
“我要留下。”clear/painmoon/month a languageis astonishing, „followsnot to matterwithWei Buer, butthiscourtyardIlivedto be used to it, does not wantto walk.”
楚月一语惊人,“跟不跟魏不二无所谓,但这个院子我住习惯了,不想走。”Sheseems likelooksaccidentallyto the Wei Buerroom, looked at the south.
她看似无意地瞧向魏不二的房间,又看了看南方。In the lookis dodging the differentglow, does not know that is thinkinganythingagain.
眼神里闪着异芒,不知再想着什么。changed/easyXuanhas rememberedingreenLake Mountain the form of evil aura, superposesthatperson of life and deathstaying or goingwithWei Buergradually, shehas not made clear.
易萱则想起了翠湖山里邪气的身影,渐渐与魏不二重合起来那人的生死去留,她至今还没搞清楚呢。„Istay behind.”Sheis brief and to the point.
“我留下。”她言简意赅。Liu Mingxiangwaited and sawin the room the facial expression of everyone, hesitantlong timesaid:
刘明湘则观望了屋子里每个人的神情,犹豫了半晌才说道:„That, Ialsoremain...... Everybodyintogetheralsolively......”
“那,那我也留下来吧……大家在一起也热闹……”Regardingherdisposition, choiceat this momentwas actually simplefollowed the most people.
对于她的性格而言,此刻的选择倒是简单了跟着多数人走。Actually, ifmakesherface directlyconscienceto choose. AlsoshouldbeWei Buer, is steadfast.
其实,如果让她直面本心地去选择。也应该是魏不二,多踏实啊。As the matter stands, the choice of peopleunifiedon the contraryextraordinarily.
这样一来,众人的选择反倒出奇的统一了。open/stretchMeiis dumbfounded, is looking in room the strangeatmosphere, saton the groundquite the same asunconsciously.
张眉目瞪口呆,望着屋里陌生的气氛,浑然不觉地坐在了地上。„Was insane!”Shewas muttering, „was insane!”
“疯了!”她喃喃着,“都疯了!”( 2 )
(二)
The ignorantheartleavestenthday, isday that Ice Grinding Courtyardand a storehouseswordsquadcompetes with.
蚩心离开的第十天,是碾冰院与藏剑一小队比试的日子。Bueralsoagainhad the contactwith the ignorantheart, the opposite partyhas spread a goodnewsbad news.不二也重新与蚩心取得联系,对方传来了一个好消息一个坏消息。Whatis good, the life savingthinghas been through repeatedly the tribulation, finallysucceeded in obtaining. The law of use, has also passed toBuerin the memorysynchronization.
好的是,救命的东西历经磨难,终于到手了。使用之法,也在记忆同步中传给了不二。Whatis bad, the ignorantheartwas seriously injured, needsto restorea long time, not having the abilitytowardreturning.
坏的是,蚩心受了重伤,需要很长一段时间恢复,没有能力往回返。
, The ignorantheartin the demonterritoryhas metPuppet Toad ValleyknowsGhost Controlling Sectnot to have the shadefortunatelyslightlyoldseverely.
稍稍值得庆幸的是,蚩心在魔域碰见了傀蜮谷的旧识御鬼宗厉无影。Healsomarched intoSpirit Connection Realmnow.
他现在也步入了通灵境。Bueranddoes not have the shadeseverely, althoughfriendship that only thenPuppet Toad Valleyfights side-by-side, but a lineten thousandmilesroad, experiences countless people, when heonlydepends onPuppet Toad Valleyfeeling of life and deathintersection, canbelievethisperson.不二和厉无影虽然只有傀蜮谷并肩作战的交情,但行万里路,阅人无数,他只凭傀蜮谷时生死相交的感觉,也敢相信这个人。Does not believe that was also inadequate.
况且,不相信也不成了。Grieves the woundignorantlyin the body, how longtook the longroad unable to support.
蚩心重伤在身,走长路支撑不了多久。
The life savingthingmustdeliver tonorthwestas soon as possible, the momentcannot delay.救命的东西必须尽快送到西北,一刻耽搁不得。Heonly thenbelieves that does not have the shadeseverely.
他只有相信厉无影。
The ignorantheartcalculateslong time, changes to the appearance of Hidden Clouds Sectdisciplefinally, generallysaid the situation that Bueris in danger, andrequested that hehurries to the northwestas soon as possible, teacheson the thing of life savingBuerpersonally.
蚩心盘算良久,终于化作云隐宗弟子的模样,将不二遇险的情况大抵道了出来,并请求他尽快赶去西北,将救命之物亲手教到不二手上。Said, does not know that did not have the shade to believeseverely.
说完了,也不知厉无影会不会相信。Thencalculatedto believe that does not know that the opposite partydid wantten thousandmilesfar awayto walkthis.
便算相信了,更不知对方愿不愿意万里迢迢走这一遭。
The severitydid not have the shadealreadyto hear that Wei Buerwent to the matter of northwestservice, listened to the ignorantheartto saytwo peoplewhenPuppet Toad Valleylived alone the confidential matter, thensevenpointshave believed.
厉无影早就听说魏不二去西北服役之事,又听蚩心道出了两人在傀蜮谷独处时的密事,便已有七分相信。Althoughhislookis ugly, but the gratitude and grudgeswere usually distinct.
他相貌虽然丑恶,但素来恩怨分明。In the pastheinPuppet Toad Valleyto the Buerquite a lotfavorable impression, aftermanyyears, thisfavorable impressionhad not then had the least bitto gopale.
当年他在傀蜮谷便对不二颇多好感,时隔多年,这好感未曾有半点淡去。Listened to the words of ignorantheart, althoughthere is an important matterin the body, butheembarksto go directly to the northwestwithout delay.
听了蚩心的话,虽有要事在身,但他二话不说出发直赴西北。Nowneedsto be worriedis, does not haveseverely the shadewhetherbefore the dangerarrivesrushes to the northwest.
现在需要担心的就是,厉无影能否在危险到来之前赶到西北。
The fearfulness of demonterritoryis not no need saying that if not press the specificact, the risk of falling from the skyis enormous.
魔域的可怕不必说了,如果不按特定的行径,陨落的风险极大。Lateralsohas the long road to walk, couldpick up the speedthroughteleport, but during teleport , the damage of strength of spacetoSpirit Connection Realmcultivatorfleshly bodyis very fierce, does not have the shadeseverelyas the ghostcultivates, fleshly bodyemaciated, is mostly hardto withstand.
之后还有漫漫长路要走,或许可以通过传送阵加快速度,但传送期间空间之力对通灵境修士肉身的损伤十分厉害,厉无影身为鬼修,肉躯孱弱,多半也难以承受。As the matter stands, he can only chooseto take the best quality goodsflyingboat, the gapsits1-2 times short distanceteleport.
这样一来,他只能选择乘坐极品飞舟,间隔坐一两次短途传送阵。
The ignorantheartgenerally estimated that the timeperhapswithout enough time.
蚩心大抵估算一番,时间恐怕来不及了。Passes on the record of minute of soulsecret techniqueaccording to the ignorantheart, the mainsoulfalls from the sky, is divided the soul, becausemarkrelation between divine soul, mustvanishes in a puff of smoke.
依据蚩心所传分魂秘术的记载,主魂陨落,分魂因为神魂间的标记联系,也要灰飞烟灭。Alsoor, loses the state of mind, degenerates into the good-for-nothing.
又或者,失去神志,沦为行尸走肉。So, is the responsibility that a Rong Jurongsuffers if either one suffers.
如此,便是一荣俱荣一损俱损的干系。Has not drawn backto seek the nextchoice, not having the least bitmay the luck of chart.
没有退而求其次的选择,没有半点可图的侥幸。Fights to win or die, life and death.
背水一战,生死一线。„Performs the human affairs, listening to the destiny.”
“尽人事,听天命罢。”Thisislast few words that the ignorantteachings transmitted from master to pupil over generationscomes.
这是蚩心传来的最后一句话。( 3 )
(三)Hidden Clouds Sect'smoves the campplanstillto operate, Wei Buerfor the time beingteam leader.云隐宗的迁营计划还在运筹中,魏不二暂且还是队长。Knew perfectly well that the storehouseswordhas concealedtrap, hedecidesto participate in the competitionlasttimefinally, as the competition of Hidden Clouds Sectdisciple.
明知藏剑一暗藏了陷阱,他最终决定参加比试最后一次,作为云隐宗弟子的比试。Moreover, compared withforthcominggenuinedead end, hidswordalsoas ifslightlyvast.
而且,和即将到来的真正的死局相比,藏剑一也似乎微渺了许多。
Before embarkinggoes to the arena, Xiuxiulooked.
出发去擂台之前,秀秀找了过来。„Itopaper that youwrite,”shepushes the doorthento enter, askedpanting in indignation, „hasn't seen?”
“我给你写的纸条呢,”她推门便进,气呼呼问道,“没有看见?”Buerlooks upher, when the whole facegets angry the facial expression that itdoes not struggle, the flashreturns toPuppet Toad Valleysuddenly, indemonesssupposesoutside the forest in arena, hemustbreak in the battlefieldlife-savingrashly the situation.不二抬头看她,满脸怒其不争的神情,一瞬间恍然回到傀蜮谷时,在魔女设下擂台的林外,他莽撞地要冲入战场救人的情形。Past eventsdistinctly, this personracingWanli.
往事目历历,斯人奔万里。
Before voice and faceas beforesuch as, is onlysinceritynot.
音容依旧如前,只是赤心不在。Nowifaskshimnot to give a thought tosafetyto save the irrelevantperson, perhapsis a verydifficultmatter.
现在若叫他不顾安危地去救无关的人,恐怕是一件很难的事。„Ifknew perfectly well that hehas dugpit, Ialsofall,”Buersaid with a smile, „thatIgot what one deservesbad luck.”
“如果明知他挖了坑,我还掉进去,”不二笑道,“那我活该倒霉。”Xiuxiuhas gawkedslightly.秀秀微微楞了一下。Looks at the face of Wei Buer, is very clearly familiar, somewhatwas strange.
看着魏不二的脸,分明很熟悉,却又有些陌生了。Yes. Thisman, goes over hill and dalein the life and deathtest of cultivator world, after the tribulation, rises to challenges, safelysince, alreadywas notinitiallyinPuppet Toad Valley, thatneedsherto raise a dumb kidfrequently.
是啊。这个男人,在修士界的生死考验中翻山越岭,几经磨难,披荆斩棘,安然至今,早已不是当初在傀蜮谷,那个需要她时时刻刻提点的傻小子。Hugesense of being lost and lonelydrops from the clouds, such as the landslidedayleans.
巨大的失落感从天而降,如山崩天倾。Except forintelligent, heralsoremainingwhat?
除了聪明,她还剩下些什么?Nowis aboutnot to havecontinuallyintelligently.
现在连聪明都快没有了。Xiuxiuwantsto sayanything, does not know that shouldsayanygood.秀秀想说点什么,又不知该说什么好。Sheis nothisbelovedperson.
她又不是他心爱的人。Shedoes not have the standpoint.
她没有立场。„Youunderstand that mymeaningis good.”Has suppressedfor a long time, shesaidlow-spirited, saiddoes not knowoneselfsaidanything, turns aroundthento go out.
“你明白我的意思就好。”憋了许久,她黯然道了一句,说完都不知自己说了什么,转身便出了门。Buerhas not set outto see off.不二没有起身相送。( 4 )
(四)Fromcompetitionalsotwodouble-hourabouttime, heis leadingIce Grinding Courtyardseveralgirls, goestoward the arenaline.
距离比试还有两个时辰左右的时候,他带着碾冰院几位姑娘,往擂台行去。All the way, TangXianseveraltimesstarts to speak but hesitates.
一路上,唐仙几次欲言又止。LiRansignals with the eyes.
李苒一个劲儿地使眼色。Liu Mingxiang, changed/easyXuanalsosomefacial expressions of moving restlessly.
刘明湘,易萱也有些躁动的神情。open/stretchMeiis a whole facewas not happy.
张眉则是满脸的不高兴。Indifferentlyis as before freeexcept forclear/painmoon/month, everyone seems in the condition of greatlynot suiting.
除了楚月依旧淡然自若着,每个人似乎都处在不大对劲的状态之中。Finallywhenclose to the arena, TangXiancou, was smiling saying: „Team leader, said a mattertoyou......”
终于在临近擂台的时候,唐仙凑了上来,嬉皮笑脸道:“队长,跟你说个事儿呗……”LiRaneagerlyhas also collected.
李苒也眼巴巴地凑了过来。„Un?”
“嗯?”„Weheard that......”TangXianlaughterasked.
“我们听说……”唐仙笑声问道。„Goes back.”Hegenerallyunderstoodanything, said with a smile: „Went backto sayagain.”
“回去吧。”他大抵明白了什么,笑道:“回去再说。”Becausesaysanythingnow, isin the mirrorplants the flower, illusory.
因为现在说什么,都是镜里植花,虚无缥缈。Hedoes not know can oneselfliveis going back......
他都不知道自己能不能活着回去……Thisvolume of altogethertwohigh tides.
这一卷一共两个高潮。
The firsthigh tidesoonarrived.
第一个高潮快要到了。
The endare many, butherestillthoughtsystematic.
线头很多,但我这里尚觉得井然有序。Becauseinstrictadvancesaccording to the program, the thinoutline and characterclue. Severalinspirationspresently, touch the sceneryto excite the emotionsfor the first time, quitenaturalintegratedin the master line.
因为在严格按照大纲、细纲和人物线索推进。有几次灵感乍现,触景生情,也比较自然地融入了主线之中。Naturally, deletedpartial contentignorantheart the travel of life saving, the tour of demonterritory.
当然,也删除了一部分内容蚩心的救命之旅,魔域之行。Althoughinpresentarticle, only thenfew, the life and deathcrisis that butignorantheartline of twists and turns more than several, come acrossstep by stepis also alarmed.
虽然现在的文里只有寥寥几句,但蚩心此行波折几多,遇到的生死危机也步步惊心。Meets the severenon-shadeprocess, someraise.
遇到厉无影的过程,也有的一提。In the originalplan, the line of ignorantheart must haveat least46chapters of contents.
在原定计划中,蚩心的这条线也要有至少46章的内容。Buttolet the contradictionis more centralized, the master lineis more prominent, the rhythmis more sprightly, making the plottighten the high tidequickly, hasto give up reluctantly, reduced the line of ignorantheartlargely.
但为了让矛盾更集中,主线更突出,节奏更明快,让剧情更快地绷紧到高潮,只好忍痛割爱,将蚩心的线大幅压缩了。Followinggrasps principlestoweringlyis not very goodto process, carvescarefully.
接下来的悟道峥嵘很不好处理,得细细雕琢。Ifrenewedslowly a point, hopes that everybodycanforgive.
如果更新慢了一点,希望大家能够体谅。
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