The Jiang Qinearlytwomonthsdo not have the migrationparadise, hisofficecleansuch asnew.江祺近两个月没回游乐园,他的办公室干净如新。
The green on windowplantsgrowstoward the sun, the branches and leaves that notunnecessaryandwithers, somepeoplepruneobviouslyregularly.
窗台上的绿植向阳生长,没有多余和枯萎的枝叶,显然是有人定期修剪。
The hanging scroll, pen container, canteenandtea leavespeacefultreatingare belonging totheirpositions, from the bottom of windowto the dead angle of cabinet, alldoescleanly, spotless, fullyexplained the specialization and professional dedication of cleaning.
挂画、笔筒、水壶、茶叶都安安静静的待在属于它们的位置,从窗台的底部到柜子的死角,全都干干净,一尘不染,足以说明保洁的专业性和敬业精神。Jiang Qiproficientlyboils water, pulls outhisurgently neededrivertealosing weightkeeping in good healthgreen teafrom the cabinet, pondereda while, the handshiversslightlyto grasponeto admitin the cup the tea leavesslightly, thenturns headto askJiangHanandCaoLuoping.江祺熟练地烧水,从柜子里掏出他急需的江茶牌减肥养生绿茶,思考了一会儿,手微微颤抖抓出一小把茶叶放进自己杯子里,然后扭头问蒋珺和曹洛平。„Are youdrink the black tea, the Colaor the air/Qisoak in water?”
“你们是喝红茶,可乐还是气泡水?”
The air/Qisoaks in water the sign and taste that the mayormostloves, the mayorwith!
气泡水还是市长最爱的牌子和口味,市长同款呢!Two people:......?
两人:……?Two peoplechoose the air/Qito soak in water.
两人选择气泡水。CaoLuopingsits respectfully, like the firstundertakinganticipationangelinvestor's a little moe of not poorinvestmenttooneselfnew, somewhatopens the mouthcautious: „Bossriver, Sthistime and was not quite same.”
曹洛平正襟危坐,就像第一次创业期待天使投资人给自己一笔不菲的投资的小萌新一样,有些拘谨地开口:“江老板,s这次的本和原先都不太一样。”„It is not quite same?”Jiang Qiopens the folder, „isn'tdetective script?”
“不太一样?”江祺翻开文件夹,“不是推理本?”JiangHanjiesaid: „Isdetective script, buta littleemotion.”
蒋珺接道:“是推理本,但有点情感。”A littleemotion?
有点情感?
will Swrite the emotionunexpectedly?
s居然会写情感了?This, butfamousemotional scriptpineapplehead. Sandautumnautumnhitemotional script, sitsoneto cryface-to-face the pear flowerbelt/bringrain, a footrefers todigging outto dig out the three-bedroom apartment, wishes one couldto live infamoussceneJiang Qi that not to forgetat the scene.
要知道,这位可是著名的情感本菠萝头。s和秋秋打情感本,面对面坐着一个哭得梨花带雨,一个脚指抠地抠出三室一厅,恨不得当场住进去的名场面江祺至今没忘。JiangHanandCaoLuopingsorecommendvigorously, Jiang Qithought that hemustbe attractive.
蒋珺和曹洛平如此大力推荐,江祺觉得他得好好看看。
‚ A discreditedwomandied.
‘一个声名狼藉的女人死了。Shediesinoneselfresidence, dies a tragic death, the eyeopens the eyesin a big way, dies with injustice unredressed.
她死在自己的居所,死得很惨,眼睛睁得大大的,死不瞑目。Herbodywas sliveredseveralneatly, the headhungin the cabinet, the handforced in the vase, the calfdiscardsin the wooden barrel, thigh......
她的身体被干净利落地切成了数块,头颅高悬在柜子上,手被塞进花瓶里,小腿丢弃在木桶中,大腿……
The sostrangecause of death, makingin the entiresmall townpass on the womanto be killedby the sorceress. ’
如此古怪的死法,让整个小镇上都在传女人是被女巫杀死的。’Jiang Qi:?江祺:?
Do youmanagethisto call the emotion?
你管这叫情感?
Did youmanagethisto askBossShento write the emotion?
你管这叫沈老板会写情感了?
Does your familyemotional scriptrevolutionsattack the murderto dismember?
你家情感本转攻杀人分尸?
The Jiang Qifullquestion markthenlooksdownward.江祺满头问号地接着往下看。
The plot is actually very simple, the deadis a youngattractivesmall townwoman, alone, lives alone, discredited.
剧情其实很简单,死者是一位年轻漂亮的小镇女性,单身,独居,声名狼藉。Hasaboutherstory, somepeoplesaid that herrottengamblingowes the usury, has tomove to the small townto avoid creditorsfrom the bigcity. Somepeoplesaid that shebybetraying the physical bodymakes a living, herneighborseesherfamily/hometo come and go outseveraldifferentstrangemenfrequently. Alsosomepeoplemade a solemn pledge thatshe is a personpeddler, claimedoneselfoncesawherto tryto abduct the child.
关于她的故事有很多,有人说她烂赌欠下高利贷,不得不从大城市搬到小镇来躲债。有人说她靠出卖肉体谋生,她的邻居经常看见她家出入几个不同的陌生男人。还有人信誓旦旦地表示她是一个人贩子,声称自己曾见过她试图诱拐孩子。In the eyes of small townresident, sheisoneabandons oneself to Bohemianism, false, sinister, viciousviperous beauty. Such a person, is incompatiblewith the sealconservativesmall town, the womenevadeherlike the viper, shegoes to the town/subduesperiphery the onlysupermarketshopping to presentat least3metersno war zone, as ifonherwhatfearfulvirus.
在小镇居民的眼中,她就是一条放浪形骸,虚伪,阴险,狠毒的美女蛇。这样一个人,和封闭保守的小镇格格不入,妇女们都避她如蛇蝎,就连她去镇上唯一的超市购物周围都能出现至少三米的真空地带,仿佛她身上又什么可怕的病毒。Issuch a woman, the tragic deathinown.
就是这样一个女人,惨死在自己家中。Regardingherdeath, the residents in small towndiscuss spiritedly, when the sheriffmustkill peoplethislaughablereasonto settle a lawsuitby the sorceresscarelessly. Attracted the attention of Sspyfrom the strangecase, the Sspyarrived atthisremotesmall townfrom afar, began to investigateto the case.
对于她的死,小镇上的居民议论纷纷,就在警长要以女巫杀人这个可笑的理由草草结案的时候。自离奇的案子吸引了s侦探的注意,s侦探千里迢迢来到这个偏僻的小镇,对案件展开调查。After the investigation of Sspy, seems like that bywoman who the residentpushes aside, in facthas5friendshipsignificantgood friendsin the town.
经过s侦探的调查,看似被居民排挤的女人,实际上在镇子上有五名交情匪浅的好友。These5good friendsare as follows: Father, respectedattorney and daughterandagent of small towntown/subduesflowerandneighborfamily/home17-year-olddaughterandfarm operatorof noble character and high prestige.
这五名好友分别是:德高望重的神父、受人尊敬的律师、小镇镇花兼邻居家17岁的女儿、农场主的女儿和房产中介。
The day before the womendiedwasher27 th birthday, on that day the womaninvitedthese5 people a guestat home, next morningwill be discoveredintragic death. After the long timeinvestigation, Mr.Shas found out the truthbasically, butstillhad the anxiety, thereforeinvited the 5outstandingdetectives of police authoritiesto glance through the dossierinvestigationtogether, found out the truetruth.
女人死前一天是她的27岁生日,那天女人邀请了这五人在家里做客,第二天一早就被人发现惨死家中。经过多日的调查,s先生已经基本查出真相,只是尚有疑虑,因此邀请警局的五名优秀探员一同翻阅卷宗调查,查出真正的真相。According to the oral confessions of 5suspects, they, althoughis the before deathgood friend of woman, but the friendshipis not deep. Goodhonest, has them of social positionregarding the woman of degenerationnot onlysympathyanddisdains, intheirmouths, they is just keeping aloofgetting sucked into the woman in miretoperson of good intention who extends the aid, wantsto saveher.
根据五个嫌疑人的口供,他们虽然是女人的生前好友,但交情不深。善良正直,颇有社会地位的他们对于堕落的女人既同情又不屑,在他们的口中,他们只不过是高高在上的对深陷泥潭的女人伸出援手的好心人,想要拯救她。Does to the womanmudnot to hold the wall, making one expect too much.
奈何女人烂泥扶不上墙,让人恨铁不成钢。
The agentsaid with certaintysaid,helooked the womancameto want the debttaking advantage of the usuryby the goon, wantedto helpherintroduce the workstemming from the good intention, was actually rejectedby the woman, but also was entangledby the woman, oftenwantsto ask itselfto lend money.
房产中介言之凿凿的说,他看女人借高利贷被打手上门要债,出于好心想要帮她介绍工作,却被女人拒绝,还被女人缠上,时常想找自己借钱。
The daughter of neighbordefinitelyexpressedoneselfoncepersonallysawin the womanoftento come and go outmanyattireappropriatestrangemen, oneselfcannot take a liking to the person who like thisabandons oneself to Bohemianism, maintains the normalhuman relationswithher is just becausetheyare the neighbors.
邻居的女儿肯定地表示自己曾经亲眼看见女人家中时常出入许多衣着得体陌生男人,自己瞧不上这样放浪形骸的人,和她保持正常交际只不过是因为她们是邻居。
The daughter of farm operatordisdainsaid that the womanwears the fakejewelryfrequently, frequentlylooks for itselftaking advantage of the jewelry, oneselfarelooked that shehas happened togetherwithherpitifully, occasionallyloans the jewelry.
农场主的女儿不屑的说女人经常佩戴假珠宝,经常找自己借首饰,自己是看她可怜才和她有所交集,偶尔出借首饰。
The fathersaid that the womanoftenasks herselfto confess, butoneselfcannotmake public the content of confession, but the regrettableexpressionwomanactually is also a poor man, even ifshehas the evil, butstillcrimenotuntil death.
神父说女人时常找自己忏悔,但自己不能公布忏悔的内容,只是遗憾的表示女人其实也是一个可怜人,就算她有罪恶,但也罪不至死。
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……These5so-calledfriends, everyone slanderedto the womanto the utmost,as ifcannot pick upanymeriton the woman.
这五个所谓的朋友,每个人都对女人极尽诋毁,仿佛在女人身上挑不出任何一个优点。Withthorough of case, the police officerdiscovered that the factis not such.
随着案件的深入,警官发现事实并非如此。
The womenin fact is a deaf person, shecannot hear the soundthereforenot to likespeaking, is quiet, thereforeseemsveryeccentric.
女人实际上是一个聋子,她听不见声音所以并不爱说话,性格沉默寡言,所以显得很孤僻。Herfamilyis well-off, the parentsleft the richheritagetoher, afterhavingserious illnessdate and timenot manyshereturned tomother'shometown, isthissmall town, decided that spent the lifefinaltime here.
她家境富裕,父母给她留下了丰厚的遗产,在身患重病时日无多后她回到了母亲的家乡,也就是这个小镇,决定在这儿度过生命最后的时光。
The mediumis the woman the 1stperson who knowsin the small town, house that becausesherentsthrough the medium.
中介是女人在小镇上认识的第一个人,因为她是通过中介租的房子。In the intermediarysurface the workis diligent, in factis a rottencompulsive gambler, owed a bigusury. Hedeceived the womanelderto be seriously ill, asks the womanto borrowseveralsums of money, the womanlenthimout of the benevolencerefreshedly, aroused the intermediarygreedon the contrary.
中介表面上工作勤勤恳恳,实际上是个烂赌鬼,欠了一大笔高利贷。他欺骗女人自己长辈病重,找女人借了几笔钱,女人出于善心都爽快的借给了他,反倒激起中介的贪欲。Afterdiscovering the woman is actually an orphan girl, the mediumhad the idea of womanproperty.
在发现女人其实是一介孤女后,中介打起了女人财产的主意。
The daughter of farm operatoris the woman the 2ndfriend who knowsin the small town, herfamilyis well-off, but the parentsare not willing many spendingonher.
农场主的女儿是女人在小镇上认识的第二个朋友,她家境富裕,但父母并不愿意在她身上过多的花钱。Heralljewellery ornamentsbasicallyare the fake goods, the matter that usuallyinmostlikeshandlingbringsthesefake goodsto show offto the poorfriends who cannot judge the quality of goods, obtainsenvying of people.
她所有的珠宝首饰基本上都是冒牌货,平日里最爱做的事情就是带着那些冒牌货向不识货的贫穷朋友们炫耀,获得众人的羡慕。
The daughter of farm operatoris close to the womanon own initiativeandsheis the friend , because shediscovered the jewelry that the womanwearsis the genuine article.
农场主的女儿主动接近女人和她做朋友,是因为她发现女人所佩戴的珠宝都是真货。Moststarts, sheasks the womanto weartaking advantage of the jewelry. Afterwardstemming fromgreedyandenvy, shestartedto exchangeamongtwo peoplesecretly the jewelry.
最开始,她只是找女人借珠宝佩戴。后来出于贪婪和嫉妒,她开始偷偷调换两人之间的珠宝。
After twosecond daughterpeoplehave not discovered, the daughterappetite of farm operatoris getting bigger and bigger, the jewelry of larcenyare also getting more and more. Afterdiscovering the womanis an orphan girlall alone, shehits the attention of hercompletejewellery ornaments.
一次两次女人没有发现后,农场主的女儿胃口越来越大,所偷窃的珠宝也越来越多。在发现女人是个无依无靠的孤女后,她更是打起了她全部珠宝首饰的注意。
The daughters of neighborfamily/homeare the 3rdfriend of woman, before the womandid not haveis discredited, two peoplerelationsare good, frequentlygoes to the storeto go shoppingtogether, but alsogives a smallgifteach other.
邻居家的女儿是女人的第三个朋友,在女人还没有声名狼藉之前,两人的关系是不错的,经常一起去商店买东西,还互相赠送个小礼物。Until the daughters of neighborfamily/homediscovered, two peoplego outtogether, the line of sight of people is not always at itselfon.
直到邻居家的女儿发现,两人一同出去的时候,众人的视线总是不在自己身上。Sheis the recognizedtown/subduesflower, but the womanalsowantsto be prettier than her.
她是公认的镇花,可女人比她还要漂亮许多。Sheknows the strangeman who comes and goes out the woman is actually the doctor of woman, butshestemming from the envy, startsto uploadtheseficticiousbaseless rumorstoward the town/subdues. As the rumorbiographyis broader, manypeoplestartto accept as true, looked that the look of womanfilled the dislikeandexclusion, even if the womancannot heareveryoneto discussanything, stillknows that everyoneas if not like himself.
她知道出入女人家的陌生男人其实是女人的医生,但她出于嫉妒,开始往镇上传那些子虚乌有的风言风语。随着谣言越传越广,不少人开始信以为真,看女人的眼神都充满了厌恶和嫌弃,女人即使听不见大家在议论什么,也知道大家似乎并不喜欢自己。Becauseis eccentric, the womanstartsno longerto go out, evenneedsto purchase the goods, stillalwaysasks the daughterhelp of neighborfamily/home.
由于性格孤僻,女人开始不再出门,就算需要购置物品,也总是拜托邻居家的女儿帮忙。
The daughters of neighborfamily/homewant, so long as the womandoes not go outfor a lifetime, sheis willingto help the womanrun aboutto go shoppingfor a lifetime.
邻居家的女儿非常愿意,只要女人一辈子不出门,她愿意一辈子帮女人跑腿买东西。
The fatheris the 4 thfriend of woman, the womandoes not go to the churchprayer, sheisknowsowndate and timenot many, wantsto donate the church the surpluspropertiescompletely, is usedto give financial aid the orphan.
神父是女人的第四个朋友,女人并不是去教堂祷告的,她是知道自己时日无多,想要把自己剩余的财产全部捐给教堂,用来接济孤儿。When the womanexpressedoneselfwish, hervariousrumorshave passed oncompletely the entiretown.
当女人表达出自己的意愿的时候,她的各种谣言已经传满整个镇子。
The fatheris not resignedintreatsfor a lifetimeinthisremotesmall townis an impoverishedfather, whenknew that the womanhas a bigproperty and date and timenot many, the fatherhad the thought of deceitsuddenly.
神父并不甘心于一辈子待在这个偏僻的小镇当一个清苦的神父,在得知女人拥有一大笔财产并且时日无多的时候,神父突然产生了欺骗的念头。So long ascanthissum of moneyPianlai, he unable to change a place, trades a status, naturalfor a lifetime?
只要能把这笔钱骗来,他不就可以换一个地方,换一个身份,潇洒的过完一辈子嘛?Thereforefather'sinrumorfortown/subduesincreased something, after allwho believe a discreditedpersonin factis a richgood man?
所以神父替镇上的谣言又增添了一些东西,毕竟有谁会相信一个声名狼藉的人实际上是一个有钱的善人呢?
The attorneyis the 5 thfriend who the womanknows.
律师是女人认识的第五个朋友。Said that is the friend is not right, because the womanknew that heisbecauseworks, the womanwantsto hire the attorneyto helphercomplete the donation of heritage.
说是朋友也不全对,因为女人认识他是因为工作,女人想聘请律师帮她完成遗产的捐赠。
The attorney and fatherare in cahoots, decided that Hesteals awaythisheritage.
律师和神父狼狈为奸,决定何某偷走这份遗产。Finally, before the woman27 th birthday, shedied of illnessin the family/home.
最终,在女人27岁生日之前,她病死在了家中。
The daughter of farm operatorgoes to herhometo celebrate birthdayforher, after thisdiscovers the womandies , not onlyhas not reported to the police, insteadstolelight/only the womanalljewelry of while the precioustime, the jade bracelet on necklace and hand on herneckhas not let off.
农场主的女儿去她家中为她庆生,这发现女人死后非但没有报警,反而趁着宝贵的时间偷光了女人所有的珠宝,就连她脖子上的项链和手上的玉镯都没有放过。Forbettertookto startonjade bracelet, the daughter of farm operatorreducedherhand.
为了更好的取下手上的玉镯,农场主的女儿砍掉了她的手。
The mediawantto ask the womanto lend moneyin the name ofbirthday celebration, discovered that after the womandieswas also chopped the handat home, leafs throughentire familynot to find the valuablefinance, air/Qigoes crazy, cuts the body of womanto give vent to indignationwith the bladecrazily.
中介想以庆生的名义去找女人借钱,发现女人死在家里还被剁了手之后,翻遍全家都没有找到值钱的财务,气得发疯,拿刀狂砍女人的尸体泄愤。
The daughter of neighboris3rdcomes, indiscoveringwoman, even ifhad died, after the eyeballbreaks out is still beautiful, the envymustchop the hairpinherhead of womanto throw into the bucket.
邻居的女儿是第三个来的,在发现女人即使已经死了,眼球突起却依旧美丽后,嫉妒得剁下了女人的头把她的头扔进水桶里。
The attorneyis4 thcomes, heasks the womanto discuss the will. After discovering the womandies, the attorneyimmediatelycalls the father.
律师是第四个来的,他来找女人商量遗嘱。发现女人死后,律师立刻叫来神父。Two peoplefully realize the case-handling ability of small townpolice headquarters, inthisignorantsmall town, ifsomepeoplediespeciallymiserably, moreoverthispersonreputationis not quite good, the sheriff will kill peoplethislaughableshoddyreasonto settle a lawsuitwith the sorceresscarelessly.
两人深知小镇警署的办案能力,在这个愚昧的小镇,如果有人死得特别惨而且这个人名声不太好,警长甚至会用女巫杀人这种可笑拙劣的理由来草草结案。Tobe betterto seek the property of woman, two peoplesliver several corpsevariousplaces that with joint forcesthrowin the house, thishas that the storybegan.
为了更好谋得女人的财产,两人合力把尸体切成数块扔在房子的各处,这才有了故事开头的那一幕。Looks atJiang Qi of entirecase:?
看完整个案件的江祺:?„Thisisone...... the suicide... is not right, natural deathcase?!”Jiang Qiwas ignorant.
“这是一个……自杀…不对,正常死亡案?!”江祺都懵了。detective script, onecrowd of personshove aroundpushfor quite a while, finallydiscovered that the deadisdies of illness, although the storywrites, but the shop ownerreallydid not fear that the playerdoes playto startto curse at peoplefinally?
一个推理本,一群人推来推去推半天,最后发现死者是病死的,虽然故事写的还可以,但店家真的不怕玩家玩到最后开始骂人吗?„Behindalsohas.”JiangHanreminded.
“后面还有。”蒋珺提醒。Jiang Qiwill fliphastilyin the future, discovery, a lot ofcontents.江祺连忙往后翻翻,发现果然,还有很多内容。Looks, my goodness, thisnatural deathcasewas only the appetizer.
一看,好家伙,这个自然死亡案只是开胃小菜。Behindalsohasenough5secret roommurder cases.
后面还有足足五个密室杀人案。
The deadare the fivefalsefriends of woman, the detectiveafterverifying the truth of case, howis having a headache to judge the nature of thiscasetime, these5peoplestarted dead one after another, diedcomparesstrange.
死者就是女人的五个虚假朋友,探员在查明案件的真相后,正在头疼该如何判断这个案件的性质的时候,这五个人就开始陆续死亡,一个死得比一个离奇。
The Jiang Qispeed reading a scenariocontent, read the hosthandbookdirectly, neglects the thickcaseto decode the details, looks at the truthdirectly.江祺快速阅读了一下剧本内容,直接看主持人手册,忽略厚厚的案件破解详情,直接看真相。Killing5people of murderersisMr.S, Mr.Sis the Elder Brother of woman. Knew after the younger sisterwas killed, Mr.Sarrived in the town/subduesto investigateyounger sister'sdeathtruthfrom afar, discoveredagain the younger sister was actually notharms, but after truly5murderers, Mr.Sstartedoneselfrevenge.
杀害五人凶手是s先生,s先生是女人的哥哥。得知妹妹被人杀害后,s先生千里迢迢来到镇上调查妹妹的死亡真相,再发现妹妹其实并不是为人所害,可又确确实实有五个凶手后,s先生开始了自己的复仇。Looked that entirestoryJiang QisomewhatunderstandsprobablywhyJiangHanandCaoLuopingsaidthis scriptwriteswell, butneedsto change.
看完整个故事江祺好像有些明白为什么蒋珺和曹洛平说这个本写得不错,但是需要改。
When this scriptlongis long.这个本时长非常长。„How long did youmeasurethis scriptto measure?”Jiang Qiasked.
“你们测这个本测了多久?”江祺问。„14hours.”CaoLuopingsaid a veryshockingnumber.
“14个小时。”曹洛平说出了一个非常惊人的数字。
When 14hours, areonesuperare imprisonedabsolutelythisare long.
14个小时,绝对是一个超级坐牢本的时长。„Bossriver the this scriptpresentissueisthis.”CaoLuopingconsiders the word usage, whileopens the mouthslowly, „itstimeis very long, butitsdifficulty is not too high.”
“江老板这个本现在的问题是这样的。”曹洛平一边斟酌用词,一边缓缓开口,“它时间很长,但它难度并不算太高。”„Particularly the 1stcase, is not too difficultby the technique, ifasnormaldetective script, itshouldbeearlierexcessively the ice-breakingcase.”
“尤其是第一个案子,论手法并不算太难,如果作为一个正常的推理本,它应该是一个前期过度的破冰案。”„Butitscontent is a lot, heneedsto draw out the murderous intention of completestoryandtruemurderer. Actually the 1stcaseended, a completestoryhad come out, has been ableto regard as a leaningnovicetodetective scriptplayed.”
“可是它的内容很多,他需要引出完整的故事和真正凶手的杀人动机。其实第一个案子结束,一个完整的故事就已经出来了,就已经可以视为一个偏新手向的推理本玩完了。”Jiang Qinods, healsothinks so.江祺点头,他也是这么觉得的。Frankly, whenreads the itself/Ben, looked that 1stcaseJiang Qithinksthis scriptfinished.
实不相瞒,在看本的时候,看完第一个案子江祺以为这个本就结束了。„But if finishedbythisnodeachievement, this script was too simple, itis the itself/Ben that a completenoviceapproaches.”
“可是如果以这个节点作为结束的话,这个本就太简单了,它就是一个完完全全的新手向的本。”„Time is also very short, 3 ~ 4hours.”
“时间也很短,3~4个小时。”„The following5cases, are5completelyindependentsecret rooms, the difficultyincrease progressivelyin turn, is not simple is not too difficult, because the massis quite big, whoin additionfinallyalsoneedsto unify the 1stcase the storybackgroundto analyze the truemurdereris, thereforetimeusually about 10hours.”
“后面的五个案子,是五个完全独立的密室,难度依次递增,不简单也不算太难,但因为体量比较大,加上最后还需要结合第一个案子的故事背景来分析出真正的凶手是谁,所以时间通常在十个小时左右。”„Thesetwopartsaddedin the same place, this scriptoneturned for 14hours.”
“这两个部分加在一块,这个本就一下变成了14个小时。”„Timeis too long, moreoverwithoutis so difficult.”
“时间太长,而且没有那么难。”„Isifdisassemblesto opentwobooks, turns into1and2two, without the information of Section 1assupport, Section 2finallypushesominouslyabsolutelywould have no meansto complete.”
“是如果拆开拆成两个本,变成一、二两部,没有第1部分的信息作为支撑,第2部分的最终推凶根本就没有办法完成。”„Comes outto increase the informationindependentrow of Section 1to the 2ndpart, will appearextremelydesirably.”
“把第1部分的信息单独列出来添加到第二个部分去,又会显得太过刻意。”„Thisis the biggest problem that this scriptcomes acrossat present.”
“这个就是这个本目前遇到的最大问题。”Jiang Qicontinuesto nod , indicating to understand,asked: „How do youwantto changenow?”江祺继续点头,表示理解,问:“你们现在想怎么改呢?”„Changedwordscurrentlyhavetwodirections.”JiangHandao, „oneisto increase the difficulty, when itsdifficultyincrease to be joined toitsis long.”
“改的话目前有两个方向。”蒋珺道,“一个是增加难度,把它的难度提升到配得上它的时长。”Jiang Qi:?江祺:?„Likeyourshopinthat«KillsBossmurder mystery game store», 15hoursstart, 48hoursnot necessarily canplace an upper limit on. Everyoneknows that itis very difficult, everyone was psychologically prepared, from the beginningplayerscreening.”
“就像您店里的那个《杀死剧本杀店老板》一样,15个小时起步,48个小时也不一定能封顶。大家都知道它很难,每个人都做好了心理准备,从一开始就把玩家给筛选好了。”„Ifchanges, thatthis scriptmustsellcity limitedorexclusive, because the audienceis too small, is doomed unable to selltoo.”
“如果这么改的话,那这个本就要卖城限或者独家,因为受众太小,注定卖不出去太多。”„The 2ndmentalitychanges totwoscenarioit.”
“第二种思路是把它改成两个剧本。”„The 1stscenarioconfessionstorybackground, the noviceenters the step, 2ndscenarioneglects the plotto study the secret room. Twomusthitcontinually, has not played the 1stitself/Ben, forbidsto play the 2nditself/Ben.”
“第一个剧本交代故事背景,新手进阶,第二个剧本忽略剧情专攻密室。两个本必须要连打,没有玩过第一个本,禁止玩第二个本。”„Althoughlike thishas the suspicion of binding . Moreover the table mannersare quite ugly, but the sales volumeis definitely good. After alltwopackagepacksselllaugh uproariously . Moreover the sales volumewill definitely sellto be bettercompared with an application.”
“这样虽然有绑定之嫌而且吃相比较难看,但是销量肯定不错。毕竟两个盒装打包卖更有噱头,而且销量肯定会比一本单卖要好。”„Meaning of BossShen?”Jiang Qiasked.
“沈老板的意思呢?”江祺问。„Hecomparesto favorchanging totwopackage, suchincomewill be higher.”
“他比较倾向于改成两个盒装,这样收益会高一些。”Jiang Qiunderstood, BossShenwas just determinedto cross the rubicon, decided that the coming outindividual farmingcomparisonis short of money, wantsto do the pointto bring in moneyquickly.江祺懂了,沈老板刚刚下定决心破釜沉舟,决定出来单干比较缺钱,想要搞点来钱快的。„Therefore was the presentwasscenariohas written, but ifmustchange totwobooksBossShennot to change, wantedto seek helpxgentlemen, this?”Jiang Qilooks attwo people.
“所以现在是剧本已经写出来了,但是如果要改成两本的话沈老板不会改,想要求助x先生,是这样吧?”江祺看着两人。Two peoplesimultaneous/uniformsimultaneous/uniformnods.
两人齐齐点头。„BossShenThat sidemeaningis, so long asxgentlemenare willingto helprevise, canscorethreeingredientsbecomes. Ifxgentlemendislikelowly, 40%.”
“沈老板那边的意思是,只要x先生愿意帮忙修改,就可以得三成分成。如果x先生嫌低,40%也可以。”„Manypossiblysomewhatwas again difficult, after all to Starry River Scenario ClubMr.30% , x40%, That sideBossShen is only left over30%, his 30% must divide10%tous, the wordsminute/share of againgivingarrives in hishandon......”acting on the conscience, CaoLuopingspoketwowordsforBossShen.
“再多可能就有些难了,毕竟给星河剧本社三成,x先生40%,沈老板那边就只剩下30%,他那30%还要给我们分10%,再多给的话分到他手里就……”出于良心,曹洛平为沈老板说了两句话。„Iunderstand.”Jiang Qinods, althoughis short of money, butreallydoes not missscenarioto distributethata mere pittance.
“我懂。”江祺点点头,虽然缺钱,但真的不差剧本发行那三瓜两枣。WhatJiang Qilacksisseveralhundred million, money that the scenarioreleasemakesmakes up an odd change most.江祺缺的是几个亿,剧本发行赚的钱最多补个零头。Heis also willingto mix the scenarioreleasenow the matter, is mainly becauseStarry River Scenario Clubturned into the consciencebewilderedly, industrybenchmark. Last yeartwoscenariosucceededgreatly, after the tableroamingsales volumewas also good, the shop owners who were engaged in the scenarioindustrymuch the Jiang QiindustrySavior, counted on that Jiang Qithis yearhastwoto explode the itself/Benat the springshow/unfoldsor the autumnshow/unfoldsagaingreatly, supported the entireindustry.
他现在还愿意掺和剧本发行的事情,主要是因为星河剧本社莫名其妙变成了业内良心,行业标杆。去年两个剧本大获成功,桌游销量也不错之后,不少从事剧本行业的店家都把江祺行业救世主,就指望江祺今年在春展或秋展上再出两个大爆本,养活全行业。Thesecounted onshop owner who Jiang Qisupports the industry, every yeardoes not come the galaxyscenariotheme parkor the Starry River Scenario Clubpunch-inexpenseracketdistributes as before the friendcircle, embarrassedinindustryinWeChatgroupsaidoneselfdoesthisline.
这些指望江祺养活行业的店家,每年不来星河剧本主题乐园或者星河剧本社打卡消费拍照发朋友圈,都不好意思在业内微信群里说自己是干这行的。Theseshop ownerswhereare the Jiang Qipeers, theyare the Jiang Qiexcellent customers!
这些店家们哪里是江祺的同行啊,他们是江祺的优质客户啊!Whichcomes the galaxyscenariotheme parkpunch-, does not come inimpecuniously, the bagsgo out.
哪个来星河剧本主题乐园打卡的,不是两手空空地进来,大包小包地出去。
The scenarioindustryis not good, where do the customershave moneyto come the amusement parkto spend?!剧本行业不行,客户们哪里有钱来游乐园消费?!Jiang Qithought that evenforcustomer, he must at the show/unfoldsmix a foot in the fall of this yearagain.江祺觉得就算是为了客户,他也得在今年秋展上再掺上一脚。
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