BFAMMGS :: Volume #5

#421: Changed too well


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Chapter 419 changed too well 第419章改得太好了 2nd day early morning Jiang Qi wakes up, he discovered with amazement oneself entered a mysterious group. 第二天一早江祺醒来的时候,他惊讶的发现自己进了一个神秘的群。 In this group chatted the person probably do not sleep, before dawn 34 o'clock chatted high, about started no one to speak to 5 points. When eight and nine points, this common office worker has started to work in the morning, and starts in good time interval group that catches a fish by hand to chat a silence, after the 12 : 00 pm starts some people to speak to send the advertisement. 这个群聊里的人好像都不要睡觉,凌晨三四点钟聊得正high,到了五点左右才开始没人说话。等到早上八、九点,这个一般上班族已经开始工作,并且开始摸鱼聊天的好时段群内一片寂静,一直到中午12点以后才开始有人说话发广告。 This group is the release group of autumn show/unfolds. 这个群就是秋展的发行群。 Discovered that Jiang Han and Cao Luoping helped themselves buy the luxurious release ticket in one night, determined the room, plying the connections to set the advertisement position of good position, relates Jiang Qi of table roaming more than 20 shop owner friend help propagandized preheating not to design from the start:...... 发现蒋珺和曹洛平在一夜之间帮自己买好了豪华发行票,确定了房间,托关系定下了好位置的广告位,联系到了不下二十个店家朋友帮忙宣传预热压根没设计出来的桌游的江祺:…… You open the murder mystery game store person not to need to sleep in the evening? 你们开剧本杀店的人晚上都不用睡觉的吗? Eats the steamed stuffed bun the Jiang Qi whole face to be puzzled in the breakfast shop of community entrance. 在小区门口的早餐店啃包子的江祺满脸困惑。 The king two his 7 points towed to go out, she and made clear 7:10 breakfast. Has a day of false clear rarely, fills a day of amusement traveling schedule secure, from 7 : 00 am to 10 : 00 pm, even also made the planning chart, demonstrates incisively the vigor of young people. 王二丫七点不到拖完地就出门了,她和清清约了7点10分的早餐。清清难得放一天假,把一天的玩乐行程安排得满满的,从早上7点到晚上10点,甚至还做了个计划表,将年轻人的活力展现得淋漓尽致。 However Jiang Qi thought that their vigor also remained the high school to maintain in the two years, once walked into the university campus, they will discover that early 8 classes were the world's most terrible things. To get out of bed before 7 : 00, even if there is a steel will is still very difficult to achieve. 不过江祺觉得她们俩的活力也就剩高中这两年能维持一下了,一旦步入大学校园,她们就会发现早八课是世界上最可怕的东西。想在七点之前起床,就算有钢铁般的意志也很难做到。 Jiang Qi reads the advertisement that in the release group release sent casually, with several famous big releases that at present the autumn show/unfolds organizer announces in the new itself/Ben that at the autumn show/unfolds distributes, discovered that Jiang Han said a point right, this year is really the emotional script authorities. 江祺随便看了看发行群里各位发行发的广告,和目前秋展举办方公示出来的几家有名的大发行会在秋展上发行的新本,发现蒋珺说得一点都没错,这年头真的是情感本当道。 The big release slightly distributes, the itself/Ben that pushes newly is primarily emotional script, badly is pleasure script and machine-made itself/Ben, detective script are again miserable. horror script also has, but the proportion surely does not have emotional script to be many, emotional script as many introduces and poster as Jiang Qi does not need to look, looked the name can judge is which type. 无论是大发行还是小发行,新推出来的本都是以情感本为主,再不济就是欢乐本和机制本,推理本少得可怜。恐怖本也有,但占比肯定没有情感本多,情感本多到江祺连简介和海报都不用看,看名字就能判断出是哪种类型的。 Has the youth, time and poem phrase, looks at the name unable to look with some you are anything, but the overall leaning vernacular is not incoherent did not have since birth rare word is modern background emotional script. 带青春、时光、诗字眼的,和一些你看名字看不出来是什么东西,但是总体偏白话不拗口也没有生僻字的就是现代背景的情感本 Touches on slightly with the flowers and plants and small bridge over the flowing streams, cannot look is what name, but read quite incoherently , and radical of character were quite many, most likely was the ancient background or the immortal hero background. 和花花草草、小桥流水沾边的,也看不出来是什么名字,但是读起来比较拗口且字的笔画比较多的,十有八九是古代背景或者仙侠背景的。 Naturally, some modern ages mixed the ancient times, three lived third, the previous generation this life, Jiang Qi also does until now does not understand why the 1st modern love story, 2nd can jump to the previous generation turns into the background, the player can also play clear strange emotional script in the ancient times. 当然,其中还有一些现代混古代,三生三世,前世今生,江祺至今也搞不明白为什么第一本还是现代爱情故事,第二本就能跳到前世变成古代背景,玩家还能玩明白的离奇情感本 According to the current market trend, JC that lecture of campus youth love emotional script, but also follows the crowd completely. 按照目前的市场趋势,JC的那本讲校园青春爱情的情感本,还满随大流的。 Good Teacher John already not, when dm, otherwise this year is emotional script, how could it not be can he be unemployed?” “还好约翰老师已经不当dm了,不然这年头全都是情感本,他岂不得失业?” Jiang Qi swallows the last steamed stuffed bun, claps to walk toward the alley. 江祺咽下最后一口包子,拍拍手朝小巷走去。 Yesterday evening because went quite temporary, Jiang Qi asked some acting shopkeeper Liu Jia simple small issues, understood slightly in the past year murder mystery game store operating condition, the concrete account and staff situation have not looked. 昨天晚上因为去得比较临时,江祺只是问了代理店长刘嘉一些简单的小问题,稍微了解了一下近一年来剧本杀店的经营情况,具体的账目和员工情况都没看。 Before going to JC, Jiang Qi and Liu Jiayue 9 : 00 am old-established shop sees, further spoke in detail. 在去JC之前,江祺和刘嘉约好今天上午九点老店见,进一步详谈。 After the terrifying baby room moves the amusement park, Jiang Qi had/left a change to repair the old-established shop, lets the old-established shop turned into one purely open the horror script shop. 在恐怖娃娃屋搬去游乐园后,江祺出了一笔小钱把老店重新装修一下,让老店变成一个纯粹的开恐怖本的店。 Now the 2 building corridor of old-established shop has spread completely the black coating of the light-absorption layer, hangs all over spider web that confuses falsehood with the truth sufficiently. In the room also wants anything to have anything, wears the bridal stuffed dummy of red veil, the coffin, is pasting the red candle of happy character, moistens the blood sickle, the ugly face baby...... 现在老店的二楼走廊已经涂满了黑色吸光涂料,挂满足以以假乱真的蜘蛛网。房间里也是要啥有啥,戴着红盖头的新娘假人,棺材,贴着喜字的红蜡烛,沾血镰刀,鬼脸娃娃…… The thieves astray must burn two columns to bye-bye to walk fragrant again. 小偷误入都得烧两柱香拜拜再走。 Hsintien to no change, a «Red Tears» real-life scenery room in building is using as before. Although without woof Xinghua let " Red Tears » real-life scenery is inferior, but after " Red Tears » real-life scenery of amusement park cancels, the real-life scenery of Hsintien became the Xuncheng biggest real-life scenery, will have many new guests to come as before. 新店到没什么变化,一楼的《红泪》实景房依旧在用。虽说没了汪杏花让《红泪》的实景逊色不少,但在游乐园的《红泪》实景取消后,新店的实景就成了浔城最大的实景,依旧会有不少新客人慕名前来。 With the lapse of time, initially this Jiang Qi felt the real-life scenery that can lose money started to have some to be able unexpectedly to return to this symptom, can only say that the alone thing made money. 随着时间的推移,当初这个江祺觉得一定会赔钱的实景居然开始有了些能回本的苗头,只能说独一份的东西还是赚钱的。 In the old-established shop, Jiang Qi sits on the familiar obsolete second-hand sofa, in the computer with shop looked summary report that Liu Jia rushes to finish for these days temporarily. 老店里,江祺坐在熟悉的老旧二手沙发上,用店里的电脑看刘嘉这几天临时赶出来的总结报告。 Writes to report that this matter, acting shopkeeper Liu Jia definitely is inferior to specialized speaker reckless clear. 写报告这种事情,代理店长刘嘉肯定是不如专业报告人胡清的。 Jiang Qi was discovered, as he has looked at the report type increased, he also trusted about the level of reckless clear specialized speaker. 江祺算是发现了,随着他看过的报告的种类增多,他对胡清专业报告人的水平也更加信赖。 Read so many reports, is reckless clear most intimate. 看了这么多报告,还是胡清的最贴心。 Fortunately, Liu Jia possibly is knows oneself write the level of report to be not much, therefore attached this year behind the report the complete book size record and each month in financial expense scenario shop. 值得庆幸的是,刘嘉可能是知道自己写报告的水平不咋地,所以在报告后面附了这一年来剧本店里的全部开本记录和每月财务开支。 Jiang Qi reads the form difficultly. 江祺艰难地看着表格。 Although orange already not in murder mystery game store, the fine tradition that but she makes the form remained, reported that the following appendix takes a broad view to look is the form. 橙子虽然已经不在剧本杀店了,但她做表格的优良传统留了下来,报告后面的附件放眼望去全是表格。 Liu Jia is somewhat waiting for the appraisal of boss intensely. 刘嘉有些紧张地等待着老板的评价。 Finally, Jiang Qi looked. 终于,江祺看完了。 Boss, drinks the fruit juice.” Liu Jia delivered the ice piece intimately presses out the watermelon juice fresh. “老板,喝果汁。”刘嘉贴心地送上了加冰块的鲜榨西瓜汁。 Jiang Qi drinks one shallowly, is a little pale, has not added the syrup. 江祺浅喝一口,有点淡,没加糖浆。 I discovered that in the shop incurred many dm newly.” Jiang Qi first notices is the personnel changes. “我发现店里新招了不少dm呀。”江祺第一个注意到的就是人员变动。 Now two murder mystery game store full-time concurrent job dm put together enough 29, this population could be said as quite many. 现在两家剧本杀店的全职兼职dm加在一起足足有29个,这个人数可以说是相当多了。 If the general shop move so many dm, light/only the operation capital opens the hip every month very much. 一般的小店如果招这么多dm,光每月开工资就很开胯。 Having is shopkeeper Liu's move from the school does not have the basic salary study younger brother study younger sister, only then holiday and weekend quite busy time can come the help.” Liu Jiadao, in our shop will help them have the practice proof, was offers mutual benefit and achieves common progress.” “有很多都是刘店长从学校里招的没有底薪的学弟学妹,只有节假日和周末比较忙的时候才会过来帮忙。”刘嘉道,“我们店里会帮他们开实习证明,也算是互惠互利了。” Also without big four can have the practice proof?” Jiang Qi is somewhat surprised. “还没大四就要开实习证明吗?”江祺有些吃惊。 Shopkeeper Liu they specialized seem to want each semester.” “刘店长他们专业好像每个学期都要。” Jiang Qi nods, had not asked, shifts to the second issue. 江祺点点头,没有多问,转向第二个问题。 Recently one year opened emotional script is quite many I to understand, yesterday evening you also said that now in the market emotional script are many, other type new this also few. But why the holiday opens difference so many that and usually opens?” Jiang Qi is pointing at last year National Day, this New Year's day, when 51, Mid-Autumn Festival even is the pure brightness book size list, holiday opens basically is exclusive script.” “最近一年开情感本比较多我可以理解,昨天晚上你们也说了,现在市面上情感本很多,其他类型的新本也少。可是为什么节假日开的本和平时开的差这么多啊?”江祺指着去年国庆,今年元旦,五一,中秋甚至是清明时的开本清单,“节假日开的基本上都是独家本诶。” All is Made by Card Game Studio exclusive script, so long as is 24 hours opens exclusive script to the holiday shop , " Red Tears » real-life scenery even can achieve for day two. 全都是卡牌游戏工作室出品独家本,只要一到节假日店里就是24小时开独家本,《红泪》实景甚至可以做到一天两场。 „, Is this.” Liu Jia somewhat pushed the eyeglasses on bridge of the nose anxiously, „the guest who holiday outside area comes are quite many, these basically made to arrange ahead of time, during the daytime the time filled can only arrange the night field.” “哦,是这样的。”刘嘉有些紧张地推了推鼻梁上的眼镜,“节假日外地来的客人比较多,这些本基本上都是提前约好排好了,白天时间排满了就只能排通宵场。” In fact the outside guest in shop have been very many, except for that several exclusive script that you buy newly, the numbers of other initial capitals basically are the guests who outside area comes.” “实际上店里的外地客人一直都挺多的,除了您新买的那几本独家本,其余老本的场次基本上都是外地来的客人。” Shopkeeper Liu thought that has many guest possibly it is a shop owner, organizes.” “刘店长觉得有很多客人可能本身就是店家,组团来的。” Why will think so?” Jiang Qi asked. “为什么会这么觉得?”江祺问道。 In shop has a dm ear is quite sharp, he had to hear one group of guests saying that one time this script also had nothing, why dares to sell 190,000.” “店里有一个dm耳朵比较尖,他有一次听到一组客人说这个本也没什么,凭什么敢卖19万。” Is that «Inconceivable Wizard school» that you bought last year.” “就是您去年买的那个《不可思议魔法学院》。” Jiang Qi:...... 江祺:…… He should thank the great support of peers, goes to the trouble of traveling a long distance the book of stele rubbings, since making his these two wife and children broken shop be able to operate. 他是不是应该谢谢同行们的大力支持,不远千里来打本,让他这两家小破店能够经营至今。 Because the amusement park must release the inconceivable wizard school series the table to swim immediately, attention of Jiang Qi to table roaming by far in murder mystery. But reads this year report, Jiang Qi discovered with amazement Starry River Scenario Club does not seem to operate the table roaming. 因为游乐园马上就要推出不可思议魔法学院系列的桌游了,江祺对桌游方面的关注度远胜于剧本杀。可是看完这一年的报告,江祺惊讶地发现星河剧本社好像不经营桌游。 even/including Langren kills this general murder mystery game store to have the populace funds that not to operate. 连狼人杀这种一般剧本杀店都会有的大众款都不经营。 Why in the shop doesn't have the table roaming?” Jiang Qi asked that general will murder mystery game store enter some Jane/simple Danzhuo to swim while convenient facilitates the junior high pupil, the high-school student plays?” “为什么店里没有桌游?”江祺问道,“一般剧本杀店都会顺便进一些简单桌游方便初中生,高中生来玩吧?” After all the expense of murder mystery is too high, students usually because in the pouch will unable to spend shyly. 毕竟剧本杀的消费太高,学生们通常会因为囊中羞涩消费不起。 Liu Jia embarrassed said/tunnel: Because in shop in most situations business also good, even if there is a vacant room still possibly to land momentarily, the table roaming occupies the location, shopkeeper Liu thought that does not need.” 刘嘉不好意思地道:“因为店里大多数情况下生意都还挺好的,就算有空房也随时可能有空降,桌游太占场地,刘店长觉得没有必要。” Jiang Qi:...... 江祺:…… Very good, what you are surnamed Liu understands Versailles. 很好,你们姓刘的是懂凡尔赛的。 ...... …… After this auditing, Jiang Qi confirmed that murder mystery game store can also gnaw a long time initial capital. 经过这次查账,江祺确认剧本杀店还可以啃很长一段时间的老本。 So long as he continues to buy this pulls out the card, in murder mystery game store has continuous Made by Card Game Studio new this comes, why will have the continuous outside shop owner to hold this to break this to sell such high price the idea, goes to the trouble of traveling a long distance the book of stele rubbings. 只要他持续买本抽卡,剧本杀店里有源源不断的卡牌游戏工作室出品的新本进来,就会有源源不断的外地店家抱着这个破本凭什么卖这么高的价格的想法,不远千里过来打本。 Depends entirely on the peers to support! 全靠同行支持啊! Jiang Qi is excited for a while, the advertisement that can brush the peers who send to all friend circles to select to praise. 江祺一时激动,给所有朋友圈里能刷到的同行们发的广告都点了赞。 Audited the execution to finish happily, rubbed a emotional script joint release position while convenient, next morning Jiang Qi will get king two him to migrate the paradise. 查账执行愉快结束,顺便还蹭到了一个情感本的联合发行位,第二天一早江祺就领着王二丫回游乐园。 Jiang Qi returns to the first matter of amusement park, is directly soars the train dá dá the subject hotel to have a look scenario compilation How scenario to change. 江祺回到游乐园的第一件事情,就是直奔火车哒哒主题酒店看看【剧本编写器】把剧本改得怎么样。 Mentioning is also ashamed, since Jiang Qi starts to wallow the table roaming, his tempering car(riage) dá dá the subject hotel has not lived. 说来也是惭愧,自从江祺开始沉迷桌游,他就没怎么回火车哒哒主题酒店住过了。 It is not the spirits of toy insufficiently cute intimate, was the magic furniture is too fragrant. 不是玩具之灵们不够可爱贴心,实在是魔法家具太香了。 In intense summer heat in July and in August, awakes to lift the hand to make the window curtains every day pull open, looks at the snowscape of out of the window, listening to the magic mirror to disseminate news today the weather to oneself, the tavern menu, comes a stimulating crosstalk while convenient again, this feeling is really who awakes who knows. 在酷暑的7月和8月,每天睡醒抬抬手让窗帘拉开,看着窗外的雪景,听魔法镜子给自己播报今日天气,酒馆菜单,顺便再来一段提神的相声,这感觉真是谁醒谁知道。 The spirits of toy lost will not engage in the crosstalk. 玩具之灵们还是输在了不会说相声。 Also king Jingling Han Youxin is living to forget to return in Xue Village no wonder, the time to also continued for a month, abandons in Han Guishan who the A city arranges the 2nd good flavor kitchen king competition actively completely. 也难怪王静领着韩攸信在雪村住到流连忘返,时间到了还续住一个月,完全抛弃远在A市积极筹备第二届好味道厨王争霸赛的韩贵山。 Jiang Qi heard that consented to reach a peaceful agreement uses itself to speak thoughtlessly initially raises, puts out «Knows Taste» next year interview treats as the reward of champion. That side the Han expensive/noble mountain flickered many masterchefs, heard that had many well-known chefs' position to the appraisal to be excited, the competition arranged very smoothly. 江祺听说许成采用了自己当初的随口一提,拿出《知味》明年的专访当做冠军的奖励。韩贵山那边借此忽悠到了不少厨艺大师,听说有不少知名厨师对评审的位置都非常心动,大赛筹备非常顺利。 According to insider king static, Han Guishan receives must do does a big idea, it is expected that across the country divides 4 contest areas to start the invitational meet, selects the eights of each contest area to compose the nation 32 to go to the A city contends finally. 据知情人士王静透露,韩贵山秉承着要搞就搞个大的的想法,预计在全国范围内分四个赛区开始预选赛,选出每个赛区的八强组成全国32强去A市进行最终角逐。 In brief, this estimate at the 2nd good flavor kitchen king competition next year, gradually in predicting the crystal ball saw the appearance development toward Jiang Qi. 总之,这场预计将在明年举办的第二届好味道厨王争霸赛,正在逐渐朝着江祺在预言水晶球里看见了模样发展。 Such development makes Jiang Qi cannot help but remember the zero teacher's to predicting the crystal ball appraisal. 这样的事态发展让江祺不由得想起零老师对预言水晶球的评价。 Predicted that the prediction of crystal ball forever is right, but you are very difficult to judge the fragment that you see is because the inevitable development of situation creates, because you saw the result, therefore promoted the development of situation to create. 预言水晶球的预言永远是对的,但你很难判断你看到的片段是因为事态的必然发展所造成的,还是因为你看到了事情的结果,所以推动了事态的发展所造成的。 Jiang Qi returns to the train station big subject hotel No. 1 theater box time, came back to give the playwright to pass for 32 hours the scenario belt/bring from previous time river tea. 江祺回到火车站大主题酒店一号包厢的时候,距离上次江茶把剧本带回来交给剧作家已经过去了32个小时。 Considering that the playwright is the spirit of toy does not need to sleep, by scenario compilation Generating speed, 32 hours, if he produces 8 editions brand-new scenario. 考虑到剧作家是玩具之灵不用睡觉,以【剧本编写器】的生成速度,32个小时,如果他生成出八个版本的全新剧本 „Did scenario change?” The Jiang Qi bosom hugged the big rabbit, under the buttocks is fronting the polar bear, in the hand takes the cavalry just to truncate the good apple, the front put Flower Fairy to soak the good hot hydromel, hopeful looks to withstand/top the medieval playwright hairstyle, in the hand takes the feather pen, wears the playwright of big round frame eyeglasses. 剧本改出来了吗?”江祺怀里抱着大兔子,屁股下垫着北极熊,手上拿着骑兵刚刚削好的苹果,面前放着花仙子泡好的热腾腾的蜂蜜水,满怀期待的看着顶着中世纪剧作家发型,手上拿着羽毛笔,戴着大大的圆框眼镜的剧作家。 If nothing else, on the appearance of playwright, looks that makes people think he is very learned. 别的不说,就剧作家的这个模样,看着就让人觉得他很有学问。 Although he is only spirit of the toy. 虽然他只是一个玩具之灵。 At present has produced 8 editions, but has not conformed to you to request.” The playwrights pushed the eyeglasses, „the present is producing the 9 th edition.” “目前已经生成了八个版本,但还没有符合您要求的。”剧作家推了推眼镜,“现在正在生成第九个版本。” One meets the requirement doesn't have?” Jiang Qi is somewhat surprised. “一个符合要求的都没有吗?”江祺有些惊讶。 No.” The playwrights shake the head. “没有。”剧作家摇头。 Jiang Qi looked at one, is producing scenario fast, the character on screen with ant same is dense and numerous looks that lets computer screen that the person has a headache about, feels somewhat inconceivable. 江祺看了一眼,正在快速生成剧本,屏幕上的字跟蚂蚁一样的密密麻麻得看着让人头疼的电脑屏幕,觉得有些不可思议。 Should not, if a star scenario compilation, 32 hours cannot produce appropriate scenario, Jiang Qi feel normal. 不应该呀,如果是一星的【剧本编写器】,32个小时没能生成出合适的剧本,江祺是觉得正常的。 After all a quality of star who uses who knows, Jiang Qi remembers his 1st use vaguely scenario compilation Time, wants to produce one warmly, with family concerned loving four brothers' story, what finally final production is one is full of the terrifying murder story. 毕竟一星的质量谁用谁知道,江祺依稀记得他第一次使用【剧本编写器】的时候,想要生成一个温馨的,和家庭有关的充满爱的四兄弟的故事,结果最后的生成出来的是一个充满恐怖的凶杀故事。 When two stars times, scenario compilation Can produce some quality also good scenario occasionally, toy theater popular plays «Toy store Big Robbery» is two stars time produces. 等到二星的时候,【剧本编写器】就能偶尔生成一些质量还不错的剧本了,玩具剧场的热门剧目《玩具店大劫案》就是二星的时候生成出来的。 When scenario compilation Climbs to three stars, congratulated the high quality scenario frequency of occurrence is very high. 等到【剧本编写器】升至三星,恭喜高品质剧本的出现率就已经很高了。 It can be said that the time playwrights of two stars also need to wait, enough time changes scenario, could not have changed to the time playwrights of three stars. 可以这么说,二星的时候剧作家还需要等,还有充足的时间来改剧本,到了三星的时候剧作家已经改不过来了。 All is good scenario, lets of person pinkeye. 全都是好剧本,让人挑花眼的那种。 Jiang Qi thought that and other days he had money to pitch into the film and television industry, sought the benefits to the family members. 江祺觉得等哪天他有钱了就进军影视行业,给家人们谋福利。 The soap opera looked that was not fresh, Huang Fugui now will complain occasionally does not have any specially attractive soap opera. 电视剧看多了就不新鲜了,黄富贵现在偶尔都会抱怨一下没有什么特别好看的电视剧。 According to the present scenario compilation The level, the not possible 32 hours unable to change to conform to scenario of request. 按照如今的【剧本编写器】的水平,不可能32个小时都改不出符合要求的剧本 Where has the issue?” Jiang Qi asked discretely, was original scenario has the issue, the frame had the issue, did the type have the issue?” “是哪里有问题吗?”江祺谨慎地问道,“是原剧本有问题,还是框架有问题,还是类型有问题?” The playwrights shake the head: Does not have the issue, but does not meet your requirement.” 剧作家摇摇头:“都没有问题,只是不符合您的要求。” „?” “啊?” Was the quality is too bad?” “是质量太差了吗?” The playwrights continue to shake the head, said indifferently: Was the quality is good.” 剧作家继续摇头,淡然道:“是质量太好了。” Your request changes to 90 points of scenario 60 points of scenario. In 8 scenario that at present produces, three are emotional script, horror script, two detective script, two pleasure script.” “您的要求是把60分的剧本改成90分的剧本。目前生成的八个剧本里,有三个是情感本,一个恐怖本,两个推理本,两个欢乐本。” Conforms to three emotional script of request, according to my allocation standard, respectively is 95 points, 93 points and 82 points, all are not 90 points, does not meet your requirement.” “符合要求的三个情感本,依照我的打分标准,分别是95分,93分和82分,全都不是90分,并不符合您的要求。” Jiang Qi:...... 江祺:…… Jiang Qi looks at the day silently. 江祺默默望天。 Gives me to have a look that three this accent.” “把那三个本调出来给我看看吧。” The playwright jumping up computer keyboard, hits the mouse with the body, found the beforehand production 3 emotional script. 剧作家跳上电脑键盘,用身体撞动鼠标,找到之前生成的三个情感本 These three this names simple and brief, respectively is 95,93 and 82. 这三个本的名字都非常简洁明了,分别是95,93和82。 Jiang Qi looked sketchily. 江祺粗略的看了看。 It is good, even if 82 points of Jiang Qi thought that is still very good, far exceeds in the market good of emotional script. The style is exquisite, logic online, the emotion part is reserved and profound, outlined the puberty teenage boys and girls shy ignorant love with the simple words. 都很好,就算是82分的江祺觉得也很不错,远超于市面上情感本的好。文笔细腻,逻辑在线,情感部分内敛且深刻,用简单的笔墨勾勒出了青春期少男少女青涩懵懂的爱情。 Well after former author Li Liang looks this, it is estimated that will start to suspect this script really before oneself the thing that writes reorganizes situation. 好到原作者李良看完本后,估计会开始怀疑这个本真的是用自己之前写出来的东西改编出来的吗的地步。 Jiang Qi discovers on 95 is 97. 江祺发现95上面是97。 97 are highest scores, the playwright gives 8 this allocations of new production from high to low respectively is 97,95,93,93,87,82,75,60. 97是最高分,剧作家给新生成的八个本的打分由高至低分别是97,95,93,93,87,82,75,60。 Which are 97 type?” Jiang Qi asked. “97是哪个类型的?”江祺问道。 Inference.” “推理。” 97 points of inference?! 97分的推理?! Jiang Qi came the interest instantaneously, the point opens starts to look. 江祺瞬间来了兴趣,点开开始看。 Startled is a Celestial. 惊为天人。 Li Liang originally story, is in a market the youth ache love story of very common populace funds. 李良的原本故事,是一个市面上非常常见的大众款的青春疼痛爱情故事。 Told that the lead rolls 6 people graduates for many years the high school later to meet to talk about old days, thus recalled the past youth past events. 讲述主角团六人在高中毕业多年后相遇叙旧,从而回忆起当年的青春往事。 The combinations of 6 people respectively are redeems the group by the young girl and bludger of high-school student family/home violent, the high intelligence quotient male student and strange strength young girl of military force of value bursting friends from childhood group, happy enemy group from mutually is unpleasing to the eyes to the classmate who likes mutually, each pair combined can find in the idol drama. 六个人的组合分别是救赎组的被家暴的少女与混混高中生,青梅竹马组的高智商男生与武力值爆棚的怪力少女,欢喜冤家组的从互相看不顺眼到互相喜欢的同桌,每一对组合都能在偶像剧里找到。 Combines to look from these three pairs, what responsible youth ache is by the young girl and combination of bludger of high-school student family/home violent. In order to increase the ache part, the author also increased the speechless campus tyrant ice part, lets originally by the young girl of family/home violent in studying by campus Tyrant Ling, finally suffered from the depression, jumped from an upper story to commit suicide the day before the college entrance examination. 从这三对组合中就能看出来,负责青春疼痛的是被家暴的少女与混混高中生的组合。为了增加疼痛的部分,作者还增添了很令人无语的校园霸凌部分,让原本就被家暴的少女在读书的时候又被校园霸凌,最终患上了抑郁症,在高考前一天跳楼自杀。 The story opening so-called 6 people gather, is actually only another 5 people of before the graves that arrive at the good friend fondly remembers the good friend, the 6 th person flutters in side in the flatter floating shape is looking at everyone to fondly remember itself. 故事开头所谓的六人相聚,其实只是另外五人来到好友的墓前怀念好友,第六个人是以阿飘的形态在旁边飘着看大家怀念自己。 Plot dog blood hackneyed stuff, but wins in the style also gathers together, therefore is 60 points of passing an examination work. 剧情狗血老套,但胜在文笔还凑活,所以是60分及格作品。 Then currently possibly has many people very curious, such a youth ache love story, how turns into 97 points of inference stories? 那么现在可能就有很多人很好奇了,这样一个青春疼痛爱情故事,是怎么变成97分的推理故事的呢? Just like the original story, this inference story happened in five people gathers. 和原故事一样,这个推理故事发生在五人的相聚。 But this time gathers is a revenge. 只不过这次的相聚是一场复仇。 Many years later, 5 people to once the good friend revenge that was killed by campus Tyrant Ling, invited the past schoolmate to arrive at a villa to attend the meeting in the name of gathering, jointly committing a crime killed initially everyone who participated in campus Tyrant Ling. 多年后,五人为了给曾经被校园霸凌害死的好友复仇,以同学聚会的名义邀请了当年的同学来到一个别墅参加聚会,联合作案杀死了当初每一个参加校园霸凌的人。 Simply speaking, this is a Murder on the Orient Express homicide, everyone is a murderer, everyone is lying, everyone is the most perfect witness, does not have the betrayal. 简单来说,这是一个东方快车谋杀案似的凶杀案,每个人都是凶手,每个人都在说谎,每个人都是互相之间最完美的证人,不存在背叛。 In this brand-new detective script, 6 players respectively are policemen and 5 murderers 5 private eyes who to prove oneself pureness invited. In the process of detective case, the player will discover the past truth step by step. 在这个全新的推理本中,六名玩家分别是一名警察和五名凶手为了证明自己的清白请来的五位私家侦探。在探案的过程中,玩家会一步步发现当年的真相。 this script must infer the inference, wants the plot to have the plot, wants the love to have the love, wants the friendship to have the friendship, wants the youth ache to have the youth ache, must rise the value to have the rise value. 这个本要推理有推理,要故事情节有故事情节,要爱情有爱情,要友情有友情,要青春疼痛有青春疼痛,要上升价值有上升价值。 97 points, deserve. 97分,当之无愧。 Jiang Qi looked, wants to urge Jiang Han, this time wanted us not to send emotional script, sent detective script. 江祺看完后都想劝劝蒋珺,这次要不咱们就不发情感本了,发个推理本吧。 Has a look at this detective script, multi- emotion! 看看这推理本,多情感呐! As for the author, hangs Li Liang name not to have the issue, divides the payment for published piece not to have the issue. 至于作者,挂李良的名字没问题,分稿酬也没问题。 Although he has not provided the element of any inference, but he provided the story background and motive! 虽然他没有提供任何一点推理的元素,但是他提供了故事背景和作案动机啊! Jiang Qi thinks, dialed Jiang Han telephone. 江祺想了想,拨通了蒋珺的电话。 Hey, Jiang Han, right, I am Jiang Qi.” “喂,蒋珺,对,我是江祺。” Was that side such day before yesterday river Chafa past Pungka game work room author has improved.” “是这样的前天江茶发过去的本卡牌游戏工作室那边的作者已经改好了。” Changed I looked, does not have any issue, changed to two books incautiously.” “改的本我看了,没有什么问题,就是一不小心改成了两个本。” Probably their side had writing detective script, the story plot and this script background is a bit like, therefore that side changes conveniently, changed to two books.” “好像是他们那边原本就有一个写好的推理本,故事剧情和这个本的背景有点像,所以那边就顺手改改,改成了两个本。” I issue you to look at this content, I thought that is really not good we to be disposable two, can jointly distribute, our here does not have the issue.” “我把本的内容发给你看一下吧,我觉得实在不行咱们就一次性出两个呗,都可以联合发行,我们这边没有问题的。” Jiang Han of telephone that head:? 电话那头的蒋珺:? Does this change to two books? 一个本改成两个本? Also can like this? 还能这样?
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