STNH :: Volume #9 阵锋剑影之戮仙

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The Third Heaven story terminated to here, I do not know that must write, reason front said that can write about here is the miracle, at least explained the matter of this/should confession completely, beside the matter as for Third Heaven, does not write temporarily. Mu Yu wants to be defeated to hold the day is not difficult. 三重天的故事就到这里完结了,我不知道还要不要写下去,原因前面说了,能够写到这里已经是奇迹了,至少把该交代的事情全部都交待了,至于三重天之外的事情,暂时不写了。木羽想要打败执天者并不难。 Do I am not clear have the person to like this book, but I the world that likes itself creating, that aloof dustfall mountain, is the place of my ideal immortal cultivation, looks like a big family, the fellow apprentices are harmonious, although among the brothers the faith is different, but everyone while insisting own faith, will not choose frames mutually, the dustfall mountain is their fetters, is they walks the Cultivation World premise. 我不清楚到底有没有人喜欢这本书,但我很喜欢自己创造的世界,那个与世无争的落尘山,是我理想的修仙之地,就像是一个大家庭,师兄弟和睦,虽然兄弟之间信念不同,可是大家在坚持自己信念的同时,都不会选择互相陷害,落尘山是他们的羁绊,也是他们行走修真界的前提。 I like persevering of Cheng Yan, even if he does not understand that human has what is good to protect, but he only wants to be the master to think to matter, I like the resistance of Xiang Nan (southward) and Luo Shang, they do not approve the approach of master, wants to handle own matter, where but regardless of arrives, they remember oneself are one of the dustfall mountain, harming the family member is not the matter that is possible to handle. 我喜欢承言的坚守,即便他不明白人类到底有什么好守护的,但他只想做师父认为对的事情,我喜欢向南骆殇的反抗,他们不认可师父的做法,想要做自己的事情,但无论走到哪里,他们都记得自己是落尘山的一员,伤害家人是最不可能做的事情。 I also like the focus of Mu Yu to family member, he am struggling complex, finally decides to take own road. The transformation process of person, is impossible to get it done in one action. 我也喜欢木羽对家人的执着,他内心复杂地挣扎着,最终还是决定走自己的路。人的转变总归有一个过程,不可能一蹴而就。 Many readers said that such immortal cultivation school possibly does exist? You looked the cultivating true virtue school that the big god writes is the villain taunts impatiently frames, then lead suddenly/violently to beat up hits the face, that is the true immortal cultivation world. 很多读者说这样的修仙的门派怎么可能存在?你看大神写的修真门派都是反派迫不及待嘲讽陷害,然后主角一顿噼里啪啦暴揍打脸,那才是真正的修仙世界。 However I must say why dustfall mountain such immortal cultivation school can't exist? Who stipulated that the school of immortal cultivation world does kill one another, so many same side to look down upon itself, to wish one could on the real fellow apprentices to set at the deathtrap? 但是我必须说,落尘山这样的修仙门派为什么不能存在?谁规定修仙世界的门派就真的师兄弟自相残杀、有那么多的同门瞧不起自己、恨不得置自己死地? First immortal cultivation is the world that everyone false appearance comes out, is the same side autonomy certainly the real world? Has anyone of you gone to that world? If not, why the immortal cultivation world can't be the appearance that I construct? 修仙本来就是大家假象出来的世界,同门自残就一定是真实的世界吗?难道你们谁去过那个世界?如果没有,那么修仙世界为什么不能是我构造的样子? I write the ideal world, has not regretted at heart. Everyone likes, does not like, comes to the end after all, can see here, must thank everyone, no matter you do like, at least read my book. 我把自己理想的世界写出来,心里也没有遗憾了。大家喜欢也罢,不喜欢也罢,总归是告一段落,能够看到这里,也要感谢大家,不管你们喜不喜欢,至少看完了我这本书。 Finally the ending is very hurried, because I am planned to write about Nine Heavens from the beginning, had some accidents/surprises by that time, I have talked about the reason, therefore I start to conclude, but concludes very difficultly, I have been seeking for that oneself set the foreshadowing, gives to fill in various pits, the plot changed, changed to become this appearance finally, was perfect. 最后结尾很匆忙,因为我一开始本来是打算一直写到九重天的,直到那个时候出现了一些意外,我已经把原因说过了,所以我就开始收尾,但收尾很难,我一直在寻找自己埋下的伏笔,把各种坑给填上,剧情改了很多,改到最后就成了这个样子,也算是完美。 Holds a day of matter not to write, perhaps in the future will write, who knows? Somewhat pledged that does not want to promise casually randomly, I am a quite realistic person, matter that if I cannot achieve, I will not vow solemnly that promised. 执天者的事情不写了,也许将来会写,但是谁知道呢?有些承诺还是不要随便乱许下,我是一个比较现实的人,如果我做不到的事情,我不会信誓旦旦地许诺。 Mu Yu is the role that I like very much, he is childish, but the bright affair, looks at very much heavily the kinship, without the kinship, what the immortal cultivation significance is? The seven emotions and six sensory pleasures itself/Ben is the human inherent thing, cuts off these unable to be called as human, can only be counted the living corpse. 木羽是我很喜欢的角色,他孩子气,但是明事理,把亲情看得很重,如果没有亲情,修仙的意义是什么呢?七情六欲本就是人类固有的东西,斩断这些就不能称作人类,只能算作活死人。 Therefore in my novel had not mentioned that so-called Changsheng Road is endless, must cut off the bustling place to worry, what lead kneels before the parents sobs: Child must pursue the immortal main road, perhaps this goes to one day not to return, knocks three heads not to have the energy to you...... 所以我的小说里从来没有提到所谓的长生路漫漫,要斩断红尘牵挂,什么主角跪在父母面前哽咽:孩儿要去追求长生大道啦,此去恐怕一日不复返,给你们磕三个头吧啦吧啦吧啦吧啦没能量啦…… No, that is not the lead of book. 没有,那不是本书的主角。 Mu Yu is a simple person, the kinship, the brothers sentiment and love, has the principle, he likes cracking a joke, came from the child, therefore there is a temperament of child, the child grows to certain age, will have the rebel period, does not like listening to the words of Sir, talks back with the Sir, therefore he, when sees the dead wood, always the mouth does not have the word of praise. 木羽就是一个简单的人,亲情、兄弟情、爱情,都有原则,他喜欢开玩笑,从小孩子过来的,所以有小孩子的脾气,小孩子成长到一定年纪,都会有叛逆期,不喜欢听大人的话,和大人顶嘴,所以他在见到枯木的时候,总是嘴里没好话。 Many people do not like Mu Yu to dead wood impolite, said that he spoke to the dead wood does not have the politeness very much, but you think, young time hasn't really talked back with the parents? You and parents talk back is really that polite tone: Sorry, the father, I thought that you use the broom to spank person are incorrect, the child is the flowers of motherland, wants to be reasonable, the buttocks destroyed being able to sit still, attended class to have no way to listen earnestly, how to test one percentage to make you satisfy? At the appointed time does not satisfy also takes the broom to hit, the buttocks destroyed being able to sit still, attending class to have no way to listen earnestly...... this is the vicious circle, resolutely contains...... 很多人不喜欢木羽对枯木无礼的这点,说他对枯木说话很没礼貌,但你们自己想想,十几岁的时候真没有和父母顶嘴过吗?你们和父母顶嘴的时候真的是那种礼貌的口气:对不起,爸爸,我觉得你用扫把打人屁股是不对的,孩子是祖国的花朵,要讲道理,屁股打坏了坐不住,上课没法认真听讲,如何考个一百分让你们满意?到时不满意又拿扫把打,屁股又打坏了坐不住,上课没法认真听讲……这是恶性循环,坚决遏制的…… Everyone talks back, is not that angry tone: Mom, am I your one's own sons pound! Why you did not speak are not, you were the restroom picked, I must leave home, hold a sword horizon, struck out, has a look outside world, tomorrow the police station see! 大家顶嘴的时候,难道不是那种愤怒的口气:妈妈,我到底是不是你们亲生的儿砸!你为什么不说话不是,你是厕所捡的啊,我要离家出走,仗剑走天涯,出去闯一闯,看看外面的世界,明天派出所见! Talking back time the words that spoke offend somebody very much, normal. Also from the beginning Mu Yu and dead wood didn't two people absolutely have the blood relationship, the dead wood to compel the matter that Mu Yu is being him not to like, Mu Yu not to be victorious have not been able to talk back? 顶嘴的时候说的话都很伤人,正常啊。再说了一开始木羽和枯木两人根本就没有血缘关系,枯木逼着木羽做他不喜欢的事情,木羽打不过还不能还口吗? Arrived behind could not have changed, does not damage two is not uncomfortable mutually, this also becomes father and son's one communication method. 到了后面已经改不过来了,不互相损两句不舒服,这也成为了他们父子俩的一种沟通方式。 However talks back to turn over to talk back, good of dead wood to Mu Yu, Mu Yu will forget? They understand the opposite party, the dead wood can rescue the Mu Yu use blood protect to obstruct the day, but Mu Yu only wants to give back to the dead wood the life, whose the life is whose is, the Mu Yu principle is very simple. 但是顶嘴归顶嘴,枯木对木羽的好,木羽又怎么会忘记?他们都了解对方,枯木可以为救木羽使用血护遮天,而木羽只想把性命还给枯木,性命是谁的就是谁的,木羽的原则很简单。 Mu Yu starts to leave Mo Yun Mountain Range from the child, regards this world by the pure disposition, is noisy with little commander, does the matter happily everywhere, plays the role of the pig to eat the tiger, free and unrestrained, is victorious to install to compel, not to be victorious slightly hurries to run, does not gawk, an iron, is not three excellencies four beautiful five virtue 666 excellent youth. 木羽从小孩子开始离开漠允山脉,以单纯的心性看待这个世界,和小帅吵吵闹闹,开开心心到处搞事情,扮猪吃虎,逍遥自在,打得过就稍微装装逼,打不过就赶紧跑,不愣,不头铁,做一个三好四美五德六六六的大好青年。 But the child also has growing up time, Mu Yu after slaughtering 100,000 people of Taungtha city, starts to grow up. The Taungtha city he made contribution, he wants to save others, but after He Jinglong and declares Zhengtang the whole family were killed, he has no way to adhere to the principle again. 但小孩子也有长大的时候,木羽在屠杀了东沙城的十万人之后,开始长大。东沙城他尽力了,他想要救人,可是禾景龙和宣正堂一家人被杀之后,他没法再坚持原则。 I want to write with every effort Taungtha city Mu Yu the mood of that desperate death-throe, he wants to work as a good person, but the good person non- longevity, this is the reality, therefore he started to waver the childhood faith, prepared to handle own matter, took own road, deviates promise that oneself childhood made. 我尽力地想要把东沙城木羽的那种绝望挣扎的心情写出来,他想当一个好人,但是好人不长命,这就是现实,所以他开始动摇自己小时候的信念,准备做自己的事情,走自己的路,偏离了自己小时候许下的诺言。 In fact , can how many people achieve the promise that the childhood made truly? 实际上,又有多少人能够真正做到儿时许下的诺言呢? When on you kindergarten, what after the teacher did ask you grew up, must work as? You wiped the nasal mucus to say seriously perhaps oneself want to work as the astronaut, the bright family/home, scientist and police...... some people to realize, but most people have no way to realize. 当你上幼儿园的时候,老师问你们长大后要当什么?你揩着鼻涕一本正经地说自己想当宇航员、明家、科学家、警察……也许有些人实现了,但大部分人是没法实现的。 After many people grow up , can only do the work that oneself do not like, to make money to work, buries the dream in the heart, occasionally remembered the childhood dream, joked it away. 很多人长大以后只能去做自己不喜欢的工作,为了赚钱而工作,把梦想埋在心底,偶尔想起小时候的梦想,也只是一笑了之。 Some childhood vainly hoped for perhaps, when the people of bright family/home are staying up late to eat the instant noodles to write the novel now, old miserable old was miserable. 有些小时候梦想当明家的人说不定现在正在熬夜吃泡面写小说呢,老惨老惨了。 However this is the matter that he likes. 不过这是他喜欢的事情。 Mu Yu leaves Mo Yun Mountain Range to work as a good person, the keeper clan, " bes concerned about all critical issues in the world, is he is too finally naive presently, therefore only plans to protect own family member friend. 木羽离开漠允山脉想当一个好人,守护人族,以天下为己任,可是最后他现自己太天真,于是只打算守护自己的亲人朋友。 The men are indomitable spirit, when the manner clan does one's best dead then oneself, takes the world principle of righteousness as own duty, that is Sword Shadow Chen Feng, is not Mu Yu. 男子汉顶天立地当为人族鞠躬尽瘁死而后己,以天下大义为己任,那是剑影尘风,不是木羽 We cannot make Sword Shadow Chen Feng, works as worry-free Mu Yu well, when is happy and little commander quarrelled, when was unhappy and little commander held rest to be good to think, tomorrow Sun according , on the face, stretching oneself was new one day. 我们做不来剑影尘风,就好好当一个无忧无虑的木羽,开心时和小帅拌嘴,不开心时和小帅抱一抱睡个好觉,明天太阳照在脸上的时候,伸个懒腰又是新一天。 Mu Yu luck best has muddled little commander to accompany, although little commander will only sleep, eats the thing, toward the female student soft place drill, will not help Mu Yu fight every so often, but little commander can offer the stupid idea to Mu Yu, various stupid ideas are freely irrealizable, but can find relief. 木羽运气最好的就是有一个糊涂的小帅陪伴,小帅虽然只会睡觉,吃东西,往女生柔软的地方钻,很多时候都不会帮木羽打架,可是小帅可以给木羽出馊主意,各种馊主意尽管不能实现,但可以解闷。 Why can a pet be able to hit? Can do the matter on the line. 一个宠物干嘛要能打?能搞事就行了。 I most like Mu Yu going to the matter of clear water city, he is authority, actually helps a native of Mujia with the mentality of observer, knows oneself is a native of Mujia, did not tell a native of Mujia, although Mu Yu was very optimistic, but in the man of optimism heart also had the ridge of being able to pass, many people were much more optimistic to conceal oneself frail side, like Xiang Nan (southward), like Mu Yu. 我最喜欢木羽去清水城的事情,他是当局者,却以旁观者的心态去帮助木家人,知道自己是木家人,却不告诉木家人,木羽虽然很乐观,但乐观的人心中也有过不去的坎,很多人乐观得没心没肺只是为了掩饰自己脆弱的一面,就像向南,就像木羽 Mu Yu forgave the wooden day crane, was equal to stepping over cutting of innermost feelings. 木羽原谅了木天鹤,也等于是迈过自己内心的砍。 These plots when Mu Yu massacres city, I have made contribution to write that type of atmosphere, at least in my brain has that picture, walks in one piece in confusion, the branch tumbles, setting sun such as blood...... I, if the painter, I certainly this picture drawing, what a pity me can only draw the matches person, my matches person draws also well, the drawing level can result in superiorly in the kindergarten. 木羽屠城的那些情节,我已经尽力把那种气氛写出来,至少我脑子里有那副画面,行走于一片狼藉中,树枝翻滚,残阳如血……我要是个画家,我一定把这个画面给画下来,可惜我只会画火柴人,我火柴人画得还不错,画画水平在幼儿园能得优。 The plot that the dead wood resurrects, I have thought how Mu Yu will display, excited or has tears streaming down the face, grasps directly does not speak for a very long time, sobbed to shout a father...... 枯木复活的情节,我想过木羽到底会怎么表现,是激动还是泪流满面,是直接抱住久久不说话,还是哽咽喊一句老爹…… Finally I decided makes him face tranquilly, left like yesterday, today the reunion is the same. 最后我还是决定让他平静面对,就像昨日离别,今日重逢一样。 Because Mu Yu had grown up at that time, he when deals to slaughter the strength to learn to control oneself mood, therefore he and dead wood sent regards very much simply with a smile, after he knew the dead wood destroys the body, he cannot bear the violent walk. 因为那个时候木羽已经长大,他在应对杀戮力量的时候已经学会控制自己的情绪,所以他和枯木很简单地笑着问候,只是当他得知枯木毁去身体之后,他还是忍不住暴走。 The dead wood does not have the son, he does not like Sword Shadow Chen Feng apprentice Mu Yu from the beginning, is only the Mu Yu character and he is clearly opposite, making him start to transform slowly, transforms to treats as the son Mu Yu, is willing to protect Mu Yu with the life. When the dead wood treated as the son Mu Yu, the father naturally cannot make the son do the stupid thing, therefore the dead wood must ruin own body. 枯木没有儿子,他一开始就不喜欢剑影尘风的徒弟木羽,只是木羽性格和他截然相反,让他开始慢慢转变,转变到把木羽当作儿子,愿意用生命去保护木羽。当枯木把木羽当作了儿子,父亲自然不会让儿子去干傻事,所以枯木要毁掉自己的身体。 The dead wood is obscure, is actually the talent and resolute person of hidden. 枯木默默无闻,却是个隐藏的天才和敢作敢为的人。 Some people only live for oneself his entire life, some people live for others his entire life, sometimes we also need to ask itself, why do you live? 有人一生都只为自己而活,有人一生都为他人而活,我们有时候也需要问问自己,你是为什么而活? If you care about others to your appraisal, but changes itself the image desperately in others mind, others a few words you must intertwine for a long time, to cater to others said that some speaking insincerely, for example the movie is so obviously rotten because actually the companion likes, therefore must praise men and women to advocate against one's conscience in the light good and female dominant mode of eating meal is good, the male lord leather shoes good...... you live for others, live very tired. 如果你那么在意别人对你的评价,而拼命地改变自己在别人心目中的形象,别人一句话你都要纠结好久,为了迎合别人而说一些言不由衷的话,比如明明电影那么烂却因为同伴喜欢,所以还要昧着良心夸一句男女主在吃饭的灯光不错、女主型不错,男主皮鞋不错……那么你是为别人而活,活得很累。 Cannot really say some such as: Ten money popcorn have 539, the movie show the process to have 32 people to go to bathroom, 31 people have not come back, the ceiling had 24 lamps to go bad one and front to have a pair of lover not suitably in the children, movie theater is a place that completed the dream...... truth? 就不能实实在在地说一些诸如:十块钱爆米花有五百三十九颗,电影放映过程有三十二个人去上厕所,三十一个人没有回来,天花板有二十四个灯坏了一盏、前排有一对情侣在少儿不宜、电影院是一个做好梦的地方……的真话吗? Lives for others, you not necessarily have the dead wood is so lucky, dead wood for his Senior Brother cloud pill Daoist, for crucible used by alchemists to concoct the pill of immortality faction, to like the Hmong is beautiful, to protect Mu Yu lives, how he does not care about others to see him, he only wants to do thinks the correct matter. 为别人而活,你不一定有枯木那么幸运,枯木是为了他的师兄云丹道人,为了丹鼎派,为了喜欢的苗语嫣,为了保护木羽而活,他不在意别人怎么看他,他只想做自认为正确的事情。 The dead wood lives for others, but he has Mu Yu, you do not have. 枯木为别人而活,但他有一个木羽,你没有。 Therefore I thought that the person must live for oneself, how manages you to see me, I am the brilliant smoke and fire, what clothes do I wear to make what why to make you like? I liked being OK, did not like my person so many, you must line up. The thought is a little strange, but will be more comfortable. 所以我觉得人还是要为自己而活,管你们怎么看我,我就是绚烂的烟火,我穿什么衣服做什么型干嘛要让你喜欢?我喜欢就可以了,不喜欢我的人那么多,你得排队。思想有点奇怪,但会自在一些。 Sometimes I am also thinking, we reason that tries hard the studying work to make money is what? What are our person live values of? 有时候我也在想,我们努力读书工作赚钱的原因到底是什么?我们人活的价值到底是什么? I do not talk clearly, but I thought that is similar to immortal cultivation, we try hard cultivates( makes money) the ultimate goal to freely not to live, have been thinking the life, does not need to ask others for help everywhere, does not need to look that the boss complexion is living, will not be bullied, the person who protecting to protect, the free society, the good health and good luck, looked that who is not feeling well to scold directly, you cannot do to me in any case, who looked that I also hurried to say uncomfortable, I will not change in any case...... 我说不清楚,但我觉得和修仙差不多,我们努力修炼(赚钱)的最终目的不就是为了无忧无虑地活着,过自己想过的生活,不用到处去求人,不用看老板脸色活着,不会被人欺负,保护想保护的人,逍遥人世间,没病没灾,看谁不爽直接骂出来,反正你奈何不了我,谁看我不爽也赶紧说,反正我也不会改…… Mu Yu achieved that boundary, therefore he put down, this story also came to the end. 木羽做到了那个境界,所以他放下了,这个故事也告一段落了。 This book I not according to repertoire, but writes the thing that oneself want to write, in interesting the idea own brain records, the lead is not the callous firm and resolute unfaithful/stamen plants. horse type, but is teases compared with optimistically the type, my books want to write the proper immortal hero wind, afterward after writing more than 100 chapters, really could not bear, proper, unshackled simply, on teasing the ratio road could not turn head. Therefore and leaves the Mo Yun Mountain Range literary style to be different in Mo Yun Mountain Range, did not explain...... 这本书我没有按照套路来,只是写自己想写的东西,把自己脑子里有趣的想法都记录下来,主角也不是冷酷坚毅花心种.马类型,而是一个乐观逗比的类型,我这本书本来想要写正经的仙侠风,后来写到一百多章后,实在忍不住了,正经不起来,索性就放开了手脚,在逗比的路上回不了头了。所以在漠允山脉和离开漠允山脉的文风不一样,不解释了…… Threw the street, but at least wrote was very comfortable, but also insisted that ended the itself/Ben, was very good, as for new book, un. ei11moveon...... 扑街了,但至少写的很舒服,还坚持到完本,很不错,至于新书,嗯。ei11moveon…… Had the book friend saying that wanted to look at beyond Sword Shadow Chen Feng, this I also truly considered to write in the past, has put on the program it, should write little , may not write, Sword Shadow Chen Feng this character was not very simple. How did nine Sky Sword say? 有书友说想要看剑影尘风的番外,这个我也确实考虑过去写,已经把它提上日程,应该会写一点点,也可能不会写,剑影尘风这个人物很不简单。九把天剑怎么说呢? Everyone should read other novels, for example the leading character obtained an antiquity divine tool, but this has hung the previous owner of antiquity divine tool, wandering about destitute world, was picked by the lead, gives the lead the unsurpassed destiny, goes against heaven's will the rise, stirs world earth-shaking. 大家应该看过其他小说,比如主人公得到了一把上古神器,而这把上古神器的上一任主人都是已经挂掉,流落世间,被主角捡到,赋予主角无上气运,逆天崛起,搅世界一个天翻地覆。 But I write, Sword Shadow Chen Feng was equivalent to the owner of antiquity divine tool probably, but he has not hung, but gave oneself the sword the apprentice, Sword Shadow Chen Feng had many passing, he himself was also a legend. 而我写的时候,剑影尘风大概就相当于上古神器的主人,但是他没有挂掉,只是把剑给了自己徒弟,剑影尘风本身有很多的过往,他自己也是一个传奇。 I have not transferred in a character who this novel mentioned completely, does not know that everyone still did remember the illusory image clear rain? His illusion spirit and little commander is a rank, naturally evil not old this very not proper person, because I planned arranges to write in other world from the beginning them, now has no way to continue to write, makes them work as a traveler, may mention beyond. 我在这部小说里提到的一个人物还没有完全交待,不知道大家还记得幻影清雨么?他的幻灵和小帅是一个等级的,当然还有邪不老这个很不正经的人,但因为我一开始就打算把他们安排在其他世界来写,现在没法继续写,就让他们当个过客,或许会在番外中提到。 Thank everyone's companion and supports, bows. The voting hits can go to support one wave that enjoys vertically and horizontally/able to move unhindered, this book last time opportunity, later does not need.... 感谢大家的陪伴与支持,鞠躬。投票打赏的可以去纵横支持一波,这本书最后一次机会了,以后也不需要了。... First decides a small target, for example 1 second remembers: The book lives in a strange or foreign place the cell phone version reading website: 先定个小目标,比如一秒记住:书客居手机版阅读网址:
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