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Finished very suddenly, but also truly wrote about the end, intent should stop finally, what in the initial program thought was Little Meng and Xiaosang anger resentment Gold Sovereign, by a hot blooded fight conclusion, but wrote about the most time, more wrote more has the fearfulness of feeling Gold Sovereign plans shrewdness, to the firmness of Grand Dao pursue, such Pāramitā such wave ss, is impossible to be fallen by oneself to such result, mechanism calculates that was too completely intelligent, asked the path carefully such as the iron this/should is Its home to return, therefore finally * on not being able to get up, is unable the full conclusion, to a creator, the fish and bear's paws. Cannot give dual attention is really painful. 结束得很突然,但也确实写到尽头,意终该止了,最初的大纲里想的是小孟和小桑怒怼金皇,以一个热血的战斗收尾,但写到大半的时候,越写越有感金皇心机城府之可怕,对大道追求之坚定,这样的彼岸这样的波ss,不可能会让自己落到那样的结局,机关算尽太聪明,求道路上心如铁才该是祂的归宿,因此最后的*就起不来,无法酣畅淋漓的收尾,对一个创作者来说,鱼与熊掌不能兼顾实在是太痛苦了。 However I decide to respect Gold Sovereign this character finally, respects this villains who support the following 1/3 stories, respect the personality and setting of character, this is also I writes Worthy of Respect in One Age original intention each book, I will consider that which aspect must improve and enhance the weak area in oneself. 不过我最终还是决定尊重金皇这个人物,尊重这个支撑起后面三分之一故事的反派,尊重人物的性格与设定,这也是我写一世之尊的初衷每一本书,我都会考虑要完善和提高自己哪方面的短板。 Extinguishing transports/fortunes is a complete temperament practice story, does not have other me to write by hand my heart by me, therefore wrote immortal intent, but defective were too many, the style, the plot design, the rhythm control, the characterization, these or have the place of flash, but too clear was as a whole frail, therefore mysterious technique god throne is led by the world outlook to decipher, the rhythm control does well, the fine structure degree over extinguishes transports/fortunes, the character also has the promotion, but is insufficient, fights is also incapable. 灭运是一个完整的心性修炼故事,是没有其余的我以我手写我心,所以写出了仙意,但欠缺的太多了,文笔,剧情设计,节奏控制,人物塑造,这些或有闪光之处,但总体上还是太普通太单薄了,因此奥术神座以世界观解密为主导,节奏控制做得很不错,精细结构程度超过灭运,人物也有提升,但还不够,打斗也无力。 Had these summaries, the original intention of first is to write the person writes the idea, first half pleased Jiang Hu the time, the self-sensation character, fought, conflicts and searches, suspense and idea, hot blooded, happy to write the radically new level densely, broke through past, but after stepping into Exterior Scenery, first was fights to start becomes spatial, tall Wuliu the resistance had the issue that too I have not come across have not thought, wrote painfully, falls into the bottleneck very much slowly, as relatively gloomy serious world outlook gradually exposed, earlier the conflict of style, integration of passing character, was the new difficult problem, but was greater. Background, many character gambling, finer clue upholstery, needs to rack brains, pays attention to both other very much difficultly again, only if can 2-3 talents with one chapter, therefore in maintaining the main good situation, earlier many merits did not have, 有了这些总结,一世的初衷就是写人写理念,前半段快意江湖的时候,自我感觉人物、打斗、冲突、探密、悬疑、理念、热血、痛快等都写出了全新的水准,突破了以往的自己,但踏入外景后,先是打斗开始变空,高武流的对抗有太多我没遇到过没想到的问题,写得很痛苦,慢慢陷入瓶颈,随着相对灰暗沉重的世界观逐渐展露,前期风格的冲突,过往人物的融入,又是新的难题,而更加宏大的背景,更多的人物博弈,更精细的线索铺垫,又需要绞尽脑汁,很难再兼顾其他,除非能2-3天才用更一章,于是在保持着主体还好的情况下,前期不少优点都没了, These things are not the initial preinstall program can think that only will then write arrived to understand, met knows how later should solve, first was very good, but some truly many issues need to summarize. 这些事情不是最初预设大纲就能想到的,只有写到了才会明白,遇上了才知道以后该怎么解决,一世很好,但确实有不少问题需要总结。 Fortunately, Supreme gambling writes finally, receives the officer finally completely, this I am very satisfied, the contents about 4.5 million characters can achieve this degree, the self-sensation is good, only wants to summarize, the next this book enhances again. 还好,大能博弈写到最后,总算圆满收官,这点我很满意,近四百五十万字的内容能做到这个程度,自我感觉还是不错的,只希望多总结,下本书再提高。 But this book writes the most satisfactory role one is Little Meng ; first, Gold Sovereign ; first, Xiaosang, before Xiaosang at first is, dragon embroidered costume that the miss who knows wants, only then a request, wrote the female villain, I looked at the setting of Yu Longzi, suddenly thought that the mental illness also very moe, therefore she turned into the schizophrenia, then made me extend a series of inspirations, had the Gold Sovereign layout, if were not this accidentally, first that perhaps everyone saw was not like this. 而本书写得最满意的角色一是小孟,一是金皇,一是小桑,小桑最初是个以前认识的姑娘要的龙套,只有一个要求,写成女反派,我看了看玉珑紫的设定,忽然觉得神经病也挺萌的,于是她变成了精神分裂,然后让我延伸了一系列灵感,有了金皇的布局,如果不是这个偶然,或许大家看到的一世就不是这样的了。 Perhaps Xiaosang this role many people do not like, but at least me, I thought that she is I have written the best female role, most does not love satisfied, is best, faces directly in vol. 7 end Xiaosang and Gold Sovereign, removes the proud time little, I even have to plant this role lived the feeling. 小桑这个角色或许很多人不喜欢,但至少于我而言,我觉得她是我写过最好的女角色,不是最爱最满意,是最好,在第七卷末尾小桑与金皇直面,被一点点剥掉骄傲的时候,我甚至有种这个角色活了的感觉。 Summarizes here, first replied that some have not filled the pit in the main text: 总结到这里,先回答一些没在正文里填得坑: First, what did Zhu Bajie know? It by some lascivious intuition, detected keenly Thunder God and Monster Saint have the intrigue, thus peeps the Thunder God real status possibly to have the issue, therefore the old pig must die. 一,猪八戒知道了什么？它以某种好色的直觉,敏锐地察觉到雷神与妖圣有奸情,从而窥出雷神真实身份可能有问题,所以老猪必须死。 Second, Han Guang, the mold of Wang Siyuan by earlier wise, the foolproof plan, after displays opened Heaven's Will to ask truly since old times highly difficult, therefore also had no actor's pay, the Han Guang result has also been doomed, the Book of Luo rightful owner was Eastern Sovereign, Wang Siyuan thinks oneself were by clarifies Heavenly Dao Monster to take carry back initially, was actually the arrangement of Demon Buddha, during his resistance continuously in Demon Buddha controlled. 二,韩广,王思远的塑造是以前期的足智多谋,算无遗策,来表现真正揭幕后的天意自古高难问,因此也就没什么戏份了,韩广的结局也早已注定,洛书原主是东皇,王思远以为自己是靠初步弄清楚天道怪物才拿回来的,其实是魔佛的布置,他的反抗一直在魔佛掌控之中。 Third, escaped Kasyapa remains displays the Supreme True Buddha terrifying need, carried off by Great Sage Equal of Heaven, the behind blank, imagines It to change into sariputra in the epoch, found new successor. 三,脱逃的迦叶遗蜕是表现无上真佛的恐怖需要,被齐天大圣带走,后面留白,就自行想象祂有没有可能在新纪元化为舍利子,找到新传人吧。 Fourth, why Spirit Mountain post-war did no one first go to carry Tang Sanzang remains? Because Pāramitā is balanced, involves mutually, no one dares first to move, until enters the chaos deep sleep, waits for Final Tribulation, old Monarch the matter of good inactivity, and does not arrive at the legend to have no way the back, therefore depends on Monk Sha to return finally ahead of time. 四,为什么灵山之战后没人抢先去背唐三藏遗蜕？因为彼岸均衡,互相牵扯,谁也不敢先动,直到都进入混沌沉睡,等待末劫,老君又行无为之事,并且不到传说没法去背,所以最终靠沙和尚提前回归。 Fifth, golden cicada carapace is Meng Qi was used to cope with the preparation of Supreme True Buddha, but Buddha Ancestor not truly unique, could not use. 五,金蝉甲壳原本是孟奇用来对付无上真佛的准备,但佛祖没真正超脱,也就用不上了。 Sixth, the Buddha Ancestor truly unique pit, has not had the prompt earlier, Dao Venerable makes the Reduce to Emptiness product to be fierce, has Old Monarch Huang, Old Monarch Huang splits Eastern Sovereign and Heavenly Dao Monster, is Pāramitā, has Ancient Being, but Supreme True Buddha truly powerful strange, but Tang Sanzang was weaker, Meng Qi thinks that has improved reason, when discovered that the Dao Venerable trace is empty, the Buddha Ancestor brand mark actually remains, somewhat suspected that Buddha Ancestor had not been aloof, moreover Dao Venerable has not acted, Buddha Ancestor has the take action record, before having Demon Buddha, on revealing with the matter of Heavenly Lord of the Primordial Beginning cooperation, therefore fights take action to foresee finally, is not prompted by a sudden impulse. 六,佛祖没真正超脱的坑,前期一直有提示,道尊的做减求空产物都非常厉害,有黄老君,黄老君又分裂成东皇与天道怪物,都是彼岸,有古老者,而无上真佛虽然确实强大诡异,可唐三藏却弱了很多,孟奇以为是改良过的缘故,等到发现道尊痕迹空空荡荡,佛祖烙印却依旧存在,就有些怀疑佛祖没超脱了,另外道尊没出过手,佛祖有出手记录,有魔佛之前就揭秘的与元始天尊合作之事,因此最终战出手是可以预见的,不是心血来潮。 Seventh, as for was only aloof one each era, Buddha Ancestor was aloof, why Meng Qi did not suspect that what Dao Fruit Pāramitā Being did struggle? Here forgot writing, he thinks that this was Final Tribulation, was front the big ends of many eras, non- single era, perhaps an opportunity. 七,至于每个纪元都只超脱一个,佛祖超脱了,为什么孟奇不怀疑彼岸者争什么道果？这里是忘了写,他以为这是末劫,是前面多个纪元的大终结,非单个纪元,或许还有一个机会。 Eighth, why Primordial Beginning Lingbao cannot begin, Amitabha Buddha and Gold Sovereign actually? Also was last section inside Primordial Beginning said that they had transformed status, is extinguishing karma, is waiting for the turning point, did not need to catch up like Gold Sovereign tightly catches up slowly, was equal to leading half-step, 70-80% odds of success, compelling Gold Sovereign to truncate Daode(way of virtue) with Six Souls Banner. 八,为什么元始灵宝不能动手,阿弥陀佛与金皇却可以？也就是最后一章里元始说的,祂们早就转化了状态,消弭着因果,等待着契机,不用像金皇那样紧赶慢赶,等于领先半步,有七八成胜算,逼得金皇必须用六魂幡削道德一下。 Ninth, Monster Emperor status slightly is equal to Buddha Ancestor, but she was not limited, but feared that made an appearance previously came to naught diligently, and other turning points, so long as the next era, has not feared Final Tribulation, Monster Saint in has suggested. 九,妖皇的状态略等于佛祖,但她不是受限制,只是怕一露面先前努力就化为泡影,在等契机,只要还有下个纪元,就不怕末劫,妖圣的话里有暗示过。 Tenth, Titled/sealed God Journey to the West the time line order, first is Titled/sealed God, Celestial Emperor proves Pāramitā, sidewise compression first, is gradually with Primordial Beginning and Daode(way of virtue) offcenter, had the matter of Journey to the West, is Demon Lord is then instigated by Thunder God gets Heavenly Court, pierced the Construction Wood Fruit secret indirectly, shortly after is Heavenly Court crashes, Pāramitā collaborates, the monkey takes the Vajra circle that old Monarch is giving, including Heavenly Court to knock down Immortal Realm severely wounded Celestial Emperor in the final moment, gives It a slim chance of survival, maintains this era to continue to exist, finally was the war of Spirit Mountain, Amitabha Buddha and Bodhi to Monster Saint, Daode(way of virtue) and Primordial Beginning and other Ancient Being meddled afterward, Vajra circle., Seven Treasures Wonder Tree is damaged in this war. 十,封神西游等的时间线顺序,先是封神,天帝证彼岸,横压一世,再是渐渐与元始、道德离心,有了西游之事,再然后是魔主被雷神唆使得打上天庭,间接捅破了建木果实的秘密,没多久就是天庭坠落,彼岸联手,猴子拿着老君给的金刚圈,在最后关头将重伤的天帝连天庭打落仙界,给祂一线生机,维持本纪元继续存在,最后是灵山之战,阿弥陀佛、菩提对妖圣,道德和元始等古老者后来插手,金刚圈、七宝妙树都是在这一战中受损。 Naturally, after all is close to two years of serializing, in some details can remember unavoidably chaotic, appears the condition of not corresponding, for example Liu Luo has read the Meng Qi picture Demon Blood Peach chart obviously, when explores the Heavenly Court uppermost layer, said that has not known, naturally, can explain that the Little Meng drawing ability „prodigious skill”, making one praise to the heavens, draws the child picture to come out the mothers not to know that un, these do not involve the main plot, does not involve the trend, if in the future will have the opportunity publication, the gravity head will proofread one again. 当然,毕竟是接近两年的连载,前后有些细节上难免会记忆混乱,出现不对应的状况,比如流罗明明看过孟奇画的妖异血桃的图,探索天庭最上层时,却说没不知道,当然,也能解释成小孟的画画能力“鬼斧神工”,让人叹为观止,画小孩画出来连人家妈都不认识了,嗯,这些都不涉及主要剧情,不涉及走向,日后若有机会出版,再重头校对一遍吧。 Other are the pits of some character results, some beyond, some on the blank , will yes see that some book review area friends said best in the book serialize, to take care of them, in that book also serializes, with the free form, under the rest, 7 : 00 pm has beyond first character, but also hopes that everyone can add me * the prestige * the letter/believes *, will have the good piece, there are various brain holes, has the waste manuscript first to look, beyond that and first no relates also places there, for example tonight's „, if metropolis”, In brief, later had the time to maintain every week three renewals ~ searched for my pen name, has not added Worthy of Respect in One Age...... 其他都是些人物结局的坑,有的会在番外,有的就留白吧,对了,看到书评区有朋友说最好还是书里连载,为了照顾他们,那书里也连载吧,用免费的形式,休息下,周五晚上七点有第一篇人物番外,不过也希望大家都能加我*威*信*,会有好的段子,有各种脑洞,有废稿先看,与一世没什么关系的番外也放在那里,比如今天晚上的“如果是都市”,总之,以后有时间维持每周三次的更新了~搜我笔名就可以,没加一世之尊的…… Summarizes, was the time said that new book, before had raised, the new book was metropolis ability, today can say explicitly, was the fist sovereign type metropolis knight-errant or profound imaginary, the strength level will pull down, making me write the character to write the story well, thing that first will summarize used, moreover this type wrote the person to be few, will be quite fresh, writes to have creation fervor very much ~ 总结完毕,是时候说说新书了,之前就提过,新书是都市异能,今天可以更明确地说下,是拳皇类型的都市武侠或者玄幻,力量层次会压低,让我更好地写人物写故事,将一世总结的东西用上,而且这种类型写得人少,比较新鲜,写起来会很有创作激情~ Naturally, everyone will also say that I did not do not dead , changed the theme, changed the domain, to be honest, I also know that this was not good, will definitely lose many readers, saw others new several hundred thousand subscriptions each time, more than ten million copyright reorganization fees, I did not envy, that was impossible, but I thing that had no way to write me not to write, had no way to install the smile to pretend that * wrote me not to have the inspiration not to form in one's mind the creation fervor story. 当然,大家又会说我不作死就不会死了,又改题材,又改领域,老实说,我自己也知道这样不好,肯定会流失很多读者,每次看到别人新增几十万的订阅,上千万的版权改编费,我不羡慕吗,那不可能,但我没法去写我不想写的东西,没法强装笑脸假装*去写我没灵感没构思没创作激情的故事。 Said that naive also good, said that the fool is also good, but I still remember that at first when starts the symbol first thought that I write by hand my heart by me, writes me to feel well, thought that wants impatiently with the story that everyone shares, enjoys to create a world, writes to live satisfaction of character. 说天真也好,说傻逼也好,但我还记得最初开始码字时的初心,我以我手写我心,写我感觉不错,觉得迫不及待想和大家分享的故事,享受创造一个世界,写活一个人物的满足。 I was old, but I feel in own heart as before also some dreams, the story that hot blooded, all at once, wants to tell , there is nothing to do with the theme , there is nothing to do with the style, is only related with my heart! 我年纪不小了,但我觉得自己心中依旧还有梦想,还有热血,还有一股气,还有想讲述的故事,与题材无关,与风格无关,只和我的心有关！ Like Little Meng said that this is not the issue that is worth, wants! 就像小孟说的,这不是值不值得的问题,是愿不愿意！ I want, I have no regret, I am a big fool! 我愿意,我无悔,我就是个大傻逼！ The new book formed in one's mind to be very long, wrote Ao Shuqian has part of ideas, naturally, what at that time wants to write was the technical class/flow, what a pity circumstances changed with the time, already that had not felt, the detail that but accumulated at that time, the accumulation bridge section, can use, until now, roughly already improves, contributed labor and materials on, but first wrote the quick two years, was really exhausted, thought as if was slow, the need time rest, needed the time charge, had a look at the book, how having a look at others to portray the character how to tell the story, learned the skill to learn the experience, therefore, two months of rest and charge, one month. The perfect program and retaining the draft, on October 1, the new book saw! 新书构思了很久,写奥术前就有一部分想法,当然,那时候想写的是科技流,可惜时过境迁,已经没那个感觉了,但当时积累的细节,积累的桥段,很多都能用上,直到现在,大体已经完善,就等添砖加瓦,不过一世写了快两年,真是筋疲力尽,思维都仿佛迟缓,需要时间休息,更需要时间充电,看看好书,看看别人怎么塑造人物怎么讲好故事,学到技巧学到经验,所以,两个月的休息和充电,一个月的完善大纲和存稿,十月 1 号,新书见！ Hū, Worthy of Respect in One Age wrote two in December, some friends crossed the high school, some friend universities graduated, some changed the work, some got married and began a career like me, Little Meng was accompanies us to pass through the stage of life, if this book can become everyone to the past recollection, I was too happy. 呼,一世之尊写了二十二月,有的朋友渡过了高中,有的朋友大学毕业了,有的换了工作,有的像我一样成家立业了,小孟算是陪伴着我们经过了人生的一个阶段,如果本书能成为大家对过去的回忆,那我就太开心了。 I herewith offer, salutes, beyond sees, the new book sees!( To be continued.) 此致,敬礼,番外见,新书见！(未完待续。)
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