„edit(or)...... thank you such appraises, although I did not understand very much.” Seiji crooked tilting the head. “编辑么……谢谢你这么评价,虽然我不是很理解。”晴司歪了歪头。 Meaning of his not too clear Editor Yoshizawa. Although knows the opposite party in commending oneself, but does not understand in own achievement, there is anything to be worth like this essential factor of commendation. 他不太明白吉泽编辑的意思。虽然知道对方是在称赞自己,但不明白自己刚才的作为中,有什么值得这样称赞的要素。 Sees the opposite party a little puzzled facial expression, Saki is only the smile by right. 见到对方有点困惑的神情,纱希只是微笑以对。 Outstanding edit(or) should be what kind of? 一个优秀的编辑应该是怎样的呢？ Regarding this issue, the different people will have the different replies. 对于这个问题,不同的人会有不同的回答。 When Saki is a new person, she had talked about the related topic with Editor-in-Chief Hattori Souzo, at that time latter's words made her impression profound. 在纱希还是个新人的时候,她曾经和主编服部宗造谈到过相关话题,当时后者的一番话让她印象深刻。 „Outstanding edit(or) not necessarily must be able to complete all matters, so long as completed the basic matter to be good, but these ‚basic’ the matter, must complete truly completely is not easy.” “优秀的编辑不一定是要能做好所有的事情,而只要做好基本的事情就行了,但这些‘基本’的事情,真正要全部做好并不容易。” „Takes with author exchanges this aspect, many people think that outstanding edit(or) should be able to judge works accurately, gives the author good suggestion, helping author improve works. Also or, when the works failure, can make author mention mind, encouraging him to maintain the enthusiasm , to continue to create...... This viewpoint not wrong, but I think not necessarily absolutely correct.” “就拿与作者交流这个方面来讲,很多人认为优秀的编辑应该是能够准确评判一部作品,给与作者好的建议,帮助作者完善作品。又或者在作品失败的时候,能让作者提起精神,鼓励其保持热情,继续创作……这种观点没有错,但我认为未必完全正确。” „To the judgment and suggestion of works is also good, encourages also well to the comfort of author, these in the final analysis are not ‚basic’ matter, but is edit(or) additional work. Can complete naturally is good, but the words that cannot complete, maintain mediocrely also yes, so long as does not screw up.” “对作品的评判、建议也好,对作者的安慰、鼓励也好,这些归根究底不是‘基本’的事情,而是编辑的附加工作。能做好当然是好,而做不好的话,维持平庸也是可以的,只要不搞砸。” „With basic that author exchanges ‚’, I think that two points \; first, to let author clearly recognizes the condition \; second, to let author clearly recognizes oneself.” “与作者交流的‘基本’,我认为有两点,一是让作者认清状况,二是让作者认清自身。” „Relatively is easy to complete, but second was very difficult.” “第一点相对容易做好,但第二点就很难了。” „Makes author clearly recognize the condition, this point completed is passing an examination edit(or). But makes author clearly recognize oneself, this point completed is outstanding edit(or), even if other aspects all displayed mediocrely do not matter. When at least I the Editor-in-Chief words, I can complete this point edit(or) regard as Trump Card.” “让作者认清状况,这一点做好了就是一个及格的编辑。而让作者认清自身,这一点做好了就是一个优秀的编辑,哪怕其他方面全都表现平庸都无所谓。至少我当主编的话,我会把能做好这一点的编辑视为王牌。” „Some author this community at first sight similarities, but they all have the unique individuality individual actually. This individuality usually intrinsic, meets the external embodiment the person is few, even external embodiment, cannot determine that is his true individuality.” “作者这个群体乍看有很多相似之处,但其实他们全都是有着独特个性的个体。这份个性通常是内在的,会外在表现出来的人很少,甚至外在表现出来,也不能确定那就是他真正的个性。” „Can make author clearly recognize oneself, knows who oneself are, is what kind of person, wants to create anything, can create anything...... Thus stimulates the author enthusiasm and potential, creates to conform to own individuality, even surmounts oneself works, such edit(or) are quite few.” “能让作者认清自身,知道自己是谁,是怎样的人,到底想要创作什么,能够创作什么……从而激发作者的热情和潜能,创作出符合自身个性,甚至是超越自我的作品,这样的编辑相当少。” „Because sees through or realizes the author intrinsic individuality, and makes him awaken by the suitable words, this matter was really too difficult.” Hattori Editor-in-Chief sighed heartfeltly. “因为看穿或者说察觉作者的内在个性,并且以适当的话语让其醒悟,这种事情真是太难了。”服部主编由衷叹道。 Saki of new person at that time too did not understand the Editor-in-Chief words, but remembered. 还是个新人的纱希当时不太理解主编的话语,但是记住了。 Later has been familiar with work gradually, slowly understood the meaning of Editor-in-Chief. 之后渐渐熟悉了工作,就慢慢明白了主编的意思。 Let author clearly recognize itself, is really very difficult. 让一个作者认清自己,真的是很难。 The author individuality, some are very difficult to see clearly, some are quite easy to see clearly, but that also not necessarily is his true individuality, but saw clearly, making him clearly recognize that oneself is a bigger difficult problem. 作者的个性,有的很难看清,有的比较容易看清,但那也未必是他真正的个性,而就算看清了,让他认清自己是更大的难题。 Even if blunt(ly) said the words, the opposite party may not accept or understand that the resistance or angry had the possibility, only then the accurate and suitable words, can achieve. 就算直白地把话说出来,对方也不一定会接受或者理解,抗拒或者愤怒都有可能,只有准确且适当的话语,才能做到。 However such difficult matter, front this youngster accomplished a moment ago naturally! 然而这样的难事,刚才面前这个少年自然而然地办到了！ „Is makes him clearly recognize that at most own will” this cannot say is „” matter, Harano...... Haruta-kun. Saki acclaimed at heart. “顶多就是让他认清一下自己的意志而已”这可不能说是“而已”的事情啊,原野……春田君。纱希心里赞叹。 She had not explained to him, because he is not edit(or), is impossible to take edit(or) as the ambition, so long as know well. 她没有跟他解释,因为他不是编辑,也不可能以编辑为志向,所以只要自己知道就好。 ...... …… After Editor Yoshizawa distinguishes, Seiji has bought for computer Drawing several sketch board, then goes home. 与吉泽编辑分别后,晴司去买了用于电脑绘画的数位手绘板,然后回家。 After proficient, immediately told the Shika competition to win, and looked at the picture as well as the Teacher Oni Weapon that picture oneself drew to her. 到家后,随即告诉小诗比试胜利,并给她看自己画的画以及鬼兵老师的画。 „This teacher also draws very well, but is the Seiji elder brother picture is really better.” Shika said heartfeltly that „I anticipate to see the elder brother picture very much the complete illustration.” “这位老师也画得很不错,但果然是晴司哥哥的画更好。”小诗由衷说道,“我很期待看到哥哥画的全部插画。” „Draws to spend some time completely. I as soon as possible, for our novels can be quicker the publication.” Seiji said with a smile, demonstrated sketch board that just purchased. “全部画完要费些时间。我会尽快的,为了我们的小说能够快些出版。”晴司微笑道,展示出刚刚购买的手绘板。 „With this thing can Drawing on the computer, draw more convenient, can pick up the speed in the situation of ensure quality.” “用这个东西能够在电脑上绘画,画起来更加方便,可以在保证质量的情况下加快速度。” Later, he joins the computer sketch board to the study room, the attempt uses. 之后,他到书房将手绘板接上电脑,尝试使用。 Confirmed after sketch board smooth operation, Seiji opens Gal Game System, exchanges „Drawing Item Card sketch board”. 确认手绘板顺利运作后,晴司打开g系统,兑换“画具卡手绘板”。 The new card appears, in sign surface is the black form draws on the white drawing board smoothly, draws various designs unceasingly. 新卡片浮现出来,牌面上是黑色身影在白色的画板上流畅描画,不断画出各种图案。 Seiji lies down on the bed, the point chooses „use”, the card changes to the star light to enter the brains. 晴司去躺到床上,点选“使用”,卡片化作星光进入头脑。 When feeling with use „Writing Item Card” similar, the head has given off heat, then suddenly open. 感觉跟使用“写具卡”时类似,脑袋发热了一下,然后霍然开朗。 He sits before the computer again, the opens software, takes up the drawing board, grasps the paint brush. 他再坐到电脑前,打开软件,拿起画板,握起画笔。 The pen tip falls on the drawing board, draws the line smoothly, not having the least bit just to start to use the jerkiness of sketch board. 笔尖落在画板上,流畅地描画出线条,没有半点刚刚开始使用手绘板的生涩。 The Drawing speed really sped up. 绘画速度果然加快了。 After not having use „Writing Item Card”, the Writing speed multiplies the large promotion of that degree, after all uses the paint brush to draw. 没有使用“写具卡”后,写作速度倍增那种程度的大幅提升,毕竟还是使用画笔来画。 But after crossing one, Seiji discovered that was not only the speed, the painting quality also had the obvious promotion! 而过了一阵后,晴司发现,不仅仅是速度,作画质量也有了明显提升！ Compares paints on the drawing paper, draws the design with sketch board on the computer, can draw easily carefully, the drawing quality therefore rose. 相比在画纸上作画,用手绘板在电脑上画出图案,能够更轻易地画得更加细致,图画质量因此上升了。 Very good. 很不错。 Seiji draws is drawing, immersed. 晴司画着画着,沉浸在了其中。 ...... …… In the evening. 晚上。 Seiji that continues to paint received call. 持续作画的晴司接到了电话。 The caller of demonstration is Fuuma Airi. 显示的来电者是风间爱理。 His mind appears that day blue short hair, the form of cheek delightful young female student, immediately connects the call. 他脑海浮现出那个天蓝色短发,脸蛋甜美的小女生的身影,随即接通电话。 „good evening, big brother......” that side telephone resounds a little tense sound. “晚上好,大哥哥……”电话那边响起有点紧张的声音。 „good evening, Fuuma little sister.” “晚上好,风间小妹妹。” The matter that hears this temperate male voice, before Airi recalls to mind, had clearly. 听到这个温和男声,爱理清晰地记起了之前发生的事情。 In her thinks that let slip to kill own elder brother, was quite scared, fear and restless time, was he has comforted her, shouted the ambulance promptly, encouraging her to contact with the father, and asked the friend who arrives before the father to accompany her...... 在她以为失手杀了亲哥哥,极为恐慌、害怕、不安的时候,是他安抚了她,及时叫了救护车,鼓励她联系父亲,并在父亲拜托的朋友到来之前陪伴她…… After that Airi several times wanted to relate this to help gently oneself, Prince-like big brother, because of this and that state of mind, cannot have the courage to allocate the telephone. 那之后,爱理几次想要联系这位温柔帮助了自己的,王子般的大哥哥,但因为这样那样的心绪,没能鼓起勇气拨出电话。 Until yesterday, the parents proposed that must invite him to come to express gratitude to the family/home. She requested is related immediately on own initiative by oneself. 直至昨天,父母提出要邀请他到家里来以表示感谢。她随即主动请求由自己来联系。 „big brother, tomorrow your do you have time?” “大哥哥,明天你有空吗？” Seiji watches computer screen. 晴司看着电脑屏幕。 „I have the matter to do, but does not have no free time completely...... What matter has?” “我有事情要做,不过不是完全没空……有什么事吗？” „Father and mother said that wants to ask you to have the supper to our family/home.” “爸爸和妈妈说,想请你到我们家来吃晚餐。” Supper...... Expresses the gratitude. Seiji thinks. 晚餐……就是表达一下谢意吧。晴司想了想。 „Good.” He has complied. “好啊。”他应了下来。