TMA :: Volume #1

#50: Composing


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Disorderly and coarse melody pianos from Lucien both hands spreads, moreover at can only play the simple music stage Lucien, the performance skill definitely is unable to match very difficult melody that oneself want, therefore a sound sound jumps, in the blacksmith like blacksmith's shop takes the iron hammer, raps one by one in Rotter, Felice and on Herodotus's heart, making them have a feeling of amenomania, wishes one could to tear into shreds Lucien. 杂乱、难听的旋律一段段从路西恩双手之下的钢琴传出,而且还处在只能弹奏简单乐曲阶段的路西恩,演奏技巧完全无法匹配自己想要的高难度旋律,于是一个音一个音的蹦出,就像铁匠铺里面的铁匠拿着铁锤,一下一下地敲击在洛特、菲丽丝和希罗多德的心上,让他们产生一种躁狂的感觉,恨不得上去将路西恩撕碎。 Sufficed!” Herodotus and Rotter roared simultaneously, some are unable to maintain oneself aristocrat demeanor. “够了!”希罗多德和洛特同时吼了出来,有些无法保持自己的贵族风度。 Lucien has turned the head, with limpid the vision visits them: „Don't Rotter, Felice, Herodotus, you practice the musical instrument? Mr. Victor told we must practice well.” 路西恩转过头,用“清澈”的目光看着他们:“洛特、菲丽丝、希罗多德,你们不练习乐器吗?维克托先生可是吩咐了我们要好好练习的。” You!” Herodotus both hands grip tightly, the anger makes his cheeks rise red, but the body is fragile, since childhood fights has not won he, to fighting natural fear, but also retained a sobriety, weighed itself and Lucien's battle efficiency, He is higher than half head me, one meter about 73, the poor family background, by helping the person moves the thing to live, the strength is very definitely big . Moreover the good friend is squire, he should also follow the practice ordinary sword technique, I cannot be victorious he.】 “你!”希罗多德双手紧握,怒火让他的脸颊涨得通红,但身体瘦弱,从小打架都没有赢过的他,对打架有一种天然的畏惧,还保留了一丝清醒,衡量了自己和路西恩的战斗力,【他比我高半个头,一米七三左右,贫民出身,靠帮人搬东西为生,力气肯定很大,而且有一位好友是骑士侍从,他应该也跟着有练习普通剑术,我根本打不过他。】 Considers as finished, hits own schoolmate, but will drive out by Mr. Victor.】 Herodotus looked the own slim figure, found an excuse to oneself, I do not want to see you, does not want to make your poor smear my hand, I go to other zither | Jean room to practice.” 【算了,打自己的同学,可是会被维克托先生驱除的。】希罗多德看了看自己瘦弱的身材,给自己找了个理由,“我不想看见你,也不想让你这贫民弄脏了我的手,我去另外的琴房练习。” Then, he turns around to walk toward the gate. 说完,他就转身往门边走去。 Lucien innocent asked: Herodotus he how?” Can drive away one them is, this can cover not reasonably oneself compose the string law, progress of jump. 路西恩“无辜”地问道:“希罗多德他怎么了?”能将他们气走一个是一个,这样才能掩盖自己谱写弦律的不合理的、跳跃的进步。 Herodotus who will open the zither | Jean door hears the Lucien's words, the hand slides, almost tumbles, then looked at Lucien one ruthlessly, this bastard is intentional! 正要打开琴房门的希罗多德听到路西恩的话,手一滑,差点跌倒,回头狠狠地看了路西恩一眼,这混蛋是故意的吧! Weighed the both sides build disparity of again, Herodotus is clenching teeth to run out of the zither | Jean room. 再次衡量了双方体型的差距,希罗多德咬着牙冲出了琴房。 Lucien sees that then takes up Quill, writes down that segment Xianlv who played a moment ago on the white paper, inside contains an insignificant Symphony of Fate syllable, more is Lucien following oneself felt carelessly writing the note that pieces together, any has the musicianship person, looks at this melody, will unable to bear shake the head, is only better than the trash. 路西恩见状,回头拿起羽毛笔,在白纸上写下刚才弹奏的那段弦律,里面包含微不足道的一点命运交响曲的音节,更多的则是路西恩胡乱顺着自己感觉书写的、拼凑上去的音符,任何有音乐修养的人,一看这段旋律,都会忍不住摇头,只比垃圾好一点。 Saw that Lucien writes the 5 lines earnestly, Rotter looked up the ceiling of zither | Jean room, then rubbed the forehead, made the final confirmation: „Do you really want to write the music?” 看到路西恩认真地写着五线谱,洛特抬头看了看琴房的天花板,然后揉了揉额头,做最后的证实:“你真的要写乐曲?” Naturally, I am writing.” Lucien does not have the change of scene to reply, graciousness, my a little inspiration.” “当然,我正在写。”路西恩头也没转地回答,“恩,我又有一点灵感了。” Therefore Lucien puts down Quill, that coarse noise resounds in this zither | Jean room again. 于是路西恩放下羽毛笔,那难听的噪音再次在这间琴房内响起。 Felice Station, is mumbling worn out: Rotter, I thinks that I must go to the following garden to be static, I was soon insane.” 菲丽丝站了起来,有气无力地嘟囔着:“洛特,我想我得去后面花园静一静,我快要疯了。” Rotter sighed: I also go to other zither | Jean room.” 洛特叹了口气:“我也去其他琴房。” After they walk, Lucien relaxes quietly, locks on the other side the gate of zither | Jean room on, wrote two string laws to make a revision a moment ago, enabling them to contain more Symphony of Fate string law, then the vagrant thoughts along with writing, wrote several pages of white papers, making them be full of the trash string law. 等他们走后,路西恩才悄悄松了口气,将琴房的门反锁上,把刚才写得两段弦律做了一点修改,使得它们包含更多的命运交响曲弦律了,然后随想随写,足足写了好几页白纸,让它们充满着垃圾般的弦律。 This is the means that Lucien thought of a moment ago, completes this matter with a methodical process, first makes them accept itself to compose the fact of music, then covers with the trash string law, day-by-day progresses, and such progress must manifest in the music rough draft, was questioned the evidence when as later, when they felt subconsciously when oneself compose in the music has many nice string laws, can invite, to have many flaw piano version Symphony of Fate that Victor listens to himself to play, in making him revise the shortcoming, the improvement music, and reorganizes to become the true symphony music. 这是路西恩刚才想到的办法,用一个循序渐进的过程来完成这件事,先让他们接受自己在谱写乐曲的事实,然后用垃圾弦律掩盖,一天天进步,并且这样的进步要体现在乐谱草稿上,作为以后被质疑时的证据,等他们下意识觉得自己谱写乐曲里面有不少动听弦律时,就可以邀请维克托听自己弹奏的、有很多缺陷的钢琴版命运交响曲了,让他来修正里面的缺点,完善乐曲,并改编成真正的交响乐曲。 Under being obvious to all, the talent that the rapid advancement, covered music talent blooms little, always compares puts out one stirring, to spread several hundred over a thousand years of symphonies suddenly, and claimed that is anomaly that write, was easy to accept. 一位在有目共睹之下,快速进步,将被掩盖的音乐才华一点点绽放的天才,总比突然拿出一首震撼人心、可以流传几百上千年的交响曲,并声称是自己所写的怪胎,容易让人接受多了。 Naturally, these days Lucien also needs all the time of practicing the musical instrument, place to practice to play on Symphony of Fate of piano version, so as to avoid because when the time comes play the skill to be bad, lets this classic that has „the crown of symphony title was not favored and denied by Victor, Rotter, Felice et al . 当然,这段时间路西恩也需要将所有练习乐器的时间,放在练习弹奏钢琴版的命运交响曲上,免得到时候因为自己弹奏技巧差,让这一首有“交响乐之冠”称谓的名曲被维克托、洛特、菲丽丝等人不看好、否定。 This does not have the precedent, the first performance of Beethoven Symphony of Fate, because launching-crew-training, only then one time, as well as weather cold and other factors, performance not good, received the cold reception of audience, after one -and-a-half years, holding of another concert, received the phenomenally enthusiastic response. 这并不是没有先例,贝多芬命运交响曲的第一次演出,就因为事前合练只有一次,以及天气寒冷等因素,演奏得并不好,受到了观众的冷遇,直到一年半后,另外一次音乐会的举行,才受到了空前热烈的回应。 Determined that the progress of good today's music, after the music score made the revision, Lucien started the difficult practice, attempts to play Symphony of Fate, is slow and scattered about, shoots the music that exquisite and goes directly to the will of the people seems like the noise, even if actually Lucien does not lock on the other side the gate of zither | Jean room, was heard, will not be serious. 确定好今天乐曲的进度,将谱子做了修改后,路西恩开始了艰难的练习,尝试弹奏命运交响曲,缓慢、七零八落,将一首优美而直达人心的乐曲弹得像是噪音,其实路西恩就算不反锁琴房的门,被人听到了,也不会当一回事。 This in the afternoon, no matter Victor, Rhine, are Rotter and the others, has not come to find Lucien, when making Lucien shoot three long more than 30 minutes of symphonies smoothly slowly. 这一下午,不管是维克托、莱茵,还是洛特等人,都没有来找到过路西恩,让路西恩顺利地将时长三十多分钟的交响曲缓慢地弹了三遍。 ............ ………… Saw the weather to start secretly, Lucien reorganized itself to write the music, brings thick one pack of papers, the performance halls toward five buildings walked. 见天色开始暗了下来,路西恩整理了自己写得乐谱,带着厚厚一叠纸,往五楼的演奏大厅走去。 In the performance hall, the symphony orchestra is still doing the practice, Victor is directing with total concentration, looks after the short rest, temporarily got rid of the haze, the wholeheartedly invested in the middle of the music. 演奏大厅内,交响乐团还在做着练习,维克托正在聚精会神地指挥,看起来经过短暂的休息之后,暂时摆脱了阴霾,全身心都投入了音乐当中。 Under the stage Rotter, Felice and Herodotus have waited for there, is listening to the music earnestly, and observes and emulates Victor's command method, comes to Lucien's, but looked at one desolately, does not want to manage this completely arrogantly, is unable to exchange the lunatic who and understand. 台下洛特、菲丽丝和希罗多德已经等待在那里,认真听着乐曲,并观摩维克托的指挥方式,对路西恩的进来,只是冷淡地看了一眼,完全不想理这个自大的、无法交流和理解的疯子。 Their performance and caring of Lucien, instead 11 smile responses, stirs up Felice to show the weak expression. 路西恩对他们的表现并不在意,反而一一微笑回应,惹得菲丽丝露出无力的表情。 Sits on the soft audience chair, Lucien closes the eye, listens attentively to the music of performance, while will ponder tomorrow should the string law to progress to what degree. 坐在柔软的观众椅子上,路西恩闭上眼睛,一边倾听演奏的乐曲,一边思考着明天该将弦律进步到什么程度。 In exquisite music, a half hour quick in the past, Victor and Rhine walked together, having the light smiling face to ask own student: How in the afternoon does the musical instrument practice? Issue in what fingering has and skill?” 优美的乐曲中,半个小时很快过去,维克托和莱茵一起走了下来,带着淡淡笑容地问自己的学生:“下午乐器练习得怎么样?有什么指法和技巧上的问题?” Mr. Victor.” Herodotus who fills with the anger complains, Lucien actually wants to compose the music arrogantly extremely arrogantly, the lord, how long music he studied! His that shoddy, noisy, the coarse music seems like devil's moan, rushed to other zither | Jean room us.” “维克托先生。”满怀怒气的希罗多德控诉起来,“路西恩竟然自大狂妄地想要谱写乐曲,主啊,他才学习了多久的音乐!他那拙劣的、嘈杂的、难听的音乐像是魔鬼的呻吟,将我们赶到了其他琴房。” Lucien looks at Herodotus with a smile, is feeling grateful his complaint at heart: Thanks, thank you publicizes this matter, otherwise I am not good to open the mouth.】 路西恩含笑看着希罗多德,心里感激着他的控诉:【谢谢,谢谢你将这件事宣扬出去,要不然我自己可不好开口。】 The one who sees own complaint to trade is only the Lucien's smiling face, Herodotus cannot bear continue saying: Mr. Victor, you eliminates impractically his, was not clear that the ability the idea, I do not think to hear the noise every day.” 见自己的控诉换来的只是路西恩的笑容,希罗多德忍不住继续道:“维克托先生,您还是打消他这不切实际、不清楚自己能力的想法吧,我可不想每天都听见噪音。” Victor has doubts looks to Lucien: „Are you attempting to compose the music?” 维克托疑惑地看向路西恩:“你在尝试谱写乐曲?” Nearby Rhine, selects the silver eyebrow, sizes up in Lucien takes the music funnily. 一旁的莱茵,微挑银色的眉毛,好笑地打量着路西恩手里拿着的乐谱。 Lucien nods seriously, seriously: Today's matter, and past experience, making me erupt the inspiration suddenly, therefore attempted to write them.” 路西恩一本正经地、郑重地点头:“今天的事情,以及过去的经历,让我突然爆发出灵感,所以尝试着将它们写出来。” Obtains the Lucien affirmative reply, moderate Victor has not scolded directly, but asked: Lucien, is this string law that you write? Can show me?” 得到路西恩肯定的回答,性格温和的维克托并没有直接呵斥,而是问道:“路西恩,这是你写的弦律?能给我看看吗?” Does not have the issue.” The Lucien such obvious region on the body, to let Victor looks, the musician showed own progress, has the authority in the music domain. “没有问题。”路西恩这么明显地带在身上,就是为了让维克托看一看,有一位音乐家证明自己的进步,在音乐领域才有权威性。 Rhine said with a smile curiously: Can also look to me?” 莱茵好奇地笑道:“能给我也看一看吗?” The beginner who studies about two months music, was known as unexpectedly oneself must compose the music, always makes people very curious. 一位才学习两个月左右音乐的初学者,竟然就号称自己要谱写乐曲,总是让人非常好奇的。 Lucien has not certainly rejected, many witness is definitely better, therefore is divided into two music, gave Victor and Rhine. 路西恩当然没有拒绝,多一位证人肯定更好,于是将乐谱分成两份,递给了维克托和莱茵 Rhine receives carefully looked, the light lip cannot bear move, as if must smile to make noise. 莱茵接过来仔细一看,薄薄的嘴唇忍不住动了动,似乎要笑出声来。 Victor eyebrow wrinkles, after looking at a while, the sound heavily and said gently: Lucien, I understand your intention, thanked, but you were only the beginner of music, at present what is most important builds the foundation, studied playing of good musical instrument, 1-2 years later, you attempted to compose the music is not late again.” 维克托眉毛皱起,看了一会儿后,才声音沉重又柔和地说:“路西恩,我明白你的心意,也非常感谢,但你只是音乐的初学者,目前最重要的还是打好基础,学习好乐器的弹奏,1-2之后,你再尝试谱写乐曲也并不晚。” In light of matter that today comes across, Victor can guess correctly why Lucien wants to compose the wish of music to come, therefore has not scolded him, to reprove him, on the contrary a comfort and gratified mood appear. 结合今天遇到的事情,维克托能够猜到路西恩想要谱写乐曲的心愿是为什么而来,所以并没有责骂他、训斥他,相反有一种安慰、欣慰的情绪出现。 As for writes the appraisal of music to Lucien, does this thing have the value of appraisal? 至于对路西恩所写乐曲的评价,这东西有评价的价值吗? Victor has the mood, Rotter, Felice and the others can hear, therefore was suddenly enlighted, produced similarly original Lucien this bastard, the true goal was not to write the music, but made to want for Mr. Victor to share the worry the action to flatter Mr. Victor, how we cannot think! Yeah, we are the simple and honest, simple and honest and educated people, is unable with this sinister deceitful fellow compares the idea. 维克托带着的情绪,洛特、菲丽丝等人都听得出来,于是恍然大悟,产生了类似“原来路西恩这混蛋,真正的目的不是写乐曲,而是做出想为维克托先生分担烦恼的举动来讨好维克托先生,我们怎么就想不到!哎,我们是多憨厚、淳朴、有教养的人啊,无法和这种阴险狡诈的家伙比”的想法。 They looked that immediately becomes to the Lucien's vision complex. 他们看向路西恩的目光顿时变得复杂起来。 Rhine is holding the mentality of seeking novelty, glanced over from the beginning the music that Lucien writes, at this time smiles to appraise and comfort said/tunnel: Although this music, can obviously see Lucien your shy and your immaturity, even is unable to call it the music, but some inside many flash places, for example these two bats...... good.” 莱茵抱着猎奇的心态,将路西恩所写的乐谱从头浏览了一遍,此时微笑评价兼安慰地道:“虽然这乐谱,能够明显看出路西恩你的青涩、你的稚嫩,甚至无法称之为乐曲,但里面还是有不少闪光的地方,比如这两个拍子……就不错。” Said, he while that two bats snort/hum, was the part of Symphony of Fate, letting Lucien has to sigh with emotion his vision to be sinister. 一边说,他一边将那两个拍子哼了出来,正是属于命运交响曲的部分,让路西恩不得不感慨他的眼光毒辣。 Rhine continues saying: „To write the true music, but the places of 1-2 flash are incorrect, Lucien do not consider only to look at the distant place, forgot road that looks at the under foot.” 莱茵继续说道:“不过想要写出真正的乐曲,只是有1-2闪光的地方是不行的,路西恩你不要只顾望着远方,忘了看脚下的路。” Affirmation thank you, Mr. Rhine.” Lucien expressed gratitude politely, then said to Victor: Mr. Victor, I writes the music not to delay me to practice the piano, I really have the inspiration.” “谢谢您的肯定,莱茵先生。”路西恩礼貌地道谢,然后对维克托道:“维克托先生,我写乐曲不会耽误我练习钢琴的,我是真的有灵感。” You......” Victor wanted to say anything, but the recent matter made him very agitated, was exhausted, is really incapable of discussing, therefore prepared and other concerts to end again well and Lucien discusses , one month was not long, he shakes the head, good, so long as you did not delay the practice of piano, can try, was an exercise.” “你……”维克托想要说什么,可最近的事情让他非常烦躁,身心疲惫,实在无力多谈,于是准备等音乐会结束再好好和路西恩谈一谈,要知道,一个月的时间并不长,他摇了摇头,“好吧,只要你不耽误钢琴的练习,可以试试,也算是一种锻炼吧。” Rotter, Felice and the others thought that looks strangely to Lucien , does this fellow really want to write the music unexpectedly?! Really absurd! 洛特、菲丽丝等人觉得非常诡异地看向路西恩,,这家伙竟然是真的想写乐曲?!真是荒谬! ............ ………… After obtaining Victor's agreement, Lucien is conducting routinely noise manufacturer the life, the little progress hidden in the limitless noise. 得到维克托的同意后,路西恩按部就班地进行着自己“噪音制造者”的生活,一点点的进步隐藏在漫无边际的噪音里面。 Although the Lucien Symphony of Fate string law started afterward becomes many, but already to Rotter, Felice, Herodotus noise producing contradiction, so long as Lucien plays from the beginning, leaves either, either plays resoundingly, Lucien own musical instrument is also paying attention to the mixture trash melody in addition, as well as its ball insufficiently good, therefore they after a little worried that own music talent by noise smoothing by grinding- discovery custom, the noise does not seem fearful beside, has not paid attention to the change of Lucien music truly. 虽然后来路西恩命运交响曲的弦律开始变多,但早就对噪音产生抵触的洛特、菲丽丝、希罗多德,只要路西恩一开始弹奏,就要么离开,要么将自己的乐器演奏得更加响亮,加上路西恩自己也注意着夹杂垃圾旋律,以及本身弹得不够好,所以他们除了有点担心自己的音乐天分会被噪音给磨平-“发现习惯之后,噪音似乎也没那么可怕了”之外,并没有真正去关注过路西恩乐曲的变化。 As the last week will soon arrive, Lucien after repeated, the long-term practice, can play Symphony of Fate finally reluctantly, although inside many skillful things, but also is unable to complete as before, but the entire string law was unable to cover. 随着最后一个礼拜即将到来,路西恩经过反复的、长时间的练习,终于能够勉强弹奏一遍命运交响曲了,虽然里面很多技巧性的东西,还依旧无法完成,但整个弦律已经无法掩盖了。 ; ;
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