stretch/openTanandlittlewhiteNeston the sofa, almostfell asleep, knocks on a dooruntillittleTeacherwillow, looks for the melonbaby, herauntarrived.
张叹和小白窝在沙发上,差点睡着了,直到小柳老师来敲门,寻找瓜娃子,她舅妈到了。littlewhitesmall handwipes the cheekshastily, ranhurriedly.
小白连忙小手抹嘴巴子,风风火火跑了出去。Had/Left the littleredhorseacademy, the horseorchidgivesherback of the headimmediately, scolded: „littlewhite, how manytimes the auntinstigated, alwaysin the family/homedo not drilltowardBossstretch/open, doesn't yourclawlisten tomywordsis?”
出了小红马学园,马兰花立刻给了她后脑勺一下,骂道:“小小白,舅妈唆了多少次,不要老是往张老板家里钻,你爪子不听我的话是不是?”littlewhitesaidindignantly: „Whyhits the little friend???”
小白气愤道:“为啥子打小朋友???”„Youfirstansweredmyissue, youinBossstretch/openinfamily/home?”
“你先回答我的问题,你是不是在张老板家里?”„Yesclaw?”
“是吖爪子了?”„Did Iinstigatewithyounot? Alwaysin the family/homedo not runtowardBossstretch/open, youare the femalebaby, heis the malebaby, what do youwantto live in?”
“我跟你唆了不?不要老是往张老板家里跑,你是女娃娃,他是男娃娃,你想住啥子嘛?”„Ideliverstickgoodchickensai.”
“我去送棒棒鸡噻。”„Delivered?”
“送了么?”„Delivered.”
“送了嗷。”„Did Imake the words that youinstigatedyouinstigate?”
“我让你唆的话你唆了没?”„Instigated.”
“唆了嗷。”„Whatinstigated? Youinstigatemeto listen.”
“唆了啥子?你唆我听听。”„Thank youBossstretch/openleadsmeto go outto play, althoughmyauntis a melonbaby, butIam a good person, the stickgoodchickensuperstick that Imake, eatstoyou, ifyoulikeeating, a to praise, did remembernot?”
“谢谢你哦张老板带我出去玩,虽然我舅妈是一个瓜娃子,但是我是好人,我做的棒棒鸡超级棒,给你吃,如果你喜欢吃,就点个赞叭,记住了不?”Then, discovered the horseorchidstoodwas being motionless, visitsherunemotionally, goodterrifyingappearance.
说完,发现马兰花站着不动了,面无表情地看着她,好恐怖的样子。„Lives, whatlives in the aunt? Did youbump into the little rascal?”
“住,住啥子嘛舅妈?你撞见小鬼了吗?”
The horseorchidsaidgloomily: „Inyourtreasure the melonbaby of treasure qi, Iquiteteachesyouto know that fierce of father, youcrawlto come under attackto the father!”
马兰花阴森森地说:“你个宝里宝气的瓜娃子,我好教你知道老子的厉害,你给老子爬过来挨打!”littlewhitejustwantsto run, was sentencedherto sentenceby the horseorchidin advancein advance, seizes, carries, punches the fartfart, the punchedlittle friendyelled,in the smalllaneresounds the woofimmediately, moreoverare getting more and more, continuallyLarge expanse, bybigthief.
小白刚想跑,就被马兰花预判到了她的预判,一把捉住,拎起来,揍屁屁,揍的小朋友哇哇大叫,小巷子里立刻响起狗吠声,而且越来越多,连成片,遭了大贼似的。„Dogdogsavesme, savesme, bites the horseorchida bit fasterblack, horseorchidfart~”
“狗狗救我嗷,救我嗷,快点咬马兰花,马兰花屁儿黑嗷~”
In walkshits, goes hometo let off the little friend.
一路走一路打,回到家里才放过小朋友。
The little friendis miserablesitson the stool, is in a daze, thinks why the unclearwhite horseorchidpunchesher, shedisplaysspicygood.
小朋友惨兮兮地坐在凳子上,发呆,还是想不明白马兰花为什么揍她,她表现的辣么好。
The auntisfartis really black.
舅妈果然是屁儿黑啊。Entered the bathroomwhile the aunt, littlewhiteshakes to wake the uncle.
趁着舅妈进了卫生间,小白把舅舅摇醒。„Uncleuncle”
“舅舅舅舅”Had not responded.
没反应。littlewhitegas channel/angrily said: „Bai Jianping! Is yourclawresting??”
小白气道:“白建平!你爪子又在睡??”UncleBai Jianpingstops the snoringfinally, waking up, seeingislittlewhite, askedblurry: „little does white, whatlive inyou?”
舅舅白建平终于停止呼噜,醒来,见是小白,迷迷糊糊地问:“小白嗷,住啥子嘛你?”„Aunthitme.”
“舅妈打了我。”„Youhit.”
“你打回去嘛。”„Iwantto nipher, butIcannot be victoriousshe.”
“我想咬她的,但是我打不过她嗷。”„Youget what one deservessai.”
“那你活该噻。”„Shovels the shovel!”littlewhiteindignantsay/way, uncle, no matteruses, did not count on.
“铲铲!”小白气愤道,舅舅不管用,指望不了。
The gate of bathroomopens, the horseorchidappears, is staring atlittlewhitemaliciously: „Youinwhat?”
卫生间的门打开,马兰花出现,不怀好意地盯着小白:“你在住啥子?”„I, Iam countingstarsai.”
“我,我在数星星噻。”„Does myclawhearyouto scoldme?”
“我爪子听到你骂我?”„Somematters, youreardefinitelyentered the insectsnot.”
“莫有的事,你耳朵肯定进了虫虫。”„Behind youdo not wantto scoldme.”
“你不要背后骂我嗷。”„Iam a goodbaby.”
“我是个好娃娃。”„You is a goodbaby, what does thatgrabyouruncle'shairto live in?”
“你是个好娃娃,那就抓着你舅舅的头发住啥子?”littlewhitelooks, aiyu, reallygrabsuncle'shair, ~
小白一看,哎呦,真的抓着舅舅的头发呢,嗬嗬嗬~
The unclelieson the bed, is staring, silentvisitsher.
舅舅躺在床上,瞪着眼睛,无声地看着她。Well? Didn't close the eyeto resta moment ago?
咦?刚才不是闭上眼睛睡了吗?littlewhiteembarrassedsmiles, the small handcoversonuncle'sface, made a movement that restssleeping, said: „Uncleyoucloseeyesaia bit faster, rests, clever.”
小白嗬嗬尬笑,小手盖在舅舅的脸上,做了一个安息就寝的动作,说:“舅舅你快点闭上眼睛噻,睡告嗷,乖嗷。”Bai Jianpingcloses the eye, but the mouthis speaking.
白建平闭上眼睛,但是嘴巴却在说话。„little does whiteyourmelonbaby, yourcan be victoriousaunt, bullymeis?”
“小白你个瓜娃子,你打不过舅妈,就来欺负我是不是?”„Well? Does the uncle, yourclawrestalso to instigate the words? Are youinstigating the sleep-talking? Youare quite fierce.”
“咦?舅舅,你爪子睡告还能唆话咧?你在唆梦话吗?你好厉害哟。”„Myfiercehammer, youpullmyhair, I who catcham quite sore, Iawokesorely.”
“我厉害个锤子,你抓我的头发,抓的我好疼,我疼醒了。”„~ the aunt, Bossstretch/opengaveyouto selectto praise.”
“嗬嗬嗬~舅妈,嗷,张老板给你点了赞呢。”Ma Lanperianthshifted the attention, asked: „Does heinstigatedeliciousnot?”
马兰花被转移了注意力,问道:“他唆好吃不?”„Stickgoodchickenstick, hesaid.”
“棒棒鸡棒棒的,他说。”„Is spicysai?”
“辣不辣噻?”„It is not spicy, thatishisstrong point.”
“不辣,那是他的强项嗷。”„Thatis good, next timewill givehimto putagain.”
“那就好,下次再给他多放点。”„...... Bossstretch/opengave back toyouto write the excrement.”
“……张老板还给你写了屎呢。”„What?!”
“啥子?!”„Excrement.”
“屎。”„Whatexcrement?”
“啥子屎?”„Isexcrementsai.”
“就是屎噻。”„Hammer, isn't he stickgoodchicken that instigatesmeto makeis the excrement? Does hisclawinstigate?”
“锤子,他不会是唆我做的棒棒鸡是屎吧?他爪子唆的?”„Heinstigateslike this.”
“他是这样唆的。”littlewhitereadstretch/openTanxie the poem:
小白把张叹写的诗念出来:Stickgoodchicken that „ horseorchid you make
“马兰花你做的棒棒鸡Without a doubt
毫无疑问Isunder the entire day
是全天下Most deliciousstickgoodchicken. ”
最好吃的棒棒鸡嗷。”
The horseorchidridicules saying: „Adzuki beanDingyouare quite stupid, othersthisis the poem, is not the excrement, do youinstigateyouaresilly?”
马兰花笑骂道:“小豆丁你好蠢哦,人家这是诗,不是屎,你唆你是不是傻?”Meanwhileshecurls the lip, did this that thisBossstretch/open the personmoldhuman appearance, the clawwritesalsocall the poem? Herelementary schoolcultureknowsthisquitedisappointingly.
同时她撇撇嘴,这个张老板人模人样,爪子写的这也叫诗?她小学文化都晓得这个好差劲咯。Slightlywent in vain, night, littleredhorseacademyactuallysmalllives it up, the lamp of instituteentranceshone, oldLiputs out the chair, sitsenjoys the cool airin the courtyard, greetswith the guardians who comingto send and pick up the little friend.
小白走了,夜已深,小红马学园却小小的热闹起来,院门口的灯亮了,老李搬出椅子,坐在院子里乘凉,和前来接送小朋友的家长们打招呼。stretch/openTantakes a bath, sitsbefore the desk, turns on the computer, the internetsearches " Tomorrow'sYour » news.
张叹洗了个澡,坐到书桌前,打开电脑,上网搜索《明天的你》的新闻。Shortonehour, had come out the review article.
短短一个多小时,就已经出来了许多评论文章。«ManufactureExcellentYouthMovie»
《一部制作精良的青春爱情片》«Tomorrow'syou>: Ihad also thoughtdeath ends all troubles, untilImetwarmyour»
《明天的你>:曾经我也想过一了百了,直到我遇见温暖的你》
......
……stretch/openTanglanced throughseveral, thought that theseperson of battle efficienciesare really weak, hefirstholds troops, the nextissue of videowill make«Tomorrow'sYour», the depthwill set at variancethisyouthlovemovie.
张叹翻阅了几篇,觉得这些人战斗力真弱,他先按兵不动,下一期的视频就做《明天的你》,深度解构这部青春爱情电影。Heseesinmanynewsto mentionSuLan who simultaneously attended the premiere.
他同时看到不少新闻中提到参加首映礼的苏澜。In the classWeChatgroup, the recentinformationis unceasing, the peopleare chattingSuLanto attend " Tomorrow'sYour » matterhotly, somepeopleemittedmanypictures, is the news mediaimmediateissueinonline.
班级微信群里,新信息不断,众人正在热聊苏澜参加《明天的你》的事情,有人放出了多张照片,都是新闻媒体即时发布在网上的。
The groupbillowsalso, chattedonewitheveryoneoccasionally, the person of sayingwere countless.
群里苏澜也在,偶尔和大家聊一句,接话的人无数。
The Subillowsandstretch/openTanareschoolmates, whatshereadwas the directorspecialty, butoneselfactuallyaccident of sorts, whenbigtwobecame the actor, rose upby an ancient costumeimmortalherotitlesoundquickly, steps into the entertainment world.
苏澜和张叹是同学,她读的是导演专业,但本人却机缘巧合,在大二的时候成了演员,很快凭借一部古装仙侠剧名声鹊起,踏入演艺圈。
The Subillowsmake a movieandworkevery so oftenoutside, the time of attending classare not much, originallytwo peopleshouldno happening together, who letsopen the sighingpredecessoris the sea king.
苏澜很多时候在外拍戏和工作,上课的时间不多,本来两人应该没什么交集,但谁让张叹的前身是海王呢。Canbe called the sea king, no matter how the reputation, is a little affirmed that will behewill truly pull up the younger sistervery much.
能被称为海王,不管名声如何,有一点是肯定的,那就是他确实很会撩妹。Subillowsinborn charming, stretch/openTanwill certainly not ignore, such a bigbeautiful woman, is a classmate, gets there first, bigtimehelaunched the crazypursue.
苏澜天生丽质,张叹当然不会熟视无睹,这么一个大美女,还是同班同学,近水楼台先得月,大一的时候他展开了疯狂追求。Althoughhas not caught up, buttwo peoplerelationsare intimate withcompared with the average person, untilstretch/openTandang the sea king, SuLancaifar away fromhim, became the ordinary friend who the nodmadeafterward.
虽然没追上,但两人的关系比一般人亲近,直到后来张叹当了海王,苏澜才远离他,成了点头交的普通朋友。Todaystretch/openTanhas not thought that will run intoSuLan, has not thought that she in crowdcandiscoverher, does not know that sherecognizes.
今天张叹没想到会遇到苏澜,更没想到人群中的她能发现她,不知道她有没有认出。Hiscell phoneputson the nightstand, arrived at the living roombut actuallyonecup of lukewarm water, in the eveningate the stickgoodchicken, is too spicy, causesalwaysthirstily.
他手机搁床头柜上,到客厅倒了一杯温水,晚上吃了棒棒鸡,太辣,导致总是口渴。Dranktwo, placeson the mostcupwater the nightstand, turned on the desk lamp, turned off the hanging lamp, on the lying downbed, in the roomwas very peaceful, cricketintoot tootcalling, the clock and watch on wallmadedádá dá the sound.
喝了两口,把大半杯水放在床头柜上,把台灯打开,关了吊灯,躺床上,房间里很安静,蟋蟀在嘟嘟的叫,墙上的钟表发出哒哒哒的声音。„Ifothereveryonenotopinions, then the scriptsymposiumarrived atthisto end, broke up.”
“如果大家没有其他意见,那么剧本讨论会到此结束,散会吧。”„Congratulatesstretch/openTan, yourscreenwritergroups, completed a bigproject.”
“恭喜张叹,还有你们的编剧小组,完成了一个大项目。”„«HaplessBear»scriptqualityis very high, has the laughingstockvery much, lookedput the thoughts.”
“《倒霉熊》的剧本质量很高,很有笑料,看的出花了心思。”„Congratulatesyoustretch/openTan.”
“恭喜你啊张叹。”
......
……In the morning, the movie studioheld " HaplessBear » scriptsymposium, appraised the first quarterscript that stretch/openTanand the othersjustfinishedcollectively.
这天上午,制片厂召开《倒霉熊》剧本讨论会,集体评审张叹等人刚写完的第一季剧本。Actually the scripthad issued the screenwriterspresent one day ahead of schedule, everyonehas looked, this opinion of raisingbeforeonmeetsraised, immediatelysubmitson the script of meeting, defers to the edition of correctionsrevision.
其实剧本已经提前一天发给了在座的编剧们,大家都看过,该提的意见在上会之前都提了,当下提交上会的剧本,是按照修改意见修订的版本。Attending the meetinghasministerYang Senlin of animationservices department, hasdirectorLibright/light of team, team leaderoldLiu of scriptevaluation group, screenwriterthreegroups of team leaderFengDong, and team leaders of anotherthreegroups, meanwhilehaveseveralseniorscreenwriters, for exampleLuo Ming.
参会的有动漫事业部的部长杨森林,有项目组的导演李亮,剧本评审小组的组长老刘,还有编剧三组的组长冯栋,以及另外三个小组的组长,同时还有几个资深编剧,比如罗明。Thisscriptappraisal meeting, cannotsay that is the formalism, buttrulyformserious offenseactual result, a littlesimilartea party.
这种剧本评审会,不能说是形式主义,但确实形式大过实际效果,有点类似茶话会。Openssighsis very positive, presentis the leaderor the senior who the stancesuspends, at the meetinghisentire journeytakes the small book, writesto draw, writes downeveryone'ssuggestion, onemeets, the noterecorded5pages, together withdrawing a portrait of littlewhitebaby shoe.
张叹姿态摆的很正,在座的都是领导或者前辈,会上他全程拿着小本本,写写画画,把大家的建议记下来,一场会下来,笔记记了五页,连同画了一个小白童鞋的画像。Everyoneencouragesto be in the majority, expressed that favorsstretch/openTanvery much, the young people have the potential, thistime, the movie studioisknows that hadto opensighssuchyoungscreenwriter.
大家鼓励居多,都表示很看好张叹,年轻人有潜力,这一次,制片厂算是都知道有张叹这么个青年编剧了。
The young man who justgraduated, did not fearnot to have the talent, feared that cannotcrop up, especiallywrote a playthisline, mustbe ableto write, mustsay,emotional quotient was unable to lower, was almost versatile, anycanbrush outmost people, stayed behindalsoonthatseveralonly childseedlings.
刚毕业的年轻小伙,不怕没才华,就怕不能冒头,尤其编剧这行,又要能写,又要会说,情商还不能低,几乎全能,任何一项都可以刷掉大部分人,留下的也就那几根独苗苗。
After 11responded toeveryone, stretch/openTanshouhad the notebook, returned to the office.
一一回应大家后,张叹收起笔记本,回到办公室。JiangRong the moodhas been waitingdisturbedly, seeshimto come back, firstasked: „Eldest child, what kind of?”
姜蓉一直心情忐忑地等着,见他回来,第一时间问道:“老大,怎么样?”stretch/openTanhas not kept guessing, saiddirectly: „Successfullypasses.”
张叹没卖关子,直接说:“顺利通过。”„It is good ~”JiangRonghepermitsJianand the others the excitementcan be seen in speech and appearance, rejoiced, their timeshave not run intoextremely evilParty A.
“太棒啦~”姜蓉和许健等人兴奋之情溢于言表,同时庆幸,他们这次没有遇到万恶的甲方。permitsJianseesJiangRonglikelychild, said with a smile: „Ihad said that the scriptsymposium is actually the tea party, generallyhas been able, youlook atyouto be with trepidation, oneselffrighten himself.”
许健见姜蓉像个小孩子似的,笑道:“我早就说了,剧本讨论会其实就是茶话会,一般都会过的,你看你提心吊胆的,自己吓唬自己。”JiangRongsaid: „Said that said that who knows that iftheseleaders and seniors, seeingstretch/openTan the youngqualificationsare shallow, what to dofeels embarrassedhim.”
姜蓉说:“说是这么说,但谁知道呢,万一那些领导和前辈,见张叹年纪轻资历浅,为难他怎么办。”Thisis the firstscript that sheparticipates, alwayshas the specialsignificance for the first time.
这是她参与的第一个剧本,第一次总是有特别的意义。permitsJianlenggawked, thisbut actually was also. Hehad attended the appraisal meeting, has the rookieto write a playbyreddening all over the face of review, althoughcrossedfinally, but the processis tortuous.
许健愣了愣,这倒也是。他曾经参加过评审会,就有新人编剧被点评的满脸通红,虽然最后过了,但过程曲折。stretch/openTansaid: „Ok, ok, do not let one's thoughts wander, everyone is very goodto speak, mademanybeneficialsuggestionstous, JiangRong, the notebookgivesyou, reorganizesto giveeveryoneto have a look.”
张叹说:“好了,好了,别乱想,大家都很好说话,给我们提了很多有益的建议,姜蓉,笔记本给你,整理出来给大家看看。”JiangRongreceived the notebook, turnsturns, turnstolittlewhitehead picture, asked: „Does eldest child, drawtowhom?”
姜蓉接过笔记本,翻啊翻,翻到小白的头像,问:“老大,给谁画的?”stretch/openTantakes away the notebookhastily: „Ireorganize.”
张叹连忙把笔记本收走:“还是我来整理吧。”
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