Wishing We Last Forever? 但愿人长久？ Great distance altogether cicada Juan? 千里共蝉娟？ The Zhang Ye poetry recited, the residual sound, people the goose flesh on the scene all has still blasted out, keeps silent in a flash! The entire auditorium is rippling the echo of microphone! 张烨的诗词已经朗诵完了,余音犹在,在场众人的鸡皮疙瘩已经全都炸开了似的,一瞬间噤若寒蝉！整个大礼堂都荡漾着麦克风的回声！ This poem, shocking full house! 此诗一出,震惊满堂！ Meng Dongguo hears 50% times dumbfounded! 孟东国听到一半的时候就呆住了！ Big Thunder Zheng Anbang and small red mushroom and other Writer's Association Teacher were also scared! 大雷郑安邦和小红蘑菇等作协的老师们也傻眼了！ Let alone they, looked over the atmosphere of entire assembly hall to know, the complete audiences who below sits had one are, all of a sudden did not have the sound, Host Zhang Huo were shocked take the microphone to forget beginning conversation, Female Host Sun Mengjie, she stared the looking blank eyeball , the microphone on hand falls off from the control slightly has not thought that fell until the microphone on the red carpet of chairman's podium has sent out a numerous dull thumping sound she to recover, all people were also moved then by this sound have pulled back the body, as if just space moon of Zhang Ye poem crawled! 别说他们了,纵观整个礼堂的气氛就能知道,下面坐着的全部观众有一个算一个,都一下子没有了声响,就连主持人张火都惊呆地拿着话筒忘了开腔,女主持孙梦洁更甚,她瞪直了眼睛,手上的话筒从手心中脱落都丝毫未觉,直到话筒摔在了主席台的红地毯上发出一声重重的闷响她才回过神来,然后所有人也都被这一声响动拉回了躯壳,似乎刚从张烨诗中的天上的月亮爬下来！ Whish! 哗！ The shout exploded suddenly! 喊声猛然爆开了！ „Good word!” “好词！” „crap!” “我了个去！” „Day! I heard anything!” “天！我听到了什么！” „God comes the pen! The gods come the pen!” “神来之笔！神来之笔啊！” „Was too flamboyant! This word cow exploded simply!” “太牛逼了！这首词简直牛炸了啊！” Some people have stood unrestrainedly, applauds loudly! 有一些人更是情不自禁地站了起来,大声叫好！ Under Zhao Gouzhou Leader Zhao supervises with startled of Wang Xiaomei also face is a beauty! 底下的赵国洲赵总监和王小美也一脸的惊为天人！ Only listens to Big Sister Zhou to call out in alarm said: „Such good word! Really is Teacher Little Zhang the scene creates? My God! My Buddha! My Guan Yin! My Jesus! My God!” Teaching that she believes are very many, all kinds of type type has, „that «Petrel» is the scene does, «The Flying Bird and Fish» and «A Generation» is on site to display, «See Or Not Seeing» wrote at that time, this does also hold the Buddha foot to come out? How possible! The head of this Teacher Little Zhang is how long!” 只听周大姐惊呼道:“这么好的词！小张老师真是现场创作的？我的上帝啊！我的佛祖啊！我的观世音菩萨啊！我的耶稣啊！我的老天爷啊！”她信的教还挺多,五花八门样儿样儿都有,“那首《海燕》是现场作的,《飞鸟与鱼》和《一代人》是临场发挥的,《见或不见》是当时写的,这首也是临阵抱佛脚出来的？怎么可能啊！这个小张老师的脑袋到底是怎么长的啊！” ! 呼啦！ Also does not know that is whose first applauds! Burst into thunderous applause! 也不知是谁第一个鼓掌的！掌声雷动！ This did not describe! Really is thunder same sound! The ceiling of entire assembly hall as if must be moved generally! Except that the applause could not hear any Voice! 这不是形容！真的是雷一样的动静！整个礼堂的天花板都仿佛要被掀掉了一般！除了掌声已经听不到任何声音了！ Where is this word good? Many amateur possibly could not say the way, but they know that was definitely good. 这首词好在哪里？很多外行可能说不出门道,但他们知道肯定是好的。 Only then Meng Dongguo and Zheng Anbang their several person clear this words are any boundaries, this word writes too, has launched the imagination and ponder regarding the Mid-Autumn Festival bright moonlight certainly, integrates during society sentiment of the vicissitudes of life to philosophical of universe life tracks down! 只有孟东国和郑安邦他们几个人清楚这首词到底是个什么境界,这首词写的太绝了,围绕中秋明月展开想象和思考,把人世间的悲欢离合之情纳入对宇宙人生的哲理性追寻之中！ When does the bright moonlight have? Raises one's wine cup asks the blue sky. 明月几时有？把酒问青天。 Does not know when space palace error and now evening are? 不知天上宫阙、今夕是何年？ Simply are the classics, are hanging the charm, some words and phrases even must chew repeatedly many can understand its profound ideal condition! For example that does ride the wind to return? Why can use „turning over to” character? Writer's Association several people start to listen to the first time does not want to understand, but behind hearing, they gradually understood, the magical brush that this „turning over to” character it can be said that adds the finishing touch, expressed Zhang Ye this original author not to treat as in world mortal one's own from the start, but thinks that one's own was an immortal, unique in Shi, therefore wanted „turning over to” to return to the immortal palace, but did not go to the immortal palace, seemed like insolent, but the vigor of this word also all of a sudden was separated from in Shi, has promoted more than one scale! In addition finally that conclusion, in any case Writer's Association several Teacher and writers early were shaken cannot speak! 简直句句都是经典,句句都挂着神韵,有些词句甚至要反复咀嚼很多遍才能理解其深刻的意境！比如那句乘风归去？为什么要用“归”字？作协的几个人开始听第一遍的时候也没想明白,但听到后面,他们才渐渐懂了,这个“归”字可以说是画龙点睛的神笔,表达了张烨这个原作者压根没有把自己当做世间凡人,而认为自己是仙人,超脱于世,所以才要“归”回仙宫,而不是去到仙殿,看似张狂,可这首词的精气神也一下子脱离于世,提升了不止一个档次！再加上最后那一句收尾,反正作协的十几个老师和作家都早被震得说不出话了！ Zhang Ye? 张烨？ Who is this? 这是谁啊？ This what person? 这到底什么人啊？ How many people besides Meng Dongguo small red mushroom to some Zhang Ye also little understanding, knows, other these Writer's Association Teacher actually did not know that this person, before even listened not to listen, therefore is startled all of a sudden seriously, is the person who can write this word possibly the obscure generation? How possibly is the new person who they hear something never heard of before? Moreover what must know, they may prepare many days for this Mid-Autumn Festival Poetry Meet, but this person mentioned by name! The preparation free time who as soon as he carves do not have! Only is such one! Here nobody thought that one's own can achieve! Let alone has written such a Heaven-shaking, Earth-shattering poetry! 除了孟东国小红蘑菇几人对张烨还有一点点了解,知道一些,其他那些作协的老师们却都根本不认识这个人,以前甚至听都没听过,所以一下子都惊得不得了,能写出这种词的人怎么可能是默默无名之辈？怎么可能是个他们闻所未闻的新人？而且要知道的是,他们这些人可都为这次中秋诗会准备了很多天,可这个人却是被点名上来的！他一刻的准备工夫都没有！光是这么一手！这里就没有一个人觉得自己可以做到的！更何况是写出了这么一首惊天动地的诗词！ When the poetic world had such a ruthless person! 诗坛何时出了这么个狠人啊！ Two minutes, the applause continued for enough two minutes to fall! 两分钟,掌声持续了足足两分钟才落下！ „Zhang Ye!” “张烨！” „Zhang Ye!” “张烨！” „Zhang Ye!” “张烨！” „Zhang Ye!” “张烨！” Then, shouted to make a sound neatly, many people shouted the Zhang Ye name together, cheered for him, inflated for him, supported for him! 然后,一声声呼喊齐刷刷地响了起来,很多人齐呼张烨的名字,为他喝彩,为他打气,为他撑腰！ Why? 为什么？ Before because Meng Dongguo, bullied person! 就因为孟东国之前太欺负人了！ Denied Zhang Ye in the presence of everyone? Added that he is amateur? Also does roll-call clamoring make him come up? Also can select the mistake subsequently to direct everybody to him to compose a poem to write the word? Do not forget this is Beijing broadcasts Radio Station, is the Zhang Ye unit, the colleague is bullied this, everybody also a little came air/Qi! Then saw that Zhang Ye sends the invincible might to make a wonderful poetry greatly, the people also with hitting the chicken blood same have cheered. In the surface is shouted that the Zhang Ye name cheered to him, in fact in shabby Meng Dongguo and big thunder that group of people! 当众否定张烨？还说他是业余的？还点名叫嚣让他上来？还要给他挑错误继而指点大家怎么写诗写词？别忘了这可是京城广播电台,是张烨的单位,同事被欺负成这样,大家也有点来气了！这下见到张烨大发神威地做出一首如此神乎其神的诗词,众人也跟打了鸡血一样助威起来。表面上是喊张烨的名字给他喝彩,实际上就是在寒碜孟东国和大雷那帮人呢！ Assistant Station Chief Jia a black face, makes an effort to clap, this is live broadcast, does anything! 贾副台长一黑脸,起来用力拍拍手,这还是直播呢,都搞什么啊！ Saw Station Leader to act, everybody stopped the shout, one after another has sat down, immediately waited to watch the fun! 见到台领导出面了,大家才停下了喊声,也都陆续坐下了,随即都等着看热闹了！ Host Zhang Huofang was spatial, may calculate that can speak, Inhale said: „Teacher Zhang Ye, does your this word name? Can tell us?” 主持人张火方是得了空,可算能说话了,吸气道:“张烨老师,你这首词叫什么名字？能告诉我们吗？” Zhang Ye smiles, „called «Shuidiao Getou».” 张烨笑笑,“叫《水调歌头》。” Sun Mengjie said: „I do not know how should appraise, I am amateur, does not understand the poetry, but I just the microphone fell does not know that you should know I had to this word deeply loved, I loved this word, this word beautiful to extreme!” 孙梦洁道:“我已经不知道该怎么评价了,我是外行,也不懂诗词,但我刚刚连话筒掉了都不知道,你应该知道我对这首词有多么热爱了,真的,我爱死这首词了啊,这词美到了极致！” Zhang Ye is also person of anxiousing to stir up trouble, by said: „Has not related, you are amateur, but we have the expert on the spot, is Writer's Association specialized Teacher.” Turns the head, he looked to Meng Dongguo and big thunder, they when Zhang Ye recited poetry sat under the stage, but Zhang Ye was one had found them, „Meng Teacher, big thunder Teacher, just two Teacher said that my work did not have the Literature nature, before had also said I possibly cannot compose a poem, um, I also acknowledged that I was a beginner, was amateur, I was also modest with several Teacher seek for advice, wants to ask you to help me raise the level, this was Pin Shi the link, can direct me?” 张烨也是个唯恐天下不乱的主儿,逐而道:“没关系,你是外行,但咱们现场有内行啊,都是作协专业的老师们。”一转头,他看向了孟东国和大雷,俩人在张烨念诗的时候已经坐回了台下,但张烨还是一眼就找到了他们,“孟老师,大雷老师,刚刚两位老师说我的作品没有文学性,之前也说过我可能不太会写诗,嗯,我也承认我是初学者,是业余的,我也虚心跟几位老师求教,想请你们帮助我提高一下水平,这个是品诗的环节,能不能指点我一下？” Zhang Huo is almost happy. 张火差点乐出来。 Sun Mengjie also dumbfounded . 孙梦洁也一阵哭笑不得。 hear word, the big thunder almost puts out an old blood, almost came up motherfucker, your Uncle! I direct you! 闻言,大雷几乎吐出一口老血,差点就上去骂娘了,你大爷！我指点你个屁啊！ Identifies the issue? Finds fault? This word I did not have the understanding of complete significance thoroughly! Where on me finds fault to you! Although is not convinced, although is bringing angry, but this angry more becomes angry out of shame, objective, the big thunder also has to acknowledge that Zhang Ye this stem book is perfect, let alone they, anybody feared that cannot pick up the problem, Zhang Ye this is shabby they! 找问题？挑毛病？这首词我还没有完全意义的理解透呢！我上哪里给你挑毛病去啊！虽然不服气,虽然带着恼怒,但这个恼怒更多则是恼羞成怒,客观来讲,大雷也不得不承认张烨这一首词根本就是完美无缺的,别说他们了,任何人怕是也挑不出毛病来啊,张烨这是寒碜他们呢！ Meng Dongguo is more direct, simply lowered the head to talk in whispers with a nearby Writer's Association youth, seemed chatting the verse, pretended has not heard the Zhang Ye words. 孟东国更直接,干脆跟旁边的一个作协的青年低头窃窃私语上了,似乎在聊诗句,假装没听见张烨的话。 The people who before clamored do not speak! 之前叫嚣的人都不吭声了！ Facing such a startled world indescribably tragic word, they have no way to speak! 面对这么一首惊天地泣鬼神的词,他们也没法吭声！ Zhang Ye sees that did not think any meaning, does not need to say again that he has sent out Voice with the one's own work, let alone this was scene live broadcast, many audience were listening, Zhang Ye was not good to talk too much, too much talk leads to error, will make him fall into on the contrary passively. Just although these words the discerning people know that Zhang Ye is counter-attacking, but he said also absolutely safe, has acknowledged one's own was amateur, was the beginner asks to advise the instruction, others could not say anything. Therefore he hands over to give back to Host the microphone, prepared to leave office. 张烨见状,也觉得没什么意思了,也没必要再多说,他已经用自己的作品发出了声音,何况这可是现场直播,多少听众都听着呢,张烨不好多言,言多必失,反倒会让他陷入被动。刚刚那些话虽然明眼人都知道张烨是在回击,可他说的也万无一失,一直承认自己是业余的,是初学者求指教指导的,别人说不出什么。于是他将话筒递还给主持人,准备下台了。 Opens the fire actually warmheartedness, „Teacher Zhang, although entered second to comment the poem link, but also was Mid-Autumn Festival Poetry Meet, your this word definitely also will be voted by the netizens the evaluation, can you garner votes to one's own?” 张火倒是热心肠,“张老师,虽说是进入第二个评诗环节了,但也一直都是中秋诗会的,你这首词肯定也会被网友们投票评选,你要不要给自己拉拉票？” Zhang Ye turns head to smile, „is all right, does not use.” 张烨回头微笑,“没事儿,不用了。” Doesn't need to garner votes? Meng Dongguo they may garner votes, don't you use? 不用拉票？孟东国他们可都拉票了啊,你不用？ Zhang Huo does not understand that Zhang Ye is any manner, can only respect his idea. 张火也不明白张烨到底是个什么态度,只能尊重他的想法。 Following Meng Dongguo listened, narrowed the eye gently, didn't garner votes? Garners votes has not related actually, this time first he thinks that one's own settled on as before. 下面的孟东国听了,轻轻眯起了眼睛,不拉票？拉票其实也没关系,这次的第一名他认为自己依旧是拿定了。 The reason has two, its one, he thought that the one's own poem is also very good, he did not acknowledge that one's own «Mid-Autumn Festival Rainy night Has Thinking» compared with Zhang Ye «Shuidiao Getou» difference many, he thinks that the one's own work is recent an unusual Mid-Autumn Festival poetry excellent work. Second, he has had the superiority on time. But Meng Dongguo Poetry Meet first enters the stage first to read poems, 12 points to two finished, two hours of free time, this link draws is longer, the population of voting are also naturally more, this is indisputable, this is also the reason why arranges Meng Dongguo first coming up. He as Beijing Vice-President Writer's Association, the leader of Beijing poems and songs, can attend this competition, if takes the matter that second did not beam with joy, he is also good, the broadcasting station, must certainly guarantee as far as possible he can win the big game champion, otherwise the Meng Dongguo estimate will not participate, will affect his prestige. 原因有二,其一,他觉得自己的诗也很好,他并不承认自己的《中秋雨夜有思》比张烨的《水调歌头》差多少,他自认为自己作品是一首近几年少有的中秋诗词佳作。其二,他占了时间上的优势。孟东国可是诗会第一个出场第一个吟诗的,12点到两点结束,足足有两个小时的工夫,这个环节拉的越长,投票的人数自然也越多,这都是无可争议的,这也正是为什么安排孟东国第一个上来的原因。他作为京城作协副主席,京城诗词歌赋的领军人物,能来参加这种比赛,如果拿了第二名都是不露脸的事情,他也好,广播台也罢,肯定都是要尽量保证他能拿到大赛冠军的,要不然孟东国估计都不会来参加,会影响他的威望。 But Zhang Ye? 但张烨呢？ Now 1 : 30 , in other words, Zhang Ye also has almost less than a half hour of time! 现在都一点半了,也就是说,张烨还有几乎不到半个小时的时间！ Even if the netizen audience like his poem voting to him, how many tickets that can cast? Definitely cannot surpass Meng Dongguo, therefore he confessed that this champion ninety percent sure! 就算网友听众们喜欢他的诗给他投票,那能投多少票啊？肯定超不过孟东国,所以他自认这个冠军是十拿九稳的！ He thinks that others also think. 他这么想,别人也是这么想的。 For example the big Thunder Hexiao red mushroom is the similar ponder, knows that Zhang Ye this word can write, will not have the hope of struggle champion, even if top three is unlikely, more than 20 minutes suffice to cast many tickets, other people may over ten thousand tickets, Zhang Ye take one first ten to be good at most! When the time comes result, everybody may, no matter process no matter voting time enough, looks is a result, when the time comes top three had been assumed full responsibility of by their Writer's Association person, Zhang Ye only reluctantly placed about three, calculates that saves many faces to the Writer's Association person who Zhao Gouzhou leads! 比如大雷和小红蘑菇都是同样的思考,知道张烨就算这首词写得好,也不会有争冠军的希望了,即便是前三都不太可能,20多分钟够投多少票的啊,其他人可都上万票了,张烨顶多拿一个前十名就不错了！到时候结果一出,大家可不管过程不管投票时间够不够,看得就是一个结果,到时候前三名都被他们作协的人包揽了,张烨只勉强排在三名开外,也算给赵国洲带队的作协的人挽回很多面子！ Good! 呵,好吧！ Your this time poetry had the Literature nature! 你这次的诗词有文学性了！ We also acknowledged that your word truly is really good! 我们也承认你的词确实是真好！ But is that also what kind of? Has't can arrange behind us? Finally everybody looked that you are still inferior to specialized Teacher of our Writer's Association this professional group! 可那又怎么样？还不是得排在我们后面？最后大家一看,你依然是不如我们作协这种专业团体的专业老师！ The writers are quite tenacious, possibly is a small collision that because starts, causing the mountain ridge to get bigger and bigger, no one is willing to give up, they were compete with Zhang Ye in any case! This perhaps is also their these legitimate family backgrounds Writer's Association Teacher and Zhang Ye this beginning a new career late in life and writes Supernatural to write the fairy tale writes the poetry unorthodox „amateur” the collision! Hits to be convinced no one opposite party not to give up!( 文人都是比较固执的,可能就是因为开始的一个小碰撞,导致梁子越结越大,谁都不肯罢休,反正他们算是跟张烨较上劲了！这也许也是他们这些正统出身的作协老师和张烨这种半路出家的又写灵异又写童话又写诗词的非正统“业余选手”的碰撞！不把对方打服气谁也不罢休！( …… ……