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In the book fans repeated calling and urging, Yang Yi's new book «Yu Zui» finally on time started to issue on July 20. Meanwhile, Tiejun Net „Bullethole Scar” new book «Desert Wolf King» also started the renewal. 在书迷们的千呼万唤中,杨轶的新书《余罪》终于在七月20日准时开始发布。与此同时,铁军网“弹疤伤痕”的新书《沙漠狼王》也开始了更新。 From past one week of Tiejun Net propaganda tendency, two strong meets, must have a wound, watched the fun does not dislike the matter big people to flood into two websites in abundance, wanted to decide which one is better! 从过去一周铁军网的宣传势头来看,两强相遇,必有一伤,看热闹不嫌事大的人们纷纷涌入了两个网站,想要分出一个高低！ However, when water army of Tiejun Net employment prepares to emerge Qiyue wants to do the matter, Qiyue is aloof, as if not care about this showdown to be the same completely, the meaning of responding to owed to present. 然而,就在铁军网雇佣的水军准备涌入起阅想要搞事情的时候,起阅却无动于衷,似乎完全不在意这场对决一样,就连回应的意思都欠奉。 Why must say, this must return to several days ago. 要说为什么,这还要回到几天前。 Qiang Zi must early several days attain the Yang Yi first volume name compared with the reader is the «new release» draft. After looking, the Qiang Zi first feeling unexpectedly is gratified. 强子比读者还要早几天拿到了杨轶第一卷名为《菜鸟总动员》的稿子。看完之后,强子第一感受竟然是欣慰。 Yang Yi this fellow, learned the chapter finally! The drafts of 200,000 characters, are divided into 55 chapters, each chapter of more than 4000 characters, the standard must make editor that Qiang Zi and Editorial Department other come with admiration look very comfortably! 杨轶这个家伙,终于学会断章了！200000字的稿子,分为55章,每一章4000多字,标准得让强子和编辑部其他慕名而来的编辑们看得很舒服！ This is right! Writes the webnovel unceasingly chapter, what has to distinguish with the salt fish? 这样才对嘛！写个网文不断章,跟咸鱼有什么区别？ Qiang Zi according to the Yang Yi's request, the establishment is one day three, renews more than 10,000 characters every day, not only can satisfy the book fans reading desire, and is insufficient like «Soldiers Sortie», a day are too more, finally did not have two weeks then to terminate! 强子按照杨轶的要求,设置为一天三更,每天更新10000多字,既能够满足书迷们的阅读欲望,又不至于像《士兵突击》那样,一天更太多,结果没两个星期便完结了！ The Qiang Zi second feeling is, Yang Yi really Yang Yi! This style, before is , is equally exquisite, this story designs, same firmly grabbed the heart of people with before, but what was more splendid was the portray of character, Qiang Zi thought Yang Yi wrote was not a virtual character, but was the person who in the reality had livingly is the same! 强子第二感受是,杨轶果然还是杨轶！这个文笔,还是跟以前一样细腻,这个故事设计,还是跟以前一样牢牢地抓住人们的心,而更精彩的还是人物的刻画,强子都觉得杨轶写的不是一个虚拟人物,而是现实中活生生存在的人一样！ First is very splendid, but according to the news of Yang Yi feedback, «Yu Zui» this novel, he planned to write lengthy, eight volumes, achieved 2 million characters not to have the issue! 第一部就很精彩,而据杨轶反馈的消息,《余罪》这部小说,他计划写成长篇,共八卷,达到2000000字没有问题！ Number of words are many, the content is splendid, this is webnovel should have the rhythm that! 字数多,内容精彩,这才是网文应该有的节奏啊！ Although very much hopes that Yang Yi can continue to write the military literature to come to be Qiyue robs popularity, but really stubborn Yang Yi's decided that moreover confirmed before novel that Yang Yi writes , after being equally splendid, the Chief Editor Hu Da decision decision, the new book upload on the same day, the Qiyue entire channel was Yang Yi's «Yu Zui» drummed up support! 虽然还是很希望杨轶能够继续写军事文学来为起阅抢夺人气,但实在拗不过杨轶的决定,而且证实了杨轶写的小说还是跟以前一样精彩之后,总编胡大拍板决定,新书上传当天,起阅全渠道为杨轶的《余罪》造势！ Therefore, when longs for that for a long time book fans want the position time that seeks for «Yu Zui» to be, they discovered pleasantly surprised that it is everywhere, Qiyue each page, can find the «Yu Zui» advertisement, casual 0.1 go, then goes nonstop to the books the page. 于是,当渴望已久的书迷们想要寻找《余罪》所在的位置时候,他们惊喜地发现,它无处不在,起阅的每一个页面,都能找到《余罪》的广告,随便0.1个进去,便直通书籍的页面。 „Wait / Etc., who can tell me, why Great Yang does «Yu Zui» appear under the column of metropolis?” “等等,谁能告诉我,为什么杨大大的《余罪》出现在都市的栏目下面？” Has not started to look that the book review area has then blasted out the nest. 还没开始看呢,书评区便炸开了窝。 Tiejun Net editor are also ready in full battle array, they gather in the conference room, on the large screen selected the «Yu Zui» main page, but saw that this book appeared in the metropolis column, they were scared. 铁军网的编辑们也是严阵以待,他们聚集在会议室里,大屏幕上点开了《余罪》的主页,但看到这本书出现在都市栏目,他们傻眼了。 „How possible? Why Yang Yi he with us to? Why didn't write the civil employee of military, rewriting metropolis?” Yu Wan is young and impetuous, cannot calm down, cannot believe that said. “怎么可能？杨轶他不是要跟我们对着干吗？为什么不写军文,改写都市去了？”鱼丸年轻气盛,沉不住气,不敢相信地叫了起来。 Actually, they have forgotten, those who clamored must compete was they, but that side Qiyue and Yang Yi have not responded. But the Qiyue Editorial Department person is the abdomen is also black, noticed that the Tiejun Net person has made such big mishap, all information of book, gives to cover-up including the synopsis obstinately...... 其实,他们忘了,叫嚣着要打擂台的是他们自己,而起阅和杨轶那边可从来没有回应过。而起阅编辑部的人也是腹黑,看到铁军网的人闹了这么大的乌龙,愣是将书的所有信息,包括内容简介都给藏着掖着…… Saw this, Lingyun Jueding somewhat has felt helpless, he fought with the fists probably in the vacancy. 看到这一幕,凌云绝顶都有些不知所措了,他好像一拳打在了空处。 Doesn't this competing, become others' laughingstock? Your player got up boxing ring, actually discovered that the match has not appeared from the start, turns head to look, I scratch, others practice the swimming, delimits in the water happy! 这个打擂台,不就成为别人的笑柄吗？你自己的选手上了拳击场,却发现对手压根没有出现,回头一看,我擦,人家是练游泳的,在水里划得欢呢！ „Boss Lingyun, surnamed Duan calls to ask, the excuse that before prepared could not use, this was black?” Nearby editor is covering microphone, said with the Lingyun Jueding whisper low voice. “凌云老大,姓段的打电话来问,以前准备的说辞用不上了,这个还要黑吗？”旁边一个编辑捂着话筒,小声地跟凌云绝顶嘀咕道。 That side is Tiejun Net employment water army, naturally is not all editor knows the circumstances of the matter, Lingyun Jueding initially also applied for the secret fund with the bosses! 那边是铁军网雇佣的水军,当然不是所有编辑都知情,凌云绝顶当初还跟老板们申请了秘密资金呢！ The Lingyun Jueding complexion is a little pale, he silent a while, clenched teeth, said: „Black, making them find way, money to spend, pounded me also to look at a water splash!” 凌云绝顶脸色有点铁青,他沉默了一会儿,还是咬了咬牙,说道:“黑,让他们自己想办法,钱都花了,砸下去我也要看个水花！” ...... …… Mu Yucheng today is a little busy, including him, the several heads of this team, travelled on official business Shanghai, must meet with the guest, explains own application framework. Then met also to eat meal to treat with courtesy...... 穆钰诚今天白天有点忙,包括他在内,这个项目组的几个负责人,都出差去了魔都,要跟客人开会,讲解自己的程序框架。然后开完会还得吃饭应酬…… Therefore, Mu Yucheng almost midnight returns to the hotel, has free time to pull out cell phone, visits the Qiyue website to read the Yang Yi's new book. 所以,穆钰诚是差不多半夜回到酒店,才有空掏出手机,登陆上起阅的网站看杨轶的新书。 „Metropolis?” Mu Yucheng first also saw this different place, but, he also calculates to accept, after all compares the military article, he likes is close to the reality the metropolis article. “都市？”穆钰诚第一时间也看到了这个不一样的地方,不过,他还算能接受,毕竟相比军事文,他更喜欢的还是贴近现实的都市文。 The Yang Yi's book he must support in any case, therefore hits to enjoy a hegemon first conveniently, then reads. 反正杨轶的书他都要支持,所以先随手打赏一个盟主,然后再看书。 A day that «Yu Zui» reaches an agreement three, but also is really one day three, Mu Yucheng less than a while then looked, always thought to scratch an itch in the boot, was dissatisfied. 《余罪》说好的一天三更,还真的是一天三更,穆钰诚不到一会儿便看完了,总觉得隔靴搔痒,根本不满足。 But does not have the means that author Yang Yi this fellow, with is the same, regardless of the readers who never exists make a lot happy, hit to enjoy how much money, he stuck to one's own way of doing things as before, according to his original plan renewal, writes the plot according to his idea...... 但没办法,作者杨轶这个家伙,就跟从来不存在的一样,无论读者们闹得多欢,打赏了多少钱,他都依旧我行我素,按照他原来的计划更新,按照他自己的想法写着剧情…… Therefore, book review area that group of fellows gradually have also formed a habit, disguising Yang Yi can see that spits the trough, commented from. 所以,书评区那群家伙也渐渐地养成了一种习惯,假装杨轶能看得到,自顾自地吐槽,自顾自地评论自嗨。 Mu Yucheng does not have the new content to look that then selects the book review area, how having a look at these fellows to spit the trough. 穆钰诚没有新内容看,便点开书评区,看看那些家伙又在怎么吐槽。 But quick, Mu Yucheng frowned. 但很快,穆钰诚皱起了眉头。 Does book review area rhythm fly? 书评区怎么节奏飞起？ Some are scolding Yang Yi not to write the military article, the rewriting metropolis article is to the betrayals of their reader! Some are scolding Yang Yi new book pit, does not have beforehand «Soldiers Sortie» and «Drawing Sword» is attractive, who is willing to look that police bandit who looks, the labor did not accompany, to abandon in any case! 有些是在骂杨轶不写军事文,改写都市文是对他们读者的背叛！有些是在骂杨轶新书坑,没有以前《士兵突击》和《亮剑》好看,谁愿意看警匪谁看去吧,反正劳资不奉陪,弃了！ Also some spurt the Qiyue blind recommendation in the anger, the gale of entire channel blew to a novel of being unintelligible, was the money of pit readers, was to other authors was unfair! 还有些则是在怒喷起阅瞎推荐,全渠道的大风吹给了一本不知所云的小说,是坑读者们的钱,是对其他作者的不公平！ Mu Yucheng saw that many familiar names are also involved, comes under the influence to spit generally together the content of Yang Yi new book. But what are more is many sees has not seen the first-level number to stir up trouble! 穆钰诚看到不少熟悉的名字也卷入其中,受到影响一般一起吐槽着杨轶新书的内容。但更多的是许多见都没见过的一级号在兴风作浪！ „He He!” Mu Yucheng mixed in IT for a long time, saw not to be strange, then branched out is any matter. “呵呵！”穆钰诚在IT界混久了,见惯不怪,一眼便分出是什么回事。 He is sneering immediately, according to the cell phone keyboard, then has sent crazily a long book review with cell phone: „water army gets the hell out, likes the Yang Yi's book friends please giving the author patiently!” 他当下冷笑着,狂按手机键盘,用手机便发了一条长长的书评:“水军滚蛋,喜欢杨轶的书友们请给作者一点耐心！” Although does not have the computer to be so convenient, but Mu Yucheng is relying on the good memory, has listed some examples. 虽然没有电脑那么方便,但穆钰诚还是凭借着自己不错的记忆,罗列了一些例子。 „Yang Yi is original Yang Yi, this «Yu Zui», the introduction seems like light, but is not in fact simple, do not look that our protagonist Yu Zui has the feeling to be a little low, but he is still in all people disposition most special one!” “杨轶还是原来的杨轶,这本《余罪》,开篇看似平淡,但实际上并不简单,别看我们主角余罪存在感有点低,但他依然是所有人中性格最特别的一个！” „protagonist of Yang Yi writing, is always not a mortal, everybody thinks, simple-hearted timid, but can erupt the astonishing energy Xu Sanduo, lowborn, manner deceitful sly, but invincible Li Yunlong, but the Yu Zui of present, although slick and lazy, does not progress, but defers to me the understanding of the author, in the future this Yu Zui, will definitely grow the great person who is indomitable spirit, but is interesting, isn't the process that he grows?” “杨轶笔下的主角,从来都不是一个凡人,大家想想,木讷胆小但又能爆发出惊人能量的许三多,出身卑微、为人奸诈狡猾但战无不胜的李云龙,而现在的这个余罪,虽然油滑、懒惰、不上进,但按照我对作者的了解,未来这个余罪,肯定也会成长成顶天立地的大人物,而有趣的,不就是他成长的过程吗？” In fact, the «Yu Zui» first three chapters of words to protagonist description are not many, reason that Mu Yucheng can analyze the Yu Zui disposition, is he reads to look at the earnest result! 实际上,《余罪》的前三章对主角描写的笔墨并不多,穆钰诚之所以能分析出余罪的性格,也是他看书看得认真的结果！ „The police are also soldier that in another significance protects our homes and defends our country, Yang Yi, although arrived at the metropolis column, but I think him also in writing a military literature in another significance!” “警察也是另一种意义上保家卫国的军人,杨轶虽然来到了都市栏目,但我觉得他也是在写另一种意义上的军事文学！” „I urged that likes the Yang Yi's book friends do not worry, to Yang Yi time, believes that he can create a brand-new very interesting story to come to us!” “我呼吁,喜欢杨轶的书友们不要着急,给杨轶一点时间,相信他能给我们创造一个全新又非常有趣的故事来！” „As for water army, please stop, your ugly countenance were too obvious! Do not think that we do not know you are some armed forces net send!” “至于水军们,请消停一下吧,你们丑陋的嘴脸太明显了！别以为我们不知道你们是某军网派过来的！” The Mu Yucheng post sent a little late, but was seen by many book friends, they originally shouldered anger has subsided gradually, then used the reply the way, went against the Mu Yucheng post. 穆钰诚的帖子发得有点晚了,但还是被很多书友们看到,他们原本被挑起的火气渐渐地平息了下来,然后纷纷用跟帖的方式,将穆钰诚的帖子顶起来。 Although unavoidably lost some armed forces fan readers, but «Yu Zui» is also only a start, the future result, who will also say? 虽然还是难免损失了一些军迷读者,但《余罪》还只是一个开始,未来的成绩,谁又说得准呢？
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