The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity, with she excitement, from 45 to rise to 65 suddenly suddenly, then, returning to normal with mood, drops to 52. 范梓弱的好感度,随着她忽然激动的心情,猛然从45涨至65,然后,又跟着心情的平复,回落至52。 „He child, after you looks, what has to suggest to my novel?” “何公子,你看完后,对我的小说有什么建议吗？” Fan Zi also looked like weakly formerly sits like that formerly spoke like that but, this He Yun Xiao has been able from her tone, to listen to a concealed anticipation mood. 范梓弱还像从前那般坐着,从前那般说话,只不过,这一次何云霄已经能够从她的语气中,听出一丝隐含的期待情绪。 What has to suggest? I suggested that do not write the novel. 有什么建议？我建议你不要写小说。 He Yun Xiao considers the word usage repeatedly, is thinking how can without hurting Fan Zi weak writing enthusiastic, points out problem that in her novel has. 何云霄反复斟酌用词,想着怎么能在不伤害范梓弱写作积极性的情况下,指出她小说中存在的问题。 „I felt, your novel, the biggest problem............ is you...... you actually......” “我觉得,你这本小说,最大的问题吧……呃……就是你……你其实……” You will not tell the story actually. 你其实不会讲故事。 He Yun Xiao wants saying that but looks at the Fan Zi weak clear attractive eye, he also really could not say this grade of unfeeling words. 何云霄想这么说,但看着范梓弱晶莹漂亮的眼睛,他又实在说不出这等绝情的话语。 Ok, is comes to drawing in any case the sensitivity, I in „write novel” this aspect to help her. 算了,反正都是来拉好感度的,我就在“写小说”这方面帮帮她吧。 He Yun Xiao said finally: „Your this novel, the biggest problem, is you actually lacks experiences.” 何云霄最终说道:“你这本小说,最大的问题,就是你其实缺乏经验。” The Fan Zi weak doubts said: „Lacking experience?” 范梓弱疑惑道:“缺乏经验？” „Un.” This really spoke of his professional field, He Yun Xiao speaks with confidence, „in chivalric fiction novel, the lead must sleep outside the open country frequently, the miss has not caught the chicken, without killing the rabbit, how has been able to describe the scene that the lead went hunting to have a full stomach?” “嗯。”这回是真说到他的专业领域,何云霄侃侃而谈,“武侠小说中,主角常常要露宿野外,姑娘没抓过鸡,没杀过兔子,怎么能描绘出主角打猎果腹的场景呢？” „Likewise. Miss least bit martial arts not, although will look at the martial arts atlas, scene that the imagination fights, the thing that but writes like this, will often lack the fatal detail, causing the entire scene to seem not real.” “同理。姑娘半点武功都不会,虽说会看武功图谱,想象打斗的场面,但这样写出来的东西,往往会缺乏致命的细节,导致整个场景都显得不真实。” „For example here.” “比如这里。” He Yun Xiao spreads out the manuscript to look to Fan Zi weakly. 何云霄摊开书稿给范梓弱看。 „This fights, incorrect what do you have to see?” “这一段打斗,你有看出什么不对的吗？” Fan Zi looked weakly, oneself had written under the plot, ponders, has not truly detected what not right place. 范梓弱重新看了看,自己原先写过的情节,细想之下,确实没发觉有什么不对劲的地方。 „Has not seen what incorrect.” “没看出有什么不对的。” He Yun Xiao said in a soft voice: „Chinese catalpa is weak.” 何云霄轻声道:“梓弱。” 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 52 to become 51】 【范梓弱好感度由52变为51】 Fan Zi weak does not like being called like this intimately by the bystander, she is lightly pressed the eyebrow, the novel of attention from table, diverts to He Yun Xiao on. 范梓弱不喜欢被外人叫得这样亲密,她轻蹙着眉,把视线从桌上的小说,转移到何云霄身上。 However, she sees is actually a fist of coming! 然而,她看见的却是呼啸而来的一只拳头！ This fist is extremely fierce is extremely quick! 这拳头极猛极快！ Almost turns from a small ball instantaneously fully occupies the entire field of vision the colossus. 几乎瞬间就从一个小球变成占满整个视野的庞然大物。 Fan Zi dumbfounded weakly, but that fist, stops in her front one inch place. 范梓弱呆住了,而那拳头,也在她面前一寸处停下。 The fist howls the fist wind that produces, after the fist stops, still forwards, sways on the Fan Zi weak face, blows to raise gently, her back hair. 拳头呼啸产生的拳风,在拳头停下后,依然向前,吹拂在范梓弱的脸上,轻轻吹扬起,她背后的头发。 „What's wrong? The discovery writes what has is not right?” “怎样？发现写的有什么不对了吗？” He Yun Xiao takes back the fist, asked with a smile. 何云霄收回拳头,笑着问道。 Fan Zi the speechless, hesitates weakly for a while looking pensive a meeting, is suddenly enlighted suddenly. 范梓弱一时失语,若有所思地沉吟一会,忽而恍然大悟。 „When expert encounters, how will not manage the flowers and plants!” “高手交锋时,是不会管花草如何的！” He Yun Xiao disguises as the venerable teacher of long beard, touches the beard that does not have, while studies old person's voice saying: „, Is.” 何云霄假扮长胡子的老夫子,一边抚摸不存在的胡子,一边学着老人的声音道:“正是,正是。” 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 51 to become 55】 【范梓弱好感度由51变为55】 „Snort.” “哼嗯。” model/pattern big beautiful woman provoked laughter by the He Yun Xiao movement, smiles slightly bends over, has to support single-handed on the table, a big eye makes the crescent moon curved, another hand covers up the corners of the mouth that rises. 范大美女被何云霄的动作逗笑,笑得稍稍弯腰低头,只好单手撑在桌上,一双大眼睛弯做月牙,另一只手则掩住上扬的嘴角。 He Yun Xiao looks that Fan Zi is weak, follows at heart happily, then made being suddenly enlighted shape, said: „I know why the miss did not like smiling.” 何云霄看着范梓弱高兴,心里也跟着高兴,然后作了恍然大悟状,道:“我知道姑娘为何不爱笑了。” The Fan Zi weak doubts said: „Why?” 范梓弱疑惑道:“为何？” „Because the miss is a good man.” “因为姑娘是善人。” „Why I am a good man, then often didn't smile?” “为何我是善人,便不常笑了？” „Miss, if often smiles, by others was seen, making them know how oneself also compares the miss, will let in this world, the disciple increases the envy and complaint.” “姑娘若是常笑,被别人看见,让她们知道自己怎也比不过姑娘,就会让这世上,徒增嫉妒和怨念。” 【The Fan Zi weak good sensitivity by 55 to become 56】 【范梓弱好感度由55变为56】 The lying trough, the good sensitivity high is different, 卧槽,好感度高了就是不一样, Before lowered the sensitivity I praised her, falls the sensitivity, now finally straightens out, starts to rise! Fan Zi smiles weakly, has not cared about He Yun Xiao boasts her. 之前低好感度时我夸她,都是降好感度,现在终于步入正轨,开始涨了！范梓弱笑了笑,没太在乎何云霄夸她。 She does not regard as important regarding the external thing, on the contrary, regards as important satisfaction of innermost feelings. 她对于外在的东西并不看重,相反,更看重内心的满足。 „He child, please continue to teach me martial arts.” “何公子,请你继续教我武功吧。” He Yun Xiao is naturally glad, he quite somewhat said sigh with emotion: The reason that „a person practices martial arts has, strong and healthy body and joins in the soldier five, to open sect Lipai. However, practices martial arts to write the novel, I heard for the first time.” 何云霄自然是乐意的,他颇有些感慨地说:“一个人练武的理由有很多,强身健体、投身兵伍、开宗立派。不过,练武为了写小说,我还是第一次听说。” Fan Zi said weakly earnestly: „Was the young master says. ‚Without the investigation , there would be no right to speak’.” 范梓弱认真道:“是公子说的。‘没有调查,就没有发言权’。” Although this saying was He Yun Xiao said that but quite somewhat was at this moment awkward, „can't do it yourself?” 这话虽是何云霄自己说的,但此刻颇有些尴尬,“也不能事事都亲力亲为吧？” Fan Zi weak both hands extend behind, pulls beautiful hair of shawl, preparation study military. 范梓弱双手伸到身后,去挽披肩的秀发,准备学武。 „Why can't do it yourself?” “为何不能事事亲力亲为？” He Yun Xiao does not know how should explain with her. 何云霄不知道该怎么和她解释。 You write the leading lady will be pregnant, wants to live one to try what to feel? 难道你写女主角会怀孕的时候,也要自己生一个试试什么感觉吗？ Hiss...... 嘶…… Probably, isn't not good? 好像也,不是不行？ Fan Zi weak quick on to bind hair, lets their honest plate in the head. 范梓弱很快就扎好了头发,让它们老老实实盘在头上。 She stands in the study room middle, suspended yesterday's He Yun Xiao to teach her posture. 她站在书房的当中,摆好昨天何云霄教她的姿势。 He Yun Xiao stands in the one side, said: „I taught you yesterday, first practiced to try.” 何云霄站在一旁,道:“把昨天我教你的,先练一下试试。” Fan Zi was weak „un”, then repeated earnestly one side, yesterday He Yun Xiao taught her posture. 范梓弱“嗯”了一声,然后认真地重复了一边,昨天何云霄教她的姿势。 Do not look that the Fan Zi weak semblance is delicate, He Yun Xiao discovered accidentally/surprisingly, yesterday the posture of professor, she returned to original state unexpectedly well. 别看范梓弱外表是柔柔弱弱的,何云霄意外地发现,昨天教授的姿势,她居然还原得不错。 【Special skill: Learn/Study】 【特长:学习】 Really worthily is the miss who is good at studying! 真不愧是善于学习的姑娘！ Strange does not sleep, can rest one „the first talented woman”. 怪不边睡觉,都能睡出来一个“第一才女”。 He Yun Xiao yesterday Catholicism resulted in not many, the Fan Zi weak postures are redundant, quick completed. 何云霄昨天教得不多,范梓弱一个一个姿势重复,很快就做完了。 „He child, what kind of?” “何公子,怎么样？” He Yun Xiao knows, the Fan Zi weak character deviation is proper, not person who likes full mouth cracking a joke. 何云霄知道,范梓弱的性格偏向正经稳重,不喜欢满口开玩笑的人。 He gave up just arriving at the sexually harassing words of mouth, said properly: „Chinese catalpa weak miss does well. But I have a matter to first talk clearly with the miss.” 他放弃刚到嘴边的调戏话语,正经道:“梓弱姑娘做得不错。但我有件事必须先和姑娘说清楚。” „You said.” “你说。” „The matter of practicing martial art, beyond abatement effort, but also regards as important the talent specially. If the Chinese catalpa weak miss wants to practice, splendid fighting in novel, perhaps practices many years, is not good.” “习武之事,除却努力以外,还特别看重天赋。梓弱姑娘若是想亲身实践,小说中的精彩打斗,恐怕练上很多年,都不行。” This saying extinguishes the interest pouring of Fan Zi weak study military directly most. 这话直接把范梓弱学武的兴趣浇灭大半。 Wants the wholly-absorbed study military, had acquired achievements from study, writes the novel again? 难道要专心学武,学有所成了,再写小说吗？ When can this wait till? 这又得等到什么时候？ He Yun Xiao looks at her anxious appearance, said comfortably: „Actually the miss does not need really to become the expert, so long as became the fake expert on the line.” 何云霄看她忧虑的样子,宽慰道:“其实姑娘不用真的成为高手,只要成为假高手就行了。” Fan Zi is weak, immediately understands the meaning of He Yun Xiao. 范梓弱冰雪聪明,立刻明白了何云霄的意思。 „He child said, I only did study the fur/superficial knowledge to be enough?” “何公子是说,我只学皮毛就足够了？” He Yun Xiao said: „single Lunxie novel, only then the fur/superficial knowledge was truly enough.” 何云霄道:“单论写小说的只有皮毛确实就足够了。” He Yun Xiao from the bosom, fishes out an initiation palm law that takes from the family/home, giving Fan Zi is weak. 何云霄从怀里,摸出一本从家里拿的启蒙掌法,递给范梓弱。 Words that „miss does not believe that we do an experiment. You look at one this palm law, then practices, then we fight to try.” “姑娘不信的话,咱们做个实验。你看一遍这掌法,接着练一遍,然后我们交手试试。” Fan Zi weakly always not the ripe martial arts, seeing He Yun Xiao to say like this, then has to do according to his words. 范梓弱一贯不熟武道,看见何云霄这样说,便只好依他的话去做。 She is not Du Yinyun. 她并不是杜音韵。 The Du family tradition esteems martial arts, Du Lie also often practices martial art at home, although Du Yinyun not study, but from lugging to melt the eye to dye, many martial arts styles, is not strange. But Fan does not esteem martial arts, even desirably resistance martial arts. This makes Fan Zi weak natural understand very little to martial arts. 杜家家风尚武,杜烈也时常在家习武,杜音韵虽不学,但从小耳融目染,很多武功招式,也不陌生。而范家并不尚武,甚至刻意抵制武术。这就让范梓弱天然对武功知之甚少。 Even in this case, she looked at a He Yun Xiao initiation palm method, when oneself attempt to do again, really can return to original state unexpectedly 7788. 即便在这种情况下,她看了一遍何云霄的启蒙掌法,再自己尝试做时,竟真的能还原个七七八八。 He Yun Xiao looked at her to study similarly, access road/simply said: „Chinese catalpa weak miss, comes to fight to try with me. You do not need to worry, used to study a moment ago, hit me casually is.” 何云霄看她学得差不多了,便道:“梓弱姑娘,来与我交手试试。你不必顾虑,就用刚才学的,随便打我便是。” The Fan Zi weakness nods, then studied a moment ago the move on book, wields the palm to come to He Yun Xiao. 范梓弱点点头,便学了刚才书上的招数,向何云霄挥掌过来。 In the eye of He Yun Xiao, the Fan Zi weak style also is really light, is soft, is slow. 在何云霄的眼中,范梓弱的招式真是又轻,又软,又慢。 But he deliberately also slows the tempo, accompanies Fan Zi to experience martial arts weakly, therefore seems like, two people hit unexpectedly well-matched. 但他刻意也放慢了速度,陪范梓弱体验武功,所以看起来,两人竟然打得旗鼓相当。 Fan Zi wields element weakly, a palm patted to He Yun Xiao, He Yun Xiao does not want to make concessions, used the same style, to the Fan Zi weak beat in the past. 范梓弱挥动素手,一掌直直向何云霄拍了过来,何云霄也不想退让,用了同一招式,向范梓弱拍了过去。 Naturally receives to try. 当然是收着力的。 Therefore, in the chivalric fiction novel, classical, two extremely experts to the palm, then appear in the study room in Fan Residence. 于是,武侠小说中,经典的一幕,两位绝顶高手对掌,便出现在范府的书房内。 After palm right some little time, Fan Zi detected weakly suddenly is not right. 对掌对了好一会后,范梓弱猛然发觉到不对劲。 A man and a woman, the palm are pasting the palm...... 一男一女,手掌贴着手掌…… Is own this with He Yun Xiao „handle”? 自己这是在和何云霄“拉手”吗？