He Yun Xiao knows that Fan Zi said weakly „not good to take responsibility” the meaning is: Let him and her father Fan Changshu discussed. Actually this is rejecting tactfully. 何云霄知道范梓弱说“不好自己做主”的意思是:让他和她的父亲范长书商量。其实这就是在委婉地拒绝。 The Fan Zi weak thought is conservative, is steady, in addition now only then 76 good sensitivities, she not to comply to propose directly, He Yun Xiao can understand. 范梓弱思想保守,性格稳重,加上现在只有76好感度,她不直接答应求婚,何云霄很能理解。 But now, what He Yun Xiao is not clear, why first bumping into, saying oneself is her master, then can rise the sensitivity. Suggested for the second time again time is not good. 但现在,何云霄不明白的是,为什么第一次误打误撞,说出自己是她相公,便能涨一点好感度。第二次再暗示的时候就不行了。 For a while does not think clearly, the He Yun Xiao choice puts down for the time being. 一时想不明白,何云霄选择暂且放下。 The good news is, oneself present is finally same as Chu Fan, had the Chinese catalpa weak younger sister 76 good sensitivities. The only this 76 good sensitivities, how to have been able to start to attempt to reduce Chinese catalpa weak younger sister's good sensitivity to the Chu Fan. 好消息是,自己现在终于和楚凡一样,都拥有梓弱妹妹76的好感度了。单凭这76的好感度,已经可以开始尝试怎样去降低梓弱妹妹对楚凡的好感度。 So long as to fall Chinese catalpa weak younger sister's good sensitivity to the Chu Fan, then can like younger sister Du, help her be separated from the Chu Xiaoxiao evil clutches at that time thoroughly! 只要把梓弱妹妹对楚凡的好感度降下去,便可以像杜妹妹那时一样,彻底帮她脱离楚潇潇的魔爪！ However now has not thought these times, what now should think, how when teaches the Chinese catalpa to write the plot weakly, ties the reason wrapping her heart. 不过现在还不是想这些的时候,现在应该想的是,怎样在教梓弱写剧情的时候,把她的心结原因给套出来。 He Yun Xiao looks at the Fan Zi weak red elegant face, then feels the solemn beautiful woman, when a face is charming, has a unique flavor. 何云霄看着范梓弱红红的俏脸,便觉得端庄美人在一脸娇羞的时候,也别有一番风味。 For in writing the plot program the probe heart knot, He Yun Xiao has to intend to destroy „beautiful woman to be charming” this beautiful picture. 为了在写剧情大纲中试探心结,何云霄只好出手破坏“美人娇羞”这一美丽的画面。 „Chinese catalpa is weak.” “梓弱。” Blushing on Fan Zi weak face has not abated, only hears He Yun Xiao to call her, then responded hastily: „Un.” 范梓弱脸上的红晕还未消退,只听见何云霄叫她,便连忙回应道:“嗯。” „Were we this/should discussion novel?” “咱们是不是该讨论小说了？” Hears the related novel the matter, Fan Zi weakly then sincere. 听到有关小说的事情,范梓弱便正色起来。 „Right, the young master spoke of a moment ago, a few words summarize own story.” “对,公子刚才说到,一句话概括自己的故事。” After she said that but also intimately writing the manuscript paper of story, is handing the He Yun Xiao front. 她说完后,还贴心地把写着故事的稿纸,递到何云霄的面前。 He Yun Xiao looks at the manuscript paper, explained carefully: „Now, we had a quite clear story vein, but is insufficient. We also need a program, expands this vein again.” 何云霄看着稿纸,细心解释道:“现在,咱们有了一个比较清晰的故事脉络,但还不够。我们还需要有一个大纲,把这个脉络给再扩大一些。” „Chinese catalpa knows weakly what is the program?” “梓弱知道什么是大纲吗？” Fan Zi naturally knows weakly, „program is the main point of story.” 范梓弱自然知道,“大纲就是故事的要点。” He Yun Xiao said again: „Right! Is the main point. These main points, after the segmentation, can also be divided into the setting program, the plot line program, the sentimental line program, the character program.” 何云霄再道:“对！就是要点。这些要点,细分后,还可以分为设定大纲,剧情线大纲,感情线大纲,人物大纲。” He Yun Xiao points on the Fan Zi weak manuscript paper a few words of story „Fan Zi to admire her Senior Brother He Xiao”. 何云霄指着范梓弱稿纸上故事的第一段话“范紫爱慕她的师兄何晓”。 Then said: „So-called setting program, is in the story the outlines of various hypotheses. For example here, Fan Zi is the He Xiao Junior Sister. The Senior Brother younger sister in what school are they? Is martial arts that they learn/study what? Which do the martial arts world schools of their world have?......” 然后道:“所谓设定大纲,便是故事中各种设定的梗概。比如说这里,范紫是何晓的师妹。那他们是什么门派中的师兄妹？他们学习的武功是什么？他们这个世界的武林门派有哪些？……” Fan Zi weakness indicated to understand. 范梓弱点头表示明白。 Then, He Yun Xiao also introduced „plot line program” and „sentimental line program” and „character program”. 而后,何云霄又介绍了“剧情线大纲”、“感情线大纲”和“人物大纲”。 And said emphatically: „Love article is most important, is not the setting, but is the plot and sentiment. The plot needs fluctuating lightly, the sentiment must result is logical. The former is not good, will then make people think senseless, the latter is not good, will then make people think stiff.” 并且着重地说:“恋爱文最重要的,不是设定,而是剧情和感情。剧情需要是平淡中有起伏的,感情必须得是顺理成章的。前者不行,便会让人觉得无趣,后者不行,便会让人觉得生硬。” Fan Zi nods weakly again , indicating to understand. 范梓弱再次点头,表示明白。 Although Fan Zi weakly truly is the talent, but He Yun Xiao does not believe her one not to write the novel, only listens, then how can write the novel achieving mastery through a comprehensive study. 虽然范梓弱确实是天才,但何云霄可不信她一个没怎么写过小说的,只听一遍,便能把怎么写小说给融会贯通。 Therefore He Yun Xiao then said: „Chinese catalpa is weak, you ‚admire her Senior Brother He Xiao Fan Zi, and does everything possible „ disgrace” to him, what a pity is defeated repeatedly’ this, writes a plot program to come out, shows me. ” 于是何云霄便说道:“梓弱,你把‘范紫爱慕她的师兄何晓,并想尽办法“失身”给他,可惜屡屡失败’这一段,写一段剧情大纲出来,给我看看。” Fan Zi complies weakly agily „well”, then takes out the written records, started to write earnestly. 范梓弱利索地答应“好”,然后取出纸笔,埋头开始写了起来。 He Yun Xiao looks at this stance, heart is not wonderful, can't she really listen to write? 何云霄一看她这架势,心道不妙,她不会真能听一下就写得出来吧？ Didn't the talent really say on a truth? 天才真就一点道理都不讲？ He Yun Xiao paces she behind, is looking at her handwriting of writing on manuscript paper. 何云霄踱步到她身后,瞧着她的写在稿纸上的字迹。 Only looked at two, He Yun Xiao said my goodness. 只瞧了两段,何云霄就直呼好家伙。 Plot that Fan Zi needs to write weakly, altogether has is the main point that three must display, first is „Fan Zi admires He Xiao”, second is „wants to lose one's chastity to give him”, third „is defeated repeatedly”. 范梓弱需要写的剧情,一共有是三个要表现的要点,第一个是“范紫爱慕何晓”,第二个是“想失身给他”,第三个“屡屡失败”。 Fan Zi writes the first plot on manuscript paper weakly, 范梓弱写在稿纸上的第一个剧情, Then is „Senior Brother younger sister has the duty, the He Xiao hero rescues beautiful”. Although the plot the hackneyed stuff, may want the sentimental description to arrive, is used to explain „Fan Zi admires He Xiao” the reason has more than enough to spare. Then the second plot, is „He Xiao is welcome by the Senior Sister younger sister in sect Mennei”. This plot is very ingenious. It deepened directly the sense of crisis that Fan Zi that likes He Xiao, „wants to lose one's chastity” upholstery for her the behavior motive. 便是“师兄妹出任务,何晓英雄救美”。剧情虽然老套,可只要感情描写到位,用来解释“范紫爱慕何晓”的原因绰绰有余。接着第二个剧情,就是“何晓在宗门内受师姐妹欢迎”。这个剧情很巧妙。它直接加深了喜欢何晓的范紫的危机感,为她“想失身”铺垫了行为动机。 Read these two plots, He Yun Xiao does not want to look. 看完这两个剧情,何云霄已经不想看了。 He knows, Fan Zi weak designed this surely not to have the issue in the plot. 他知道,范梓弱在剧情设计这一块肯定没问题了。 The talent is the talent. 天才就是天才啊。 No matter anything, only with teaching her, she can extrapolate, skilled use. 不管是什么东西,只用教她一遍,她就可以举一反三,熟练使用。 Does this have the law of the land? Law? 这还有王法吗？还有法律吗？ He Yun Xiao just thinks that angrily rebuking God unfair, may think the Chinese catalpa weak younger sister is the wife, after she is intelligent, to oneself fresh baby also intelligent time. He Yun Xiao gave the God to select a to praise silently. 何云霄刚想怒斥老天爷的不公,可一想到梓弱妹妹是自家老婆,她聪明以后给自己生的宝宝也会聪明的时候。何云霄就默默给老天爷点了个赞。 As if thought early, Fan Zi wrote weakly quickly, before long, then the first plot finishing. 仿佛是早想好了,范梓弱写得很快,不一会,便把第一段的剧情给写完了。 He Yun Xiao looks that Fan Zi gives his manuscript paper weakly, is speechless. 何云霄看着范梓弱递给他的稿纸,无话可说。 Speaking of the plot, the Fan Zi weak plot had no place of specially bright eye, but each plot was very reasonable. This already enough. 从情节上讲,范梓弱的情节没有什么特别亮眼的地方,不过每个情节都很合理。这就已经够了。 So-called love article, what looked is not a plot, but is a character, the development of sentiment with characters. 所谓恋爱文,看的并不是情节,而是人物,和人物之间感情的发展。 The Fan Zi weak plot attains a designated standard completely. 范梓弱的情节是完全达标的。 By her bold handwriting vigorous style, does not need to be worried about the matter that traces unable to write the character, therefore to her, is almost so long as improves the sentimental line program, can take up the pen to write the novel. 以她的笔力,根本不用担心描写不好人物的事情,于是对她来说,几乎是只要把感情线大纲完善一下,就可以动笔写小说了。 He Yun Xiao wants saying: The Chinese catalpa is weak, you write very well. But is not good, He Yun Xiao also has other goal, he must pretend that with the Fan Zi weak discussion program, probes about the matter that her heart ties. 何云霄很想说:梓弱,你写得很好。但不行,何云霄还有别的目的,他得假装和范梓弱讨论大纲,试探试探关于她心结的事情。 He Yun Xiao with the aid of looking at the neutral gear of program, pondered before a next, Chinese catalpa weak younger sister rose the case of sensitivity. 何云霄借助看大纲的空档,细想了一下之前梓弱妹妹涨了一点好感度的案例。 At that time, oneself bumped into substituted her master's role, then made her rise the sensitivity. Afterward, oneself substituted her master again, to she conducted the probe time, then did not rise the sensitivity. 那时候,自己误打误撞地代入了她相公的角色,然后便让她涨了一点好感度。后来,自己再次代入她的相公,对她进行试探的时候,便不涨好感度了。 Why rises previous time, doesn't rise latter time? 为什么前一次涨,后一次就不涨了呢？ Rises the reason of sensitivity, is actually , when her master's attitude, rather than did speak the talk between lovers to her? 难道涨好感度的原因,其实是自己当她相公的态度,而不是自己对她说了情话？ When her master's attitude can only appear one time, but the talk between lovers can say many, after therefore she knows my attitude, I do not have the means to reappear this matter again, therefore the good sensitivity only to rise one time. Tries latter time again, then did not have the effect. 当她相公的态度只能出现一次,而情话可以说很多遍,故而当她知道我的态度后,我就没办法再次复现这个事情,所以好感度只能涨一次。后一次再试的时候,便没效果了。 But she why, because I do have „wants to marry her” the attitude to rise the sensitivity to her? 可她为什么,会因为我对她有“想娶她”的态度而涨好感度呢？ She before was default, won't I marry her? 难道她之前是默认,我不会娶她吗？ Why does she think? 为什么她会这么想？ He Yun Xiao does not want to understand, has to put in the vision in the Fan Zi weak plot program. 何云霄没想明白,只好把目光重新投放在范梓弱的剧情大纲上。 In the plot program, the plot was „He Xiao rejected surrendering Fan Zi, because he thought that she incessantly was a Junior Sister.” 剧情大纲上,有一段剧情是“何晓拒绝了投怀送抱的范紫,因为他觉得她不止是师妹。” He Yun Xiao a little thinks clearly, then not to ask the Fan Zi weak say/way: „Chinese catalpa is weak, why here can He Xiao reject Fan Zi?” 何云霄有点想不明白,便问范梓弱道:“梓弱,这里何晓为什么要拒绝范紫？” Fan Zi looked under the manuscript paper weakly, explained: „Because Fan Zi, although is a Junior Sister, but the Fan Zi father and He Xiao are the junctions of forgetting year.” 范梓弱看了下稿纸,解释道:“因为范紫虽然是师妹,可是范紫的父亲和何晓是忘年之交。” He Yun Xiao understood, He Xiao rejects the Fan Zi reason because of the ethics. Simply speaking, Fan Zi is Brother He Xiao daughter, how can this start? 何云霄明白了,何晓拒绝范紫的原因是因为伦理。简单来说,范紫算是何晓兄弟的女儿,这怎么能下手？ He Yun Xiao more wants is not more right. 何云霄越想越不对劲。 Since He Xiao, because the ethics does not accept Fan Zi, that Fan Zi takes the author weakly, she has this thought that has the possibility, because the ethics doesn't accept me? 既然何晓因为伦理不接受范紫,那范梓弱作为作者,她有这种思想,有没有可能因为伦理不接受我？ Is absolutely possible! 完全有可能！ No wonder she knows I „want to marry her” after the attitude, will rise the sensitivity, before brushed the sensitivity not to rise no matter how. Originally before is, had not bumped into „teachers and students” this line, she cannot think toward this aspect! 怪不得她知道我“想娶她”的态度之后会涨好感度,之前不管怎么刷好感度都不会涨。原来是之前一直都没碰到“师生”这条线,她一直都不敢往这方面想！ Fan Zi most regards as important these things weakly, she is not only my teacher, is my student, under this complex relations, she is worried is normal. 范梓弱最看重这些东西,她既是我的老师,又是我的学生,这种复杂的关系之下,她心存顾虑非常正常。 【Words said, at present reads aloud listens to storytelling easiest-to-use app, mew mew reading, installment most update.】 【话说,目前朗读听书最好用的app,咪咪阅读,安装最新版。】 He Yun Xiao thinks most starts to see Fan Zi weak time, at that time must undermine and Fan Zi weak teacher student relationship, went, when her teacher, is the fear has now this aspect. 何云霄想到最开始见到范梓弱的时候,那时自己非得破坏和范梓弱的师生关系,去当她的老师,就是害怕出现现在这种局面。 Has not thought or appeared. 没想到还是出现了。 However, since knows reason that the heart ties, that solves again, is much easier. 不过,既然知道心结的原因,那再解起来,便容易得多。