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#132: From 0 start to discuss the plot


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He Yun Xiao in the morning thrilling stimulation, enjoyed a morning neat small hand. 何云霄在上午的惊险刺激当中,享受了一上午楚楚的小手。 This morning by the neat imparting cultivation, actual cultivating are being the growth is not obvious. He Yun Xiao summarized the reason, has several aspects probably. First marches into the ninth-grade, this is the limit of talent, cultivating of theory is the upper limit, therefore cultivates to promote again to the grandmaster, difficultly is extremely extremely difficult. 这一上午自己都在被楚楚传功,实际的修为增长却并不明显。何云霄总结了原因,大概有几方面。首先是步入九品,这是自己天赋的极限,理论的修为上限,故而修为再提升至宗师,极难极难。 On the one hand is, what neat this use is the soft imparting cultivation way, the skill that passes on each time is few, actually does not injure own meridians body, suits for a long time the imparting cultivation. Therefore the effect is not quite tangible. 还有一方面是,楚楚这次使用的是温和的传功方式,每次传的功力很少,却不伤自己的经脉身体,适合长时间传功。故而效果不太明显。 Let alone this is only a morning effect, if the effect is tangible, that ninth-grade rose the grandmaster extremely is also easy, in the world was also insufficient, only then that grandmaster boundary military. 何况这只是一上午的效果,要是效果明显,那九品升宗师也太过容易了些,世上也就不至于只有那么点宗师境界的武者了。 He Yun Xiao goes home to eat meal, in the afternoon arrives at the familiar Fan Residence study room. 何云霄回家吃了饭,下午又来到熟悉的范府书房。 Fan Zi as usual, sits in the desk weakly takes the books. Actually in the thoughts all placed at hear of knocks. Waits for the He Yun Xiao sound of footsteps first to resound, then knocks on a door, said that Chinese catalpa is weak, is I.” 范梓弱像往常一样,坐在书桌边拿着书本。其实只是在心思全放在听敲门声上了。等何云霄的脚步声先响起,而后敲了门,说“梓弱,是我。” At this time, she brings smiling, replied He Yun Xiao saying: Young master comes in quickly.” 这时,她才带着笑,回复何云霄道:“公子快进来吧。” He Yun Xiao came. 何云霄进来了。 Then looks that the Fan Zi weak smile looks at him. 便看着范梓弱微笑地看他。 Therefore in the heart the innumerable feelings, the leading lady is a leading lady. face/color price/value, stature, makings and character, even is the environment atmosphere creates the atmosphere, again by their impressions of atmosphere to the addition that conduct, all draws fully. 于是心中第无数次感慨,女主角就是女主角。颜值、身材、气质、性格,甚至是环境氛围营造出气氛,再由气氛对她们的观感进行的加成,全都是拉满的。 On for example the Chinese catalpa weak younger sister is the solemn tranquil character, at this time is located under the atmosphere that the afternoon beautiful sunlight creates, in addition she is unable by the proud stature that the loose clothes cover, superimposes the self-confident proud female lord makings that on she brings again, finally she smiled faintly to you with the fairy maiden appearance again gently. 就比如梓弱妹妹是端庄恬静的性格,此时又位于下午明媚阳光营造出的气氛之下,再加上她无法被宽松衣服掩盖住的傲人身材,再叠加上她自带的自信自傲的女主气质,最后她再用仙子般的容颜对你温柔浅笑。 Jokes aside, He Yun Xiao wants to depend 75 good sensitivities at the scene, holds on Fan Zi the desk weakly, with her how then tries the quality of desk, bans shakes. 说真的,何云霄当场就想仗着75的好感度,把范梓弱抱到书桌上,然后和她一起试试书桌的质量怎么样,禁不禁晃。 Becoming also 75, defeat also 75. 成也75,败也75。 He Yun Xiao knew in the heart that 75 good sensitivities is very truly high, but also knows it to true captures successfully only almost. Ten thousand may not, because impulses, wastes all previous efforts in this time. 何云霄心知75好感度确实很高,但也知道它离真正的攻略成功只差一点。万不可因为冲动,在此时前功尽弃。 Oh, what does the Chinese catalpa weak younger sister's heart tie is? Why dead the good sensitivity deactivation, can't enter last? 唉,梓弱妹妹的心结到底是啥?为什么就是把好感度卡死死的,进不了最后一步呢? Fan Zi sees He Yun Xiao to come in weakly, teased with a smile: Came in a moment ago, is He Yun Xiao young master, is He Xiao young master?” 范梓弱看见何云霄进来,笑着打趣道:“刚才进来的,是‘何云霄’公子,还是‘何晓’公子呢?” He Yun Xiao also said with a smile: That must look that makes me come, is Fan Zi is weak miss, was Fan Zi miss.” 何云霄也笑道:“那得看让我进来的,是‘范梓弱’姑娘,还是‘范紫’姑娘了。” Fan Zi said with a smile weakly cunningly: Which miss does young master like?” 范梓弱狡黠地笑道:“公子更喜欢哪位姑娘呢?” He Yun Xiao raised the head to throw out the chest, said proudly: „If He Xiao, he does not like about both girls. If I, I definitely like.” 何云霄抬头挺胸,非常自豪地说:“如果是‘何晓’嘛,他对两位姑娘都不喜欢。如果是我自己的话,那我肯定是都喜欢。” Fan Zi weak snort/hum said: Young master does not seem like the person of unfaithful/stamen.” 范梓弱哼道:“公子不像是花心的人。” He Yun Xiao does not dare Fan Zi weak here, to leave behind itself certainly to misunderstand to her single-mindedly. 何云霄可不敢在范梓弱这里,给她留下自己一定会专一的误会。 She said that does not mind three wife four concubines, but if promised others are wholehearted, must achieve, for this reason even wrote three male lords one after another, but also was makes the female lord in novel kill with one's own hand the male lord. 她可是说了,“不介意三妻四妾,但假如许诺了别人一心一意,就一定得做到”,为此甚至接连写死了三个男主,还都是让小说中的女主手刃男主。 Too fearful! 太可怕了! He Yun Xiao said hastily: My lascivious name, is the reputation remoteness, entire Yin Jing is well-known.” 何云霄连忙道:“我好色之名,可是声名远扬,整个尹京人尽皆知。” Fan Zi these days was together weakly with He Yun Xiao, in the heart some judgments, oneself surrendering he is early aloof, how possibly is so-called lascivious? She will not believe the so-called rumor again. 范梓弱与何云霄这些日子相处下来,心中早有判断,自己“投怀送抱”他都无动于衷,怎么可能是所谓“好色”?她自不会再去听信所谓流言。 How young master is, the Chinese catalpa knows fairly well weakly, the young master takes the rumor to tease not by any means again.” “公子为人如何,梓弱心中有数,公子切莫再拿流言打趣啦。” He Yun Xiao feared that she misunderstands herself single-mindedly, access road/simply said: I in home am the sole line of descent, my father also wants to look for some girls, blooms a loose leaf for Hou Residence.” 何云霄怕她误会自己专一,便道:“我在家中是单传,我爹还想多找些姑娘,替侯府开枝散叶呢。” Fan Zi looks at He Yun Xiao weakly, has the profound meaning to say with a smile: Bloodlines continue naturally are the major event, but that does not delay the young master to have only one in mind.” 范梓弱看着何云霄,颇有深意地笑道:“血脉延续自然是头等大事,可那也不耽误公子情有所钟。” Jokes aside, even He Yun Xiao believe, the Fan Zi weak this character was too suitable to work as the wife big woman. Moreover she is also intelligent, knows the ritual, solemn, steady. When the time comes marries to go home, for oneself attend to Hou Residence, after the management dwelling, 说真的,连何云霄自己都认为,范梓弱这种性格太适合当正妻大妇了。而且她又聪明,知礼,端庄,稳重。到时候娶回家,替自己料理侯府,管理后宅, Definitely is a expert. The place that but most is a pity is, she is the female lord, other female lords are also the female lords. 肯定是一把好手。但最可惜的地方就在于,她是女主,其他的女主也是女主。 The female lord pressure female with can the direct steamroll, make Fan Zi be the wife at that time weakly, oneself favor her one, the problem does not have. 女主压女配可以直接碾压,那时让范梓弱做正妻,自己宠她一个,一点毛病没有。 But, when everyone is the female lord, how to press? 但,当大家都是女主的时候,怎么压? The Nanzhu wife and younger sister Du will not struggle the wife with the Chinese catalpa weak younger sister, but Sister Jiang and antidote miss are uncertain. 南珠老婆和杜妹妹不会和梓弱妹妹去争正妻,但姜姐姐和解药姑娘就不一定。 To say the least, making the Chinese catalpa be the wife weakly, but she wants only to love her one, this what to do? 退一步说,让梓弱做正妻,可她要自己只爱她一个,这怎么办? He Yun Xiao knows fairly well, oneself anything pledged that can her, this did not give only. If did not have Chu Xiaoxiao not to bite the soul pill initially, oneself first meets her, accompanies together with her. But now, several female lords pound in the hand, has been unable to back down. 何云霄心中有数,自己什么承诺都能给她,唯独这一个给不了。倘若当初没有楚潇潇也没有噬魂丸,自己第一个遇见她,与她厮守也就罢了。可现在,好几位女主砸在手里,已经是骑虎难下。 The palm back of the hand is the meat, which losing is not good. 手心手背都是肉,丢哪一个都不行。 When the Chinese catalpa weak younger sister said that „when that does not delay the young master has only one in mind, He Yun Xiao can only make fun saying: Matter of getting married, to getting married time said again. The Chinese catalpa is weak, are we this/should discuss today how to write the plot of novel?” 所以当梓弱妹妹笑着说“那也不耽误公子情有所钟”时,何云霄只能打哈哈道:“娶亲的事,到娶亲的时候再说吧。梓弱,我们今天是不是该讨论如何去写小说的剧情了?” Heard to write the novel, Fan Zi then came the interest weakly. 听到写小说,范梓弱便来了兴趣。 She put out has prepared the good person to suppose the graph, said to He Yun Xiao: Un. Yesterday completed the person to suppose, now young master also misses plot not to teach me.” 她拿出早就准备好的人设图表,对何云霄说道:“嗯。昨天做完了人设,现在公子还差剧情这一项没教给我。” Under He Yun Xiao in the desk is implicated, took a manuscript paper, writes down one line of characters with the writing brush again, then pushes the paper to Fan Zi is weak, said: Chinese catalpa is weak, the so-called plot main line, is this.” 何云霄在书桌旁坐下,取了一张稿纸,再用毛笔写下一行字,然后把纸推给范梓弱,道:“梓弱,所谓剧情主线,便是这个。” Fan Zi looks at the character on paper weakly, read in a soft voice: Summarizes your story with a few words.” 范梓弱看着纸上的字,轻声读了出来:“用一句话概括你的故事。” He Yun Xiao said with a smile: Right. That is it. This is to the plot overall assurance. For example, I then lift the previous that story, the newlyweds attend the martial arts world congress. If summarizes this story with a few words, then yes: After the female lord is newly-married the sentiment, was betrayed by the husband in the martial arts world congress, facing betraying her is never-ending, the husband is besotted, gets sucked into misleading of succuba to be inescapably involved, finally the female lord choice kills the husband card to say.” 何云霄笑道:“对。就是这个意思。这是对剧情整体的把握。举例来说,我便举上次那个故事,新婚夫妻参加武林大会的。若用一句话概括这个故事,便是:女主新婚后的感情,在武林大会中被丈夫背叛,面对背叛她不离不弃,丈夫却执迷不悟,深陷魔女的蛊惑不能自拔,最后女主选择杀夫证道。” Fan Zi hears weakly earnestly, nods. 范梓弱听得认真,点了点头。 He Yun Xiao said: That Chinese catalpa wants to write any story weakly, about He Xiao and Fan Zi.” 何云霄道:“那梓弱想写一个什么故事呢,关于‘何晓’和‘范紫’的。” Fan Zi thinks weakly a meeting, then wrote on the manuscript paper with, after finishing, pushes the paper to He Yun Xiao, then the whole face anticipated that looks at him. 范梓弱想了一会,便拿笔在稿纸上写了起来,写完后,把纸推给何云霄,然后满脸期待地看着他。 He Yun Xiao looked at content on the manuscript paper: 何云霄看了眼稿纸上的内容: Story that He Xiao and Fan Zi live together.” 何晓范紫一起生活的故事。” The He Yun Xiao corners of the mouth pulled out pulling out, asked: Chinese catalpa is weak, why do you want to write?” 何云霄嘴角抽了抽,问道:“梓弱,你为什么要这么写?” Fan Zi looks at the He Yun Xiao expression weakly, apparent is not wonderful, a little said flustered: We do not write the daily article of knight-errant theme. The daily article, is chats, eats meal and sleeps these. The Chinese catalpa felt weakly, with lives summary to be good.” 范梓弱看何云霄的表情,便知不妙,有点慌张地说:“我们不是要写武侠题材的日常文嘛。日常文,就是聊天、吃饭、睡觉这些。梓弱觉得,用‘生活’概括挺好的。” He Yun Xiao wanted to censure first praises said: You summarize very well, but was too general, does not have the concrete plot. I give you to give an example, for example, this is one: Friends from childhood, the alternate growth feelings in a dangerous duty, the sentiment on the road of going home elevate temperature, finally was proposed by the bride's side gets married, and story that finally got married.” 何云霄欲贬先褒地说:“你概括得很好,但是太笼统了,没有具体的情节。我给你举例,比如,这是一个:青梅竹马,在一次危险任务中互生情愫,在回家的路上感情升温,最后由女方主动提出成亲,并且最终成婚的故事。” Words said, at present reads aloud listens to storytelling easiest-to-use app, mew mew reading, installment most update.】 【话说,目前朗读听书最好用的app,咪咪阅读,安装最新版。】 Fan Zi thinks weakly, revised an own story, gives He Yun Xiao to look again. 范梓弱想了想,修改了一下自己的故事,再次递给何云霄看。 Young master, like this Ok?” “公子,这样可以吗?” He Yun Xiao lowers the head looks: 何云霄低头一看: Fan Zi admires her Senior Brother He Xiao, and does everything possible disgrace to him, what a pity is defeated repeatedly. In the duty, under the help of bandit, Fan Zi succeeded again, He Xiao thinks has a deficit the Junior Sister to have guilty about her. In afterward day, two people gradually faced up to the sentiment, finally got married, lived five.” 范紫爱慕她的师兄何晓,并想尽办法‘失身’给他,可惜屡屡失败。再一次任务中,抢匪的帮助下,范紫成功了,何晓自以为亏欠师妹对她心生愧疚。后来的日子里,两人逐渐正视感情,最终成婚,生了五个。” He Yun Xiao reads this plot, feels the story to be good, lives five, was a much less? 何云霄看着这个剧情,觉得故事挺好,就是生五个吧,是不是有点多了?
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