He Yun Xiaoin the morningthrillingstimulation, enjoyed a morningneatsmall hand.何云霄在上午的惊险刺激当中,享受了一上午楚楚的小手。Thismorningby the neatimparting cultivation, actualcultivatingare being the growthis not obvious. He Yun Xiaosummarized the reason, hasseveralaspectsprobably. Firstmarches into the ninth-grade, thisis the limit of talent, cultivating of theoryis the upper limit, thereforecultivatestopromoteagainto the grandmaster, difficultly is extremely extremely difficult.
这一上午自己都在被楚楚传功,实际的修为增长却并不明显。何云霄总结了原因,大概有几方面。首先是步入九品,这是自己天赋的极限,理论的修为上限,故而修为再提升至宗师,极难极难。On the one handis, whatneatthisuseis the softimparting cultivationway, the skill that passes oneach timeis few, actuallydoes not injureownmeridiansbody, suitsfor a long time the imparting cultivation. Therefore the effectis not quite tangible.
还有一方面是,楚楚这次使用的是温和的传功方式,每次传的功力很少,却不伤自己的经脉身体,适合长时间传功。故而效果不太明显。Let alonethisis only a morningeffect, if the effectis tangible, thatninth-graderose the grandmasterextremely is also easy, in the worldwas also insufficient, only thenthatgrandmasterboundarymilitary.
何况这只是一上午的效果,要是效果明显,那九品升宗师也太过容易了些,世上也就不至于只有那么点宗师境界的武者了。He Yun Xiaogoes hometo eat meal, in the afternoonarrives at the familiarFan Residencestudy room.何云霄回家吃了饭,下午又来到熟悉的范府书房。Fan Zias usual, sitsin the deskweaklytakes the books. Actuallyin the thoughtsallplacedathear of knocks. Waits for the He Yun Xiaosound of footstepsfirstto resound, thenknocks on a door, said that „Chinese catalpais weak, isI.”范梓弱像往常一样,坐在书桌边拿着书本。其实只是在心思全放在听敲门声上了。等何云霄的脚步声先响起,而后敲了门,说“梓弱,是我。”At this time, shebringssmiling, repliedHe Yun Xiao saying: „Young mastercomes inquickly.”
这时,她才带着笑,回复何云霄道:“公子快进来吧。”He Yun Xiaocame.何云霄进来了。Thenlooks that the Fan Ziweaksmilelooks athim.
便看着范梓弱微笑地看他。Thereforein the heart the innumerablefeelings, the leading ladyis a leading lady. face/colorprice/value, stature, makingsandcharacter, evenis the environmentatmospherecreates the atmosphere, againby their impressions of atmosphereto the addition that conduct, alldrawsfully.
于是心中第无数次感慨,女主角就是女主角。颜值、身材、气质、性格,甚至是环境氛围营造出气氛,再由气氛对她们的观感进行的加成,全都是拉满的。Onfor example the Chinese catalpaweakyounger sisteris the solemntranquilcharacter, at this timeis located under the atmosphere that the afternoonbeautifulsunlightcreates, in additionsheis unable by the proudstature that the looseclothescover, superimposes the self-confidentproudfemalelordmakings that onshebringsagain, finallyshesmiled faintlytoyouwith the fairy maidenappearanceagaingently.
就比如梓弱妹妹是端庄恬静的性格,此时又位于下午明媚阳光营造出的气氛之下,再加上她无法被宽松衣服掩盖住的傲人身材,再叠加上她自带的自信自傲的女主气质,最后她再用仙子般的容颜对你温柔浅笑。Jokes aside, He Yun Xiaowantsto depend75goodsensitivitiesat the scene, holdsonFan Zi the deskweakly, withherhowthentries the quality of desk, bansshakes.
说真的,何云霄当场就想仗着75的好感度,把范梓弱抱到书桌上,然后和她一起试试书桌的质量怎么样,禁不禁晃。
Becoming also75, defeatalso75.
成也75,败也75。He Yun Xiaoknew in the heart that 75goodsensitivities is very truly high, butalsoknowsittotruecapturessuccessfullyonlyalmost. Ten thousandmay not, becauseimpulses, wastes all previous effortsinthis time.何云霄心知75好感度确实很高,但也知道它离真正的攻略成功只差一点。万不可因为冲动,在此时前功尽弃。Oh, what does the Chinese catalpaweakyounger sister'shearttieis? Why dead the goodsensitivitydeactivation, can't enterlast?
唉,梓弱妹妹的心结到底是啥?为什么就是把好感度卡死死的,进不了最后一步呢?Fan ZiseesHe Yun Xiaoto come inweakly, teasedwith a smile: „Came ina moment ago, is‚He Yun Xiao’young master, is‚He Xiao’young master?”范梓弱看见何云霄进来,笑着打趣道:“刚才进来的,是‘何云霄’公子,还是‘何晓’公子呢?”He Yun Xiaoalsosaid with a smile: „Thatmustlook that makesmecome, is‚Fan Ziis weak’miss, was‚Fan Zi’miss.”何云霄也笑道:“那得看让我进来的,是‘范梓弱’姑娘,还是‘范紫’姑娘了。”Fan Zisaid with a smileweaklycunningly: „Whichmiss does young masterlike?”范梓弱狡黠地笑道:“公子更喜欢哪位姑娘呢?”He Yun Xiaoraised the headto throw out the chest, saidproudly: „If ‚He Xiao’, hedoes not likeaboutbothgirls. If I, Idefinitelylike.”何云霄抬头挺胸,非常自豪地说:“如果是‘何晓’嘛,他对两位姑娘都不喜欢。如果是我自己的话,那我肯定是都喜欢。”Fan Ziweaksnort/humsaid: „Young masterdoes not seem like the person of unfaithful/stamen.”范梓弱哼道:“公子不像是花心的人。”He Yun Xiaodoes not dareFan Ziweakhere, to leave behind itselfcertainlyto misunderstandtohersingle-mindedly.何云霄可不敢在范梓弱这里,给她留下自己一定会专一的误会。She said that „does not mindthreewifefourconcubines, but if promisedothersare wholehearted, mustachieve”, for this reasonevenwrotethreemalelordsone after another, but also was makes the femalelord in novelkill with one's own hand the malelord.
她可是说了,“不介意三妻四妾,但假如许诺了别人一心一意,就一定得做到”,为此甚至接连写死了三个男主,还都是让小说中的女主手刃男主。Toofearful!
太可怕了!He Yun Xiaosaidhastily: „Mylasciviousname, is the reputationremoteness, entireYinJingis well-known.”何云霄连忙道:“我好色之名,可是声名远扬,整个尹京人尽皆知。”Fan Zithese dayswas togetherweaklywithHe Yun Xiao, in the heartsomejudgments, oneself„surrendering”heis early aloof, howpossiblyisso-called„lascivious”? Shewill not believe the so-calledrumoragain.范梓弱与何云霄这些日子相处下来,心中早有判断,自己“投怀送抱”他都无动于衷,怎么可能是所谓“好色”?她自不会再去听信所谓流言。„Howyoung masteris, the Chinese catalpaknows fairly wellweakly, the young mastertakes the rumorto teasenot by any meansagain.”
“公子为人如何,梓弱心中有数,公子切莫再拿流言打趣啦。”He Yun Xiaofeared that shemisunderstands herselfsingle-mindedly, access road/simply said: „Iinhomeam the sole line of descent, my fatheralsowantsto look forsomegirls, blooms a looseleafforHou Residence.”何云霄怕她误会自己专一,便道:“我在家中是单传,我爹还想多找些姑娘,替侯府开枝散叶呢。”Fan Zilooks atHe Yun Xiaoweakly, has the profound meaningto say with a smile: „Bloodlinescontinuenaturallyare the major event, butthatdoes not delay the young masterto have only one in mind.”范梓弱看着何云霄,颇有深意地笑道:“血脉延续自然是头等大事,可那也不耽误公子情有所钟。”Jokes aside, evenHe Yun Xiaobelieve, the Fan Ziweakthischaracterwas too suitableto work as the wifebigwoman. Moreoversheis also intelligent, knows the ritual, solemn, steady. When the time comesmarriesto go home, foroneselfattend toHou Residence, after the managementdwelling,
说真的,连何云霄自己都认为,范梓弱这种性格太适合当正妻大妇了。而且她又聪明,知礼,端庄,稳重。到时候娶回家,替自己料理侯府,管理后宅,Definitelyis a expert. The place that butmostis a pityis, sheis the femalelord, otherfemalelords are also the femalelords.
肯定是一把好手。但最可惜的地方就在于,她是女主,其他的女主也是女主。
The femalelordpressurefemalewithcan the directsteamroll, makeFan Zibe the wifeat that timeweakly, oneselffavorherone, the problemdoes not have.
女主压女配可以直接碾压,那时让范梓弱做正妻,自己宠她一个,一点毛病没有。But, wheneveryoneis the femalelord, howto press?
但,当大家都是女主的时候,怎么压?
The Nanzhuwifeandyounger sisterDuwill not struggle the wifewith the Chinese catalpaweakyounger sister, butSister Jiang and antidotemissare uncertain.南珠老婆和杜妹妹不会和梓弱妹妹去争正妻,但姜姐姐和解药姑娘就不一定。To say the least, making the Chinese catalpabe the wifeweakly, butshewantsonlyto loveherone, thiswhat to do?
退一步说,让梓弱做正妻,可她要自己只爱她一个,这怎么办?He Yun Xiaoknows fairly well, oneselfanythingpledged that can her, thisdid not giveonly. Ifdid not haveChu Xiaoxiaonot to bite the soulpillinitially, oneselffirstmeetsher, accompanies togetherwithher. Butnow, severalfemalelordspoundin the hand, has been unable to back down.何云霄心中有数,自己什么承诺都能给她,唯独这一个给不了。倘若当初没有楚潇潇也没有噬魂丸,自己第一个遇见她,与她厮守也就罢了。可现在,好几位女主砸在手里,已经是骑虎难下。
The palmback of the handis the meat, whichlosingis not good.
手心手背都是肉,丢哪一个都不行。When the Chinese catalpaweakyounger sistersaid that „when thatdoes not delay the young masterhas only one in mind”, He Yun Xiao can only make fun saying: „Matter of getting married, togetting marriedtimesaidagain. The Chinese catalpais weak, are wethis/shoulddiscusstodayhowto write the plot of novel?”
所以当梓弱妹妹笑着说“那也不耽误公子情有所钟”时,何云霄只能打哈哈道:“娶亲的事,到娶亲的时候再说吧。梓弱,我们今天是不是该讨论如何去写小说的剧情了?”Heardto write the novel, Fan Zithencame the interestweakly.
听到写小说,范梓弱便来了兴趣。Sheput outhas prepared the goodpersonto suppose the graph, saidtoHe Yun Xiao: „Un. Yesterdaycompleted the personto suppose, nowyoung masteralsomissesplotnot to teachme.”
她拿出早就准备好的人设图表,对何云霄说道:“嗯。昨天做完了人设,现在公子还差剧情这一项没教给我。”
Under He Yun Xiaoin the deskis implicated, took a manuscript paper, writes downoneline of characterswith the writing brushagain, thenpushes the papertoFan Ziis weak, said: „Chinese catalpais weak, the so-calledplotmain line, is this.”何云霄在书桌旁坐下,取了一张稿纸,再用毛笔写下一行字,然后把纸推给范梓弱,道:“梓弱,所谓剧情主线,便是这个。”Fan Zilooks at the character on paperweakly, readin a soft voice: „Summarizesyourstorywitha few words.”范梓弱看着纸上的字,轻声读了出来:“用一句话概括你的故事。”He Yun Xiaosaid with a smile: „Right. That is it. Thisisto the plotoverallassurance. For example, Ithenlift the previousthatstory, the newlywedsattend the martial arts worldcongress. Ifsummarizesthisstorywitha few words, thenyes: After the femalelordis newly-married the sentiment, was betrayedby the husbandin the martial arts worldcongress, facingbetrayingheris never-ending, the husbandis besotted, gets sucked intomisleading of succubato be inescapably involved, finally the femalelordchoicekills the husbandcardto say.”何云霄笑道:“对。就是这个意思。这是对剧情整体的把握。举例来说,我便举上次那个故事,新婚夫妻参加武林大会的。若用一句话概括这个故事,便是:女主新婚后的感情,在武林大会中被丈夫背叛,面对背叛她不离不弃,丈夫却执迷不悟,深陷魔女的蛊惑不能自拔,最后女主选择杀夫证道。”Fan Zihearsweaklyearnestly, nods.范梓弱听得认真,点了点头。He Yun Xiaosaid: „ThatChinese catalpawantsto write any storyweakly, about‚He Xiao’and‚Fan Zi’.”何云霄道:“那梓弱想写一个什么故事呢,关于‘何晓’和‘范紫’的。”Fan Zithinksweakly a meeting, thenwroteon the manuscript paperwith, after finishing, pushes the papertoHe Yun Xiao, then the whole faceanticipated that looks athim.范梓弱想了一会,便拿笔在稿纸上写了起来,写完后,把纸推给何云霄,然后满脸期待地看着他。He Yun Xiaolooked atcontent on the manuscript paper:何云霄看了眼稿纸上的内容:„Story that He XiaoandFan Zilivetogether.”
“何晓和范紫一起生活的故事。”
The He Yun Xiaocorners of the mouthpulled outpulling out, asked: „Chinese catalpais weak, why do youwantto write?”何云霄嘴角抽了抽,问道:“梓弱,你为什么要这么写?”Fan Zilooks at the He Yun Xiaoexpressionweakly, apparentis not wonderful, a littlesaidflustered: „Wedo not write the dailyarticle of knight-erranttheme. The dailyarticle, ischats, eats mealandsleepsthese. The Chinese catalpafeltweakly,with‚lives’summaryto be good.”范梓弱看何云霄的表情,便知不妙,有点慌张地说:“我们不是要写武侠题材的日常文嘛。日常文,就是聊天、吃饭、睡觉这些。梓弱觉得,用‘生活’概括挺好的。”He Yun Xiaowantedto censurefirstpraisessaid: „Yousummarizeverywell, butwas too general, does not have the concreteplot. Igiveyouto give an example, for example, thisisone: Friends from childhood, the alternate growthfeelingsin a dangerousduty, the sentimenton the road of going homeelevate temperature, finallywas proposedby the bride's sidegets married, andstory that finallygot married.”何云霄欲贬先褒地说:“你概括得很好,但是太笼统了,没有具体的情节。我给你举例,比如,这是一个:青梅竹马,在一次危险任务中互生情愫,在回家的路上感情升温,最后由女方主动提出成亲,并且最终成婚的故事。”【Wordssaid,at presentreads aloudlistens to storytellingeasiest-to-useapp, mew mewreading, installmentmostupdate.】
【话说,目前朗读听书最好用的app,咪咪阅读,安装最新版。】Fan Zithinksweakly,revised an ownstory, givesHe Yun Xiaoto lookagain.范梓弱想了想,修改了一下自己的故事,再次递给何云霄看。„Young master, like thisOk?”
“公子,这样可以吗?”He Yun Xiaolowers the headlooks:何云霄低头一看:„Fan ZiadmiresherSenior BrotherHe Xiao, anddoes everything possible‚disgrace’tohim, what a pityis defeatedrepeatedly. In the duty, under the help of bandit, Fan Zisucceededagain, He Xiaothinkshas a deficit the Junior Sisterto haveguiltyabouther. Inafterwardday, two peoplegraduallyfaced up to the sentiment, finallygot married, livedfive.”
“范紫爱慕她的师兄何晓,并想尽办法‘失身’给他,可惜屡屡失败。再一次任务中,抢匪的帮助下,范紫成功了,何晓自以为亏欠师妹对她心生愧疚。后来的日子里,两人逐渐正视感情,最终成婚,生了五个。”He Yun Xiaoreadsthisplot, feels the storyto be good, livesfive, wasa much less?何云霄看着这个剧情,觉得故事挺好,就是生五个吧,是不是有点多了?
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