HowQiu Wujiknows how the nextchaptershouldoperate, writingthismattersheuntil nowis a youngapprentice, justalsowantsto recordto write down.秋无际怎么知道下一章应该怎么操作,码字这事儿她至今就是个小学徒,刚刚都还想记笔记来着。„No matteranythingoperates, youwrite, evenwrote the accident, weshouldered.”Qiu Wujiputs out a handfrom the opposite, builds conducts the backin the left hand of Chu Ge: „Actuallyyoudo not need scruplestoo, fraught with uncertainty. Youcontrol, no matterthatformerHeavenhow, youwriteyournewHeavenwas enough, as forwill haveanything, weare waitingtogether.”
“不管什么操作,你写,就算写出岔子了,我们扛。”秋无际从对面伸手过来,搭在楚戈的左手背上:“其实你不需要顾忌太多,畏首畏尾。你就是主宰,不管那个原天界怎么样,你写你的新天界就行,至于会发生什么,我们一起等着。”
The Chu Gevisionsparklesvisitsher, „en”.楚戈目光闪闪地看着她,“嗯”了一声。Qiu Wujisets outgracefully: „Youare first eating, Igive you refine the pill of immortality. Thismatterdid not go to the exhaustedsmallflame, Iwas clear that what kind ofpillyouneeded. en...... youcome outwiththesetastemedicines, the world of human beingshas......”秋无际盈盈起身:“你先吃着,我去给你炼丹。这事就不去劳烦小火苗了,我才清楚你需要怎样的丹。嗯……你拿这几味药出来,人界就有……”Chu Gepulled out the medicineaccording to the word, gazed afterQiu Wujito gooppositeto refine the dwelling place, the appetitedug up the foodexcellentlyupside down.楚戈依言掏了药,目送秋无际去了对面炼丹房,胃口大好地把饭扒了个底朝天。Hassuchwifealsoto wantwhatbicycle, not to mentionshealsomeetscharacterto actto playto have an affair......
有这样的老婆还要什么自行车,别提她还会角色扮演玩偷情……Hee hee.
嘻嘻。Dug up the meal, but alsosnort/hum the smallsongis goingwashing a cleanness the dish, Chu Geis then stretching oneselfto siton the chaircomfortably, starts the tonight'swork.
扒完了饭菜,还哼着小曲子去把碗给洗了个干净,楚戈这才伸着懒腰舒舒服服地坐回椅子上,开始今晚的工作。Actuallywas very long is not so attentiveis writing the thing, except foreating meal the restdrilled the feelingindraft...... in some sense, returned to the official duty of writer.
说来其实很久没有这么用心在写东西了,除了吃饭休息都钻在稿子里的感觉……某种意义上,是回归了写手的本职。Beforethattypecopied the plotorcloneautomaticwritingand so on, nowthinks,was not really good, had lost an authorproperheart, got what one deservesbybibliophileis revolted.
之前那种抄剧情或者分身自动码字之类的,如今想想,真不好,已经失去了一个作者应有的心,也活该被书中人造反。Nowretrieves this matter of doing.
如今才算找回该做的事吧。Naturallyonetypecopiesiscompletely, for exampleChu Gewantsto have a look at the book reviewto have the personto guess that Chu Tiangein the foreheadstory, thengot angrycopiesonewave of chapterto say.
当然有一种抄是完全可以的,比如楚戈很想看看书评有没有人猜测楚天歌在天庭见闻,然后怒抄一波章说。CopiedQiu Wujisaw the cave mansionboarding houseothers'appraisal when likebefore.
就像之前抄秋无际见到洞府招待所时别人的评价一样。Howeverwas a pityvery much, no, chattedChu Tiangefew, allinQiuqiuthis.
然而很可惜,没有,聊楚天歌的都没几个,全在秋秋这了。Chu Geremembersoneselffamilyyounger brotherpositionat home, withthisbiologicalson'syounger brotherpositioninreaderseyes, has not missedprobably, it may be said thatenhances one another's beauty......楚戈想起自己在家里的家庭弟位,和这位亲儿子在读者们眼中的弟位,好像也没差,可谓交相辉映……However the younger brotherpositionis so low, you have no alternative butto write, the size is also main character, reallydoes not write the readeralso to revolt......
然而弟位这么低,你还不能不写,大小也是个主角呢,真不写读者还得造反……
The air/Qishakescoldly, when the mancanstand!
气抖冷,男人什么时候才能站起来!en, ok, the wifeis so good, used is also the sword, does not shadowbox......嗯,算了,老婆那么好,用的也是剑,又不打拳……writing amountcharacter.码字码字。Now a writingimportantdifficulty, is not the structureplot, insteadis the timecontrast of bookneutralizationpresentworld, is not a little goodto grasp.
现在码字的一个重要难点,不是构架剧情,反而是书中和现世的时间对比,有点不好掌握。Explained the Chinese classicsreasonably the advancementpossiblyis notwritesanythingto haveanythingaccording tooneselfcompletely......, becausethiswasmanyadvancements, the Qiu Wujistory and Chu Tiangestory and Yan Qianliestory, this/shouldis happening at this timesimultaneously.
按理说书中进程已经不可能是完全按照自己写什么就发生什么了……因为这是多线进程,秋无际的故事、楚天歌的故事、炎千烈的故事,此时该是同时在发生的。OwnwordswriteQiuqiutime, Chu TiangeandYan Qianliewill not suspend, theirstoriesare happening, oneselfhave not actually writtenwith enough time.
自己的笔墨写秋秋的时候,楚天歌和炎千烈是不会暂停的,他们的故事正在发生,自己却还没来得及写。
The matter that iftheyhave not writtenthemselvescompleted, oneselfgo to„copying”theirready-madestories, in thistested the certificateto be irresponsiblein the formerworld of human beings, was easyto have something go wrong, was bestto leavethis.
而如果他们已经把自己还没写的事做完了,自己又去“抄”他们现成的故事,这点在之前人界测试里已经证明不负责任,容易出岔子,最好别这样。Therefore can thisstoryadvancementbe is quite suitable?
所以这故事进程会是怎样比较适宜?Chu Gearrangesas far as possible, for exampleQiu Wujifirstfoundthiscity, will then diveto cultivate/repair for night, the waitingtomorrowandunderotherstranscript.楚戈尽量安排,譬如秋无际先找到这座城,然后潜修一夜,等待明天和别人下副本。During this period, Yan Qianlieis strollingeverywhererandomly, temporarilydoes not have the plot;
在此期间,炎千烈正在到处乱逛,暂无剧情;Chu Tiangeis going to the road of forehead, is farther than Qiu Wuji, afterQiu Wujienters the cave mansionis quiet, the Chu Tiangeplothappen tostartscontinued from above.楚天歌正在去天庭的路上,比秋无际远,所以当秋无际进入洞府沉寂之后,楚天歌的剧情正好开始续上。Alsomustthrowsome time, onhisroadwalks, when stays behindoneselfresthas not written the space.
还要多抛一段时间,他路上多走走,留下自己休息没写时的空间。Actuallythisfar-fetched......
其实这都不靠谱……
The speed that ownwritingspeedandtheyspokewas not necessarily consistent, ifCarvin, thinks how manyminuteswrote a dialogue, thatbibliophile was also sillyhow manyminutesto speak?
自己码字的速度和他们说话的速度不一定一致,并且如果卡文,想几分钟才写一句对话,那难道书中人也傻几分钟才说话么?Thereforethinks it over, whatis most credibleisfirstwrites, forms an establishedscript, thencharacteraccording toarranging the scriptmoves towardto do.
所以想来想去,最靠谱的还是自己先写,形成一种既定的剧本,然后角色按照定好的剧本走向去做。Althoughlost the interest of real-timecontrol, winningis steady.
虽然失去了实时操控的趣味性,胜在稳健。Nowanythingdoes not havesteadyimportant.
现在什么都没有稳健重要。Alsomeans that tonighthas no wayto rest, mustcatch up with the manuscript, catches upbeforeChu Tiangearrives in the forehead, firstfinishedhisforeheadstory.
也就意味着今晚没法休息,要赶稿,赶在楚天歌抵达天庭之前,把他的天庭见闻先写完。Without the chaptersaidcopies, on the impromptu composition, thisis notspies on the plot of Godsecretin any casefrom the beginningdirectly, is only a veryordinaryforeheadstory. The readersdo not understandwhatGodrebellionHeavenindependenttheseinside stories, Chu Tiange in readereyeswill not knowthesematters, hewasjustascensionwantsto take advanced courses the higher-ordercultivation techniquecuriousbaby.
没章说抄,就现编,反正这一开始也不是什么直接窥探天帝隐秘的剧情,只是一个很普通的天庭见闻。读者可不懂什么天帝造反天界独立这些内情,读者眼中的楚天歌也不会知道这些事,他就是个刚飞升想进修更高阶功法的好奇宝宝而已。NaturallyinChu Geownangle of view, spies on the foreheadtaking advantage of the Chu Tiangeangle of viewwhetherhasexceptionally, whether conducts, Godaccording toownnewHeavenstructurewhetherhas the strangeperformance, theseareneedto observethrough the experience of Chu Tiange.
当然在楚戈自己的视角里,是借着楚天歌的视角去窥探天庭是否有异常、是否按照自己的新天界构架进行、天帝是否有怪异的表现,这些是需要通过楚天歌的经历来观察的。Otherswrite a book, wealsowrite a book, soto be how tired......
别人写书,咱也写书,怎么就这么累呢……Chu Gewriting amountis wantingto cry.楚戈码字码着都想哭。Without the means that towrite a world, topreserve the wife, spelled!
没办法,为了写出一个世界,为了保住自家老婆,拼了!Qiu Wujicalmlypracticespill, divine senseis coveringin the Chu Gedirectionthroughout, the corners of the mouthselectsgentlyis wiping the happy expression.秋无际静静地练着丹,神念始终笼罩在楚戈的方向,嘴角轻轻挑着一抹笑意。Thisheinwriting, oneselfmakes the day of assistantin the preparing foodrefine the pill of immortalitydiligently, probably was very not accidentally long...... after the Heavenplotstarted, unexpectedlyreturned tosuchcondition.
这种他在努力码字,自己在做饭炼丹做助手的日子,好像也很久没有过了……意外的在天界剧情开始之后,居然回归到了这样的状态。To be honest, Qiuqiulikesvery much.
老实说,秋秋很喜欢。Thatwas they were togetherin the pastmanylife, althoughwasevenDan, almostdid not have the memory, perhapswrote the autobiographyonly to bring, otherwiseno onelooked.
那是两人往昔相处得最多的生活,虽然最是平澹,几乎毫无记忆点可言,说不定写自传都只能一笔带过,否则没人看的。Butthatactuallymostlooks like the worldcouple.
但那却最像人世夫妻。
The long timeoccupiesQiu Wuji of celestial mountain, this world that crashes intofromhere.
久居仙山的秋无际,就是从这里坠入的凡尘。............
…………Chu Tiangeclimbed mountains and crossed riversafter 1st, finallyarrived inbeside the forehead.楚天歌经过一日跋涉,终于抵达了天庭之外。Looksfrom afar, raising eyesendlessmountainsea, cannotcall it„courtyard”. Only thensince the Yunshanextremelydeepplacecansee the palacepavilioncornerfaintly, showsheretrulyto have the magnificent jade palacevaguely.
远远看去,举目无尽山海,根本不能称之为“庭”。只有从云山极深之处隐隐可以看见殿阁一角,依稀展现着这里确实存在玉宇琼楼。Heaveninsufficientimmortal that ifQiu Wujisees, Chu Tiangesees was really the paradise.
如果说秋无际看见的天界不够仙,楚天歌看见的就真是仙界了。In the foghas the dragonto appear intermittently.
云雾之中有龙隐现。Distant placeChinese parasol treephoenixlong cry.
远处梧桐凤凰长鸣。Manchurian craneBailuwanders abouteverywhere, in the airhas the immortalFengvoid/falsegoverningwind, the naturalround trip, auspiciousbeastsdo not fearto live, the eyedropcookssizes up the distant placelineChu Tiange.
仙鹤白鹿四处徜徉,空中有仙人冯虚御风,潇洒来去,瑞兽们毫不畏生,眼睛滴熘熘地打量远处行来的楚天歌。Fine spring day, the spiritual energyis rich, the distant placerunning waterswishyuan, in the sound of watertransmits the immortalflutebamboo flutevaguely, completely relaxed.
鸟语花香,灵气浓郁,远处流水潺湲,水声之中依稀传来仙家箫笙,心旷神怡。Even if the world of human beingsmostsaid that Cloudridge Sect of immortaltreasure trove , compared with thisplaceis also sharpausterecollects, the feeling of itsimmortalspiritauspicious omenby faris not a rank.
哪怕是人界最称仙家宝地的云际宗,与此地相比也过于锋锐肃敛,其仙灵祥瑞之感远远不是一个等级。
The spiritual energyrankis not a rank.
灵气的级别也不是一个等级。Chu Tiangecanaffirm,canseek for a suitabletreasure trovehere, the lightsits in meditationcultivation, oneselfbreak through the profounddwelling place of celestial beingssoon.楚天歌敢肯定,能在这里寻找一处适合的宝地,光是静坐修行,自己突破玄仙都用不了太久的。
If there is immortalmethodagain, thatdid not needto raise.
若再有仙家法,那就更不用提了。Thisshouldbe the dwelling place of Buddhist immortals that entireHeavenmembermostyearn, whyinsteadwants a pull people......
这应该是整个天界修士们最向往的洞天,为什么反而要拉人呢……Chu Tiangethenasked.楚天歌便这么问了。
The Confucian scholarsmiled: „Your excellencymight as wellself-examined why isn't willingto come?”
那儒生笑了一下:“阁下不妨自问,为什么原先不愿来呢?”Chu Tiangethinks: „It is not willingto restrict, that is all.”楚天歌想了想:“不愿拘束,仅此而已。”
The Confucian scholarsclap hands saying: „Whatimmortalaskedwasfree, deservedso. Thereforeis willing is not manyforforeheaddevoting life, even ifthere is a topmeritmagic treasurething, hasnotmoving.”
儒生抚掌道:“仙家求的是逍遥,该当如此。所以愿意为天庭效命者并不算很多,哪怕有顶级功法宝物,也多有不动心者。”Chu Tiangecanunderstand,ramblesfirst, whoimmortal cultivationhas a fatherfor the head?......楚天歌可以理解,逍遥第一,谁修仙是为了头上有个爹啊?呃……„Be that as it may......”Chu Tiangedoescoughtwo, asked: „Allis notsought the free and unfettered, did the samemeter/ricealsoraisehundredtypes of people? Whyotherwise the Goddoes not ramble, why botherto do a forehead. Moreoveryour excellency , is to be an officialevidently.”
“话虽如此……”楚天歌干咳两声,还是问道:“也不全是求逍遥的吧,一样米还养百样人呢?否则天帝为啥不逍遥去,何苦搞个天庭。再如阁下,看样子也是个想当官的。”„en......”Confucian scholarsaid with a smile: „Before your excellencyascension, feeling the forehead does?”
“嗯……”儒生笑道:“阁下飞升之前,觉得天庭是干什么的?”Chu Tiangethinks: „Variouskindsare, wind and rainthunder and lightning, good fortunemarriage affinity, wait/etc.”楚天歌想了想:“各类司职的吧,风雨雷电,福禄姻缘,等等。”„Good.” The Confucian scholarswantto take the fanclappingpalm, the discoveryfandid not have, waves the arms aboutresentfully: „Howevertheseare, correspondencewhereshouldbe a hugeworld of human beings...... maypresentworld of human beings?”
“不错。”儒生很想拿扇子拍手掌心,却发现扇子没了,悻悻甩手:“然而这些司职,对应的该是一个庞大的人界……可如今人界安在?”In the Chu Tiangeheartmoves slightly.楚天歌心中微动。Thisopposite partytalk intimately with relative acquaintance, shouldcarefullythinkissue that can actually think.
这倒不是对方交浅言深,应该是认真想想就能想到的问题。
The irritability of Heavenlies inthis, itsignificance that does not seem to have, merelyispurelyhigher-dimensionalpointpotential surface, whererelateswith the world, wheredoes the significance of forehead?
天界的别扭就在于此,它似乎没有存在的意义,仅仅是个纯粹高维一点的位面罢了,和人间关系何在,搞个天庭的意义何在?Heevencanthinkintention that Chu Gewrites.
他甚至可以想到楚戈这么写的用意。Cancels the value that formerHeavenhasthoroughly.
彻底把原天界存在的价值都抹去。
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