WSIDWTFLETB :: Volume #5

#452: Teaches the young apprentice again


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Was saying these words time, sits cross-legged the true body feeling in book a little to be ashamed small, opened eyes to size up around one, curls the lip again. 说着这句话的时候,盘坐在书中的真身感觉有点小羞耻,睁眼打量了一下四周,再度撇了撇嘴。 What trash cave mansion, but also is spicy expensively! 什么垃圾洞府,还辣么贵! Chu Ge is being moved, the discovery Qiu Wuji of tender feelings honey intent was just also putting on a serious face to transfer the thread of conversation: Your this broken cave mansion boarding house, amassed money? A spirit stones of my ring pulls out spatial half, suffices to pay rent of one month of most preliminary cave mansion!” 楚戈正感动着呢,就发现刚刚还柔情蜜意的秋无际板着脸转了话锋:“你这破洞府招待所,抢钱的吗?我一戒指的灵石掏空一半,就够支付一个月最低级洞府的租金!” World of human beings heaven......” Chu Ge holds hand: 18 city rich women march go north broadly, pulls out a spatial family property only enough low-rent housing.” “人界上天嘛……”楚戈揣手手:“十八线城市富婆进军北上广,掏空家底只够个廉租房。” Qiu Wuji almost smiles to make noise: If really the rich woman goes north to pay the downpayment broadly at least, rather than only enough rents for a month. Your this gap between rich and poor is odder than the present world!” 秋无际差点笑出声:“真要是富婆去北上广起码交得起首付,而不是只够租一个月。你这贫富差距比现世还离谱!” Chu Ge thinks: Probably this/should odd, that is separation of Celestial. en, although rich man is joyful I unable to imagine, this is also separation of unusual Celestial.” 楚戈想了一想:“好像就该离谱一点,那可是天人之隔。,虽然有钱人的快乐我根本想象不到,这也是另类的天人之隔吧。” Qiu Wuji is disinclined with him poor, complained ill-humoredly: Why the world of human beings uses spirit stones, Heaven also to use spirit stones, is different on the grade scale, can't you come to select the new trick?” 秋无际懒得跟他贫,没好气吐槽:“为什么人界用灵石,天界也用灵石,就品级档次不同,你不能来点新花样?” ......” Chu Ge thinks, replied: Why makes currency issue actually author forum to discuss with spirit stones, is almost the menstruation post, finally the consensus is two: A reader custom, does not need to look for trouble, even if you trade a thing, that is still spirit stones changes a view, no essential difference.” ……”楚戈想了想,回答:“为什么用灵石做货币这种问题其实作者论坛讨论过很多,几乎是月经贴,最终共识是两条:一则读者习惯,没必要没事找事,即使你换个东西,那也是灵石变个说法,没什么本质区别。” Two? Why wants this type of goods? Cannot be other, or is such as the financial system of your present world?” “二呢?为什么一定要这种类型的物品?不能是其他,又或者是如你们现世的金融体系?” Because was foundation the thing of just needing, can cultivation with it can be used for the set up formation refiner wait/etc, who was useful, this can analogy for the ancient times makes the currency with the grain the situation. Although the grain is renewable, spirit stones actually, nothing but establishes a spiritual energy to precipitate, returns to the land and so on, same circulated with the grain. Naturally, most is mainly our writers does not understand the monetary economics, is very difficult to design one set of financial currency system, this reason is most direct, refuses to accept not to debate.” “因为是基础的刚需之物,能用它修炼又能用来布阵炼器等等,谁都用得上,这就可以类比为古代用粮食做货币的情况。虽然粮食可再生,灵石其实也可以嘛,无非多设定一个灵气沉淀,重归大地之类的,就和粮食一样循环起来了。当然了,最主要是我们写手不懂货币经济学,很难设计一套金融货币体系,这个原因最直接,不服不辩。” „......” Qiu Wuji has not refused to accept, she wants to pull out a small book to take the note on the contrary. “……”秋无际没有不服,她反倒想掏个小本本记笔记。 Young apprentice Qiuqiu wants to write a book. 小学徒秋秋还是想写书。 Later the important matter arrived, tried itself to create a world. Who said that this does want ability to support? cultivation to certain boundary, the magical powers created the world, but writing a book is one very good has at present type, a book world...... or unifies own cartoon also...... 以后大事抵定了,也试试自己能不能创个世呗。谁说这一定要异能来支持?修行到了一定境界,神通创世也可以啊,而写书就是一个很好的具现方式,一书一世界嘛……或者结合自己的漫画也可以…… Looks at her appearance, Chu Ge knows that she is thinking anything, could not bear smile, pinched her nose: Ok, my time is not teaching the young apprentice to write a book, and you splits to understand the entire situation. You have can ask, next time when the plot that anything does not understand will conduct did not use again a play.” 看她那模样,楚戈就知道她在想什么,忍不住笑了起来,捏了捏她的鼻子:“好了,我这次不是在教小徒弟写书的,是把整个情况和你剖个明白。你有什么不懂的可以问,下次剧情进行时就不用再出戏了。” Qiu Wuji thinks, asked: „Shortly after this broken place I am lives, must change a good cave mansion. But I cannot put down to be many white spirit stones, how can arrange some to me? When under transcript, I did go to look for a cave mansion? Said makes a money.” 秋无际偏头想了想,问道:“这种破地方我是住不久的,要换个好洞府。但我可不能平白多出灵石来,要怎么给我安排一些?等副本下完了,我自己出去找过一个洞府?还是说出去搞点钱。” Why doesn't make the cave mansion with that transcript directly?” Chu Ge said: Although is the emperor ruins surrounding, is the real emperor ruins selected location is, place of the best spiritual energy burying, gives you to prepare specially.” “为什么不直接用那个副本做洞府?”楚戈道:“那虽然是帝墟外围,也是真的帝墟选址所在啊,最好的灵气埋藏之地,专门给你准备的。” Qiu Wuji gawked: „Ah?” 秋无际愣了一下:“啊?” Chu Ge said leisurely: „Can't the number of god of the north Great Emperor, why be you inherits?” 楚戈悠悠道:“真武大帝之号,为什么不能是你来继承?” Qiu Wuji is dumbfounded. 秋无际目瞪口呆。 Almost is to the godship and promotion route that the main character side seeks for the correspondence, the profound imaginary base held. From the beginning I have not thought you and god of the north hook, but recollection history, Cloudridge Sect swordsmanship, since becoming aware of some inheritance from Black Tortoise, that this to, did not need not to use white/in vain. Chu Tiange and small flame that side I have other arrangements, not necessarily is the east, south, west, and north, does not need.” “差不多算是给主角方寻找对应的神格和升级路线,玄幻基操了。一开始我并没有想过把你和真武挂钩,但回溯历史,云际宗的剑法既然有部分传承自玄武之悟,那这线就对上了,不用白不用。楚天歌和小火苗那边我另有安排,未必都是东南西北,没必要。” Some Qiu Wuji suddenly confused feelings. 秋无际忽然有些错乱感。 Looks that is an author is arranging own story line, appearance that the young apprentice can also study. 看着是一位作者在安排自己的故事线,小学徒还能学的样子。 Is a Heavenly Dao is organizing the destiny actually, imperial edict to seal/confer Gods. 实则是一界天道在摆布命运,敕封众神。 More can correspond these antiquity legends greatly, this feeling is more intense, is much more intense than in the feeling of the world of human beings. 越是把这些上古传说大能相对应,这种感觉就越强烈,比在人界的感觉强烈得多。 Suddenly thought that Heaven of this rare and beautiful flowers designed is not that cannot accept, at least this pattern was probably big...... 忽然觉得这奇葩的天界设计也不是那么不能接受了,起码这格局好像大了很多…… Also lets the power that the long place peak Qiu Wuji had promoted to climb, this feeling has not had for a long time...... 也重新让久处巅峰的秋无际有了重新升级攀登的动力,这种感觉好久没有过了…… The position of god of the north Great Emperor! 真武大帝之位诶! Qiu Wuji exerts however said: I answered the opposite party, tomorrow under transcript goes!” 秋无际奋然道:“那我就去答复对方,明天下副本去!” „......” Chu Ge holds on her: This type first transcript of being near expensive/noble place, do not look at the probably final position standard very high appearance initially, essentially is also the real immortal of initial period to profound immortal rank transcript, does not need to regard the ascension important matter to treat, the true body dealt with...... me to think what sufficiently you now this/should doing was another matter.” “诶诶诶……”楚戈一把拉住她:“这种初临贵地的第一个副本,别看好像最终位格很高的样子,本质上也就是个初期的真仙到玄仙等级副本,没必要当成飞升大事来对待,真身足以应付了……我觉得你现在更该做的是另一件事。” Qiu Wuji queerly said: What?” 秋无际奇道:“什么?” Prepares food.” Chu Ge said pitifully: I was hungry.” “做饭。”楚戈可怜巴巴道:“我饿了。” The Qiu Wuji anything big on thought was made not to have. 秋无际什么高大上的念头都被弄没了。 Returned to the smoke and fire world from the ruins of epoch-making god. 从开天辟地的众神之墟回到了烟火人间。 Hungry your big end of ghost, in this attire anything average person, your present world cultivation also Yuan infant good! Gods special hungry! 饿你个大头鬼,在这装什么普通人,你现世修行也元婴了好么!神特么饿! But looks at the Chu Ge eager appearance, Qiu Wuji is a little also tenderhearted, somewhat slightly rebuked the place to select his head: You...... good all various professions, when you write a book to spend brain, makes up to you.” 但看楚戈眼巴巴的样子,秋无际又有点心软,有些小嗔怪地点了点他的脑袋:“你啊……行行行,就当你写书费脑,给你补补。” Looked that Qiu Wuji the appearance that turns around to prepare food, Chu Ge pounds oneself comfortably on the bed, implored the one breath. 秋无际转身出去做饭的样子,楚戈舒坦地把自己砸在床上,吁出一口气。 Actually what Qiu Wuji does not know, Chu Ge writes Heaven also really writing the world of human beings is more tired, this not only writes a book, there is a goal, is displaying their wisdom and bravery with the God, burning the brain degree is higher. 其实秋无际不知道的是,楚戈写天界还真比写人界累很多,这不仅仅是写书,还是有目的的,在和天帝斗智斗勇,烧脑程度更高。 Most critically, Chu Ge looked at fixedly the vigor to be one of them. 更关键的是,楚戈凝注了精气神在其中。 During higher-dimensional world, as if wields the pen also has the detention, the spirit does not concentrate slightly writes the motionless appearance probably, needs his spiritual strength to concentrate on to invest. 更高维的世界,似乎运笔之中也有滞涩,精神稍微不集中就好像写不动的样子,需要他的精神力量全神贯注在投入。 Cannot like before, separated soul go to the book to play, the body kept wisp of miraculous on-hook writing...... 再也不能像以前那样,分魂去书里玩,身躯留一缕灵光挂机码字了…… That is not only one type is irresponsible, actually could not achieve. 那既是一种不负责,其实也是做不到了。 What most has a headache, even if the mental effort of consumption is much bigger, may not be welcome by the reader, this awfully. The world needs the acceptance, if the reader does not welcome, oneself designed one pile also from, does not have the significance. 最头疼的是,哪怕耗费的心力更大得多,却还有可能不受读者欢迎,这才要命。世界需要认同度,如果读者不欢迎,自己设计了一堆也是自嗨,毫无意义。 Chu Ge pulls out the cell phone, by looks at the book reviews and group friends' discussion on the bed. 楚戈掏出手机,靠在床上看书评和群友们的讨论。 Also ok, the current commentary has nothing special, the readers are really experienced, anything establishes has seen, the light exposes a Heaven city, even the rare and beautiful flowers, the readers will not think again has anything to be surprised. Let alone this setting actually not special, but Qiuqiu little looks...... 还行,目前的评论没什么特别的,读者们实在见多识广,什么设定都见过,光是展露一个天界城市,就算再奇葩,读者们也不会觉得有什么惊讶的。何况这个设定其实并没有多特殊,只是秋秋看得少而已…… In the readers eyes, this is the recent map that just started, the plot has not launched, from the start has nothing to discuss. 在读者们眼中,这不过就是个刚刚开始的新地图,剧情还没展开,压根没啥好讨论的。 Point that is worth discussing only, instead is under Qiuqiu transcript is very rare. Since the past and post-war of Poisonhand Demon Monarch transcript, Qiu Wuji did not have transcript again, has kept aloof, now actually by the status of rookie and outsider, under transcript the swindling and abducting, this also very had selects the small anticipation. 唯一值得讨论的点,反而是秋秋副本很难得一见。自从当年和毒手魔君副本之战后,秋无际就再也没下过副本了,一直高高在上,如今却是以新人和外乡人的身份,被人坑蒙拐骗下副本,这个还挺有那么点小期待的。 How the discussion centralized, Qiuqiu will fall back on the people to meet the argument that the insistent passer- is shocking and so on transcript behind. 讨论都集中在副本会怎么下、秋秋是会退到众人身后还是会一马当先路人震惊之类的争论上去了。 Generally speaking, this opening in reader eyes with neither merits nor faults, calculates that launches normally. 总体来说,这个开局在读者眼中无功无过,算正常展开。 This enough. 这就够了。 The Heaven plot sense of purpose are too many, mainly to spar to pull with the powerful enemy, but also wants to fear that colorful is very difficult to achieve, can maintain with neither merits nor faults on the foot. 天界剧情目的性太多,主要为了和强敌斗法拉扯呢,还想要多么精彩纷呈怕是很难做到,能维持无功无过就足矣。 A Chu Ge mood loosen, fell asleep unexpectedly unknowingly. 楚戈心情一松,竟然不知不觉地睡着了。 That side Qiu Wuji jue the small mouth, in the inventory with refrigerator was making the food, just wants to shout Chu Ge most likes listening ate meal, in the heart moves suddenly, has not shouted makes noise. 那边秋无际噘着小嘴,拿冰箱里的存货做了顿饭,刚想喊楚戈最爱听的“吃饭了”,心中忽动,没喊出声。 She walked softly, looks appearance that Chu Ge goes to sleep peacefully, looks, the look is even more gentle. 她轻手轻脚地走了过去,看着楚戈安然入睡的样子,看着看着,神色越发温柔。 First feels his baseless and irrational concoctions, listening to his mentality to think that thought many, the layout was very far. 先觉得他胡编乱造,听了他的思路又觉得想得很多,布局很远。 But has not thought he will be tired. 但没想过他会累的。 It seems like the battle of Heaven really consumed he very big vigor, by far before is not, simplicity that imagines. 看来天界之役真的耗费了他很大的精气神,远远不是自己之前想象的那么简单。 Cannot play the small temperament...... how, no matter Heaven designs, must coordinate him to develop this well by his single-handedly build stage. 不能耍小脾气啦……不管天界设计得如何,也要好好配合他演好这个由他一手搭建的舞台。 —— —— ———— PS: Who dares to say again my poisonous milk, today recommends «My father Han», the historical new god, explodes the work of funds! 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