Retains the draft, anythingmustretain the draft.
存稿存稿存稿,什么都要存稿。
The Chu Geeyewas red, wishes one couldto switch offallcommunication facilities, immediatelystartswriting.楚戈眼睛都红了,恨不得关掉一切通讯工具,立刻开始码字。Butmore anxiousinsteadjumped over the code, for a short timeunexpectedlyreturnedstopped writing......
可越急反而越码不了,一时半会居然还卡文了……Possiblywas relatedwithformerthat30,000characters, that timewritingconditionpulled outvery muchleaves, was somewhat incompatiblewith the presentcondition.
可能和之前那三万字有关,那时候的写作状态是很抽离的,和现在的状态有些格格不入了。Chu Gedeeplyinspires, removes the distracting thoughtsdiligently, enteredbyoneselfas far as possibleemptiesclear(ly).楚戈深深吸了口气,努力排除杂念,尽量让自己进入空明。Whathedoes not know, oneselfthisbookreallymorewrotewas better, was good the odddegree.
他不知道的是,自己这本书真的越写越好了,好到了离谱的程度。Withwritinglevelirrelevant......
和写作水平无关……Butisthattypetruthfullyseeing the feeling that the picturerepeats, makes up the feeling of compilingwith the brain, is not a difficulty.
而是那种如实把看见的画面复述出来的感觉,和脑补编造的感觉,不是一个难度。Moreover the thing that writesmore and more„really”, including the clothingdetail, constructed the detail, a floweredgrass, iscanpullseveralas forcultivation technique, reallydoesoneto bring forth the thing the appearance. chantpulls, compelling the standardto be high.
而且写的东西越来越“真”了,包括服饰细节,建筑细节,一花一草,乃至于功法都能多扯几句,搞得一副真可以练出东西的模样。口诀一扯,逼格高得不行。Beforewrote the fight and cultivation of Chu Tiange, thatwascontrastspurely, whatplayedwas„potential”, the technique when and passer-byexclamationwait/etc, taughtQiu Wujito writefightuseslikebefore. Butnowcontrastsbesidestheseoriginalatmosphere, increased the description of actual combatdetailadditionally, insomerealitiespractices the reader of wrestleto discover,according tothatdescription, reallycansimulate the actual combatpictureprobably......
以前写楚天歌的战斗和修炼,那是纯烘托的,玩的是“势”,以及路人惊叹等等,就像之前教秋无际写战斗时所用的技法。但现在除了这些原有的气氛烘托之外,额外添加了实战细节的描写,有现实中练过格斗的读者发现,按照那种描述,好像真的可以模拟出实战画面……
The immortaltasteis also getting more and more thick, the stylealsohas no changeobviously, isverystrangelettingpersonfeelsimmortal aurato be full, has, ifarrives.
仙味儿也越来越浓,文笔明明也没什么变化,就是很奇怪的让人觉得仙气十足,有若亲临。
The mosongqinfine jadereaches the rensuijicaojianfine jadeto teachzhancenyingLiankefermiumdiaoppadzehangengxiadesertednailpartnerrento soakcuozhiyingouto play the role of the zengmoumbrella
銆愯瘽璇达紝鐩鍓嶆湕璇诲惉涔渶濂界敤鐨刟pp锛屽挭鍜闃呰伙紝瀹夎呮渶鏂扮増銆傘This does Big Chualsoreallycultivate/repair the immortalto be inadequate?
这楚大难道还真修过仙不成?Properly speakingfrontdoes not have the process that this...... entrance doordisciplesect of initialalsoveryrepertoirerises, behindcrowd of Chinese chessare not bigwiththeserelations, belong toChu Geoneselfbold handwriting vigorous stylegood. How the worldlaunched the laterthistasteto be getting more and more mysterious......
按理说前面也没这样啊……初期还挺套路的外门弟子宗门崛起的过程,后面群像戏也和这些关系不大,属于楚戈自己的笔力不错。怎么世界展开之后这味儿越来越神奇了……Alsoreallyhas the authorto be ablein a bookto writeprogresses, but alsoprogressesobviously?
还真有作者能够在一本书里边写边进步,还进步得这么明显的吗?Alwaysis notbecauseheis not concerned about facewroteQiu Wujito receiveminor characterChu Gefor the disciple, thereforehereallydid meet?
总不会是因为他不要脸的写了秋无际收龙套楚戈为徒,所以他就真会了吧?
No matter how the readersguessedin abundance, in brief the reputation of thisbookwas better and better, the reputationwas getting bigger and bigger, in addition the coupleowninternet celebritydrainage, soonhas just like become the websitehead.
不管读者们怎么猜测纷纷,总之这本书的口碑是越来越好,名头越来越大,加上俩口子自己的网红引流,俨然已经快要成为网站头部了。Moreoverentirechannelthattype.
而且还是全渠道那种。This is also oldvermilioncanurge that alwaysthanks the energy of writingYuanprojectto be atearly.
这也是老朱得以催促老谢谢文元早早立项的底气所在。
The serializingperiodinitiates a project, no doubtthere aremanyrisks, but the advantagealsohas. The most typicaladvantageis the serializingperiodis the heat degreemaximumtime, whenendsthisseveralyearslater the heat degreepolished, the IPsignificance of so-calledbringingcurrent capacitychangedis also little.
连载期就立项,固然有很多风险,但好处也是有的。最典型的优势就是连载期才是热度最高的时候,等完本几年后热度都退光了,所谓自带流量的IP意义也就变小了。Very when obviouslynowisChu Gemostis elated with success, underthiscrest of wavefire intensityannounced that the newsheat degree of projectcanbe higher than several years later. Naturally the projectdoes not representphotographsimmediately, the middlealsohas various verylongprocedures, must therefore the earlier the better.
很显然现在就是楚戈最春风得意之时,在这个风头火势之下宣布立项的新闻热度都能比过几年高。当然立项不代表立即拍摄,中间还有很漫长的各种程序,所以才要越早越好。Thisproject is not only the film and television, but alsorelated to the animation and gameand so on entirecopyrights, howmustarrangealsoreallyto needspecificallyto investigate and study. SuchbigprojectYuan is also quite discrete, will not say that beginsto begin, since the Chu Gerequestscriptmusthavehimto participate, thathere something are quite goodwithauthorface-to-face talkone or two.
这个项目不仅仅是影视,还涉及动漫和游戏等等全版权,具体要怎么安排还很需要调研。这么大的项目谢文元也比较谨慎,不会说动手就动手,既然楚戈要求剧本必须有他参与,那这里的一些事情还是和作者面谈一二比较好。Thereforehadthisinvitation.
于是有了这次邀约。
The editionis sayingin that side: „Chu Ge, previoustimeissuesyourcontract......”
编辑正在那边说:“楚戈,上次发给你的合同……”Chu Gerejects: „Thatreallydoes not sign......”楚戈还是拒绝:“那个真不签了……”
The editoris silent, long timesaid: „Youspoke face-to-face.”
编辑沉默,半晌才道:“等你来面谈。”„Thereforenotlast year can also meet......”
“所以说不去年会也可以见面的嘛……”„...... Ithought when the time comesis notIandyouspeaks face-to-face, isedits the editor-in-chiefveryin a big wayevenpossiblyisourbigboss.”
“呵……我觉得到时候不是我和你面谈,是主编总编甚至很大的可能是我们大老板。”Chu Gelooks atthese wordssilentfor a long time, laughed in spite of trying not to make noisesuddenly.楚戈看着这句话沉默了好久,忽然失笑出声。
Does the bigbossalsoknowin the worldto haveChu Ge?
大老板亦知世上有楚戈乎?
......
呵……Suddenlythattyperetained the draftanxiouslywantsto go todemonvigorin high spiritsnot to have.
忽然之间那种急切存稿想去魔都的兴冲冲的劲儿都没了。............
…………
The codeends the establishedchapter, a characterhas not saved.
码完既定的章节,一字没存。In the afternoon the Qiu Wujiconventionstudies the car(riage), Chu Gerideselectric scooterto sendherto the driving school, oneselfturned aroundBlackroom.
下午秋无际惯例去学车,楚戈骑着小电驴送她去驾校,自己掉头去了黑屋。EntersBlackroom, insidegathers together, allinbesidesZhong Yi, was extraoldvermilion who cast off the mask, withhis daughterZhu Moe Moe.
走进黑屋,里面济济一堂,全都在除了钟逸之外,额外多了摘掉面具的老朱,和他女儿朱萌萌。Moe Moe is also the Blackroomperson......萌萌也是黑屋的人啦……Everyoneis practicingrespectivelyvarious, Zhu Moe Moejogson the treadmill, sideWan ZijunandLong Sijiahave been tracingsecretlysize upherperspirationto pass the stature of clothing, Master Chef Jinare also stealing a glancelooked, the hand of proprietressis pinchinghiswaistsoftmeat, looks fierce.
大家都在各练各的,朱萌萌在跑步机上跑步,旁边万子俊和龙飔佳一直在偷摸摸地打量她汗透衣衫的身材,金大厨也在偷眼看,老板娘的手掐着他腰间软肉,龇牙咧嘴。Only thenPan Daturns a blind eye, but alsoindiligentdemonbeast: „Thatmaster! Mentioned by name, leaves the pen! Grass, yourdamndeaf?”
只有潘达视若无睹,还在勤恳魔兽:“那个法师!被点名了,出圈!草,你TM聋了?”Pushesboss, whois patientlooks at the woman!
推波SS呢,谁耐烦看女人!«OnlyHasAnimationSocietySurvival».
《唯有动漫社幸存》。Looked that a Chu Gepersonwears the Third Brothermaskto walk, Zhu Moe Moewavestohimvery muchhappily.
看楚戈一个人戴着三娃面具走了进来,朱萌萌很高兴地向他挥了挥手。
The peoplelookis staring atChu Gebad: „Hey, youhaveSixth Brother, keeps a souptoothers!”
众人神色不善地盯着楚戈:“喂,你有六娃,给别人留口汤!”Chu Gesaidill-humoredly: „Closesmyanythingmatter...... youto have the skillto pursue, reveals only part of the truthlookssecretly, disgraceful.”楚戈没好气道:“关我什么事啊……你们有本事去追啊,藏头露尾偷偷看的,丢人现眼。”Zhu Moe Moeis grinning.朱萌萌笑嘻嘻。Actuallyineyebut actuallysomewhat the meaning of weakening, shereallyhas no interestinthesenow.
其实眼里倒有些淡漠之意,她现在还真对这些没兴趣了。Otherpersonrolled their eyes: „Speaking ofrevealing only part of the truth, youalsofelt all rightto sayus, thatmaskdo not wear, whomdeceived?”
其他人都翻了个白眼:“说到藏头露尾,你也好意思说我们,那面具就别戴了,蒙谁呢?”Chu Gepicked the maskreluctantly: „Isn't the ceremonyfeelinga little good? Weare the secret societies. Othersnovelguessed that whichacquaintanceismasked person in mass organization, canwriteseveral hundredchapters, finallyuncovers the bottommystically, the truthonly hasone: YouareXX!”楚戈无奈地摘了面具:“有点仪式感不好吗?咱们是秘密社团。人家小说里猜测哪个熟人是社团里的面具人,都可以写几百章,最后神秘揭底,真相只有一个:你就是XX!”
The peoplesmile: „Reallyworthilyiswriting, threedo not leave the line of business.”
众人都笑:“真不愧是码字的,三句不离本行。”Wan Zijunsaid with a smile: „Makes the main characterwordswithus, weguess that your masked persondid not guessover a hundredchapters.”万子俊笑道:“拿我们做主角的话,我们猜你这个面具人不也猜了上百章了嘛。”„Well, such a trades the angle of viewbut actuallyseems like......”
“咦,这么一换视角倒好像是的……”„Therefore, everyonefeltoneselfaremain character.”Wan Zijunsaid: „Latermanyexercises, leavescontinuouslyinnested in the housewriting, tounhealthy.”
“所以吧,人人都觉得自己是主角而已。”万子俊道:“以后多来锻炼,别一直窝在家里码字,对身体不好。”„Well? Cares aboutme, Iam notboy’s love.”
“咦?这么关心我,我不是男酮。”Wan Zijunturned on the cell phoneto look at an informationtohimill-humoredly: „Before dawnhad a writerto stay up lateto sudden die, wemaybeyourhardcorereaders, was worried aboutyou.”万子俊没好气地打开手机给他看了条信息:“凌晨有位写手熬夜猝死了,我们可都是你铁杆读者,担心你啊。”Chu Gereadsthisobituary noticesilently, rememberspossibly the arrival„bigbosssummoned”, sighedin a soft voice.楚戈默默地看着这条讣告,想起可能到来的“大老板召见”,轻声叹了口气。BeforehavingQiuqiu, oneselfandZhang Qirenlifecondition, possiblytrulyalsosimilar.
在有了秋秋之前,自己和张奇人的生活状态,可能确实也差不多吧。Now a problemis good, the issue of cervical vertebralumbar vertebrawas very earlywas solved, does not know that Zhang Qiren...... leaveshim of documentsnow, nowshouldalsopractice? Especiallyhisabilityneeds the adaptivepowerfulphysique......
现在自己一身毛病都好了,颈椎腰椎的问题很早就解决了,不知道张奇人现在怎样……离开了文档的他,现在应该也练起来了吧?尤其他那种异能需要适配强大的体格……Ok, was far.
算了,想远了。Chu Getakes back the thoughts, saidin a low voice: „Ihavemyexercise, don't worry. The words saying that Pan Damakesmecomewitheveryoneto practice...... to feelyouworked hard for the prosperity of the countrydays, does not know how nowto promote?”楚戈收回心思,低声道:“我有自己的锻炼,不用担心。话说潘达让我来跟大家练练……感觉你们奋发图强有一段日子了,不知道现在提升得怎样?”Wan Zijunis eager to try: „Canfirsthave a lookmy?”万子俊跃跃欲试:“要不要先看看我的?”Chu Gequeerly said: „Youwrite can also evolve?”楚戈奇道:“你写字还能进化的吗?”„Can.”Wan Zijunshuāshuāwrotethreecharacterson the face: „Bottle gourdkid.”
“能啊。”万子俊唰唰在脸上写了三个字:“葫芦娃。”Thereforein the Chu Geeyefront is really standing a bottle gourdkid.
于是楚戈眼中前面真的站着一个葫芦娃。Ownmaskmay the imagebe many, thisis the realbottle gourdkid!
比自己的面具可形象多了,这是真的葫芦娃啊!
The words saying ownpresentthisgodwill know the intensityalso to be affected...... alsono wonder, to think that including the Qiuqiugodknowledgeunexpectedlyat that timeWan Zijunwas very graceful, thisabilityeffectivepremise was really really unthinkable.
话说自己现在这神识强度居然还能受影响……也难怪,当时连秋秋的神识都会觉得万子俊很帅,这种异能的生效前提真真匪夷所思。„What's wrong?” The bottle gourdkidopens the mouthcomplacently: „Is more vivid than yourmaskimage?”
“怎样?”葫芦娃得意洋洋地开口:“比你的面具形象生动吧?”Chu Gepulled out the cheeks: „Seeming like the bottle gourdkidis useful, canobtain the ability of bottle gourdkid?”楚戈抽了抽脸颊:“看起来像个葫芦娃有什么用啊,能获得葫芦娃的能力么?”„Cannot, thisbe onlymakesyouseeminglyfeel that thisis the bottle gourdkid, in factIhave not changed the body, made one lookwithbeforethought that verygracefulorwas the father, did not have the essential difference.”Wan Zijunis not discouraged, insteadsaid with a smile: „But before......, limitsto the sense of human form, butcanbenowanyappearance.”
“不能,这只是让你看起来觉得这就是葫芦娃,实际上我没有变身,和以前让人看了觉得很帅或者是爸爸,没有本质区别。”万子俊并不气馁,反而笑道:“但是……以前局限于人形的感官,但现在可以是任何样子了啊。”In the Chu Geheartmoves slightly, seesWan Zijunto wipe the bottle gourdkidinscription, changed a character: „Dragon.”楚戈心中微动,就看见万子俊擦去葫芦娃字样,改了一个字:“龙。”dragonYinshenggets up, a Azure Dragonraises the headto circle, occupiedentireBlackroominstantaneously.
龙吟声起,一条青龙仰首盘旋,瞬间占据了整个黑屋。Clouds overstrikesobserves the dragon of xianxiaworld, Chu Gehas clearly known,Wan Zijunthis is not only in the visionlooksis a dragon, even the sound and auraare close, evenhad the misconception of dragon prestige.
变天击地观测过仙侠世界的龙,楚戈清楚地知道,万子俊这不仅仅是视觉上看着是条龙,连声音和气息都非常接近,甚至具备了龙威的错觉。
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