USAW :: Volume #4 Soul Beast Forest

#: Chat, about Jing Mingfeng

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Today when leaves entered the stage the disaffection of plot to Jing Mingfeng, sea of clouds careful recovery, chatted my idea in this while convenient. 今天又有一个出了对景鸣风出场时的剧情的不满,云海仔细回复了,也顺便在此谈谈我的想法。 Jing Mingfeng this role, I mold Failed indeed a little, that especially enters the stage, many book friends have the opinion, this was I initially has not thought that just like before , Liu Meng that was the same. 景鸣风这个角色,我塑造得的确有点失败,特别是出场的那一段,许多书友都有意见,这是我当初没有想到的,正如更之前柳梦那一段一样。 Actually at that time I had not thought that many, if you have to read the dragon embroidered costume placard of book review area, can presently, actually Jing Mingfeng be the role that a book friend proposed, the event requests to write first time met to steal the ring of lead, I also held the small plot of manner design was playing, did not have any Special meaning. 其实当时我是没想那么多的,如果你有翻看书评区的龙套帖的话,就能现,其实景鸣风是一个书友提出的角色,事件要求写了第一次见面要偷主角的戒指,我也是抱着好玩儿的态度设计的这个小剧情,并非有什么特殊含义。 First, he carries the deep hatred and his behavior anything has not conflicted, everybody do not forget, he has «Soul Hiding Art» and «Appearance Changing Technique», in the boundless huge crowd, almost nobody can presently he, moreover he will not provoke the formidable person. 先,他身负血仇和他的行为没什么冲突,大家不要忘了,他身怀《隐魂诀》和《易容术》,茫茫人海中,几乎没有人可以现他,而且他也不会去招惹过于强大的人。 Stole other Soul Cultivator things as for him at that time, has confessed that for quick promotion strength, therefore ‚resorting to all means’, even if steals also refuses to balk. 至于他当时偷其他魂师的东西,也已经交代过了,是为了快提升实力,所以‘不择手段’,即便是偷取也在所不惜。 The disposition of his open bracelet, I also thought actually what unreasonable people had not stipulated the person who carries the deep hatred can not the false color use the God angle of view observation in society stranger all day near not indifferent such as the ice? He buried the deepest hatred at heart, camouflaged itself with the openness, I thought that this did not have anything not to be unreasonable, everyone, had its unique life style. 他那开朗跳脱的性格,其实我也觉得并没有什么不合理有人规定身负血仇的人就必须整天不假颜色用上帝视角观察世间生人勿近冷漠如冰吗？他不过是将最深的仇恨埋在了心里,用开朗来伪装自己而已,我觉得这没有什么不合理的,每一个人,都有其独特的生活方式。 After he has stolen the Yunfei ring the response of Yunfei, before had also said that if Yunfei has lost, naturally will not forgive him, but does not have any loss actually, moreover at that time Jing Mingfeng was agitated, has revealed unknown side, touched Bai Yunfei, therefore Bai Yunfei will start the becoming friends with it meaning( also the part of reasons are pleasing his «Soul Hiding Art»). 至于他偷了云飞的戒指之后云飞的反应,以前也说过了,如果云飞有所损失,自然是不会饶他,但实际是没有任何损失,而且当时景鸣风情绪激动,露出了不为人知的一面,触动了白云飞,所以白云飞才会兴起结交之意（还有一部分原因是中意他的《隐魂诀》）。 As for afterward so-called ‚wasn't retaliation’, ‚seeking revenge for the slightest grievance’ ‚was quite virulent’ the degree actually? In my opinion, at best is ‚piece of work’ ‚practical joke’, closes with a smile, why will have such serious appraisal? 至于后来的所谓‘报复’,其实算不上‘睚眦必报’‘极为恶毒’的程度吧？在我看来,充其量不过是‘小打小闹’‘恶作剧’而已,一笑置之,为何会有这么严重的评价呢？ Naturally, this behavior will possibly bring in the inestimable evil consequence, such words he was unpardonably wicked, but I will certainly not make this matter live, therefore his ‚retaliation’ throughout can only be ‚practical joke’, was used to draw out Yunfei and Xinyun acquaintance. 当然,这种行为可能会引来不可估量的恶果,那样的话他就是十恶不赦了,不过我当然不会让这种事情生,所以他的‘报复’始终都只会是一场‘恶作剧’而已,用来引出云飞与心芸的相识。 As for anything ‚, if there is photograph such to your wife or mother, you how’, this supposition will be meaningless, is wrong from the initial understanding. I can only say: You think were too many. 至于什么‘如果有人像那样对你的老婆或者母亲,你会怎么样’,这种假设根本毫无意义,从最初的理解出点就是错的。我只能说:你想的太多了。 Turned into the Yunfei appearance to steal the thing as for afterward him, finally brings in chases down, that is the accident, is not his original intention, but I also draw out a small foreshadowing with his behavior. 至于后来他又变成云飞的样子去偷东西,结果引来追杀,那不过是意外而已,并非他的本意,而我也是用他的这一行为引出一个小伏笔。 Presence of Jing Mingfeng, I write holds the relaxed humorous mood to write, the goal naturally is also hopes that the reader is holding similar mentality reading, then closes with a smile then, but some readers from another consideration, thought completely ‚not being feeling well’, this is I have not expected, some lost the consideration at that time, writing inexperienced. 景鸣风的出场,我写的时候是抱着轻松幽默的心情写的,目的当然也是希望读者抱着同样的心态阅读,然后一笑置之即可,不过有读者完全从另一出点考虑,觉得‘不爽’,这是我没有预料到的,也是当时有失考虑,写作经验不足吧。 About the thief, I am also abhor, but the novel is not the reality, I to not write one will only steal the thing the role, writes the Jing Mingfeng meeting ‚the technique of stealing’, but is his small ‚skill’, the place of his true Special, thinks that some book friends noted. 关于小偷,本人也是深恶痛绝的,不过小说不是现实,我也不是为了写一个只会偷东西的角色,写景鸣风会‘偷盗之术’,只不过是他的一个小‘技能’而已,他的真正特殊之处,想必一些书友已经注意到了。 The inspiration of this role originates Sikong in «6 Small Phoenix» in picks the star, but I naturally am continually its 1/10 level have not written, this is my Failed. 这一角色的灵感来源于《6小凤》里的司空摘星,不过我自然是连其1的水平都没有写到,这是我的失败。 I have said that I want to write the crisp article, making the reader look thought that was crisp I the goal to achieve, because inexperienced was more possible the place to be short, cannot possibly take care of the readers on the other hand the idea, regarding part of readers, I can only say that was sorry. 我一直都说,我想写爽文,让读者看了觉得爽我的目的就达到了,不过由于经验不足可能许多地方有所欠缺,没能照顾到读者们可能的另一方面的想法,对于这一部分读者,我只能说抱歉了。 Has made a mistake will know the shortcoming, sea of clouds is studying little, as for whether had to progress that to say considering as finished by everybody, if can look that hopes the later story can let more reader satisfactions. 犯过错误才会知道缺点,云海在一点点学习,至于是否有进步那就要靠大家说了算了,如果能够一直看下去,希望以后的故事能够让更多的读者满意。 Finally, many thanks everybody's support! 最后,多谢大家的支持了！ 【Chat, about Jing Mingfeng】!! 【闲谈,关于景鸣风】！！
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