USAW :: Volume #4 Soul Beast Forest

#: Third volume of conclusions

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The third volume had ended, this volume be much longer than the first two volumes, the chapter number is the first two volumes of sum totals, actually starts to branch out the fourth volume from the middle, but originally planned from joining school Yunfei to leaving school all converges the third volume, therefore has not divided. 第三卷结束了,这一卷要比前两卷长得多,章节数是前两卷的总和,其实从中间开始就可以分出第四卷的,不过原计划就是将云飞从加入宗门到离开宗门之间的所有都归为第三卷,所以就没有分。 Generally speaking, regarding this third volume, the sea of clouds I is quite satisfied, the thing that ha-ha, naturally, writes actually, in the heart will have the feeling of satisfaction, probably will not have the parents saying that own child will be not quite same, the third volume will write to obtain the bottom to be good, will be is decided by everybody, I only hope such that such as I will think, can satisfy the majority of book friend. 总的来说,对于这第三卷,云海本人还是比较满意的,呵呵,当然,其实自己写出来的东西,心中都会有满足感,就好像没有父母会说自己的孩子不好一样,第三卷写得到底好不好,是由大家说了算的,我只希望真的如我想的那样,能让大部分书友满意。 Naturally, when the third volume also many deficiencies, for example initially wrote Tang Xinyun is injured the later that plot, some book friends reflected that said hauled long, this was the sea of clouds not very good control the rhythm of story, naturally, everyone had fondness that oneself read, books or certain plots were impossible to let all reader satisfactions, I can do, on was as far as possible achieving by majority of reader satisfaction, can achieve so, I also on satisfying. As for the reader who perhaps these do not like certain plots, the sea of clouds also here said that was sorry, if you can also continue to look, hopes that the later story can let satisfaction. 当然,第三卷中也有许多不足之处,比如当初写到唐心芸受伤之后的那一段剧情时,就有一些书友反映说太拖拉冗长了,这是云海没有很好的控制住故事的节奏,当然,每个人都有自己看书的喜好,一本书或者某些剧情是不可能让所有读者都满意的,我能做的,就是尽量做到让大部分的读者满意,能做到如此,我也就满足了。至于那些或许不喜欢某些剧情的读者,云海也在这里说一声抱歉了,如果你们还能继续看下去的话,希望以后的故事能让各位满意。 The third volume is the Yunfei strengthen excessively and stopover station, has drawn out some quite important character and foreshadowing clue, saw frequently some book friends said this book does not have the master line or the master line is not explicit, this indeed is the problem that has from the beginning, but from at first, the sea of clouds has not thought actually must set any fixed master line to Yunfei, for example must dominate the world, picks up completely the beautiful woman, reported the intense and deep-seated hatred, sought for own life experience and so on, because although like this specific goal, but from the other hand, might as well be some were too tired, I do not want to be shouldered by Yunfei am too many, Resembled in the synopsis last saying that I want to make Yunfei go out of one ‚freedom’ the road. 第三卷是云飞变强的过度和中转站,也引出了一些较为重要的人物和伏笔线索,经常看到一些书友说本书没有主线或者主线不明确,这的确是一个从一开始就存在的问题,不过其实从最初,云海就没有想过要给云飞定下什么固定的主线,比如要称霸世界啊,泡尽美女啊,报血海深仇啊,寻找自己的身世啊之类的,因为这样虽然目的明确了,但从另一方面,也未尝不是有些太累了,我不想让云飞背负太多,就好像简介中最后一句说的,我想让云飞走出一条‘自由’之路。 Naturally, is impossible not to have master line, Soul Refining School, Beast Taming School that now presented repeatedly , etc., the back of several events is actually a master line, but has not been clear about or description emphatically, these slowly will present in the later story. 当然,也不可能毫无主线,如今已经多次出现的炼魂宗、驭兽宗等,好几个事件的背后其实都是一条主线,只不过还没有明确或者着重的描写而已,这些在以后的故事中会慢慢呈现。 Here by the way the issue about small Doraemon Huangfu Rui, some readers said that wrote incompatible was too solid, the 17-year-old girl wrote looks like several years old, ha-ha, here can disclose slightly, age appearance disposition about small Doraemon and so on these, were actually a foreshadowing, moreover was not a small foreshadowing, several common places had the small suggestion, does not know that everybody noted not to have, as for the special details ha-ha, later said goodbye the result. 这里顺便说一下关于小叮当皇甫蕊的问题,有读者说写得太不符实了,17岁的女孩写得像几岁,呵呵,这里可以稍微的透露一下,关于小叮当的年龄样貌心性之类的这些,其实是一个伏笔,而且算是一个不小的伏笔,有几处不起眼的地方有小小的暗示,不知道大家注意到没有,至于具体情况呵呵,以后再见分晓。 In this long third volume of processes, Yunfei has experienced many matters, but the sea of clouds also experienced, the university graduated later going out to work for four months, because finally the work has not resigned satisfactorily, recalled that during this all sorts, had have gratified bitterly and , the path of life had many, before I gave up , that walked, kept a road fork temporarily, hope next will not only go astray 这漫长的第三卷过程中,云飞遇到了许多事,而云海也经历了许多,大学毕业之后外出工作了四个月,最后因为工作不顺心而辞掉了,回想这期间的种种,有辛酸、也有欣慰,人生的道路有许多条,我放弃了之前走的那一条,暂时留在了一个岔路口,只希望下一步不会走错 Turns on the bookshelf, discovered many authors, when 1 st opens the book broke the court eunuch, in the heart is also quite sigh with emotion, after genuine write, knows that bitter and difficulty of novel author, the work, family, environment, sentiment, result, income wait / etc. writes difficulties on path, more than 50% authors do not have the means to insist finally. 打开书架,发现当初一起开书的许多作者都已经断更太监了,心中也是颇为感慨,真正自己写作之后,才知道一个小说作者的辛酸和艰难,工作、家庭、环境、感情、成绩、收入等等都是写作道路上的一道道难关,一半以上的作者都没办法坚持到最后。 The sea of clouds rejoiced very much that insisted the present, has never thought must give up, because I know that many readers are supporting me, is you, gave me to insist courage that the present and also wants to continue to insist. 云海很庆幸,坚持到了现在,从未想过要放弃,因为我知道,有许多读者都在支持着我,是你们,给了我坚持到现在并还想继续坚持下去的勇气。 Remembers as before that in the third volume of writing processes has one time to receive a book review, the person said the book that I write is the trash, said that the author is idiot wait / etc. words is very coarse, I do not know whether this person is really my reader, but was very at that time sad, the laborious result diligently was insulted the feeling of trampling unable to express by others, afterward I of that day said behind renewal this matter, is small sues under one painstakingly, the result next day, received the book review that dozens comforts and encouraged, I was moved really at that time and proud. In a complete mess you to take to my move compared with these probably not have the several fold disappointedly, what justification do I have not to insist? 依旧记得,第三卷的写作过程中有一次收到一条书评,有一个人说我写的书是垃圾,说作者是白痴等等话很难听,我不知道这个人是否真是我的读者,但当时真的很难过,自己辛苦努力的结果被别人侮辱践踏的感觉是无法表达出来的,后来我在那天的更新后面说了一下这件事,算是小小的诉一下苦,结果第二天,收到了数十条安慰和鼓励的书评,真的,我当时感动和自豪。地一塌糊涂你们带给我的感动要比那些失望要多无数倍,那我还有什么理由不坚持呢？ Third volume of these three months, also knew perhaps many new book friends, once old reader had part for some reasons frequently not to pay attention to this book, little saw them, but had many as before from beginning to end, reader who throughout supported the sea of clouds 第三卷这三个多月的时间里,又认识了许多新的书友,曾经的老读者有一部分或许因为某些原因没有经常关注本书了,很少见到他们,但依旧有许多从始至终,始终支持云海的读者 No matter the new reader is old reader, the sea of clouds wants to say to you: Support thank you!! 不管是新读者还是老读者,云海都想对你们说:谢谢你们的支持！！ Thank froth little hope and egg to love the uncle and Zi Jin honorific title of guanyu and like the night black and other book friends have almost not broken the supporting support, especially Big Brother Zi Jin, with participating in activity vertically and horizontally played coin that vertically and horizontally the game must come to support a rudder host, was really laborious Big Brother Zi Jin. Everybody's supporting gave did not have sea of clouds one point of small income of payment for published piece, what were more has given the sea of clouds huge writing power. Once had constructed a registration building, then almost signed the souls of dozens buildings to be elegant every day unceasingly and Mei Kaiyan smiled the book friend, your support touched the sea of clouds. These daily complimentary ticket and book review unceasing many many book friends, everybody's each click, does not have a complimentary ticket, each collection, the book review of each support, gives the power and confidence that the sea of clouds has insisted. 感谢沫小希、蛋疼大叔、紫金武圣、像夜一样黑等书友几乎未曾断过的捧场支持,特别是紫金大哥,生生用参加纵横的活动玩儿游戏得来的纵横币捧场出了一个舵主,真是辛苦紫金大哥了。大家的捧场给了没有稿费的云海一分小小的收入,更多的是给了云海巨大的写作动力。还有曾经自己建了一个签到楼,然后几乎每天不断地自己签了数十楼的灵魂飘逸和梅开妍笑书友,你们的支持让云海无比感动。还有那些每天红票和书评不断的许多许多书友,大家的每一个点击,没一张红票,每一个收藏,每一条支持的书评,都给了云海坚持的动力和信心。 , Chi You vertically and horizontally, the glutinous rice shaddock, the setting sun scratch and small monster 111, boundless books, by must give a name, Sima Dong east, the autumn night autumn leaves and pain, Hong Yin and star fu night fu moon/month and the new military recruits of ghosts and demons Wolf King 23, alone wolf 625799, sunlight 310, ultimate 2, spring city five fingers and launching, shaft young, long, the collect collect to run and only look robs migrant worker and soul that the book, waning moon and wind flying great distance, studies abroad along with Si Minggui, cross _ Hua Shao, small, rain, half cup of lake bottom sand and chicken flying egg comes under attack, the pain of love., Radical | the plover, a deep palm and sentiment break the bustling place, shaft imaginary, the evil young and burying 、蚩尤纵横、糯米柚子、夕阳刻痕、小怪兽111、茫茫书海、靠又要起名、司马东东、秋夜的秋叶、痛、、弘胤、星乀夜乀月、鬼魅狼王23、独狼625799、阳光310、终极2、春城五指、起飞的菜鸟、、轩辕小凡、阿竉、、潴潴快跑、只看盗书、残月、风飞千里、留洋的农民工、魂随司命鬼、十字_华少、小小的、雨之、半杯湖底沙、鸡飞蛋挨打、爱之痛。、丿丨千鸟、深厚的一掌、情断红尘、轩辕幻杰、邪仔、葬 The above is only few part, was too many were too many, I could not record, the book friend who the above has not thanked please do not mind that continued to mention by name to be possible again too to be many 以上只是很少的一部分,实在是太多太多了,我根本记录不过来,以上没有感谢到的书友还请不要介意,再继续点名下去可就实在太多了 Good, this time subtotal was also unknowingly wordy these many, arrived here, the third volume ended, is the new volume of starts, hopes that in story that in the fourth volume has, can make everybody satisfy, hopes that in the later lengthy course, can continuously walks in your accompanying and support!! 好了,这一次的小结不知不觉就又啰嗦了这么多了,就到这里吧,第三卷结束,也是新一卷的开始,希望在第四卷中发生的故事,也能让大家满意,希望在以后的漫长道路中,能够一直在你们的相伴和支持中走下去！！ Finally, deeply bows to the book friends of all support seas of clouds once more, sincere [say / way]: Thanks!! 最后,再次对所有支持云海的书友深鞠一躬,真诚道一声:谢谢！！ The boundless sea of clouds wrote at December 15, 2011 14 points. 茫茫云海写于2011年12月15日14点。
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