Saw that Kasumigaoka Utaha burst into tears unexpectedly, Eriri regretted immediately, quickly beckons with the hand, some saying of speaking incoherently: „... You do not cry, I said, the book's first sales volume dies a violent death, we can revise the plot to the next volume slowly again diligently .....” 看到霞之丘诗羽竟然流泪了,英梨梨立马就后悔了,急忙摆手,有些语无伦次的说道:“你...你别哭啊,我只是说说,书第一次销量暴死,我们可以慢慢修改剧情到下一卷再努力嘛.....” „Is diligently useless, because I could not have found the way that the suitable reader to write.” “努力已经没用了,因为我已经找不到适合读者写作的方式了。” Kasumigaoka Utaha looks up to Eriri, the tone low and deep say/way: „This light novel, all my defer to the normal way to write obviously, a mistake does not have obviously, but the sales volume actually proved all my were denied by the reader, this matter at all is not you thinks that relaxed .....” 霞之丘诗羽抬起头看向英梨梨,语气低沉的道:“这部轻小说,我明明一切都按照正常的方式来写的,明明一点差错都没有出,可销量却证明了我的一切都被读者否定了,这种事情根本不是你所想的那么轻松.....” At this point, the Kasumigaoka Utaha tears had moistened the table before her body, she takes up the package on table, lowered the head to leave Cafe. 说到这里,霞之丘诗羽的泪水已经打湿了她身前的桌子,她拿起桌上的包,低着头离开了咖啡厅。 Looks Kasumigaoka Utaha that leaves, Mu Fan and Eriri fell into silent, sits on the seat, no one has spoken. 看着离开的霞之丘诗羽,慕凡和英梨梨都陷入了沉默,坐在座位上,谁都没有说话。 At this time Kasumigaoka Utaha turns a deaf ear to anybody's persuasion, at this time let her calmly to be better. 这个时候霞之丘诗羽是听不进去任何人的劝说的,这个时候还是让她静静能更好一些。 The meal that a moment ago Kasumigaoka Utaha and Mu Fan and Eriri three people ordered was carried by Maid, however after Kasumigaoka Utaha such a noisy, Eriri that even if was big and hungry did not have the appetite, but drank several ice water, looked that to saying that Mu Fan rebuked oneself: „A moment ago Mu Fan, I did had to ignite .....” 刚才霞之丘诗羽和慕凡以及英梨梨三个人点的餐都被女仆端了上来,然而经过霞之丘诗羽这样的一闹,就算原本饥肠辘辘的英梨梨都没了胃口,只是喝了几口冰水,看向慕凡自责的说道:“慕凡,我刚才是不是做的有点过火了.....” Mu Fan shakes the head, on the face squeezes out wipes the smiling face, comforts saying: „Senpai is not that mean-spirited person, this matter does not blame you, naturally not strange Senpai, but the issue left on the result of book, Senpai and exceeded her author your silver sparkling Sir to be different, your silver sparkling Sir was an accumulation growth of book book to find the god who own weakness made up , the living attack that he can bear, can discipline that extraordinary he in the attack.” 慕凡摇了摇头,脸上挤出一抹笑容,安慰道:“学姐不是那么小气的人,这件事并不怪你,当然也不怪学姐,只是问题出在了书的成绩上面,学姐和超越她的作者你们的银闪闪大人不同,你们的银闪闪大人属于一本书一本书的积累成长找到自己的弱点加以弥补出来的神,他可以承受的住打击,可以在打击中磨练出那个不平凡的他。” „Theoretically, a notebook wrote to become the gods of several million sales volume books, compared with a book to become God person regardless of the innermost feelings, many of regarding the understanding of light novel strengthening. But Senpai is different, on this book rough 【Kasumi Utako】 The name passes on, was a book became famous, because just a book became famous, causing the new book the pressure on be bigger, the innermost feelings were not firm, does not understand what form the new book should in present to everyone, and second book what to do, if threw the street should.” “从理论上来讲,一本本书写上来变成了数百万销量书的神,要比一本书成神的人无论内心,还是对于轻小说的理解都坚定的多。可学姐不一样,她上本书才磕磕绊绊的将【霞诗子】的名字传出去,怎么也算是一书成名了,但正因为一书成名,导致新书的压力更大,内心不坚定,一直不明白新书该以什么样的形式呈现给大家,以及第二本书如果扑街了该怎么办。” „May find out the new theme with great difficulty, reorganized on the mistake of this book, presents to the thing that everyone likes, finally changed a reader not to understand, book review area commentary but actually also good, after may the book was published, unmanned the result of purchase sales volume dying a violent death, the sales volume her such effort by the reader denial, is let her at heart directly throw the street more uncomfortable.” “可好不容易想出了新的题材,又整理了上本书的错误,呈献给大家所喜欢的东西,最终换来了一个读者不理解,书评区评论倒还不错,可将书出版后,无人购买销量暴死的结果,销量将她这样的努力被读者否定,才让她的心里比直接扑街还难受。” Mu Fan knows, Eriri is a good female student, moreover she, although frequently and Kasumigaoka Utaha bickers, because just quarrelled causes two people's relations to be good, Kasumigaoka Utaha was not a mean-spirited person, just like Eriri, impossible departure that because several words of opposite party were angry. 慕凡知道,英梨梨是个好女生,而且她虽然经常和霞之丘诗羽斗嘴,可是正因为争吵才导致两个人的关系却非常好,霞之丘诗羽不是个小气的人,和英梨梨一样,都不可能因为对方的几句话就生气的离开。 Therefore looks like in Mu Fan, lets is the issue of her new book truly Senpai cares. 所以在慕凡看来,真正让学姐在意的一直都是她新书的问题。 In the final analysis, Kasumigaoka Utaha cared about the view and new book of reader. 归根结底,还是霞之丘诗羽太在意读者的看法和新书了。 ...... ...... Heard Mu Fan saying that on face and does not have any pleasantly surprised expression of Eriri, instead disappointed say/way: „Such Kasumi Utako my first sight, I hope actually she can buoy up earlier.” 听到慕凡这么说,英梨梨的脸上并没有任何惊喜的表情,反而失望的道:“那样的霞诗子我还是第一次见到,我倒是希望她能早点振作起来。” „Relax, Senpai is not such person of being deliberately bad, first eats meal.” “放心吧,学姐不是那样自暴自弃的人,先吃饭吧。” Mu Fan smiles one pale, hints Eriri to eat meal, after all Eriri arrives at Cafe to show that she was hungry, was recalling the brigade that beforehand lining up buys the game, Mu Fan understands Eriri fears the breakfast not to eat. 慕凡淡笑一声,示意英梨梨吃饭,毕竟英梨梨来到咖啡厅就证明她饿了,回想着之前排队买游戏的大队,慕凡明白英梨梨恐怕早饭都没有吃。 A Senpai person does not eat and drink sadly, but cannot also take Eriri. 学姐一个人伤心不吃不喝,但总不能也将英梨梨带上。 Naturally, although Mu Fan comforts Eriri, but in the Mu Fan heart understands, the Kasumigaoka Utaha heart is always much stronger than others, but this Senpai was really sad, moreover lost hope that this matter perhaps not easily on the past. 当然,虽然慕凡这么安慰英梨梨,可慕凡心中明白,霞之丘诗羽的心地一向比别人坚强得多,可这次学姐是真的伤心了,而且是心死了的那种,这件事恐怕不会轻易的就过去了。 But Mu Fan forgot a point, he knows that Kasumigaoka Utaha so will not be simple to restore, how has been able not to understand the Kasumigaoka Utaha character with Eriri that Kasumigaoka Utaha does have to do? 可慕凡忘了一点,就连他都知道霞之丘诗羽不会这么简单就恢复过来,一直和霞之丘诗羽打交道的英梨梨又怎么会不明白霞之丘诗羽的性格？ Two people in Cafe are not quite happy, but ate a point to be left over most food then to pay up slightly, because Mu Fan and Eriri family/home was on the way, Mu Fan then proposed that temporarily helped Eriri carry game Device to go home together. 在咖啡厅中两个人的心情都不太好,只是略微吃了一点剩下了大半的食物便去结账,因为慕凡和英梨梨的家是顺路的,慕凡便提出暂时帮着英梨梨拎着游戏设备一同回家。 On the halfway, the Eriri cell phone made a sound suddenly. 半路上,英梨梨的手机突然响了起来。 Eriri put out the cell phone to look, then fast is typing to reply several then to take back the cell phone on the screen. 英梨梨拿出手机看了下,然后快速的在屏幕上打着字回复了几句便收回了手机。 „What matter has?” “有什么事情吗？” Did not have the words that walks from Akihabara, Mu Fan feels somewhat awkwardly, this Eriri put out the cell phone just in time, therefore he took the lead to look for a topic to ask to Eriri. 从秋叶原走回来的一路都无话,慕凡不由觉得有些尴尬,正巧这次英梨梨拿出了手机,所以他就率先找了个话题对着英梨梨问道。 Eriri returned in the cell phone the pocket of clothes, said in a soft voice: „It is not the important matter, half a month later, the manga festival in Japan, hopes that industry each well-known manga can create short article manga, evaluates at the manga festival, first will obtain the trophy that manga sends out, although I continuously in picture book, but the main road is interlinked, is also known in manga, therefore the head of manga has hoped I can participate, but the manga festival needs the original short article manga, you also know that I do not understand the original plot, I planned that the plot of familiar under original participates again, temporarily does not worry.” 英梨梨将手机放回了衣服的兜里,轻声道:“也不是什么重要的事情,半个月后,日本举行的漫画节,希望业界各个知名的漫画家能创作出一本短篇漫画,在漫画节上评选,第一名会获得漫画界送出的奖杯,我虽然一直在画本子,可大道相通,在漫画界也算小有名气,所以漫画界的负责人一直希望我能去参加,不过漫画节需要原创的短篇漫画,你也知道我不懂原创剧情,我打算熟悉下原创的剧情再参加,暂时不着急。” „This.” “这样啊。” Mu Fan nodded, Eriri as not has been familiar with the original plot with the person artist, even if «Father Loves Such as Mountain» still seeks his help, can understand that own shortcoming little seeking means make up to are also a good deed. 慕凡点了点头,英梨梨作为同人画师一直对原创剧情不太熟悉,就算《父爱如山》也是寻求他的帮助的,能够明白自己的缺点一点点的找寻办法弥补到也是件好事。 But Senpai different...... 只不过学姐并不一样...... Because of Cafe matter, in the heart of Mu Fan has been missing Kasumigaoka Utaha, first night the code ended the character then to sleep, registered the E-Mule Library official site the next day, looked at the Kasumigaoka Utaha «Wizard school Love Guide» Internet edition, finally he with astonishment discovered, yesterday evening Kasumigaoka Utaha had not renewed unexpectedly. 因为咖啡厅的事情,慕凡的心中一直挂念着霞之丘诗羽,第一天晚上码完字便睡觉了,在第二天的时候登录了电击文库的官网,看了看霞之丘诗羽的《魔法学院恋爱指南》的网络版,结果他惊愕的发现,昨天晚上霞之丘诗羽竟然没有更新。 From «Love Metronome» again to «Wizard school Love Guide», Kasumi Utako broke for the first time. 从《恋爱节拍器》再到《魔法学院恋爱指南》,霞诗子第一次断更了。 Saw that some book review area doubts authors break information, naturally many people display and does not care, the author also needs a vacation the rest, occasionally under the rest they will not care actually. 看到书评区一些疑惑作者断更的信息,当然许多人表现的并不在意,作者也需要放假休息,偶尔休息下他们倒是不会在意。 Mu Fan also felt that possibly was Senpai was sad yesterday, broke for day. 慕凡也感觉可能是学姐昨天心情不好,断更了一天。 Next day should renew? 第二天应该会更新吧？ But next day, when Mu Fan opens E-Mule Library, after selecting «Wizard school Love Guide» discovered, Senpai has not renewed unexpectedly. 可是第二天,当慕凡打开电击文库,点开《魔法学院恋爱指南》后发现,学姐竟然又没有更新。 Also waited for day, third day, Senpai renewed finally, but the Mu Fan point opens saw that inside plot was actually shocked. 又等了一天,第三天,学姐终于更新了,可慕凡点开看到里面的剧情却愣住了。 The Senpai innermost feelings came under any big attack general probably, in the new chapter had the wrong character not saying that moreover the plot was anxious, wrote Heroine unexpectedly, because did not trust the male lord result to leave, the male lord got drunk the female 3rd low end office plot. 学姐的内心像是受到了什么大的打击一般,新章节里面有错字不说,而且剧情更是让人揪心不已,竟然写了女主因为不信任男主结果离开了,男主又喝醉上了女三号的低端局剧情。 Mu Fan has looked at «Wizard school Love Guide», even if Heroine of Kasumigaoka Utaha mold joined white learn/study, performance is still the intelligent wisdom, the intelligence quotient issue of Heroine low end office is like this impossible to violate, the male lord is not silly, how possibly to go on female three? 要知道,慕凡可是看过《魔法学院恋爱指南》的,霞之丘诗羽塑造的女主就算加入了白学,表现的也是聪明睿智的,女主这样的低端局的智商问题根本不可能犯,男主又不傻,怎么可能去上了女三？ But indeed wrote such an anxious plot, causes tsukkomi of innumerable reader, the book review area almost scolds sound one piece. 可是的确就是写出了这样一个揪心的剧情,引得无数读者的吐槽,书评区几乎骂声一片。 Also several cannot get used to seeing him and Kasumigaoka Utaha in the author is like this young becomes the author of big god level author, is takes the opportunity to prepare the Kasumigaoka Utaha godship to eliminate, invited the sailors to brush the commentary intentionally. 也有几个在作者群内看不惯他和霞之丘诗羽这样年纪轻轻就成为大神级作者的作者,更是借机准备将霞之丘诗羽的神格消除,故意请来水军来刷评论。 The online commentary most feared that some people take the lead, once will take the lead in some people following to scold, because of the appearance of sailors, the scolding sound of book review area could not control immediately, will renovate has several hundred. 网上的评论最怕有人带头,一旦带头就会有人跟着骂,因为水军的出现,书评区的骂声顿时控制不住了,一刷新就有着数百条。 Because Kasumigaoka Utaha matter gets bigger and bigger, to finally, Mu Fan sees the commentaries of some C Station, after selecting discovered, the latest chapter of this book even takes away to comment by the up lords in C Station as well as other websites, the title is «In History Most mental handicap Light Novel Heroine», «Wizard school Love Guide Renovates « In Intelligence quotient Lower limit History Once again» Most Makes Person Look at Face that Compels Ignorant Light Novel » that 因为霞之丘诗羽的事情越闹越大,到最后,慕凡无意间看到一些c站的评论,点开后发现,这本书的最新章节甚至被c站以及其他网站的up主拿去做评论,标题为《史上最智障的轻小说女主》、《魔法学院恋爱指南又一次刷新智商下限》《史上最让人看的一脸懵逼的轻小说》 ..... ..... In brief a series of titles emerge one after another incessantly, but Senpai also in one day, was honored as the E-Mule Library most mental handicap big god level author in a flash, even some authors claimed that Kasumi Utako this writes the light novel at will, does not match to sign the big god to make. 总之一系列标题层出不穷,而学姐也在一天内,一瞬间被誉为了电击文库最智障的大神级作者,甚至有作者声称霞诗子这样随意写轻小说,不配签署大神约。 „Senpai does not match, you envy others' author to match like this, with its discusses others, would rather with these time under development oneself.” “学姐不配,你这样的嫉妒别人的作者就配,与其来探讨别人,倒不如用那些时间去发展下自己。” Mu Fan after the author crops up restored under this author, then annoyed closed the computer. 慕凡在作者群冒头恢复了下这个作者后,然后恼火的关上了电脑。 Thinks sob of that day Senpai, he somewhat exhausted lying down on the bed, looks in the white ceiling heart sighed, although this world was the acg culture most fiery time. 一想到那天哭泣的学姐,他有些疲惫的躺在床上,看着白森森的天花板心中叹了口气,这个世界虽然是acg文化最为火热的时代。 But because is extremely fiery, UU reads www.uukanshu.com 可正是因为太过火热,UU看书www.uukanshu.com Kasumi Utako such E-Mule Library noted author, once even wrote «Love Metronome» that lays out the animation, once writes the mental handicap article, instantaneously will advocate peace the authors of these envy to push up by the reader as well as up comments hotly. 霞诗子这样的电击文库知名作家,曾经甚至写出了拍出动漫的《恋爱节拍器》,一旦写出智障文,就会瞬间被读者以及up主和那些嫉妒的作者们推上热评。 In this time, the network violence is to exist, moreover is more fearful than their time, does not know that Senpai can undergo this attack. 在这个时代,网络暴力是存在的,而且比他们那个时代更加可怕,也不知道学姐能不能经受住这次打击。 ..... ..... The time passes in a hurry, Mu Fan selected " Wizard school Love Guide » Internet edition in fourth day. 时间匆匆流逝,慕凡在第四天点开了《魔法学院恋爱指南》的网络版。 Not only Mu Fan, at the same time many reader and online up and author preparation takes them who the new chapter or author's explanation is eager to try to find that «Wizard school Love Guide» today does not have. 不只是慕凡,与此同时许多读者和网上的up以及作者准备拿着新章节或者作者的解释跃跃欲试的他们发现《魔法学院恋爱指南》今日无更。 Fifth day «Wizard school Love Guide» does not have. 第五天《魔法学院恋爱指南》无更。 Sixth day «Wizard school Love Guide» does not have. 第六天《魔法学院恋爱指南》无更。 In an instant, at this moment, had arrived deeply seventh day, the Mu Fan facial color looks at Internet edition «Wizard school Love Guide», but the latest chapter of book still has no sound ....... 转眼间,事到如今,已经到了第七天,慕凡面色深沉的看着网络版《魔法学院恋爱指南》,而书的最新章节依然没有任何动静....... Reading network 阅读网