TDFS :: Volume #4 偶像与SAO新篇章

#338: Will Kuroneko also write the novel?


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The point opens, Mu Fan starts to play first week goal school. 点开,慕凡开始玩第一周目的学院篇。 Just a point the game, came from 2023 galgame fine style, the shock made Mu Fan open the mouth. 刚刚一点开游戏,来自于2023年的galgame的精致画风,震惊的让慕凡张大了嘴巴。 Eriri regarding good of very detail portray, for example the school uniform attire of inside character, as well as sends the silk the trace to make very proper, in addition the time progressive unique exaggeration and style, scene portray very only beautiful, attractive at the same time does not lack the reality of realistic campus. 英梨梨对于细节刻画的很好,比如里面人物的校服衣着,以及发丝的纹路都做得非常到位,再加上时代进步的独特的渲染和风格,将场景刻画的非常唯美,漂亮的同时又不缺少现实校园的真实。 Especially that the Changban slopeway oriental cherry scatters, compared with once did not know fine many times. 尤其是长坂坡道樱花散落的一幕,比起曾经的不知道精致了多少倍。 The sole style, looks like in Mu Fan, this game is impeccable. 单单画风而言,在慕凡看来,这部游戏已经无可挑剔了。 Because the game lacks dubbing in music, although the style is fine, but lacks the crucial music unable to have the feeling of experiencing personally. 因为游戏缺少配乐,虽然画风就精美,但缺少着关键性的音乐就无法让人有着身临其境的感觉。 This Mu Fan is not anxious, the taping room in Company has completed, so long as then he music will play with the piano, experiences the tuning again wait/etc., implanted in the game to complete dubbing in music of game. 这点慕凡并不急,公司内的录音棚已经做好了,接下来只要他将的音乐以钢琴弹奏出来,再经历调音等等,植入游戏中就可以完成游戏的配乐了。 Naturally, what the entire game is most important lies in the plot. 当然,整部游戏最重要的在于剧情。 Had the good style not to have the plot unable to become the god to do. 有了好的画风没有剧情也无法成为神作。 For example some animation funds legend of Mu Fan previous generation, the manufacture of style and character is the apex absolutely, funds flower indeed many, the style conscience, was the plot is very horrible to look. 比如慕凡前世的动漫某经费传说,画风和人物的制作绝对属于顶尖,经费花的的确不少,画风很良心,可是剧情就惨不忍睹了。 Even if Mu Fan suppresses were looking that is unable to look. 就算慕凡强忍着看也无法看下去。 Now in the hand of Mu Fan, the style is better than the previous generation, the plot is impeccable, then looked that the line plot of game made a mistake is OK. 现在在慕凡的手里,画风已经比前世好了很多,剧情是无可挑剔的,接下来就看游戏的线路剧情有没有出错就可以了。 Exchanged in memory capturing/raiding order about this game, step by step completes happy Misae line & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; Sakagami Tomoyo line & Fuck ash ; Miyazawa has Ji Ning line & Fuck ash ; Fujibayashi Ryou line & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; Fujibayashi Kyou line & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; zhong wins even line & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; Spring original brother and sister line & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; Ichinose zither | Jean line of beauty & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; he/she blowing strand & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; Good fortune village Toshio line & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; Finally arrives at the Furukawa Nagisa line. 兑换了的的记忆中关于这款游戏的攻略顺序,一步步的完成相乐美佐枝线——坂上智代线—宫泽有纪宁线—藤林椋线——藤林杏线——柊胜平线——春原兄妹线——一之濑琴美线——伊吹风子线——幸村俊夫线——最后再到古河渚线。 This is the simplest confirmation game step by step whether has the flaw flow. 这就是最简单的一步步验证游戏是否有缺陷的流程。 After all they must sell to the player, wants to try to play, can look have problems is OK. 毕竟他们要卖给玩家,就要自己亲身试玩,看看会不会出问题就可以了。 Originally this confirmation, according to the normal capturing/raiding way, the choice line of ponder wait/etc., need to cost very long time. 本来这种验证,按照正常的攻略方式,思考的选择线路等等,需要耗费很长的时间。 But Mu Fan exchanged, is the librettist, how should capture/raid regarding these lines, he is clear. 慕凡兑换了,又是剧本作者,对于这些线路该怎么攻略,他早就再清楚不过了。 Therefore, confirms step by step, finally only consumed for one hour. 所以,一步步验证下来,最终只耗费了一个多小时的时间。 From capturing/raiding in the character these lines of school, Fujibayashi Kyou and Tomoyo that line Mu Fan most likes, every goes through customs one time these two lines, in the heart has a longing mood. 从攻略的学院的人物这些线路中,慕凡最喜欢的还是藤林杏智代线,每一次通关这两个线路,心中都有一种恋恋不舍的情绪。 That is, the letting person who each character portrays has a vivid memory, because the animation just the echo of people are too big, finally had no other choice and had/left Tomoyo and apricot line. 这就是,每一个人物都刻画的让人记忆犹新,动漫正因为众人的反响太大,最终才不得已又出了智代和杏线。 „Is this prototype novel of script?” “这就是剧本的原型小说吗?” Understood in complete plot the pupil of Gokou Ruri glittered the clear teardrops, in the tone brings thick having not given full expression: Has not thought that a story can actually so move my innermost feelings ..... 了解了全部剧情的五更琉璃的眸子里闪烁出了晶莹的泪珠,语气中带着浓浓的意犹未尽:“没想到一个故事竟然能够如此打动我的内心.....” Mu Fan shows a faint smile, when the first contact, he and Kuroneko feeling is similar. 慕凡微微一笑,在第一次接触的时候,他和黑猫的感受差不多。 Even not perceptual he some tears in certain plots. 就算不怎么感性的他都在某些情节中有些泪目。 „The significance lies in the life, moreover its plot, not only the pure male advocates peace the description of Heroine, everyone in small town has to be their unique flavors, looked that will make the mind of person obtain cure or feelings.” “的意义在于人生,而且它的剧情,并不只是单纯的男主和女主的描写,小镇里的每一个人都有属于他们独特的韵味,看完了才会让人的心灵得到一种治愈或者说感触。” Mu Fan answered. 慕凡解释道。 Originally the novel writes like this, no wonder Mu Fan your «Accel World» can enter the E-Mule Library best-selling list.” “原来小说是这样写的,怪不得慕凡你的《加速世界》可以进入电击文库的畅销榜。” Gokou Ruri face astonished saying. 五更琉璃一脸惊愕的说道。 Listens to the meaning of Kuroneko, Mu Fan somewhat surprised asking: Kuroneko have you also had the research to the novel?” 黑猫的意思,慕凡有些惊讶的问道:“难道黑猫你也对小说有过研究?” Em, once submitted a piece of writing to E-Mule Library several times, but the invitational meet has not even passed.” “恩,曾经给电击文库投稿了几次,可是连预选赛都没通过。” Gokou Ruri worried saying. 五更琉璃苦恼的说道。 Hears here, Asuna came the interest, curious asked to Kuroneko: Kuroneko, you are so unexpectedly fierce, recently I was also infatuated with the light novel, can read your novel to me?” 听到这里,明日奈来了兴趣,好奇的对黑猫问道:“黑猫,你竟然这么厉害,最近我也迷恋上了轻小说,能给我看一下你的小说吗?” Ok.” “可以。” Hears some people to read her novel, in the eye of Kuroneko is somewhat excited, immediately complied, turned around to leave the office. 听到有人想要读她的小说,黑猫的眼中有些兴奋,立即答应了下来,转身离开了办公室。 Kuroneko novel in Company?” “难道黑猫的小说在公司里?” Looks the back that Kuroneko is leaving, Mu Fan and Yuuki Asuna were acquainted, all saw from the pupil of opposite party surprisedly. 望着黑猫离开的背影,慕凡结城明日奈不由相识了一眼,皆是从对方的眸子里看到了惊讶。 In a while, the gate of office was shoved open, saw only Kuroneko to carry a big bag to come to the office, took out several stacks of thick documents to place from the bag on the table, said: Here.” 没过多久,办公室的门被人推开了,只见黑猫拎着一个大袋子来到了办公室,从袋子里取出了几沓厚厚的文件摆放在了桌子上,说道:“在这里。” So many?” “这么多?” Mu Fan selected the eyebrow, is pointing at the document on table, asked: Kuroneko, these novels should you write were very long?” 慕凡挑了挑眉,指着桌上的文件,问道:“黑猫,这些小说你应该写了很久吧?” Gokou Ruri fast was divided into five parts the document, least one stack of documents will give Asuna, this has turned the head, explained to Mu Fan: In fact, other four documents are the hypotheses of novel, as for this document is of novel.” 五更琉璃飞快的将文件分成了五个部分,将其中最少的一沓文件交给了明日奈,这才转过头,对慕凡解释道:“实际上,其他四个文件都是小说的设定,至于这个文件才是小说的正篇。” So many hypotheses?” “这么多设定?” The eyelid of Mu Fan jumped jumping. 慕凡的眼皮跳了跳。 Although he has not read the Kuroneko novel, but he understands, this novel wants to be very difficult with E-Mule Library signing. 虽然他还没看黑猫的小说,但是他明白,这部小说想要和电击文库签约很难。 Straightforwardest, are setting so many of novel, the reader come to see the setting or come to see her novel? 最直白的来说,小说的设定这么多,身为读者到底是来看设定还是来看她的小说的? It is estimated that many readers solely noticed that such big pile of hypotheses will run away in fear. 估计很多读者单单看到这么一大堆设定就会吓跑了。 Compared with Mu Fan does not have the patience, Asuna is actually calmer, opened the main text to sweep one, raised the head exciting asking: Is the fantasy class novel.” 比起慕凡的没耐心,明日奈倒是更冷静点,翻开正文扫了一眼,抬起头兴奋的问道:“是奇幻类的小说吗。” Em.” “恩。” Hears some people to like own novel, the Kuroneko expression is somewhat excited, the hurried nod said: Em, yes, the background of this novel is the fantasy world, but did not look that setting novel many places are unable to understand, suggested you first look at the setting, will wait for me to submit a piece of writing to E-Mule Library after a period of time.” 听到有人喜欢自己的小说,黑猫的表情有些兴奋,急忙点头道:“恩,是的,这部小说的背景就是奇幻世界,不过不看设定小说很多地方是无法理解的,建议你先看一看设定,等过段时间我会向电击文库投稿的。” Saying, Kuroneko placed the Yuuki Asuna front other four parts of thick documents. 说着,黑猫将另外的四部分厚厚的文件放在了结城明日奈的面前。 So many documents......” “这么多文件啊......” On the Yuuki Asuna face flashes through wipes awkwardly, is actually not cruel enough to disturb the Kuroneko enthusiasm, can only open a document, said: I knew, I will look slowly.” 结城明日奈脸上闪过一抹尴尬,却又不忍心打扰黑猫的热情,只能翻开了其中的一个文件,说道:“我知道了,我会慢慢看的。” Em, can come to see slowly.” “恩,可以慢慢来看。” Saw Asuna to comply, Kuroneko saying with a smile joyfully. 明日奈答应了下来,黑猫欣然的笑道。 ...... ...... Is listening to two female dialogues, shot a look at Asuna that looks the embarrassment, Mu Fan also knows that regarding such novel, Asuna is unable to like on. 听着两女的对话,瞥了一眼面露难色的明日奈,慕凡也知道对于这样的小说,明日奈也是无法喜欢上的。 This actually not he and Asuna cannot have a liking for the Kuroneko novel, but is an setting of novel must in the progress of book little directs, light/only looked that the setting needs the long-term novel, is not naturally able to attract the reader. 这倒不是他和明日奈看不上黑猫的小说,而是一个小说的设定要在书的进度中一点点的引出来,光看设定就需要很长时间的小说,自然无法吸引到读者。 Because was unable to verify, Mu Fan temporarily no matter first two female dialogues, looked at the computer, the first chapter did not have the issue actually, is a afterstory part, this part was equivalent to the animation second quarter probably, launched with the Furukawa Nagisa line. 因为还没能审核完,慕凡暂时先不管两女的对话,将视线转向了电脑,的第一个篇章倒是没有问题,接下来就是属于afterstory篇部分,这个部分大概相当于动漫的第二季,是以古河渚的线路展开。 Collection final several light jade. 收集最后几个光玉。 So long as completes to capture/raid, can obtain to sprout/moe daughter Okazaki nighttide one in the main menu. 只要完成攻略,就可以在主菜单获得萌女儿冈崎汐一个。 But is selecting the second week eye, is deferring to the original plot development shortly, arrived at the autumn fresh line, the plot in theatrical troupe, originally according to remembering, opens an option to enter the following plot at the Mu Fan point, but Mu Fan just selected, picture unexpectedly one black, when to returns to the game time, Mu Fan discovered that the game returned to school, moreover turned into spring Yuanyang even string. 可在点开第二周目,按照着原剧情发展没多久,来到了秋生的线路,剧团内的剧情,本来按照记忆,在慕凡点开一个选项会进入接下来的剧情,可慕凡刚刚点下来,画面竟然一黑,待到重新回归游戏的时候,慕凡发现游戏又回到了学院篇而且变成了春原阳平线。 Looks the result on the screen presentingBad 望着屏幕上出现的结局【bad end end】 Mu Fan corners of the mouth twitches. 慕凡的嘴角一阵抽搐。 But this line a painted eggshell of script design, if did not take a moment ago an school line, will present the base friend line, but he has not elected wrong, how to present such a spoof line? 这个线路可是剧本设计的一个彩蛋,如果不走刚才学院篇的线路,就会出现好基友线,可是他没选错,怎么会出现了这样的一条恶搞线路? Nearby Yuuki Asuna also noticed on the Mu Fan face not the right expression, looked at a computer, asking of doubts: Mu Fan, did you choose mistakenly the option?” 一旁的结城明日奈也注意到了慕凡脸上不对劲的表情,看了一眼电脑,疑惑的问道:“慕凡,你选错了选项吗?” Will not make a mistake.” “不会出错的。” Mu Fan earnest shaking the head, although the normal person's condition in the work is not somewhat good to present some mistakes sometimes, can Mu Fan be very clear, his present state of mind is impossible to make a mistake. 慕凡认真的摇了摇头,虽然正常人在工作的时候多多少少有的时候状态不好会出现一些错误,可以慕凡很明白,他现在的精神状态不可能出错。 That is the programming of game has problems.” “那就是游戏的编程出了问题。” Gokou Ruri knits the brows, stands up to ask: Needs me to inquire?” 五更琉璃皱了皱眉,站起身来问道:“需要我去询问一下吗?” Does not use, possibly was I made a mistake, played to try again one time!” “不用,也可能是我出错了,再玩一次来试试吧!” Plays the game for the first time, naturally cannot draw a conclusion directly, Mu Fan beckons with the hand, stopped Kuroneko. 第一次玩游戏,自然不能直接下结论,慕凡还是摆了摆手,制止了黑猫 Is good puts on file because of him, although returned school, but can still arrive at second from the archive to the Furukawa Nagisa line. 好在他存了档,虽然退回了学院篇,但依然能从存档到古河渚线来到第二篇。 These arrives at the autumn to live the theatrical troupe plot in him time, after selecting the option, the picture has not returned school, but the following picture looked like the cassette generally, the entire game as if got the mosaic to be common, became extremely confused, even the dialogue column was still divided into several parts. 这一次在他来到秋生剧团剧情,点到了选项后,画面并没有转回学院篇,可是接下来的画面就像是卡带了一般,整个游戏似乎都打上了马赛克一般,变得极为错乱,就算对话栏也被分成了几个部分。 Sees here, the face of Mu Fan was green, but Kuroneko and Asuna looked at behind the theatrical troupe to present the pole of mosaic confusedly, the elegant face was red immediately. 看到这里,慕凡的脸都绿了,而黑猫明日奈望着剧团后面原本错乱出现了马赛克的杆子,俏脸顿时红了起来。 Mu Fan shows the whites of the eyes, really does not think behind tsukkomi mass organization that long mosaic is anything. 慕凡翻了个白眼,真不想吐槽社团后面的那个长长的马赛克是个什么东西。 Really, gets the mosaic to kill the person carelessly! 果然,胡乱打上马赛克会害死人的! Silent the moment, Yuuki Asuna was blushing, said: Mu Fan, is really the programming has problems probably.” 沉默了片刻,结城明日奈红着脸,说道:“慕凡,好像真的是编程出了问题。” Em, should have some problems.” “恩,应该是出了一些问题。” Mu Fan coughed awkwardly, gives Kuroneko to say the computer: That makes them carefully revise again, the game that we make, any part must achieve well, in any event cannot make the player who attracts from «Yosuga no Sora» pass.” 慕凡尴尬的咳嗽了一声,将电脑交给黑猫说道:“那就让他们再好好修改一下吧,我们做出的游戏,任何一部分都要做到最好,无论如何都不能让从《缘之空》吸引来的玩家流逝。” Em, I understood.” “恩,我明白了。” The Kuroneko hear the suggestion of Mu Fan, earnest nodded, closed the computer, is holding the computer, stepped on the black high-heeled shoes dá dá to come to outside the office, closes to go downstairs. 黑猫听完了慕凡的建议,认真的点了点头,合上电脑,抱着电脑,踩着黑色的高跟鞋哒哒的来到了办公室外,关上了门下了楼。 Really, had secretary Kuroneko, the Company matter was short. 果然,有了秘书黑猫,公司的事情都少了许多。 After Kuroneko closes the door, Mu Fan gratified smiles, he has not played galgame for a long time, has sat by the computer was long, the body somewhat was actually sore to stand up to stretch oneself, has turned the head, looks that Asuna is still continue read the Kuroneko novel. 黑猫关上门后,慕凡欣慰的一笑,他已经很长时间没有玩galgame了,一直坐在电脑旁久了,身体倒是都有些酸痛了站起身来伸了个懒腰,转过头去,看着明日奈还在继续看黑猫的小说。 Thinks, Mu Fan collected, smiles to ask: Asuna, this fantasy how?” 想了想,慕凡凑了过去,笑问道:“明日奈,这部奇幻小说怎么样?” Hears the Mu Fan sound, Yuuki Asuna puts down the document, smiles bitterly and astringently: Mu Fan, I have not in fact looked at the setting, therefore the plot is unable to understand, the novel setting are too many, can only little coming to see.” 听到慕凡的声音,结城明日奈放下文件,苦涩一笑:“慕凡,实际上我还没看完设定,所以剧情无法看懂,小说设定太多,只能一点点的来看了。” Looked for a long time had not entered the plot?” “看了这么久都没进入剧情?” Saw with own eyes that the time arrived at afternoon two points, Asuna had read one hour of novel, hasn't this looked at the setting, troublesome actually the Kuroneko novel establishes? 眼见时间都来到了下午的两点,明日奈已经看了一个多小时的小说,这都没看完设定,黑猫的小说设定究竟有多麻烦? Has been looking at the setting, without the plot derivation energy could remember? 况且,一直在看设定,没有剧情的引出能记得住吗? Mu Fan looked at hand the ticket on hot spring inn, above the time of start is 7 : 00 pm, goes by car to arrive the destination wants one hour, Mu Fan and Asuna are not anxious, decided that and other Kuroneko came back to say goodbye with her again. 慕凡看了一眼手上的温泉旅店的票,上面的开始的时间是晚上 7 点,坐车到达目的地只要一个小时的时间,慕凡明日奈并不急,决定等黑猫回来再和她告别。 In a while, the gate of office was sounded again, Mu Fan opened the door, this thinks what is Kuroneko, has not actually thought that this time comes to the office unexpectedly is Miura Senpai. 没过多久,办公室的门再度被敲响了,慕凡打开了门,本以为来的是黑猫,却没想到这次来到办公室的竟然是三浦学长 Sees Mu Fan that opens the door, on the Miura Senpai thin face reveals wipes the embarrassment, seemed like seems emaciated. 看到开门的慕凡,三浦学长消瘦的脸庞上露出一抹难色,看上去更显得瘦弱了。 What's wrong, UU read “怎么了,UU看书 www.uukanshu.com www.uukanshu.com Miura Senpai? ” 三浦学长?” The expression of Miura minister almost wrote on the face, Mu Fan detected, knits the brows to ask. 三浦部长的表情几乎都写在了脸上,慕凡察觉到了,皱了皱眉头问道。 Miura hesitant, sound low and deep say/way: This matter I was not quite suitable saying that you went downstairs to look at with me.” 三浦犹豫了一下,声音低沉的道:“这件事情我也不太适合说,你还是和我下楼看一下吧。” Em?” “恩?” Looks at the Miura earnest appearance, Mu Fan and blinking of Yuuki Asuna doubts, had/left the office to close simply, two people followed in Miura behind, goes downstairs. 看着三浦认真的样子,慕凡结城明日奈都不由疑惑的眨了眨眼睛,干脆出了办公室关上了门,二人跟在了三浦的身后,下了楼。 You had a look at this to play the second procedure/program, won't be able to complete including the last this minor matter of game conformity? Was good played to play because of the general manager a moment ago, our Company just started, if this game played to the player, knows that will cause the big losses to Company?” “你们看看这个游戏到了第二篇的程序,连将游戏整合的最后一步这点小事都做不好吗?好在总经理刚才玩了一下游戏,我们的公司才刚刚开始,如果这个游戏给玩家玩了,知不知道会给公司造成多大的损失?” Just went downstairs, Mu Fan heard such a to be full of the ice-cold reproving sound. 刚下楼,慕凡就听到了这样一个充满冰冷的训斥声音。 Hears this familiar sound, he and Asuna body, is this sound Kuroneko? Looks for the home station to search „” or the input website: 听到这个熟悉的声音,他和明日奈的身子顿了顿,这个声音是黑猫的?找本站请搜索“”或输入网址:
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