„Picture would some limitations with the humanities......” “画同人本总会有一些局限性......” Eriri sat on the seat of school desk, look complex sighing: „Because of this, I and parents discussed that I transform to prepare the picture original plot the matter, they are also support.” 英梨梨坐在了课桌的座位上,眼神复杂的叹了口气:“因为这点,我和父母讨论了一下,我转型准备画原创剧情的事情,他们也是支持的。” „Ha, do your parents also know this matter?” “哈,你的父母也知道这件事？” Looks at Eriri, Mu Fan opened the mouth surprisedly, long time could not speak. 看着英梨梨,慕凡惊讶的张大了嘴巴,半晌说不出话来。 In fact Mu Fan has thought, Eriri at the back of all understood his person, is the book artist in network by the Kashiwagi Eri status. 实际上慕凡一直以为,英梨梨是背着所有了解他的人,然后以柏木英理的身份担任网络上的本子画师。 Has not actually thought, the Eriri status actually knows her family member, moreover supports her, helping her sell the book? 却没想到,英梨梨的身份竟然连她的家人都知道,而且还支持她,帮她卖本子？ Waits for ..... such enlightened parents to give me to come one dozen! 等等.....这样开明的爸妈请给我来一打！ „That is natural, my book is the parents has helped me sell, not, but my real status sells the book, perhaps in the school has spread.” “那是自然,我的本子一直都是父母来帮我卖出去的,不然以我的真实身份来卖本子,恐怕学校里早就传开了。” Looks at the Mu Fan surprised expression, Eriri said uncomfortable. 看着慕凡惊讶的表情,英梨梨不爽说道。 „Thanks to you wants to result in coming out to make the parents sell the book.” “亏你想得出来让父母卖本子。” Mu Fan somewhat did not know whether to laugh or cry, sits in the Eriri opposite, visits her to ask: „In other words, your does the book catch in plot aspect now?” 慕凡有些哭笑不得,坐在了英梨梨的对面,看着她问道:“也就是说,现在你的本子在剧情这方面卡住了？” „Exactly said, does not have the progress about plot aspect!” “确切的说,是关于剧情这方面毫无进展！” Eriri put on the black frame eyeglasses, although the stature is petite, but sits on the chair wraps the black to cross the both legs of knee sock seems extremely slender, she inviting both legs will overlap in together, looks at Mu Fan stern-faced saying: „Since previous time supposes after the Asuna person drew a book probably, then does not have the progress.” 英梨梨戴上了黑框眼镜,虽然身材娇小,但坐在椅子上套着黑色过膝袜的双腿显得极为修长,她无意间将充满诱惑的双腿交叠在一起,看着慕凡一脸凝重的说道:“自从上次以明日奈的人设大概画出了一个本子后,接下来就毫无进展了。” „Always felt that you compared with I imagine regarding the understanding of plot must miss on many.” “总感觉你比我想象中的对于剧情的理解要差上许多。” Mu Fan is smiling bitterly asking: „Your so many book white Hua?” 慕凡不禁苦笑着问道:“难道你那么多的本子都白画了？” It looks like in Mu Fan, Eriri drew much with the humanities, how possibly after announcing transformation, a wee bit ideas? 在慕凡看来,英梨梨可是画了不少同人本,怎么可能在宣布转型后,一丁点的想法都没有？ „Was certainly different from the humanities and original.” “同人本和原创当然不一样了。” Eriri white Mu Fan: „The reader with humanities can tolerate me to the unreasonable explanation of plot, for example I let „ fantasy monster blade biography” Heroine and friend seashore takes vacation, after the result not carefully by several people get drunk, state of mind fuzzy time launches the plot of war, do not look that this type sounds like does not have the plot of brain, but buys the book to look , everyone can one satisfy completely. ” 英梨梨白了慕凡一眼:“同人本的读者可以容忍我对剧情的不合理解释,比如我让“幻想妖刀传”的女主和朋友海边度假,结果不小心被几个人灌醉后神志模糊的时候就展开大战的剧情,别看这种听起来是非常无脑的剧情,但买下本子看完后每一个人全部都会一本满足的。” Excuse me, do you act with constraint a point before me? What launches the war directly? 拜托,你在我面前矜持一点好吗？什么叫直接展开大战？ In Mu Fan heart speechless. 慕凡心中无语。 At this time, Eriri pushed the eyeglasses, exhibited an appearance of book Grandmaster, said: „The animation that because they looked at before had understood that the Heroine character, in addition the influence of original works made with the humanities more popular, the reader in wants to launch with the humanities in directly, rather than the progress of plot.” 这时,英梨梨推了推眼镜,摆出一副本子界大师的模样,道:“因为他们之前看的动漫已经了解到了女主的性格,再加上原著的影响使同人本更受欢迎,读者在同人本中更希望直接展开,而不是剧情的进展。” „Original was different, at least needs to display the Heroine character, adds on capturing/raiding of male lord to launch the plot with the character again, achieves that effect that makes one want to stop but cannot.” “原创就不一样了,至少要展现一下女主的性格,再以性格加上男主的攻略展开剧情,做到那种让人欲罢不能的效果。” „Said, you mean, the same humanities plot that you once thought extremely does not have the brain, in the character who that plot attains the original will be been unreasonable by reader tsukkomi, causing the income to be low?” Mu Fan curious asking “这么说,你的意思是,你曾经想的同人本剧情太过无脑,那种剧情拿到原创的人物中就会被读者吐槽不合理,导致收益低？”慕凡好奇的问道 „It is not.” “也不是。” Eriri shakes the head saying: „Book will rarely have the reader to go to tsukkomi, because it has many unreasonable plot, but a plot of book splendid, will affect the final income, at least needs to involve the will of the people, looked how the lead captures Heroine, achieves finally completes the goal war goal.” 英梨梨摇了摇头道:“本子很少会有读者去吐槽的,因为它本身就存在着许多不合理的情节,但一个本子的剧情有多精彩,就会影响最终的收益,至少要牵扯住人心,看主角怎么攻略女主,来达到最终完成目的大战目的。” At this point, Eriri complexion one red, has left the head, the say/way of making excuses: „..., therefore I want to find you, because you wrote «Yosuga no Sora» before, in plot that since you grasp, can look at you are not an rookie author, therefore I want to ask you to arrange a plot for me, so long as can have the text, next month my book will sell the income of creating, I can 55 be divided with you......” 说到这里,英梨梨的脸色一红,别过脑袋,支支吾吾的道:“所...所以我才想找到你,因为你之前写了《缘之空》,从你把握的剧情上,可以看出来你并不是一个新人作者,所以我想请你为我编排出一个剧情,只要能够有文本,下个月我的本子销售创造出来的收益,我可以和你五五分成......” Kashiwagi Eri are 55 divided? 柏木英理的五五分成？ On the face of Mu Fan showed the surprised expression, 慕凡的脸上露出了惊讶的表情, The innermost feelings are figuring out this matter, said that this is quite really cost-effective. He does not have at a book roll-call sound, but he 55 are divided by manga that the book Grandmaster Kashiwagi Eri reputation draws, that income may draw the book to want cost-effective many. 内心盘算着这件事,说起来这个真的比较划算。他在本子界一点名声都没有,而以本子大师柏木英理的名声画出的漫画和他五五分成,那收益可比自己来画本子要划算的多。 Mu Fan does not plan the picture book temporarily, but prepares to use some manga talent picture normal manga, makes the sale by legitimate manga. 况且慕凡暂时并不打算画本子,而是准备利用漫画天赋画一些正常的漫画,以正统的漫画做出销售。 As for treating as the plot of book, can use to Eriri. 至于当作本子的剧情,就可以给英梨梨来用。 On the other hand, the plot of book, Mu Fan also, moreover the previous generation many, the sole brain made up can complete. 话说回来,本子的剧情,慕凡还真有一个,而且前世了很多遍,单单脑补就可以完成了。 Does not need Fantasy Point(s). 根本无需幻想值。 The Elder Brother good and evil is also crossing over, has the thing that originally a little will have a vivid memory, how possibly used Fantasy Point(s)? 哥好歹也是个穿越者,本来也会有点记忆犹新的东西,怎么可能一直用幻想值？ „Here indeed has a plot.” “我这里的确有一个剧情。” Mu Fan looks to Eriri, said with a smile: „That this, waits for me to reorganize tonight the program, you look.” 慕凡看向英梨梨,笑着说道:“那就这样吧,等今天晚上我将大纲整理出来,你看一下吧。” „Un.” “嗯。” ..... ..... Finally after several discussions, decided that makes Mu Fan construct the plot, is drawn by Eriri, waits for the final income 55 to be divided. 最终经过几番讨论,决定让慕凡来构建剧情,由英梨梨来画,等最终收益五五分成。 Decided that all these, Mu Fan left manga club. 决定好了这一切,慕凡就离开了漫画部。 After all although in the morning the student in school are not many, but, manga club must come other Staff member before long. 毕竟清晨虽然学校里的学生并不多,但过不了多久,漫画部就要来其他的部员了。 Incautiously he and Eriri discussed that the book exposes the secret. UU reads 一不小心他和英梨梨讨论本子暴露秘密。UU看书 www.uukanshu.com Eriri status was found that was not good to explain. www.uukanshu.com英梨梨的身份被人发现就不好解释了。 ..... ..... But when Mu Fan leaves, Yuuki Asuna sits in Food Department, takes out the cell phone on the homepage opened „SAO” the official site. 而就在慕凡离开的时候,结城明日奈独自一人坐在美食部中,取出手机在网页上打开了“SAO”的官网。 In fact, since „SAO” issue time, Asuna in inside world heart somewhat is curious regarding „SAO”. 实际上,自从“SAO”发布的时候,明日奈就对于“SAO”里面的世界心中就有些好奇。 Because she participates in „SAO” these days the major Company high-level meetings, always hears the person to discuss this game to affect the development of the world, everyone can in the inside real life. 因为她这段时间参加“SAO”各大公司高层的聚会,总是听到人谈论这款游戏可以影响世界的发展,每一个人都可以在里面真实的生活。 Real life? 真实的生活？ In the heart has brought curious Yuuki Asuna, discovered Device that in just in time the family/home the Elder Brother brings, opened that day of clothing/taking to put on the helmet in „SAO” simply. 心中一直带着好奇的结城明日奈,正巧发现家里哥哥带回来的设备,索性就在“SAO”开服的那一天戴上了头盔。 Later was then attracted by the real world of that outset cities, she discovered with amazement, this unrestrained free world, is existence that she yearns for truly. 之后便被那种起始城镇的真实的世界所吸引了,她惊讶的发现,这种无拘无束的自由世界,才是她真正向往的存在。 But sees the rank madman on day of list, continuously by the heart that Ojou-sama stronger, is unwilling to start the journey of daily impact in virtual world backward Asuna. 而看到天榜上的等级狂人,一直以大小姐要强的心,不甘在虚拟世界落后的明日奈开始每天的冲击之旅。 Although first day starts somewhat to be clumsy facing the monster, but then, Yuuki Asuna actually detected that over time own operation even more handy, facing the monster calm power of observation and responded that Ability lets her promotion speed large scale increase. 虽然第一天开始面对着怪物还有些笨拙,可接下来随着时间的流逝,结城明日奈却发觉自己的操作愈发的得心应手,面对怪物冷静的观察力和反应能力让她的升级速度大幅度提升。 This lets in the heart of Yuuki Asuna surprised, 这让结城明日奈的心中惊讶不已、 As if & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; 似乎—— Oneself are playing to play this, has not the low talent. 自己在玩游戏这点,也有着不低的天赋。 Recalled here to finish, Yuuki Asuna selected the rank ranking of official site. 回忆到这里结束,结城明日奈点开了官网的等级排行榜。 „Asuna & Fuck ash ; & Fuck ash ; Rank 4, ranking: 9” “亚丝娜——等级四,排名:九” This is Ojou-sama Asuna, always after diligently, dominates rank ranking above 50,000 player. 这就是大小姐明日奈,一直以来努力后,凌驾于五万玩家之上的等级排名。