Mu Faninterestedlooks at the discussion in group, author in the groupgraduallyhasfew peopleto thinkMu Fanwritescertainlyisdregsdoes, after allunderthissymbolspeedapparentlydoes not have the carefulponderplot, not to mentionguaranteed the work the quality.慕凡饶有兴趣的看着群里的议论,渐渐的群里的作者有一部分人认为慕凡写出来的一定是一本渣作,毕竟这种码字速度下显然没有仔细的思考剧情,更不用说保证作品的质量了。Thisviewpoint, manypeopleexpressed the support, somepeopledirectlyTwilight in the Mortal Worldingroup.
这一个观点一出,许多人表示了赞同,更有人直接在群里@暮色凡尘。Regarding this, Mu Fanis lightsmiles, is disinclinedto pay attention tothesepublic opinions, after allthrows the streetauthorto be all righton the matter of envypersonis also common, so long asheappearedininsidespeaksa few words, certainlywill become the target of thisgroup of authors, a few wordsdid not saywould rather,treated as the airtheirdiscussions.
对此,慕凡只是淡淡一笑,懒得理会这些舆论,毕竟扑街作者没事就嫉妒人的事情也是常有的,他只要出现在里面说一句话,一定会成为这群作者的攻击对象,倒不如一句话不说,将他们的谈论当做空气。In the groupfullis the public opiniontime, in the Mu Fansurpriseddiscoverygrouppresented a familiarnameunexpectedly, presentsfamous an authorinlightnovel selllist, is called„Shidou Kunimitsu”.
正在群里满是舆论的时候,慕凡惊讶的发现群里竟然出现了一个熟悉的名字,是出现在轻小说销售榜上的一个有名的作者,叫做“狮童国光”。„Everyonedoes not want unable to achievedeniesothers, sinceTeacherTwilight in the Mortal Worldcanwrite100,000characters, expressedTwilight in the Mortal Worldregardingownworkcontrolunusualis fierce.”
“大家不要自己做不到就否定别人,既然暮色凡尘老师能够写出十万字,就表示暮色凡尘对于自己的作品掌控的非常厉害。”Saw that Shidou Kunimitsuspokeforoneself, Mu Fangawkedslightly, the lightnoveltypedeviationgood foodarticle that thispersonwrote, for examplemanufacturedsomedessertclassesgood foodarticles, was also popularinlightnovel, buthas not thought ofthispersonunexpectedlyforunknownstand the speech.
看到狮童国光为自己说话,慕凡微微一愣,这个人写的轻小说类型偏向美食文,比如制作一些点心类的美食文,在轻小说界也非常受欢迎,只是没想到这个人竟然会为了素不相识的自己站出来说话。
This moral behaviortothiswriterlooked atonebyoneselfhigh.
这不由让自己对这个作家的人品又高看了一眼。Shidou Kunimitsuclearlyhas the weight/quantity of speechintheselightnovelwritersvery much, saidthese wordstime, ingroupimmediatelypeaceful.狮童国光显然在这些轻小说作家中很有说话的分量的,说出这句话的时候,群中顿时就安静了下来。Howeverdoes not last forever, in a whilesomepeoplecame outto refute: „LionTeacherchild, how many are yoursymbolspeed?”
不过好景不长,没过多久就又有人出来反驳了:“狮童老师,请问您的码字速度是多少？”Waited for the moment, in the groupspreads the responseaboutShidou Kunimitsu: „Probablyoneday15,000characters.”
等了片刻,群中才传出关于狮童国光的回应:“大概一天一万五千字吧。”„TeacherShidou Kunimitsuoneday can only 15,000characters, Twilight in the Mortal Worldbe only an rookie, howpossiblyratioonyou and Yamada Elftwoteachers, thatcandetermine that his«Accel World»is a hydrologyor the dregsdoes certainly, howreallywithoutthinking ofthisworkcansigninE-Mule Library.”
“就连狮童国光老师都一天只能一万五千字,暮色凡尘只是个新人而已,怎么可能比的上你和山田妖精两个老师,那就可以确定他的《加速世界》一定是一本水文或者渣作,真没想到这种作品怎么能在电击文库签约的。”Saw the response in group, Mu Fanclosed the group, hemaynot care aboutpeople'sdiscussion, that day when Accel Worldstartedto sell, alldiscussionswill vanish into thin air.
看到群中的回应,慕凡关上了群,他可不在意众人的议论,等到加速世界开始销售的那一天,一切的议论都将烟消云散。Closes the computerto startto sleep, althoughrested a meeting, butevening'simmortal cultivation, at all is not34hourscansupplement the energy.
关上电脑开始睡觉,虽然睡了一会,但一晚上的修仙,根本不是三四个小时能够将精力补充起来的。
The Mu Fansecondzenithtwodark pouches, murkyarrived atFood Department, hedecidesto be busy at a meetinghere, after returning to the class and grade, mustrestto the time of being on vacation from schooldirectly.慕凡第二天顶着两个黑眼圈,昏昏沉沉的来到了美食部,他决定在这里忙一会,回到班级后一定要直接睡到放学的时间。As fornoonFood Department, temporaryandAsunasaysone, the community activitiescancelstodaytemporarily.
至于中午的美食部,就暂时和明日奈说一声,社团活动今天暂时取消。Hejustarrived atFood Department, actuallydiscovered that the Food Departmentgatehad been opened, thisthinkswhatinsideisAsuna, has not actually thought that unexpectedlyisbookartistEriri of sameclass.
只是,他刚刚来到美食部,却发现美食部的门已经被人打开了,本以为里面的是明日奈,却没想到竟然是同班的本子画师英梨梨。„Youcamefinally!”SeesMu Fan, Eririis clenching teethto say.
“你终于来了！”看到走进来的慕凡,英梨梨咬着牙说道。„Starexplodesponytailto cut the schoolmate, youhere? Yuuki-san?”
“星爆马尾斩同学,你怎么在这里？结成同学呢？”Mu Fanplacedon the book bag the table, wear a look ofshockslooks atEriri.慕凡将书包放在了桌子上,面带震惊的看着英梨梨。„Calledme the name, youhave not seenmeto takeAsunakey that whatattitude was this?”
“叫我名字啊,还有你没看到我拿着明日奈的钥匙那,这是什么态度？”Listens to the Mu Fanwords, Eririto raise hand the Food DepartmentkeytoMu Fan, uncomfortablesay/way: „Asunahas the mattertoday, askedmeto come tohereto help, looked that yourappearanceshouldcultivate virtue in order to become an immortalyesterday evening? Did some plots of gametextwrite?”
听着慕凡的话,英梨梨对着慕凡扬了扬手中的美食部钥匙,不爽的道:“明日奈今天有事,就求我来这里帮忙了,看你的样子昨天晚上应该又修仙了吧？难道游戏文本的部分剧情写好了？”„Main linehas writtencompletely.”
“主线已经全部写好了。”Mu Fantook out the text that oneselfprintedto placeon the tablefrom the backpack, pushedsaidtoEriri: „Can lookbe competentyourgames.”慕凡从背包里取出自己打印出来的文本放在了桌子上,推给英梨梨说道:“看看可不可以胜任你们的游戏吧。”„Unexpectedly did evening'stimewriteso many? Are you anomaly?”
“竟然一晚上的时间就写出了这么多？你是怪胎吗？”Eriritakes upon the table the thicktext unable to bear the surprisedwhispersay.英梨梨拿起桌上厚厚的文本忍不住惊讶的嘀咕道。
„ Howto sayas you like,
“随你怎么说,Youlooked that Ifirstrest the meeting, coming the personto callme. ” Mu Fan was really tired, nowis also disinclinedwith the Eriritheory, sawEririto take the text of game, layon the Food Departmenttabledirectlyrested.
你看吧,我先睡会,来人叫我。”慕凡实在是太累了,现在也懒得和英梨梨理论,看到英梨梨拿起来了游戏的文本,直接趴在美食部的桌子上睡了过去。„Snort, even ifyoucultivate virtue in order to become an immortal the thing that writesvery muchlate, ifwill be unqualifiedInot to use!”
“哼,就算你修仙很晚写出来的东西,如果不合格我也不会用的！”Sawdoes not pay attention toherto lie on the tablerestedMu Fandirectlydiscontentedly, Eririsnort/hum, thentook outownblack frameeyeglassesto bringfrom the pocket.
看到不理会她直接趴在桌上睡了过去的慕凡,英梨梨不满的哼了一声,而后从口袋里取出自己的黑框眼镜带了上去。In factshehas had the nearsightedness, butbrings the contact lensesevery day, butforgetsto bringtoday. Is goodis preparedwith the eyeglasses, canbe smoothreads the text of gameMu Fanis making.
实际上她一直有着近视,只是每天都带着隐形眼镜,可今天忘记带了。好在有备用的眼镜,也可以顺利么阅读着慕凡做出的游戏的文本。
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The timepassesin a hurry, Food Departmentandno onevisits, butis enjoyingMu Fan in sleepingsleepto feelsuddenly the armwas drawn, raised the head, in surpriseddiscoveryEririis takingto begin the text, a pair of deepbluepupilfillsangrilyis staring itself.
时间匆匆流逝,美食部并没有人光临,不过正享受睡觉睡梦中的慕凡忽然感觉胳膊被人拉了一下,不由抬起头,却惊讶的发现英梨梨正拿着手里的文本,一双湛蓝色的眸子充满愤怒的瞪着自己。„What's wrong, did ponytailcut the schoolmate?”Mu Fannarrows the eyeto ask.
“怎么了,马尾斩同学？”慕凡眯着眼睛问道。NowMu FanunderstandsfinallywhyGabrielevery daythisappearance, originallyisevery daystays up latebefore dawn, reallynot to know how shemaintains, oneselfall is a dark pouche, sheunexpectedlyisthatcute.
现在慕凡终于明白为什么珈百璃每天都这幅模样了,原来是每天都熬夜到凌晨,真是不知道她是怎么保养的,自己全都是黑眼圈,她竟然还是那么可爱。
The female studentand are the male studentdifferent?
难道女生和男生不一样？„CalledmySchoolmateSawamura!”
“叫我泽村同学！”EririwhiteMu Fan, took the textto place the Mu Fanfront, UUread英梨梨白了慕凡一眼,拿着文本放在了慕凡的面前,UU看书onwww.uukanshu.comfaceis exuding the shycrimsonpanting in indignationsay/way: „Youalsofelt all right saying that this that youwrotewhattextwas?”
www.uukanshu.com脸上泛着羞涩的绯红气呼呼的道:“你还好意思说,你写的这是个什么文本啊？”„«Yosuga no Sora»”Mu Fanlieson the table, referred to the abovetitlesaying.
“《缘之空》”慕凡趴在桌上,指了指上面的标题说道。„Is this«Yosuga no Sora»? Youat leastput an synopsis!”
“这就是《缘之空》？你至少放个简介啊！”
The Eriripanting in indignationsay/way, shefrom the titlethinksthisisby the game that the fates of twopeoplelaunch, has not thought after reading, discovered that herbeforehandideawas completely wrong.英梨梨气呼呼的道,她从标题上本来以为这是以两个人的缘分展开的游戏,可没想到阅读后才发现她之前的想法完全错了。Thisstoryoverthrewheronceethicsconceptcompletely.
这个故事的将她曾经的伦理观念全部推翻了。WhatbecausethisstorytoldwasparentsdoubleperishesHino'slong-drawn-outmalelordsto leadownyounger sisterarchedto arrive atonefar away from the countrysidesmall town of metropolis, startedevery dayto consider the life that the younger sisteras well aswent to school.
因为这个故事讲述的是一位父母双亡名日野悠的男主带着自己的妹妹穹来到了一座远离都市的田园小镇中,开始了每日照顾妹妹以及上学的生活。
The earlierbeginningis good, has the friendandfriends from childhood in school, but the finalplotdevelopment is the younger sisterloves one anotherunexpectedly, although seems in love of taboo, she but who thissubversionrealisticconcept the plot of brother and sister'sactuallylooked atnot onlyanxiousandanticipates.
前期的开端还好,有着学校的朋友和青梅竹马,可最后的剧情发展竟然是和妹妹相恋,虽然看似禁忌的爱恋,但这种颠覆了现实观念的兄妹的情节却看的她既揪心又期待。Especiallyarcheddeeplyis lovinglong-drawn-out, twopeople of dialoguesinlakeletsherunusualmove, is the mutualdeeplove, whileis the ethics of society, variouspressureheavy burden, wanteach otherto be closeto be intimate with, byinvisiblepull, thattypeis actually wantedto discard the complex of not being able to discardto letheranxiously.
尤其是穹深爱着悠,二人在湖中的对话让她异常的感动,一边是互相的深爱,一边又是社会的伦理,各种压力重负,想要彼此接近亲近,却又被无形的拉开,那种想舍弃又舍弃不掉的情结让她揪心不已。Whensaw that twopeopledecidedfinally the overseaslivetogether, herheartthenrelaxed.
当看到二人最后决定去国外一起生活的时候,她的心这才放松了下来。However, this, although the storyis good, butreallycanfinishfirst of game?
不过话说回来,这个虽然故事不错,只是真的可以获得游戏的第一名？Sees the vision of Eririsuspicion, Mu Fansmileslightly.
看到英梨梨怀疑的目光,慕凡淡淡一笑。Therefore , the young girl, youunderestimatesin the Two Dimensionalstorysisconheldto read.
所以说,少女,你还是太小看二次元故事中妹控们的执念了。【Asked the recommendationticketdaily, today'srecommendationticketenough500, tomorrowor the day after tomorrowcertainthreewill make up the simultaneous/uniform500recommendationticketsin addition.】
【日常求推荐票,今天的推荐票够五百了,明天或者后天一定三更补齐500推荐票的加更。】
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