„Good, Iissueyounow.”
“好吧,我现在发给你。”Because the symbolsoftwarecell phone and computerareclosely related, on the cell phonealsohasyesterday'sretaining the draft, thisisveryconvenient. Mu Fanpours40,000characternovels that yesterday'scodecame outfrom the cell phone, issuedAkicompletely.
由于码字软件手机和电脑是相互关联的,手机上也有着昨天的存稿,这点是十分方便的。慕凡从手机里倒出了昨天码出来的四万字小说,全部都发给了安艺伦也。No matter how said that Mu Fanarrives atshortly afterthisworld, byAki is also the status of thisworld-knownbloggershouldbe ableto see that a bookfit and unfit qualityas well aswhetherconforms to the market.
不管怎么说,慕凡才来到这个世界不久,以安艺伦也身为这个世界知名博主的身份应该是可以看出一本书的优劣以及是否符合市场的。Aki, is a standardgoverningdwellingclan, usuallylikeslooking that somenovels and animationsandplay the youthlovegame, every monthregardingselling the lightnovel and animationcomment, from thisalsoearned the support of manyfan, becomesonewell-knownbyACGinformationfamouspopularityblogger, cansay that hehas read the innumerablelightnovels, regarding the understanding of lightnovel is also quiteprofound.安艺伦也,是一个标准的御宅一族,平时喜欢看一些小说和动漫和玩青春恋爱游戏,每月都会对于发售的轻小说和动画做一些评论,由此也获得了不少粉丝的支持,成为了一个知名的以ACG资讯出名的人气博主,可以说他读过无数的轻小说,对于轻小说的理解也是颇为深刻。Todayhehappen tolistensto workin the restauranttogetherandstartsto write the lightnovelwithschoolschoolmate'sgood friendMu Fan, came the interestimmediately.
今天他正好听一起在餐馆打工兼同校同学的挚友慕凡开始了写轻小说,更是立即来了兴趣。In his opinion, Mu Fanis the rookie who justentered the pit, the lightnovelrookieneedsto pay attention tomanyissuepoints, heneeds11comes outto the Mu Fanrow, giveshim the direction, butjustsaw the plotsynopsis of Mu Fanlightnovel, Akiwas also shocked.
在他看来,慕凡属于一个刚入坑的新人,轻小说新人需要注意很多个问题点,他需要一一的给慕凡列出来,给予他一些指点,不过刚看到慕凡轻小说的剧情简介,安艺伦也就大跌眼镜了。„The «Accel World»story happened ineveryoneusesnamed „ neurallinker” the terminalDeviceconnection of nervejunction device, will livein the future of bynetwork world? Becoming ultrafrequencyconnection who hasthousandtimes of ponderspeeds? ”
“《加速世界》故事发生在人人都使用名为“neurallinker”神经连接装置的终端设备连线,生活在以网络世界的未来?成为有着千倍思考速度的超频连接者?”Although the storyintroductionis simple, thetheme that butfromregarding the fantasy of thisbrainhole, likely an rookiecannotcontrol.
虽然故事介绍简单,但从对于这种脑洞的幻想来看,很可能一个新人根本不能够驾驭的这种题材。Justsaw the synopsis, in the Akialsoheart the intereston the non-origin, thisshouldbe the onetheme of leaningscience fiction, althoughnowadaysin the lightnovelalsohas the science fictionfuturetheme, butsolelyfromnervejunction device, the settingshouldbe a verynoveltheme.
刚一看到简介,安艺伦也心中就不由来了兴趣,这应该是偏科幻的一种题材吧,现如今轻小说中虽然也有着科幻未来的题材,不过单单从神经连接装置这点来看,设定应该是非常新颖的一个题材。Howeverlookedagaindownward,Akibrowalsowrinkled.
不过再往下看,安艺伦也的眉头就皱了起来。Receives the humiliationwith a statureobesecharacterspiritlesslystudentArita Haruyuki, is crossingcursed the reality, whilehidin the school a networkcorner/hornpromotes the day of handballgamescorehighestrecord, can only find the joyfulandself-confidentyoungsterin the gameas the beginning?
以一个身材肥胖性格懦弱而受到欺凌的学生有田春雪,过着一边诅咒现实,一边躲在校内网络一角提升自己壁球游戏分数最高纪录的日子,只能在游戏中找到快乐和自信的少年作为开端?Innowadaysnovel and animation, takes the beginningasfattyabsolutelyis a bigtaboo, after alllikeslooking that in the personheart of novelcangeneralfantasizerole that like, isby, ifby the fattyas the beginning, will perhaps havegetting down that manypeopleare unable to insist?
在现如今的小说和动画中,以胖子的身份作为开端绝对是一大禁忌,毕竟喜欢看小说的人心中都能大概的幻想一下自己喜欢的角色,可是以如果以胖子作为开端,恐怕会有许多人都无法坚持的下去吧?Not to mention, thisfattyalsoquiteweak and incompetentevery daysuffered the personto bully.
更不用说,这个胖子还比较软弱无能每天都遭受人欺负了。.....
.....Howeverbecause of the weakness of malelord, wantsto look how the malelordthencounter-attackedto solve the psychology of event, Akialsocontinuesto look. Hehad not actually discovered,oneselfhad been substitutedbythisnovelcompletely.
不过正是因为男主的软弱,才想要看男主接下来如何反击来解决事件的这种心理,安艺伦也继续看了下去。他却没有发现,自己不知不觉间已经被这本小说给完全代入了进去。Although the malelordis weak, buthashisindividuality, thisnovelbiggestmeritis significantregarding the characteristicsprominentspecialness of character.
虽然男主软弱,但是却有着他的个性,这本小说最大的优点对于性格的特点突出的特别明显。Followingstudent associationvice-PresidentKuroyukihime that some in a day, the peoplerespect, went into the Arita Haruyukiworld, makinghimjoin„burstlinker”to be able the ponderspeedincreasetothousandtimes of ultrafrequencyconnection. Alsois relying onthisponderspeed, KuroyukihimehelpedArita Haruyukiget rid ofthissqueezedlife.
接下来的某一天里,众人敬仰的学生会副会长黑雪姬,闯入了有田春雪的世界,让他加入了“burstlinker”能够将思考速度提升至千倍的超频连接者的行列。也正是凭借着这种思考速度,黑雪姬帮助有田春雪摆脱了这种被压榨的生活。Butalsobecause ofthisprocedure/program, madehimbe involved in„ultrafrequencyconnection” between fight, torepay the Kuroyukihimekindness, the spring snowgave loyalty to rebuild the story of blackregimentforblackkingKuroyukihimevoluntarily......
但也因为这个程序,也让他卷入了“超频连接者”之间的战斗,为了报答黑雪姬的恩惠,春雪自愿为黑之王黑雪姬效忠而重建黑之军团的故事......
The storytohere, the plots of more than 40,000charactersended.
故事到了这里,四万多字的剧情就结束了。Readallplots, Akiis also startledat presentcompletely, solelybythemeAccel Worldinnowadayslightnovelisverynovel, cansay that the fight of Arita Haruyuki can definitely affect the reality, inhishearturgentwishlooks is whatplot,
看完了目前所有的剧情,安艺伦也完全怔住了,单单论题材这个加速世界在现如今的轻小说中是非常新颖的,可以说有田春雪的战斗完全可以影响到现实,他的心中迫切的想要看一看接下来是什么剧情,WhatdevelopmentArita Haruyukibecomes the effortprogress and Kuroyukihime of ultrafrequencyconnectionsentimentwill have. Read the innumerablelightnovelsaswell-knownpopularitybloggerhe, solelyfrom the frontplot, cansee«Accel World»absolutelyis an excellent work, because of a qualifiedexcellent work first noveltheme, expressedsuccessfully the larger part.有田春雪成为了超频连接者的努力进步和黑雪姬的感情会有什么样的发展。身为知名人气博主的他看了无数的轻小说,单单从前面的剧情来看,就能够看出《加速世界》绝对是一部佳作,因为一部合格的佳作首先新颖的题材,就表示成功了一大半。„Mu Fan, never expected thatyouare only an rookie, unexpectedly the lightnovelwritesis so good, reallymademebroaden the outlook, what was the followingplot?”
“慕凡,没想到你只是一个新人,轻小说竟然写的这么好,真是让我大开眼界了,接下来的剧情是什么?”Aki not artificialwas sighingto the Mu Fanto praise. Looked, cannot endurehealsoowntemper, quicklyreturned to an informationtoMu Fan.安艺伦也毫不做作的对着慕凡赞叹道。看完后耐不住他也自己的性子,急忙给慕凡回了一条信息。SitsinMu Fan of Food Departmentsymbol, sawAkialsoanswered, hasearlyexpectsmiles.
坐在美食部码字的慕凡,看到了安艺伦也的回话,早有预料般的一笑。Then, Accel Worldregardlessallhypotheses, thisnovelin his eyesis a weakknight, toprotect the belovedprincess, butconstantlygrows the encouragingstory that unceasinglyprogresses.
说起来,加速世界抛开一切设定,这本小说在他的眼里就是一部一位软弱的骑士,为了保护自己心爱的公主,而不断成长不断进步的励志故事。Hebelongsto transport the lightnovel of previous generationfire, Accel Worldconformed tonow the market of thisworld, thatnaturallycanattract many readers of liking.
况且他属于搬运了前世大火的轻小说,加速世界又符合现在这个世界的市场,那自然会吸引到许多喜欢的读者。As for the words of original, waitedto attractsomepopularityto startagain.
至于原创的话,等吸引了一些人气再开始。Rookielightnovel?
新人轻小说?Mu Fanselected the eyebrow, hewrote the novelto write for 45years, was onlynotinthisworld.慕凡挑了挑眉,他写小说写了四五年,只是不在这个世界上而已。„Withoutwritingto passon the play is very bored? A qualifiedauthorplaywill not pass.”
“没写出来就剧透岂不是很无聊?一个合格的作者是不会剧透的。”Mu FansmilestoAkialsoreturned to an information.慕凡笑了笑给安艺伦也回了一条信息。„, WasItakes the liberty.”
“哦哦,是我冒昧了。”Akialsoextremely the followingplot, obtains the reminder of Mu Fanthento thinka moment agoeagerly his novel and animationmost repugnantplaypass, laterthinks the words that Mu Fanstartedto speak, asked: „Mu Fan, do youpreparecontributionE-Mule Library? ThereIindeedknow an editor, ifyouthink, wecanSaturdaygotogether, Ihelpyouintroduce.”安艺伦也刚才太过着急于下面的剧情,得到慕凡的提醒这才想到了他一本小说和动漫最讨厌的剧透,随后想到了慕凡开始说的话,问道:“慕凡,你准备投稿电击文库吗?那里我的确认识一个编辑,你如果想的话,我们可以星期六一起去,我帮你介绍一下。”„Good, actuallyIamplanto participate in the E-Mule Libraryrookieprize, sinceyouhave the familiaredition, wegoon Saturday.”
“好,其实我是准备参加电击文库的新人奖,既然你有熟悉的编辑,那我们就星期六去吧。”„Okay, thatfollowingplotmustwritea bit faster. Has not resulted inlooked that Iwill die!”
“好好,那后续的剧情要快点写出来啊。没得看我可是会死的!”„Relax, Iwill not makeyoudie.”
“放心吧,我不会让你死的。”
......
......Mu Fanclosed the cell phone, startsto continue the symbol, at this time, Yuuki Asunawalked, looked on a cell phonefast the writing of change, as well asabovechapterinformation, surprisedasking: „Mu Fan, you..... is thisis writing the novel?”慕凡关上了手机,开始继续码字,这时,结城明日奈走了过来,看了一眼手机上飞快变化的文字,以及上面的章节信息,惊讶的问道:“慕凡,你.....这是在写小说?”„Em, yes.”
“恩,是啊。”Mu Fannodded, remembers«LoveMetronome»op that Yuuki Asunasangsuddenly, cannot bearask: „Does Yuuki-sanalsolike the lightnovel?”慕凡点了点头,忽然想起了结城明日奈唱的《恋爱节拍器》的op,忍不住问道:“难道结成同学也喜欢轻小说?”„Infamily/homehas boughtsomefamous work and commercialclassbooksforme, Ireadquicklygreasily! ThereforeboredIhavea wee bitidle times, torelaxreads the lightnovel, like«LoveMetronome»thislightnovel, discoveredrecently.”
“家里一直给我买一些名著以及商业类的书籍,我都快读腻了!所以无聊的我有着一丁点的空闲时间,就会为了放松心情去看一下轻小说,就像《恋爱节拍器》这部轻小说,也是最近才发现的。”
The Yuuki Asunadisgruntledspittingtongue, thenwalkedto siton the Mu Fanoppositechair, holds the chinsingle-handedly, pair of fullpeaks and ridgesputtingsuchnear the table, making the tableforitswithstand the attraction of center of the earth.结城明日奈不悦的吐了吐舌头,然后走了过来坐在了慕凡对面的椅子上,一手托着下巴,一对饱满的峰峦就这么的搁在了桌边,让桌子为其承受着地心的引力。Was reasonable, Yuuki Asunawas the schoolrecognizedbeautiful woman, was not only the longattractiveness, the staturegrowthwasveryirritable, lookedMu Fancannot bearswallow the saliva.
讲道理,结城明日奈身为学校公认的美女,不仅仅是长的好看,身材发育的也是十分火爆,看的慕凡忍不住咽了咽口水。„Mu Fan, whatname is yourlightnovelcalled?”Yuuki Asunafacecuriousasking.
“慕凡,你的轻小说叫做什么名字呀?”结城明日奈一脸好奇的问道。Hears the Yuuki Asunaissue, Mu Fantakes back the line of sightrapidly, told the facts: „Called«Accel World».”
听到结城明日奈的问题,慕凡迅速收回视线,实话实说道:“叫《加速世界》。”„Can thatfirstlook attome?”
“那能先给我看一下吗?”
„ Thisbooknow the number of wordsare too few, UUreadswww.uukanshu.com
“这本书现在字数太少,UU看书www.uukanshu.comWhenIwritesometo giveYuuki-santo have a lookagaintogether! ”
等我多写一些再一起给结成同学看看吧!”ActuallyAccel WorldlookstoYuuki Asunanowalsono, butnow the number of wordsare too few, " Accel World » quiteslowheat, Mu FandecidedmanypointgivesYuuki Asunato have a lookagain.
其实加速世界现在给结城明日奈看一看也没什么,不过现在字数太少,《加速世界》本来就比较慢热,慕凡还是决定多一点再给结城明日奈看看。After allhadoneto urgeAki, is goodalsoand he probability in the schoolmeetingis quite smallintwoyears of Bclassbecause ofAki, butYuuki Asunais different, every dayinFood Department, hedoes not wantto operateFood Departmentat the same time, preparing food the timealsobythisbeautiful womanministerendlesshas been urged.
毕竟本来就有了一个催更的安艺伦也,好在安艺伦也在二年B班和他在学校里遇见的几率比较小,可结城明日奈不同,每天都在美食部,他可不想一边经营着美食部,做菜的时候还被这个美女部长没完没了的一直被催更。„Good, thatand otherMu Fansoldmustshowme!”SawMu Fan saying that Yuuki Asuna can only nodded.
“好吧,那等慕凡发售的时候一定要给我看看!”见慕凡这么说,结城明日奈只能点了点头。„Un, good.”Mu Fanshows a faint smile, is preparingto sayanythingtime, Mu FanheardbehindFood Departmententranceplaceto transmit a tumult, Mu FanandYuuki Asunatransferred the line of sightin abundance,
“嗯,好。”慕凡微微一笑,正准备说些什么的时候,慕凡听到身后的美食部的门口处传来一阵骚动,慕凡和结城明日奈纷纷将视线转了过去,
The entrancelocates a statureto be petite, wears the browncoat, the checkshort skirt, a wine redshort hair, on the hairleaves an card issuing of blackbatshape, the corners of the mouthbrings an exquisitesmallcanine tooth, seemed likeverysmart-aleckycutefemale studentto walk, sittingswaggeringon the firsttable, was supine the smallheadto look atMu Fanself-satisfiedsaying with a smile:
门口处一个身材娇小,身着褐色的上衣,格子短裙,一头酒红色的短发,头发上别着一个黑色的蝙蝠形状的发卡,嘴角带着一颗精巧的小虎牙,看起来十分俏皮可爱的女生走了进来,大摇大摆的坐在了第一张桌子上,仰着小脑袋看着慕凡得意的笑道:„IambigdevilSattar, is the person of unificationhell, human, quicklyplain noodles that comesonoutsideonebowlon the signto label!”
“我乃大恶魔萨塔妮亚,乃统一地狱之人,人类,快来上一碗外面牌子上标注的阳春面!”„Pū!”
“噗!”Hears the words that inthistwosicknessboil, Mu Fancannot bearjustdrinkwater of mouthto spurtdirectly, comes backto discover that Yuuki Asunais also staring athim.
听到这句中二病沸腾的话,慕凡忍不住把刚刚喝进嘴里的一口水直接喷了出来,回过头去发现结城明日奈也正在盯着他。Two peopleeach otherlooking at each other, sawthathelpless and concernmental handicaplookfrom the pupil of opposite party.....
两人彼此对视者,均是从对方的眸子里看到了那种无奈和关爱智障的眼神.....
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