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#548: Proper ends this words expressing feelings

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Proper ends this words expressing feelings 一份正经的完本感言 The present is 5 : 00 am, has not wanted to say anything. 现在是凌晨 5 点,还没想好说点什么。 First reading possibly not careful schoolmate explanation next several crucial issues. 先给看书可能不仔细的同学解释下几个要害问题。 First, is not Lin Suqing offers sacrifices to become bell spirit, but is bell spirit after completing all layouts, chooses to become Lin Suqing, accompanies Wu Wang to walk a regulation, first some bell spirits, then some Lin Suqing.. 第一,不是林素轻献祭成为钟灵,而是钟灵在做完所有布局之后,选择成为林素轻,陪伴吴妄走一程,先有的钟灵,而后有的林素轻。。 Second, the black hole theory has not taken shape temporarily, the singular point internal structure is anything, the scientific circles did not have the conclusion, the logic of general theory of relativity is unable to be defeated temporarily, in the article the content is ‚fantasy’ literature. Multiverse and membrane universe theory likewise. 第二,黑洞理论暂时还没有成型,奇点内部构造是什么,科学界还没有定论,广义相对论的逻辑暂时无法被打败,文中内容属于‘幻想’文学。平行宇宙、膜宇宙理论同理。 Third, the story starts the shop line from Chapter 1, used the length of being close to 3 million characters, told Wu Wang passes in and out the black hole the story. 第三,故事本身从第一章就开始铺线,用了接近三百万字的篇幅,讲述了吴妄进出黑洞的故事。 The practicing writing direction of this book is the overall construction, before this is me , the defective weak area, the process of creation has made me gain in the experiences in many writing, I also made some experimentally attempts, is the harvest is full. 这本书的练笔方向是整体架构,这是我之前一直欠缺的短板,创作的过程让我积累了许多写作方面的经验,我也做了一些实验性地尝试,算是收获满满。 Then, I will spend the time to reorganize, the conscientious summary, the precipitation, the research ponders over the insufficient place well. 接下来,我会花时间整理出来,认真总结,好好沉淀,研究琢磨自己不足的地方。 Following of this book, I will look at the situation to conduct delaying and linkage of the world outlook, now the urgent matter is...... raises the waist wound. 本书的后续,我会看情况进行世界观的延展和联动,现在当务之急是……养一下腰伤。 This big result, really braces oneself to clench teeth to write down. 这个大结局,真是硬着头皮咬着牙写下来的。 The world outlook overall construction, gave in 2.4 million word-time actually already, was only the plot detail is not very full. 世界观整体架构,在两百四十万字时其实已经给出来了,只是剧情细节还不够充分。 The late stage rhythm quick issue, I have actually considered, if pulls open to write this, writes 100,000 characters, can gain many payments for published piece...... cough, is not, can read the feeling to the reader carefully, but itself will create the hydrology déjà vu. 后期节奏快的问题,其实我也考虑过,如果把这段拉开来写,写个十万字,能赚不少稿费……咳,不是,能给读者更细致的阅读感受,但本身又会造成水文的既视感。 Also has the choices respectively. 嘛,也算是各有取舍。 Knocks the main text to end these three word-time, the body collapsed probably generally, the numb and aching of ache and waist of shoulder week, became release on a mood. 敲下正文完这三个字时,身体像是虚脱了一般,肩周的酸痛和腰部的酸麻,都成了一种情绪上的释放。 Writing a book already these years, realize this year finally what is the occupation is wounded and sick ; 写书已经这些年头,今年终于体会到了什么叫职业伤病; When oneself lie when the bed, the attempt turns for a long time does not set out, suddenly realized, oneself already is no longer young. 当自己趴在床上,尝试许久翻不起身时,才恍然意识到,自己已经不再年轻。 Although did not have 30, but the symbol, this physical quality estimated in successive years already endures compared with 50. 虽然还没三十,但连年码字,这身体素质估计已经堪比五十。 This year realizes many things earnestly, after for example Fatigue of travel, own brain resistance symbol ; 今年切实体会到了许多东西,比如舟车劳顿后,自己的大脑抗拒码字; Also learned, oneself do the integrity thing, attenuates the daily detail, will not necessarily have itself to estimate the market reaction ; 也学到了,自己去搞整体性的东西,弱化日常细节,并不一定就会有自己预想中的市场反应; Also the true feeling, must invest are many and even exceeds the limit enough the energy, can create the outstanding work. 也真实感受到了,必须投入足够多、甚至超过自身极限的精力,才能创造出优秀的作品。 Then, I should to rest three to four months, heals from a wound and learns the lessons, to adjust the condition and preparation story. 接下来,我应该要休息三到四个月,养伤、总结经验、调整状态、准备故事。 I will try the creation of short article science fiction, lengthy will start to renew before the lower part ahead of time serializes. 我会尝试短篇科幻的创作,会在下部长篇开始更新前提前连载。 Will do utmost to build a daily light comedy immortal hero, with writing technique that oneself most excel, creates some interesting people to suppose with the plot diligently. 更会竭尽全力打造一本偏日常的轻喜剧仙侠,用自己最擅长的写作手法,努力创造一些有意思的人设和剧情。 The road is endless and long-term. 路漫漫且长远。 Even if this is not complete, but...... 纵然这一路不算圆满,但…… 2021, thank the companion. 2021,感谢陪伴。 Bowing. 鞠躬。 Returned to the proper topic, writes on the early morning of December 13 , 2021. 言归正传,写于2021年12月13日凌晨。
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