TDLOIK :: Volume #14 王暖篇

#1213: Looks at frightens this child


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November 22 on Sunday, the nation cultivated true virtue ninth day that the school body technique competition started, hundred school scholars across country displayed neat square formations to gather in the square in Jiulongshan Base. 11月22日周日,全国修真学校体术大赛开始的第九天,来自全国各地的百校学子罗列成一个个整齐的方阵汇聚到九龙山基地的广场上。 Can see that compares most starts, the delegation that various schools send out basically was short of some people, some students in the competition process has the accidental/surprised bone fracture or other more serious injury, after the leading teacher counts the report can avoid attending this closing ceremony. 可以看到相比最开始的时候,各校派出的代表团基本上都少了些人,有些学生在大赛过程中发生意外骨折的或者其他更严重伤势的,经过带队老师统计报备后可以免于参加这次闭幕式。 The easy ocean and Sun Rong have not come. 易之洋和孙蓉就没来。 In fact Sun Rong had awaked, but that Old Master Sun of fruit and flowers water screen group did not feel relieved, obstinately at the same night meeting to be a more detailed inspection Sun Rong. 事实上孙蓉早就已经醒了,可花果水帘集团的那位孙老爷子不放心,愣是连夜把孙蓉给接回去做更详细的检查去了。 In brief, this entire state system technique competition, in unilateral the team show by 60 lags behind the curtain finally. 总而言之,这场全国体术大赛,最终以六十中单方面的团队秀而拉下帷幕。 Many are sighing dramatic of competition. 许多人内心感叹着大赛的戏剧性。 In many will of the people are also piling up the resentment. 同时也有不少人心里积压着怨气。 Before the competition has not started, no one thinks that in 60 in the form of thesis awarded marks leads other teams finally unexpectedly significantly. 在大赛还没开始之前,没人会想到六十中最终竟然是以作文加分的形式大幅度领先其他队的。 Body technique exchange competition of reaching an agreement! 说好的体术交流大赛呢! Before Wang Ling thought that and in 59 spirit sword competition that meeting. 王令想到了之前和五十九中灵剑大赛那会。 Their spirit swords simply do not have many opportunities of demonstration, but this entire state system technique competition has not thought that finally returned to the road. 他们的灵剑根本没有多少展示的机会,而这次全国体术大赛没想到最终又重蹈了覆辙。 The life is really a circle. 生活果然是一个圈。 However the competition absolutely does not have the splendid wrestle picture, for example the easy ocean and between under Sun Rong gold/metal pill period the peak showdown, all fight pictures of this competition can take repeatedly the fine goods, 不过大赛也不是完全没有精彩的格斗画面,比如易之洋与孙蓉之间的金丹期下巅峰对决,这场比赛的所有的战斗画面都是可以拿出来反复细品的, On the drill ground, Wang Ling sized up under all around environment with the split vision, discovered that many people are gazing at themselves. 操场上,王令用余光打量了下四周的环境,发现有不少人都在注视着自己。 In his heart understands clearly, oneself receive such multi- focus is not because of a that war of south show, but that thesis that clone brittle surface to write lets his fire by oneself after the game really...... 他心中了然,自己受到如此之多关注的焦点绝不是因为与南一秀的那场大战,而是赛后由自己真实分身“脆面”写的那篇作文让他火了…… The ghosts know that the matter will develop this! 鬼知道事情会发展成这样! Wang Ling helpless sigh. 王令无奈的叹息。 ...... …… Takes the in the air immortal ship to return to road, Wang Ling is worried about a matter, can that is king the father find an excuse embezzles own pocket money. 乘坐空中仙舰返回松海市的路上,王令在担心一件事,那就是王爸会不会借故克扣自己的零用钱。 This National Big Game made him make too many troubles, now the entire school......, is not the entire ten thousand school alliances knows that his thesis could write. 这场全国大赛让他招惹了太多的是非,现在整个学校……不,是整个万校联盟都知道他作文写得好。 However is good to know exceptional he usually liked the low key, does not like doing this noticeable operation, therefore is exceptional at present had spread the wind sound/rumor outward, claimed that Wang Ling this time thesis is only appearing briefly. 不过好在卓异知道他素来喜欢低调,不喜欢搞这种引人注目的操作,所以目前卓异已经对外传出了风声,声称王令这次的作文只是“昙花一现”。 It writes thesis matter, in the word usage creating sentences wrong situation, very big degree has not been to look at the inspiration and luck, a person is impossible to guarantee oneself can write gold/metal Julai frequently, sometimes thinks of a very flamboyant sentence suddenly, was really the inspiration gets online suddenly. 本身写作文这事儿,在用词造句没有错误的情况下,很大程度也是看灵感和运气,一个人不可能保证自己时时刻刻都能写出金句来,有时候忽然想到一句很牛逼的句子,真的就是灵感忽然上线了而已。 However this view actually many people can accept, Wang Ling does not know. 然而这个说法究竟有多少人能接受,王令就不知道了。 On the road of return trip, the in the air immortal shipboard people are instead admiring, particularly Tang Jingze to Wang Ling, almost can describe with full of admiration. 反正在回程的这趟路上,空中仙舰上众人对王令都是佩服不已,尤其是唐竞泽,几乎可以用五体投地来形容。 Schoolmate Wang Ling, your thesis was good! Is present age Lu fosters talent simply!” Tang Jingze fine goods the sentence in thesis. 王令同学,你这作文太棒了啊!简直就是当代鲁树人!”唐竞泽细品着作文里的句子。 He most likes is that: Grain of ash of time, falls above individual, is a mountain.” 他最喜欢的就是那句:“时代的一粒灰,落在个人头上,就是一座山。” Is what kind of literary talent can write such good gold/metal sentence? 到底是怎样的文采才能写出这么棒的金句? Serious...... 不得了不得了…… The most excited person is the Wang Ling language teacher: The climax is modest. 最激动的人莫过于王令的语文老师:关子谦。 Teacher pass/test is a very low-key person, usually basically does not beam with joy. 关老师是个很低调的人,平常基本上都不怎么露脸。 He is a very low-key office worker, naturally, professional ability naturally also great. 他是一个很低调的上班族,当然,业务能力自然也没得说。 Until now the climax modest has the veiled criticism to the Wang Ling thesis, did not say Wang Ling writes is not good, but is the peace that Wang Ling writes is pale! The thing results in blotter, even argument very hackneyed stuff! In the taking an exam thesis, the Wang Ling thesis can be reluctantly passes an examination on, but thesis like there is no way to obtain the high score forever. 一直以来关子谦对王令的作文都颇有微词,不是说王令写的不好,而是王令写的太平淡!东西就跟流水账似得,连论据都很老套!在应试作文里,王令的作文勉强能算得上及格偏上,可这样的作文是永远没法取得高分的。 Therefore, when this named «Substitute person» thesis in National Big Game exposes, usually in pass/test Teacher unexpectedly directly blatantly Heyte Wang Ling that in the group did not speak. 于是,当这篇名为《替身》的作文在全国大赛里曝光后,平常在群里都不怎么说话的关老师竟然直接公然艾特王令 Wang Ling did you straighten out finally?” Teacher pass/test sent an expression that covers the face to smile: How I felt, your thesis resembles does write a letter on another's behalf?” 王令你终于开窍了?”关老师发了个捂脸笑的表情:“我怎么觉得,你这作文像代笔呢?” Wang Ling looks at the class group Teacher pass/test inquiry, thinks obstinately is very long, trembled to reply two characters: No.” 王令看着班级群关老师的提问,愣是想了很久,才瑟瑟发抖回复了两个字:“没有。” To be honest, these two characters hit , on the screen Wang Ling felt oneself are afraid. 老实说,这两个字打在屏幕上的时候王令都感觉自己心虚。 Teacher pass/test sees the reply, not polite, returns to the resentment in the group directly publicly: Your ordinary thesis what's the matter? Develops me?” 关老师看到回复,也没客气,直接在群里公开回怼:“那你平常的作文都是怎么回事?演我呢?” „......” “……” Hitting. 一语中的。 Wang Ling frightens cold sweat directing current. 王令吓得冷汗直流。 Is good comes out to give Wang Ling to mediate because of the antique promptly: Schoolmate Wang Ling was belongs displays the outstanding competition player occasionally, Teacher pass/test do not haggle over.” He sees Wang Ling to carry a cell phone pitiful appearance, somewhat loves dearly at heart. 好在老古董及时出来给王令打了个圆场:“王令同学是属于偶尔发挥出色的大赛型选手,关老师就不要这么计较了。”他看到王令端着手机一副可怜兮兮的模样,心里还有几分心疼。 Looks at frightens this child! 瞧把这孩子吓得! That side Teacher pass/test naturally cracks a joke. 关老师那边自然是开玩笑的。 The student who he teaches wrote the so outstanding thesis at the competition of national nature, at heart happy. 他教出的学生在全国性质的大赛上写出了如此优秀的作文,心里乐着呢。 He does not type, used the voice to praise under Wang Ling in the group directly publicly: Wang Ling, this matter fully explained that you actually have the literary talent potential. I suspected before you , the thesis that writes possibly is because the time is not enough, was too tight. If gives your enough time, even display like this time is not so splendid, at least can still have on even is on level!” 他也不打字了,直接在群里用语音公开表扬了下王令:“王令,这事儿充分说明了,你其实还是有文才有潜力的。我怀疑你之前写的作文可能是因为时间不够,太紧张了。要是给你充足的时间,就算发挥的不像这次这么出色,起码也能有个中上甚至是上的水平啊!” Wang Ling does not have the courage to reply. 王令还是没胆子回复。 The reason is he thought that this Teacher pass/test in the mouth words has the words. 原因是他觉得这关老师嘴里话中有话。 Sure enough, under Teacher pass/test words saying: Wang Ling, will have essay contest in the area in mid next month. The teachers of our language group discussed whom is very long our school to send to pass, might as well you.” 果不其然,关老师下句话说道:“王令,下个月中旬有个区里的作文比赛。我们语文组的老师讨论了很久咱们学校到底应该派谁过去,不如就你吧。” Wang Ling: „?” 王令:“?” Teacher pass/test: This time depends entirely on your thesis , helping champion who our school captures National Big Game, I think that the teachers of other language groups do not have the opinion. The people, were compelled, since you have the potential, that can the appropriate pressure understand to oneself? Teacher this is for hello/you good.” 关老师:“这次全靠你的作文,帮咱们学校夺得全国大赛的冠军,我想其他语文组的老师都没意见。人嘛,都是被逼出来的,你既然有潜能,那就要给自己适当的压力懂吗?老师这是为了你好。” Wang Ling: „......” 王令:“……” He knows, matter will develop this appearance! 他就知道,事情会发展成这个样子! ...... …… Takes the in the air immortal ship to return to 60 the drill ground, is in the afternoon, Wang Ling is about to go home, a leaving school entrance hears on the road some people to shout: Grain of ash of time! Grain of ash of time!” 乘坐空中仙舰回到六十中的操场,已经是下午,王令正准备回家,一出校门口就听到路上有人在喊:“时代的一粒灰!时代的一粒灰!” „......” Wang Ling has turned head, unexpectedly saw that a passer- is looking at himself jubilantly, that is a middle-aged woman, is leading own daughter to come home from school. “……”王令回过头,居然看到一个路人正兴高采烈的望着自己,那是一位中年妇女,正带着自己的女儿放学回家。 From below girl's wear, should be Qingyun is small, is in 60 neighbor cultivating true virtue elementary school. 从下女孩的穿着上看,应该是青云一小的,也就是六十中附近的修真小学。 Saw, that Elder Brother! Grain of ash of time!” The middle-aged woman squatting down body, said to own daughter excitedly, she forgot Wang Ling named, but according to Wang Ling that thesis, the scene has the nickname that sent individually to Wang Ling. “看到了没,那位哥哥!时代的一粒灰!”中年妇女蹲下身子,对自己女儿激动地说道,她忘记王令叫什么名字了,但是还是根据王令的那篇作文,现场给王令起了个别致的外号。 That is: Grain of ash of time...... 也就是:时代的一粒灰…… You must look like that Elder Brother to study, others thesis wrote may be good!” The middle-aged woman is very excited. “你要像那个哥哥学习哦,人家作文写得可好了!”中年妇女很激动。 Mom! That Elder Brother is eating the simple noodles!” The little girls referred to Wang Ling. “妈妈!那个哥哥在吃干脆面诶!”小女孩指了指王令 Walks! We also buy! Ate it! Perhaps your dog shit same thesis can also and Elder Brother writes equally well!” The middle-aged woman was more excited. “走!咱们也去买!吃了它!说不定你狗屎一样的作文也能和哥哥写得一样好!”中年妇女更激动了。 „......” “……” The corners of the mouth of Wang Ling are twitching. 王令的嘴角抽搐着。 Evidently, he then seemed like really becomes famous. 看样子,他这下似乎是真的出名了。 Even his surface, started some people to follow to snatch...... 连他的面,都开始有人跟着抢了……
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