SMC :: Volume #7

#5: Probe- refines PolyGrass Pellet

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Gongsun Family's Scriptures Pavilion is a red column green tile six zhang (3.33 m) pavilion, the surroundings trees lush...... shadowy. The breeze blows, the tree sends out the people to hear it long-drawn-out, such as places oneself in big bi original. 公孙家的藏经阁是红柱绿瓦的六丈楼阁,周围树木茂盛……绿树成荫。微风吹来,树悠散发出去众人闻之,如置身在大萆原中。 Completely relaxed. 心旷神怡。 „Invited the mister review.” Gongsun Yuanyuan takes out pill medicine, the self-satisfied proud color, presents wear a look to Chu Yun. “请先生点评。”公孙媛媛取出丹药,面带得意骄傲之色,奉给楚云。 „Invited the mister review!” Her behind teenage boys and girls, drink with one voice lightly, more than ten eyes are staring at Chu Yun, has the threatening stance. “请先生点评！”她身后的少男少女,异口同声地轻喝,十多双眼睛都盯着楚云,带着逼人的架势。 „He He He, is this.” “呵呵呵,又是这一出啊。” PolyGrass Pellet that „Yuanyuan refines, has been close to Great Master absolutely. This young people must have bad luck.” “媛媛炼制的百草丸,绝对已经接近大师。这个年轻人要倒霉了。” „This young people perhaps some skills, but pulled rank, unexpectedly dares to keep up appearances in my Gongsun Family. Wipes out his arrogance, good.” “这个年轻人兴许有些本事,但是太托大了,居然敢在我公孙家摆谱。把他的傲气打掉,也好。” In other Scriptures Pavilion people, heard the voice of youngster, has all transferred the line of sight, goes to here, looks to live it up taking pleasure in others' misfortunes. 原本在藏经阁一层的其他人,听到少年们的声音,皆转过视线,投向这里,幸灾乐祸地看起热闹来。 „This pill refining technique, is not big with the Stellar Province difference, emits only Pill Qi, stems from my unexpected. Should be the Pill Continent unique method.” Chu Yun in secret graciousness quantity. “这种炼丹手法,和星洲的差异不大,惟独喷吐丹气,出乎我的意料之外。想必应该是丹洲特有的法门。”楚云暗中恩量。 Gongsun Yuanyuan refines, he while studies. He has the King level wisdom, Gongsun Yuanyuan refines, he will have refined the PolyGrass Pellet technique, rested to grasp greatly. Except for emitting Pill Qi that but also is unable to ponder over an insight. 公孙媛媛一边炼制,他就一边学习。他有王级的智慧,公孙媛媛炼制完毕,他就已经将炼制百草丸的手法,大休掌握住了。除了喷吐丹气那块,还无法琢磨个通透。 Sees Chu Yun to be silent, Gongsun Yuanyuan corners of the mouth turn upwards a curve, in the heart disdain: „Hehe, this expression I looked a lot. It seems like this pill refining master, mediocre.” 看到楚云沉默,公孙媛媛的嘴角翘起一个弧度,心中更加不屑:“呵呵,这个表情我看得多了。看来这个炼丹师,也不过如此。” „Also invited the mister review 12.” She opens the mouth saying that the smile of corners of the mouth sends out share of cold intent. This forces Chu Yun purely, must embarrass him. “还请先生点评一二。”她又开口道,嘴角的微笑散发出一股冷意。这是纯粹逼迫楚云,要让他难堪。 „Is good.” Chu Yun looked at her one eyes, is clear to her thoughts, the tone review said lightly. “还算不错。”楚云看了她一眼,对她的心思一清二楚,语气平淡地点评道。 What tone is this? 这是什么语气？ Good? You also install what attire! 不错？你还装什么装！ In Gongsun Yuanyuan heart extremely angry, the brow raises immediately, wants to starts talking. Actually listens to Chu Yun also saying: „I come to refine PolyGrass Pellet for you time. You can become aware many, even many.” 公孙媛媛心中愤愤,眉头顿时扬起,想要开口说话。却听楚云又道:“我来为你们炼制一次百草丸。你们能悟到多少,就算多少吧。” „That invited the mister big show/unfolds invincible might, making the students open mind well!” The Duke play...... Yuanyuan deeply attracts p air/Qi, the words of mouth will swallow to get into the stomach. Then an tone revolution, has the meaning of rich satire. “那就请先生大展神威,让学生们好好开开眼界！”公剧……媛媛深吸一p气,将到了嘴里的话重新吞下肚中。接着语气一转,带着浓郁的讽刺之意。 Chu Yun actually reaches out her, demands medicinal herb of refinement. 楚云却向她伸手,索要一份炼制的药材。 „Unexpectedly including refinement medicinal herb of common hundred bi pills?” These incessantly is Gongsun Yuanyuan time, many people looked that has indistinct disdaining to the Chu Yun's vision. “竟然连一份寻常的百萆丸的炼制药材都没有？”这一次不止是公孙媛媛,很多人看向楚云的目光中都带着隐约的不屑。 ps: Un, the recuperation, pondered over with emphasis about „female” and „pet” the mode of writing issues in two aspects. Without a doubt this is my weak area, for serveral days made some related mode of writing trainings. The people must always forward, cannot always scrawl, isn't progressive? ps:嗯,休整了一下,重点琢磨了一下关于“女子”、“宠物”两方面的写法问题。毫无疑问这是我的短板,这些天做了些相关的写法训练。人总是要向前走的,不能总是瞎写,却不进步吧？ Moreover about rhythm, will make the adjustment slightly. Make the article more compact, in the plot will also have the difference of surging up. Generally speaking, will read to be tastier, is more relaxed. The net article, is looks for a good time. 另外关于节奏方面,也会稍作调整。让文章更紧凑一些,同时情节上也会有波澜起伏的差异。总体来讲,会读起来更爽口一些,更轻松一些。网文嘛,就是图个乐呵。 Everyone has a look at me to have progressive. Has what/anything to suggest, can raise. Moreover, tomorrow starts to renew normally. 大家看看我有没有进步。有什么建议,都可以提。另外,明天开始正常更新。 ( To be continued. (未完待续。
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