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#378: Attached family template

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Hua Kai notices on the crystal column top ten attached aristocratic family to turn into the green, but other attached aristocratic family names are the white or the grey. 华凯注意到水晶柱上排名前十的附属世家都变成绿色,而其他附属世家名字都是白色或者灰色。 He clicks on attached aristocratic family ranked the first, a card empty shadow appears after the Xue name immediately. 他点击排名第一的附属世家,一张卡片虚影顿时出现在薛家名字之后。 Xue: Five aristocratic family 薛家:五品世家 Head of household: Xue Pan( innate boundary 5) 家主:薛攀(先天境五层) Families: 4371 people 家族人数:4371人 Family all-round strength: 37620 家族综合实力:37620 Loyal: 100 忠心:100 Hua Kai clicks on each line to find out a small panel, he examines Xue Jia composition, these can only show that strength top 500 members, he is examining the attribute of each not familiar person, in some people are the subordinates who Xue recruits this year, he takes down some loyal value not high people, later gives Xue Pan to process. 华凯点击每一行都能探出一个小面板,他查看薛家人员构成,这其中只能显示战力排名前500的成员,他查看着每一个不熟悉人的属性,这几些人中很多都是薛家今年才招募的手下,他把一些忠心值不高的人记下,待会儿交给薛攀去处理。 After examining Xue, he looked at following Huang family, Tang Jia, Yu Jia, Tai family/home, Jia family, Ren family and he/she each family, Zhou Jia, Yue family attribute, this inside loyal worst Yue family loyal value 95 points. Six above can only show that the family 500 people, seven below demonstrate 200 people. 查看了薛家之后,他又看了后面的黄家、唐家、虞家、邰家、贾家、任家、伊家家、周家、岳家属性,这里面忠心最差的岳家忠心值95点。六品以上都是只能显示家族500人,七品以下显示200人。 Studied the half-day these attached families' name lists, the system prompt brings to the attention of Hua Kai together. 研究了半天这些附属家族的名录,一道系统提示引起华凯的注意。 „System prompt: Please definite family core member!” “系统提示:请确定家族核心成员！” After promoting three aristocratic family, the Hua Family core member quota becomes 50 people from 10 people. Hua Kai noticed by the crystal column to present an assembly hall, inside had about hundred square meters appearance, this space was a different space, system prompt this space gave the place that all core members stayed. 升级三品世家后,华家核心成员名额从十人变为50人。华凯注意到水晶柱旁边出现了一个会议厅,里面大约只有百平米样子,这空间是一个异度空间,系统提示这个空间正是给所有核心成员停留的地方。 Hua Family developed for these years so rapidly, each aspect develops is very smooth, this primary cause is 10 core members can pass at any time 【Family space】 The exchange, all decision makings they can the earliest possible time and Hua Kai discussed, this causes Hua Family, regardless of makes what vigor causes the same place, the working efficiency will be naturally quick, the family loyal value has also maintained in the promotion. 华家之所以这几年发展如此迅速,各个方面发展的都很顺利,这主要原因还是十名核心成员可以随时通过【家族空间】交流,所有决策问题他们都可以第一时间与华凯商议,这才使得华家无论做什么劲儿都是使到一起,办事效率自然会快,家族忠心值也都一直保持提升中。 But this time had 50 core member quotas, is increases to Hua Family profit that doubled and re-doubled, he examines ten big attached aristocratic family all members to be referred to as the core, how then this 40 core members chose that to be difficult. 而这次有了50名核心成员名额,给华家的益处那是成倍增加,他查看十大附属世家所有成员都能被认定为核心,那么这次40名核心成员如何选那就难了。 Today tells four uncle Hua Zihuan that remains behind, informs all personnel, tonight everyone enters 【Family space】 Has the important matter to discuss, Hua Kai leaves 【Family space】 Returns to the study room, he emits the psychic force to feel that two maidservants are resting in the side building, in the institute does not have others again, other entire institute only then cockroach and little monkey still create a disturbance in out of the door. 告诉今天留守的四叔华子寰,通知所有人员,今晚所有人进入【家族空间】有大事相议,华凯离开【家族空间】回到书房,他放出精神力感觉两名侍女正在厢房内休息,院内再也没有其他人,整个别院只有小强与小猴子还在门外打闹。 Today his foundation establishing succeeds, benefits greatly regarding two pets, examined their attribute little monkey breakthroughs is seven steps, cockroach had also arrived at later period of six steps, this little monkey bullied cockroach all day, but its actual combat capability did not have, Hua Kai thought that had the time to the little monkey to look for an opponent, it from leaving returned alive has not fought! 今天他筑基成功,对于两只宠物来说也是受益匪浅,查看他们的属性小猴子突破已然是七阶了,小强也是已经到了六阶后期,这小猴子整天欺负小强,可它实战能力却是没有,华凯觉得等有时间是该给小猴子找个对手,它从出生还没战斗过呢！ In the afternoon the time, Hua Kai hears in the palace to broadcast the crowd speech voice, unknowingly already to afternoon, when time almost Hua Kai arrives at the palace, at this time Hua Kai all disciples have waited in the palace, because Hua Kai received more than 300 recording a name disciples in the morning, many recording a name disciples can only sit outside the palace now the entrance. 下午时候,华凯听到宫殿内又传来人群说话声音,不知不觉已经到了下午,等到时间差不多华凯来到宫殿,这时候华凯所有弟子已经在宫殿等候,因为上午华凯又收了三百多记名弟子,很多记名弟子如今只能坐在宫殿外门口。 „ In the morning creates 【Journey to the West】, I start from the foundation of novel this afternoon, differences of explanation novel from other form articles, accumulation before novel-writing, frame setting and other issues, when I said then to answer various issues for everyone specially. “上午创作【西游记】,今天下午我就从小说的基础开始,讲解小说与其他形式文章的不同,小说创作前的积累,框架设定等问题,待我讲完接下来就专门为大家回答各种问题。 I roughly divide three kinds the article, writes about the kind, the informal essay class and discussion class, writes about the kind to be divided into the novels, Spring and Autumn Period and happy skill three kinds, all article styles are different, feel differently also...... ” 我把文章大体分三类,记叙类、随笔类、议论类,记叙类又可以分为小说、春秋、乐艺三类,所有文章风格不同,给人的感觉也不同……” Hua Kai told, everyone is listening peacefully, never some people so classify to the article, all the type orderliness that in narration hearts that listened to Hua Kai to article suddenly becomes clear, discovered before oneself , the novel that writes is disorderly, now after listening to narration of Hua Kai , is suddenly enlighted. 华凯讲述,所有人都安静的听着,从未有人给文章如此分类,所有听了华凯的讲述心中对文章的类型条理突然变得清楚,很多发现自己以前写的小说杂乱,如今听了华凯的讲述后这才恍然大悟。 At the same time told, Hua Kai looks at all students on the scene, he hauls in everyone the learn/study world that oneself create, everyone can hear narration of Hua Kai clearly, even if places the person who very far attended a lecture earnestly, they as if felt that Hua Kai tells in them at present, is very clear! 一边讲述,华凯看着在场的所有学员,他把所有人都拉进自己所创的学习世界里,所有人都能清楚的听到华凯的讲述,即便是身处很远认真听课的人,他们似乎都感觉华凯就在他们眼前讲述,很是清晰！ Waits for the Hua Kai lecture the text categorization, the novel told carefully, gives everyone to mention the novel-writing main point, unknowingly the time has crossed for one hour, Hua Kai stopped teaching, to the link of question and answer. 等华凯讲完文章分类,把小说仔细讲述以后给大家说起小说创作要点,不知不觉时间已经过了一个小时,华凯停下讲课,到了问答的环节了。 Novel institute's many students, have no fear of great distances to come here to seek for Hua Kai , because create the aspect to come across the issue to need to explain. Was passed on the disciple to collect all issues by oneself, they give all student replies are also to the one promotion of their ability, they could not solve Hua Kai to explain to them again, like this their strength rise will be quicker. 小说学院很多的学员,不远万里来到这里寻找华凯,就是因为自己创作方面遇到问题需要解答。让自己亲传弟子把所有问题搜集起来,他们给所有学员回答也是对他们能力的一种提升,他们解决不了华凯再给他们解读,这样他们实力提升才会更快。 „Teacher, the scholar, once wrote short article more than hundred, several classics spread widely. But his many years have not actually written one medium-length to grow, are unable to promote everyone.” Cao Zirui first set out to say at this time. “老师,有一学子,曾写短篇百余篇,数篇经典广为流传。可是他多年却不曾写出一部中篇长著,一直无法晋升大家。”曹子睿这时候第一个起身说道。 Cao Zirui can ask so the issue, this is many students have come across the issue, only short article promotion 【Archives basic skills】 The heart law speed is very slow, only will then write the medium-length and even lengthy strength rise will be quick. 曹子睿能够提出如此问题,这是很多学员都遇到过的问题,只著短篇提升【文案基本功】心法速度很慢,只有写出中篇乃至长篇实力提升才会很快。 „ Many old Fiction School, create the short article for a long time, the thought has set, prepares each time in any event, is always very difficult to break the short article limit, here I first said boundary and characteristics that long and medium-length, the short article surface said...... “很多老的小说家,长久创作短篇,思维已经定下,每次无论如何准备,总是很难打破短篇限制,在这里我先说说长、中、短篇面说的界限与特点…… If felt oneself are unable to jump out of the beforehand writing thought that can read attentively some famous novels, analyzes the novel from the angle of creation the core idea, studies the novel main line, the novel background and character to establish the mentality. ” The Hua Kai explanation said. 如果感觉自己无法跳出以前的写作思维,可以细读一些有名的小说,从创作的角度去分析小说的核心思想,学习小说主线、小说背景、人物设定思路。”华凯讲解道。 Although many people have not come across this issue, but listened to Hua Kai told that their creation approaches had been opened, in the main hall an old man hears here to set out to the Hua Kai good disciple big ritual, this issue puzzled his many years. 很多人虽然没有遇到这种问题,但是听了华凯的讲述他们的创作思路已经被打开,大殿内一老者听到这里起身向华凯行弟子大礼,这问题困扰他多年了。 „Teacher, has Fiction School many years of creation novel many, philosophers Hundred Schools books reading are innumerable, is very difficult to write the good novel, but also asked the teacher to give the direction.” Cao Zirui continues to set out to ask. “老师,有小说家多年创作小说多部,诸子百家书籍阅读无数,却是很难写出好的小说,还请老师给以指点。”曹子睿继续起身问道。 Cao Zirui when just became the Hua Kai big disciple, he is also only an ordinary Fiction School student, now he already 【Archives basic skills】 little to become, became a Fiction School scholar, the progress very rapidness. 曹子睿在刚成为华凯大弟子的时候,他还只是一名普通的小说家学生,如今他已经【文案基本功】小成,成了一名小说家学子,进步非常之快。 „ As Fiction School, must first understand that ‚novels’ two characters, ‚small’ was said that this article is unable to make everyone understand to like, for example I once created «Three countries», «Red chamber» with All Men Are Brothers, liked " Three countries » people only likes «Three countries», was very small regarding other two interests. The novels are unable to make everyone like, everyone story, likes differently, the novel story that regards as important is also different. “作为一名小说家,首先要理解‘小说’二字,‘小’是说这个文章无法让所有人理解喜欢,比如我曾创作《三国》、《红楼》与水浒,很多喜欢《三国》的人只喜欢《三国》,对于其他两本兴趣很小。小说是无法让所有人去喜欢的,每个人阅历、喜好不同,所看重的小说故事也不同。 Also ‚said’ character, he is a story, says story that read, the novel that many students wrote increased the thing in too many ideological, this was separated from ‚novel’ basically essential category, read the reader of novel for not to study the thought that they to gain interesting story. 再说‘说’字,他是一个故事,讲读的故事,很多学员写出的小说添加了太多思想方面的东西,这就脱离了‘小说’最基本本质范畴,很多阅读小说的读者不是为了来学习思想的,他们是为了获取有趣的故事。 Therefore as Fiction School, must first be clear about own characteristics, then portrays own story diligently, the story main line had better be able understand profoundly, this involved the novel selection knowledge, after this me, will explain to everyone slowly. ” Hua Kai spoke. 所以作为一名小说家,首先必须明确自己的特点,然后努力刻画自己的故事,故事主线最好能够深刻明了,这就牵扯到小说选材的知识了,这点我之后会慢慢向大家讲解。”华凯说到。 Hua Kai, many old Fiction School cannot help but nodded at this point, puzzles their many years of issue to untie, they set out to salute to Hua Kai, thank raising of Hua Kai. 华凯说到这里,很多老小说家不由得点头,困扰他们多年问题解开了,他们不由起身向华凯施礼,感谢华凯的提点。 One hour quick in the past, Hua Kai explained four issue time to arrive. 一个小时很快过去,华凯只是解答了四个问题时间就已经到了。 „Passes on the disciple to my study room, today the course ended.” Hua Kai sets out to say. “亲传弟子到我书房来,今天讲座结束。”华凯起身说道。 All students set out to salute to see off Hua Kai to leave, 29 pass on the disciple to enter the inner courtyard in turn, this is the first time that Hua Kai gave alone passes on the disciple to attend class. 所有学员起身行礼恭送华凯离开,29名亲传弟子依次进入内院,这是华凯第一次单独给亲传弟子上课。 Enters study room Hua Kai to sit down, passes on the disciple only to stand on one side. 进入书房华凯坐下,亲传弟子只能站在一边。 „Horse is long, you these transformed a small classroom in the inner courtyard on , I was used to give you to pass on attend class alone, today the content do you have have not understood, had what issue to ask momentarily. I pass on the disciple to assign the homework to you, three months of everyone creates at least 100,000 character novelettes, after you go back, can prepare, every afternoon the course finished me giving you to instruct alone!” Hua Kai said. “马长旺,你这几日在内院改造一个小教室,我用来给你们亲传单独上课,今日内容你们还有没有没听懂的,有什么问题随时都能问。我给你们亲传弟子布置作业,三个月时间每人创作一篇最少十万字中篇小说,你们回去后就可以准备,每天下午讲座结束我会给你们单独指导！”华凯道。 „Teacher, I have become the novel everyone many years, from foundation establishing is not far, when the teacher may direct the student to become the Fiction School tycoon, enters foundation establishing!” horse long kneels in front of Hua Kai prosperously said, he is the Hua Kai two disciples, everyone is waiting for the explanation of Hua Kai. “老师,我已经成为小说大家多年,距离筑基已是不远,老师可指点学生何时才能成为小说家巨子,进入筑基！”马长旺跪在华凯面前说道,他是华凯二弟子,所有人都等着华凯的解答。 „Your aptitude is enough, the innate boundary does not have the strength of comprehension will greatly completely, can only depend upon world Lingbao foundation establishing, your novel I have also looked, many are the folk sentimental stories. To promote the tycoon, comprehends the strength of will, must fuses own novel and world rule, this aspect you have a long way to go.” Hua Kai said. “你的资质是够的,先天境大圆满没有领悟意志之力,只能依靠天地灵宝筑基,你的小说我也看过,多是民间感情故事。要想晋升巨子,领悟意志之力,必须把自己的小说与天地规则融合,这方面你还有很长的路要走。”华凯说道。 „Teacher thanks!” horse long was saying prosperously the eye was somewhat red, without the Hua Kai direction, he possibly does not know that for a lifetime the Fiction School direction is anything. Said respectful salutes to return the homing position to Hua Kai. “谢老师！”马长旺说着眼睛有些红了,如果没有华凯指点,他可能一辈子都不知道小说家的方向是什么。说完恭敬的向华凯行礼退回原来位置。 Other pass on the student, although did not understand the strength and world rule that will Hua Kai said that but in they keep firmly in mind the Hua Kai words, this later is important to them. 其他亲传学生虽然不理解华凯说的意志之力与天地规则,但是他们都把华凯的话牢记在心里,这对他们以后来说都非常重要。 „You, if writes the program, can revise to you for the master, strives to create classics, this after you are important. As my disciple, I hope that three years of you can promote novel everyone, some people can promote the novel tycoon.” Hua Kai said. “你们如果写出大纲,为师可以给你们修改,争取创作出一部经典,这对你们以后非常重要。作为我的弟子,我希望三年时间你们都能晋升小说大家,有些人能够晋升小说巨子。”华凯道。 Passes on the disciples perception is very high, a person said issue Hua Kai to explain everyone to harvest is very big, said in the boundary to many people finally, Hua Kai warned that the disciple as Fiction School, concentrated on the story creation, when the time comes the boundary naturally can promote. 亲传弟子们悟性都很高,一人说出自己问题华凯讲解大家收获都很大,到最后很多人说道境界上,华凯告诫弟子作为一名小说家,多把精力放在故事创作上,到时候境界自然会提升。 When all disciples satisfy depart, the maidservant sent the dinner, Hua Kai eats several to make the maidservant draw back simply do not disturb themselves, then he entered 【Family space】. 等到所有弟子满意离去,侍女送来晚餐,华凯简单的吃了几口就让侍女退下不要打扰自己,然后他进了【家族空间】。 Hua Kai promotes the news of foundation establishing boundary the Hua Family core member almost to know now, tonight the space person are many, Xue Chen and Erzhuang, Hua Kai make one inform all Hua Family core member sets, he told everyone the space promotion 【Meeting hall】 The appeared matter, making all evening's conference rooms meet to discuss 40 new core issues. 华凯晋升筑基境的消息如今华家核心成员差不多都已经知道,今晚空间人很多,薛琛与二壮都在,华凯让人通知所有华家核心成员集合,他告诉大家空间升级【议事厅】出现的事儿,让所有晚上会议室开会讨论40名新核心问题。
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